I like it. Tsukune's reaction is pretty understandable, and let's be honest, in real life all this stuff about "destined to be together forever" and "I'll die without you" would be a huge red flag. I get that he likes Kurumu - maybe even loves her, who knows - but aren't they, like, fifteen? Being secretly scared shitless is definitely the mature thing to do here.
 
Okay finally had a chance to read this.

Honestly this is a good reaction and one that seems to be the " human standard" reaction.

Though Tsukune steped on a landmine reasonably here by only responding to her and not Moka
 
Okay finally had a chance to read this.

Honestly this is a good reaction and one that seems to be the " human standard" reaction.

Though Tsukune steped on a landmine reasonably here by only responding to her and not Moka
His ability to walk and chew gum deal with two love interests at the same time still needs more development (currently at Rank D), but he is getting to that.
 
Well, we all know that despite Kurumu wanting to find her soulmate and bring more children to preserve her race (as does Mizore), it was obvious that she was scared shitless of the thought even in the manga, and not surprising because she is 15 years old, something she hides well by showing off her sexuality. (Well, being 15 didn't stop the idiots in School Days from fucking each other's brains out before one stabbing the other to death. I say idiots because that pair of teens were driven into hormone induced idiocy)

Also to be fair, either Moka or Kurumu would be perfect for Tsukune, and we saw what happened when three people in a love triangle didn't want to hurt each other's feelings, yet still wanted some sort of a romantic relationship.
 
Might still be talking about School Days there; I've never touched it, but I'm still familiar enough with it to know about NICE BOAT.

That said, I don't really see either of those two going that way if they get jealous.
 
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Bad news is, Dad's back in the hospital again for low oxygen levels. Dunno for how long.

Good news is, apparently worrying myself sick is great for writing productivity, because the next post is like 85-ish% complete.
 
ATE 1, part 5
"So what about me, Tsukune? Don't I mean anything to you? Or am I just a third wheel now?"

Kurumu almost snapped at Moka over the question, clearly meant as it was to hurt Tsukune, but she stopped herself before she could even open her mouth. It's just like when I failed to seduce Tsukune away from her way back when. I felt rejected, and I flipped out...

Guilt stabbed into Kurumu's heart, and then did so again as she realized the painful irony of the current situation compared with back then. If the me from back then could see this, she'd be laughing her ass off...

Taking hold of Moka's chin, Kurumu turned the other girl to look her square in the eye. With too many conflicting feelings to reconcile, the succubus settled on a single thought: I'm so glad I'm not that person anymore.

"For what it's worth," the succubus began without thinking, "I don't think you're anything like a third wheel. You're important to me."

Letting out a sigh, Kurumu released the blushing Moka and turned back to look at Tsukune. "But, we both need to hear what Tsukune has to say about that."

Closing his own eyes, Tsukune nodded. "Yeah."

After a moment to gather his determination, Tsukune opened his eyes, causing both girls to flinch back with the force of his sincerity. "The truth is, Moka... I've been attracted to you ever since the moment you crashed into me, on that first day we met. Sure, most of it was probably just hormones at first, along with the fact you running me over made it the first time I was ever that close to a girl who wasn't blood-related to me, but even so, everything about you was -- is just amazing to me."

Moka's face was beginning to redden, but Tsukune continued on, while Kurumu listened intently.

"And okay, so the whole... vampire thing was a major shock at first, but the reason I even decided to stay at Youkai Academy at all was because I wanted to be close to you. So if it weren't for you, Moka, I wouldn't have any of the friendships I do now. Even if I'm at risk of getting killed every day in this place, I really feel like every part of my life is better than it used to be, and in one way or another it's all because you're in it. And... I can't thank you enough for that."

Moka blinked, tears beginning to form in the corners of her eyes. "I really mean... that much to you, Tsukune?"

The boy nodded. "You do."

Closing his eyes with a sigh, he continued, "Honestly... there've been a lot of times I thought of trying to be your boyfriend, and there were a lot of times I thought you might have felt the same way. Like we'd be looking into each other's eyes, and the world starts to melt away except for the two of us, and I start wondering if you might be about to..."

Tsukune trailed off, but everyone knew what he was talking about.

"And then she sucks your blood instead," Kurumu concluded.

Moka let out a weak chuckle. "That... does happen pretty frequently," she admitted.

"So because of that," Tsukune continued, "even if I wanted to try and take our relationship to the next level, I could never really figure out what your feelings about it would be...."

A moment later, he hung his head in shame. "And I'm sorry that I was never brave enough to try and talk with you about it."

