Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Seems like the opposite reaction might be an adaptive trait, since upon identifying a being of higher cultivation, avoiding their ire seems important.

It feels like you keep arguing back because you don't like the answer, which seems to be, "Most Red cultivators can pass as normal without even trying to do so, unless someone is specifically suspicious of them."
 
Something's been bugging me, so I did a bit of review. Here's the opening for the event with Ling Qi's thoughts on the whole thing. Her attitudes towards the circumstances, and Sixiang's attempts to help her through it.
If she were to be honest with herself, Ling Qi was dreading this. Even if Luo Zhong had invited her in good faith, which she was not completely sure of, she was still going out to spend the afternoon with a bunch of people who were contemptuous of her at best. Frankly she got enough of that at Cai Renxiang's regular gatherings.

"You're going in with a bad attitude again," Sixiang warned. "I know I didn't exactly help with that last year, but I got better. Have you?"

Ling Qi breathed out, Sixiang was right, she was working herself up before things even got started. Even if she was right, approaching the hunting party in such a negative frame of mind would only hurt her. No, she needed to approach this as if it really was a friendly invitation. She needed to act as if she was not forcing herself to be there, and in doing give insult to her host. Attending to things like this was the most basic of the duties she had accepted. If she could handle going ahead alone to fight an army of bandits and a renegade noble, then by comparison, this should be simple.
"Just quit winding yourself up you big goof," Sixiang said with a sigh. "So what if they don't like you? None of them know you, they dislike the idea of you. Just be yourself and if they still wanna be assholes then you can start plotting their downfall or whatever."

"That's a little too flippant," Ling Qi muttered under her breath. Still, Sixiang had a point, she took a moment to adjust her breathing and bring herself to calm. Serenity was the name of the game. She was a noblewoman, she was unruffled by petty rumors and jibes, she did not have the jitters over joining a gathering of peers more intimate than Cai's impersonal parties.
Here's the lead up directly to the upcoming update.
"Showing a little flaw here and there can be an icebreaker, you can be kinda unapproachable at times," Sixiang pointed out idly.

Sixiang was exaggerating. She didn't like the idea much, but perhaps…

[] Ling Qi would take the role of bait, it was the best use of her abilities within the limitations of the hunt. It would be more impressive and she was suited to protecting the other 'bait' cultivators.
[] Ling Qi would stay and hide herself with the other archers, she had already showed off in helping Alingge quickly isolate their target. Now was the time to catch up on her original goals.
I think it's reasonable to assume continuity, of narrative, of feelings. Sixiang is trying to warn Ling Qi away from the bad attitude again. Ling Qi is resistant, but considers it, but she will be rejecting the advice. Why? The flow of their conversation on the matter throughout the arc points at one underlying reason: she is afraid.

Ling Qi is ruffled by petty rumors and jibes, and she does have the jitters over joining a gathering of peers more intimate than Cai's impersonal parties, and what's more even the idea of those things has significant sway over her. It's really hard to transition from "She didn't like the idea much, but perhaps…" to a rejection that doesn't expose her fearful motives. Logic relying on anything else isn't going to be truly genuine, and that's unacceptable to Ling Qi's Way. But neither is fleeing from a challenging situation purposelessly. Ling Qi's trapped herself.

Speaking of trapping Ling Qi, I also have some analysis of Luo Zhong I need to do, but I've run out of time.
 
It feels like you keep arguing back because you don't like the answer, which seems to be, "Most Red cultivators can pass as normal without even trying to do so, unless someone is specifically suspicious of them."
Discussion is not argument.
I enjoy working out the hows and whys of setting consistency.
If the uncanny valley effect is not present because cultivators and spiritblooded are present sufficiently that its never become an adapted trait, then it arises that the same differences can drive a sense of awe, because rule 1 of survival is not crossing a being of higher cultivation when you can help it.

People who don't have an instinctive quality to avoid crossing cultivators are a deselected trait, mitigated by there being not many cultivators per mortal in more recent times for the Empire, but on the other hand for tribal and early imperial existence EVERYONE cultivated if they were to survive, so it'd be tricky to adapt too.
 
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Discussion is not argument.
I enjoy working out the hows and whys of setting consistency.
If the uncanny valley effect is not present because cultivators and spiritblooded are present sufficiently that its never become an adapted trait, then it arises that the same differences can drive a sense of awe, because rule 1 of survival is not crossing a being of higher cultivation when you can help it.

