I think we still need to speak with Qoren first by removing some term that we already are going to do for Dorne like requirement for visit. So the deal seems no too much favor for Dorne. Also we can ask for Dornish squire as a counter balance to our kid squired away by Qoren. In the matter of having more balanced and closer integration too.
 
Honestly? I think the terms are fine. We could argue over some things, but in the grand scheme I think it'll work well enough.

Agree, the only thing i would want to question are the parts abaout the laws and force the hand with the marriage starting EXACTLY at the end of winter, not before.

The first because its a very big deal and can great a big mess in the long run. We can just say that any potential change/compromise in the laws will be settled when Dorne joins the Seven Kingdoms, maybe promosing that some of their laws might become law for the Iron Throne.

The second because a marriage too soon will absolutely mess with Rhaenyra head, and we shouldn't be allowed to be pushed araound. The time of the marriage is one of Rhaenyra major concerns, and she shouldn't budge abaout it.
 
Dornish squire would be seen as a benefit to Dorne and not us though.
Currently It is a dangerous proposition to sent a Kid to Seven Kingdom the alliance would still be young. It is a glorified hostage. Especially as our son is to be sent to skeptical vassal. That is glorified hostage.
 
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- Upon the signing of the marriage agreement by all parties, the Princedom of Dorne and the Iron Throne are to enter into a binding alliance, pledging to come to each other defense and provide aid as needed. This alliance is to last until Rhaenyra Targaryen is crowned as ruling Queen of the Seven Kingdoms, whereupon Prince Qoren or his successor will pledge eternal feality to the Iron Throne.
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Yronwood-Westerling alliance :V
rambunctious vassals in Dorne realizing they can get out of joining by backing a rival claimant would be an absolutely hilarious unintentional outcome
 
How exactly does Dornish law differ from Targarian law?
In general it is more egalitarian though still feudal.
What is sure by canon is that many Dornish practice equal primogeniture, women have more right, and bastards are more well positioned too.

Some speculate that Dornish smallfolk have the right to arms seeing their propensity for rebellion when Dornish nobility already surrendered.
Other indication for Dornish law or at least cultural norms come from Gaemon Palehair edict that is said to be influenced by his Dornish stepmother.
Gaemon Palehair edict said:
  • Girls should henceforth be equal with boys in matters of inheritance.
  • The poor should be given bread and beer in times of famine.
  • Men who lost limbs in war must be fed and housed afterward by whichever lord they had been fighting for when the loss took place.
  • Husbands who beat their wives should themselves be beaten, regardless of the motive for the chastisement.
 
Given it's a peaceful annexation this seems fairly reasonable, I can see why other kingdoms would be displeased but it seems a wise precedent to encourage peaceful submission.

The laws thing could be particularly tricky to navigate, although there could be something to be said about devolving some legal powers, Westeros doesn't exactly have the bureaucratic infrastructure to administrate an especially centralised legal framework for such a large and diverse empire.

The Iron Throne also doesn't have the right to freely appoint and dismiss the Feudal Lords who operate as it's magistrates which further complicated central administration.

It might be a worthwhile project later on to consider what can be 'Kingdom Laws' and what should be reserved as 'Throne Laws'.
 
Some more reactions, underlined things I kinda want to ask Qoren about

- The wedding between Rhaenyra Targaryen and Prince Qoren is to be held in King's Landing, ideally at the start of spring, but no more than than eighteen months after the agreement is signed.
If it's signed T15, and we have until... T21? Or earlier if the Winter is short. I think it's an alright amount of time even with the commitments and stuff, a little squeezy but we can fit enough interactions in there to at least become somewhat familiar with Qoren. Hopefully.

- Prince Qoren requests that his intended bride visits Sunspear at least once before the wedding.
Hell yeah, glad we can! The actual question is, visits on a dragon or the long way by ship? I feel like we need to clarify this - the topic of dragonback commute in general and as applied to this in particular.

- Two handmaidens, twins of house Qorgyle, will be provided to Rhaenyra to assist with the wedding preperations.
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- The Bedding Ceremony will be absent from the wedding.
Hm. Why? Whose request was this?

- Prince Qoren or a vassal of his choosing is to be given a seat on the Small Council upon Rhaenyra's coronation.
I thought I was joking when I quoted Lyonel about this! But hey, cool.

- Hence forward, succession of the Iron Throne will fall to to the eldest legitmate child of the ruling king or queen. If they have no children of legitmate birth, succession will instead fall to their eldest legitmate sibling.
Yesssss!!! Bringing the succession change not only to our own heirs, but to the Iron Throne henceforward! Super happy about this. Also neat how it seems to be bringing some Dornish customs (even though it's actually just our own wish).