The trio shared a moment of calm... before Kurumu asked the question they all knew would be coming. Her voice was quiet, and her tone steady, while her expression was anything but. "So if you've thought about what it would be like to be Moka's boyfriend the whole time you've known her, does that mean you care more about Moka than me?"

There was no anger in Kurumu's expression. And if there had been, it might've hurt Tsukune less to see it than the sheer sadness he got instead, making him wince. "It's hard to put it into words, but... my feelings about both of you are different, even if they're both very strong. When I think about you, Moka, I want to be a better person. A cooler, more capable guy worthy of earning your attention. But because you're so smart and talented at everything, I feel like it's an impossible gap I'll never be able to bridge. But then when I think about you, Kurumu, because of your energy, passion, and can-do attitude, I start to feel some of that too. It's like... like I have a lot more potential that I can tap into, almost within my reach.... but just being some dull average kid like I am, there's so much room for improvement that I get lost just trying to find a place to start."

Kurumu blinked, then, a look of perfect comprehension blooming on her face. "So you're saying that I give you strength," she began, "but you lack direction. Your feelings about Moka give you ambition, but not the power to fulfill them."

Closing her eyes and beginning to smile, she nodded. "I get it now. It's just like I'd still be a stuck up bitch with no friends if not for the two of you, or how the two of you would dance around each other til eternity without me to move things along. The three of us work best as a trio."

Moka head whipped around to look at Kurumu in shock, with the unintended effect of slapping the other girl in the face with some of her hair. "You're not seriously saying --?"

The bluenette coughed and sputtered as she freed herself from the accidental hair attack, before nodding. "I'm saying that since I'm Tsukune's girlfriend, I don't mind if the two of you pursue a relationship alongside the one we have now."

Tsukune, for his part, was also incredulous. "You're... you're joking, right? I mean, I'd be lying if I said a part of me didn't really like the sound of that, but you can't actually be okay with something like that."

"I can and I am," Kurumu replied matter-of-factly. "You said it yourself, Tsukune -- I give you strength, but you need Moka to inspire you to use it. And even if it hurts me a little to hear that, at the same time I feel... complete, now. I just know somehow that the three of us, together, is right. That's how it was meant to be."

Moka narrowed her eyes in suspicion, her voice starting to hitch. "What about your 'Mate of Fate' thing, huh?"

Kurumu shrugged. "Even if Tsukune is my one and only man of destiny, if sharing with you makes him happier than keeping him to myself, then I need to adjust for that. And even if it's a weird situation, it's still not weirder than Jotaro-senpai."

There was a moment's pause, before Moka and Tsukune both nodded.

"Okay, yeah, Kujo-senpai is still definitely weirder than this."

"I don't think there's much arguing on that point," Moka agreed, before her expression fell. "But I still can't believe we're discussing... what basically amounts to a high school version of polygamy, here."

Kurumu shrugged, an action which forcibly drew Moka's attention, and tried to relieve the tension with a joke. "Well, if it makes you feel better we could call it something else?"

Moka grimaced, and maybe it was just because he'd been watching her for so long, but Tsukune caught the grief in her eyes. And an instant later, he had an epiphany of his own. "It's not about me or Kurumu," he realized. "Something bad happened in the past, and you're afraid that if we go along with Kurumu's idea, it'll happen again."

Kurumu blinked, connecting the dots for herself even as Moka tried to flinch away; an all but impossible task, given the way they'd bound themselves up together to escape the cold.

Letting out a sigh, Kurumu snaked an arm around her vampire friend and forcibly drew her into a hug, prompting a startled yelp. "Look, as much as I don't want to make you talk about your feelings, I think we can all figure out that the story isn't moving any further until you do. So whatever's up, I promise I won't judge or freak out."

Moka blinked, before her expression morphed from grief to dread. "No. No, no, no. You can not be serious."

Tsukune started to open his mouth and reach out to comfort her... but the girl kept going, her eyes widening in distress. "You're telling me it's not enough to admit that I think I'm in love with Tsukune, or even that I keep catching myself staring at or thinking about other girls, especially you Kurumu, but Mizore's going to keep us in here unless I talk about that?!"

Kurumu paused for a moment. Okay, so now I realize that wasn't Tsukune's attraction scent I'd been smelling for the last several minutes...

Leaning closer to Tsukune, the bluenette tried to converse with him without catching the distraught Moka's attention any more than necessary. "So letting the second part of that go for right now," she whispered, "it seriously isn't like her to just blurt out stuff like that so suddenly. I mean, I was kind of expecting a long insecurity speech about the humans she went to middle school with as a lead-up to the love confession, and then we'd agree to share you before giving Mizore and Yukari a piece of our minds for locking us in here in the first place."

