Ferb_Ancos
The one under the table
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Not today at least.
Do you have anything better to add other than your pestering? Seriously, everyone here knows that Flairina's chapter posting rhythm is not like that of some of the monsters that write entire novels worth words in a month, you don't have to keep salting the wound for being impatient.
Framing it as an exception can be demotivating. One of the best ways to encourage updates is to get the author idly thinking about the story. fanfiction is an amazing way to get that to happen, especially open-ended and poorly-characterised fanfiction with interesting background details akin to the stories which themselves provoke the majority of fanfiction such as Worm, Harry Potter, Naruto, Familiar of Zero...
thanks for the adviceFraming it as an exception can be demotivating. One of the best ways to encourage updates is to get the author idly thinking about the story. fanfiction is an amazing way to get that to happen, especially open-ended and poorly-characterised fanfiction with interesting background details akin to the stories which themselves provoke the majority of fanfiction such as Worm, Harry Potter, Naruto, Familiar of Zero...
Like, try writing an omake in which, when Ranma Saotome gets wet, he turns into Ashtaroth, physically and mentally, then reverts from hot water...
Framing it as an exception can be demotivating. One of the best ways to encourage updates is to get the author idly thinking about the story. fanfiction is an amazing way to get that to happen, especially open-ended and poorly-characterised fanfiction with interesting background details akin to the stories which themselves provoke the majority of fanfiction such as Worm, Harry Potter, Naruto, Familiar of Zero...
Like, try writing an omake in which, when Ranma Saotome gets wet, he turns into Ashtaroth, physically and mentally, then reverts from hot water...
Oh, but it will be. Just you wait.I don't think that Ashtaroth's hair is weird enough to be a Yugioh protagonist's.
By that logic, some Ummashtart may be naturally more massive than others.It's probably about how important a Familiar is to the Witch. The Pyotr and Polina's are basically faceless masses of mooks to Charlotte, while the Du Polignacs are treasured friends to Candeloro. I suspect Shemesh would be even higher on that scale.
It's the inferiority complex, I tell you. Why else would Tira's blade need to be bigger and more potent than all others?That's suspiciously specific. Why other weapons, instead of enemies or obstacles?
Which is a shame, because sword and shield compliment each other like meat and potatoes. (Except Sword and Shield, which are still bad.)
Not much of a defense, because all it means is that both of them were going all-out. Experience was the problem, not power, and Sayaka was really unlucky to run headfirst into enemies she can't simply stab to death in a berserker frenzy. I think Ashy already said everything she could have said in Sayaka's defense, really.In Sayaka's defense; Ashy only won because they fought inside of the Canvas. Without the illusions, Sayaka would have won.
Strange how no familiars were mentioned this time. Shemesh may have accidentally'd all of them.It could be Shemesh's doing—perhaps discouraging an impolite familiar.
I disagree. Ashy dragged Hitomi and Tira into the problems she caused with Sayaka and Mami (who both had a good reason to be upset). Even when she's really nice and succeeds at diplomacy and tries really hard to do everything right, mistakes are inevitably made and bad things happen just because she associates with others at all.The problem with Sayaka and Mami is that they were determined to be her enemy before she even met them. She's done just fine with Hitomi and Tira.
Ashy has a very different kind of effectiveness. She has the advantage of being really slippery, because her fighting style is unpredictable and ever-evolving, because she regularly gets more powers and allies and she's smart enough to take advantage of that. Whenever it looks like she's losing, which is often, she can improvise an unexpectedly clever tactic on the spot or just pull out more trump cards! Ashy isn't the kind of enemy you can easily plan for, is what I'm saying. If you fight her like you'd fight a normal witch, you are probably going to have a very bad time, even if she is relatively weak and you think you've got her all figured out. And although sparing Ashy might be a valid solution here, it's also a violation of common sense!When you think about it, her effectiveness up until now is rivaled only by goddamn Walpurgisnacht..
I like the insinuation that there are potentially multiple final bosses, whatever that means. Is the first final boss just not final enough?
The canon one is the one Ashy celebrates. Wouldn't make sense otherwise.I honestly don't know which one of these I'd pick as "canon" if I actually needed to, so... take your pick? 🎉
"Smug is not merely a feeling, it is a way of being. You can summon the essence of smug regardless of your capacity for emotion!" -Flairina, probablyWell, he always LOOKS smug, but by his own words, he has no capacity for emotion. Every show of "feeling", be it happiness/annoyance/smugness/etc, is merely a facade...