People who don't have an instinctive quality to avoid crossing cultivators are a deselected trait, mitigated by there being not many cultivators per mortal in more recent times for the Empire, but on the other hand for tribal and early imperial existence EVERYONE cultivated if they were to survive, so it'd be tricky to adapt too.
I think it's more just that Reds honestly aren't that superhuman. So they pass fine as just very fit mortals. Yellow is when we start to become noticeably superhuman, and Green is when we start to bestride the world like smol gods :p
 
To just come out and say it, Luo Zhong is playing a political game with Ling Qi, here. This is a big fat "duh" statement, since any leader of a clique is going to be doing that with someone they've invited to a gathering. You don't lure a mark onto your home ground for no reason. We don't have the information to guess what his reason actually is, but I'd lean towards it being well-intentioned, or at least not overtly malicious, despite any annoyances it might be causing her. Which isn't the same as saying that his intentions are respectful of Ling Qi as a person. It's worth examining what and how he's tilting the odds, in any case.

First, there were the circumstances of our invitation to the event. He went out of his way to personally invite Ling Qi to the gatherings. In person, personally! Given the relative social ranks, this was a nod of respect towards Cai Renxiang, and quite likely evidence that he's sifted through the rumors and has an above-average understanding of Ling Qi's social preferences- mainly, he recognized that getting in her face to bug her about it is teetering on necessary. It helps that he wanted to ask questions about the big juicy rumor of the time, being the run-in with the border bandits. Him showing up face to face to offer the invite could be argued as something she semi-owes him for, if spun as a respectful gesture towards her(instead of that actual trying to pin down the flighty girl for bandit answers).

The rest is all in this event, and I'll be quoting sections in order and analyzing them.

...But not right away, the opening introductions to the hunting party aren't that exceptional, and it's a scattered section. Luo Zhong introduces people and gently parries some of the more direct probes at Ling Qi, which is pretty expected host behaviour, essentially neutral. He steers the conversation towards the border bandits so Ling Qi can give her Official Story, which is both sensible and appreciated.

"There is some dispute," Luo Zhong admitted. "On whether we should spend the day on a little light competition, hunting lesser beasts, or set ourselves a more ambitious goal and stalk something a little more difficult together."
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Luo Zhong spread his hands and chuckled. "You see Miss Ling? What is your opinion on the matter?"
...
"Then as my honored guest, I will defer to you," the young man replied with a faint grin. Ling Qi's had to restrain herself from showing her irritation. There was no need to place that kind of responsibility on her! She had just agreed with half of his own party.
Ling Qi is right, and this is a load of malarkey. The group convenes regularly to hunt, they obviously have means to decide without Ling Qi's input. This was a deliberate move on his part, and since it's a social event, his purpose was social in nature. By 'deferring' to her as tie-breaker, he's giving her respect. However, it's a gesture made at no personal cost that inserts Ling Qi as a partisan wedge. It raises the stake a bit through polarization, which raises the value of his small gestures of support moving forwards. Basically, Ling Qi "owes" him for "siding" with her, despite it only making it more likely for her to need/benefit from his help.

"Hm, but how to organize things," he continued tapping his chin thoughtfully. Beneath him, his hound let out a rumbling chuff, and he glanced down. "Ah perhaps you are right. Alingge, Miss Ling will you do us the favor of scouting ahead? I will organize the rest."
This seems like an obvious favor to one of Alingge or Ling Qi. I'm not clear which at this point, but it's definitely meant- and meant to be understood- as a favor, which he gets to be "owed" for again. Superficially, giving Ling Qi one on one time with a viscount scion is a decent boon. However, Luo Zhong forgot that Ling Qi is the direct subordinate of the province's heir, and single-point viscount contacts just don't have the same value to her that they normally do of people her station.

Or did he forget? One consequence of sending them off more-or-less solo is that it isolated her from the rest of the group. Both of them, really. By having their interaction out of sight, he's controlling and limiting variables, like trickle-down esteem from Alingge to others in her "camp", for example. It's not visible to them, so it doesn't affect them, at least within the context of this gathering so far. Creating the distance lets him preserve future interactions for tweaking and prodding.

