Which of the other starter choices do you want to see interludes from most?

  • Dishonored

    Votes: 3 7.0%
  • Legend Of Zelda

    Votes: 9 20.9%
  • Shadow Of Mordor

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann

    Votes: 4 9.3%
  • Preacher

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • JoJo's Bizarre Adventure

    Votes: 8 18.6%
  • Fist Of The North Star

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kill Six Billion Demons

    Votes: 12 27.9%
  • The Zombie Knight

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Mob Psycho 100

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Author's Choice

    Votes: 3 7.0%

  • Total voters
    43
  • Poll closed .
Interlude: Pain O'Clock
"'llo, there!"

Marcel Blaine looks down from his vantage point on the cart, over his horses and down to the man walking along the side of the road. The lantern light is dim, especially out here in the forest, but he can make out some details of the stranger.

"Marcel, don't, you know it's not safe to pick up hitchhikers-" his lovely wife Judith says, squeezing her husband's hand. She sits with her legs splayed, heavy with their third child, and Marcel couldn't help but feel a little guilty for stressing her like this.

The man turns, shifting his waist-length blond hair out of the way with a hand, revealing just how rail-thin he truly is. He looks up at Marcel with a lazy smile, two bright blue eyes peering out from the thin curtain of hair that he didn't quite manage to clear away.

He can't quite pin down why, but Marcel suddenly feels like the wisest action is to either stay perfectly still or work the horses into a frenzy and try to outrun him.

Then the man's smile widens, his eyes brighten, and the feeling passes, so quickly and completely that he begins to wonder if he'd imagined it.

"Hello. On your way to Vale, too?" the man asks, his voice quiet and polite.

"Mhm. Got wares to sell, 'nd I'm dropping t'children off at a boarding school."

Marcel becomes rapidly aware of shifting from the back, and soon after, a head pops up to see who her father is talking to.

"Hi mister!" his eldest, Melissa, says, waving a hand rapidly at the stranger. "Your hair is pretty."

The man chuckles, waving back.

"Thank you, I do try to take care of it," he says, and Marcel swears he can see the slightest tinge of pink around his ears at the compliment.

"Marcel," Judith whispers.

He turns to look at her and is somewhat surprised to see concern instead of disapproval.

"He doesn't have any shoes," she says after a moment. "His feet must be raw."

Marcel turns again, watching the man as he chats away with his children, and realises his wife is right- the man is barefoot. His feet look relatively unharmed, though, is the odd thing.

"'Ere, bit odd going barefoot, no? These roads might just be dirt, but they'll tear yer feet up just the same after a while."

The man's eyebrows rise before he looks down at his feet.

"Ah, yes, my last pair gave up a while back. A particularly nasty gravel patch just tore straight through the soles, I'm afraid. No big loss, though- they were just a pair of old trainers I bartered for."

Marcel turned to his wife, and a silent conversation ensued. All paranoia on Judith's part had long since been smothered by a certain duty of care, and it didn't take them long to figure it would be cruel to let a man grind his feet down making the trip to Vale.

"... Y'know, I've no objection giving you a lift oop road- let ye rest yer feet 'n all."

The man considers it for a moment, judging the shattered moon as it rises over the horizon.

"Hm… how far from Vale are we, anyway?"

"Ooh, 'nother hundred miles and change t'the mountains, at least, then that's a solid twenty miles 'fore you reach the border. Good two, three hundred after that t'city proper. Ain't many villages between here and there either, 'f yer hoping to get ahold of another pair of shoes."

The man blanches slightly at that.

"... Well, it would be rude of me to reject such hospitality. Thank you, mister…"

"Marcel, Marcel Blaine. The little one who should be asleep is Melissa, her brother Peat's been out cold for an hour now, and this one," he pats Judith's stomach gently, "will be Lucius in about a month's time."

"Or Lily if it's a girl," Judith chimes in.

The man smiles.

"Basil. It's wonderful to meet you all."

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The ride is quiet but personable, once Basil hops on. Marcel does lament that getting Melissa to sleep will be nigh-impossible, now that she has someone new to talk to. After a few minutes of straining his neck to try and talk to him, Judith takes the reins off him and all but pushes him under the wagon cover to go and talk to him.

Now that he's sat opposite him, and could see the man in more detail by lamplight, Marcel realises that he isn't just thin- he borders on hollow, his chest and stomach almost concave for the lack of anything filling it. He was far too mobile to be starving, though- he didn't have the potbelly of malnutrition, either.

No, he just… looked like a Vacuoni mummy decided to take a walk and update its wardrobe.

"So, Basil- where are you coming from?" he asks, keeping his suspicions to himself.

"Oh, nowhere special, I'm afraid- I do a few circles of the land between Vale and Vacuo every couple years, visiting villages and the like. You know Honeystrand?"

Marcel perks up.

"Aye, I know Honeystrand! Some of t'best honey and wax you'll ever find!"

"Mm, well, that was my last stop."

"What do ye do that needs ye movin' around so often? Huntsman?"

"Doctor, if you'd believe me."

Basil smiles as Marcel stalls for a moment, looking the man over in a new light.

… No, yeah, he could see it. Cut the hair short, button him up, he'd actually look like a fairly respectable member of society. And he does lack the certain… pizzazz that Huntsmen have.

With a shrug, he pulls his pipe from a pocket, fills it with a pinch of cloves and tobacco from his pouch, and, after a glance at Judith, reaches into a much smaller pouch, pulling free a desiccated Gliss shell, crumbling the iridescent carapace into his pipe with a sound like crinkling paper and bells.

Basil raises an eyebrow, a smirk creeping up his face.

"A man's allowed his vices, aye?" Marcel whispers conspiratorially.

"I'm in no position to judge," Basil whispers back like he's sharing a secret of his own.

The end of the pipe disappears somewhere under his beard, as he pats himself down for matches. After a moment, he grumbles, bushy monobrow turning down in a confused scowl.

"Allow me," Basil says, moving forward and holding up a hand for him.

Marcel looks at him in confusion, before his new friend's arm was suffused in a pale reddish-brown light- like baked clay. After a moment, the light shifted up to his hand, thickening and brightening into a ring around his splayed fingers, before he snaps his fingers and-

A flame winked into existence, flickering in the air like the last embers of a coal fire, but stable. Marcel gapes for a few moments, before seeing the strain on Basil's face and quickly lighting his pipe.

The light fades, and the fire gutters out, only just surviving in the cloves, Gliss, and tobacco.

"... That's… one helluva trick you've got there, Basil. And that were Aura jus' now, too- I thought you weren't a Huntsman?"

He takes a puff of his pipe, waving away the spiralling, indigo smoke of the Gliss before Judith could notice. The sudden brightening sensation, and the slight shimmer in his eyes, was damn relaxing after a day of staring at a horse's arse.

Ah… he almost misses smoking them straight from the shell on the Menagerie coast. Almost.

Basil smiles.

"I'm a doctor first and foremost- that doesn't mean I can't da-haah-bble," he says, before covering his mouth as he yawns. "Beg pardon. It's been quite a long day with very few breaks."

"Oh, of course- I won't keep you up any longer. I'll get you a blanket, it's to be cold tonight."

"That would be wonderful."

Soon enough, Basil was handed a well-padded blanket, and a small throw pillow to rest his head on.

"You get some rest, alroight?"

"I will- oh, one thing. I've been told that I'm, quite a fitful sleeper- mumbling and the like. So if you hear anything like that, don't worry too much about it."

"Oi've been sleeping next to a pregnant woman on and off for the past seven years, I'm sure ye sleep like a baby compared to that."

An annoyed "Oi!" rings out from the front of the wagon.

Marcel snickers at his wife, before wishing Basil goodnight, and leaving him to dream.

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The walls are white. Painfully so- bleached into sterility, then bleached some more, as if trying to leech the last of the soul from the stone. Even the grout holding the tiles on has been painted an almost radiant white, and above, a fluorescent light flickers, bathing the room in a sickly green glow and a buzzing hum that rattles in the back of your skull.

There is nothing natural about this place.

Behind you, behind a thin glass screen and rows of cheap plastic seats, fused to metal bar jutting from the ground, and extending deep into the darkness, filled with an impassive audience- dozens of people in the light, thousands in the darkness beyond, all staring with silent indifference at the scene in front of them.

In front of you, a chair you'd hoped to never see again- all ancient wood and leather straps, a medical face mask dangling limply to one side, a canister peeking out from just behind. The light flickers for a moment, and the chair is no longer empty.

"Hello, baby."

The voice is quiet, throaty- a low croon from the crook of your neck, and it still sends shivers down your spine, breeds desires you'd thought dead long ago.

"Why do you keep lying to yourself about this?"

A smile tugs at your lips, fighting against a grimace and stinging tears.

"It's a terrible habit, I know," you manage to croak out.

She smiles, and your heart flutters like it did the first time you saw it.

"Back to Vale, then? After so long?"

"Why not?

For a moment, all you can see sitting there instead is Ada, not as she was, but as you imagine her after 7 years to grow- tall, willowy, her hair still kept long enough to reach her waist. The difference between the two is so subtle you barely notice the change, until you see the bloody wound where her left eye should be.

"Ah," Ada-Not-Ada says, "looking for a replacement?"

"Nobody could replace you. Nobody could try."

"You did."

"I am a
tribute to you," you correct her.

She smirks.

"She certainly couldn't replace me, either way. You know, you claim to be a tribute, and yet you refuse such an important aspect of me."

The light flickers, the scene shifts. The mask is gone, replaced by a large, metal cylinder placed against the back of her skull, and you know that you cannot move to save her-

"Don't lie to yourself, Boriah. I died screaming."

The charge goes off with a deafening sound and a flash of light that quickly consumes your vision whole.

And behind it all- screaming.


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You wake with a start. The screaming persists, and you realise that it is real- it is present.

Male. Female. Something deeper, animalistic- not done in fear.

Grimm.

You're up in a flash, moving towards the front of the wagon so fast that minor pieces of tchotchke are dragged with you in your wake, before dragging your body over the top of the seats and immediately spotting the attackers.

It's a smorgasbord- six Grimm, three Beowolves, two Boarbatusks, and at the helm of the group- looming above the humans all thick leather, thin bones, and a disturbingly, almost-human face, a caricature of the high-cheekboned noble, mouth full of needlepoint teeth.

Vampyr.

It stares at Marcel, on the ground- one leg is slowly turning purple and swelling, it seems he's broken his tibia- while Judith places herself between her husband and the monsters, brandishing the riding crop like a sword.

She's only alive because it amuses the Vampyr. You have to believe that because the alternative is that a heavily pregnant woman has been fighting off this many Grimm by herself with a riding crop, and that's just a little terrifying to consider.

You launch yourself into the group at speed, your nigh-weightless body serving you well as you grab one Beowolf by the scruff of its neck and drag it into the forest. You easily flip and plant your feet in the ground, imparting your momentum into the Grimm, so it can impart its momentum into that tree.

The Grimm splatters into a cloud of smog on impact, its bone armour and mask shattering against the surrounding forest, the memories of the sounds deafening in the following silence.

You turn to see the rest staring at you, the remaining Beowolf and Boarbatusks in rage, barely showing the intelligence needed to assess a new threat. The Vampyr… looks at you in curiosity. Like a child trying to figure out what its new toy can do.

Well, if little Timmy wants to play so badly-

"Judith," you say, calmly, flaring your Aura as brightly as it can go, the best threat display you can manage, "get your husband, and get to safety. Stop the bleeding, and I'll help him when I'm done."

The Vampyr's head twitches to one side, a frankly disturbing motion, so focused on you that it ignores Judith hauling Marcel off, struggling the entire way.

You don't break eye contact. Whoever breaks first, loses, and Grimm don't need to blink.

Then again, neither do you.

It feels like minutes pass. Hours, even- all while waiting for the husband and wife to disappear behind the wagon.

"Papa!" you hear a young boy's voice say, hurriedly hushed.

The Vampyr breaks first.

In seconds you're on it, driving an Aura-coated spear hand into its throat- at least, that was the plan, before it brought one of the leathery folds under one arm up, blocking the strike and entangling your arm in the suddenly loosened skin.

It probably didn't expect your arm to suddenly become soft, malleable, easily pulled from the underside of its folded wing before it could properly grapple you in place. While you're doing that, you drive a foot into the neck of a Beowolf as it sprints past, trying to go for the family you're protecting, killing it with a strained yelp, then stepping onto its body just in time to plant your other foot on the ground and flip the overgrown dog into the Vampyr's face, letting it burst into a thick cloud of choking smog- hopefully blinding it as much as it would blind you.

You hop backwards and attempt to circle the creature, to the part unprotected by limbs and wings and large sharp teeth.

It cottons on and blasts you in the face with the last of the smog by using its wings like a massive leather fan. You stumble back, eyes and nose stinging, only just leaning back in time to dodge the flash of white claws aimed for your face.

This isn't working- your Semblance doesn't work on Grimm flesh, and without it, you're just punching a sheet of loose leather. You need something sharp.

For a moment, you consider a pair of your ribs sharpened to stakes. Then, you spot the pair of Boarbatusks quietly slinking towards the family you've been trying so hard to keep alive. One rounds the corner of the cart, and the screaming begins anew.

"Oh no you don't-" you growl, twisting on one heel and launching yourself towards the pair.

You land on the rear one, not weighing enough to topple it through sheer physics alone. Instead, you flatten your hands, let skin and flesh ripple and bones grow soft, and slide them under its mask. The creature goes berserk as you pull this way and that, trying to work the mask free from its head, but no matter what it does, it can't buck you off while you try to wrench its face off- which is exactly what you do to force it to gore its partner, again, and again, and again, until it just collapses into a pile of decaying Grimm.

Your fingers curl up, finding tiny holds in the texture of the mask's underside, before you heave, wiry muscles straining as you rip it from the Boarbatusk's face with a sound of snapping tendons and screaming pig. You jam the tusks down into its neck, then leap off and leave it to die to its wounds, only just whirling around in time to raise the mask and halt a strike from the Vampyr.

If that had hit, your heart would be in its hand right now.

You stare once more, watching its eyes and spotting the flicker of discomfort in there. It has never faced anyone who would rip a Grimm's mask off to use as a weapon. You think it doesn't like that idea.

You think that scares it.

Good.

You respond by attacking with the mask, driving the razor-sharp tusks into the thick leather of its wings when it attempts to block out of instinct, tearing it in three like you're using a pair of novelty scissors.

The Vampyr screams in pain, flailing away before you can finish the job and separate the wing from its arm entirely- you press the advance, forcing it… back… into the deep, dark woods…

You realise your mistake a second too late, watching in curious horror as it steps into a shadow.

It does not step out again.

Straining your ears, you cease breathing, listening to the forest, for the rustle of leaves, the ragged sound and acrid stench of Grimm breath- for movement unaccompanied by a heartbeat.

You hear four humans behind the cart, and one foetus, the former rapid, thready, one struggling badly with incredible pain, while the latter couldn't care less about everything that's happening.

In the forest… birds, no longer roosting, but alert, looking for threats to them and their children. Any larger animals had long since fled, and the land-based ones were safe in their burrows.

You swallow. You feel the mask in your hands growing frail- it may last longer than the rest of a Grimm, but it's still from a Grimm. It's not exactly something you're versed in judging, but you imagine it has maybe a minute before it's useless as a weapon- 90 seconds before it completely crumbles into dust.

