Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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The Iron Price
It was cold in the Glittering City.

Sudica's broad and curving boulevards were filled with frost and howling wind. The many colored tiles and domes of the cities palaces and temples were thick with gleaming ice and groaning under the weight of the snow. The pulse of the Goddess' heart was less than it had ever been and the shards of the sun lay dim in the holy cradles.

All because of the disunity and weakness that had infected them, from the top to the bottom. Even the priesthoods had traitors in their midsts. Even the highest one, the Scepter of Sudica herself, speaker of the hierophant herself had spoken treason!

Maksim let out a heavy breath and it misted in the air, crusting his beard with frost as he firmed his stance and shoved the haft of his halberd out, forcing the press of bodies back from the stairs of the temple. "Return to your homes!" He bellowed. "The temple is closed, by order of Protector Ludomir!"

The heat had been fading day by day, for many months now, It had gone from the great hall of the Althing first. The roaring shard of the sun that burned in its heart guttering down to embers. It had left the palaces next, then houses of the guilds and little gods. Soon the heat of the city lingered only in the homes of the lowest, in hovels and bunkhouses.

The noise of the crowd stretching out into the great plaza of the gods struck him like physical force. There were words, countless shouted words, but they were so many that there was only meaningless noise. All but the closest, those shouted in his face but red faced, desperate men and women, gazing up at the roiling sky and the darkened temple of Sudica with a manic desperation.

"Traitors!" "Blasphemers!" "Beasts!" Release them! Release them!" "Kinslayers!"

Maksim felt fury in his heart for these people, these pathetic unblessed mortals screaming at their protectors. They were the rampart, those who stood against the Outer Night! And this was their thanks!

Bad enough the outer cities, the lesser cities defied the Protector. He who had held the Gates on the day of the Black Sun, who had mantled the Thunderer in all of his wrath, and driven the daemons fleeing back into the Void. They had dared to raise close their coffers, they had dared to defy his laws. And now the great hero was to be condemned merely for putting down rebels? They, the Black Guard of the Gate, were shouted at and spit on by peasants?

The Lord Protector had slain two cities, and the Polar Nation was stronger for it. The others had bent the knee. They did not need squabbling, they did not need a hundred whining councils when the daemons beat at the gates.

Maksim shoved outward, and men tumbled like pins before his strength. "Begone! The traitor priestess' have been uncovered! The sun will return so soon as the Lord Protector breaks the daemon-bringers curses!"

The cathedral of Sudica loomed large behind them, dark and silent. The Hierophant towered higher still in the now frozen gardens beyond, her gown of bristles and needles white with frost, her high and craggy branches reaching like silent claws into the sky.

The true depth of the treachery had become clear when they returned from the pacification. At the gates of the city, the Scepter of Sudica had met them, and denounced them for kinslaying and tyranny.

"Get you to the north, son of the Thunderer. Cleanse your sins, shed the man and become the land as you should have long ago."

So many traitors had stood with her. He had enjoyed seeing their expressions crumple as they were clapped in irons and sent to the depths below, their possessions stripped and given to proper, loyal men and women of the Gates, who understood the necessity of unity.

The Priestess they had been more courteous to, by necessity, sent back to the temple to commune and clear her head.

But no.

The heat began to leave. She was brought forth again, and had only the same words for the Protector.

"Get you to the north, son of the Thunderer. Cleanse your sins, shed the man and become the land as you should have long ago. It is not yet too late."

So it had gone as the city froze. Again and again, the Protector had gone to the priests of the city and demanded that they tell him the gods true will.

And always the answer was the same.

The daemons had truly sunk their claws in deep that even those who should be most exposed to the gods would be twisted to their will. The only thing to do was place the priests under arrest and forcibly cleanse the temple of demonic taint. There would be no more false speakers. The Protector would speak to great Sudica, god to god.

Maksim snarled, drawing on the mantle of the Thunderer and his son the Protector as bodies pressed him back, letting out a great shout that had the rioting fools covering their now bleeding ears. All along the lines his brothers, garbed in the gleaming black Ice of the guard did the same, shouting over the cacophony forcing the crowd back from the steps. He knew things could not be much better at the palace at the Gates, at any of the strongholds. The length of the curse laid upon their city was driving its citizens mad with daemon-rage and fear.

Maksim was growing grimly certain that they would need to crack down if even the citizens of the great Glittering City were so malcontent, it would only encourage the others to rebellion.

Out of the corner of his eye, he saw something fly past. Saw one of his brothers stiffen as a chunk of ice shattered off his helm, hurled by an impudent mortal. Maksim saw the haft his halberd sweep out, and knew that the bloodletting was coming as it arced toward bald pate of a wild eyed old man with a spit flecked beard shouting denunciations of their supposed blasphemy.