According to him, at least. /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\
My forecast for upcoming story arcs in general:Of course, doing too good a job is just likely to get you noticed by Kyubey, who may or may not enlist a team of magical girls to hunt you down so as make sure you don't unbalance the system/eat too many magical eggs before they've had time to hatch. As such, Ashtaroth might want to slow it down a bit...
So... you're saying that she's the Least Magical Witch.Heh, that's certainly true in a fashion — but, did you notice that almost none of that "success" came from effective power/magic usage on Ashtaroth's part? Saar was beaten by virtue of simple physics rather than any sort of magic, Shemesh did most of the work against Sayaka, and Charlotte essentially did ALL the work against Tira and Mami, the latter having remained untouched all battle up until she witched out (something that remained true during the fight against her witch, which finished only when Tira gave her a calm down hug). Ashtaroth managed alright against Charlotte and Candeloro's familiar swarms, and her trick against Homura was rather clever (in her own opinion), but all her magic ended up being good for in most of these cases was defending herself from attacks and stalling for time, before whatever happened to end the battle... happened.
Hence her assertion that she may kind of suck.
Leaving makes Ashy feel deeply uncomfortable, I guess because the barrier is supposed to be self-contained? I'm not sure if that's true of other witches, because it's established that this barrier has special properties, and Alina Gray can just move witches around in her own barriers. I think it's possible that they usually need a barrier, but aren't always fussy about whose barrier it's supposed to be, as long as they can call it home? I dunno.- If Tira is still wearing Candeloro I expect Candeloro be in agonizing pain when Tira leaves the barrier. Ashtaroth very much didn't like the feel of reality, and she was just close to the exit.
She doesn't normally have eyes either, but she ain't blind.
Both of these look correct, as far as I can tell. Personally, I'd have gone with Zaubermädchen, but to each their own.
This meshes well with the idea that becoming a magical girl and then a witch is essentially a literal rebirth. What they become depends on what they feel at the moment of death, and what they end up with is consistent with who they were up to that point.Witches do not change names so far as we're aware, but in appearance, type, nature, and even powers they can change quite a bit, depending on the cause of the magical girl's despair, as well as the circumstances under which they witch out.
Like, try writing an omake in which, when Ranma Saotome gets wet, he turns into Ashtaroth, physically and mentally, then reverts from hot water...
By that logic, some Ummashtart may be naturally more massive than others.
It's the inferiority complex, I tell you. Why else would Tira's blade need to be bigger and more potent than all others?
I disagree. Ashy dragged Hitomi and Tira into the problems she caused with Sayaka and Mami (who both had a good reason to be upset). Even when she's really nice and succeeds at diplomacy and tries really hard to do everything right, mistakes are inevitably made and bad things happen just because she associates with others at all.
This is what it means to be egocentric. Ashtaroth inflicts more harm with open hands than with a clenched fist. /Kreia
Ashy has a very different kind of effectiveness. She has the advantage of being really slippery, because her fighting style is unpredictable and ever-evolving, because she regularly gets more powers and allies and she's smart enough to take advantage of that. Whenever it looks like she's losing, which is often, she can improvise an unexpectedly clever tactic on the spot or just pull out more trump cards! Ashy isn't the kind of enemy you can easily plan for, is what I'm saying. If you fight her like you'd fight a normal witch, you are probably going to have a very bad time, even if she is relatively weak and you think you've got her all figured out. And although sparing Ashy might be a valid solution here, it's also a violation of common sense!
Walpurgisnacht doesn't have any of that, but she does have a mostly invincible forcefield.
I like the insinuation that there are potentially multiple final bosses, whatever that means. Is the first final boss just not final enough?
"Smug is not merely a feeling, it is a way of being. You can summon the essence of smug regardless of your capacity for emotion!" -Flairina, probably
My forecast for upcoming story arcs in general:
Ashy: "I'm friendly. Please ignore me."
Kyubey: "She's too dangerous to be left alive!"
Magical Girls: *confused and conflicted magical girl noises*
Ashy: *finishes breakfast of five dozen eggs, grows to roughly the size of a barge* "That was an accident, I swear."