- It is asked that Rhaenyra not name any of her children after Aegon the Conqueror or his wives, Visenya and Rhaenys, so as to avoid any awkwardness with the people of Dorne.
How did he know that Visenya was on her list? :p
 
Prince Qoren requests that his intended bride visits Sunspear at least once before the wedding.
Intolerable. Asking us to visit the capitol of Sand Land. I knew this pairing was a bad idea.

is asked that Rhaenyra not name any of her children after Aegon the Conqueror or his wives, Visenya and Rhaenys, so as to avoid any awkwardness with the people of Dorne.
Yeah we need to discuss this with him and express our desire that is a daughter after the third is born, she may be named Visenya. In return, Rhaenyra will take a dornish noble youth as her squire and that dornishmans house will be allowed to ward her fourth child. Argument wise, convince him that it has been more than a century, that the name can be redeemed, that some day the dornish will have to think of Rhaenys and Visenya in more charitable turns.
 
Other indication for Dornish law or at least cultural norms come from Gaemon Palehair edict that is said to be influenced by his Dornish stepmother.

Notably, that list is found in World of Ice and Fire not in the history section, but in the Dorne section. So in context, this is very much presented as an example of Dornish laws.

Overall, it seems Dorne ends up with a more drawn out joining process than canon, but ever so slightly less autonomy. In canon it is Dornish law rules in Dorne, period, which presumably the Prince of Dorne, as Prince of Dorne can (in theory, not withstanding the power of his lords) can change as he sees fit. As well, there is no mention here of Dorne collecting its own taxes separate from royal tax collection, though admittedly that is the only time in any source work royal tax collection has been brought up at all, so the omission may also be due to that.

So, yeah, in a way, it's actually better terms for the Realm than canon. It's fine.

It might be a worthwhile project later on to consider what can be 'Kingdom Laws' and what should be reserved as 'Throne Laws'.

There are no separate laws for separate kingdoms. King Jaehaerys saw to that. There is a unified legal code for all of the Realm... except for Dorne, who as a matter of special autonomy stands outside that law. It is just Dorne. Which in a way is also the problem, as that will raise the ire and envy of others, but well, what can I say. Dorne just is that special :p

(oh and yeah, de facto the Iron Islands of course also ignore that legal code, but officially they are still covered by it)
 
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Intolerable. Asking us to visit the capitol of Sand Land. I knew this pairing was a bad idea.
I hate sand. It's rough, and coarse, and irritating, and it gets everywhere. Do Targaryens get sunburn, I wonder?

Yeah we need to discuss this with him and express our desire that is a daughter after the third is born, she may be named Visenya.
Do we? Jokes aside, we aren't married to that name, and there are so many other beautiful names to choose from. We don't really need to insist on lowkey insulting the Dornish (which naming our child after someone who burned most of their kingdom would be).
 
Do we? Jokes aside, we aren't married to that name, and there are so many other beautiful names to choose from. We don't really need to insist on lowkey insulting the Dornish (which naming our child after someone who burned most of their kingdom would be).
I always side eye Rhaegar that name his Half-Dornish children Rhaenys. Though for Aegon there was excuse of already existing Aegon V that is half-Dayne and ally of Dorne.


(oh and yeah, de facto the Iron Islands of course also ignore that legal code, but officially they are still covered by it)
Making Iron Island more peaceful and prosperous and stamping out the old way can be a worthwhile long term concern especially as Red Dalton reign will coincide with ours.
 
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I always side eye Rhaegar that name his Half-Dornish children Rhaenys. Though for Aegon there was excuse of already existing Aegon V that is half-Dayne and ally of Dorne.
Rhaegar at least had the excuse of living in a time where nobody still alive remembers the time when Dorne was separate from the Realm. We're gonna be managing a far more fraught relationship.
 
You could just give a child two names? One for when in contact with Dorne and one for the rest of the kingdom? Isnt there presidence in history for kings to adopt a new or similar name to be more accepted by vassals?
 
I think we still need to speak with Qoren first by removing some term that we already are going to do for Dorne like requirement for visit.
Why would you want to remove this if it is something we would like to do anyway? That is just giving away free leverage.

As for the "no beeding ceremony", is this Otto interfering, Viserys who is being kind to his child, or the dornish thinking it is a barbaric andal tradition?
 
You could just give a child two names? One for when in contact with Dorne and one for the rest of the kingdom? Isnt there presidence in history for kings to adopt a new or similar name to be more accepted by vassals?
I think that is too complicated for the children. In history it is more taking on a new name not like Code-Switching that change depending on public circumstance. It is more probable to nick name our child Visenya in private life.