He expected to see the old man's skull burst like a melon. Instead he saw him flung down the steps, bruised and bleeding, there was a crunch of broken bone,the man stirred then went limp, dead then even for his strange resilience.

The wind, Maksim realized, had stopped blowing. The snow fell straight, like a pale white curtain. There was a ripple of confusion and milling silence from the crowd as it receded like the sea.

But Maksim felt a terrible dread in his gut. They stared at him with hate still, these rioting things, barely more than beasts in human skin. There was steam rising from them. He felt it beating down like a great and gathering cloud of wrath.

It was hot, he realized. As hot as the day he had stood in battle over the fires of the underearth in the south. It was hot, and growing hotter.

The branches of the hierophant, towering above, groaned and shuddered, spilling countless tons of snow and ice. There was a shout, a young man springing to his feet from where he knelt over his fallen father, the old man at the base of the steps.

He hurled himself at Maksim's brother in arms, untrained fist pulled back for a wild blow. The flick of the halberd blade was contemptuous.

It bounced off the young man's side like it had struck steel, and there was a resounding crack as steel forged ice cracked in a glistening spider web, and Kasim's comrade stumbled, more in shock than anything, raising a hand to a now exposed, bloodied lip.

Every window in the cathedral burst outward in a shower of glass. He heard Protector Ludomir roar in rage, his power radiating outward, the thunder shaking the earth.

But it was so much smaller than the deafening, all consuming thunder that was the voices of a city raised in wrath. The peasants… the traitors surged up the steps, an endless sea of bodies. Maksim roared back in the teeth of their fury. He laid about him with the fury and poise of a warrior of three centuries. He battered them, bashed them, cut them down even where he could, muscles bulging with the force of the Thunderers' fury as he carved into what daemonic force was empowering mortal flesh. Even as he failed to call the thunder into his skin, to draw on the greater power of his mantle. For the first time since he was a boy the storm did not answer his call.

They ripped his halberd from his hands as he retreated up the steps. He saw his fellows dragged down by the screaming crowd, their screams barely rising above the din of the riot's fury. Back, back toward the doors of the temple. The Lord Protector would…

He glimpsed the sky as he craned his neck back, his blood running cold as he saw the hole in the sky. In the sheet of iron gray a single perfect circle stood out, the bright full moon shining down, and silhouetted against it was a vessel of stone, which no son of the Polar Nation could mistake.

A stone struck his helm, and he went spinning to the ground as ice shattered, and he felt the hot splash of blood across his face.

Then there was no more sky. No more sky, only faces twisted in rage, fists and commoners' tools raised to pummel.

Maksim felt his teeth shatter under the blow of a masons hammer. Felt a butcher cleaver carve into his thigh. He struggled, bellowing, pushing against dozens of hands pinning him to the steps of Sudica's temple.

Did they not understand? Everything. Everything was for the nation, to bring them together, to stand against the daemons! It had to be, they could not have shed so much blood for anything else….

Could they?

His only answer was the shovel blade swung down upon his head
 
It's an interesting insight into how higher realm cultivators are always monstrous.

Like, an Empire White is always inhuman, but fundamentally, it's an inhuman expression of themselves.

With the Polar Nation, this feels like a higher realm drank too deeply of a God's singular portfolio, and ended up going off the deep end.
 
I think it's the history of the polar nation, not the present. Explaining why the men don't be warriors anymore.
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Threads 281-Sea of Dreams 5 - Forge of Destiny

Ling Qi shared a long look with Xuan Shi. As much as a founding tale could be interesting, how much would it help? Flipping the situation around in her (...)
"The Iron King took from the Gate its warriors and turned it upon the land. He slew the Rampart City and struck a mortal blow at the Five Rivers City, both children-disciples of She who became the Scepter. They were among the eldest of all cities, and this, at last, was too much."

The words "too much" echoed and distorted as if called out by the shadows in the hut.

The hag's gimlet eyes glowed in the dark as the spoon plunged down like a knife into the cauldron. The spoon rose, bearing to the top of the waters something red and round. It was a skull, jaw open in a scream, muscle still clinging to bone. One wide eye rolled in its socket. Ling Qi got only a glimpse before it was plunged back into the water.

Ling Qi swallowed hard, but it was Xuan Shi who spoke up first.

"Slew a city?" Xuan Shi asked, frowning. "This does not strike as poetry."

"It's not. Take that as your lesson. Power, the power they respect, is that which holds up and binds together. Waystations, fortresses, centers of wisdom, cities, these are what those who cast aside human flesh aspire to," said the crone. "The Iron King didn't, although he would have made a mighty, if harsh, one. But he took and took alone, and built his body into a throne, and the Glittering City, she who was Sudica herself, gave her people the power to tear him down and hang his broken corpse from the Hierophant's branches in offering to the cold and the crows. Know that, when you go to speak, that this is the peak of the Way among the people of the ice."
 
