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The attack where two men had died. It didn't matter that they were gang members, if not worse. Having an underage child running around with an itchy trigger finger was a recipe for disaster.
You've got arguments for Piggot not being an idiot and then there's this line. I missed the memo where killing 2 out of a dozen child-kidnapping mercenaries who are trying to kill you, while you're rescuing a child, after trying non-lethal options first, is "itchy trigger finger"
Even if it would probably get thrown out of court, considering these people were not only using live firearms but kidnapping small children, the PRT can't really ignore it when a cape kills.
Not ignore but they can decide it was justified and not overkill, then drop it. Just like a cop can decide not to give you a ticket when speeding or a DA can decide not to charge even if you've broken the law. In this case it's clearly defense of self/another.
Nah, not as long as Peter and Taylor don't keep rocking the boat. Piggot would be fine with them working under the supervision of the PRT.
So largely useless and unable to do anything worthwhile. If the PRT learns his speciality it doesn't matter how heroic he is, or how careful or how much he obeys their rules. They'll never let him leave the Protectorate when he hits 18.
Piggot does make several good points. This time Peter's meddling was a success, but without proper supervision no one can be sure what he'll be doing next, eventually he may make a mistake and many people will die. And yes, new medical techs go through an extensive testing phase for a reason.
There is no new medical tinkertech because no biotinkers work for the PRT and normal tinkertech requires maintenance. I don't think we hear of any new medical tech in canon, nor of Dragon even trying to replicate any other biotinker's tech.

Here's the big issue. Even if he joined the Protectorate (forget Wards) the supervision and review would be worthless with his time limit. They would take weeks or months to get back to him on any problems with his tech (bio or otherwise). By that time he'd have lost the tech tree and can't fix any issues or make anything further down the tree. With pieces of tech often relying on another to even start making, he'd be completely stymied.

And then the less common but still potential issue, what if he gets a tree they won't allow at all? Imagine he gets just the Zerg tree. The PRT wouldn't let him make a single thing, but he needs to Tinker or he'll go crazy. What then?
 
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so I have a question is his tinkertech actually tinkertech where The shard makes up for missing parts in the blueprints or is it real technology that can be reverse-engineered?

Also does his tek tree always change into a new tech tree or is this a rotation? and how can you mix all technology with new technology if he loses the old technology in his brain once he gets the new stuff?
 
The Shard fills in the spaces with Technobabble, no reverse engineering stuff that doesn't exist. So, somewhat advanced things like Deus Ex tech might be reverse engineered, but not the Mecha-bugs.

Always a new tree.

He loses the old tree entirely, unless something in the new tree is close enough to be integrated, like if he got the Fallout universe, then the Halo universe, then the Warhammer40K universe then he could probably work the human augmentations and power armors together from them, but the augmentations from Bioshock, that basically ignore the known laws of physics, would be too different to mesh together.
 
You think? I did try to have her been reasonable, and show that she does have a point.
Piggot is definitely in the right here. Some guy just got his heart replaced with unknown Tinkertech. My main problem with the interlude is that seems Piggot's acts over-the-top in regards to the Protectorate parahumans/ parahumans in general. While she's got the parahuman prejudice, she's someone who works with them and has worked with them for years, so I feel like any disdain would be more subtle.
 
