Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Ling Qi held her new earring in her hands, watching how they glimmered in the workshop's light.
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When I came back from my training, I found my gown in the closed with a bunch of frayed bedding.
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Which are preceding faster than I thought possible.
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Of course, there were assistants, not timply the tiny mouse skeletons that scurried too and fro across the floor
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The fame of the Xuan clan is well earned," Li Suyin said politely
"The fame
The folk of Khem are the most numerous, and their mein hard to miss
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This ones Father did not teach the craft, afore he left on his last journey eight years ago.
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Ling Qi held her new earrings in her hands, watching how they glimmered in the workshop's light. They were silver ear studs, relatively plain in make, but each was set with a dark blue gem, which darkened to near purple at the center, if you looked closely, you could see the shimmer of the sky at dusk in their depths.

"They're as beautiful as I'd expect," Ling Qi said, looking back to Lin Hai.

"They are not too complex on their own, but such accessories are more a component than a statement unto themselves," Lin Hai said, pressing a fingertip to his lips thoughtfully. "I was somewhat disappointed that you did not allow me to give you something a touch more eye catching."

Ling Qi chuckled awkwardly, glancing at Lin Hai's extravagant garb. "It really isn't my style to do so."

"Naturally, and that is why I did not push," Lin Hai said, nodding affably. "If there is one lesson I know all too well, it is the difference between pushing one to seek their boundaries and forcing one beyond them."

Ling Qi nodded absently, rubbing her thumb over one of the gemstone studs. It was cool and smooth, the line of the cuts almost undetectable. She recalled the words at their last meeting. They had confused her at the time, and they still did honestly. It was difficult to imagine Lin Hai as anything but what he was. "I did actually have another thing I wanted to ask you about."

"For dear Lady Ren's retainer, I can spare a few moments more," Lin Hai said. He gestured airily, and the numerous tools floating in the air began to spin and bob, flying their way back to the tables and shelves.

"Is it normal for one of your gowns to… Uh, eat other clothing if left alone for awhile?" Ling Qi asked. She stumbled over the question a little despite herself. She was still a little baffled.

Lin Hai blinked.

"…Not particularly," he said slowly, sounding nonplussed. "Deprived of your energy she should have simply gone dormant, unless she received some damage?"

"No, I left, it… her," Ling Qi corrected. "In my room. When I came back from my training, I found my gown in the closet with a bunch of frayed bedding."

Lin Hai's darkly painted eyebrows drew together, and he reached out, tracing his finger through the air a hair's breadth away from her shoulder, faint glimmering threads rose to meet him, and Ling Qi felt her gown grow a fraction tighter, for just a moment.

"Ah, Master," Lin Hai breathed. "How your works still confound…"

Ling Qi shifted uncomfortably. Having been on the receiving end of Cai Shenhua recently, those words were not a comfort.

"It seems your choice to wear her at all times has had some effects on her development," Lin Hai said. "Which is proceeding faster than I thought possible. It seems that she is only waiting for your cultivation to reach a sufficient level before achieving her own evolution."

Ling Qi glanced down in surprise. Her dress seemed no different than normal. "What level is that?"

"Hm, Green and Bronze Formation, I would estimate," Lin Hai mused, withdrawing his hand. "Until then, if you need to remove your gown for a lengthy period, it may be best to put her in your Vent chamber, the qi rich air should prevent any mishaps."

Ling Qi brushed her fingers against the silk of her gown, and felt the thrum of qi running through it, transforming silk into something far stronger than steel. If she focused, could she feel something foreign, an energy that was not just her own percolating through the talisman? Maybe it was just her imagination.

"In any case, Miss Ling. You will need to hold your seat for a moment longer," Lin Hai said. His fingers twitched, and between them appeared a needle. It was a large one, made of steel. Inscribed with countless formations so small that they appeared as no more than spidery lines, it crackled with heavenly power, fit to pierce stone, metal or immortal flesh. "You'll need to try your talisman on after all."

Ling Qi grimaced. She hadn't been looking forward to this part.


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Over the course of the next few days, Ling Qi worked on putting her idea into practice, while continuing to cultivate. She began the process of opening a new meridian, slowly and painstakingly working open the densely clogged channel. With each one she opened, it was getting harder.

