Well, that could be worse, at least Novella is not the analogue closest to her hands, otherwise everyone in there would be in a perpetual state of handholding with Ashy until she got them out of the Novella.
*gasp* Hand holding?! Lap sitting?! Such
impropriety! This cannot stand!
(There are several dirtier jokes/connections one could easily make here, but my sense of dignity and natural embarrassment both refuse to allow me to make them.)
Ashtaroth: "Do the math again, you're not taking into account the size of my ego, nor Candeloro's clinginess coefficient."
Hey, be fair, Ashtaroth's ego isn't actually that big!... well, at least in the sense of thinking overly highly about oneself. Jury is still out on to what degree the word's other potential definitions might apply.
And suddenly, everyone was kidnapped by QB and deposited in Asunaro.
Problem solved, right?
I mean... yes? In solving the one problem however, you have created roughly 50 more on both a textual and metatextual level, so perhaps that's not the best solution. ^^;
Walpurgisnacht's nature is Helplessness, which doesn't really work with her not needing a Labyrinth. Her type is being the stage-constructing witch, which... Huh, that could work. Would even fit her entrance procession and being a stage-constructor but not the "star" of the show.
The Walpurgisnacht we see in the anime isn't the actual Witch but her Labyrinth, turned into a giant stage prop. Kind of like how a puppeteer controls the puppet that is the star of the play.
Interesting thought... argh, would be nice if I could discuss the subject of my thoughts on Walpurgisnacht in more depth without being tempted to give out spoilers for later...
(My current codenames for her familiars are "Der Zirkus" and "Magischmädchen", by the by.)
and now I am trying not to think about what sort of girl would produce a sewer labyrinth
Maybe some kid who was afraid of dark, damp places, and had a wish related to such?
Nah, it's generally more symbolic than that. My thought would be something along the lines of a magical girl who'd previously been bullied by others for a long time, called stuff like "scum", "cockroach", and "sewer rat" over and over by her tormentors. The wish she makes is probably something about becoming popular and never being called those things again, or becoming supernaturally attractive, or something along those lines — but either way, she eventually ends up turning into the same kind of person she hated, looking down upon others and tormenting them in turn. Finally realizing this may be what eventually causes the witch out.
The witch herself I imagine would be an "ironic hell" style one in the same sort of vein as
Shin. Her labyrinth ends up being tied to her resentment and rage over what people made her feel like before she made her wish, as well as her self-loathing over her own actions, and thus she literally becomes exactly what she was once accused of being, while existing in the same sort of place one would expect a repulsive creature like that to live. Said witch would probably be quite grotesque, likely with some sort of ridiculously insufficient "pretty" feature slapped on somewhere, and have a nature along the lines of "Glamor" for extra irony points. Alternatively, the witch herself could be quite beautiful on the outside, but become extremely ugly when attacking or "revealing" herself. Call her, say, Cady? Maybe something more historical/obscure, but in the same rough vein...
...why did I spend all this time plotting out characteristics and backstory for a witch/magical girl I will almost certainly never use? 🤔
Ashtaroth is in Alpha? I suppose it makes sense. Mob types are fairly diverse, but only one or two per area is not a good design choice. Plus there's only two intractable NPCs! And the wondering boss monster is too random.
Really, the main thing this game has going for it is the visuals, which is an odd thing to say about a text adventure.
Yeah, the current version is decent, but it's nowhere near the promised full game yet. Supposedly we're still waiting on a massive expansion to the number of dungeons, many more characters and locations to visit, way more mob types with complex behavior and interactions between themselves, shifting environmental factors, and possibly even another stage for the current final boss. Hope it gets updates soon.
(Also, if that was referring to my art, then thank you!
If i can just get this fic moving a little faster, perhaps there will be more of that soon.)
The Pleiades could be convinced easy, they might even go after her on their own. Her rationality and subsumption abilities would be of great interest to them. There's a whole gamut of experiments and tests she would be very useful for them in, especially when combined Nico's power, as you pointed out. Like, just off the top of my head, they make a new Michiru clone, have Ash subsum it, pop it back out, and have Nico work her magic to separate them again, with the hope being that she'd be completely stable. Now that might not work, but what about making an Ashtaroth clone along with a Michiru clone, using the fromer to deal with the range issue imposed on the later. There's a great deal they could do with her.
She'd be of great interest to them, yes... but most likely, as an imprisoned test subject. One needs look no further than The Freezer to figure out that this is not a group that's likely to be all too keen on negotiating, sapient witch or not.
(The Magius over in Kamihama would probably react similarly come to think of it, and for similar reasons. Lots of rather uncompromising groups in the PMMM expanded universe.)
Threadmarked!
[x] Get cable goddammit. It's the 21st century, it's about time we got some goddamn internet in here.
Ashtaroth:
<Oh yeah, sure, I'll just go pop in with the local Witch of Wifi and set up a time for installation. Then we can access the internet any time we want via our nonexistent laptops! Great idea; no issues with that plan at all!>
🥳What would Ashtaroth (New Year version) look like? Not that it will ever come into play.
Possibility 1 (American version): Instead of Shatterwords, Novella now produces massive flurries of colorful razor sharp confetti, made of the shredded remnants of people's written hopes and dreams for the coming year. Her branches and ribbons are made up in the style of a New Year's Tree, and she has the
Time's Square Ball perched atop her stalk. When this ball drops, it emits a wave of concussive force accompanied by an ear-splitting burst of screaming cheers, signifying that a new era of suffering has begun.
Possibility 2 (Japanese version): Her Shatterwords are now exclusively composed of words from Japanese traditional new year's poetry, while her ribbons are decorated with images similar to those seen on
pochibukuro. Tome is replaced by a Buddhist ringing bell and its various accoutrements. Once the bell has rung 108 times, the sins of all in its range are absorbed by Ashtaroth, as she cleanses their grief and impurity by taking all of it upon herself... but with these sins come their owners' souls, for they are part and parcel to each one.