That Vampyr better turn up fast, or you're up a very brown creek without a paddle, think, think, agh you're not a Huntsman you don't know how to deal with specific Grimm-

The look the Vampyr had on its face flashes through your mind. That look of boredom, the way its head tilted in curiosity- the way it refused to move until you broke eye contact with it.

You're no Huntsman, but you know of the Vampyr. How it toys with people- killing them one mouthful of blood at a time. So high and mighty, so easy to manipulate by just dangling its addiction in front of it and challenging its pride.

You almost empathise.

Rushing back towards the caravan, towards the guttering light of the lanterns, you turn, take a deep breath, and then take your shot in the dark.

"COWARD!" you roar. "COME ON OUT HERE, YOU MUST BE PARCHED. AND WHAT'S STANDING BETWEEN YOU AND FOUR FREE MEALS? AN 80-POUND MAN USING A GRIMM MASK AS A WEAPON. YOU'RE PATHETIC! YOU WANT BLOOD SO BAD!?"

You twist the mask, and grab the razor-sharp tusk, dragging it across your palm and slicing it open. You pull it free, watching blood begin to well up and stream down towards your wrist. Holding it out, you hear a rustle in the nearby trees- you feel the eyes on you.

One last push.

"Come get it."

It launches from the shadows, all former poise and grace completely gone- it is an animal now, nothing more. Whatever light had been on upstairs has now shattered in its socket.

The sheer speed with which the Vampyr moves barely leaves you enough time to register that an attack is happening. Reflex alone saves you, bringing the Boarbatusk mask up just in time for it to shatter in two blocking the first attempt to punch your heart out. Shifting your grip, you place your thumbs through its eyeholes, hands wrapping around the thinner edge of the mask- now you actually have weapons.

Neat.

You use the tusks like claws, hooking the Vampyr's wrists and redirecting them, pulling its arm this way or that and exposing either wing or chest to a slash or gouge, slowly whittling it down to nothing.

At first, you fear it's not going fast enough, but then it makes a mistake- it tries to kick you away. It happens fast enough that you can't dodge, so you just soften the flesh and bone around your stomach, letting its foot sink in up to the ankle.

It's not a pleasant feeling, having someone else's foot inside you, especially as it shifts around while the Vampyr tries to compensate for its lost balance. Before it can either pull itself free, or push you to the ground, you place the tusks around its ankle, and with a yell of exertion, cut its foot off.

You stumble back, as does it, and take the opportunity to extract your prize before it disintegrates completely, releasing gods know how much smog into your body. The Vampyr falls on its back, screaming in pain. Liquid smog spurts from onto a nearby patch of grass, quickly evaporating and leaving behind dead, blackened greenery in its stead. Taking as deep a breath as you can, you walk towards the Grimm as it scuttles back, its movements getting sloppier as it continues to lose blood-equivalent until you're close enough to slam a foot down on its chest.

"I am tired, I am angry, I have a godsbedamned hole in my gut, you are not getting away now just to come back and annoy me later-"

Placing the tusks on either side of its shoulders, the sharp points digging into the back of its neck, the Vampyr appears to realise what you're doing. It makes a noise that may actually be some attempt at pleading for its life.

You walk away from its body as it slowly disintegrates, its head slowly rolling into the ditch you kicked it towards, and finally get a chance to check on the Blaine family.

"Everyone alright?" you ask casually, to the sound of screams.

Perhaps you're more tired than you thought because it takes a moment to realise that they're not screams because of Grimm, or, you doing your thing, but they're screams for you. This is particularly confusing because you can't think of any reason for-

You look down.

… Ah.

"Sorry, sorry-" you say, dipping back behind the other side of the cart and, ah, adjusting yourself.

The skin's a little thin, here and there, but it's certainly passable for an unharmed human. Walking back around, Judith stares at you in mild confusion, now that there's no gaping hole where your midriff should be. You ignore her, staring at Marcel's leg- it's truly ballooned out now, and turned a shade of purple you more associate with plums than anything.

"Doctor," he says, voice shaky but still keeping some kind of humour to it. "Anything you can do?"

You kneel next to him, and carefully check the leg for deformities- no open wound, which is good, it appears to be a closed fracture. Silver linings, you suppose.

"I can help you, but, er, you should probably put the children back to bed. It's not going to be a pretty sight."

Judith begins to bustle, herding Peat and Melissa back into the cart, leaving you and Marcel alone.

"So, Mr Blaine- do you trust me, as your doctor?"

He laughs.

"En't like ah've much choice, izzit? It's you, or Judith and a bunch of old rags."

"We all have choices to make," you say, smiling gently at him. "It seems to be a complete fracture, but it shouldn't be displaced, I don't think- so long as you get some medical attention, you'll be in quite a bit of pain, but ultimately fine. Otherwise, I could use my Semblance on you, and get you back on your feet in a few days."

"What's t'downside?"

"About 10 minutes of incredible pain, because I don't have access to any anaesthetics. You'll feel every second of me rooting around in there."

Marcel takes a moment to think, then slowly nods his assent. You smile and make your own choice.

"Deep breath, now."

You drag a finger down the front of his calf, splitting the skin and flesh, revealing the bone.

To his absolute credit, Marcel doesn't scream once while you work.
 
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Interlude: Evernight
It is the time before dawn.
Sorcerer- Ataraxia's The Unexplained, 1975
Elsewhere, the sky slowly turns that twilit-grey that is a signal to those who cannot sleep, that they will not sleep tonight. Here, the sky is always the same blood-red, no matter the hour, no matter the day- like there is always a fire raging in the distance.

It's peaceful, in its own way.

Deep in the Land of Darkness, residing in the ancient castle named Evernight, the Witch-Queen prepares for a special council. Not the humans that she calls her inner circle, those, experiments, pets, really- no.

Petty playthings, in comparison.

In her bedroom, kept clean but barely used, she pulls on a robe older than Vale, and still as soft and perfectly black as it was the first time she laid eyes on it. The Mothman was a failed experiment of a Grimm, but his wings made for fine tailor's cloth. She walks into the throne room just as the Beringels she had commanded to clear it of any unnecessary obstructions finish dragging the room-length table to one side. That sound is going to ring in her ears for days after she was done here.

Ascending to her throne, she settles in on the plush fabric, and with a deep breath to centre herself, she whispers a single word.

The crystalline walls of the castle shudder- creaking with raw power. Twelve Seers float in, bobbing silently across the room, their tendrils gently swaying to their movement. With slow, deliberate movements, they arrange themselves around her to form a perfect semicircle. The orange lights within the crystalline structure of their heads shift, each Seer showing a different place, a different visage- each one as alien as the next.

Three avian figures, one with a large hairline fracture that circles its mask, are settled in a forest clearing. Occasionally, they flicker in and out of view so quickly that they simply appear as blurs. When they do so, they generally come back with spatters of blood on them.

A single blood-red eye, so large that it takes up the entire view of the screen.

A creature that seems to mirror Salem in stature and grandeur- sitting with legs crossed, head resting against a single bony finger. However, its throne sits in the middle of a dead, blackened forest, in the ruins of an ancient, overgrown city. A simple rod of blackened yew sits next to it, strung with ancient fibre that holds a cruel-looking hook on the end.

A simple mirror in a dusty room, only reflecting the Seer.

A great, black tower, only barely resembling a creature, with mile-thick cables that extend high into the sky above, and deep into the ocean below; an ocean which boils in its very presence. That Seer is rigid with pain connecting to its tortured sibling.

Somewhere else. Somewhere not Remnant. Somewhere only filled with purplish-black mist and not much else. Salem chooses, quite pointedly, to not focus on that one.

"I call to session this meeting of the Council of Thirteen," Salem intones, her voice carrying easily throughout the grand hall.

REQUIRE REASON/DESIGN/PURPOSE FOR THIS MEETING.

"Because I have called it is reason enough," she states with a voice like polar ice. "But, in this case, I call it because plans are being constructed, and your power may be required."

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The Furies were the easiest to pick out, from their garbled chirruping masked as words, and their hatred for Ozpin that nearly matches hers.

"Beacon is not our first target. Haven shall be."

The figure on its throne shifts.

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Even with centuries of practice, Salem grimaces at the way the Fisher-King's voice divides and folds on itself when he speaks, split and shuffled like a puzzle she must spend precious time deciphering. The Grimm-King is the most humanoid of the council, besides herself, and yet all he seems to delight in doing is using his grand power to annoy her.

"Mistral is weak- its pathetic underworlds collide in the streets of Kuchinashi, and ancient artefacts of great power have been unearthed by its people, sowing further chaos just by their presence. Its Huntsmen are stretched thin, and the Academy's Headmaster is..."

She smiles, exhaling as if laughing at her own joke.

"... Well, frayed would be putting it lightly. It will not take much to twist him to our cause."

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"Soon enough," she promises the excitable birds.

The Furies do catch on quick these days.

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"Come now, Fisher-King, surely one of your grand intellect can divine my plan, no?" croons Salem with a voice like warm honey.

That shut him up. He shifted in his chair, clearly irked by the insult, and Salem didn't fight down the smugness that quirked up her lips.

Low growling admitted from the eye-Seer.

The Grand Wyvern, Jabberwock. The most bestial of the ancient Grimm- and the hardest to reason with by far for it.

"You would hate Mistral- for having so many mountains around, there is nowhere to perch," Salem explains, her voice calm, almost motherly- the tone one uses when explaining something to a small child.

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The mirror-seer flickers, something appearing in the reflection. Quietly opening a door and slipping inside, a tall, rag-obscured creature quickly skitters past the seer and towards the mirror. It does not appear in the Seer's vision, even as it pushes its reflection out of the way to scratch at the mirror with long rusted-iron claws.

The sound is grating, sending chills down Salem's spine that she has long since become accustomed to suppressing, but eventually, it resolves into a message.

I V O L U N T E E R .

There is no name for this creature- she has never found one she felt fit, nor has it chosen one of its own. But it is chillingly good at its chosen pursuits.

"Break him, so he may be reformed as we need."

More scraping. More spine-chilling. The Fisher-King shifts uncomfortably in his seat, it starting to get to him too. The Jabberwock groans low, its pupil contracting to a razor-thin slit as things rumble around it- she realises a moment too late that it's trying to cover its ears.

Y E S, M I S T R E S S .

The creature takes its leave, and the connection winks out, letting the Seer float off to its other duties.

Salem almost feels bad for subjecting Lionheart to that thing.

Almost.

"Very well. Does anyone have anything to report?"

REPORT/UPDATE/NEWS ON ANOMALY DISCOVERED/FOUND OFF COAST OF CONTINENT/MENAGERIE/PETTING ZOO.

The Tower is a lot to take in. Its presence- let alone being present when it deigned to move or speak- was deleterious to the continued existence of most things, other Grimm included. The way the Seer's tentacles curl up in sympathetic agony speak to that.

She leans forward, gently resting her clasped hands on her knees.

"Continue," she says, not letting emotion into her voice just yet.

ANOMALY/IRREGULARITY/ASH HAS SUBSUMED THE VAST MAJORITY OF SMALL ISLAND/LANDMASS/DEAD ROCK WEST OF MENAGERIE. HAS GROWN TO ENCOMPASS A MATHEMATICALLY/LOGICALLY/ARTISTICALLY PERFECT CIRCLE WITH RADIUS OF 100 KILOMETRES.

NO FURTHER SIGNS OF ASSIMILATION/CONSUMPTION/DIGESTION HAVE BEEN NOTED BEYOND THIS RADIUS. ALL ANIMAL LIFE HAS EITHER FLED/LEFT/ESCAPED OR BECOME SUBSUMED. PLANTLIFE IS DYING/ROTTING/DISSOLVING DUE TO MASS ECOLOGICAL UPHEAVAL.

Salem frowns. Her black-veined marble-white brow furrows in confusion, eyebrows knitting together as she thinks.

"... Why on Remnant would it stop…?" she mutters, more to herself than her council.

THEORY: IT CEASED/HALTED/STOPPED BECAUSE OF MY PRESENCE. ASH-FORMS HAVE BEEN DETECTED PATROLLING/SCOUTING/WANDERING THE SUBSUMED AREA- MY PRESENCE APPEARS TO CAUSE THEM TO MALFUNCTION/BREAK DOWN/ MELT. PRESUME MAJOR WEAKNESS TO EXTREME HEAT.

Now that was good news. Perhaps this was some new form of Grimm, as the humans speculated, perhaps it was something completely different.

But what mattered to Salem is that it wasn't under her control. Which, by definition, makes it a problem, either to be solved or to be eradicated.

And right now...

"No further human sightings?"

NEGATIVE.

"... Do as you will, then report on the results. Perhaps that should give us a clearer view of the path ahead."

AS YOU WISH, MISTRESS.

The picture becomes blurry with boiling sea spray, the Seer wheezing in pain as the Tower begins to raise its arms, wind buffeting its partner as the massive Grimm opens two white, angular eyes like lamplights-

The connection cuts out as a hairline crack forms in the Seer's crystal globe, smoke wisping up from it, the light inside dark as it tumbles to the ground.

Salem stares at it for just a moment, a small sigh of distress escaping her nose.

The Tower is so hard on the poor things.

"... Well. Anything else to report?"

The Jabberwock grumbles, the single eye drooping with fatigue. The rest of the council either stays silent or reports in the negative, and are summarily dismissed, quickly leaving only Salem and a dead Seer in the throne room. She rises, slowly walking down the steps towards the corpse then gently picking it up, almost cradling its still smoking-hot body in her arms, ignoring the burns it causes.

"Oh… you did well, little one," she murmurs quietly to the dead Seer.

It isn't a long walk to one of Evernight's many balconies, overlooking the Land Of Darkness in all its burnt-ash glory, volcanic sand covered in streaks of tar under an ever-red sky.

And below- the shaping pits.

She walks to the edge, hauling the Seer onto the sparse railing like it weighs nothing. The fall is long, and the splash is quiet- but it is done.

Salem gazes out over the vista, watching newly-formed Beowolves, Boarbatusks, and the occasional larger Grimm; Hags, crawling out in their dozens, forming their triads, then turning back to pull tar from the pit to form their black cauldrons; Vampyrs, shaking their wings dry; and the rare Goliath, who leave the pools almost dry when they leave.

For a moment, she wonders what time it is in Vale.
Seance- Ataraxia's The Unknown, 1975.
With a mental twist, another Seer is summoned- it silently floats onto the balcony with her. Its orange glow and gentle gurgling eventually resolve into a view of a room kept dark by blackout blinds and lit only by many laptop screens, bathing the walls in blue light. The view is partially obscured, like watching through a jail cell's bars.

It's hiding in the air vent, she realises.

From its vantage point, though, it can see the man in the room, sitting on the bed, working by side table lamplight on something in his lap that produces smoke.

With careful direction, hooked tentacles move forward, the chitin rearranging to form small, cross-shaped points, which then slither between the bars.

Within seconds, the grating is off, then silently lowered to the ground.

The man's head twitches, as the Seer slithers out of the vent, slowly floating towards the ground.

"You know, these Seers are, not as subtle as you think, Salem," he says suddenly.

Salem definitely did not jump a little at being noticed. Absolutely not, never happened.

"Ivory," she says after a moment. "Status report?"

He places the small lap desk to one side, a small circuit board on it. He clicks off the soldering pen and lays it down too, careful to keep the hot end pointed away from anything flammable.