Only problem with toybox is that they are neutral, wich i don't really understand how it works with conflict drive...
They are neutral in that they don't get 'officialy' involved with anyone, but they do sell their products to anyone who can pays for them, gangs included.
"What did the new thinker say?"
"Apparently they have a 6.834% chance of destroying the entire city."
And then Piggot has a neurological meltdown based on completely accurate numbers.
I'm assuming that they are testing Dinah right now to understand the extend of her powers. Funny enough that was what screwd Coil in canon because he jumped to get her without knowing that Dinah could force some predictions to happen.
I don't remember exactly but was Tech priests tech black boxed?
If not, have the PRT just not realized it yet?
What do you mean with black boxed? It's incredibly advanced tech that most normal humans wouldn't be able to understand, but other tinkers can be inspired by it. And Dragon can decipher it because that's her specialty.
The Sword is good, but they already have protos darktemplar blade, so probably not that important.
Allow me to remind you that we never saw anything standing to The Sword, and that it was capable of cutting through conceptual and exotic effect like that one time it cut The Loop.
Not ignore but they can decide it was justified and not overkill, then drop it.
Yeah but the issue here is that these are two underaged kids. Cops are (or should be) prepared for the phychological consequences of killing a person. That an 11 years old is killing people and not being affected by it doesn't speak well of his mental state.
Even if he joined the Protectorate (forget Wards) the supervision and review would be worthless with his time limit.
You're making all these claims under the assumption that the PRT is unwilling and uncapable of adapting to new situation. I do want to believe that they aren't that stupid and that they very much can do that.
Piggot is definitely in the right here. Some guy just got his heart replaced with unknown Tinkertech. My main problem with the interlude is that seems Piggot's acts over-the-top in regards to the Protectorate parahumans/ parahumans in general. While she's got the parahuman prejudice, she's someone who works with them and has worked with them for years, so I feel like any disdain would be more subtle.
Fair, I wanted to show that by having her acting normal around Parahumans but her thought process being harsher. I'll think about it.
 
Yeah but the issue here is that these are two underaged kids. Cops are (or should be) prepared for the phychological consequences of killing a person. That an 11 years old is killing people and not being affected by it doesn't speak well of his mental state.
That a regional PRT director is so biased and distrustful of the people working for her, is so controlled by her PTSD, and is throwing around accusations like "trigger happy" when it clearly doesn't fit, doesn't speak well of her mental state. They don't know if he's affected or not because a 2 minute conversation with an antagonistic authority figure immediately after the fight is not sufficient evidence.
You're making all these claims under the assumption that the PRT is unwilling and uncapable of adapting to new situation. I do want to believe that they aren't that stupid and that they very much can do that.
I think those are reasonable assumptions. The ENE lack resources, and part of the Tagg situation and start of Weaver's career was clear demonstration of their inability to adapt at all. They might be able to handle some of his tech on a okay timeframe if they used more resources (even that's in question). I maintain they would never okay biotech stuff fast enough, if at all. And the issue of banned trees is still there.
 
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I still find it funny how Taylor is the big leash on Peter's Escalation.

Imagine if Peter had ran away in the first chapter, or had simply been housed by anyone except the Heberts (same result), he probably would have secretly Von Neumanned the bedrock below Brockton Bay in a month with a full Khaydarian Crystal Mine and poor man's Metal Extractor, just from the benefit of having no moral or ethical compunctions against stealing from the people of a Doomed Timeline like Earth Bet.

But nope! Taylor's Rank B Charisma turned Peter turned to the side of Good "Giving A Fuck"!

...Holy Shit, Peter can (potentially) create Saint Quartz, the doom of Gatcha is nigh!!!
 
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Allow me to remind you that we never saw anything standing to The Sword, and that it was capable of cutting through conceptual and exotic effect like that one time it cut The Loop.

this is fair.

still think the true gold in this tree is the different shaker abilities, and defence. The illusion is basically eldar holo-feild but powered up, and it's not even the most powerfull of the lot. but yeah, a striker The Sword power to put on Zergs for endbringers could be something. not that a conceptional based force feild would go wrong at one of those fights...

it's main problem is it's simultaneously to dangerous and not dangerus enough. It's as you say conceptional cutting. so basicaly melee Sting with a touch of trump since it's nerfed down to shard level. But it's also not really ranged, meaning you probably need to go up and hitt the endbringer with it... And pretty much to powerfull to be of use when not facing s rank threaths, or limited use, as it's better than the dark templar blade, but not that much more usefull most of the time. it doesn't open to many new door, or bridge any previous weakness that another card couldn't do better. Except, ofcource, boosting the ability to smite endbringers and golden nudists.
 