Why would you want to remove this if it is something we would like to do anyway? That is just giving away free leverage.
I propose that in the spirit for the treaty look more favorable to us rather than the reality for image purpose to our grumbling vassal.
 
These terms are quite satisfactory; I have basically no issues accepting them as they are.

If we want to speak with Qoren about the Deal at all, we may want to convince him to join us for the progress so that the Realm knows him as well, or have a Dragonpit built in Sunpear so that our second child and its descendants can have their dragons well attended...
- The wedding between Rhaenyra Targaryen and Prince Qoren is to be held in King's Landing, ideally at the start of spring, but no more than eighteen months after the agreement is signed.
Well, considering how weird the seasons work in Westeros, it is pretty reasonable to put a time limit here (imagine if we had a winter of more than 3 years), but since the average for a full season seems to be around 2 years, a 24 month time limit seems more reasonable...
 
I propose that in the spirit for the treaty look more favorable to us rather than the reality for image purpose to our grumbling vassal.
The vassals are not privy to the negotiation meetings, they only see the final terms and actions we take. Removing "come visit me at Sunspear" just to then visit him at Sunspear would look silly to Viserys and Qoren, and achieve zero measurable effect to everyone else.
 
Making Iron Island more peaceful and prosperous and stamping out the old way can be a worthwhile long term concern especially as Red Dalton reign will coincide with ours.
OTOH, with our half-siblings having a Westerlands mother, Dalton is an asset for us for exactly the same reason he was an asset to Rhaenyra in canon.

I always side eye Rhaegar that name his Half-Dornish children Rhaenys.
I mean, he was clearly going for the whole Aegon-Visenya-Rhaenys thing. Didn't have anything to do with Dorne, it was just his unhealthy obsessions with prophecies and visions.

You could just give a child two names? One for when in contact with Dorne and one for the rest of the kingdom? Isnt there presidence in history for kings to adopt a new or similar name to be more accepted by vassals?
As regnal names, yes. But 1) it would just be one regnal name, with symbolism tied to that and 2) that tradition doesn't really seem to exist in Westeros anyway.

As for names, for a boy I would favour Aenar. If we can't choose Aegon, then we'll just have to go further back. Not the founding father of our house of the conquest, but our house's founding father in escaping the Doom to Valyria. If it is a girl, I'd favour Daenys, his daughter whose dragon dreams led to the escape.
 
Honestly I think that agreement is more than just fine, I think that's basically as good as we could ask for. It notably doesn't lock in place where we live most of the year - so we can if we choose spend most of the year in King's Landing and Dragonstone raising our children sans the Dornish heir, and then spend time in Dorne with our husband and that child.

I don't think it gives up anything we didn't intend to give up, and gets us our bloodless conquest
 
I hate sand. It's rough, and coarse, and irritating, and it gets everywhere. Do Targaryens get sunburn, I wonder?


Do we? Jokes aside, we aren't married to that name, and there are so many other beautiful names to choose from. We don't really need to insist on lowkey insulting the Dornish (which naming our child after someone who burned most of their kingdom would be).
The three siblings burned most kingdoms, especially the reach. We have an entire thing about wanting to redeem Visenya's name.
 
The vassals are not privy to the negotiation meetings, they only see the final terms and actions we take. Removing "come visit me at Sunspear" just to then visit him at Sunspear would look silly to Viserys and Qoren, and achieve zero measurable effect to everyone else.
We are currently discussing what we should talk with Qoren and I wanted to persuade him into it being an informal agreement. So it can't be said that we visited him out of obligation in the treaty.
The three siblings burned most kingdoms, especially the reach. We have an entire thing about wanting to redeem Visenya's name.
Aren't they only burned Reach army? The only settlement that were burned are Harrenhall and Dornish ones, iirc.
 
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Do we? Jokes aside, we aren't married to that name, and there are so many other beautiful names to choose from. We don't really need to insist on lowkey insulting the Dornish (which naming our child after someone who burned most of their kingdom would be).
Well, IIRC the full joke was that if our firstborn is a girl we name her Nymeria, and the second child would be named Aegon if it was a boy or Visenya/Rhaenys if it was a girl...

So less of a lowkey insult and more of good natured ribbing...
As for the "no beeding ceremony", is this Otto interfering, Viserys who is being kind to his child, or the dornish thinking it is a barbaric andal tradition?
Or maybe the practical realisation that Rhaenyra is extremely likely to punch the lights out of any drunkard who tries to rip the dress out of her, so better to avoid the diplomatic incident...
 
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