Turning to face the Seer, he pulls a thin pack of thinner cigarettes from his vest pocket, pulling one free and lighting it with the end of the solder pen. He takes a long drag on it before responding, and visibly relaxes for the intake of nicotine.

"Currently working on creating the device Cinder asked for, but, it's a slow process."

"And why is that?" she asks sharply, a chill in her voice at the frank admission of any kind of setback.

"Never soldered anything before. I keep messing up," Ivory admits plainly, completely unfazed by her tone. "Good thing I bought spares."

Salem almost sighs, still caught off-guard by the man's irritating lack of fear or respect for her. In all honesty, she doesn't mind it all that much- it's refreshing, compared to Tyrian's bootlicking, or Cinder's constant, ever-so-subtle knife-sharpening.

"About that," she starts, "Cinder mentioned that you told her the Black Queen was a futile plan. Why, then, do you keep working on a device destined to fail?"

"Cinder is… unreceptive, to the idea that this plan won't work. Violently so. Besides, soldering is a useful skill to learn."

"Why do you believe it won't work?"

"Another variable has appeared, something, undefined as of yet. If it isn't, isolated, I highly doubt this plan will, function, as Cinder hopes it will. It's a company, I think. Maybe the person who runs it, maybe, something inside it. But if it's what I think it is, then..."

He snorts, taking another drag on his cigarette, drawing so hard that the light almost reaches his face, the ash growing by half an inch or so- enough to start to sag.

"... We're screwed. It's, as simple as that. I may as well tell Cinder to, to pack her bags, I hear Mistral's nice this time of year, kinda screwed. But you wanna know what the real joke is?"

Salem is quiet, for a few moments, before silently gesturing at him to continue.

"The company's name. It's called Cloudbank Solutions," he manages before bursting into quiet laughter. "Ah… if there are any gods left out there, they've got a really messed up sense of humour."

Salem pauses, considering exactly what would make him so certain that the plan was doomed to failure- and then she remembers.

"... How sure are you that it is not… a coincidence?"

Even with the fishbowl lens of the Seer, Salem could see Ivory's eyes glaze over, looking straight through her as his mind is suddenly anywhere but the present.

Ash crumbles from the end of his cigarette as his fingers begin to tremble.

"... Like someone had turned my spine to dry ice. Then, I met, the one who made it, I think- the controller was, following him around like a lost dog, anyway."

"How on Remnant did you manage to meet him?" Salem asks with a frustrated snap in her voice, more than a little annoyed that he hadn't volunteered this information before.

"It's the, the damnedest thing, actually- I was out buying these stupid, microcomputers, for Cinder's little project, and I found his- found his wallet on the ground. I don't even remember the boy's name, but I remember that it was his birthday."

… Salem knew, objectively, that Cinder wasn't at fault here, but that didn't stop her from wanting to skin her alive for even indirectly instigating this series of events.

Months- no, years, of planning, down the drain because… she didn't know yet, but there were too many coincidences piling up to safely continue calling coincidences.

Divine fuckery, more like.

"... Well. Obviously, alterations will need to be made. Rest- I will need you at your fullest capacity in the coming days."

"Mm."

"Before you go, though-"

Salem gestures, and three more feeds come up on their Seers- three faces, two males, one young one old, and one young female. People who had caught her eye, as she scried the world at large.

"Your opinion."

Ivory breathes out, finally focusing on her and her questions. The distraction should draw him out of his head, for a while.

"First- Alderman Hugh Kennedy- second, and husband, of the mayor of a small Mistrali town, population, around 8,000. Devoted husband, no children- both he and his wife are well-thought-of in the community."

Kennedy is a heavyset man in his forties, someone whose added weight seems to fit his personality- his face is heavy with laughter lines around the mouth and eyes, pushing the word jolly to the forefront when it comes to describing him. Beside him, his wife, smaller and thinner, but still holding those same deep lines around the mouth and eyes. A happy couple.

"Second- Caesius Azar. A Mistrali teacher in Vacuo, who goes out of his way to provide his services to the more... unkempt class of un-person in the capital. He has... broken free of his initial role in Shade, and instead become something of a modern-day philosopher- leading all sorts of debates and lectures in public, for anyone to listen to."

By comparison, Caesius looks like the kind of person you find in a Mistrali romance comic- thin, but well-dressed, with short black hair kept neatly combed to one side. The only deviation from the standard was the start of some stubble, that did nothing to cover his well-shaped chin and jaw. The picture Salem showed Ivory was him teaching in a town square under the limited shade of a hastily put together canvas tent, reading from a text out to the public like an orator, or a man on the stage.

Almost every woman there has their eyes on him, and not just because they're fascinated by his words.

"Finally- Kea Nevada. She is a musician, who has gained some minor notoriety for having some kind of vendetta against some major Atlesian political figures. I actually quite liked what little I heard of her music- it's a shame she'll probably be found dead from 'suicide' within a few months if she's not careful."

The Faunus girl can't be older than her early 20s- short blonde hair cut into a messy bob mixed with bright green feathers that also appeared in patches all the way down her bare arms, poking through a fishnet shirt laid over a t-shirt that simply said "FUCK YOU ILMA HARRIS," in large block capitals.

"... Who's Ilma Harris?"

"I haven't the slightest clue beyond 'Atlesian politico,' but at least three of Kea's songs seem to involve an anger towards her that borders on breathtaking," Salem informs him, her voice holding something almost approaching respect for the girl.

Ivory says nothing for quite some time, quietly thinking over the question and his answer. She could almost see the way the light played behind his eyes, thousands of different connections and scenarios playing out at once, accompanied by a silent movement of his lips as thoughts inevitably slipped out. It was a level of thought that was almost fascinating to watch by itself.

"... Are you, aiming for subtlety, or spectacle?" he finally asks, after a long five minutes.

Salem smiles a smile that shows just a few too many teeth, that are just a little too sharp to be human.

"Why don't you surprise me?"
 
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Interlude: A Free Man
Hope your having a good day.
Ah… I won't lie to you.

It's been a rough couple of months. I'd rather not get into details, all told, it's not worth worrying about now.

The worst is over, I'm no longer spending every single day performing intense physical labour for no reward, now it's just a matter of figuring out if I wasn't writing because I ended every day sore and tired, or if I'm in the middle of a hilariously inconveniently-timed major depressive episode.

Well… I don't want to end every day drunk, at least, so I've got that going for me.

This interlude's a little different, because it's a prologue to a storyline I very much want to be part of Hold It In, and I'm still debating how best to deal with it, but that's tomorrow-Prok's problem, and tomorrow-you's problem too. This is also the final interlude, and the actual story will be up this Friday.



I woke up at 5:50, on the dot; ten minutes earlier than anyone else, same as every other morning. I looked at the ceiling, and asked myself- 'am I still here?'

Here was, well, its official name was 'SDC-V Mountain Range Installation 7,' but the people who live here, and the PR department once they realised that the official name was like chewing on dry toast, just called it The Range.

One of these days the answer would be no, but it wasn't today. No, I'm still here, today.

So, I took a deep breath and said the words I needed to.

"I am not a prisoner. I will never be a prisoner here because they cannot shackle me in a way that matters."

The guy that taught me that mantra was gone now- not dead, or anything, no, he got out. Paid up his debts, and left. I think he lives in Vacuo now.

If you ask me, that's just proof it's gotta work.

I dressed in the standard-issue cheap white nylon jumpsuit with the SDC logo printed on the back and breast pocket, my employee number printed below them- 2837. It was a slow process because I was also trying to be as quiet as possible. Once I was done, I stood at the edge of my bed, watching the clock for the perfect moment.

5:58:57, 58, deep breath, 59-
Rebel Rebel, David Bowie's Diamond Dogs, 1974.

"GOOOOOOOOOOD MORNING, CAMPERS!" I cawed as loud as I could, just as the clock ticked over to 5:59 am, and the automated sun lamps guttered into life, and the automated wakeup message began to play.

"WHO'S READY TO GET OUT THERE AND PROVE TO THE ADMINISTRATION BUILDING THAT THEY CAN'T KEEP US DOWN WITH LATE FEES AND PAY CUTS?! I KNOW I SURE AM!" I continued, drowning out the serene female voice wishing us a good morning and thanking us for our service to the Schnee Dust Company.

I considered it a public service.

The chorus of groans, "Godsdammit, Carmine-" and several attempted concussions with pillows told me that my work was done here, so I quickly made my escape for the breakfast hall.

My escape didn't last long, unfortunately, because the first thing I walked into was Marrón. I bounced off them and landed on my ass, which left me craning my neck to look up at them even more than usual. They looked down at me, giving me a look like someone who had just barely managed to avoid stepping in dog crap.

"Mx Marrón, how is my favourite escaped silverback today? Zookeepers found you yet, or are the guard uniform and tiny hat still throwing them off the scent?"

They stared at me with the fatigued look of someone who had not been up for long enough to deal with me yet.

"Ngh…" they groaned deeply, "Brothers, Carmine, what dark force bought your soul to give you this much energy at six in the freakin' morning?"

"You know, there is a really interesting anthropological reason for that, see, Faunus-"

"Yeah I don't, actually care, look, you're getting breakfast late, Monday wants to see you," they said as I got back to my feet.

I'd be lying if I said I was entirely surprised; Monday was always on my ass for one reason or another. Unlike her namesake, she didn't have the good grace to keep it to a weekly basis either. I couldn't think why- I was a model employee of the SDC, obviously. I couldn't think of a reason to be worried about my immediate employment, anyway.

"Any idea why?" I asked Marrón while I dusted myself off.

All I got out of them was a grunt.

"... Good talk, buddy," I told them with a clap on the shoulder, and I quickly left before they could find a reason to hit me with that baton on their hip.

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Alexis Monday was a very particular woman- I may go about all prim and proper and acting like I loved it here for the hell of it, but she did it just because…

Okay, you know how some people wear clothes, and other people are the clothes they wear? Maybe that's a little confusing, let me try again-

I could not, with a gun to my head, imagine Alexis Monday not wearing a white dress shirt, spotless, a knee-length pencil skirt with a thigh slit, spotless, and carrying a brown vinyl-covered clipboard. Her hair was always kept in a low bun, and she always wore the same pair of thin rectangular glasses. She also always looked at me like I was somehow insulting her with my presence. None of these things ever changed, all of these are just part of Alexis Monday- all some core aspect of her that, without them, leaves something behind that doesn't make sense.

"The exosuit has malfunctioned again," she said in place of a proper greeting. "This is the third time this week," she said, and just as unacceptable as the first time, she didn't say.

"Good morning to you too, Ms Monday. What's Rusty gone and done this time?"

She sighed, and I could swear I watched her actively suppress the urge to roll her eyes at me as she gestured at me to follow.

"It is a combination of things- the onboard AI has become stuck in a boot loop again, and the left leg hydraulics seized up completely, then drained. If the pilot had tried to boot it internally, he would most likely be trapped and injured trying to fix it himself."

"God bless the SDC's policy on riding mechs hot," I said placidly.

She shot me a look that no doubt would have killed someone else, but I just smiled at her.

Most mechs- sorry, assisted-piloting exosuits- were able to be ridden hot, booting it up from the pilot's cabin at the same time as making safety checks of the pilot's cabin. The SDC, on the other hand, had a blanket policy of cold-riding- safety checks are made, then the pilot evacuates and powers up the mech from an external console.

I was never really that jazzed about the concept.

It felt like trying to ride a horse from a- from a saddle, 40 feet away. It's not natural- you're meant to be in there, as much part of the machine as the engine, the actuators, the onboard persona-

Agh, no, no, no daydreaming, dingus. I didn't have time for it.

"Where is she?" I sighed, dragging myself back down to Remnant.

Alexis smiled at me slyly.

"The exosuit is in the vehicle pool- it never managed to leave its bay."

I grunted and moved to leave.

"2837," she called as I waved down a passing night shift truck to get a lift. "Remember, you are directly responsible for any injuries caused by the exosuit. Keep that in mind, before you decide to perform another shoddy patch job."

The words were like a slap to the face- I wheeled around, my jaw set in a grimace that set off ringing in my ears, nails digging furrows into my palms as they balled into fists. As I approached her, it took a titanic force of will to contain myself- but I kept a lid on it, allowing myself one finger to put in her face.

"I do not appreciate, being referred to as a number, any more than you would," I whispered to her. "My name is David, Carmine. I am not a prisoner here, and I will not allow you to treat me like one."

With that, I turned to the thankfully still-waiting truck, and hopped up on the side, taking off before she could get a word out.

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The sun rises late in the valleys of Vale's mountains- in the middle of August, the sky might lighten, but the street lamps are on until 10, 11 in the morning. Otherwise, it was still twilight.

Some of the camps out here were lucky, they were in valleys that went east to west, not north-south like ours did- but, such is life in The Range.

The artificial (is it artificial if it's caused by a natural land formation?) darkness didn't help my mood any, as I approached the motor pool, but things started to improve when I saw two of my favourite girls in the whole wide world, Rusty, and-

"Morgan!" I called out, hopping off the truck and walking towards her.

She jumped a little and whirled around to face me, holding her suitcase laptop across her chest. Her pupils opened to near-perfect circles as I walked to meet her, slowly contracting into a W-shape as I got closer. She only relaxed when she finally realised it was me.

Morgan was a short girl, dressed in the same formless jumpsuit as everyone else around here, but hers was large enough on her frame that the sleeves mostly covered her hands. Her face was pale, rife with dark freckles, which mainly hung out on the bridge of her nose. From a distance, it looked like she'd managed to break it, which, uh, was how we met. They matched the choppy, chin-length ginger hair that tended to frame her face just so. Though, the thing that most people probably noticed was behind the large, round glasses that she wore- she couldn't even wear contacts to hide her eyes, she'd told me once. It covered up too much of her pupils, and then she had an even harder time seeing.

"David! I, er, should have guessed you'd be called out too," she said, smiling wide.

"Sure, just about got dragged out of bed by Marrón. Coming or going?"

"I'm coming. I mean, I'm here, I'm, arriving, not-"

She slowly turned scarlet, and before her embarrassment at her own suspect wording got the better of her, I reached out and gently tapped her on the nose.

"Boop."

She blinked, going cross-eyed for a moment, her pupils closing to near slits as she focused on my finger.

Embarrassed babbling successfully intercepted.

"... You are actually twelve," she said after a moment. "Come on, the sooner we fix Rusty, the sooner we can get breakfast."

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How do I go about describing Rusty?

Well, to begin with, she wasn't rusty anymore- I made damn sure of that when I first came here and saw the state the poor girl had been left in. Took about 3 weeks of break times and days off to do it, before I was given the job when somebody finally realised I had a degree in exosuit mechanics with a minor in engineering. I mean, yeah, it's just a Master's degree, but hey, the only guy in the race still gets gold.

She was humanoid, for the most part, and easily 5 or 6 metres tall. Her torso was out of proportion with her limbs and head, giving her a sort of, testudine look- inside was a space large enough to fit a pilot seat and necessary systems for control, monitoring, and a couple of general amenities the pilots and I had managed to bully out of Monday a few years back. Her head was distinctly not shaped like a human's, though. I don't know how else to explain it, besides saying that if you took it off her shoulders, you could have used it as a dinner table. It was a squat cylinder, with a large slit for her single camera, that quickly ballooned out into a flat circle as wide around as I was tall.