That a regional PRT director is so biased and distrustful of the people working for her, is so controlled by her PTSD, and is throwing around accusations like "trigger happy" when it clearly doesn't fit, doesn't speak well of her mental state.
So far the only thing that matches in this story is the trigger happy bit.
 
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What do you mean with black boxed? It's incredibly advanced tech that most normal humans wouldn't be able to understand, but other tinkers can be inspired by it. And Dragon can decipher it because that's her specialty.
"Black boxed" refers to the metheds employed by Tinker shards to make thier tech unable to be reproduced with mundane science, via quantem phsyics screwing with the tech in some way or the tech being just a physical conduit for a localised shaker or breaker power that's masquerading as real science.

Basically any method that makes Tinker-tech more magic inside a box with Led's taped to it that somehow shoots death rays than real science.
Spacial buggery of offloading the actual science on the Shard and using the "Tech" as the output kind of deal.

While yes other Tinkers can be inspired by the Tech of others it usually would be their Shards trading infomation or analyzing each others work, like the Shards are the parents of five-year-old's at a science fair Praising each of their "kids" achievements.
 
Basically any method that makes Tinker-tech more magic inside a box with Led's taped to it that somehow shoots death rays than real science.
Spacial buggery of offloading the actual science on the Shard and using the "Tech" as the output kind of deal.
Not quite canon. Wildbow's WOG on the topic was that the Tinker Shards predict and utilize weird shit like cosmic ray alignments and quantum fluctuations during the manufacturing process to explain why Tinkertech can only be made by Tinkers and needs to be maintained by a Tinker. But he also insisted it was all "real" science and engineering under the hood of tinkertech devices, not actual functionality of the devices themselves being offloaded to Shard magic via dimensional shenanigans. Which doesn't actually work because despite what Wildbow believes, that conventional science will still be more than capable of analyzing Tinkertech, especially if they can record the production process with heroic Tinkers, well enough to produce something functional. The exotic effects Wildbow turned into technobabble that "explains" the irreproducibility of Tinkertech can, at most, make a performance difference in favor of the Tinkertech, not a flat out "this stuff doesn't work at all if those factors aren't accounted for (and only a Shard is capable of accounting for them)" difference.

Hence the rise of the far more reasonable "Shard blackboxing" fanon.
 
Hence the rise of the far more reasonable "Shard blackboxing" fanon.
That fully depends if we find some new scientific breakthrough that will turn our understanding of some natural forces on its head I would say, and we sadly have no way of predicting that. That area is inside the: 'do what you want, it's fiction' zone.
 
Nuclear Fire 24
Nuclear Fire 24​

A new day, a new week, and a new school for Taylor. This is the day where we'll see if all our efforts were worth a damn! And as we walk down the stairs it feels me with pride to see Taylor dressed in the clothes I made for her, carrying her scarab over her shoulder.

So proud I am that I barely see Danny waiting for us.

"Taylor? What are you wearing?"

Curious, shouldn't he have left for his job already?

"Oh, this? Just something I pulled from the closet." Taylor lies. "I haven't used it in ages."

I'm already thinking about refurbishing her entire wardrobe. It should be super easy.

"Reminds me of one of your mother's dresses."

"Yeah. But, dad, why are you still here?" Yeah, Taylor also notices the strange presence of Danny at the house.

"I'm going to take you to Rochester." He smiles as I have never seen him smiling yet. He actually looks happy.

Taylor's back straightens, her face going very pale at that.

"Rochester?" I ask.

"Yes, Taylor's new school." Wait, what? "It wasn't easy but I managed to get her a position there through my contacts in the Association."

My hair stands on end. Shit, we never told Danny about Arcadia, did we? What were we thinking?! Of course he'd notice!

Oh, but how could we have explained all the illegal hoops and loops we went through to get Taylor there?

Shit, shit, shit! This is what happens when you treat people as non-entities. They tend to wander off and take initiatives.

"You don't have to, dad. Seriously." Taylor sounds like a robot as she says that.

"Nonsense! Let your old man escort you there."

Oh, come on! Why did he choose this time to pull his head out of his ass and start behaving like a father?

