Renascence: A Homura Quest

Honorifics or Western-style Titles? I've used both before, which is bothersomely inconsistent

  • Japanese Honorifics (-san, -sama, -dono, -chan, -kun, -senpai, etcetera)

    Votes: 12 33.3%
  • Western Titles (Mister, Miss, job titles, Lord, Lady, etcetera)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Use whichever works better for a given sentence.

    Votes: 24 66.7%

  • Total voters
    36
  • Poll closed .
Higure, question. Did the Crossover Omake get a bonus or not? Come to think of it, would be good to know.

What about Entropy Judge's Omake on page 59? Does that get a bonus?
 
... I think I don't want a planewalker appearing in this quest.
Oh, it doesn't have to be a planeswalker ... think of all the fun we could have if Jaya Ballard showed up ... or even better worse more depressing interesting, all the slivers!

So, to contribute to the discussion (late, but relevant for the upcoming update I hope), I do want to tell the full truth to Sayaka as immediately as necessary, but have we thought about what witchbombing Sayaka will mean, given the desires that prompted her wish? How can we phrase "If I give up or fail, I become a witch" such that she doesn't go all "but that means all witches were Magical Girls, so I must save all the witches"? You know, like Memory Access 2 says she will.
I'm ... actually not sure anymore, how much and how quickly to reveal to Sayaka.
Kyouko said:
I'm not the same Kyouko you talked to earlier, but I'm tied to her. Just like everyone's tied to their other selves. We can't reunite with them normally, but we don't completely disappear...not as long as they live. Things can slip across, and...well, again, I can't say.
Sayaka may remember things on her own, if we can connect with her. Need to think more.
Basically very careful not-quite-lying.
:sour: No. No Incubator behavior.

Call her "Twilight".
No.

Higure said:
She just yawns, before grabbing some popcorn from your bag and tossing it down her gullet
Oh, Kyouko. What monster have we unleashed? Now she will come to us for food.
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*grin*
 
We need to tell Sayaka about our need for Grief Seeds and Walpurgisnact. The rest we can be irritatingly mysterious about.
 
We need to tell Sayaka about our need for Grief Seeds and Walpurgisnact. The rest we can be irritatingly mysterious about.

Not sure that's a good idea. At minimum, we should tell us her about the LichBomb. If we really don't want to use the WitchBomb, we can use this as an excuse as to why we don't want any more Magical Girls around at all costs. It would make sense to Sayaka. This means Sayaka will fight tooth-and-nail if necessary to stop Madoka becoming a Magical Girl.

I can't find a way for her to believe us without telling her a lot more, but if we could I'd advocate telling her in secret about Kyoko's past. If she knows that, her interactions with Kyoko will change significantly and for the better.
 
... if we could I'd advocate telling her in secret about Kyoko's past. If she knows that, her interactions with Kyoko will change significantly and for the better.
No. The farthest we should go is telling her that Kyouko has good reasons for her behavior and that she isn't really a bad person. Anything more needs either Kyouko's permission or Kyouko herself to do the talking.

Of course, in order to even get that far, we'd have to be willing to tell Sayaka how we know that. So it wouldn't be until after we've already dropped the "I know you guys from my past" bomb.
 
No, let's be irritatingly mysterious. Telling her that we're an inhuman magical cannibal screams "bad idea" to me.
 
Entropy Judge- You're bringing philosophy in a Quest. Ideas of the proper boundaries of consent and when it's justified to override it are philossophical ethics.

Can you at least concede that tactically speaking I'm right and that it would work to our advantage?

Hyp3rB14d3- It's not our fault, we can argue. Sayaka is quite friendly with us. I think we can talk her into the idea that it's a horrible fate that has been inflicted on us by Kyubey, and that we're struggling to make sure nobody else becomes an inhuman monster like us as well as struggling to survive. I think we can get her to still be our ally, and a stronger one at that when Kyubey goes for Madoka.
 
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How would Kyouko react if she found out we told her story to Sayaka? We could tell Sayaka not to tell Kyouko that we told her, but Kyouko might be clued in by a sudden large change in Sayaka's reactions towards her. Asking Sayaka to give Kyouko a bit of slack might not have as large an effect as giving her the story, but it has less chances of potential fallout.
 
