Magical Girl Quest - The Fire That Burns


Okay... you know, I do not particularly mind that you decided to include Cerys' awakening sexuality as a theme... but please do not go overboard?


Oh, and a new rule for myself: I will make another Magical Girl for my Quest for every waifu you create here. Magical Girls of the kind I showed you before.
 

Thanks for the clip, I love it.
Anyway just curious have you consider doing an crossover with character from another Quest ending up here for an arc or so? Maybe an Crystalwatcher's Magical Girl Quest magical girl that end up in this reality.
 
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Okay... you know, I do not particularly mind that you decided to include Cerys' awakening sexuality as a theme... but please do not go overboard?


Oh, and a new rule for myself: I will make another Magical Girl for my Quest for every waifu you create here. Magical Girls of the kind I showed you before.
Writing someone coming into sexual maturity is going to be difficult.
Especially because it is such a pervasive part of your life for that time.

I will try to not let it sink to fanservice levels though.

Thanks for the clip, I love it.
Anyway just curious have you consider doing an crossover with character from another Quest ending up here for an arc or so?
If they fit, maybe.
Gotta be more specific.
 
No chapter or late chapter today. Am busy.
Adhoc vote count started by Rukia on Aug 23, 2017 at 4:08 PM, finished with 2238 posts and 13 votes.

  • [X] Explore the base
    -[X] Hang out with Morgan while you do that; maybe she can give you a tour and introduce you to whoever else is there?
    --[X] Also, have breakfast once you get the chance
    --[X] Apologise for making Morgan uncomfortable; you well noticed how unexpected your change in behaviour was for her during the... negotiation with Karen
    --[X] Talk some magic with her; how do normal mages go about their craft? Any curriculum they teach which might help you?
    [X] Go find Samantha
    -[X] Ask her where we could find a swordmanship teacher to teach us
    -[X] Also ask her if there are any ways for Una to receive a proper Education
    [X] Explore the base
    -[X] Work on your senses while you're at it. How much detail can you make out?
    [X] Explore the base
    [X] Explore the base
    [X] Hang out with Morgan
    [X] Go find Samantha
    [X] Explore the base
    -[X] Get Breakfast
    [X] Ask for literature
    -[X] Specifically, Pratchett
    [X] Explore the base
    -[X] Hang out with Morgan while you do that; maybe she can give you a tour and introduce you to whoever else is there?
    --[X] Also, have breakfast once you get the chance
    --[X] Talk some magic with her; how do normal mages go about their craft? Any curriculum they teach which might help you?
    [X] Go find Samantha
    -[X] Ask her where we could find a swordmanship teacher to teach us
    -[X] Also ask her if there are any ways for Una to receive a proper Education
 
Apologise for making Morgan uncomfortable; you well noticed how unexpected your change in behaviour was for her during the... negotiation with Karen
I like how we're only apologizing for making her uncomfortable, but not for actually doing it.

Also... I can see her apologizing for Karen's boss mode making us uncomfortable, and then Cerys makes confused noises before clearning up she was fine with that side of Karen, it was the cheery one that disturbed her.

And then Morgan keeps in mind not to let her bias color things again and realizes Cerys is more comfortable talking to a mob boss than a maternal figure.

Cerys, y u so broken.

Una's better at least, though we'll have to be careful to keep an eye out for her getting bullied because she doesn't really know how to talk to kids her own age.
 
Una's better at least, though we'll have to be careful to keep an eye out for her getting bullied because she doesn't really know how to talk to kids her own age.

She never got the chance to talk to children her age, so we do not even know how good she is at it.
Actually, Una seemed like the kind of person with a healthy dose of natural charisma to me. Rukia would probably roll on things such as bullying, so it is up to chance anyway.
Although I always had the impression that she would be rather popular due to being cheerful/adorable and smart to boot. And, which I personally expect, have a Tsundere running after her within two weeks...

Additionally, do you really think any bully would survive this for longer than a day? Which is how long it takes for Cerys to hear about any such incident and find out where that person lives.