"Mister Hebert," My tone is deadly serious, "No offense but if one of my classmates arrived escorted by her parents we'd all laugh our asses off."

Taylor emphatically nods at my side. "Yes, dad. I want to have a strong start, and arriving at school with my dad won't help there."

"Your old man embarrasses you, Taylor? But it's okay, I understand." Damn, he genuinely sounds wounded by that. But seriously, how old does he think she is? Oh, yes. The last time he interacted with her in any meaningful way she must have been twelve.

I must repeat myself: why did he pick this moment to start caring again?

Not in the best of moods -so, like always- he departs for the docks, leaving Taylor and me alone to drown in our panic.

"You knew about this?" I yell.

"I- maybe? Dad did tell me something while I was studying, but I didn't pay him much attention! We never told him about Arcadia!"

"I know!"

"What's going to happen when his school calls asking why I'm not going?"

We don't have time for this! Literally. If Taylor doesn't take the bus now she'll be late for her first day at Arcadia. "This is what we're going to do: you go and enjoy Arcadia. I'll come up with a plan."

"Okay. Yeah. Let's try that. Just try to not make it weird."

Why did she feel the need to add that part?



The pencil scratches the paper as I put the images from my head into drawings. It's the last break before lunch, and I'm using the chance to go over all the cards that I have at my disposal. I have 52 powers to consider, and that's without adding the Clear Cards, and the guardians Cerberus and Yue.

There's a lot for me to consider and I don't even know where to start.

If we go for infiltration, The Silent, The Song, and The Illusion will be exceedingly useful. We'll be able to mute an area, copy the voices of people, and make them see what's not there.

If we want personal combat prowess then what we need is The Fight, The Power, and The Sword. The Fight is basically Uber, a combat engine designed to know all forms of martial arts. The Power would allow us to lift a truck over our heads and throw it as if it was a tennis ball, and The Sword would improve the Psy Blade, allowing it to cut through exotic effects.

If, on the other hand, we want blaster powers then we're also covered with the Elemental Cards. I'm tempted to build The Earthy for its ability to control the element of earth, something that would greatly enhance my drones' digging power.

And then there's The Shield, The Mirror, The Lock--

Everything is so useful!

"Drawing sexy women in class?" With a swipe of her hand, Aisha steals one of my pages, the one where I have The Dark. "A bit too clothed for my taste."

She better not stain it with her greasy fingers. "If you want nudes you'll have to pay."

"Ha! I don't have money for new socks, much less for porn." She puts it down, her eyes finding a new source of entertainment. "Hey, I didn't notice you had a brand new backpack!" She lifts her foot and brings it down on my scarab, leaving an ugly shoe-mark on the black fabric.

Oh boy, does this remind me of my previous run through high school.

"Was that necessary?" I give her the flattest look I can muster.

"Of course! It's like pulling the film out of a new cell phone!"

"Whatever you say." I wave my hand in dismissal. It's not like it'll cost me much to wash it, I just need to give the order and the Scarab will do that on its own. And thinking about it, Aisha might help Taylor and me with our conundrum. "Say, if someone wanted to abandon their school and not have the faculty call their parents, what would they have to do?"

"Keep missing school until they get tired of calling your family and they just give up! At least that's what worked for me in Winslow. If you figure out how to make that work here, let me know."

Well, so much for that idea. "I'll keep you informed."

As if smelling that we're talking about something illegal, Missy walks into our classroom.

"Peter. Aisha." Her eyebrows knit into a frown as she looks over my drawings.

Aisha picks The Watery and offers it to Missy, "Do you want a topless mermaid?"

"Hey!" I do not like when people touch my things without my permission. Thankfully Missy doesn't accept the drawing and pushes it away.

"No, thank you. I'm here to talk to you, Aisha." She is? Now that's different.

"Of course you are. You're boring like that, miss cop."

The Ward pinches the bridge of her nose. "Look, I'm trying to be nice here."

"So am I! And I'm failing!" And to accentuate her point, Aisha puts her feet on the desk.