Tsukune nodded, keeping his voice equally low. "And whatever it is that's bothering her so badly, it's serious enough that just prompting her about it distracted her to the point of making her drop the other stuff so carelessly."

Glancing at the shivering vampire in their laps, Tsukune asked, "Do you think we should try and get her to talk about it? Or get Mizore to let us out and give her some space?"

Kurumu grimaced, biting her lip in concentration. Damn it, he just had to ask me for a plan, she thought. She didn't have any better idea on what to do than Tsukune did, and she knew the only reason Tsukune even asked was because he didn't have the confidence to make a decision. Which more or less summed up the reason they were even stuck huddling together in a makeshift freezer to start with.

"Moka," the bluenette began, "we're here for you, and we want to help you."

Tsukune picked up on the succubus's intent immediately, and his expression grew determined, even though his gaze never lost its concern. "But we can't," he said, "because we don't know how. If you don't want to talk about... whatever it is, we aren't going to make you. And we won't let anyone else force you to do it either, but --"

He stopped talking when Moka touched his uniform jacket, clenching her hand into a fist. After several tense seconds, she let go, and half-wormed her way out of Kurumu's grip to lean against him as well. "...it's fine," she whispered in a tone that said anything but.

"I'm still not sold on Kurumu's idea," she continued, "but if the two of you really, really want to try this thing out, then you need to know about it anyway. I just..."

Raising her head and looking at her two friends with a pained, almost defeated expression, Moka sighed and began her story.

[<----TO BE CONTINUED]
 
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...Wow. It's been a while since the last Shinedown, and it's caught me completely by surprise here. That made for an especially powerful finish there. "It's about to get heavy..."; I believe that promise, and I'm anxiously anticipating the next part, even more so than the continuation of the story proper.
 
This is going from memory so I might have a few details wrong, but basically, Moka's dad was(and probably only was because Akasha(Moka's mom) isn't around anymore) a polygamist and Issa either played favorites with him focusing on Akasha or it seemed like that to his other wife Gyokuro. And Gyokuro went legitimately insane with hatred towards Akasha and anyone related to her.
 
This is going from memory so I might have a few details wrong, but basically, Moka's dad was(and probably only was because Akasha(Moka's mom) isn't around anymore) a polygamist and Issa either played favorites with him focusing on Akasha or it seemed like that to his other wife Gyokuro. And Gyokuro went legitimately insane with hatred towards Akasha and anyone related to her.
I think that's mostly correct. Issa might have done the polygamy-thing already before he met Akasha - Akua and Kahlua are both from different mothers, and older than Moka - but if he didn't I'm pretty sure it began with her; she was apparently a quite remarkable woman. Y'know, on top of being a centuries old super vampire warrior sage.

I personally always thought it was kind of interesting how Issa's attempts at polygamy blew up in his face in the end - his situation actually kind of resembled Tsukune's, and in the finale of the manga he even implies that Tsukune might end up in his place one day (ie with lots of broken relationships behind him) if he doesn't get his act together and deal with the emotional tangle that his harem has become at that point.
 
And respectfully I must decline to answer that
Ah, sorry.

When I think about you, Moka, I want to be a better person. A cooler, more capable guy worthy of earning your attention. But because you're so smart and talented at everything, I feel like it's an impossible gap I'll never be able to bridge. But then when I think about you, Kurumu, because of your energy, passion, and can-do attitude, I start to feel some of that too. It's like... like I have a lot more potential that I can tap into, almost within my reach.... but just being some dull average kid like I am, there's so much room for improvement that I get lost just trying to find a place to start.
Whoa, some mature talk here.

Moka sighed and began her story.
I was expecting a Roundabout.
 
Sorry for the absence, things lately have been.... to be succinct, bullshit.

House problems, car problems, family problems... I'm half convinced that if I had a significant other, she'd be picking fights with me too.

That said? Your continued and ongoing patience is dearly appreciated, and the number of things between "me" and "writing the next post" is steadily dwindling. I offer no timetables of course, because I know I probably won't be able to keep them.

Just letting y'all know that I haven't forgotten about you/this project.
 
ATE 1, part FINAL
"The truth is," Moka began with a sigh, "my parents were never actually married."

Kurumu blinked. "They weren't? Why not?"

"I mean, it doesn't change my feelings," Tsukune quickly cut in, "but I admit it does make me curious."

