Hey, dood.

Read your Ghost Rider crossover.

Too much expospeak.
First, this isn't the place for that. For future reference, either leave a message on my profile, or get me in a PM.

Second, that stops being a thing after the first or second chapter.

Third, that was started five years ago. I wasn't nearly as good at anything back then, writing-wise.
 
Update 108 - The Memory Remains, pt 5
The old man's acting like the battle's over, so you'll trust his judgment. Better check and see how everyone's doing.

Giving yourself a quick once-over... your clothes are shredded, you're covered in slowly-but-visibly-healing wounds, and your fists are coated with as much of your blood as Her Ladyship's. You're still standing for the moment, but there's no telling how long you have until the adrenaline wears off and you collapse.

Glancing over at Tsukune and Ruby.... well, you don't see any blood or carnage in that direction and it seems like they're having a discussion, so it's probably fine.

Mizore appears to have passed out. She's covered in severe-looking burns, but still breathing. As the old man said before, she needs medical attention badly.

Same goes for Kurumu, who's still conscious, but crying ineffectually as she cradles her throat in pain. Getting a brief look between her hands, it looks like her throat's been pretty badly burned, but at least you can't see a gaping hole or anything.

Moka.... is still passed out from when Akasha poked her forehead.

Yukari's anxiously looking up at you as she holds the phone, trying to say something. Her lips are moving, but nothing's coming ou-
Senpai? You really shouldn't be standing, you need to lie down so I can apply some first aid.
Pain starts flooding through your entire body, and you're already falling over as the world starts to spin...
Jotaro?! JOTARO!
[]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
[]Actually, taking a little nap doesn't sound too bad... You've taken a hell of a beating this time. Help is on the way, so you should take your time and recover.
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
Yare Yare Daze. Being a friend is such a pain.
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
We need to「Stand Proud」! If the strongest person falls morale will drop!(being a Joestar trumps being a vampire, and gramps is clearly out of his prime compared to us)
 
[X] Actually, taking a little nap doesn't sound too bad... You've taken a hell of a beating this time. Help is on the way, so you should take your time and recover.

Trust our friends.
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!

Yeah, we don't want Inner Moka giving us vampire blood again.
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!

If only at least one of them had learned to use the ripple to heal others.
 
[x]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
 
shouldn't that be
[]You have to try and stay awake! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!

I mean in the moment where we make that decision we are still awake and all, you know

Yeah, we don't want Inner Moka giving us vampire blood again

for that reason/ event I'm half-tempted to take the other option, but no we shall always stand tall and proud no matter how bad our injuries are, protecting our friends and our warrior pride like a true man

[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!

come on jotaro, it's only a flesh wound :V
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
Jonathan would be proud.
 
[X]You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!

Pft. Like these kinds of scratches could bring down a JoJo.
 
[X] You have to try and wake up! You can't rest until you know that everyone else is going to be okay!
 
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