It wasn't too hard to talk Li Suyin into setting up a meeting, and Xuan Shi wasn't much harder to convince. However, as she arrived at Suyin's workshop and opened the door, it occurred to her that she might have forgotten something. In the dim light of the workshop, more than two dozen eyes stared back at her from the opposite wall.

Suyin did not have any visitors.

They floated in jars, hung suspended between crackling metal prongs, and lay neatly stacked upon trays. Some were human, some were animal, some were even insect, or glittering things of gemstone and precious metal.

Below them was a line of eerily lifelike wax heads, each missing their left eye. One of the heads was melting slowly against the table, half of it carved away by some blast, scraps of wax and ocular tissue being cleaned up by the assistants. Of course, there were assistants, not simply the tiny mouse skeletons that scurried too and fro across the floor, but humanoid and human sized figures with the skulls of beasts, wrapped in spidersilk and garbed in the robes of servants.

Behind her, through a silver wisp, Ling Qi saw Xuan Shi very slowly blink.

"Ah, my apologies Ling Qi, is it really so late already?" Li Suyin looked up from the half exploded wax head, looking startled and contrite. There was a bit of wax brain matter and too realistic blood clinging to her cheek. A nearby skeleton with the skull of a doe very helpfully dabbed it away with a silk kerchief. "I got caught up in the testing… This is so embarrassing."

Li Suyin had changed a lot since the last time she had met Xuan Shi, huh?

"I think it's nice, really gives her a unique feel," Sixiang asserted. "She's so good at color balance too! I really like the asymmetric feel the spider webbing gives the space."

Ling Qi didn't miss more than half, no a quarter of a beat as she stepped inside and smiled. "Don't worry too much Suyin, this isn't anything too formal after all. I'm sure Xuan Shi has lost himself in a project too now and then."

Xuan Shi startled, just a little when she said his name, pulling his eyes away from the skeletal constructs moving through the room. They were already disassembling and carrying away the workbench, tools, and materials. "The fugue of the craftsmen is not unknown. Rather, this one would apologize for the short notice.

Li Suyin stood and brought her hands together to bow. She was wearing the dress Lin Hai had made for her. Pale grey, with a striking dark violet underlayer that stood out at the ends of her sleeves and collar, it was surprisingly utilitarian for one of his works. It had a high collar, from which protruded a touch of dark purple lace, and otherwise was only accentuated by spiderweb patterns, embroidered into the gown around her feet and ankles.

Of course, if you looked at it too long, the pale grey fabric seemed to swim and shimmer, presenting phantasmal faces.

It was downright staid really.

"Regardless, I apologize. It is an honor to have such a skilled craftsman in my home. I hope my simple works don't bore you too much," Li suyin said demurely, clasping her hands together.

She wore two gloves now, but only one was that clawed contraption she had put together.

"Sect Sister Li's words are too humble. The works performed by your hands are known throughout the Sect," Xuan Shi said. He seemed to pause, listening to something. "You give this one too much esteem."

'Did I look like that at first with you?' Ling Qi thought absently to Sixiang. She stepped back, and pulled the door shut.

"You could get pretty bad about spacing out," Sixiang replied, amused.

The fame of the Xuan clan is well earned," Li Suyin said politely, straightening up. Skeletons emerged from other rooms, carrying new furniture, tables and chairs and even a tea set. "And your project last year truly earned its place in first. I could not have managed such a complex enhancement."

"This one wonders at that," Xuan Shi said, tugging at the brim of his hat. "To break the earth in a new field is more impressive than to merely tread anew old ground."

"No really," Li Suyin insisted. "The complexity of your reaction matrices still baffle me, how in the world did you encode so many behavioural variations into each individual tile with so little material real estate? I was not able to discern any core command processing talisman, nor thought based transmission, so each piece is obviously autonomous."

Ling Qi smiled faintly as she took her seat, and Xuan Shi replied with a string of words that she knew all the individual meanings of, but which together represented only highly technical gibberish. It seemed like, despite a little stutter at the start, things were going well.

Ling Qi kept her own contributions minor for a time, only slipping in to smooth over awkward silences or cover for Xuan Shi when he spaced out for a moment. His new spirit seemed to have a somewhat poor sense of timing compared to Sixiang. But if they were new to the material world, that made sense.