Oh, boy, I can almost see the throbbing vein on Missy's forehead.

"Maybe you should hear what she has to say first?" I offer an olive branch.

"Fine, fine. Speak up, miss cop."

Missy clears her throat, going into what I have come to recognize as her 'professional' persona. "I want to know how things are in your neighborhood. With the gangs getting more active it can't be safe."

"It never was safe and it never will be." Aisha shrugs. "But we're tough bitches. We'll survive."

"Still, if you need help tell me because the gangs are a threat to all of us."

And like that, Aisha's ever-present smile is gone. "Oh, please," She says as she puts her feet back on the floor. "What can a pretty white girl like you fear? Eidolon himself will descend from the sky if someone as much as looks ugly at you."

She shouldn't have said that. Not to Missy.

"You don't know me." There's an edge of menace in Missy's tone.

"What's there to know? You'll never see a gang member in person. You're nothing but a spoiled rich brat whose main concern is where mommy and daddy will take her for the holidays."

It's like watching a trainwreck in the making. I should be backing away but I'm too terrified to move.

"This is what I get for trying to be nice to you." Thankfully Missy decides to de-escalate the situation and walks away, leaving me sweating profusely.

Well--

That was a mess. And I refuse to believe that Aisha didn't know what she was doing because there's no way for her to have pressed every-single-one of Missy's buttons by accident!

"You know that Missy isn't like that, right?"

"Of course I do." Of course she bloody does! "Did you know that she has a knife scar on the side of her chest? You can barely see it, but it's there." I wonder how she knows what a knife scar looks like, but I might not want the answer. "And I'm sure that she'd kick my ass in a straight fight. Not like I'd give her one."

"Then why antagonize her?"

"Because seeing her throw a fit is hilarious!" She laughs. "And, look, this entire shit pisses me off. I grew up with the gangs. They were always a problem for my family, and the PRT did nothing. It's only when they become a problem for the rest of the city that they start caring about us. Only then they remember that, yes, Lung kidnaps girls like me for his whorehouses, and that Kaiser hunts us for sport. But what can you do?"

The tip of my pencil snaps as I press it against the desk. "Kill them."

"Ha! See? That's why we're friends." She passes me a sharpener and soon the bell rings.



Returning to our old routine, I arrive home way before Taylor does. First I fill Long John's bowl, and then I ready my equipment to start working on the cards tomorrow at the earliest. Lastly, I check on the progress of my drones. Another half a dozen have been built, and the second construction zone has almost been depleted of useful material. The exploration tunnels I ordered have expanded, and at the end of the next week, my drones should be reaching the docks, giving me access to abandoned containers, and then the graveyard.

Soon I'll have access to that treasure trove of materials!

Sadly the units I sent Downtown haven't been lucky finding Coil's base. Not like I can blame them, it is a big area to cover after all.

A dilemma now is what direction to take the hive in: should I keep the focus on economy, or should I start building some military units? I could build some Zerglings now, useful against any normal human, but not so much against capes. I need Hydralisks for that. The problem then is that I can't build those without a Hydralisk Den, and that will be costly.

I'll need more drones, and more construction sites to farm.

I order the excavation of some exploratory tunnels to the north and then go to Taylor's room.

Ugh. Her closet's a tragedy, but one that's perfectly salvageable. Recycling several of Annette's old dresses, I put my scarab to start sewing new clothes. Soon she'll have a different dress for each day of the week!

That's enough clothes to satisfy a girl, right?

I'm almost done remodeling her wardrobe when she arrives.

"Welcome home, Taylor! How was your day?" I greet her.

"It was fine." She mumbles, sounding more tired than she looks. "It was just fine."

"You don't sound very convinced."

She puts her backpack on the table and then lets herself fall on the sofa. "I don't know." She grumps. "The teacher picked me to answer the questions."

That sounds-- normal? "Did you know the answers?"

"I did," Ok, that's good, "Same ones from the entrance exam. She must have been checking if I hadn't cheated. They did the same back in Winslow whenever I got a high mark."