She had four arms, her shoulders designed to allow them to swap places, so the smaller pair could reach all the same places the larger pair could- brute force or fine manipulation wherever you could need it. It was overengineered to hell and back, but goddamn it was a beautiful piece of work. Whoever designed it must have been some kind of wizard because it was the only part on Rusty that only broke down once a month instead of once a week. She was probably a custom job, actually- I knew every inch of her, and not one inch of her had a serial number on it. Some madman had built this himself and then she somehow ended up here because the administration was full of cheapskates who would never shell out for something sleeker.

Hell, I'd contributed to that particular conundrum myself- all above board, mind, no unauthorised modifications on my baby. The steps up to the cockpit door weren't there when I got here- so, I took some steel pipe, rolled it into the correct shape with the help of one of the mining truck guys, and then welded them on. You couldn't even tell they were an addition, they looked so damn natural. I'd also painted the old girl up because Monday didn't care that much, so she looked real nice when she wasn't caked in dust too- I'd gone for bright purple, the kind of shade that sticks out in a place that's mostly browns and whites- you could see her from the other side of the camp, on a clear day.

Maybe that was how she'd come to be; a mech that had passed from enthusiast to enthusiast, each adding to the mystery because they could, obscuring whatever had come from the original.

Was there anything of the original left? Had so much been replaced that Rusty had become a whole new mech, at some point?

I dunno- but she was my girl, and she was better than this place, that was for sure.

Morgan handed me the terminal cable after I got my toolbelt on, and I started rolling it out to Rusty while she sat down on the concrete, getting comfy.

"Hey, Rusty," I said, climbing up the thin struts on her outer frame and opening her cabin door. "Heard your leg's giving you trouble again- how about we work on that while Morgan figures out why you won't boot up?"

Rusty wasn't on, obviously, so I wasn't going to get a response from the onboard AI- but some of the old croaks and squeaks of metal and leather still sounded like a groan of relief to me.

"That's my girl," I said, gently patting the doorframe.

I plugged the cable into one of the USB ports on her dash and waited for Morgan to give me the go sign to start working on her leg.

While I waited, I sat down in the pilot's seat, and let my hands drift over the buttons, the joysticks, the levers and pedals… I'd never be allowed to ride Rusty. I would be put on mine duty so fast my head would spin, and I'd probably never see her again until she inevitably broke down so completely that they had no choice to scrap her. But...

My fingers wasted no time closing around a handle. Clutch disengaged. Release handle, clutch drops, my other hand craving the buttons that would bring her to life, every fibre of my body wanting to sync with her mechanical circulation and run from this place. I'd take Morgan, of course. Some of the others, too, my bandmates, at least, hell, maybe Marrón if they wanted to come along. It would be a tight fit, but I could grab one of the ore shovels and pad it out in secret, get them to hide in there and- this is all nonsense, I know that, but, I can still dream, right? Of the rush, of the maddened dance, wild flailing inside turned to inimitable grace on the outside…

I snapped out of it as Morgan used her laptop to honk Rusty's horn at me, before giving me a frustrated thumbs up. With more than a little regret, I slipped out of the seat and down her side, getting to work on her leg.

"Not today, honey," I muttered.

"Not today."

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We entered the dining hall just as Mr Andebern had everyone's attention, making an announcement on something or other. He was a portly man, as if one of those inflatable clown punching bags grew legs then put on a suit. His jowls were flabby with age and weight, and his thin, greying hair was kept in a combover that was regularly slick with nervous sweat, even up here in the mountains.

I know I'm not painting a very flattering picture, but I liked him- he was a, mostly, reasonable man, who took up the same role as Ms Monday most of the time, but with a different temperament. Their official titles, as far as I knew, were 'Administrative Liaisons.' He and Monday were corporate hatchet men, the faces of the company as far as we were concerned. Above them, and in charge of the site as a whole, was Geier, their boss, and beyond mere mortals such as Morgan and I.

"... happy to announce that our camp has been chosen by the prestigious Beacon Academy to receive their first-year field trip! Now, this won't be happening for some time, mind- not until after Candlemas, at the very least. This is a huge opportunity to show some of our largest consumers that their Dust is sourced ethically-"

A single barked laugh came from the crowd at that, and Andebern winced.

"-yes, yes, I know that look in your faces; 'where's the punchline, Bert?' Look, I'll be straight with you- this is, in essence, a review. If we do well, and the school reports us doing well, we get more funding, and Monday and I can use that money to make things a little more comfortable around here. More automated miners, some amenities, an actual budget for Rusty, if any of you actually give a damn about that, just- improving the quality of life around here, for everyone. You have my promise on that, and that's your carrot. If we don't do well..."

He let the question hang, and there was no laughter this time.

That's why I liked him- he wasn't afraid to quit toeing the company line and just be honest with us- it was, refreshing, to have someone who at least acted like he wasn't constantly spewing SDC propaganda at you.

"I'm glad you all understand," he continued after a moment. "In the coming weeks, there will be a few conversations regarding strategy for this field trip- however, if anyone has any ideas, do feel free to contact Ms Monday with details. That is all, for the moment- now, enjoy your breakfast!"

That got a more sincere laugh, and he quietly left the dining hall as conversations started up again. Morgan and I shuffled over to the line, where she grabbed herself a prawn mayo sandwich, a little lemon cake, and some milk, while I talked to one of the serving ladies.

"Special dietary order, David Carmine, ID-2837," I said.

"Yeah, it'll be a couple of minutes. The stock's not quite done yet, I'll have one of the young'uns take it out to ya," the lady behind the counter croaked at me.

I quietly thanked her, grabbed a bottle of mineral water, and made my way over to one table in particular, while Morgan went to find a quiet place to settle down and eat before she was called off for more IT stuff.

This section of the table had people at it, like many other tables- however, these people were my people. It wasn't easy, making friends in a place like this. When there's so little to talk about, and everyone's constantly worrying about their debts, it becomes difficult to work up the energy to put the effort into maintaining relationships. So, I counted myself lucky to find the few people who could.

I moved to sit between Connie and Olivia, and they moved to make room for me, leaving me opposite Shaun, who was sitting next to John.

"David," Olivia said, "what kept you?"

"Rusty did. Left leg hydraulics were giving her grief, and, something to do with her onboard AI, I never got around to asking Morgan what the problem was," I explained as I popped the cap off my water and took a sip. "I filled her back up again and tightened up that seal, but I'm going to have to beg Monday for another replacement. One that fits this time."

"I still find it cute that you insist on referring to an inanimate object as her," Connie said, barely keeping the little smile off her face.

I just shrugged. I didn't feel the need to defend myself; Rusty was Rusty, that's all. Besides, it's not like she'd complained about it.

Connie was a squat woman, who made up for her lack of verticality by growing out horizontally- she could probably deadlift my reedy ass if I had handles. She kept her brown hair short, forming a curly curtain that fell around chin height. Combined with the resting scowl, people who didn't know her generally left her alone unless they were too stupid to take a hint.

"Did you hear the announcements?" Shaun asked, reaching past John, and the person next to John, for the salt.

Calling Shaun big was somewhat, misleading. He was gaunt at best, all long, gangly limbs that left him head and shoulders above everyone else. However, he lacked all the muscle that would make him at all intimidating, which suited him just fine, thank you very much. That didn't change the fact that each of his hands could leave an ink-stained handprint around my entire neck.

"Caught the last part, at least. Something about being chosen for a field trip by Beacon, blah blah blah, do good or get dry bread for breakfast again, sound about right?"

"Mm, yeah," he said, "that's about right, but there were a couple things that you missed."

So, I still don't entirely understand why, but the administration around here likes to keep us abreast of the SDC's internal business decisions, acquisitions, financial roadmaps- stuff like that. I guess it was to try and make us feel like, part of the family.

I've seen fine porcelain teaware less hollow than that sentiment.

"What else happened?" I asked.

The answer was pretty much as usual; bank stuff, minor delays in processing debt payments, a promise to freeze all pending fees until the connection to the central system was repaired- yeah, and the other leg's got bells on.

The only really interesting thing was the acquisition of an offshoot of a small family business- the Pastel Company's Kuchinashi branch. None of us could figure out why they would want something like that, but through the combined efforts of 80% of our memories- John barely knew what day it was, let alone news from months ago- we eventually figured it out.

See, the Kuchinashi branch of the Pastel Company was run by Javi Pastel, who, one, had been a very naughty boy recently, and two, was found dead a few months ago. As for why he had been a very naughty boy, Olivia remembered certain accusations that had been levelled against him a while back. Rumour had it that he was a smuggler, shifting things for Wave, the Hana Guild, and probably the Spider Syndicate, the White Fang and three Grimm in a trenchcoat, if rumours about the man's activities were even halfway true.

In short- it was just, there, ready for snapping up. The Pastel Company as a whole just wanted to wash their hands of the whole mess, and the SDC wanted rights for the mines in that area. It just made sense, but then John, to our surprise, piped up by saying that the Kuchinashi mines weren't Dust mines, they were excavation sites, though he didn't specify what they were excavating-

We were snapped out of our debate by one of the cafeteria workers gently setting down my breakfast for me.

"Here you go, love- 's pork today, for some leek and potato later on," the serving lady I'd talked to before said.

I smiled and thanked her for bringing me it out, before turning back to my fresh plate of boiled pork ribs, fresh out the pot- still hot with steam that quickly fogged Shaun's glasses up.

"Oh, for God's sake, David- can't you eat those raw?" he asked as he pulled his sleeve up and used it to wipe the lenses clean.

"Sure, but this way the rest of you get ribs."

Also cold, raw pork ribs don't like having their bones extracted by hands.

With careful, picking fingers, I slowly peeled the meat off the bones, gently setting most of it to the side for the others to have. Well, Shaun and Connie, mainly, John just about ate a meal a day, and Olivia was as much of a vegan as the menu would allow her to be.

I took the bone between my teeth and twisted, cracking off a chunk, which I slowly chewed down to something I could swallow. I would digest the bone alright, but the marrow inside is what I was really after, carrion animal that I was at heart. Well, gut, really. Fruit and veg were alright, most grains and starches were, meh, and I could eat meat every now and then, but the processed slop they served in here would make me violently ill if I'd tried to eat it.

Olivia winced at the sound of me chewing a bone down to shards but managed an apologetic look when I caught her.

Yeah…

Some things stay the same no matter where you go.

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The recreation room was kind of weird. See, when I first came here, it was just an empty room with a small bookshelf and some stools. Then, someone started… donating things.

No, seriously, I couldn't make it up if I wanted to! The Range just got a shipment of stuff one day, from an anonymous donor- easily a few hundred thousand Lien's worth of instruments. Guitars, drums, woodwinds, violins and their bigger sisters, even a goddamn baby grand, along with some really good keyboards and synthesisers- the kind that act as recording and editing workstations too. As if that wasn't enough, the other half of the shipment was all the stuff you needed to actually turn those instruments into a cohesive listening experience on stage; amplifiers, sound mixers- digital and analogue, much to Olivia's delight- sound mixers, studio-quality microphones, and enough cables to mummify a small child, or Connie.

All of that, the entire shipment, came with no announcement, or signage, or even the slightest indication of who or where it came from; just the manifesto detailing its contents, and a handwritten note.

"Life is too short to let others tell you to stay silent."

It's still here, actually- framed on the wall of the rec room.

Nobody knows who donated it, but somebody higher up than the ground workers must have, because instead of doing what we all thought he'd do and just throwing it out, Geier converted an empty storage building into a new rec room, and just let it be. Told us to use it in our off-time if we really wanted to.

Whoever it was, they scared the administration like nothing else I'd seen.

I guess it was, kinda comforting, knowing that somebody out there cared about us that much.

The reason I bring all this up- sorry, just, realised I presented all of that without the necessary relevance- is because that's where the five of us, me, Olivia, Connie, Shaun, and John, spent most of our time when we weren't working.

Our reasons for being off varied- in my case, my job was so incredibly specialised that, on the good weeks when Rusty only broke down two or three times, I just had way too much spare time on my hands. Sometimes I got so stir crazy I would go over to the vehicle bay and work on the trucks and mining machines, just to give my hands something to do. It's only technically my job, and it's definitely not my shift, so I only really got paid whatever the pit boss was willing to scrape up for my help. Which, usually, wasn't enough to be worth my time, unless it was a major problem.

Connie and Olivia were specialists too, but they had found their own workarounds. Connie worked on the electrical grid, keeping lights on and heaters working, while Olivia worked in the comms room, keeping us connected to Vale at large. Both of them took the view of making their work so idiot-proof that nothing short of catastrophic failure would require their direct attention. In Olivia's case, that was just making a small tome of error codes and what to do in each case, which, to my knowledge, the communications team treated like a religious artefact.

Connie, on the other hand, had once come across a staff room in the management building that had two outlets with about 4 extensions each, each one full of coffee makers, TVs, vibrating chairs, and wherever else they could fit in there. She cut power to the entire room and shut the fusebox with a padlock about the size of my fist, leaving a note telling them that having no power is better than having no power and being on fire. Needless to say, that mess was cleaned up fast, she restored the power, and, somehow, was never caught.

Turns out being terrifying enough to make people actively quit committing human errors, and stealthy enough to avoid reproach for your actions is like, half the battle when it comes to electrical maintenance.

"So, you know what I'm thinking?" Connie said to us, making sure her guitar was tuned properly.

"Don't hurt yourself," Olivia said absentmindedly, still checking over the mic connections and making sure we were recording.

"Yeah, yeah, screw you too Granite- we should have a concert for that field trip!"

Shaun hit a sour note on his keyboard, only just catching it as it started to slip off the cheap stand it came with.

"A concert isn't something I could see Monday going in for. Especially not, our music," he said, slowly adjusting the keyboard to make sure it was balanced properly.

"Doesn't that seem somewhat pessimistic?" Olivia asked. "Monday's hardly the least reasonable person on the planet. It might take a few concessions, but there's no reason we couldn't set something like that up."

I was going to say I could go and talk to her, just in time to have a flashback to this morning, and my argument with her. Instead, all I did was open my mouth then cringe in horror.

"... David," Olivia said, "you look like you just remembered the time a girl rejected you in high school. What's wrong?"

Damn you, Olivia, you and your functional set of eyes-

"... I may have had a minor altercation with Alexis this morning," I said. "It, may have gone badly. I may have snapped at her. I don't think she'd like to see hide nor hair of me for the next few centuries."

I worried my lip for a moment, all of my anger at Alexis shrivelling in the face of the inconvenience it had just caused my friends.

"... What happened?" asked Shaun quietly.

It took me a moment to answer, swallowing thickly as I tried to figure out how to justify myself.

"... She called me by number," I said after a moment. "Said I would be held responsible if Rusty's failures ever killed someone."

The response was immediate, and the response was boiling anger.

"What the fuck is wrong with her?!" Connie yelled. The volume caused John to leap from his stool by the drumset, and Shaun reached over just in time to catch the cymbals before they collapsed with a clatter.

"That sounds heavily out of character for her," Shaun said as he fixed the cymbals back in place. "I'd expect that kind of attitude from, from Geier, not from her."

"You think you know a woman," Olivia said. "I should find out her tablet's MAC address and block it from the site WiFi, that'd teach her-"

I was stunned. I don't entirely know why I expected to be the one on the receiving end of all this anger, but they were angry for me. Me. The guy who just admitted to killing our big breakout dead in the water.

"Guys, guys," I started, "revenge isn't exactly going to warm her to the idea of us playing for the field trip, so, can we shelve the plotting for a minute?"