Still, after the tea had been served, and the last subject, a discussion about vehicular formations, reached its natural conclusion, Ling Qi found the chance to ask her own question.
"So, with everything you've said about the operating ranges of Xuan ships, does that mean that its true that Savage Seas has contact with foreigners?" Ling Qi asked. Li Suyin's constructs had provided them each with a little slice of tea cake as well. Ling Qi found it a little too sweet if she was honest.

Xuan Shi glanced her way, and thankfully didn't seem offended by the question. "The ports of the isle have hosted men of foreign shores, it is true. Not all barbarians are eager for battle."

He did sound reflexively defensive though.

"How curious," Li Suyin mused. "However did the Xuan manage to come to arrange such a situation?"

"Our voyagers typically do not seek battle and plunder as some explorers do," Xuan Shi replied. "Thus on occasion, those who would rather trade come to find the Isle."

"Have you ever seen them, foreigners that is?" Ling Qi asked casually, taking a sip of her tea. The blend was a little bitter.

"This one has witnessed the foreign quarter in use a time or two," Xuan Shi said, he sounded wistful. "The folk of Khem are the most numerous, and their men hard to miss, but at times, a dark faced man of Banu comes bearing a hold full of blue adamant. Once even, I saw one who claimed to be of far off Nidalvar, who are said to dwell at the upper peak of the world."

"How startling that must be," Li Suyin said. "And they truly keep imperial peace well enough for the Xuan to allow them into port?"

Xuan Shi frowned. "Strange as they may be, it would be madness to assault the Living Isle."

"What are they like though?" Ling Qi asked. "I mean, it has to be hard for everyone to not offend each other, right? How do the Xuan manage?"

"It is the voyagers who learn such things," Xuan Shi admitted, looking down. He toyed with his plate. "This one's Father did not teach the craft, afore he left on his last journey eight years ago."

Ling Qi frowned as Li Suyin offered an apology. She remembered something else Xuan Shi had said. His parents were supposed to be alive, weren't they? Was that just wishful thinking, or did he actually know?

Well, this wasn't exactly the time to challenge him on it.

"I'm sorry," Ling Qi offered. She considered her situation. Her mission wasn't exactly secret, even if it hadn't necessarily spread to everyone yet. "It's just, recently, I've been commanded by the Duchess to take part in an expedition to speak with some foreigners. We've discovered a group not of the Cloud Tribes, hailing from south of the Wall."

Li Suyin looked shocked, Xuan Shi tipped his hat back, looking at her in surprise.

"I was hoping that you might be able to give me some advice on acquitting myself well," Ling Qi said wryly.

"Such a duty for one so young," Li Suyin murmured. "No, given the heiress, it makes sense…"

"This one has only limited experience," Xuan Shi said slowly. "A few youthful explorations, driven by curiosity."

"Anything would be helpful," Ling Qi said, bowing her head.

Xuan Shi was silent, seemingly listening to his spirit. "Once, this one spoke with a woman of Khem while a cousin haggled with her husband. Tall she was, a mountain in flesh, her face brightly painted, and hair black as ink. This one was in shock at the sight of her, garbed only in a transparent skirt and glittering jewelry that bore all to the sun."

Ling Qi stared in disbelief. Someone just… walking around in a town, basically naked? And they were supposed to be civilized?

"…The Khemite found the child before her's sputtering amusing, and gave this one a candy from their goods," Xuan Shi's expression screwed up. "The taste was of raw meat and blood, with a foreign spice. Another trip, this one encountered a boy of Banu. His Father had business with mine. Even at such a young age, twelve bars of steel, gold, and other metals pierced his features, and bangles of the same hung heavy on his limbs. We spoke not the same tongue, and yet words were unneeded to play a child's game with the strangely bouncing ball in his possession."

"So mundane," Li Suyin mused. "You make it sound as if they are merely oddly dressed people."

"It is more complex. It is possible to give offense without intent, for innocuous gestures to breed unexpected response, but…" Xuan Shi shrugged helplessly.

Ling Qi understood, it struck at the uncomfortable feeling that had been growing in the back of her mind. Rather than imagining a confrontation with a strange spirit, she really should be thinking of them as people.

…Dealing with those was so much harder.

