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My Life as a Teenage Juggernaut... (Worm AU x Marvel)

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Max and Victor watch as Hooky crashes into the luncheon/open bar

"We're going to have to hand him over aren't we."

"Yeah."

"I am now officially to sober for this shit. Start planning his break out…after our hangovers pass."

"You got it."
 
Aw, c'mon guys! PHO is gonna rename Skidmark to Pinball, that's a sure thing! ;)

I can't wait to see the reactions when people start realizing the ridiculous things Taylor is doing, she's doing without putting any effort into them.
 
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forklifter16 said:
Aw, c'mon guys! PHO is gonna rename Skidmark to Pinball, that's a sure thing! ;)
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How about Skidball? Also the hookwolf part broke my suspension of disbelief -- how did he end up in front of Taylor anyway? He just magically appeared to set the scene, and the dialogue went by so fast in order to for him to get absolutely bodied. Just scraping the bottom of the barrel for the worst dialogue choices, lolz.

Anyway this is a... Mildly, crack chapter but I do think people are more or less in character.
 
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ScissorSlipper said:
How about Skidball? Also the hookwolf part broke my suspension of disbelief -- how did he end up in front of Taylor anyway? He just magically appeared to set the scene, and the dialogue went by so fast in order to for him to get absolutely bodied. Just scraping the bottom of the barrel for the worst dialogue choices, lolz.

Anyway this is a... Mildly, crack chapter but I do think people are more or less in character.
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I saw it as him being in the area already(as he wasn't mentioned to be with the others back at Medhall), seeing Taylor give Skids The Business™, and thinking 'Fuck it, I'mma try and get her on our side.'
Which ended up in him getting an express trip to Medhall.
 
ThatOtherSatori said:
I saw it as him being in the area already(as he wasn't mentioned to be with the others back at Medhall), seeing Taylor give Skids The Business™, and thinking 'Fuck it, I'mma try and get her on our side.'
Which ended up in him getting an express trip to Medhall.
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Previous chapter explicitly had the Merchants being directed away from Hooky's rampage by a PRT squad... headed by our dear 'friend' and fan of comedy, Commander Calvert. The directions given were, in fact, because his shard informed him that this would be the result - a two-for-one special, and Emily in M/S lockup as a chaser? Why would he not take that option... especially considering the shot-and-chaser combo Max started serving isn't going to sit so well with him.

Lisa may or may not have been involved beyond the particulars of the BBPD/dog fighting engagement, but this particular shot call, and its rebounding effects, were all Tommy Boy.
 
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Kryslin said:
Which stretched like rubber, slowing him down. Then, with a clearly audible >BOING!<, it shot him back out as it returned to its normal hemispherical shape. He skipped off the water again, seeming to pick up speed, and found himself aimed at the tallest building in the city. He was hoping he'd miss.
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Glad this is here. Did you get the idea from the chain forklifter started after the previous chapter, or was it already planned?
 
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