The vampire nodded, privately relieved that her friends/would-be lovers weren't reacting badly so far. "My father is a powerful Vampire lord, named Issa Shuzen. And when I say he's powerful, I mean that he's in the top one or two percent, even among Vampires. He's also a polygamist," she explained with a grimace.

Tsukune and Kurumu paused, sharing a glance. "And just so we're all on the same page," the Succubus slowly began, "by polygamist, you mean..."

"I mean he had two daughters with his wife," Moka confirmed. "My mother was his mistress, or I guess concubine would be a reasonable word for their relationship too. And then my oldest sister is from yet a third woman whom I don't know anything about."

"Hold on a second, you said your father's name was Shuzen?" Tsukune asked. "But then why isn't...?"

Moka hesitated for a moment, before letting out a sigh. "I was too young to realize it then," she explained, "and this was before my mother gave me this Rosario seal to limit my powers, so because of that some of my memories are hazy or distorted. But when I've looked back on that time, I came to realize that my father played favorites with my mother -- his mistress, over his wife. Or at least, his wife Gyokuro was convinced that he was favoring my mother over her. Either way, my father tried to keep peace in the household with her, and because of that he never married my mother, even though vampire law would've permitted him multiple wives. And for the same reason," she continued, "I was even denied the Shuzen family name, and instead given Akashiya, derivative of my mother's given name Akasha."

Kurumu closed her eyes in thought, resting her chin in her hand. "Stop me if I'm wrong, but the short version is that your father was trying to maintain a harem of his own," she concluded, "and between your mother and his wife, he couldn't keep both of his lovers emotionally satisfied, and because of his juggling around and trying to please his wife, you got the short end of the stick?"

Gingerly, half-fearful that she'd react badly, Tsukune put an arm around Moka's shoulder. When she leaned into the touch instead, the boy went ahead and hugged her in full, while Kurumu joined in from next to him. "I never realized you had such a tough childhood." He felt he had to say more... but the words escaped him, so he just held Moka tighter.

"Yeah," Kurumu agreed, "I never would have guessed you'd gone through anything like that."

"It actually wasn't that bad for me at the time," Moka admitted. "My sisters all loved me, and I love them -- I actually still keep in contact with Kahlua when I can, she's the second oldest. I knew my parents loved me as well, and because all the adults were so powerful and wealthy, we lived in a huge countryside mansion. There wasn't really anything we ever had to do without, so it was a comfortable, pleasant life back then."

Up until it wasn't, obviously.

Kurumu was the one to ask. "So what happened? It sounds like your life back then was something out of a fairytale, so what went wrong?"

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A young girl wandered through the manor's moonlight corridors, silver hair gleaming in the moonlight. Despite the amorphous shadows dancing around her, she had no fear. And why should she, when by birthright of her father's ownership and her parents' power as well as her own strength, she was the princess of this domain?

"My mother died."

For a little while now, the princess had noticed some of the lesser vampires, employees or guests, giving her unpleasant looks. But then, even at her young age she'd already beaten more than a few of them in combat, and quite easily at that.

All it meant was that they were born weaker than her, and if their egos were bruised then they needed to take their training more seriously. And besides, both of her older sisters were stronger still, so it wasn't like it there was a reason to single her out or anything.

Of course, it escaped her notice that her older sisters were still looked at by those same lesser vampires with fear or respect, and that she alone was gazed at with such naked contempt.


"I still don't remember how it happened. I remember one day, my mother gave me the Rosario seal and said that we had to go away from the household. I was crying because I didn't want to move away from my father or sisters, so I defied her and tried to stay in the house."

And yet, for all of this, her heart was still not at ease. Mother was gone, and after waking up from a nightmare full of blood and screams, the princess couldn't shake the feeling that she was to blame. The solitude of her chamber made it all the worse, so she got up and went looking for comfort.

"The next thing I know after that, my mother was gone. Most say she died, others that she just disappeared."

What she found instead was a woman's voice screaming in rage.

"I'M the one you married, Issa! ME, NOT HER! Now I want her bastard out of our home!"

And a man who was trying to keep his family from imploding further, while desperately wondering precisely where it was things had gone so wrong.

"Gyokuro, please remember your composure. Your daughters are asleep, aren't they?"

A moment's silence through the bedroom door, just slightly cracked open. Even though more children were in the house than just the wife's, that choice of wording could only have been deliberate.

When Gyokuro replied, her volume was more appropriate for the late hour, but her tone no less hateful. "I tolerate Aqua because she knows her place, and because as your firstborn she has some small right to be here. But now that I know the truth, I won't accept Akasha's bastard staying even one more night under this roof."