No vote this time, moving into the Zhengui arc next.
[X] No vote this time, moving into the Zhengui arc next.
:V
 
Wasn't there a possibility that we could reach the Formation stage by the intersect competition? With a heavy investment of the free AP not already allotted to our core Arts and the like if we want Bronze 6. I remember reading about this a few months ago, before we learned Water turn would significantly boost our physical.

It'd be such a flex both for both us and the Cai to show up after two and a half years of cultivation fully settled into Formation and with an awakened object spirit. Or even better if she awakens in a trial during the competition giving us a last second ace like at the caldera. It'll probably be the last chance we'll have in years to show the court our combat prowess, and we'd do it by revealing Ling Qi's Liming-.
 
Wasn't there a possibility that we could reach the Formation stage by the intersect competition? With a heavy investment of the free AP not already allotted to our core Arts and the like if we want Bronze 6. I remember reading about this a few months ago, before we learned Water turn would significantly boost our physical.

It'd be such a flex both for both us and the Cai to show up after two and a half years of cultivation fully settled into Formation and with an awakened object spirit. Or even better if she awakens in a trial during the competition giving us a last second ace like at the caldera. It'll probably be the last chance we'll have in years to show the court our combat prowess, and we'd do it by revealing Ling Qi's Liming-.

No

In theory, we could.

In practice, Formation is gated by three Advanced Insights, we only have one.
 
Seeing such a high ranking cultivator be baffled must be a sight to see, I imagine.
Lin Hai's darkly painted eyebrows drew together, and he reached out, tracing his finger through the air a hair's breadth away from her shoulder, faint glimmering threads rose to meet him, and Ling Qi felt her gown grow a fraction tighter, for just a moment.
Dress: I want to remain with Ling Qi! 👗
"It seems your choice to wear her at all times has had some effects on her development," Lin Hai said. "Which are preceding faster than I thought possible. It seems that she is only waiting for your cultivation to reach a sufficient level before achieving her own evolution."

Ling Qi glanced down in surprise. Her dress seemed no different than normal. "What level is that?"

"Hm, Formation Green and Bronze, I would estimate," Lin Hai mused, withdrawing his hand. "Until then, if you need to remove your gown for a lengthy period, it may be best to put her in your Vent chamber, the qi rich air should prevent any mishaps."
Stage 6 in Green Realm. We probably won't see the dress in action in the intersect tournament, sadly. That supposes no sudden luck in rolls. Who knows, we just surprise even ourselves.
Behind her, through a silver wisp, Ling Qi saw Xuan Shi very slowly blink.
Ling Qi using her Silver Wisps steathily to look around her, without anyone else noticing is neat.
It was downright staid really.
What does "staid" mean? STAID | meaning in the Cambridge English Dictionary
According to cambridge dictionary it is an adjective meaning:
serious, boring, and slightly old-fashioned
E.G. In an attempt to change its staid image, the newspaper has created a new section aimed at younger readers.

Conclusion: Ling Qi really likes old-fashioned stuff. She is an old woman at heart 😅
Considering Ling Qi will head will head towards the White Sky people, which still practices old traditions not seen in the Emerald Seas, since the Weilu vanished, Ling Qi should really love their culture! 🥰
"Sect Sister Li's words are too humble. The works performed by your hands are known throughout the Sect," Xuan Shi said. He seemed to pause, listening to something. "You give this one too much esteem."

Did I look like that at first with you? Ling Qi thought absently to Sixiang. She stepped back, and pulled the door shut.

"You could get pretty bad about spacing out," Sixiang replied, amused.
Ling Qis progress over the last two quests in action. Is it not glorious?!
Li Suyin looked shocked, Xuan Shi tipped his hat back, looking at her in surprise.
So, the rumor of the herald of the Cai assuming her duties as a mere Mouthpiece begins to spread far and wide towards foreign peaks.
"Such a duty for one so young," Li Suyin murmured. "No, given the heiress, it makes sense…"
Li Suyins thoughts: "Lady Cai is ambitious and wishes a good life for, which means she will want a good life without unnecessary war and strife for all. For that she begins young and early, to have the most impact, no doubt! What a gracious Lady!" 🤩

How off am I?
 
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No

In theory, we could.