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How would Kyouko react if she found out we told her story to Sayaka? We could tell Sayaka not to tell Kyouko that we told her, but Kyouko might be clued in by a sudden large change in Sayaka's reactions towards her. Asking Sayaka to give Kyouko a bit of slack might not have as large an effect as giving her the story, but it has less chances of potential fallout.

If we just tell her to give Kyoko some slack, why on earth are we getting her to do that? In Sayaka's black-and-white mindset, no matter what your circumstances the things Kyoko does are simply unacceptable.

If we get Sayaka not to tell Kyouko that we told her, I think we can deal with Kyoko well enough. If Sayaka's trying to conceal that she knows, even if Kyoko suspects something how is she to figure it out? She doesn't even know we know, so how is she supposed to figure out we told Sayaka?
 
If we just tell her to give Kyoko some slack, why on earth are we getting her to do that? In Sayaka's black-and-white mindset, no matter what your circumstances the things Kyoko does are simply unacceptable.
You have a point about Sayaka's current mindset. Without shaking that mindset, she will most likely maintain her current disposition towards Kyouko.

If we get Sayaka not to tell Kyouko that we told her, I think we can deal with Kyoko well enough. If Sayaka's trying to conceal that she knows, even if Kyoko suspects something how is she to figure it out? She doesn't even know we know, so how is she supposed to figure out we told Sayaka?
Do we just want to deal with Kyouko, or do we want Kyouko and Sayaka to be friendly? If she starts suspecting something, interactions may sour. And if hostilities rise, and Sayaka lets something slip, then what?
 
By far the more important argument here is the LichBomb, I should point out. So far nobody's responded to my argument. That being said:

Blueberry's big mouth, that's how.

What makes you think she's big-mouthed we can't restrain her? Once she knows about that (plus the Soul Gems), I think Sayaka will pity Kyoko enough that she won't end up in a passionate argument with her.

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EDIT: Will put a response to SiriusA here.

RESPONSE: That's when we go for the back-up plan. We tell Kyoko about the Soul Gems (we know she can take it), give her proof (an experiment with seperating a magical girl from their Soul Gem by a distance of 100 metres should do it), then use that as ample excuse for Sayaka.
 
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Entropy Judge- You're bringing philosophy in a Quest. Ideas of the proper boundaries of consent and when it's justified to override it are philossophical ethics.
... Okay. And what's your point?

Can you at least concede that tactically speaking I'm right and that it would work to our advantage?
Is your goal to alienate Kyouko and have her attempt to murder Sayaka and Homura? Because that's what will probably happen if we tell Sayaka about Kyouko's past - Sayaka will go find Kyouko, tell her about it, Kyouko will get pissed and/or paranoid, attempt to kill Sayaka, probably succeed, then go after whoever must have told her, which will be either Homura or Mami (or both).

By far the more important argument here is the LichBomb, I should point out. So far nobody's responded to my argument.
What we tell Sayaka about Magical Girls and their circumstances can probably wait until we actually know the context of the conversation. Will she need to know eventually? Probably. Do we need to make a decision right now? No, we don't.

Can you cite a section, please? I want to check this.
Hyp3rB14d3 probably means this:
She hesitantly nods, "Um...about earlier. I, uh...can I please..." She glances at Kyouko, hesitates, and then continues, "Please let me be your bodyguard. I know it's traditional for you to have one, and I...that Wish had a price."

You almost choke at that, glancing at the elder Miki to see if she heard. She's still texting.



@ Whoever's been making updates for the Index:
It needs to be redone. Currently, "Story Post 17" links here, and "Story Post 18" links here.
 
Entropy Judge:
1- I've been repeatedly suspended for applying philosophical ethics in a thread and shouted at (metaphorically) in PMAS. If I were to cite philosophical ethics the mods would do the same to me here. It's unfair for the same standard not to be consistently applied.

2- I think you're being pessimistic here. Sayaka's pig-headed, but she has enough social awareness to know that would be a bad idea (particularly if we tell her). We can argue that doing that would open an old wound for Kyoko to be safe. If you want to be EXTRA safe, we can make Sayaka promise not to tell Kyoko we told her before talking.

3- Our deadline is when Kyubey contacts Madoka. Otherwise Sayaka will see no reason for Madoka not to become a Magical Girl, and may even outright encourage it. Being around Mami Tomoe would make this situation worse.