"A Mirage Lion you say," Luo Zhong mused as he considered her words. She stood at the center of the group. "The two of you were certainly swift in finding such valuable prey."
Here we have another instance of Luo Zhong giving Ling Qi face. This isn't so much Luo Zhong trying to sway the audience to like Ling Qi as it is establishing the popular take. Whether individuals are convinced that Ling Qi was a major contributor doesn't matter because the bossman's basically said so. It may or may not sway people favorably long-term, it does give Ling Qi some cover in conversations and banter for the remainder of the event, and it's another thing Ling Qi owes Luo Zhong for.

"Contrary as always my friend," Luo Zhong chuckled. "Your words have merit. A beast of the threshold stage is quite the terror for many here. However, it is unseemly to be too cautious," he added, slightly chiding. "I did make the decision to hunt something more difficult this afternoon."
Here, Luo Zhong "covers" for Ling Qi by taking credit for the hunt target that he previously pinned on her. I think it washes out to be neutral; the context of him pushing it on her means she doesn't really owe him for stepping in, but at the same time I don't think the intention is to wholly take back ownership of the subject. It feels like a one-off he can pull because he's the man at the top of the totem pole. Not a cynical ploy, just an exercise of privilege as it's convenient for him.

"We believe that the best plan is one in which we bait the beast out and strike it when it's own attempted ambush has failed. Once it has been wounded, tracking it will be much easier," Ling Qi answered.

The Luo scion rubbed his chin in thought, leaning against the side of his giant hound, who still regarded her with a sort of faint distrust. "A workable outline," he mused. "What role would you prefer then, Miss Ling. That of bait or a striker?"
And now he's back to putting her on the spot, and in the context of a plan that's "hers". He was previously happy to assign her a task, but now he's having her be responsible for picking. It ramps up the pressure and stakes on her performance, with all eyes on her.

It's clear that Luo Zhong is manipulating Ling Qi. He's using his position of authority to narrow her options and the context of her exposure to the group, herding her back and forth while handing out little treats of good favor. I just can't quite figure out what his aims are. Personal gain, obviously, but is he trying to keep us reliant on him or does he thing Ling Qi needs that level of railroading, and he's trying to do Cai Renxiang a solid by being her training wheels? Cretin and fool that he is, it's just an obnoxious millstone dragging us down. We don't need help with that.

I will say that the same "social/less social" dichotomy is almost certainly not an aspect of his thinking in the latest "trap". That's all on Ling Qi/our side. He deliberately isolated us after the first decision point, but this one is about foisting responsibility for the hunt and our own performance onto us and narrowing our options. Guy doesn't need a specific step-by-step plan to generally engage in "helpful" obstructive behaviour that keeps us under his thumb.

Edit: obviously he's extracting social favor from Ling Qi through the whole process, which is pretty grating, honestly.

Why? She doesn't have insights that prevent her from retreating unless something really crutial is lost.
I mean, look at these:
  1. Sincerity is the measure by which the worthiness of the self and ones guests should be measured.
  2. There are endings and Endings, only the very last one is final. Just as winter ends in spring, small endings are new beginnings.
  3. Though a path might be hard and lonely, it has worth if you can present something of beauty to those you care for at the end.
  4. There is no peace in emptiness, no content in stillness. Stagnation is death; act, change, move, think, and grow until the very end.
  5. Branches and trunks bend and sway, but the roots must remain unyielding. Retreat only so far and then no more.
2 and 3 should make her less wary of threats along an unsure path, those either might have value themselves, or don't detract from the result if you're resolute. 4 should strongly encourage her towards wanting to overcome hurdles in her path, especially ones that 1 tells her might be irrational or internal in nature more than external. 5 applies indirectly through the rest, since compromising on who and what she is, which all the other lessons are, is just the kind of thing this one stands in opposition to; it was a narratively satisfying lesson to take because it appeared to formalize the gains of perspective from the Forest King fallout.
 
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The usual review, in lieu of sleeping


"I think I find the appeal of a more challenging hunt greater," Ling Qi replied carefully. She kept her eyes on Luo Zhong, but she didn't miss some of the frowns her answer brought among the disciples on the other side.

"Then as my honored guest, I will defer to you," the young man replied with a faint grin. Ling Qi's had to restrain herself from showing her irritation. There was no need to place that kind of responsibility on her! She had just agreed with half of his own party.

"Mm, I think it's meant as a challenge," Sixiang muttered.
A test then, he does her a great honor in pretty much declaring that she do whatever, it gives her the lion's share of the credit AND fault for anything going wrong.

