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Authority (part 19)
22nd August
16:12 GMT


"Fellow Thunderers of Qward!"

Ragnar is shoved out into the fighting circle, but for the moment no one steps forward to join him. Instead, Commander Roval remains at the entrance with his arms raised for attention.

"When I commanded you to make use of the gladiatorial pits the aliens have assembled on our world's surface, I did so in the certain knowledge that real combat teaches lessons that no amount of sparring amongst ourselves or against automata could teach! This past year we have spilt more of the blood of inferior species than at any other point in our lives, and I know that you have relished that opportunity as I have!" He starts to pace, arms waving. "But today! Today the unthinkable has occurred! One of our own, beaten, by this alien you see before you now!"

A murmur runs through the crowd.

"This is unacceptable. He must die for his temerity. But. This also represents an opportunity. Far more can be learned from a skilled warrior than from the bravos and scum who are all we usually fight, but such public loss of face cannot be countenanced. This Donovan Wallace of Uranus has shamed one of us."

The back of the crowd of Thunderers parts, and I see two escorting a third between them. He isn't wearing a helmet, his cybernetic eyes are broken and wires run from the holes where they used to be to a band around his head. Ah, some sort of sensor. It looks like Thunderer Duran has recovered from his cranial trauma. Aside from the blood steadily running out of his eye sockets and the obvious patch job on the armour protecting his sword arm.

"Duran failed in his task, and so he will be granted the first bout. Should he emerge the victor, he will be repaired and allowed to regain his place amongst us, his honour unstained! Should he lose, lots will be drawn for the alien's next opponent until he finally falls. When he falls, we will move on to his comrades."

Ragnar grins. "I'll kill all of you!"

One of Duran's escort shoves a qwa-blade into his healthy hand, then they both back off and rejoin the ranks of Thunderers surrounding him. Huh. Mundane sword against Thunderer armour means 'head shots only', qwa-blade against an injured Betrassusian means 'any hit wins'.

I take a moment to look around. If this is the local Keep, the portal to Qward's innards should be… Over there, I think..? We're not going to get a better location to go 'active' from. Of course, Ragnar himself is loving this.

Too bad.

"Ragnar!" He looks around, a look of sudden discontentment on his face as he works out what I'm about to order him to do. "Arm up!"

He grins, and raises his sword into a higher posture.

"You have a concealed weapon, alien?" Roval sounds almost amused as he draws his own sword. "Draw it and die."

I smile faintly, holding out my hands slightly with palms upwards.

"This is my cause, this is my fight,
Shine through the void with orange light.
I've claimed all within my sight.
To keep what is mine, that is my right."

My rings shimmer into being, Guy following suit a moment later. Roval's grip on his sword tightens slightly as he stares mystified at the orange rings.

"What-?"

A construct cold gun shot to the throat silences him as my clothes evaporate, being replaced by my power armour. His corpse falls to the ground, his brittle-frozen neck snapping and breaking apart as he hits the stones.

"Agh!"

Ragnar has obediently donned his ring, but it looks like he wasn't ready for it to recreate his arm. The grizzled Qwardian who passed him the sword is more on the ball than the stunned rank and file, his gun coming up pointed at Ragnar the moment he starts glowing. I generate construct armour around myself as I redirect my cold gun. But Guy's beaten me to it, a bolt of green striking the weapon and its wielder.

"Head in the game, rookie!"

Ragnar generates construct armour around himself, a construct replacement for his lost buzz sword-.

"Use a gun you prat!"

The Thunderers are alert now, rising into the air with shields pointing towards us and their swords out. Those I'm not so worried about, but-. I see one at the back of the crowd grab a qwa-bolt from his quiver. A cold beam from my construct splashes off his shield as I fly in an evasive pattern. Every one of these Thunderers has qwa-bolts, and our best chance to make it through this fight is to keep them too occupied to draw them.

Guy's in his element, darting around and striking Thunderers from odd angles to bypass their shields. A small group fly at him with their swords out and he's forced to back off. A moment later Ragnar surges into them, bodily battering one out of the air and slicing into the side armour of another with his construct sword.

"Oaagh!"

I duck under a Thunderer's charge and then blindly lash out with my right arm, hitting him in the back. His armour doesn'tshitshitshitshit!

I fly as fast as possible sideways as I spot a Thunderer level a qwa-bolt in my direction. There's a crack sound as it activates, the comic-style lightning bolt leaping from the Thunderer's hand in a brilliant bolt which instantly connects it to the wall behind me. The wall is cratered, three Thunderers who were in the way simply annihilated and my construct armour basically gone on the side facing it.

"Shoot anyone who goes for their bolts!"

I manifest two additional cold guns and set them to target exposed flesh. Guy's mostly just battering them down with brute force while Ragnar's charging and stabbing-.