As if Taylor would cheat! I did offer but she refused.

Thinking about it, good thing that she's as stubborn as a mule about that.

"The food was good at least. Better than Winslow." She continues, "The door to the roof was locked but I managed to take my lunch at the library. They have a section there for people who want to study during their lunch break. That was nice. The library girl was nice to me too."

"Were Emma and Sophia there?"

"They were, but they didn't talk to me. Sophia acted as if she didn't even know me, so that's something."

Sophia must be worried of Taylor talking, or Emma dragging her into an attack against Taylor and having all their lies uncovered. For much of how Sophia likes to talk big, she's a coward at heart.

"And Emma?"

"Oh, she looked furious," Taylor says with a slight smile of satisfaction. "But also avoided me. I'm fine with that."

It sounds like she had a normal day, but she doesn't sound happy about that. "Do you want to keep going?"

"Well, first day at Arcadia and no one threw anything at me. Or tried to trip me. Not like they could because I had my bugs checking everyone around me, but I think that I'll be staying for now." She puts the dog down and then gives me a very serious look. "So, have you thought about what to do about Rochester?"

Oh, of course.

"I did." I nod. "And I have several ideas."

"Let's hear them."

I search from my backpack and pull out my drawings. The first one I show Taylor is that of a long-haired girl holding a mirror. "Idea one: I make a clone of you, and send them to Rochester in your place." The Mirror can take the form of any person. She doesn't get their memories or their powers in the case of parahumans, but that's something we can work around.

Sadly Taylor doesn't look as excited as I am. "What?! I told you-- Don't you have something, I don't know, less weird?" She rubs her forehead as if massaging a headache.

I don't know what's so weird about it but I wouldn't mind doing something less expensive too. I need to work on more attack and defense options. "Okay, okay. I guess that cloning Danny is out of the question too," The next drawing is that of a girl in a dress that resembles a harp, with a headdress in the shape of a treble clef, "So what about mimicking his voice and calling Rochester telling them that the deal's off?"

"That the deal's off? Why do you have to make it sound so criminal? And won't dad have to go in person at some point?"

"Oh, I already have that covered." The Illusion isn't humanoid. Instead, it resembles a kaleidoscope. "I can use a holographic disguise to look like your dad, and together we go to have this sorted out."

"What if someone tries to shake your hand?"

"I tell them that I'm a germaphobe."

I can hear Taylor's heavy breathing as she sets both drawings aside. "Let's put that in the 'maybe' pile. What else?"

"Well--" What else do I have here? Ah, yes, The Dream: a woman with a massive hat that obscures her eyes. "I don't think you'd want us to go into Danny's dreams to implant a subconscious command to make him forget about this whole ordeal, would you?" If looks could kill, the one Taylor's throwing at me right now would have left nothing but a crater where I stand. "Yeah, I have nothing. My only remaining option is hiding underneath a desk and waiting for everything to fix itself."

Taylor sighs. "Let's go visit some hospitals. I want some fresh air, and maybe the exercise will help us think of a better solution."

"Sounds good to me. I can always feed my drones more data on human biology." I whistle and my backpack transforms into my scarab, a twin of Taylor's own, only differentiated by the fact that it's black instead of red. I put it over my head and it unfolds into my helmet: one that resembles a gas mask with its wide porthole-like lenses. And now it's time to say something that I always wanted to say, "It's morphin time."

My civilian clothes disappear and are replaced by my costume, one that makes me look like a Skitarii ranger with its hood and wide sleeves. My clothes are pitch black, and while I designed Taylor's costume to carry her implants underneath her clothes, mine are on the outside, connecting to my skin through several openings in the robe. With my implants painted red, I share Taylor's color scheme, mirroring the robes of a Machine Priest of Stygies VIII instead of one from Mars. Thematically appropriate, considering their obsession with xenotech.

"So, what do you think?" I ask her, striking a pose with my hands at my waist.

"It suits you. It's definitely very 'you'."

Taylor changes into her own costume and we depart into the city.