So what if Ashy doesn't slow down, and disturbs the balance too much? Well... Ashy's curse is the emotional equivalent of a refrigerator. The total entropy must go up, so a fridge can't make stuff inside colder unless other things get hotter elsewhere. See where I'm going with this yet?
Ashy is saving people from despair by incorporating them into her little world, but the despair in the world outside her barrier is going to increase as a direct consequence of that. Because, you know, she did curse the whole world. Magical girls are disappearing from the world, which is bad news for people who know them. And witches are disappearing from the world, which is bad news for magical girls, because then they'd become witches faster, which means a demand for more magical girls, etc. This also means even more people will run into Ashy and add to her power, which makes everything even worse, until there are no more people left to become magical girls and fight witches.
The effects are currently too subtle to be noticed by anyone but Kyubey, but this unbalance can become catastrophic if Ashy keeps this up. This is an Isabeau-level threat, and Kyubey can't fully explain its effects on the ecosystem without telling everyone where witches come from.
Now, how to fix this?
- Kill Ashy. Easier said than done, and becomes more difficult by the day. Looking for an incredibly powerful magical girl somewhere is starting to look like a really good idea. (Isabeau problems require Tart solutions.)
- Diplomacy is a valid option. But then again, it may be hard to convince a witch to go against her well-intentioned and natural inclination of connecting with others and expanding her horizons. Also, Kyubey and magical girls might not feel comfortable with trying.
- Crazy esoteric solutions even I'm still not sure about, like Homura's time travel shenanigans.
Leaving makes Ashy feel deeply uncomfortable, I guess because the barrier is supposed to be self-contained? I'm not sure if that's true of other witches, because it's established that this barrier has special properties, and Alina Gray can just move witches around in her own barriers. I think it's possible that they usually need a barrier, but aren't always fussy about whose barrier it's supposed to be, as long as they can call it home? I dunno.
Both of these look correct, as far as I can tell. Personally, I'd have gone with Zaubermädchen, but to each their own.
...But on second thought, why limit yourself to tricky compound words? Hexenlein works just as well in this context, I think.
This meshes well with the idea that becoming a magical girl and then a witch is essentially a literal rebirth. What they become depends on what they feel at the moment of death, and what they end up with is consistent with who they were up to that point.
You can never have enough final bosses. Which is of course an oxymoron, but no less true for it.
I am aware. Yeesh, should've saved the last chapter's title for the next one... really sorry about the delay. See, I promised myself a couple months ago that I wouldn't work on anything else until I got another chapter of Stand-in up, save MOG, which was supposed to be the low-pressure, who-cares-if-I-continue fic that I could use to destress if Stand-in got too frustrating to work on. MOG, however, kind of ended up being the most popular fic I've ever posted over on Spacebattles, and... yeah, I've been distracted. Much the same way I got distracted from this fic by ABG last year, and am still somewhat distracted by, honestly. Might just have to break that promise to myself given how little progress I've made, but even if I do I'm really not great at balancing my fics, so... well, I apologize. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter for this fic ready soon.
Without even writing anything, you've now reminded me that I have not worked on my Ranma/KLK fic in almost two years. I feel as though this strategy may have backfired. ^^;
A nice threat analysis — I imagine Homura is thinking much the same thing right about now, and in a much less excited manner.
I wouldn't use it because it looks like What you'd call the magical version of a certain sci-fi authorAs for why I wouldn't use Hexenlein... well, if I ever get that far, you'll see.
Well that´s a thought I can now never unthink.I wouldn't use it because it looks like What you'd call the magical version of a certain sci-fi author
No, not that kind of massive. I mean they just literally have more mass (in grief). Giant familiars are a thing in Rebellion, but I don't think Ashy will have much of that unless she keeps overflowing with energy the way she was recently.It's an interesting thought, but given that the Ummashtart have a whole myriad of forms, it'd be difficult to tell what's large from how much Ashtaroth cared about it vs. what's large just because its the natural size of whatever form the Ummashtart has taken. ^^;
Kreia is bitter and kinda evil and I don't always agree with her philosophy. But she is wise in the ways of the Force and quite possibly the most interesting Star Wars character ever, and her idea that poorly thought out good intentions might only lead to more suffering certainly rings true here.