It does not look malicious in the least, but its likely staged, under normal circumstances when he gathers a hunt he SHOULD already have the decision made so that he doesn't end up offending half the group no matter what.

She and the other girl left the pavilion with only a few more pleasantries. While Ling Qi took to the tree branches for her path, Alingge chose to ride on the back of one of the gathered beasts, a black and silver furred doe that stood a bit over two meters at the shoulder. She suspected it was of a kind with the fourth grade beast she had once encountered in the forest.
A Moon Deer! She has good taste!

"Did you have a plan in mind?" Ling Qi asked as the pavilion faded into the greenery behind them. "We will have to be careful not to pick out anything too dangerous I think, anything that would threaten one of us, or Sir Luo could very deadly for the rest." Alingge and Wu Jing were both roughly at her own level of cultivation, but they were the only ones.

Alingge looked up at her when she spoke. The girl rode bareback on her doe, but did make use of a set of reigns. "Do not misunderstand," she replied. "I seek cunning prey, not a great battle. It would be wasteful and destructive to enact such a thing merely for play."

Ling Qi thought of the ruin that she and Cai Renxiang made of the sparring fields and could only dip her head in acknowledgement. "Agreed, something in the middle of the third realm then?"
Considering that Golden Fields was hunting Green beasts while Yellow without much fuss, that sounds about right.

...this probably isn't giving Ling Qi's impression that most people are weak and fragile any help is it?
The other girl hummed in agreement. "That would be best," she agreed. For a moment there was silence between them, but then Alingge glanced up. "Would you answer me a question?"

"I may," Ling Qi replied carefully. "If the answer is something which I can freely speak of."

"What occured on the peak of the Outer Mountain? What happened to the peak guardian?" Alingge asked. "Rumors flow like water, but the truth is unclear."

Ling Qi blinked as she leaped ahead to the next branch. It shouldn't have been a surprising question, but it was actually the first time someone aside from her friends had directly asked. "I had been learning from the spirit at the peak for the better part of a year," Ling Qi answered after a moment. "Between teaching me and some other complications in her Way…"

"The ice child," Alingge murmured as she guided her mount through the tangle of trees and brush.

"...Yes," Ling Qi admitted. "She wanted her daughter to be able to leave and live," Ling Qi felt a surge of melancholy as she thought back to those final moments on the peak. She remembered Zeqing's cracked face and Hanyi's tears. "Even if it was for a short time, as her student I wanted to respect her wishes."

"You're doing as fine a job of it as can be expected," Sixiang whispered silently and for a moment, Ling Qi felt pressure on her shoulder, as if a hand was resting there

"I admire your integrity," Alingge said frankly. She did seem distracted though glancing over Ling Qi's shoulder, she must have been able to sense Sixiang to an extent. "Few would value their connection to a spirit so highly in these days."
I'd hazard a guess that the rumors were particularly uncharitable about why the guardian spirit is dead. And I'm guessing at least a big chunk of them are based off "Ling Qi pulled strings to get her killed for the loots"

Which is something that Alingge would have found incongruent with how Ling Qi spoke of spirits and thus would have asked about.

So thats one foul rumor slain...at least in Alingge's circles.
"Thank you for your kind words," Ling Qi replied automatically. "If you do not mind me asking a question in turn… What is your situation? I had thought the people of the Southern Emerald Seas were… integrated? I am sorry if it is rude, but I'm unsure of your position."

Alingge let out a wry chuckle, turning her eyes back to the forest ahead. "The Daigiya are viscounts by your measure. We are descended from the clans which joined with imperial settlers in the early days of the Hui. For our cooperation, we were granted privileges."

"I wonder if it was really that simple," Sixiang hummed.
Early days of the Hui. Suggesting right in the disorder after the Weilu vanished.

I wonder if they weren't a tribal uprising or invasion that won and then the Hui, lacking strength, signed them right up because better pissing out than in.
Ling Qi did not voice their doubts and simply nodded in understanding. "Still, I had thought I was doing well in studying the clans of Emerald Seas. I somehow managed to miss something so large is a little disturbing."

"Do not be disturbed," Alingge replied. "Of the four clans two have taken to imperial names and ways. My people and the Gi in the west do not seek for attention in the wider world."

"...It's a little dangerous to isolate yourself isn't it?" Ling Qi commented, looking at the girl out of the corner of her eye.