Lastly, we know Una learned some things about combat and lived on the streets for years; if push comes to shove, I expect she could easily defeat any bully her own age.
 
She never got the chance to talk to children her age, so we do not even know how good she is at it.
Actually, Una seemed like the kind of person with a healthy dose of natural charisma to me. Rukia would probably roll on things such as bullying, so it is up to chance anyway.
Although I always had the impression that she would be rather popular due to being cheerful/adorable and smart to boot. And, which I personally expect, have a Tsundere running after her within two weeks...

Additionally, do you really think any bully would survive this for longer than a day? Which is how long it takes for Cerys to hear about any such incident and find out where that person lives.

Lastly, we know Una learned some things about combat and lived on the streets for years; if push comes to shove, I expect she could easily defeat any bully her own age.
... Kind of? Most bullying isn't something you respond to with physical violence. Or it wasn't an option for me anyway.
 
Although I always had the impression that she would be rather popular due to being cheerful/adorable and smart to boot. And, which I personally expect, have a Tsundere running after her within two weeks...
She's gonna have all the adults wrapped around her little finger, and then the next step will be Gaia.:wink:

Also heeey, your not the gm here Naron keep your hora for your quest.:tongue:
 
... Kind of? Most bullying isn't something you respond to with physical violence. Or it wasn't an option for me anyway.

Well... I kind of did. Still not sure if what happened can be called "it worked out", but I was no longer bullied in the end. I call that a win.


Either way, I just do not think that Una would be a prime target for bullying. It may happen, but it is not likely.


Also heeey, your not the gm here Naron keep your hora for your quest.:tongue:

Nope~ :V
 
Why do you assume that she needs this or that School would be the best method for this?
Same reason it's done literally everywhere that can afford it (and many that can't) in the modern day world, it works.

And humans need social interaction almost more than they need food and water. And peer to peer social interaction is kind of crucial in letting people develop and learn how to interact with the world, keeping them adaptable as they grow up.
 
Why do you assume that she needs this or that School would be the best method for this?

Psychologically speaking normal people of that age require social interaction with a moderately broad peer group in order to develop into a healthy and functional adult...

It's just... Kind of a thing.

It is assumed she needs that because that is what any other girl her age would need.

I will acknowledge your second point however. There could be other ways for her to gain that sort of experience and interaction. I just doubt that Clocktower has a bunch of Una-aged little girls running around for her to pal together with, and remember, it has to be peers. People Una can deal with as an equal.
 
And humans need social interaction almost more than they need food and water. And peer to peer social interaction is kind of crucial in letting people develop and learn how to interact with the world, keeping them adaptable as they grow up.
I would like to contest this point.
I am a happy introvert that has precisely no desire to go out and interact with people, though I can perfectly fine.

Psychologically speaking normal people of that age require social interaction with a moderately broad peer group in order to develop into a healthy and functional adult...

It's just... Kind of a thing.

It is assumed she needs that because that is what any other girl her age would need.

I will acknowledge your second point however. There could be other ways for her to gain that sort of experience and interaction. I just doubt that Clocktower has a bunch of Una-aged little girls running around for her to pal together with, and remember, it has to be peers. People Una can deal with as an equal.
Not specifically. Just because school creates normal people, does not mean it creates happy or well adjusted people.
Quite often people have a number of psychological problems caused by their time in education.

Una is not a normal girl, just as you are not a normal 13 year old.
She would be perfectly happy to stay by your side forever.
She can interact with people around her fairly normally, she leeches off of Manga for help too often though.

The Clocktower is a big organisation.
Their children are mostly home-raised and taught, but they do have a Clocktower staffed school, inside a magical area.
There are significant grants in place to encourage people to have as many children as they can, to grow the population.
 
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I am a happy introvert that has precisely no desire to go out and interact with people, though I can perfectly fine.
Not specifically. Just because school creates normal people, does not mean it creates happy or well adjusted people.