I form a railgun construct as I spot a shield huddle forming around a Thunderer on the ground. They don't appear to be wearing any sort of sound filter, so I generate a sonic cannon and project a vertigo signal in their direction at the same time as loading a crumbler construct. Their shields waver slightly, but I think they're mostly just gritting their teeth and bearing it. My cold guns fire again as Thunderers try to hem me in, forcing me to duck and weave-. They're aiming not at me directly but at my construct guns. That near miss cost me a cold gun, but now I've got space I fire the crumbler round. It strikes-. Ugh, it hits a shield… Which survives, but generates such a colossal wave of force that it knocks the huddle back and gives me a clear view of the Thunderer with the qwa-bolt.

And gives him a clear view of me.

In a split second I fire twice and then take an armoured barrier out of subspace and interpose it. In the same moment he finishes calculating his shot and triggers his bolt. The barrier vaporises and all too much of the residual force slams

I hit the ground, construct armour gone and my power armour a wreck pinning me down. Two Thunderers fly at me, swords outstretched for a finishing blow. My construct armour reappears and I drag myself along the ground away from them. Cold guns. Two construct guns appear, one on either side of them. One Thunderer takes a hit on the neck and dies instantly while the other gets his arm in the way. The beam is partially diffused around his armour, but I see him shudder and grit his teeth as the remaining energy starts freezing him.

A green speck pierces the wall on the far side of the arena and flies toward the one Qwardian who hasn't moved since the fight started.

My pursuer falls back, unable to keep control of his flight system. I use the moment's respite to begin repairing my armour and checking on my colleagues. Guy's energy pulses are knocking Qwardians out of the air with ease, sending them into the ground with bone cracking force. I suppose that the Guardians' rules against killing are a bit fuzzier on the subject of compound fractures. Ragnar leaps Mass Effect Vanguard style from Thunderer to Thunderer, his sword always finding the thinner parts of their armour.

"Duran of Qward. Do you wish to regain your honour?"

What's that?

Ragnar's former opponent grabs the thing-. It's a ring, a power ring. "Yes." There's a flash of dull green as he jams it on his right middle finger, the bronze of his armour being replaced by the colours of the Anti-Green Lantern Corps.

"Then welcome to the Antithesis Corps. Twenty four hours of life remain to you. May your death bring glory to Qward."
 
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Ragnar generates construct armour around himself, a construct replacement for his lost buzz sword-.

"Use a gun you prat!"
Hah, you've got your own home-grown equivelent of Jordan's boxing gloves for people to comment on now.

Ragnar leaps Mass Effect Vanguard style from Thunderer to Thunderer, his sword always finding the thinner parts of their armour.
He's making it work! He's making it work! :)

"Duran of Qward. Do you wish to regain your honour?"

What's that?

Ragnar's former opponent grabs the thing-. It's a ring, a power ring. "Yes." There's a flash of dull green as he jams it on his right middle finger, the bronze of his armour being replaced by the colours of the Anti-Green Lantern Corps.

"Then welcome to the Antithesis Corps. Twenty four hours of your life remain to you. May your death bring glory to Qward."
Well, that's an interesting way for the Anti-Green Corps to exist in the main fic.
 
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Oh man. Anti-green has a charge steal feature. And they even have a Green Lantern right there to try and steal from.

I really hope they try to use it on an orange ring though. Hopefully it'll be the event that finally alerts Paul to the fact that his own rings also possess such a feature.
 
Ok, so:
1) It's the first time we see any energy barrier survive a crumbler round. On one hand, yay, crumbler tech doesn't trump everything in the multiverse (I half expected it to be effective in bringing down the Source Wall at this point). On the other hand, this implies supremacy of qwardian defensive technology over maltusian one. And, given how qwa-bolts went through Paul's armor and barriers, offensive too. I dearly hope that Paul thought to subspace at least a few of those to analyze and use as construct weapons later. Because railguns and special ammunition are ok, as are OCP cold guns, but these weapons and defenses are also top of the line.

2) What's stopping Paul from assimilating the ring? I mean, green ring didn't have any noticeable resistance to assimilation. And Paul should be at least as motivated now as he was when he assimilated it.
 
Hah, you've got your own home-grown equivelent of Jordan's boxing gloves for people to comment on now.


He's making it work! He's making it work! :)


Well, that's an interesting way for the Anti-Green Corps to exist in the main fic.
In fairness the SI and Jordqn did admit that boxing glove constructs were good when starting as a lantern (for greenies familiarity with the object means its easier to form). So Ragnar sticking/enhancing his fighting style is more efficient than trying something entirely new mid combat.
 
Oh man. Anti-green has a charge steal feature. And they even have a Green Lantern right there to try and steal from.