"And so I am here," the other girl replied. "To learn and ingratiate. However, the heavens are high and the capital far. We do not step beyond our bounds. We are not an important piece in the games of the greater clans. It is the duty of the Luo to see to that."

Ling Qi wasn't sure that was a good attitude. In her experience, living quietly and wanting to be left alone were poor protections. However, she wouldn't be rude enough to say so. "As you say. So, what are we searching for?"
Isolationism DOES work for a time, especially their particular brand of "we got people for that, so we can isolate and they take care of it" moderate isolationism.
Its just that when it comes down you're in for rude shocks.

Alingge seemed happy enough to change the subject. "A predator, I should think, a beast who hunts with ambush and mobility that we might hunt and be hunted in turn."

"I might suggest finding a potent enough wolf pack, but I am not sure if that would offend our host," she said half jokingly.

"Yes, that would be a poor choice," Alingge laughed. "Perhaps we should seek out mountain cats?"

"That seems like a likely choice," Ling Qi agreed, she allowed herself to relax a little. Perhaps this would not be so bad.
Catto for Doggo hunt. Logical!
As she was the more mobile of the two, it fell to Ling Qi to move back and forth between scouting and reporting to the main party as they moved south, seeking the signs of a sufficiently potent beast. This role left her little time to actually socialize with the other disciples, but she was able to observe them as she came and went, making reports on their progress. The main party remained in a relaxed mood, and it seemed to her that most of them really were genuinely enjoying themselves.
Okay, so this is going well so far.
We didn't get much chance to interact in detail, but nobody's really offended beyond being disagreed with, and the party is working.

With the practice she had gotten over the last few months attending her liege's parties and cultivating the Harmony of Dancing Wind art, she could see the lines that ran through the group. Who was actually friends and who was simply tolerating who. There was less division than she might have expected. There were clear cliques, the largest was Wu Jing and the other noble born disciples, a cluster of five brightly dressed young men and women who very much seemed to be trying at being exemplars of imperial nobility. The other cliques were much smaller, a pair of young men with fur cloaks and silver jewelry with the scent of the moon about them. A trio of disciples with modern but much less ostentatious clothing, and one or two others who seemed to drift from one group to another as if unsure of where they belonged.

Luo was at the center of it all, of course, but it was difficult to see how he leaned. He seemed amicable with everyone, and the deference they all showed toward him made it impossible to pick out what, if any inclinations they had. Without spending more time speaking with them, anything more than surface level observations were impossible. She did not have too much time to ponder on it anyway since most of her effort had to be put into the tracking.
So we have:
-Boss Luo - Packmaster here.
-Wu Jing's Modern Centrists - Might be trying too hard seeing as they don't really match up with the others who lean more traditionalist.
-Moon Guys Traditionalists - Might be Alingge's allied faction? She wears similar stuff.
-Modern Modest - Gut feel says Modern Conservatives?

Not much in depth info of course, but we'll see.
"A Mirage Lion you say," Luo Zhong mused as he considered her words. She stood at the center of the group. "The two of you were certainly swift in finding such valuable prey."

"So Alingge has said," Ling Qi replied. The girl had rejected appellations like 'Miss' so Ling Qi was left to just use her name. "She believes the one we are tracking to be of the high third grade, equivalent to a cultivator of the Threshold Stage."
One competency box ticked.
"Mm, a deadly creature," Wu Jing said dubiously, standing beside Luo Zhong. The others were arrayed in a loose group around them. "Are we certain we wish to push for such a trophy? It is difficult for those of lower cultivation to see through their manipulations of wind and light, and their claws are deadly to the unguarded."

"It is an enemy well within our grasp, I think," Ling Qi replied. "I do not see any weak or unready cultivators around me. Even limiting ourselves to less destructive arts, I do not see any real trouble finding us."

"Agreed," Wu Jing replied evenly. "We will succeed for certain, if nothing else, Sir Luo might intervene. I simply wonder at the need for taking such risks for a bit of sport."

"Well he's not exactly wrong. If it gets the jump on one of these guys they'll be going to the medicine hall at best," Sixiang mused.

"Contrary as always my friend," Luo Zhong chuckled. "Your words have merit. A beast of the threshold stage is quite the terror for many here. However, it is unseemly to be too cautious," he added, slightly chiding. "I did make the decision to hunt something more difficult this afternoon."