The way I see it, there is no point to delaying as the arguments in favour of dropping the LichBomb are overwhelming.

i- Sayaka can't be emotionally devastated because she isn't a Magical Girl.
ii- The prejudice argument doesn't work. Although it may change how Sayaka views us, if we portray ourselves as dedicated to making sure no more 'monsters' like us come about it and give a sob story about Kyubey tricking us Sayaka will probably be fine with being our ally.
iii- Sayaka's sheer horror at the LichBomb will be such she definitely will NOT want Madoka contracting. This means we can rely on her for that bit and are freed up to act elsewhere.

4- That was a different context. If Miki's mother overheard she'd just be confused, and Sayaka could pass it off as something else. It's another level entirely to go up to Kyoko directly.
 
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I was following SynchronizedWritersBlock's point about one-upmanship. Without some sort of insult, there is no oneupmanship.
It doesn't have to be insulting. Ribbons isn't, not really. It has to be teasing. Can contain elements of playful insult, but doesn't have to.

We need to tell Sayaka about our need for Grief Seeds and Walpurgisnact. The rest we can be irritatingly mysterious about.
This is actually a fair minimum. But the problem is if we tell her ANYthing more, we can't leave anything out. Lichbomb and witchbomb absolutely can't be things we're holding back waiting for the right time, if we want to keep any level of trust. Same for looping, or the Kyubey, or our wish. Any of those items should require disclosure of all the others, because of trust issues of nothing else.

Whether we should use nothing but the bare minimum is an interesting idea, but I don't think it will work. Why? Because the Kyubey will appear in short order and start trying to convince people to contact, and if we don't reveal the downsides by then it gets complicated.

Not sure that's a good idea. At minimum, we should tell us her about the LichBomb. If we really don't want to use the WitchBomb, we can use this as an excuse as to why we don't want any more Magical Girls around at all costs. It would make sense to Sayaka. This means Sayaka will fight tooth-and-nail if necessary to stop Madoka becoming a Magical Girl.

I can't find a way for her to believe us without telling her a lot more, but if we could I'd advocate telling her in secret about Kyoko's past. If she knows that, her interactions with Kyoko will change significantly and for the better.

Telling her the lichbomb without the witchbomb will poison our relationship in the future. It's sacrificing the long term for short term objectives.

There's no reason to manipulate her relationship with Kyouko either. Sure, Sayaka might feel sympathetic towards her.
But we end up destroying whatever relationship they've built here, even if it's a friendly rivalry. Again, sacrificing long term for short term gains.







As I always have been, I remain in favor of a well-written full disclosure, insofar as the secrets told are ours to tell.
 
For what it's worth, I've preferred to tell Sayaka everything and as soon as possible. However, from what I've seen there has been a majority opposing this so I've tried to create functional proposals to get around it. Thus, we don't disagree as greatly as it might seen Synchronized.

However, I should point out:
-We can always resort to the lie that we didn't know about the WitchBomb.
-Once Sayaka knows Kyubey tricks magical girls by not telling them about the LichBomb, she isn't going to be inclined to trust anything he says without solid proof. With so few Magical Girls in Mitakihara, proof of the WitchBomb is unlikely unless we're already in massive trouble.
-Kyubey eating his own bodies isn't exactly relevant information. If Sayaka discovers that, we can easily say it wasn't relevant.
-That leaves the Time Loops. Because we're not stupid, it's going to be extremely hard for this to let slip. If Kyubey tries we can simply say he's lying.

I'd vote with you, but that doesn't mean a compromise proposal is impossible.

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On Kyoko- Why would we destroy the relationship they've built up by Sayaka knowing?
 
You know, in relationships you don't have to reveal everything immediately. If we tell Sayaka that there is more we aren't telling her yet because it is really upsetting to us (which is true), then we are not betraying our relationship with Sayaka because we are being open and honest about our secrets, and at the same time retaining basic information control.
 
Come to think of it, noting that SynchronizedWritersBlock talking about ' insofar as the secrets told are ours to tell.' is philosophy. If the mods are going to forbid me from discussing philosophy, we should be consistent on the matter and not using ethics as an argument to hold us back from telling Sayaka Kyoko's secrets.

You know, in relationships you don't have to reveal everything immediately. If we tell Sayaka that there is more we aren't telling her yet because it is really upsetting to us (which is true), then we are not betraying our relationship with Sayaka because we are being open and honest about our secrets, and at the same time retaining basic information control.