Don't get me wrong, I was touched that they cared that much- but it wasn't… helpful, right now. There were a few grumbles of frustration, but they subsided after a moment, which left us with nothing to do but realise that we... Didn't, really have anything other than revenge in mind for dealing with the situation.

After a moment, John broke the awkward silence.

"Well, let's start practising," he said quietly, adjusting the height of his cymbals a little.

"Uh, John, have you been listening? Our only chance of getting a concert is pissed off at our guitarist," Connie said, trying to emphasise the gravity of the situation for him.

John just shrugged.

"Dave'll figure it out," he said simply.

"... Guts or bones?" Olivia asked him.

"Bones," he replied.

Olivia nodded firmly; as if either question or answer made sense.

"Well, okay then. Let's practise."

Shaun and Connie glanced at each other, then me. I shrugged, helpless in the face of, whatever the hell that was. John and Olivia had, as far as I knew, come into the Range's workforce together, and sometimes, little things like this reminded me of that. Olivia understood John on a level I couldn't imagine. With the matter settled by way of John's apparent gift of prophecy, he counted us in on the song we knew we'd have to practice the most. We didn't get much chance to publish the things we recorded, but we'd managed to get a couple of songs out there, courtesy of Morgan and her witchcraft in finding us a VPN that could connect to the outside world from in here, and we all had a good feeling this one would do well.

"One- two- one, two, three, four-"
I'm gonna leave this one a surprise.

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Much like the sunrise of The Range often came late, the sunset tended to come early. It was early afternoon, and, besides a couple more calls out to Rusty that turned out to either be user error or false alarms, I'd done pretty much nothing but practice all day. We went through our old catalogue, hashed out a couple of group songs, some individual pieces- when you've got nothing but time and instruments, but limited band members, your band ends up becoming something of a supergroup by default- and generally just convinced ourselves that, yes, I should go and lick Monday's shoes clean and beg for a chance to perform.

I'm exaggerating a little, but I still rankled a little at the idea. There are very few things that piss me off more than management acting like the debt-workers aren't people. We get enough of that from the rest of planet Remnant, thank you very much. We get enough of that from the usurious prats in die Schneebankgruppe- yes, they insisted on it being named that even outside of Atlas City.

Don't get me wrong- I was gonna do it. Hell, I was walking towards the administrative building to find her, and I would approach, metaphorical hat in hand, and kiss the goddamn ring if that's what it took to make this concert happen.

Amazing what's possible when it suddenly isn't all about you, isn't it?

The administrative building, unlike every other building on the property, was a proper brick and mortar affair. Everything else might have been corrugated steel semicylinders and prefabricated pod buildings, but the admin building was built from the ground up, foundations and all. Unless they decided to demolish it, it would be the only building left standing long after this mine shut down.

… I hated it. I can't explain why, even now, but- the entire building reeked of…

Flaunted superiority.

I shook the thought free from my skull. Now wasn't the time to get all indignant about things. No, it was the time to get curious.

"...eier, you can't be serious! This is a deathtrap waiting to happen!

The little snippet of speech caught my attention as I walked past an office window, inconceivably still open, despite it never being above 15 degrees up in the mountains, even in the summer.

It sounded like Monday. It sounded like she was incredibly unhappy with how that conversation was going.

I did what anyone would do in that situation- slipped off of the path, crouched under the wall, and strained my ears to eavesdrop. Thankfully, I was born a Faunus, and that last part wasn't a problem- a lot of people talk about the night vision, but truth is, every sense is better. I heard more, felt more, could taste and smell more, and, yes, saw better than the average human.

But humans can eat chocolate more than once a year without catastrophic medical issues, so I think it about balances out.

"Miss Monday, I distinctly remember hiring you for your organisational skills and your track record of dealing with HR claims in the main branch- not for your opinions," an old, nasal voice said.

That would be Hans Geier- a crotchety old bastard, who made Monday's show this morning look downright saintlike.

"Hans, I have to agree with Alexis on this. This plan is ill-thought-out at best, downright suicidal otherwise. I- the number of best-case scenarios that would have to happen to keep it from backfiring-" Andebern joined in, making this conversation three for three on major administrative staff.

"Enough," Geier cut him off, before taking a calming breath. "I will admit- I understand your fears. I was sceptical of it too when it was first proposed."

"When it was first proposed?" Monday asked.

"Yes, roughly 40 years ago, when you two were still suckling your mothers raw. This has been worked over as a thought experiment for decades- all that's changed is that it's no longer a thought experiment, because it has been developed to the point where it is perfectly safe. This isn't some random intern's mad idea to improve employee efficiency- no, that goes to whatever idiot decided to buy that stupid purple hunk of shit that that carrion-bird worker keeps fawning over."

I was shocked- one, he knew who I was, two, he knew what Rusty was, three, carrion-bird? Really?

… Eh, not the worst thing I've been called. And he didn't even say it to my face!

"D-David-"

"David?" Geier asked, the slightest hint of caution in his voice.

I heard Monday gulp. I could visualise it in my head- the threat of what he'd do plain in his eyes if she ever blundered like that in his presence again. I felt my nails sting against my palm, and fought to unclench them.

"... 2837," Alexis corrected herself, "is… enthusiastic, about his job. The exosuits are just… temperamental. They weren't meant to work at such high altitudes, and not for so long without consistent access to replacement parts. What he does is, nothing short of miraculous, sir. I- this is irrelevant to the topic at hand!"

"Geier- this plan is ridiculous," Andebern stepped in. "The workers are- well they're not happy, but they're hardly sharpening the guillotines for us either. Even ignoring our personal objections to it, I hardly see how this project is necessary."