I honestly don't know which one of these I'd pick as "canon" if I actually needed to, so... take your pick? 🎉
I don't think that Ashtaroth's hair is weird enough to be a Yugioh protagonist's.
Yeah, she needs at least one more hair color and a lot more spikes. Can't be a Yugioh protagonist unless your hair looks like it requires at least two bottles of gel a day to keep intact!
That's suspiciously specific. Why other weapons, instead of enemies or obstacles?
I think that it relates to a paintbrush being mightier than any mere sword.
That would be a weird meta-joke for Tira to be associated with, especially because that refers in general to pens and the written word. I guess kanji could count as painted instead of being written?
The original name was literally just "Mightier", so yeah, Aunty has the right of it — remember that Tira's weapon is a "penbrush", not just a paintbrush. While unrelated to the actual act of writing, it is indeed tied to Tira's larger themes.
A witch is only doing a good job when everyone is miserable and the QB is smug. Someone go check if the Q-
pfft I'm just kidding he is always smug.
Well, he always LOOKS smug, but by his own words, he has no capacity for emotion. Every show of "feeling", be it happiness/annoyance/smugness/etc, is merely a facade...
According to him, at least. /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\
I worry that Homura might be edgier than us. I know that her witch is...
*Homulily, with the top half of her head sloughing off and her hands in a stockade, marching off to her own execution in an endless procession*
Ashtaroth:
<Could you please stop being emo for like, five minutes? This is entirely too depressing, even for a witch.>
(Checking whether this joke had already been made, I found that Arial has only been used once, for the corner brackets in Confrontation 10. I suspect that this was a consequence of pasting them in without matching fonts, as corner brackets elsewhere are not Arial.)
Argh, figures. The formatting for this fic varies a lot, so there's probably a few other issues like that here and there. Hell, I still need to go through Confrontation's earlier chapters and replace all the hyphens with em dashes... on both versions of this fic... which is part of why I didn't want to start using them in the first place...
There's a few possibilities. It could be Homura's fault. It could be from Tira's corrosive ink—there were plenty of constructs that got splashed in the fight. It could be a stray shot from Mami's laser cannon. It could be Shemesh's doing—perhaps discouraging an impolite familiar. Most likely, it's a result of the grief we pushed off to an unknown destination. It would make sense, if that resulted in Shemesh's re-formation—young planets tend be very hot.
I like these occasional reminders that Ashtaroth shares their senses.
Heh, there should probably be more of them to be perfectly honest. I'm sort of implicitly excusing it with the fact that Ashtaroth still needs to learn to divide her attention better, and so misses internal things that she might not have otherwise, but sometimes it's just
me failing to divide my attention enough to add lines in this regard when they'd be appropriate. ^^;
She's got a decent kit, but it takes some practice to use it well, and she's only two days old.
She really IS doing pretty well for her age. Most young adults flounder once they're forced into the witching world, and Ashtaroth technically is too, but she's doing it a lot more effectively than most other newbies!
Of course, doing too good a job is just likely to get you noticed by Kyubey, who may or may not enlist a team of magical girls to hunt you down so as make sure you don't unbalance the system/eat too many magical eggs before they've had time to hatch. As such, Ashtaroth
might want to slow it down a bit...
They don't, any more than you did? You wanted to do stuff, and got knowledge of how to do it; that requires no intelligence. Of course, that's an insufficient explanation, since witches sometimes act in ways seemingly informed by knowledge of their abilities. But we already know that witchstincts can do pretty complex things, from that big illusion they made for Sayaka.
Yeah, I admit I didn't phrase this part perfectly. What I inteded to say was that magical girls seem to have "instinctive" use of their abilities, in the sense that the knowledge is just ingrained in them as soon as they get it. They know how to use their magic, and they know that they know that, without needing to question themselves or practice (though they can certainly find new/better applications for it). One would assume the same to be true for witches, so it's strange that Ashtaroth appears to have an odd intermediate step where she doesn't
realize she has certain information or skills until she bothers to think about/ask herself about them, or until something else brings them to her attention. I may go back and edit that bit to make it slightly clearer.
No, she's done quite a bit of soul-sucking.
Indeed, she is the mosquito of the Madoka Magica-verse.
Yeah, we are a pretty terrible witch. We needed to be saved by Charlotte when Tira and Mami teamed up against us, having only been able to survive a couple of Tiro Finales... We probably won't be able to outwit and surprise Homura again after she managed to just barely escape. Sayaka really didn't do badly either. She almost certainly would have won if she actually knew anything about grief expenditure and budgeting and that exhausting it is about as much of a failure condition to a fight as dying is. Lacking a piece of vital information about her own power, when she could reasonably expect to have been informed of that level of detail by either of her two apparently-trustworthy sources of Mami and Ink Baiter really shouldn't be counted against her.
When you think about it, her effectiveness up until now is rivaled only by fucking Walpurgisnacht..
Heh, that's certainly true in a fashion — but, did you notice that almost none of that "success" came from effective power/magic usage on Ashtaroth's part? Saar was beaten by virtue of simple physics rather than any sort of magic, Shemesh did most of the work against Sayaka, and Charlotte essentially did ALL the work against Tira and Mami, the latter having remained untouched all battle up until she witched out (something that remained true during the fight against her witch, which finished only when Tira gave her a calm down hug). Ashtaroth managed alright against Charlotte and Candeloro's familiar swarms, and her trick against Homura was rather clever (in her own opinion), but all her magic ended up being good for in most of these cases was defending herself from attacks and stalling for time, before whatever happened to end the battle... happened.
Hence her assertion that she may kind of suck.