I really hope they try to use it on an orange ring though. Hopefully it'll be the event that finally alerts Paul to the fact that his own rings also possess such a feature.
Doesn't it still use green light? I mean, trying to steal charge from Guy by means of green glow manipulation is just asking for "you may not use our light" interrupt. Something that seems to be a relatively standard ability of all hosts, merged or post-merging (remember how Paul can fake Anti-Life equation effects on people by turning off and/or permanently destroying their desires? I do).
 
He's making it work! He's making it work! :)
Given how dangerous these guy's qwa bolts are at range, and how good Ragnar is in melee for once getting in close is a good tactic.


Typos:

Every one of these Thunderers has qwa-bolts, and out best chance to make it through this fight is to keep them too occupied to draw them.
"our"

I suppose that the Guardians rules against killing are a bit fuzzier on the subject of compound fractures.
"Guardians' "
 
Doesn't it still use green light? I mean, trying to steal charge from Guy by means of green glow manipulation is just asking for "you may not use our light" interrupt. Something that seems to be a relatively standard ability of all hosts, merged or post-merging (remember how Paul can fake Anti-Life equation effects on people by turning off and/or permanently destroying their desires? I do).
Actually... According to the wiki, those things use Black Light.
 
If he assimilates the Antithesis ring, will it retain its Antimatter Universe properties, and channel ambient Avarice, particularly that intentionally inspired by the wielder? At this point it'd be just about the only meaningful Lantern-specific power boost Paul can get as the Avarice-Enlightened Illustres of the Orange Lantern Corps and occasional Host of the Ophidian.
 
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"When I commanded you to make use of the gladiatorial pits the aliens have assembled on our world's surface, I did so in the certain knowledge that real combat teaches lessons that no amount of sparring amongst ourselves or against automata could teach! This past year we have split of the blood of inferior species than at any other point in our lives, and I know that you have relished that opportunity as I have!" He starts to pace, arms waving. "But today! Today the unthinkable has occurred! One of our own, beaten, by this alien you see before you now!"
I think you're missing a 'more' between the highlighted words

"Then welcome to the Antithesis Corps. Twenty four hours of your life remain to you. May your death bring glory to Qward."
A good response against Green Lanterns that have penetrated the outer defences, this isn't the first time Qward has come under attack by Green Lanterns after all.

Well this quickly went tits-up, didn't it. Antithesis ring is bad news for them.
Bad for Green Lanterns, but the Qwardians have never seen an Orange Lantern before, which means the Antithesis Ring is likely in for a shock.

I agree that assimilating it would likely be a good call, Paul got a lot of information from Stewart's ring, the Anti ring may have useful intel on Weaponer they are hunting.
 
...Oh. I wasn't able to find the wiki entry. In this case, and assuming Paul knows this... Assimilating it might be a bad idea. Or the best idea.
Anti-Green Lantern Corps
"In the Anti-Matter Universe, the dark counterparts of the Guardians of the Universewere the Weaponers of Qward. This evil race after capturing a member of the Green Lantern Corps discovered that they were unable to claim the individuals power ring. Since that time, they had long sought to create their own equivalent and after a century they managed to perfect the process creating the anti-ring which had the power over the black light"
Might not be the same thing though... And this was before you know... Blackest Night.
 
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A green speck pierces the wall on the far side of the arena and flies toward the one Qwardian who hasn't moved since the fight started.
That's not the right shade of green. Unless ... Oh, I think I remember that shade.

"Then welcome to the Antithesis Corps. Twenty four hours of life remain to you. May your death bring glory to Qward."
Yup, that is what I was afraid of. Things are about to get interesting.
 
Because it's nearly the size of the USA, but most of the interior is desert so it has less than 10% of the population? Doesn't seem all that odd.

Different set of native wildlife to most places, yes, but again: mostly desert.

Culturally, just remember that it was originally settled with the British poorest of the poor and it makes sense.
I was making a joke silly.
 
Ok, so:
1) It's the first time we see any energy barrier survive a crumbler round. On one hand, yay, crumbler tech doesn't trump everything in the multiverse (I half expected it to be effective in bringing down the Source Wall at this point). On the other hand, this implies supremacy of qwardian defensive technology over maltusian one. And, given how qwa-bolts went through Paul's armor and barriers, offensive too. I dearly hope that Paul thought to subspace at least a few of those to analyze and use as construct weapons later. Because railguns and special ammunition are ok, as are OCP cold guns, but these weapons and defenses are also top of the line.

2) What's stopping Paul from assimilating the ring? I mean, green ring didn't have any noticeable resistance to assimilation. And Paul should be at least as motivated now as he was when he assimilated it.

Well, to start with, that ring probably is what he need to save a friends life, maybe with a bit of tinkering.
 
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