In practice, Formation is gated by three Advanced Insights, we only have one.
Gardening with Zhengui seems to be Yrs giving us the opportunity to solve our Heart Demon which might give us one Advanced Insight. That's turns 10-11, leaving us half a year to get the next. We're at the mercy of Yrs so it's not guaranteed we'll get them but unless there's some narrative purpose I don't see him holding back. With what I know of Yrs I'd say getting three Advanced Insights is still probable.
 
Wasn't there a possibility that we could reach the Formation stage by the intersect competition? With a heavy investment of the free AP not already allotted to our core Arts and the like if we want Bronze 6. I remember reading about this a few months ago, before we learned Water turn would significantly boost our physical.

It'd be such a flex both for both us and the Cai to show up after two and a half years of cultivation fully settled into Formation and with an awakened object spirit. Or even better if she awakens in a trial during the competition giving us a last second ace like at the caldera. It'll probably be the last chance we'll have in years to show the court our combat prowess, and we'd do it by revealing Ling Qi's Liming-.
From what I recall we could, if we both get over the heart demon quickly and get two more advanced, get to either Green 6 or Bronze 6 with very significant investment, making both other arts a bit less complete than otherwise and the other base cultivation lower (E.G, go full in spiritual but get really behind on phys culti). I'm not up to date on math stuff, but I think it wouldn't be possible without significant changes to get both Green 6 and Bronze 6 by tournament.

"Hm, Formation Green and Bronze, I would estimate," Lin Hai mused, withdrawing his hand. "Until then, if you need to remove your gown for a lengthy period, it may be best to put her in your Vent chamber, the qi rich air should prevent any mishaps."
It seems the Dress needs both to awaken. So, Dress Awakening isn't a plausible stretchgoal even with great insight luck for the intersect competition. It would be, however, very doable when it comes to climbing the ranks to 500-525.
 
"It is the voyagers who learn such things," Xuan Shi admitted, looking down. He toyed with his plate. "This ones Father did not teach the craft, afore he left on his last journey eight years ago."
This adds an extra layer to Xuan Shi's taste in literature. His favourite novel series doesn't just look like escapism or fantasy, now. It resembles an attempt to capture something of his absent father's essence, maybe even, with the light romance themes of the series, grasp at the nature of the bond that bore him. And if such things are the lived experience of his parents, then surely as a matter of legacy....

He is so simultaneously heartfelt and timid in his own desires and insecurities it's difficult to not be endeared. Xuan Shi is a good boy.

Mostly unrelated, but I do wonder how his uncles will change their assessment of Ling Qi, if at all, on receiving his news of her involvement in an envoy to a foreign polity.
 
Inspired by the Parade of Bone
Inspired by the Parade of Bone

Shun Yan crouched amongst the fungal growths in the darkness of the caverns poking the various flora that grew in this spirit forsaken place. The Sect mission he had accepted wanted a collection of very specific fungus, for some project or another, but determining which fungus was which was proving very difficult with just his tremor sense to help him determine what was around him in the caverns. If he hadn't dropped his light source scrambling from one of those shambling horrors that lurked around these locations then he might have already been done with the whole thing by now. But no… he had to drop the one thing he needed to see what he was actually gathering.

No matter though, he wasn't just going to give up on a mission he had accepted. He would come back successful even without the light! The task was just going to take a bit longer than usual, that's all.

He shook his head, dispelling his internal pep talk and focused instead on the feelings he was getting from the mushroom in front of him. The vibrations he was creating by tapping his finger against the plant were passing through in the same pattern as the one mushroom he knew was the right one, which made the target of his attention all the more likely to be another of the same species. Which was good. One down, eighteen more to go!

Then he felt something like a silken whisper of spider thread coil around him and the feeling of a thousand eyes dissecting him as if he was a piece of meat on a table. But as soon as the feeling came, it left, leaving him with a pounding heart and sweat matting his hair. Straightening up from his crouch, he grabbed his quarterstaff from it lay by his side and began tapping the ground. Tremors spread out from him, giving him a perspective of everything in a sphere. Nothing out of the ordinary, nothing that could have prompted which could have caused such a sensation.