"Its lack of true necessity is why we're the perfect test bed. If the worker's conditions were perfect, it would be useless- if the workers were, as you so succinctly put it, sharpening the guillotines, it would be the straw that broke the camel's back. We are… middling, and for once, that works in our favour."

```"Sir-"

"Oh for God's sake, for once in your pathetic lives, use that shared braincell of yours and think! All those people out there, debtors, criminals, people who owe the company tens of thousands in Lien, and we waste it on-"

The rustle of paper, and the legs of glasses unfolding.

"Let's see- central heating, access to medical assistance in the event of an accident, post-accident therapy, special dietary needs- we have spent 3000 Lien in the past week alone on various bone-in meats, for a few debtors, including- ah, our old friend 2837. Alexis? Would you like to explain that one to me?"

"H-he's a breed of Faunus related to the bearded vulture, sir. His digestive system is designed to subsist off of bone and marrow from carrion. The food served to others in the cafeteria would make him severely ill, as it would quite a few other Faunus who are obligate carnivores."

Geier only responded with an irritated grumble- either he didn't have a problem with that state of affairs once he understood it, or he was smart enough to keep it to himself.

"Madness. Utter madness! We spend all this money on-on-on feeding and clothing and treating people who couldn't appreciate it with a gun to their heads! They should be thanking us for everything we give them, for the rare opportunity to work off their debts, and yet we still get complaints of-" he cut himself off with a burst into laughter, "damaged heating systems and cockroach infestations! They live lives that people in Mantle dream of, the privilege to make something of themselves, and all we get in return is complaints."

The last word came out as a low, sibilant hiss- the sound of a man struggling to contain his rage in just a whisper.

I knew he didn't have a very high opinion of us, but… Brothers.

"... Well," he continued, when neither Andebern nor Monday had anything to say. "There will be fewer complaints after this is rolled out. Much fewer."

I could hear the tension in the air- the need to say something, but something about Geier must have cowed them.

"... Oh, relax. Look- since you don't trust me, for whatever reason, to know what I'm talking about, trust this instead. The Schnee Dust Company did not become a world-leading corporation by entertaining ideas that threaten its profit margin. If corporate didn't have the utmost confidence in this plan-"

"You're a monster," Alexis blurted out. "A monster trying to excuse the fact that you are putting people's lives at risk so you don't have to spend a Lien more on ensuring they're not living in utter squalor."

Like he said; the Schnee Dust Company did not become a world-leading corporation by entertaining ideas that threaten its profit margin.

"Miss Monday, you are very obviously stressed out by this conversation, and out of respect for your usual quality of work, I will be kind and overlook that outburst. Now get back to work before I fire you both."

After a moment of shocked silence, the next thing I heard was a door opening, and then slamming shut.

"Tch. Bloody impudent woman. A woman and a Mantle-born, no wonder this place is going to the dogs..." Geier grumbled out his frustrations. Soon, it turned to wordless growling and the sound of violent pen strokes.

I creeped away from the window and back onto the path, trying to pat out the dirt stain on one knee from settling under the wall for so long, and walked to the admin building's entrance. I reached for the handle to pull it open-

Just in time to need to back away before Monday slammed the door into my nose on her way out of the building. At least I knew why she was in a foul mood, for once- at least, I thought it was a foul mood, at first, but then I actually…

Looked.

The near-miss snapped her out of it- she looked at me, and instead of her usual cold demeanour, or anger, she was…

Stunned. Like a deer in headlights. For a moment, she just stared at me, blank and uncomprehending.

… What had she been told?

"... David," Alexis said after a moment, sounding for all the world like her mind was a thousand miles away. "Uh… can, can I help you?"

Hesitation did not fit Alexis Monday. I was watching my view of her crumble away and there was nothing I could do to show it without forcing some very awkward questions for both of us.

"I, er… could we, talk? In private?" I asked her.

She blinked slowly, but eventually nodded at me.

"O-of course. Shall we... take a walk?"

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The Range, for all it was a mining camp, did have its pleasant spots. It wasn't situated in the proper forests that grew halfway up the mountain range, but it had its share of firs, cedar, and yew. All along the outer paths of the camp, where the SDC's reign of terror on the local ecology ended, the heather was out in full bloom- a thick carpet of purples and pinks, deep enough to lose your feet in. We were walking along one of those outside paths, still silent for the moment.

Eventually, though, I just couldn't take it anymore, and I had to say something to get the ball rolling. Unfortunately, that was around the exact same time Alexis had the same idea.

"I, I have to apologi-""About this morning, I want to-"

We stopped, looking at each other in surprise.

"... You go first?" Alexis ventured.

I shrugged, figuring, hell, why not. It's what I came here to do.

"I… wanted to apologise for my outburst this morning. I shouldn't have said the things I did, and I apologise profusely for i-"

Alexis cut me off with laughter. I was so stunned by the sound of Ms Monday laughing at all that I didn't even get the chance to decide whether I was angry or not at being laughed at in the middle of an apology.

She doubled over, her peals of laughter quickly devolving into snickering, holding out a hand to gesture that she needed a minute. By the time she'd recovered, her face was red, and she had to blink back tears before they stained her face.

"Ah… ha… I-I'm sorry, David. I didn't- I wasn't laughing at you, I promise," she said, and I wasn't sure I could believe that. "The truth is… I was actually going to apologise to you for the exact same thing."

I blinked. She giggled at my confusion, but at least this time it was only a few seconds.

"David, I… I'm sorry. I did what I did because I was in a terrible mood and you were an easy target to take it out on, and I was mortified at my own behaviour as soon as I realised what I'd done. You are… for all your quirks, a consummate professional who shows incredible passion for his work, and I was wrong to discount you like that, let alone try and lay the blame of anything going wrong with Rusty at your feet. That wasn't fair, and I cannot put into words how much I regret doing it."

… I couldn't say anything. I couldn't begin to find the words to say.

So… I didn't. I stood there, dumbstruck for a good few seconds until I realised the only way I was going to sanely react to it was by downplaying everything about it.

"... Uh… yeah, well… it looks like we both feel the need to apologise, so… I'll accept yours if you accept mine?"

Yeah, it was lame, but it was the best I could come up with in the middle of my brain skipping a gear, sue me. Still, she smiled at me and got her giggles under control before they could come back with a vengeance.

"It's a deal," she said, looking me up and down. "But… I don't think you came to apologise out of the goodness of your heart, did you?"

Busted. I put my hands up, not even bothering to hide it.

"You got me," I said, "I am, in theory, here under duress. The band and I, we were… we had an idea on something to do for the field trip that's happening after Candlemas. Connie suggested it, I mentioned that I may have not been on best terms with you anymore, After a while, we realised the only way that would change would be if I came here and apologised."

Alexis snorted, but there was something in her eyes. A flicker of the blues laid just so in the corners of her eyes.

"Let me guess- you want to hold a concert," she said. "I… appreciate your passion for the project, but that would require quite a lot of setup. Time, effort, money..."

"We'll take care of everything! We've been doing this for years now, we could set up our equipment in our sleep! All we need is your say-so, and for you to actually add us to the list."

There it was again- a slight crinkle, the way she knit her brow- something was bothering her and I had a pretty good idea what.

"Look," I said, "I'll sweeten the deal. You give me your blessing on this right here, right now, and I'll personally make sure Rusty doesn't break down once for the next week. Out of your hair entirely, won't even need to think about her."

She blinked, and the blues gave way to a sly little smirk.

"A week? I couldn't begin to relax long enough to take on the stress of planning a concert and sanitising your tracklist in a week. A month."

"Week and a half."

"4 weeks."

"Two."

For a moment, she was silent, and I wondered if I'd pushed my luck more than I should have, asked for too much in exchange for too little.

Then Alexis Monday smiled, and offered me her hand.

"It's a deal."

I took it with a grin, thanked her profusely, and tried not to think too hard about why she was acting like she'd never see this concert happen.
 
Beacon, Cycle 1: Three_Very_Simple_Rules()
Geier is patently unlikable while managing to remind me of actual people I have the misfortune of knowing instead of being a ridiculous strawmen. I appreciate the effort that took.
Here's the neat thing- it took zero effort whatsoever, because I just went in with the intent of making a genuinely evil person knowing full well I could just open my newsfeed at any point in the writing process and go "hm, no, yeah, he's not evil enough yet."

hooray for my self-destructive and unproductive doomscrolling habit yaaaaaaaaaaay-

Rather then pod peopling we night just gsther video evidence of the slave labor then launch a military assult. Ironwood would laugh in the jackass's face when he demands Atlas step in.
Fun fact; 40.6% of this post is Nostradamus-tier levels of prophetic for a possible end to this storyline.

Anyway, I was really invested in the characters, didn't mention that in my first comment. Looking forward to eventually getting a followup, but even if that didn't occur it was a really well done bit of world-building. I really liked how the two middle-management people were actually genuinely doing their best with what they were given, and that it's the people more removed from the people their decisions are impacting that are the problem.

Obviously this isn't always the case (mentioned in story, how they were middle of the road so some that are waaaaay worse with asshole bosses/discrimination), but I thought it was good at showcasing how most SDC employees are just people. They are cogs in a cold, uncaring machine and while they do what they can, at the end of the day their influence is limited.
Truthfully, I'm so glad that this is the case. This is the most, divorced from the general story that any interlude has gotten, so I can't say I wasn't incredibly worried about posting it and just receiving silent apathy because it wasn't anything to do with the main story and "we waited 2 months for this bollocks, what the fuck Prok-" hearing that that's not the case is a major relief.

As for why it exists at all...

Well, someone a while back, during one of my many whining posts about building and rebuilding a system from the ground up for this quest, mentioned that they thought I could do a pure-narrative version of this quest, and, well, this interlude's a taste of something in that vein. At some point after the winter break, I'm going to switch over to a purely-narrative Gaiden following the outcomes of this interlude from David's perspective again, as a purely narrative quest showing the effects of Geier's plan being put into action. Your choices would have a genuine, tangible effect on this quest, or, they won't- it depends on how well you do, really. It's something I've planned from beginning to end, to the point where it is basically a choose-your-own-adventure waiting to be written.

The only question is where to put it: do I start a new thread, and hope that something that's functionally original fiction while also being recursive fanfiction of my own quest, will gain enough traction to actually go somewhere, or do I do it in here, knowing full well that I'd be drawing away attention from the main story for probably months at a time?

Pessimistically, neither seems like a great option to me. Hold It In stops either way, for a couple months, but either I annoy people who want to see the main story go, or I do that and deal with the struggles of starting a new quest that might draw in people who don't understand the greater context of the quest. Granted, that would hardly be necessary, but it does mean I'd have way less momentum to work with as a QM.

Well... like I said, that's me being pessimistic. I'm trying to do that less, these days. Lord knows I'm miserable enough without adding fuel to the fire myself.

This just has bad idea written all over it.
Kinda makes you wonder what could have changed, doesn't it?

Anyway, I promised an update on Friday.

... It's here, I know, wild, right?



Slinking through the empty corridors of Beacon is a surprisingly nerve-wracking experience. The hard stone below your hard rubber soles clacked and echoed so loudly across the silent halls that you took your shoes off out of fear that you were going to wake up every soul in the building, if not Vale.

Thankfully, the dormitories are carpeted, so you didn't have to creep the entire way back shoeless- just, most of it.

… There aren't any cameras in Beacon, are there?

{Surprisingly few, actually- makes sense, I guess, wiring them up through stone would be a pain in the ass. Plus, honestly, I'm pretty sure Ozpin just knows whatever's going on in here all the time anyway.}

You make it back to your room at around 12am, tapping your Scroll against the lock as quietly as possible. The Transistor slips into its software and silences the unlock beep, letting you creep in-

To your teammates, wide awake, the lights still on, and all looking straight at you as you creep around the door.

They appear to have not moved an inch since you left. Lumen is still messing around with Luxin, Creme is doing history homework, and Ada is polishing her machete, testing its sharpness with a piece of paper that it just glides through on contact.

{Well, that was a complete waste of time and energy.}

"Jaune!" Creme says, leaping up and crossing the room to pull you into a crushing hug.

You're so tired that you honestly have to appreciate the physical contact for a change; you revel in it, reciprocate it for the first time in recent memory, wrapping your arms around Creme and pulling her closer. Tension leaves your shoulders at the contact, your body treating her like an earthing rod for stress.

… Ha. She's- she's grounding your negative charge.

The returned hug seems to short-circuit Creme for a second, because she stays like that for longer than you thought this would go. Through a small panel in the corner of your vision, you watch her eyes go wide, blinking owlishly as she realises what's happening. After a moment, you let go, and she pulls away. Her brow is furrowed with worry, looking you over for some hint as to what's wrong.

… Is reciprocating a hug really that out of character for you?

"Jaune… What happened? You've been gone for hours," asks Creme hesitantly.

Okay no yeah that makes infinitely more sense.

"I… had a conversation with Ozpin. It was a long conversation, and we went over a lot of stuff, so… I only just got out."

"What did you talk about?" asks Lumen from his place on the bed, placing a small blue bird on your shared bedside table, joining the small menagerie of other animal figures.

"He apologised for breaking the Transistor, Blue apologised for nearly giving him an aneurysm, I told him about the Process, he told me about magic..."

And… therein lies the rub.

It truly is amazing how the determination to share things with people just withers in the face of something like…

Salem.

On one hand, you don't want to deal with it by yourself- hell, Qrow all but begged you to tell them, because dealing with it by yourself was apparently a terrible idea.

On the other hand… Ada.

{You either tell all of them or none of them, I'm afraid. Trying to exclude her, or any of them, will rip the team apart. Besides, you owe her the knowledge that Ozpin knows about her and Lee.}

… Goddammit he's right.

"Magic? Like… pulling a rabbit from a hat magic?" asks Ada.

"It's… the worst thing is that I could honestly see him managing that, but without any of the trickery involved. He…"

You sputter out for a second, a belt in your engine slipping out of place, and sigh instead, pinching the bridge of your nose.

"Look, I've just… learned a lot of very strange and somewhat disturbing things- almost none of which I would believe being told secondhand. So… if we're gonna talk about this, I'm going to ask you to just take me on faith, okay? I'm too tired to argue about whether or not what I heard and saw was real, so can we just agree to leave any skepticism to the side for tonight?"

They don't say anything, and for one stomach-dropping moment, you do wonder if maybe that was the wrong move.

Then it passes, and Creme sighs.

"Do… you just want to leave it 'til tomorrow?" she asks.

"I-I mean, if you want me to talk about it now, I can, it's not a probl-"

"Talking about it tomorrow is for the best," Lumen says. "You are tired, and I do not want to have to deal with you leaving out key information by mistake. If you did not sprint down here to tell us, less than 24 hours is not going to make a difference."

You turn to the other boy as he finishes a tiny statue of a fish jumping up a waterfall.

What's more important, is the colour- it's the shade of blue that artists use when they want to convey ice. Just looking at it has you feeling the arctic breeze across your skin.

"Sorry," Creme says, "he's been like this ever since you left."

"Like what?" asks Lumen, thankfully sounding more confused than offended.

"An asshole, Lumen," Ada says. "You've been an asshole."

That's the point where he starts to bristle, but his Cell, what'd he call it- Alabaster, intervenes.

"Lumen, please draft luxin in the green, orange, and red ranges. You are heavily unbalanced."

Three of its petals come up, glowing in the same colours it just specified. Lumen says nothing, instead staring intently into the petals. You watch the colours appear from somewhere behind his eyes and travel down his internal jugulars, framing either side of his throat. A few seconds later, he's holding a small, leathery pouch, the colour of a newly-grown sapling, which he fills with a core of dark red tar, surrounded by slippery, almost slimy orange.

As it leaves him, something else seems to leave with it; some deathly calm, that had kept his mind rigid and uncaring of the human element. His eyes seem to brighten after a second, no longer hardened and glassy. A moment passes as he readjusts, and he has the grace to look utterly mortified about what just happened.

"Oh, God, I'm so sorry, I- fuck, I should have realised I was-"

"Hey, it's fine. You were stressed, and..."

{Don't say 'not yourself.' As a matter of fact, kill that sentence right there, there isn't a good way to end it.}

"... It's fine. Don't worry," you finally say. "So- we should probably go to bed, considering we have Combat first thing in the morning."

Lumen stares at you for a long while, searching your face for anything that might suggest you're not being completely honest in your forgiveness. It's clear that he's still beating himself up over his own slipup.

{It's... more like a relapse,} Blue informs you quietly.

With a sigh of what you hope is minor relief and not continued distress, Lumen breaks off the stare, instead waving a hand at the blue figurines, and you watch them begin to shimmer away in blue light.

"W- hey, hold on!"

Lumen freezes, and the shimmering stops. You approach, and pick up the small statue of the fish jumping up a waterfall; the last one he made before gaining some perspective.

Immediately, you have to pull up a thin layer of Aura to deal with the razor-sharp edges; if you weren't careful, you'd probably have sliced your fingers open.

The figure takes quite an impressionist bent on its subject matter; as you glance at the others- the Transistor helpfully graphing a timeline of creation based on skill and detail- you can almost chart the inevitable descent into cubism. The water, the rocky surfaces, and the water itself are masses of polygonal shapes, with no flowing surfaces or soft curves in their construction. Even the fish hasn't been spared, though its facets are small enough to pass for scales; enough detail is left to tell that it was supposed to be a carp of some sort.

Beyond the stylistic choices, though, the piece is perfect. It could have been formed from glass, for how exacting every surface and edge is.

You suppose the level of detail makes sense, since, once you get past making the whole giving light mass, texture, and scent bullshit, and the emotional havoc it causes your friend, Luxin really just seems to be different flavours of printing resin.

"... These are really good, man," you say truthfully.

Lumen blinks, seeming somewhat taken aback by the comment.

"Um… thanks, I guess."

"Why is it sharp?"

"Huh?"

"The edges, they're sharp. I almost cut my finger open on this."

He winces, just a bit.

"... Blue Luxin likes to hold an edge. It makes for good weapons. I should- probably get rid of the rest, just to make sure-"