As a fellow introvert, I would like to point out that not wanting to spend time with people is not actually the true nature of introversion? I love people, I adore spending time with them, what defines people as an introvert or extrovert is what they take away from that social interaction. Introverts are typically left feeling drained as being around other people depletes them emotionally whereas extroverts are often energized.

Also? I went to school.

I'm pretty sure you went to school too.

I suspect that most if not all of us in this thread went to school.

I would further postulate that most of us in this thread deviate from what would typically be called 'normal'.

School does not created normal people, but it does create people. And whether you like it or not, peer interaction is a massive part of that socialization process.

To deprive Una of that experience would be cruel at best, and by some definitions child abuse.
 
As a fellow introvert, I would like to point out that not wanting to spend time with people is not actually the true nature of introversion? I love people, I adore spending time with them, what defines people as an introvert or extrovert is what they take away from that social interaction. Introverts are typically left feeling drained as being around other people depletes them emotionally whereas extroverts are often energized.

Also? I went to school.

I'm pretty sure you went to school too.

I suspect that most if not all of us in this thread went to school.

I would further postulate that most of us in this thread deviate from what would typically be called 'normal'.

School does not created normal people, but it does create people. And whether you like it or not, peer interaction is a massive part of that socialization process.

To deprive Una of that experience would be cruel at best, and by some definitions child abuse.
People were already people before school.
They are often either magnetized towards certain archetypes by peer pressure or they push back and continue creating their own personality.

Social interaction itself does not make a person, what you know and how you chose to act upon that knowledge creates a person.
Social interaction is just another way of gaining knowledge to act upon.

Is 'normal' not what we are though?
We follow laws, we prize learning, we all know roughly the same amount of base knowledge. We are 'normal' compared to someone who has not been to school.
And yes, I have been to school. But I have also been home-schooled. I have seen it from both sides.
 
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People were already people before school.
They are often either magnetized towards certain archetypes by peer pressure or they push back and continue creating their own personality.

Social interaction itself does not make a person, what you know and how you chose to act upon that knowledge creates a person.
Social interaction is just another way of gaining knowledge to act upon.

Is 'normal' not what we are though?
We follow laws, we prize learning, we all know roughly the same amount of base knowledge. We are 'normal' compared to someone who has not been to school.
And yes, I have been to school. But I have also been home-schooled. I have seen it from both sides.

Before school children would still interact with each other, just in different settings and places, because that initial interaction is still important and the lack of a formal system that generates that interaction as a natural side effect of it's operation does not do away with the necessity of that interaction.

Also, social interaction at that age does not only allow people to gain knowledge of other people but also knowledge of how to behave. Social cues, body language, innate conversational etiquette. All of these are learned through peer interaction at a young age, and become more diffiicult to learn later in life.

I am not saying that Una needs to go to school. I am saying that she needs to interact with peers. With other children of roughly the same age and capacity as her. Failing to do so will stunt her emotional growth and potentially her maturity (more than they've already been stunted by her shitty circumstances I mean). School is just the easiest way to bring about those interactions.

You can deny school all you want, but don't go telling us that Una doesn't need to talk to and interact with other girls her age because that notion is ignorant at best.
 
Or you can argue with your psychology professors until your blue in the face if you want.

Did you know humans literally walk around all day with their body language saying "I am not threatening you" to everyone around them. It's part of what makes people uncomfortable around autistics, and I say this as one. I just got lucky in a manner of speaking because my brain decided to just overclock itself and take in literally everything I see that it possibly can, known as Hyper Awareness, so I actually can read people. And my case is particularly mild probably because of that.

Learning body language? Important.

Also, speaking as someone who literally scores a 10 out of 10 on the introvert scale in the Briggs-Meyer personality test every time I take it, you need social interaction. It can be as much as walking around people in the grocery mart once a week, speaking from experience, but you do need it.

And people need to learn how to talk and interact with each other as equals. Just imagine walking up to a person like you're a child and their an adult when they might even be younger than you because you literally don't know how to interact with people in any other way.

Just about everyone goes to schools because they work.
 
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