Still, he had learned of spirits and how some didn't exist quite the same way the rest of the world did. His roommate even had a purely spiritual companion, however that worked. So whatever caused that sensation might not be seen with just a simple sweep of tremor sense. With more sweat beading on his brow, Shun Yan pored a bit of qi into the tremors around him, spreading his qi sense with each rhythmic beat of his quarterstaff. Now each tremor radiating out of him didn't just give a stark picture of what existed in the realm of the physical. The qi which formed all things became apparent as well, stagnant and repugnant as it was down here in these caverns.

At the far end of his sense, something responded. A steady beat of walking feet and an entity that was at least around mid-Cyan. Maybe higher. They were moving in a direction straight towards the Sect's encampment at the mouth of the cavern entrance. And so he dropped the fungus he had been tapping and dashed towards that same encampment. Either whatever was coming was hostile and he needed to get out of here before a fight so far above his head broke out, or a core member of the sect was returning from an expedition deep in the caverns and he would get a chance to witness what they had retrieved.

With each step, Shun Yan got a better sense of what was ahead and the path he needed to take to get back, and with each step, the entity he was racing would get a little further away. Not a lot, but it was clear that whoever was coming back was in no hurry or rush. This meant, as he burst out of the tunnels into the light of the sun and the clear air generated by Sect's encampment, that the guards had plenty of time to prepare for whoever was coming. Crowds of disciples had been clearly shuffled out of the way and any obstacles upon the long winding road leading to the darker depths had been removed. Eagerly, he joined the throng of disciples that normally operated the encampment, waiting with bated breath for the spectacle.

Upon the long road came a palanquin of carved ivory, glittering in the sunlight with silk and gems and metal. Seated upon a couch of carved bone was their senior, a short girl with carefully trimmed blue hair dressed in a conservative pale green dress and a startling white apron speckled with blood and gore. Where her right eye should have been a large faceted emerald stood, glinting with inner light and power. She peered at a single black egg, pulsing unnaturally in the light of the sun, seemingly oblivious to the crowds which had gathered at her arrival. Or simply uncaring.

The rods of the palanquin were held by eight creatures of equal height and stature. All of which were in the early green realm of power, dressed in simple serving robes. And while, in an initial glance, they might appear human, the skulls each creature bore shattered that misconception. Craniums representing a menagerie of animals adorned the creatures, and they were not distinguished for their variety. No, they appeared almost mundane next to the procession following after the palanquin.

A train of creatures proceeded up the road. A variety of amalgamations created from twisted bone and tortured flesh, clothed in the robes of servants all carrying chests in a variety of sizes. Each creature was at the height of the yellow realm, and each seemed to bear a different combination of features. The chests were all carved from bone while decorated with metal and jewels. They emanated a steady feeling of qi and he could see the intricate formations worked into the very structure of the chests.

To the side, almost as if they were the shepherds of this train, were hulking monstrosities. Solidly in the green realm, they were bedecked in crude iron armor and cruel weapons, carrying with them large lanterns carved from ivory and glass. The light from these lanterns seemed pale and shallow compared to the brightness of the sun, but he could sense lingering impurity in the air sizzling and burning under its gaze.

The procession of creatures wound down into the dark, long past his sight, even with tremor sense. The entire train, though, moved in at a sedate pace, with no sense of urgency in their steps. However, the palanquin eventually reached the top of the road, and when it did, the entire train stopped. His senior sister stepped off the lowering palanquin and returned a bow to the commanding officer of this encampment. He could see them exchange some words, but the clamor of his fellow disciples and the distance meant that any attempt at eavesdropping was doomed to fail.

But then, his senior sister snapped her fingers and the procession began again, but this time the amalgamations were moving into buildings and returning empty-handed, only to get back in line and follow the palanquin, which had begun to chart a route out of the encampment. His senior sister looked over the moving procession in a glance, bowed again to the commanding officer, and then simply stepped away, disappearing in a blink of an eye.

Shun Yan slipped back into the caverns before the commanding officer put the milling crowd of disciples to work, knowing that he still had mushrooms to gather. But as he descended into the depths, he played in his mind a vision of commanding hordes of unfeeling, unfearing, unbreaking soldiers. Of leading a charge with powerful constructs at his back clothed in talismans and wielding weapons of power. And in his heart, he resolved to dig further into the formations needed to make this ideal come to reality.