"I mean, can I at least keep one? It'd be a shame to throw out all of them."

Lumen stares at you like you've just grown a second head, but when you don't back down, or play it like you were joking, he seems…

Relieved.

Exhaling a laugh, he just shakes his head.

"Knock yourself out."

Using Bracket's timeline as a reference, you pick out one from the centre- it's the same scene, or a similar one, at least. The water was still somewhat polygonal, as was the rocky cliffside, but the fish was rendered in exacting detail, down to single scales.

Lumen sits there, quietly saying nothing, but obviously waiting for some response, some judgement.

"... Yeah, this one," you say, after turning it over in your fingers, pressing them into the edges and vertices to find them merely rigid and angled, rather than razor-sharp.

Lumen nods appreciatively at your choice, and waves his hand at the rest, letting them break down in blue flashes of light that you and the girls have to turn away from to keep yourselves unblinded.

Once they stop, you place your new statue on your shared bedside table, and can't help but stop and appreciate how much space it has. A single statuette just seems… lonely, honestly.

After a moment's thought, you pull your Æther Dust crystal from the dresser cupboard. The crystal no longer sits in the cardboard carton you got it in- after you showed it to your family, Jaana whisked it away to her room for a day, and when you got it back, miraculously unexploded, it had gained a copper wire stand and a simple, two-layer lampshade, so you can choose how much light you want and how to diffuse it. You place it on the dresser next to the small statue, and take a moment to appreciate how much more lively it looks. This dresser is yours and Lumen's, now.

There are many dressers like it, but this one is yours.

"Well," Ada says, starting to stretch out the kinks in her back from, you presume, being hunched over her sword for nearly four hours. "If nothing's happening tonight, I'm gonna go to bed."

Absolutely fine by you. You could sleep for the next week.

The others mumble their agreement, and about ten minutes later, you're all in bed, happy to finally slip into sleep, away from the waking world…

… For about 5 hours.

haha oh yeah you actually have to get up early now

... Fuck.


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"You may believe that you don't need this conversation," Goodwitch starts the next morning. "That you don't require this training. That you are ready to get up on that stage and fight- that making it to Beacon has excused you from these lectures."

She stares out at the assembled class, all 40-some of you, with hard eyes.

"... I respect that you all made it through Initiation. I respect that enough to not make you perform the 'This Is Not A Game' chant the Signal folk will be familiar with. I respect it enough to be frank with you- I do not, and never will, give a damn what you think of my view on safety. You will listen to me, you will follow my rules, and you will perform the tasks set out before you with a minimal level of complaint, or you will not be attending my class. There are three very simple rules to my class:"

Professor Goodwitch raises a finger.

"First: combat starts, and ends, at my call. If it starts an instant before I give the command to begin, or continues an instant after I give the command to stop, you will be immediately removed from the stage, and joining me for a week's detention. Before anyone gets any ideas, I will never try to fake you out on either starting or ending a fight, and it is the only time I will speak during the fight. Excuses regarding being hard of hearing, or my attempting to fake you out, will only earn you a second week's detention."

She raises a second finger.

"Second: the only person that can stop a bout besides me, is yourself or your opponent. Should you ever decide to concede the bout, or feel truly unsafe on that stage, merely step back and state that you yield. You may do so safely at any time; I will hold your opponent's weapon in place long enough for them to register your surrender. Should they not get the message, I will confiscate their weapon, which they will get back after a week's detention."

A third, and final finger, joins its brethren.

"Third: In this class, everything outside these walls does not exist. There will be no grudge matches in this class. There will be no fooling around with friends in this class. There will be no going easy, or going hard, on teammates or siblings or rivals or crushes or paramours or nemeses in this hall. Every opponent you meet in this hall went through everything it took to get here just as you did; not treating them with the exact same respect you believe you deserve is the act of a fool. If I ever get the sense that this is not the case, the fight will be stopped immediately, you shall both vacate the stage, and join me for a week's detention. If you are truly so unable to settle your differences peacefully, please schedule an observed Self-Directed Sparring session, and you can work out any bad blood you have in that slot instead, under the eye of one of my assistants."

"Finally: should you ever willingly break my rules for the purpose of harming another student, I shall stop the fight by removing you from the room- via that wall," she says, gesturing to the back of the hall. "Once you have recovered in the medical ward, there will be a serious review as to whether or not your tenure at Beacon shall be continued. If you are found wanting during your probation, you will be leaving, and you will have nothing to show for it. You will be struck from our records, your weapon will be confiscated and scrapped, and we will send you the bill for the expense. The ornamental cube your weapon is reduced to will be the only evidence you ever attended Beacon, and it shall be donated to the administrative building, where it shall be used as a paperweight."

The word leaves her mouth in such a caustic hiss that Ruby audibly whimpers, clutching Crescent Rose in her arms and cradling it close to her chest. The rest of you are silent, either staring at Goodwitch in shock, or contemplating her words.

{Suckers. That's what they get for not proving their weapons are sapient beings to the administration.}

Somehow, you don't think that would stop her.

{... Nah, yeah, she scares me.}

As she should.

Goodwitch takes a breath, calming down to less than drill sergeant levels of vitriol.

"Please understand... that these rules are not here to punish you for being inexperienced; they are here to punish those among you who may see this class as an opportunity to practice malice on their fellow students, and to provide the simple anchors necessary to break someone out of a berserk rage. They are here to protect you, like every other rule in Beacon."

Kapila raises a hand.

"Yes, Ms Agni."

"What is this 'berserk rage' you speak of?"

Goodwitch smiles, and you realise that now that she's cleared the air on her three rules, this is the most relaxed you've seen her since… Well, yesterday in Glyphcraft.

You're beginning to wonder if the strict teacher act is, well, an act.

"As I'm sure you would all attest, attacks performed through Aura, even though they may not injure you, can still cause tremendous amounts of pain."

A low simmer of laughter passes through the crowd, their agreement nonverbal but plain nonetheless.

"Some Huntsmen and Huntresses, when pain is caused in the extreme, rather than shutting down, lose themselves in an uncontrollable rage. Adrenaline floods their bodies, they become stronger, faster, able to completely ignore injury to their Aura and their body, and as a result they become incredibly hard to put down. In that state, it is almost impossible to tell friend from foe, and entirely impossible to restrain one's actions. If it were to occur here, and nobody stepped in, they would attack their opponent until either they were knocked unconscious, or their opponent was dead."

In the corner of your eye, you can see Lumen looking very uncomfortable at this particular line of conversation, and the girls aren't looking much better. A few others around the class shift in their seats, feeling much the same way, it seems. You can see Yang looking at her feet, Naia suddenly taking a deep interest in his nails, Meri pursing her lips to one side, Kapila…

Kapila simply nods, silently filing the information for later.

"Please do not misunderstand; I am not disparaging those among you who have experienced this. It is absolutely nothing to be ashamed of- that same rage has saved good men and women's lives in the field. However, it is important to learn how to break free of it, especially when it is your classmates at the blade. After all, I personally prefer my duelling partners to be capable of reasoning beyond frothing at the mouth."

Another wave of laughter, slowly dispelling the blanket of discomfort that the topic had brought upon the class.

"Now- we learn nothing by merely sitting around and talking. Do we have any volunteers for the first fight?"

Do you raise your hand?

[] Yes- You wanna cut your teeth on this already. (Go through a tutorial/feedback session with the combat system as it stands, so we can all see what works and what doesn't. Also, the opportunity to Ping() Dove in the nuts, if that's any motivation.)

[] No- Eh… You had a loooooong night. You honestly don't mind just kinda zoning out until lunch. (Skip tutorial, move on to spending your lunch period picking apart the Process.)
 
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I'm just popping up from lurking here to say I cannot wait to see how you've got this combat system set up. Also, your style of writing continues to be strangely familiar to me, and overall quite pleasant. Thank you for your efforts, both so far and continuing onwards.
Well, here it is. Look upon my works, ye mighty, and despair.

Okay, so, I haven't actually fully caught up but... Will the events of Grimm Eclipse happen? I think that's canon, and I do kind of feel like Merlot might make an interesting foe for Jaune specifically. Granted, that's like inbetween Volumes 2 & 3, and we're still at Volume 1 timewise right?

Also, entirely different question, is this gonna be a "One Waifu Only" kind of quest? Fundamentally I don't mind, but my goodness so many Best Girls... that and I do think polyamory could do with more positive representation, but like... I just wanna know if a "shipping war" is gonna be a thing, or if "why not [X]?", cause I don't wanna get caught up in a shipping war.
I can't comment, because I know literally nothing about Grimm Eclipse beyond something something Merlot, something something Mountain Glenn, something something toying with forces beyond human ken in an utterly stunning display of hubris unlikely to be matched by anything short of just igniting the atmosphere with nuclear weapons. I also know that it takes place between volumes 2 and 3, so it's not going to be my problem until I'm 34.

:V

I thought he was definitely open to the idea of Jaune getting into a relationship, he was just going to sidetrack the questers by throwing so many Best Girls at us that we tear each other apart instead of actually committing to any one of them.
Honestly, that was mostly just a chaff statement in and of itself to hide the fact that I honestly had zero interest in writing romance. Now, I'll admit that my stance has softened over time, and as such, my demands are simple:

If people can play nice about it and not sabotage actually important parts of the quest in the process of trying to pick someone to hold hands with and smooch, I genuinely couldn't give less of a damn about who Jaune ends up holding hands with and smooching, or how many people Jaune ends up holding hands with and smooching, whether it's zero, or one, or two, or three. I don't have any personal preference for whoever he ends up with, because I'm reasonably certain I could make most serious suggestions work, with my confidence ranging from "piece of piss" to "ehhhhhhhhh that's a very hard maybe."

I try to approach shipping as a puzzle; what would it take to make this pairing work, and how many flavours can I get out of it? What if I change this, does that change that? How would excluding these people from the mix by pairing them off affect everyone left, who would they end up with? It's why I've never enjoyed that ride-or-die mentality so many authors and commenters seem to have; variety is the spice of life.

I've gotten off-track; romance will be, at best, a backseat aspect of this quest from beginning to end. The second it stops being that, and starts being detrimental, is when I start ignoring votes and comments about the subject again. Play nice, be gracious if your ship doesn't sail, and maybe the boy eventually gets better than a peck on the cheek.



About half the class raises their hands at first, and you choose not to join them-

{Dove has his hand up if you're hoping for some guilt-free violence.}

Ah. Yes, you… completely forgot about what you promised Sky yesterday. With a minimum of beleaguered sighing, you raise your hand and only blanch a little when Professor Goodwitch snaps to look at you.

"Arc, Bronzewing- you shall be the inaugural fight of this class."

If you didn't know better, you'd think she knew about what you'd said to Sky yesterday, or even what Dove did to deserve your collective ire.

{I have no doubts that she's aware.}

You doubt that she particularly cares. Is it a test?

Well, it doesn't matter. You shake 01 out of your hair, prompting it to gently hup over to Lumen's shoulder and hide in his hair with Alabaster. The other boy stifles a giggle at the sensation of two Cells shuffling about on the back of his neck, vying for space and chirping away at each other.

{Why do Cells enjoy hiding in people's hair so much?}

Nobody looks for us there, and it feels nice!

You get up and walk to the stairs on one side of the stage, Dove waiting for you on the other side. You know, objectively, that he's not giving you some smug look of superiority; literally, you can see his face broken down into possible emotions, and not one is looking down at you.

But you still wanna squash his smug little face with your bare hands-

{Jaune. Calm down. I know what you're looking to do, and we'll need to be smart if you want to get away with it, and the first step of being smart about this is to calm down.}

You take a measured breath and push your feelings to the side. By the time you're at your set of stairs, Professor Goodwitch watching impassively, you certainly feel… much better.

"Combatants, take to the stage," Goodwitch announces.

You ascend as Dove does the same, walking onto the stage. Your footsteps go from the hard clack of concrete to the low, warm creaking of old hardwood floors. Further in from the edge, there are two white squares, painted onto the boards with pinpoint precision.

"If you turn your attention to the floor, you shall see two white squares. All battles shall start from there unless I say otherwise. Please enter your squares, gentlemen."

{Hear that, Jaune? You're a gentleman.}

Resisting the urge to roll your eyes at Blue's teasing, you step into your square as Dove does the same, taking position about 10 metres away from each other.

"Ready yourselves."

The Transistor's handle presses into your hand, the bulk of the sword resting on your shoulder. In retrospect, you kinda wish you'd kept that divot from the Initiation, it sat wonderfully on your shoulder back then.

Dove draws his sword; an old pattern of longsword, made back before humans worked steel. You know it isn't, but you almost hope it was work-hardened, rather than oil-quenched. Bending his sword out of shape would be incredibly satisfying.

{Okay, you're not normally this vindictive, even against open racists. What's up?}

… He hurt your friend. Isn't that reason enough?

Your sword goes silent for a moment. Muffled chatter goes on in the background between your AI friends. You don't like being kept out like this, and for once you feel like forcing the issue-

Attitude: 4

You feel an eyelid twitch. It's just enough to force some introspection- yes, this isn't normal, is it? Getting this angry at Dove is one thing, but turning it on your friends?

{Look, we're... we're gonna keep you under surveillance for the moment. Just, call it a hunch?}

Not that you wanted to, but you're too mortified to object anyway.

While that little conversation went on, Dove flicked out the cylinder in the base of the sword- counting out five bullets from a pocket and loading them into the gun, before flicking it closed.

Right, this is- this is prep time. Gods, your head is fuzzy.

Functions loaded?

16 out of 16 MEM units used; current list is… everything but Spin().

Everything but Spin()?

Everything but Spin(). In ascending order of cost: Crash(), Ping(), Freeze(), Spark(), Bounce(), Load(), Jaunt(), and Breach(). We're full up.

{Spin() would probably be a little much for a first fight. Especially if it misses.}

8 seconds of out-of-control Spin() would probably cause an incredible amount of damage. To everything.

{Everything.}

Oh god I'm looking at the simulation now, we are never firing that inside Beacon. Ozpin would harvest your organs to pay for the damages.

"On my mark."

You shake the cotton out of your head and focus on Dove. Dove and his smug little

Perfectly focused face. No smugness, no goading. A mask of perfect neutrality. Glad to know he can take some things seriously.

A klaxon goes off, once, twice, three times-

"Begin!"



Initiative Rolls:

Dove: 1d10 +2 = 5
Jaune: 1d10 +2 = 12

Status:
Aura: 6/6
Injuries: None
Attitude: 4


Action Plan:

Actions available (and the order they will be taken in):
-1 Special Action
-2 Light Attacks OR 1 Heavy Attack OR 1 Assist/Malus, AND 1 Movement Action (Press Forward/Jaunt()/Disengage)

Current Equipment: The Transistor, Zero Hour.

Special Action:

[] Turn()- Take an extra turn, doubling all actions. All Functions besides Jaunt() are locked for 3 turns. Turn() is locked for 6.
[] Yield- Yield the fight, immediately ending hostilities. Walk back with no damage other than your pride.

Light Attacks: Hack-Slash +1, Success Threshold: 2. ½ Weapon Base Damage.

[]Crash(): Destructive analysis. Weak, short-range. 50% chance of causing the Crash status effect (double all damage, raises all Success Thresholds by 1. Lasts 1d3 turns.)
[] Ping(): a rapid-fire stream of energy bullets. (Spray-And-Pray: Dice Threshold lowered by 1 (7->6))
[] Spark(): Launch fast unstable shells that split into explosive particles. (AoE: -1 to Kinetics dodge roll. Can hit multiple targets.)
[] Zero Hour: The bladed edge of your shield isn't just for show. Go for a quick slash or two, test his defences. (Requires Movement Action: Press Forward)

Heavy Attacks: Hack-Slash. Success Threshold: 3. x1.5 Weapon Base Damage.

[] Bounce(): Discharge a ricocheting bolt that jumps from Target to Target. (Homing: can hit multiple targets.)
[] Load(): Form a volatile Packet. Strike Packet to produce a large blast. (Batter Up: Forms a Target that must be attacked to cause damage.)
[] Breach(): Pierce Targets with great force across long distances. (Long-Range: Is capable of hitting most Targets without moving into close-range combat.)
[] Zero Hour: The bladed edge of your shield isn't just for show. Gut him like a Kuchinashi game hen. (Requires Movement Action: Press Forward)

Movement: Kinetics. Success Threshold: 1.

[] Press Forward: Bring yourself into Close-Range with a Target. Negates Disengage actions on successful Kinetics roll.

[] Disengage: Move out of combat with a Target. Regain 1 point of Aura every round out of combat.

[] Jaunt(): Transport User to a nearby location directly ahead. Any enemies in the path travelled have a 50% chance of gaining the Green-Gilled status effect. (Movement Success Thresholds are doubled. Attack Success Thresholds are not. 10% chance of vomiting. This has no strategic advantage, it's just gross, psychologically disheartening, and feeds that vindictive little gremlin in your brain that likes seeing gross things happen to people you don't like.)

Assistance and Hindrances: Stat-Specific. Success Threshold: 2.

Assistance:
[] Analyse Yourself: Reveals hidden status effects or Hindrances. Deal with them, perhaps. (Attitude)
[] Write-In

Hindrances:
[] Analyse The Enemy: you've never seen Dove fight before, so it's time for some on-the-job training. See how he moves- learn how he's going to move. (Learning)
[] Write-In
 
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man puppies really do just monopolise your time and energy huh, god I envy 6-year-old-me for having the energy to deal with this

Hey @Prok can we get a swaem Computing a Fuction that Basicaly allow us to use the Process Computing power on the transitor?
Yyyyyyyes but also no. Yes, in the sense that you can absolutely do that, sure, there's nothing stopping you, no in the sense that it's not really necessary. The Transistor is already arbitrarily powerful, and, being in constant communication with the Process means that anything it can't handle, it can immediately pass up the line for them to chew on.


Dove rushes forward, his reaction time just a little bit quicker than yours unaugmented by the Transistor. However, very little is faster than warp speed. You queue up Jaunt() and phase through him once he reaches centre-stage, bending the space between you and a spot roughly 30 feet ahead of you into a single point.

Reality snaps back to its intended form, and you are now standing on Dove's starting spot.

Looking back, you watch him go through the same experience anyone who gets caught in a Jaunt() does. You don't, entirely understand it, but from what the Transistor's managed to tell you, Jaunt()'s warping of space would follow a bell-curve distribution in terms of how much space is warped- the endpoints are all but untouched, while the middle…

