Malcador's Struggle and Kesar's New Lessons
Ruoult History Part Seven: Age of War Begins
Ruoult History Part Eight: Age of War Continues
Ruoult History Part Nine: Age of War Ends
A Day in the Life of a Totally Normal Eternal Warden
Our Cousins Did Fall, But We Will Not
Research on the Machine Spirit
I would like to see the narrative effects of the omakes in some such as the Arrival of the MKIIB Power Armour for example
Alright, Omakes. First we have a nice story about Malcador and Kesar bonding. It's a good story and I like it. It describes Malcador and Kesar really well and really highlights Malcador's intellect. One extremely minor gripe is that sadly Kesar isn't getting his armor this year. Vulkan is busy with Lave V and hasn't had the time to complete it yet. So for your reward:
[] +5 on a roll of your choice
[] +10 on the next roll of the GM's choice (I'll use it to reduce casualties in all likelihood)
[] +10 to the next relationship roll with Malcador.
Then, with the next of your Omakes. This is beautiful. Kesar is portrayed fantastically, and the invisitext is used excellently. I wanted to have reduced rewards, but it was so good. So your rewards:
[] A Grave for Every Solider - When a solider dies, they deserve to be respected. Their bodies should be recovered and their souls laid to rest. The cruel reality of the galaxy denies that to many, but the Wardens make every effort to cremate/bury the dead. *+5 to relationship rolls with other Legions (not Primarchs)*
[] Peace-bringer - Where Kesar goes, tired souls feel a moment of peace in his presence. He exudes an aura like all other Primarchs, but unlike them, his aura makes others feel at peace instead of the awe that it normally causes. *+5 to relationship rolls with normal humans*
[] A Monument to the Fallen - The fallen in the nascent Imperium number in the billions. Brave souls who gave everything for a brighter future. They deserve to be honored and celebrated. Let the galaxy know of Cratos Leonidas who died after stepping on an Orkish mine, let the galaxy know of Alexander Serverus who died when his Stormbird was shot down. *Monument Megastructure Unlocked*
Next up is the continued history of the Ruoult. I'm going to combine these into one, so I can offer a better reward for them. It's a very compelling history of the Ruoult that I enjoyed reading. It has a good mix of action and tactics with a brutal death for Zagtrakk. For your rewards:
[] 3 +5s to rolls of your choice
[] +10 to the first 3 Ruoult combat checks as long as they are on your side
[] Next Ork roll at Lave V takes a -15
Following this, I'm going to look at Kirbstomp's Omake so I can look at both of jjffjhjf's Omakes at once. It's a good story about a memorial being constructed for the IInd Primarch. A nice description built upon a good concept. I like it, so for your rewards:
[] +5 to a roll of your choice
[] +15 to next corruption resistance check
[] Valhalla infrastructure upgraded to Early Space tech level
Next is one of our AIs, or possibly a Necron Omake machine. A nice story of a totally normal Eternal Warden.
*Looks at underlined words suspiciously* It's nice. A good description of Scafrir and how some will view peace with Xenos. Also nice how you showed the respect the Wardens have for Kesar. For your rewards:
[] +5 to a roll of your choice
[] +10 to next Legion roll
[] Next 1000 casualties negated
And lastly, we have the machine spirit research. This gives me ideas. GM approves. For your rewards:
[] Unlock Machine Spirit tech tree - Rather high level tree
[] A Third Stirring - ??????
[] +5 to a roll of your choice
Also, you raise a good point thefoolswriter. I have been meaning to do that, but I just kept putting it off. I'll try to do that where feasible.