"As you say," Wu Jing replied, dipping a short bow. "I suppose Miss Ling has a plan then?" He asked turning his gaze back to her.
Okay, so this bit makes me wonder. Wu Jing is unlikely to be so unadept as to repeatedly put his foot in his mouth by going against the crowd. First with criticizing Ling Qi's dealing with Chu Song, and now criticizing a decision Luo Zhong officially backed.

Smells a bit like a set up devil's advocate?
"Alingge and I have some ideas, yes," Ling Qi replied. Her first choice in a real fight would have been blanketing the territory in mist and then freezing the creature with a well placed refrain, but they were trying to be restrained here. "However, we would not be so bold as to plan without consulting Sir Luo or the rest of you."

"Of course not, but I would hear your ideas all the same," Luo Zhong replied with a thin smile.

"Man every conversation is twice as long when you gotta spend half of it dancing around," Sixiang murmured in her thoughts, giving the impression of shaking their head.
The important part is not to give offense after all, so you should come up with a plan, but not say it until they had their say then offer up your plan anyways.
"We believe that the best plan is one in which we bait the beast out and strike it when it's own attempted ambush has failed. Once it has been wounded, tracking it will be much easier," Ling Qi answered.

The Luo scion rubbed his chin in thought, leaning against the side of his giant hound, who still regarded her with a sort of faint distrust. "A workable outline," he mused. "What role would you prefer then, Miss Ling. That of bait or a striker?"
Anyone noticed this?
I wonder why the doggo doesn't like us much.
Spirits tend to be simpler for such matters.
 
Congrats dude

I've been wondering, but how would you guys fit characters from another power system into the classifications that we have? e.g. Worm's Skitter.
Well really they would just be mortal but with a good art that costs zero Qi in that case.

I want to say that the combat method wouldn't really work there due to the auto successes or whatever it is for different stages and realms, but it might work anyway with how badly Ling Qi would wreck Skitter. So long as she can sense Skitter which shouldn't be too hard considering Skitters range limitations and the BS that are cultivator senses even without arts, Ling Qi could likely quite simple defeat Skitter even without Arts just with her senses, speed, strength and durability, and has multiple Arts (SCS for instant teleport ->neck snap, FSS instant kill, TRF for Invul etc) that would make it trivial.
 
Well really they would just be mortal but with a good art that costs zero Qi in that case.

I want to say that the combat method wouldn't really work there due to the auto successes or whatever it is for different stages and realms, but it might work anyway with how badly Ling Qi would wreck Skitter. So long as she can sense Skitter which shouldn't be too hard considering Skitters range limitations and the BS that are cultivator senses even without arts, Ling Qi could likely quite simple defeat Skitter even without Arts just with her senses, speed, strength and durability, and has multiple Arts (SCS for instant teleport ->neck snap, FSS instant kill, TRF for Invul etc) that would make it trivial.
I could imagine that, considering Skitter's personality, she would level up pretty hard in this universe. But yeah, most of the Wormverse's characters wouldn't stand a chance against a Green cultivator. Maybe Eidolon though.
 
I could imagine that, considering Skitter's personality, she would level up pretty hard in this universe. But yeah, most of the Wormverse's characters wouldn't stand a chance against a Green cultivator. Maybe Eidolon though.

Oh yeah, providing she has Talent you would probably have a Shenhua With Bugs pretty soon.

The bigger problems with Worm specifically are one) Entity derived powers wouldn't work in FoD per Yrs Word of God (iirc? if I have this someone please correct) as there aren't parallel dimensions for Shards to manipulate/hide in, two) Entity Powers work on physics which would either straight up not work with FoDs more subjective physics or just not apply correctly in the power system (i.e. if Sting somehow worked it may be just as effective against a Red as Shenhua, providing you can hit), and three) if an actual Outsider (that is anyone from another world/universe) showed up the moment they run into a higher tier cultivator, which could be the moment they step foot on the planet with Great Spirits, then at least some of that Outsider nature will be known, which means that pretty soon the Great Spirits will know, and I wouldn't be surprised if there were some Dresden-esque laws against Outsiders that would lead to an instant smiting. Possibly also including the local country side Golden Fields style.

If not, then they're still effective mortals with likely a great many Great Spirits interest, which... yeah no idea how that would go. It may even depend on who finds them first, whether they're smited, put under protection or abducted and made into some exotic pet.
 
4 should strongly encourage her towards wanting to overcome hurdles in her path, especially ones that 1 tells her might be irrational or internal in nature more than external.

