Oh, I didn't mean for it to come across as criticism of your writing. I think you captured the "I'm old enough to be taken seriously"-vibe found him children everywhere perfectly.
Thanks! Writing child characters as if they were actual children is surprisingly hard.
They would be required to release identities of minors in order to prosecute. Minors that are also currently labeled 'Hero' by the public. Minors that also currently own 'territory'. Based upon circumstantial evidence.
Correct. That's why the PRT (or at least Renick) will have to think long and hard before doing that.
Sure, the PRT did it. And when Taylor murdered the guy who did it, they offered her a job. I'm downplaying it, slightly, but they wouldn't have been willing to work with Skitter if she'd killed any other Director, but because Alexandria and Tagg were playing fast and loose with the Rules, they didn't come down on her like the fist of God, even though she murdered government officials.
The Unwritten Rules aren't something that you go to prison for breaking (Unlike the Endbringer Truce, which is taken a lot more seriously). They're something that when you break them, people don't investigate your death too closely. Look at the people who break them in canon - It generally doesn't work out for them, and no-one's too sad when they die.
I see that mostly as the exception that proves the rule. Taylor had grown too powerful on her own at that point and so it became convenient for the rules to start applying again.
Honestly? The way I see the Unwritten Rules is as this:
Gang: Hey, the unwritten rules are awesome!
Independent: So, will you protect me if someone attacks my family?
G: Yes but only if you join us. Otherwise we'll just stand by the side and laugh at you.
I: Ok... can I hear other offers?
G: Sure! But don't take too long! Accidents can happen. 'Accidents' like returning home and finding your whole family murdered by us.
I'm pretty sure it's against the law to unmask a Protectorate cape, unless that's fanon. You also have to take into account that Wildbow has ret-conned things on the down-low as well. So some facts are different depending on when you read the story.
I'm honestly not sure. I want to say yes but I'm guessing this would only apply for government-approved heroes.
I think they will soon hate me here ...
I would like to write a lot about the last part ... but I have almost 2 am and I really want to sleep, so I will be brief:
To me alone, it seems to me that everything that happens in this chapter is a bit "sucked out of finger" just to give Peter a good kick in the direction of active confrontation with the PRT? Again, Missy ... I never liked Vista as a character , so my opinion is biased (I just don't know where the fandom is so special to her) but ... damn me, she turned out to be even worse than I could bear. It seemed that she did EVERYTHING to to aggravate the situation as much as possible, and at the same time she still has the audacity to feel triumphant and smug. And, besides, those who, in theory, should be more reasonable and experienced, actually let her get away with it. Yeah ...
I don't think you can see it, but I rolled my eyes so deep that I could count the convolutions in my brain ...
Understandable but I'd point out that Peter has been doing everything in his power to antagonize the PRT. From burning public property, to creating self-reproducing robots, to taking over territory and undermining lawful gubernamental authority. A confrontation is inevitable in some form or another.
And I'd say that 'why did the fandom turned X into the Y character?' Is what the Worm fandom is made of. Any fandom, really.
Goddammit, Vista! Stop listening to the fucking conflict drive attached to your brain!
Ah, but even if heroes might protect a given territory, government sanctioned Heroes™ do not, and if you aren't a Hero™, then you must be a villain (source: conflict drive inside Vista's head).
This isn't any conflict drive. This is Vista being 11, blonde, pretty, from a relatively well-off family, and having spend the last couple years eating the propaganda of the 'we're totally not child soldiers'-program with a shovel.
She's not really in contact with the plights of the small man.
Couldn't heavy gear also get clockblocker onto their side by revealing that they were the ones who healed his dad? I wonder who else they could take...
They weren't. In the Panacea Interlude the one to heal his father was her. Peter did try but leukemia (I think I made his dad have leukemia, I can't remember right now) was beyond what the drones would just fix.