so contrasting with the existing insight "As starvation is privation of the body, isolation is privation of the soul. Thus is born suffering. But, one has only two hands with which to reach out. Yet, others have two hands as well. The cold, sad street cannot be unmade by the efforts of one." 1 feels like LQ defining the terms a bit more and leveling it up.
[] As starvation is privation of the body, isolation is privation of the soul. From lack and loss is born suffering, in many forms. One soul has but two hands, yet in multitude the chain is unending. The blade Isolation cannot be dulled by one heart alone.
the origin of the birth of suffering is more well-defined. and the wording for reaching out to be more confident in community and multitude but there isn't a huge change in the core of the concept
[X] As starvation is privation of the body, isolation is privation of the soul. Thus, the greatest foe is I. No hand may reach the one who has clenched and withdrawn. The blade Isolation rends all warmth into cold.
this on the other hand feels like an evolution or the next step on the journey. instead of just saying we cannot defeat isolation alone or that multitude is the answer to isolation's cold and so we need to reach out, we identify the root cause of why beings do not reach out .
[] As starvation is privation of the body, isolation is privation of the soul. From lack and loss is born suffering, in many forms. One soul has but two hands, yet in multitude the chain is unending. The blade Isolation cannot be dulled by one heart alone.
the origin of the birth of suffering is more well-defined. and the wording for reaching out to be more confident in community and multitude but there isn't a huge change in the core of the concept
[X] As starvation is privation of the body, isolation is privation of the soul. Thus, the greatest foe is I. No hand may reach the one who has clenched and withdrawn. The blade Isolation rends all warmth into cold.
this on the other hand feels like an evolution or the next step on the journey. instead of just saying we cannot defeat isolation alone or that multitude is the answer to isolation's cold and so we need to reach out, we identify the root cause of why beings do not reach out .