I think you misunderstand it. It doesn't say that Ling Qi should always overcome obstacles, it says she has to constantly try to do it. Trying, and failing, and trying again is acually encouraged by 2.
 
Okay, so this bit makes me wonder. Wu Jing is unlikely to be so unadept as to repeatedly put his foot in his mouth by going against the crowd. First with criticizing Ling Qi's dealing with Chu Song, and now criticizing a decision Luo Zhong officially backed.

Smells a bit like a set up devil's advocate?
I didn't want to go there because I felt like my post was suspicious enough, but this is a real possibility. Can't really tell without diving in headlong, honestly.

I think you misunderstand it. It doesn't say that Ling Qi should always overcome obstacles, it says she has to constantly try to do it. Trying, and failing, and trying again is acually encouraged by 2.
That was more or less my intended meaning, but I think the sentence ran away from me a bit.

Edit: Actually, my meaning was pretty clear, looking back. "...encourage her towards wanting to overcome hurdles" is saying what you said it should say. Important is the "wanting", being motivation to make attempts. I didn't really address continual repeated efforts.
 
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I've been wondering, but how would you guys fit characters from another power system into the classifications that we have? e.g. Worm's Skitter.
Well I'm a bit late to this conversation, but Skitter would not match up well in this setting

Her powers shouldn't work at all for starters given the nature of the world of FoD

But let's imagine that her powers still function, she controls arthropods correct? This could be potentially fairly dangerous given how deadly the fauna is in this world, but the truly dangerous high level beings are all sapient creatures that more than likely have resistance to mind altering effects. She might, might, be able to amass a menagerie of red, yellow and maybe certain green creatures if she's somehow lucky enough not to run into the wrong things and her powers can actually effect them.

Skitter's biggest issue is that she is a fragile mortal human being at the end of the day. The list of people who could bypass whatever army she could amass and kill her is not a short one. With methods ranging from stealth, to plowing through minions to get to her, to esoteric nonsense. She would be in near certain death if matched against most mid greens and unless circumstances heavily favor her, would probably have trouble against a talented yellow. Anything above mid green would be pretty much instant death in a fight.
 
Edit: obviously he's extracting social favor from Ling Qi through the whole process, which is pretty grating, honestly.
A bit of small context here: Within nobility everyone owes everyone else small to medium favors. Its one of the soft mechanisms which keeps conflict in the courts rather than the fields.

Favors ultimately are useful in a PRETTY narrow set of circumstances:
-Favors have the sole compulsion of not wanting the other party's opinion to drop. I.e. favors have little use as a hold on your enemies, only on your allies and on neutral parties
--As such, worsening your relations 'cost' you in favors owed, and both parties have a vested interest in playing ball.

-Debts owed give a face saving excuse to take action rather than inaction. They can mask or degrade conspiracist thinking.

In essence, owing him minor favors is a good thing. We need his clique to owe us minor favors back in turn to make it complete however.
I didn't want to go there because I felt like my post was suspicious enough, but this is a real possibility. Can't really tell without diving in headlong, honestly.
Mmm, my first impression was "is this guy an idiot?"...but when you think about it, you don't get to be a noble sub-clique leader by vigorously shoving your foot into your mouth against your boss.
Well I'm a bit late to this conversation, but Skitter would not match up well in this setting

Her powers shouldn't work at all for starters given the nature of the world of FoD

But let's imagine that her powers still function, she controls arthropods correct? This could be potentially fairly dangerous given how deadly the fauna is in this world, but the truly dangerous high level beings are all sapient creatures that more than likely have resistance to mind altering effects. She might, might, be able to amass a menagerie of red, yellow and maybe certain green creatures if she's somehow lucky enough not to run into the wrong things and her powers can actually effect them.

Skitter's biggest issue is that she is a fragile mortal human being at the end of the day. The list of people who could bypass whatever army she could amass and kill her is not a short one. With methods ranging from stealth, to plowing through minions to get to her, to esoteric nonsense. She would be in near certain death if matched against most mid greens and unless circumstances heavily favor her, would probably have trouble against a talented yellow. Anything above mid green would be pretty much instant death in a fight.
Depends on if you're doing a straight insert(which would require a personal field of her native reality to work) or if you're adjusting to make her fit the setting.