"Is it just me, or was that too easy?" Taylor says as we hop from roof to roof, on our way back home after a productive afternoon. I know we shouldn't expect to face any major problem every time we step outside the house but, as I look at the moon high in the night sky, I find myself agreeing with her.

We focused on the critical cases: pneumonia, heart problems, and infection, leaving the rest to heal by natural means. In total, we visited some thirty people across half a dozen hospitals and clinics. There were some PRT officers keeping an eye outside the patients' rooms, but it wasn't like they could stop us. We just teleported in and did our thing. We did see Glory Girl patrolling around one of the hospitals but it was because Panacea was working in it.

It was a very good day!

And yet it feels like the calm before the storm.

Even when they aren't doing anything criminal, it's normal to see people dressed in gang paraphernalia, but today we didn't see even one person with a swastika. The streets are calm. Unnaturally so. The silence is only broken by the PRT cars and motorbikes keeping the peace, followed by the odd hero.

The gangs must be keeping their head down, gearing up for something big.

Taylor stops me the moment that home is at range. The reason for that becomes obvious the moment I look at it with my visor: Danny's in the living room, seated on a couch. That shouldn't be anything weird, but normally he's with his nose buried in a mountain of papers. This time he's seated next to the door, glancing at it as if he was waiting for us.

Well, let's stop thinking about the problems of the city and focus on our own personal ones.

"Too late to send in the clones?" Taylor asks with a dash of fatalistic humor in her words.

We find an alley to change into our civilian clothes and make the rest of the way on foot.

What could this be?

Did Danny find out we're capes?

Did he find my hatchery?

Did he find Long John?

I'm not particularly fond of any of those options. I take Taylor's hand for courage, and together we get ready for whatever it is that fate has in store for us.

"Dad, we're ba--" Taylor calls as we enter, but gets interrupted when the man in question rushes to her and locks her in a hug.

Okay, the good news is that Danny doesn't look angry. The bad news is that I'm just as confused as before.

"Taylor! Why didn't you tell me?"

"T-tell you what, dad?" Taylor stutters, as confused as I am with the unexpected outburst.

"That you had taken Arcadia's entrance exam!"

"Eh?"

Full of pride, Danny goes to the table where he has an opened envelope. He picks the letter up and shows it to us.

It reads: Miss Taylor Hebert, from Arcadia High we congratulate you for--'

Oh.

Ohhhhhh.

Taylor had remained after taking the exam waiting for the result, but apparently it's the faculty's policy to formally congratulate the students by sending letters to their families.

"Ah, yes, that." Taylor's cheeks turn a deep shade of red as she scratched the back of her head. "I wasn't sure if I'd pass, so I didn't want to give you false hope."

"False hopes? As if there could have been any doubts you'd ace the exams!" He laughs, shaking Taylor in his euphory. "But how did you get in? Those exams cost a small fortune."

"Peter helped me with that. With the entire Winslow mess, Arcadia opened its exams for more people. There was a vacancy and I took the chance."

"This we have to celebrate! And don't worry about Rochester, I already called them and told them you wouldn't be going." Seems that the problem fixed itself! Not like I hope for that to happen again. I slowly try to back away but Danny grabs me and forces me into the family hug. "And you too, young man. You're part of this family too."

I can't move. We have barely interacted. I know nothing of him.

I don't like this. My useless struggles against his adult strength must look like the petty tantrum of an embarrassed teenager.

But Taylor laughs.

And it's nice to see Danny and her behaving like a happy family again.

For her sake, I endure.

It's just a pity that this relationship has been built on a messy entanglement of lies, but what can you do about it?
 
Mostly a slash of life to work a bit more on character interactions and finish the 'get to arcadia' arc with a nice bow. And to give Danny something because the poor guy deserves it. He is trying after all.
 
What? What? Being Taylor is... not... suffering?
It's a weird contrast that Peter's thought process for "How do we get Taylor out of Rochester?" is "Let's make clones," whereas perfectly normal solutions (like telling Danny she got accepted into the best school in the city) would have solved everything.
When all you have is a hammer...
 
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