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Seeing Red [Naruto]

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[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Oh hell yes.

As for Gaara...

I dunno, actually. We should let up on the self-sacrifice, though, unless we want Sasuke to explode in our face about it.
 
Yog said:
And so, Gaara is also non-canon. Nice. Also, I'm missing something: what hostages? And, a fourth option: gather all shinobi in the forest remaining, rest for a day, then attack Gaara's team as a united force. I am fairly sure that between all of leaf shinobi, and their summons and their allies, Sand team could be defeated.

[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.
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I don't feel comfortable staying out here too long or trying to negotiate a multi-village alliance.

As is, we don't need to beat Gaara we just need to get past him.

As for the non-canonocity...maybe. Really, it makes sense when you think about it that Gaara would take advantage of the opportunity to kill anyone and everyone he wants without restrictions, as well as the fact they have to go to the tower.
 
Tekomandor said:
The orange barrier dissolved around her, flakes of chakra floating away like ash.
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Tekomandor said:
"How - how are you even alive, sis?!" Naruto asked, slowly releasing her from his hug.
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"It was only some kind of clone - but he still basically let me go," Hisana replied, sheathing her sword
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Tekomandor said:
"Yep, they're a couple of black-ops types the village assigned to do me in 'cause they had 'concerns for my loyalty'. Of course, had they not killed my mother out of greed and essentially straight up told me that they were going to do the same to me, I might be a bit more loyal. So since I have both scrolls, and my teammates are lying unconscious just a bit ahead, plus Hiroyuki's Earth scroll to your heaven, whatdya say we just head on straight to the tower as one big happy family?" Karin finished.
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I'll deal with these idiots myself," Hisana said,
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Tekomandor said:
"Heh, a little girl too fuckin' scared to use her real sword! Just what we needed," snarled one of the trio, though not Kin as it was a man's voice.
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Tekomandor said:
Shunshin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shunshin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
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[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[X] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[X] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Gotta go fast
 
[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.

I am pushing for the enhanced defense option myself. One is pure speed and movement. The next is offense and the last is defense.
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.
 
So, hypothetically, what's stopping us from buggering around Gaara instead of fighting him?

Distract him with trying to catch our absurdly fast shadow clone, and just slip in behind him while he's distracted, that sort of thing?
 
[X] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[X] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
Yog said:
And so, Gaara is also non-canon.
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I'm not so sure. Team Seven has pretty much blitzed the exam so far. Orochimaru hit us all of ten minutes in, I highly doubt we fought him for more then twenty minutes, and then we ran to the tower. Odds are we are inside the four(?) hours it took the Sand Siblings to retrieve a scroll and enter the tower. They are probably just waiting for some team of schmucks to show up so they can murderize them for their scroll/s.
 
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-but before she could stop speaking Karin interrupted her.

"My cousin when he gets a little angry? But yeah, that's a fucking demon host camping the tower. What'do we do, boss?" Karin said.
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... Yeah, okay, the odds of Karin being a "SI", or having access to "SI information", just went up a lot.
 
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We have an extra scroll, I believe. The issue is Gaara has his murderlust on. The best plan would be to genjutsu our way past him. He displayed no special resistance to genjutsu that I know about. Also, his ability to engage fliers is limited if he's not stronger than he was as a child in canon. Now may be time for a rideable raven summon. Another plan is to blitz him as a group. We have an absurd number of ways to disrupt them including Uzumaki chains which should go right through his sand.
 
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[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Shunshin time! :D
 
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Vindictus said:
So, hypothetically, what's stopping us from buggering around Gaara instead of fighting him?

Distract him with trying to catch our absurdly fast shadow clone, and just slip in behind him while he's distracted, that sort of thing?
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Well, if he has a brain then he'll know that people have to come past him eventually so there's no point in chasing someone away from his post.
 
[X] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
-[X] Use shadow clones to keep him occupied while you sneak by with genjutsu

[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
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[X] Have Naruto make 6 clones and Henge them to look like the group. Instruct them to head in that direction and stall while the group circles around.
 
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Gaara's sand needs to reach the target. Lee was able to evade it using pure physical speed even before he used the Gates.

The single best defense AND offense is being too fast for your enemy to either attack or defend against you. That applies even more to Gaara than to most. Our normal speed is Kage-level. Shunshin can make even a Genin vanish from sight. Shunshin Mastery allows us to use Shunshin in combat, and removes the straight-line-only restriction. Do the math.

The other two options are basically dodging Kunai/Shuriken really well, and the inferior version of Tsubame Gaeshi(2 cuts instead of 3). Far too specific, in my opinion. Only useable in particular scenarios. Shunshin Mastery is useable all the time, and it's kinda hard for your enemy to throw projectiles at you when you can effectively pull a Bankai Ichigo and move fast enough to make it look like there's twenty of you. Tsubame Gaeshi 1.0a will only work once you reach your target, and it is by no means undodgeable.

So, basically, Shunshin Mastery is the single best option here, I think, and it should aid us greatly against Gaara.
 
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Akasha said:
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Shushin mastery. This trait allows the user far greater control over the Shushin, making it a viable move in combat. Specifically, straight lines are no longer a limiting factor.

Gaara's sand needs to reach the target. Lee was able to evade it usig pure physical speed even before he used the Gates.

The single best defense AND offense is being too fast for your enemy to either attack or defend against you. That applies even more to Gaara than to most. Our normal speed is Kage-level. Shunshin can make even a Genin vanish from sight.Shunshin Mastery allows us to use Shunshin in combat, and removes the straight-line-only restriction.

Shunshin Mastery is the single best option here, I think, and it should aid us greatly against Gaara.

The other two options is basically dodging Kunai/Shuriken really well, and inferior version of Tsubame Gaeshi(2 cuts instead of 3). Far too specific, in my opinion. Only usable in particular scenarios. Shunshin Mastery is usable all the time, and it's kinda hard for your enemy to throw projectiles at you when you can effectively pull a Bankai Ichigo and move fast enough to make it look like there's twenty of you. Tsubame Gaeshi 1.0a will only work once you reach your target, and it is by no means undodgeable.
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This ^
 
[x] It should be easy enough to occupy his attention for a short while. This will be safer to the hostages, but harder on you.
[x] Dance Between Raindrops. This trait allow the user to more effectively evade the aim of their enemy, their speed confusing the targeting ability of their opponents even further.
 
Akasha said:
Shunshin Mastery is the single best option here
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I completely agree. I do think it's downside, Shunshin costs 0.3 Chakra at our control level per use, does need nothing though. That isn't much but it will increase Hisana's average Chakra expenditure per second.

Of course given how useful it is odds are we'll actually spend less Chakra per battle since the massive speed boost should see a notably decrease in battle duration.
 
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