Yeah, she is that tough. But when she can be hurt anyway, she can bring out this. It escalates the fight to unstoppable force/immovable object levels, I guess? It even makes her look like a meteor, which really works with the whole natural disaster theme she's going with.I don't think she even has a forcefield; she's just that tough from absorbing/having been made from however many witches she's composed of.
I think the "become human again" plan is already covered under crazy esoteric solutions that may or may not work.There is a potential solution you're missing. One which Ashtaroth is likely to become concerned about quite soon, story-wise.
For Ashy, I guessed as much. (She felt like she was turning inside-out, IIRC.) Leaving the barrier in person sounds like one of those Absolutely Antithetical Actions she simply can't or mustn't do. Like fully submerging in Tome or unsubsuming anything.It's not just uncomfortable, it actively hurts her. But more on that later.
Homura herself was very nearly eaten, and she knew that something happened to Sayaka's soul gem. I think she's got it more or less figured out.
That's a common diminutive suffix you're looking at; no relation to Heinlein.I wouldn't use it because it looks like What you'd call the magical version of a certain sci-fi author
I don't think she even has a forcefield; she's just that tough from absorbing/having been made from however many witches she's composed of. Or maybe because there's some secret to fighting her that no one figured out despite the centuries she's been around for, but that doesn't seem terribly likely given how infamous she seems to be, and also how much documentation of her Homura seems to have randomly floating around her house.
Welp, since I can comment now, here's my big question. How would Novella handle subsuming a Doppel? For this, let's use Iroha and Giovanna as examples.
1. Iroha and the Doppel ver. of Giovanna get subsumed, we get part of Iroha's page and part of Giovanna's Witch page. (Basically we just ripped Iroha's soul apart and it is now in two separate locations in Ashy, she ain't leaving Novella anytime soon)
2. Same scenario, when Giovanna enters Novella the Grief Seed event occurs, the Doppel steals enough Grief from Ashy that the Impurities start leaking from the body onto Iroha's Soul Gem, she Witches out, we now have another casualty on our hands, and Iroha's teammates are going to make sure we die (yay for Ashy I guess)
3. We end up with a glitchy mess of a page (basically the page looks like a fusion of a Puella Magi and Witch profile) and Novella refuses to unsubsume Iroha as it now considers her a Witch.
4. Doppel Giovanna has a different page than the Witch Giovanna, whole situation avoided.
These are all wild guesses as well. The whole situation might be even more ridiculous or less ridiculous than this.
Welp, as I await for the mods to give my snippet thingy their approval, here's another question. If Suzune were to somehow kill Ashy, what would she get from it? Ashy's old shapeshifting powers, shatterwords, the ability to subsume things? It's quite confusing and I don't fully understand it.
Don't worry about it! Theres always an easy way to get the whole soul back together!Wait, I just realized something while I was rereading the part where Ashtaroth gets sent back to her spawn point. Absorbing part of Homura's stacking potential is a side of effect of Ashtaroth stealing a chunk of her soul, as proven with Homura's Novella entry.
Ashtaroth literally pulled off what the Wraiths did by accident in the Wraith Arc, and unlike that time, completely made that potential irrevocably her own. Homura's lost potential is now Ashtaroth's, which means it can't mastermind rejoining the greater whole.
What are the chances that the moment Homura checked her Soul Gem after waking back in the hospital, and found out that she couldn't summon her shield? Or, after 10 days into a seemingly normal reset, loses the ability to summon her shield when Ashtaroth came back?
RIP Madoka Canon.
Wait, I just realized something while I was rereading the part where Ashtaroth gets sent back to her spawn point. Absorbing part of Homura's stacking potential is a side of effect of Ashtaroth stealing a chunk of her soul, as proven with Homura's Novella entry.
Ashtaroth literally pulled off what the Wraiths did by accident in the Wraith Arc, and unlike that time, completely made that potential irrevocably her own. Homura's lost potential is now Ashtaroth's, which means it can't mastermind rejoining t mihe greater whole.
What are the chances that the moment Homura checked her Soul Gem after waking back in the hospital, and found out that she couldn't summon her shield? Or, after 10 days into a seemingly normal reset, loses the ability to summon her shield when Ashtaroth came back?
RIP Madoka Canon.