Even with the door between the princess and the feuding couple, the pause was such that Moka could almost see in her mind's eye, her father freezing with alarm.

But nothing lasts forever, and as all things must his silence came to an end. "Moka was already being sent to live in the human world, remember? Recent events have only further shown why this is necessary. Tomorrow morning, Moka will leave these grounds, as you wish. But even so," he continued, forestalling any good cheer Gyokuro may have received, "her sisters love her. Out of consideration for their peace of mind, surely you don't have an objection to my seeing that she's still taken care of?"

The wife's embittered rage was so palpable as to almost be a physical force, seeping through the cracks around the door like a sinister mist. "...you will not see her again, nor spend time with her? And your 'seeing she's taken care of' won't inconvenience me or the rest of the household?"

The king asked with a heavy voice, "...is this what you demand as proof that I still love you?"

"Answer me, and I'll decide if I accept it."

"Then I give you my word that I will abide by those wishes."

For the first time, the queen's voice was not filled with rage, but a whispered sadness.
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"After everything that's happened, how can I believe that you'll keep it?"
"Either way," Moka continued, "I was sent away to live on my own, and after having to move around a few times over the years I currently live in an apartment in Shinjuku by myself. My rent and other bills are all paid for me, and I might see my older sister Kahlua or my younger sister Kokoa once or twice a year."

Opening her eyes, Moka had just enough time to pull out of the previous group hug to squeak in surprise as a crying succubus forcefully dragged her back in for another one. "K-Kurumu?!"

"I... I can't believe you had to go through something like that!"

Moka could barely even start to think of a response, before Tsukune joined in this time. He wasn't actually crying, yet, though the corners of his eyes were definitely misty. "I can't imagine what it's like to overhear parents fighting like that, even if your dad's wife isn't your mother."

Almost overwhelmed by the comfort and support the pair were showing her, Moka's cheeks started to redden. "W-well, I met you two, so I guess something good came out of it after all... c'mon, now you're gonna make me start crying!"

Hearing that just made Kurumu cry harder, sobbing into the vampire's shoulder, apparently now needing support just as much as giving it. Moka couldn't help but chuckle at how absurd of a turn things had taken even as she started crying herself. Tsukune, for his part, did his best to hold and comfort the two emotionally charged, extremely cute and beautiful girls that had wound up in his lap.

Eventually, the trio managed to calm down, and wiping the last tear from her eye, Moka said, "So, that's why I'm not comfortable with your whole 'oh, we can both be with Tsukune together' plan, Kurumu."

"Your dad tried to be with multiple women at once and it turned into a tragedy because he either played favorites, or couldn't convince his wife that he wasn't," Tsukune muttered with his head low in thought. "So you're afraid that if we try the same thing, history will repeat itself."

Moka nodded, expression downcast but no longer depressed. In more ways than one, even now she looked much healthier for having shared her story with the two people closest to her. She didn't have to bear the weight of that past alone anymore... but wasn't someone being curiously quiet, all of a sudden?

"...Kurumu?"

The succubus was gazing at the far wall, or more accurately perhaps through it, lost in thought. "When most people talk about love triangles," she absently mused, "they're actually only talking about two relationships, for the most part. In our case, it's two girls who like the same guy, and the guy likes both girls as well."

To illustrate her point, she drew three dots in the frost on the wall in a classic triangular shape, before connecting the top dot with the two bottom dots. "So if you look at it in those terms, it's just an angle, with point A being stuck between points B and C."

"A math analogy is probably one of the last things I would ever have expected from this conversation," Tsukune admitted, "but I'm listening."
Moka was slightly quicker on the uptake than her boy. "Hold up--"

Kurumu silenced Moka with peck on the cheek, while simultaneously drawing a line between the two previously unconnected dots. "So in relationship terms, that would be a triangle," she finished.

Moka's entire face turned a spectacular shade of scarlet, and it took several seconds of stammering to form words. "I don't -- but -- you mean you're also --"

"I've never thought about it," Kurumu said instead. "But if you don't think sharing Tsukune will work, then unless either of you have another idea, I guess there's only one question left to ask."

"W-what's that?" the other two points of the triangle asked as one.

Repositioning to gaze directly into Moka's eyes, arms around her shoulders to prevent her from escaping, Kurumu asked, "Did you hate it?"

Before Moka could answer, poor Tsukune's brain finally came to the point where it couldn't find the line between fantasy and reality, and he promptly passed out.

[ATE END]
 
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