A/N: Another omake for the omake throne @yrsillar! I was inspired, again, by the thought of Li Suyin staying at the sect and just how she might turn out. I hope people enjoy the read!
 
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What really drew her eye was the makeshift patch tied over her friends right eye, and the four jagged scars emerging from beneath it to cross her cheek and neck, which didn't indicate anything good.
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Forge of Destiny(Xianxia Quest) Original - Fantasy

The rest of the week began with Ling Qi’s investigation into what if anything had happened to her friend Li Suyin and the girls room mate. It began rather poorly, with her arrival at their house to find the door broken in and what little was inside ransacked. The shattered inkwells and torn...

So unless it was retconned, it's right eye.
 
Suyin is missing her right eye.
What really drew her eye was the makeshift patch tied over her friends right eye, and the four jagged scars emerging from beneath it to cross her cheek and neck, which didn't indicate anything good.
The reason the heads in her workshop are missing left eyes is because she's growing/crafting a new right eye.
 
The reason the heads in her workshop are missing left eyes is because she's growing/crafting a new right eye.
That doesn't make sense.

Given the eyes are outside of the wax heads and yet the wax heads are missing the left eye, the implication is that those new eyes are being placed in the space the left eye should have gone. Hence why the heads are missing said left eye.

Trying to craft a new right eye and testing them on heads missing their left eye seems silly, especially when you could have the heads missing the right eye instead.

So I'm just going to ask @yrsillar for clarification.

Has there been a retcon, is Li Suyin testing something in the left eye socket for some reason, or should it be the right eye socket?
 
In the dim light of the workshop, more than two dozen eyes stared back at her from the opposite wall.

Suyin did not have any visitors.

They floated in jars, hung suspended between crackling metal prongs, and lay neatly stacked upon trays. Some were human, some were animal, some were even insect, or glittering things of gemstone and precious metal.

Below them was a line of eerily lifelike wax heads, each missing their left eye.
She's implanting them in the wax heads for testing, was the impression I got. Before she implants the eye, the heads have no eyes; then when she puts it in, they have the eye she's testing. She has more eyes than she has heads.
 
She's implanting them in the wax heads for testing, was the impression I got. Before she implants the eye, the heads have no eyes; then when she puts it in, they have the eye she's testing. She has more eyes than she has heads.
Yes, I agree she is testing the eyes, but I disagree that every wax head already has an eye about to be tested. If you are trying to create an accurate replica for testing, why would you completely disregard half of an important feature? Seeing how the talisman would effect a nearby eye seems pretty important, especially since she has one.
 
Yes, I agree she is testing the eyes, but I disagree that every wax head already has an eye about to be tested. If you are trying to create an accurate replica for testing, why would you completely disregard half of an important feature? Seeing how the talisman would effect a nearby eye seems pretty important, especially since she has one.
Agreed. There's a bunch of eyes on the wall in development, and a bunch of heads with an open socket where she can put those eyes for testing (and a not-open socket where an eye already resides). The open socket on the heads should match the side of Li Suyin's injury as that's where she'll place her prototypes for testing.
 
Well as long as the eye still have a meridian in it, it's all good.

...how is losing her eye vs shadow senpai losing an arm different meridian wise?
When Li Suyin lost her eye she likely didn't have a ton of meridians in it, if any at all. Remember meridians are things you make, so Senpai losing his arm also lost all the meridians he forged in his arm. Li Suyin wasn't very far in her path so she might not have lost any meridians.
 
Well as long as the eye still have a meridian in it, it's all good.

...how is losing her eye vs shadow senpai losing an arm different meridian wise?
The ability to heal it.

"I… will the Medicine Hall be able to fix it?" She asked with faint horror.

"Perhaps if it were merely severed," he said shaking his head. "But no, it is gone, devoured flesh and spirit. Even the channels are gone. I will simply have to adjust."

For Li Suyin, if she is willing to foot the bill for such an operation, there is a likelihood that the eye can be healed and restored. Not so for Liao Zhu. His arm is consumed in flesh and spirit and so it will not be coming back for him.
 
Well yeah, the right eye goes into the right socket. If she's creating a replacement eye then she would not need to create a left eye. Of course it's possible that she's going for being able to see through the eye of her constructs.
 
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