Because Parahumans are effectively doing a variant on Barbarian Cultivation: They're bonded to a more potent immaterial spirit which allows them to use some of their spirit arts with the parahuman as a vector of action, in exchange for new experiences as a mortal's symbiote which might let them work out of their natural limitations.
 
A bit of small context here: Within nobility everyone owes everyone else small to medium favors. Its one of the soft mechanisms which keeps conflict in the courts rather than the fields.

Favors ultimately are useful in a PRETTY narrow set of circumstances:
-Favors have the sole compulsion of not wanting the other party's opinion to drop. I.e. favors have little use as a hold on your enemies, only on your allies and on neutral parties
--As such, worsening your relations 'cost' you in favors owed, and both parties have a vested interest in playing ball.

-Debts owed give a face saving excuse to take action rather than inaction. They can mask or degrade conspiracist thinking.

In essence, owing him minor favors is a good thing. We need his clique to owe us minor favors back in turn to make it complete however.
Mmm, my first impression was "is this guy an idiot?"...but when you think about it, you don't get to be a noble sub-clique leader by vigorously shoving your foot into your mouth against your boss.
You're right, and I wasn't entirely clear. Him racking up minor social favors from Ling Qi is grating in the context of her social aims not panning out, especially if his interference is contributing. Especially especially if he's maneuvering favors out of situations that aren't particularly helpful to her or even in lieu of what she's trying to do. It constitutes a failure of his in adhering to the social contract.

Now, things are still pretty open on the whole, but he's straddling a number of lines. Depending on how things continue to pan out, he can be anything from useful to a complete write-off. I'm hoping he's not a frustrating selfish waste of time, but I'm in a pessimistic period of thought for now.
 
I could imagine that, considering Skitter's personality, she would level up pretty hard in this universe. But yeah, most of the Wormverse's characters wouldn't stand a chance against a Green cultivator. Maybe Eidolon though.
Contessa's PtV would probably give her a godly breathing technique and exactly how to use it, and also show her how to unlock Fate Qi and lead her down the Path of Inevitable Victory. Capitalized for emphasis.

Well I'm a bit late to this conversation, but Skitter would not match up well in this setting

Her powers shouldn't work at all for starters given the nature of the world of FoD

But let's imagine that her powers still function, she controls arthropods correct? This could be potentially fairly dangerous given how deadly the fauna is in this world, but the truly dangerous high level beings are all sapient creatures that more than likely have resistance to mind altering effects. She might, might, be able to amass a menagerie of red, yellow and maybe certain green creatures if she's somehow lucky enough not to run into the wrong things and her powers can actually effect them.

Skitter's biggest issue is that she is a fragile mortal human being at the end of the day. The list of people who could bypass whatever army she could amass and kill her is not a short one. With methods ranging from stealth, to plowing through minions to get to her, to esoteric nonsense. She would be in near certain death if matched against most mid greens and unless circumstances heavily favor her, would probably have trouble against a talented yellow. Anything above mid green would be pretty much instant death in a fight.
I guess... Though Khephri's power was just straight-up bullshit that even people with mental powers had absolutely zero defence against.
 
While I don't want to get too much into vs. nonsense, since as the author that feels a little masturbatory, the issue with wormverse mind control and powers in general really is that it operates off the assumption of a purely materialistic determinist universe, neither of which is true of FoD. In wormverse khepri was irresistable because she is directly manipulating peoples physical brains and/or shards. This would not be sufficient to control a cultivator for very long, or at all for anyone high enough to have a domain. I won't go any further than that, but in general Worm and FoD are incompatible settings due to different underpinnings of universal design.

This isn't touching the general impossibility of a shard or entity reaching it in the first place as I assume a crossover would handwave that with its initial unicorn/ASB intervention.

Anywho authorial musing aside, update will be up later today.
 
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Mmm, my first impression was "is this guy an idiot?"...but when you think about it, you don't get to be a noble sub-clique leader by vigorously shoving your foot into your mouth against your boss.
Since we're talking about a bunch of teenagers, I believe the answer is yes. On the other hand, he's willing to admit he's wrong so maybe he's not a teenager. :)

Clearly we need to spend more time with Wu Jing to solve this troubling question. Good thing he's such an interesting character!
 
A question I have; do high level cultivators that specialize in crafting make use of their own body as resources? Like blood and flesh?
I assume that once you get to a high enough rank the cultivators body itself is potent in value and can heal relatively quickly so it wouldn't be much of a sacrifice for high level reagents.
 
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