Here we see the ravages of Paranoia And Self Righteousness. All Enemies, All Who Disagreed With Him, became *Traitors*, became *Corrupted* in his eyes. And thus he became unmade.
 
Come to think of it, how does the Empire handle peasant revolts? Considering that mortals are culturally seen as the equivalent of children, and a high level Cultivator could just non-lethally pacify a riot with their Arts or superior physiciality, does the Empire prefer to go full jackboot or do they try to send a music cultivator to rob everyone of their anger instead?
 
Come to think of it, how does the Empire handle peasant revolts? Considering that mortals are culturally seen as the equivalent of children, and a high level Cultivator could just non-lethally pacify a riot with their Arts or superior physiciality, does the Empire prefer to go full jackboot or do they try to send a music cultivator to rob everyone of their anger instead?

The simplest answer is that there simply aren't peasant revolts in this fashion. The culture, enforced by literal gods, is against it. Dragon thinking of everyone in their place, Weilu thinking of the wisest (centuries old cultivators) lead, etc. It is also very different in that the Ascended gods have a very different presence/influence, and I don't think you could see this sort of buff of the general populace.

Most importantly though, is the sheer concentration of active power in common society for the Empire. In the Polar Peoples cultivation track, anyone above the 3rd realm becomes exceptionally inhuman and ever less able to act on their own; that is, the common populace has an actual say and expectation over how the upper realms act. It is the complete opposite in the empire.

So, there is no cultural standard for this sort of outcry from the mortals in the empire, no greater power to support them, and the powers-that-be have endless options for overwhelming power, as you listed, to end any such event if it did occur. The first response would depend on the local culture but honestly, any sort of Imperial 4th+ realm invoking their domain could passively end this sort riot in a moment (how many corpses that may involve will vary).
 
Also, I think there is a large cultural pressure to protect your mortals and if some area was neglected enough their peasantry was starving enough to revolt, rivals would swoop in to point to their lord why these guys suck and they should have their land.

Also, if peasants get neglected they get ate by the local wildlife
 
There probably is no ability to have large scale mortal revolts, not enough mobility by the mortals to travel and connect, village by village revolts might be a thing, but a green baron should be more than capable of supressing their villagers solo.
Now, if the mortals manage to convince a bunch of yellows to support them, then that might change things, but at that point it is no longer just a mortal revolt.
 
Yeah, even "civilized" parts of the empire still seem to have a dangerous enough wilderness that it's hard to imagine a peasant revolt spreading out past that very localized fief.
 
Except if Cai Shenhua ascends into Mandate of Heaven or something. Then Xianxia heroes will spontaneously arise to put down any lords who go *too far* in their fuck up. Possibly supported by Inexorable Justice if the corruption is deep enough.
 
Sure, but that's no longer just a peasant revolt, that's a surprise cultivator, which already do happen, and MoI is specifically out there seeking to prevent them.
 
Probably the closest you'll get is the empire version of what happened to the Iron King, have all the peasants pray to a Great Spirit who decides they are right and gives them a very permanent change in management
 
Come to think of it, how does the Empire handle peasant revolts? Considering that mortals are culturally seen as the equivalent of children, and a high level Cultivator could just non-lethally pacify a riot with their Arts or superior physiciality, does the Empire prefer to go full jackboot or do they try to send a music cultivator to rob everyone of their anger instead?
In the past, it was probably something like sending young masters in to deal with it. Alternatively, they're allowed to try to exist for a year without any higher-level cultivators (green or higher) if they live in a dangerous area. If they live in a developed area, they're probably put down brutally or not allowed to fester with spies or police.

Nowadays any real threat, talented people who will hate the system, are taken into the Sects and incorporated. Those left are not talented enough to be a threat in the long run.
 
In the past, it was probably something like sending young masters in to deal with it. Alternatively, they're allowed to try to exist for a year without any higher-level cultivators (green or higher) if they live in a dangerous area. If they live in a developed area, they're probably put down brutally or not allowed to fester with spies or police.

Nowadays any real threat, talented people who will hate the system, are taken into the Sects and incorporated. Those left are not talented enough to be a threat in the long run.

That's apparently not quite true. What the Ministry is searching for is Disaster predicted. Now, there's a strong correlation between, "This person will cause a disaster" and "This person has a high Talent and therefore when they start cultivating on their own they're going to get up to Some Shit." But I think it'd be foolish to assume that they were actually getting everyone who had High, let alone Moderate/Medium (which would be more than enough to get you into a Sect if you were a Noble) Talent.
 
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