I agree with this IF we want not to tell something. But I still think it would be better to tell. I'll edit my case in here.

LichBomb: Important so Sayaka can guard Madoka.

WitchBomb: The most controversial given we know what will happen. But we absolutely don't want Madoka becoming a Magical Girl, and if Sayaka knows this one she'll be all the more determined. I think this is worth it less on it's own, and more because if we reveal the Time Loops to establish our authority and the LichBomb we have to reveal the WitchBomb so Sayaka is fully in on it.

If we give exposistion on past timelines to Sayaka, this will allow her to make better field decisions and thus need less supervision. If Sayaka knows everything in the Sayaka Memory Acess, for example, I think it would work in our favor.

Time Loops: If we tell Sayaka about those, she'll be far more willing to listen to us.
 
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1- I've been repeatedly suspended for applying philosophical ethics in a thread and shouted at (metaphorically) in PMAS. If I were to cite philosophical ethics the mods would do the same to me here.
PMAS doesn't matter one whit here. Here, you are the only one complaining about using ethical and moral arguments. You find me a statement by Higure in this thread that ethical arguments are off-limits, or a statement in the forum rules saying likewise, or quit your damn bitching.

It's unfair for the same standard not to be consistently applied
:rolleyes: If you're friends with two different people, and one of them has a rule that in their house, you must keep your shoes on, and the other has a rule that in their house, you cannot keep your shoes on, what do you do?

2- I think you're being pessimistic here. Sayaka's pig-headed, but she has enough social awareness to know that would be a bad idea (particularly if we tell her). We can argue that doing that would open an old wound for Kyoko to be safe. If you want to be EXTRA safe, we can make Sayaka promise not to tell Kyoko we told her before talking.
Possibly; I'd prefer to stay cautious. If necessary, we can let Sayaka know that something about Kyouko's situation is off and that she shouldn't push her too hard, but we don't tell her any specifics without Kyouko's permission. And again, doing so goes into the whole "How does Homura know these things about a perfect stranger?"

i- Sayaka can't be emotionally devastated because she isn't a Magical Girl.
... Emotions don't exist for normal people? That's what you're saying here. What you might mean is that Sayaka won't turn into a Witch as a result of Grief Spiraling ... but I'm pretty sure she'd still be freaked out about the situation.

ii- The prejudice argument doesn't work. Although it may change how Sayaka views us, if we portray ourselves as dedicated to making sure no more 'monsters' like us come about it and give a sob story about Kyubey tricking us Sayaka will probably be fine with being our ally.
Prejudice argument? I'm not really sure what point you're trying to make here ... or which point of mine you're trying to reply to. The biggest issue I can see with this line of thought, though, is that Homura isn't necessarily dedicated to that, and if she doesn't seem to match Sayaka's standards for what she says, it's likely to create a problem.

iii- Sayaka's sheer horror at the LichBomb will be such she definitely will NOT want Madoka contracting. This means we can rely on her for that bit and are freed up to act elsewhere.
Maybe, maybe not. Sayaka doesn't have our skills and abilities, and until we know what she can do, I'm not sure we can say "we can rely on her." I wouldn't put it past Kyubey to be with Madoka and Sayaka when a Witch shows up and try to get Madoka to contract if it looks like Sayaka is going to be hurt.

4- That was a different context. If Miki's mother overheard she'd just be confused, and Sayaka could pass it off as something else. It's another level entirely to go up to Kyoko directly.
Just posting what I thought he was referring to.

-We can always resort to the lie that we didn't know about the WitchBomb.
We shouldn't, though - if Sayaka finds out that we did know, her trust for us takes a hit. If we let her know that there are things we don't want her to know because of how dangerous it could be, at least we're telling her that there are things we're not telling her, and that we've thought about it and come to a decision that isn't just "I didn't want you to know."
-That leaves the Time Loops. Because we're not stupid, it's going to be extremely hard for this to let slip. If Kyubey tries we can simply say he's lying.
Except that makes our relationship with everyone suspect. One of the major facets of Kyubey's actions and behavior is that he doesn't lie. Period. If we claim he's lying, we would need to have an absolutely perfect reason for knowing everything we do, one that can be proven via outside information. Kyubey might not always tell everything, and he leaves things out, but he doesn't directly lie, and claiming he does is going to hurt us.
 
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