The middle takes a beating. As does anyone caught in the middle.

And yet, there is no reaction. He just turns around and looks at you, no disorientation whatsoever, with that smug little shitfuck grin on his shitfuck face-

"Mr Bronzewing?" Goodwitch says, concern clear in her voice. "Are you well?"

Green Gilled Status Effect
d% roll (DC 50): 73. Fail!
d% roll (DC 90): 89. Pass.


Wait, what?

He's fine! He looks like he's still ready to fight, why the FUCK IS SHE ASKING IF HE'S ALRIGHT-

{Okay, that's enough. Listen to yourself right now! Ignoring what an asshole he is, you're very close to breaking Goodwitch's rules here. The same rules that breaking could get you kicked out of Beacon.}

Adrenaline levels up. Dopamine levels up. Norepinephrine levels up. Your amygdala's going off like the light show at a concert, Jaune, and it gets worse every time you look at him.

Of course it does! He hurt your friend! He's a racist jackass who has no reason to be here! He's-

{No, Jaune, you don't understand. It gets worse every time you look at him. This anger state doesn't appear to have a peak. If you keep going, your heart's going to give out from all the adrenaline being pumped into i- wait, you think he's fine?}

Of course he's fine! He's just standing there, smirking at you, waiting for you to make the next move, and…

Nothing else.

You watch for a second longer and notice that Dove… isn't moving. Not even a gentle sway; like someone ran in and plonked down a statue of the boy to mess with you when you weren't looking.

{... That's not what he's doing at all, Jaune. He's actually, uh, fighting very hard to keep his breakfast down.}

A wireframe outline of a human being appears where Dove is, crouched over, hand clamped over its mouth and gently retching.

Something wavers- Dove wavers, like the heat haze over the roads in summer.

Finally, it clicks.

Your Dove, the smug asshole who pisses you off so much it actually hurts a little, is nothing more than an assault upon your agency as a human being. An illusion designed to make you sloppy and overstep your bounds.

You feel your Aura coil in your chest, finally recognising the intrusion for what it is. It begins to spread through your eyes, your mind, sending the influence of Dove's Semblance spiralling down the drain.

Take a deep breath. Remember what Qrow taught you.

You are the captain of this ship.

The spell breaks- the illusion you thought was Dove disappears, reality reasserting itself and leaving you watching the boy take deep, measured breaths, his stomach finally settling. It seems like it was a close thing, though.

Your rage joins the illusion, cut out at the bottom and its peak flattened. It's almost disturbing how you've gone from wanting to tear him a new asshole to honestly wanting to go over there and hand him a bag.

{Gods. Imagine having a Semblance that makes people angry at you.}

Almost worked, didn't it?

{Mm.}

A moment passes as Dove slowly recovers from his ordeal.

"... You sure you're okay?" you ask him quietly.

It feels, weird, being able to ask that sincerely of him. You still feel like you should be angry, and yet you simply aren't.

{Your emotions are rubberbanding- overcompensating for the snapback. Give it a while, they'll settle.}

Dove gives you an easy smile, barely strained by his queasiness.

"It's passed, but thank you for your concern."

Because of course he couldn't make it easy to hate him. You wait awkwardly on Dove's starting point as he slowly works through his nausea, taking deep, measured breaths to settle himself. He gulps once, thickly, and takes a ready stance.

Movement: Press Forward
2d10, DC 2: 8, 7. Success.


He doesn't underestimate you this time- he sprints forward, sword ready for an upward slash, but before you can Jaunt() away- not through him again, of course, that would be very mean- he darts to the side, and you have to bring the Transistor up to block his probing swipes.

One, two, he has you on the back foot for a moment, pressing hard enough that you can't get a chance to queue up Functions that won't blow his face off. On the bright side, you finally get a solid look at his weapon; a simple Hallstatt sword, long and without much ornament, even forgoing something as basic as a fuller, or a ricasso. Instead, the blade appears to have been created from four separate pieces riveted together, lines of darker iron clear where they've been pressed together. If it's a Formshift weapon, though, you certainly can't figure out what its other form is.

Dove's strategy is as much a mystery- you can't figure out why he seems so keen to lock blades with you, someone wielding a larger, heavier sword that you could easily overpower him with-

Heavy Attack: Point-Blank Hallshott
3d10, DC 3: 7, 7, 7. Success.


As you move to prove that point to him, twisting his sword flat against his collar, you suddenly remember that he loaded bullets into the hilt of his sword at the start of the fight.

It's only then that you understand your mistake. That final twist you just forced him into has pointed the barrel of his gun straight between your eyes.

Before you can move, before you can disengage or twist it out of the way or trigger Turn()- Dove pulls the trigger.

So, fun fact about being shot in the head- it fucking sucks. First off- you are deaf. Being that close to an explosion that large is not good for your hearing, Aura or not. Secondly, Aura takes 99% of the force out of it, sure, but that 1% is still a lot of energy.

Your head snaps back as if you've just had your hair pulled by a Beringel, the force transmitting down your neck and into your chest, terminating at the waist as your entire upper body tilts back. For a moment you're left wondering if the bullet pierced anyway, cracked through your skull and turned your brain into a pile of shredded tofu. Wondering if, perhaps, this moment might just be the instant before the lights shut off for good, stretching into infinity as the last of the lightning leaves you.

The moment passes. The heart continues to beat. The lungs take in breath. The brain flickers like a lightning storm, and your soul burns in your chest like dry ice. You are alive, still. Raw, unhinged adrenaline drives that thought into delusions of immortality, but you quickly quash them before they get out of hand.

{Aura's flickering. One more of those and you're out of the fight.}

Shift feet. Steady yourself.

You look at Dove. You don't know what your face looks like right now, but you watch him blanch.

… Yeah, that little bit of satisfaction is all you.



Patch Notes:
-Distance Meter added: the Distance Meter is an abstraction of the environment and entities within that will allow the player to judge what actions they are capable of at a glance and in a distinct enough fashion that the QM is less likely to forget to put the damn thing in.
-Movement is now simply an action that can be taken- if it isn't taken, then up to three Light Attacks can be taken, or one Heavy Attack or Assist/Malus and a Light Attack.
-All stats in the HACK/TALK system are now capped at 6. Specifically stated Success Thresholds, such as the Attack Sinister, have been altered to reflect this.
-Attitude section added to vote block; Mainly acts as a reminder that Attitude can be spent to add dice to specific rolls, and add a section to block that out on.

Information Update:

Enemy Semblance Discovered!

Gadfly:
-Dove's Semblance forces people to become angry with him, offering up illusions of him being the worst him he can possibly be, and offering up thought-shards to feed into the burgeoning confirmation bias that naturally forms. The end result is people being driven into a berserk state that leads to sloppy, predictable fighting at best, or being attacked by someone who is both skilled and genuinely wants to kill him at worst.
-As with all Semblances that affect the mind, once it is recognised for what it is, the effects are very easy to dispel. You are the captain of this ship.
-???
-???

Distance Meter:

Status: Touching Noses
[] [Jaune/Dove/X] [] [] [] [X] []

Status:
Aura: 4/6: Flickering.
Injuries: None
Attitude: 4

Enemy Status:
Aura: 7/8: Full(ish).
Injuries: Green Gilled: All Movement Success Thresholds doubled. Duration left: 3 rounds.

Action Plan:

Actions available (and the order they will be taken in):
-1 Special Action
-2 Light Attacks OR 1 Heavy Attack AND 1 Assist/Malus, OR 1 Movement Action OR An Extra Light Attack (Press Forward/Jaunt()/Disengage)

Current Equipment: The Transistor, Zero Hour.

Special Action:

[] Turn()- Take an extra turn, doubling all actions. All Functions besides Jaunt() are locked for 3 turns. Turn() is locked for 6.
[] Yield- Yield the fight, immediately ending hostilities. Walk back with no damage other than your pride.

Light Attacks: Hack-Slash +1, Success Threshold: 2. ½ Weapon Base Damage.

[]Crash(): Destructive analysis. Weak, short-range. 50% chance of causing the Crash status effect (double all damage, raises all Success Thresholds by 1. Lasts 1d3 turns.)
[] Ping(): a rapid-fire stream of energy bullets. Medium-range. (Spray-And-Pray: Dice Threshold lowered by 1 (7->6))
[] Spark(): Launch fast unstable shells that split into explosive particles. (AoE: -1 to Kinetics dodge roll. Can hit multiple targets.)
[] Zero Hour: The bladed edge of your shield isn't just for show. Go for a quick slash or two, test his defences.

Heavy Attacks: Hack-Slash. Success Threshold: 3. x1.5 Weapon Base Damage.

[] Bounce(): Discharge a ricocheting bolt that jumps from Target to Target. (Homing: can hit multiple targets.)
[] Load(): Form a volatile Packet. Strike Packet to produce a large blast. (Batter Up: Forms a Target that must be attacked to cause damage.)
[] Breach(): Pierce Targets with great force across long distances. (Long-Range: Is capable of hitting most Targets without moving into close-range combat.)
[] Zero Hour: The bladed edge of your shield isn't just for show. Gut him like a Kuchinashi game hen.

Movement: Kinetics. Success Threshold: 1.

[] Press Forward: Bring yourself into Close-Range with a Target. Negates Disengage actions on successful Kinetics roll. Unless you're planning to kiss him into submission, this isn't really an option.

[] Swap: Simple- you're on the edge of the map, so switch places with him and get the chance for some distance that way. Free action.

[] Disengage: Move out of combat with a Target. Regain 1 point of Aura every round out of direct combat.

[] Jaunt(): Transport User 3 Spaces down the Distance Meter instantly, negating any attempts to attack them in the interim. Any enemies in the path travelled have a 50% chance of gaining the Green-Gilled status effect. (Movement Success Thresholds are doubled. Attack Success Thresholds are not. 10% chance of vomiting. This has no strategic advantage, it's just gross, psychologically disheartening, and oh wow you don't actually feel all that great about causing that to people now. Wow that was a nasty Semblance.)

Assistance and Hindrances: Stat-Specific. Success Threshold: See Below.

Assistance:
[] Centre Yourself- you're already riding the high of overcoming his Semblance; let's try and make that a little more permanent, yeah? (Spend 1 Attitude, then roll the remaining (3d10): if you roll 1 success, you keep the spent attitude; 2, you gain an extra; on a crit, you max out your Attitude stat.)
[] Write-In

Hindrances:
[] Hip-Check- Martial arts aren't really your usual forté, but it wouldn't be too hard to get a foot between his legs and twist. Throw him to the ground, get a couple free hits in. (Hack-Slash-1.
[] Write-In

Attitude:
[] Do you want to spend Attitude on anything?
-[] Write-in ([ACTION]: [NUMBER SPENT]
 
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How did we roll past the max points on a d900? Skill bonus?
I gave a +50 bonus because this was just after Jaune found out in-story about, aaaalllll of Ada's horseshit. I gave a +50 bonus directly before I made the dream roll.

Then I rolled a 900, so I just fucking tore up my notes and wrote the Passionflower dream instead. If you'd gotten dream 20, it essentially would have been the same, except with it being a choice to either pull an incredibly risky move and go for it, which more likely than not would have led to a bad end, or leave it and find ways to take the strain off, keep yourself safe, mitigate the effects, all that good stuff. If I had rolled anything other than a 900, but above 900, you wouldn't have gotten the Passionflower dream, it just wouldn't have been so uncertain whether you could have pulled it off.

Well, this quest is a treat. I honestly haven't enjoyed a piece of fiction this much in a while.
The fact that it's partially transistor has a bit to do with it.
Thank you. This quest has always been a labour of love, even as I grow worse and worse at the actual labouring part, but posts like these always make it worthwhile. One of these days I'll keep a routine.

@Prok this may be a non-sequitor but whenever I think about aura arts for the quest, the first thing that pops into my head are the nen techniques from Hunter x Hunter.
Without giving too much away, Aura Arts is a study of intimacy. Intimacy in body, mind, and soul, and the ability to be presently aware in and of them, and presently aware in and of the body, mind, and soul of others. Once you are present within your soul, controlling it is like moving your body- not something you think about, something you just do. After that...

You must learn to dance.

Anyway, update.



You're not going to lie- you're a little angry that you fell for that. Not, as angry as you were, mind, that's a long way off… but you're still a little irritated.

Frankly, you just want to end it quickly. Dove is, and it doesn't grate too much to admit it, the better duellist. Even if his Semblance isn't living rent-free in your head anymore, he's still in there- he's skilled at feinting, taking cheap shots, and keeping people off balance so they can't counter it.

Now, while you respect all of that; you know what?

You're skilled at bending the flow of time around your little finger and you think it's time that talent got put to good use.

"Engage Turn()," you whisper.

"What was that?" Dove asks, a thread of concern running through his voice. "... Jaune, are you alright?"

{Acknowledged.}

Nervous system connected. Acceleration begins on your count.

No count. Do it.

"Mr Arrrrrr…"

The slowdown follows a softer curve than it did in the Signal exam or Weiss's near-assassination. You watch with some interest as Professor Goodwitch's face slowly petrifies, lips and tongue never forming the final stop of your name. In this extended timeframe, Dove simply looks like he's still waiting for confirmation that you're good.

CNS connection stable. Time dilation in effect. Turn() fully engaged.

Just the words you wanted to hear. You start with dessert; taking a step back, just so you're not quite within ballroom dancing range of Dove, you queue up a Load() instance.

Heavy Attack: Load()
2d10, DC 3: 7, 8. Partial Success.


You slam the Transistor down, and the instance forms in front of its eye, the result of an equation designed to draw energy from one of the Transistor's many sources, before compressing it all into a twist of folded space, where it continues to draw power and loop it back around- a neverending explosion, looped around on itself in an infinite maze of paths of least resistance. The mass of snarling power and cubes bounces towards Dove, waiting for the right imbalance to set it off. Turn() readjusts, shifting time forward just enough to let you watch him register the attack.

"Whhhhaaaat thhheeee...-!"

And for your next trick- setting it off.

{Crash()?}

Yuh-huh.

You slam down your sword and trigger the first queued Crash().

Light Attacks: Crash()
3d10, DC 2: 10, 9, 10. CRITICAL SUCCESS! Crashed status effect autoprocs!
7, 8, 9. Success!
3, 7, 7. Success!


The wave of destructive analysis, a thousand bars and lines of light, wash over both the Load() instance and Dove himself. The creation of a Crash() file has always been a little hit or miss, but something about his Aura lets it worm through the cracks much easier than usual. Some people are unlucky like that- his file is roughly 18 terabytes in size, documenting every minor structural flaw in his Aura and every weak point in his blade or his body, and the Transistor uses this to redial your attacks to focus on them.

You trigger a second Crash(), dragging your sword out of the rapidly Restore()ed hole in the stage you just made.

{Uh, Jaune-}

A second wave passes over him. Turn()'s ability to accelerate begins to waver, and you slow down just enough to watch him finally register what's happening. His face twists from dull surprise to pain- you watch him grit his teeth, bringing up his sword to defend himself.

One more. You raise your sword and bring it down again, triggering a third Crash()-

{JAUNE WAIT NO-}

SHIT FUCK NO IT JUST TRIGGERED WHAT-

You watch in horror as Dove slides back just a little more, the third Crash() washing over him. with it, Turn() begins to reach its limits. Time flickers just enough to let you watch Dove's Aura bar firmly hit the red, and the Load() instance begin to vibrate like an angry Rapier Wasp nest.

Warning- opponent Aura critically low. If that instance goes off, his Aura will break and the excess energy will strike him directly.

... Fuck.

{I'm sorry, I wasn't quick enough to tell you.}

No, it's fine, you weren't, exactly paying attention. It's on you for not making sure.

For just a moment, though, the idea of just letting this run its course, letting the Load() explode unimpeded and shatter his Aura and give him a few burns and internal bruises to show for it- it does appeal to you. For just a moment, it's worth being kicked out of Beacon.

Sanity reasserts itself a moment later.

… Any plans?

{Place yourself in the blast, maybe push him to the ground. It won't break your Aura, and he'll still be lower than you in the end. Hopefully, you'll, not be put on probation.}

Ha... this is gonna suuuuck.

{Mhm. I'm sure he'll appreciate the whole not being grievously injured thing, though.}

Oh, don't patronise me.

{Okay, fair enough.}

You judge a short-range Jaunt(), Bracket automatically dialling down the energy needed to perform the jump. With a sigh, you queue it up. Blip. You're now in front of Dove. You feel the pull of some preserved momentum from the quick hop, pushing you towards him.

Turn() ending in three. Prepare yourself.

The instant you stop moving in Turn() time, you let go of the Transistor and wrap your arms around Dove's waist. Dove, still stunned, doesn't put up a fight as you wrestle him to the ground, lifting him off his feet and slamming him onto his back.

"GET DOWN!"

The Transistor places itself between you and the ensuing explosion, but it still blows you and Dove to the floor. Your back is being licked by the sun- a wave of heat and energy waves over your back, and you feel your Aura begin to crack under the pressure, growing thin on the other side as you knock chins with your opponent on the way down. Thankfully, Load() is only a short-lived explosion.

{... Aren't all explosions short-lived by default? Isn't being short-lived kind of the defining characteristic of an explosion?}

Save the semantics for after the concussion wears off, please.

"Cease!" Professor Goodwitch calls out, her voice snapping off the walls like a gunshot. "Mr Bronzewing, Mr Arc, sheath and disengage your weapons, and then I expect a very good explanation for what just happened."

The Transistor silently floats off of the stage, leaning itself against the stair railing as the bright turquoise light inside dims to almost nothing. Pulling yourself to your feet, you unconsciously offer Dove a hand.

Breaking one's Aura is a very unpleasant experience- not only has the light of your soul been shattered into a billion pieces, but you're suddenly at the mercy of the strains of fighting at a superhuman level. The low-level enhancement of muscles and bones, the cushioning needed to work on that level of physicality without tearing yourself apart; gone.

Dragged down to the level of mere mortals after fighting like gods. He's going to feel like hell for the rest of the day.

It doesn't surprise you much when Dove, having just had the wind knocked out of him, doesn't acknowledge you, instead trying to suck air into his paralysed diaphragm. You keep your hand up for him, and when Dove finally notices, he stares at it with some bemusement.

As soon as your fingers make contact, you realise that you can't feel his Aura at all; if the explosion didn't break it, slamming him into the ground must have finished the job. You haul him to his feet with a grunt of effort, steadying him when he starts to sway. With a calming breath, you look at Professor Goodwitch.

… And your assembled classmates. The reactions are varied, on a spectrum from mild surprise to outright shock. You realise that almost nobody here outside of your team has seen Turn() up close before, and even they haven't seen you use it so…

{Maliciously?}

Let's say efficiently.

{Uh huh.}

Professor Goodwitch raises an eyebrow at you, and you give a little wheeze of panic. Public speaking. Not your forté.

"Uh, I…" you start, quickly petering off into nothing.

Your instructor sighs, choosing mercy instead of letting you flail for the words.

"After class, Mr Arc," she says, though not with any kind of heat. "Vacate the stage, please."

You nod and check on Dove again.

"You okay?"

"I'm, fine, I think. Hey, um- Jaune?"

When you turn back, you see that he's offering you a hand. Looking at him, you see no sign that he feels bad about losing- even to something as extreme as Turn().

"Good fight."

You give him a faint smile and shake his hand- a little tension leaving you when you feel his Aura slowly recovering. A little bit of sportsmanship never hurt anyone, right?

{Mmm… once or twice, but those were heel matches.}

Pft- shut up!

Blue cackles to himself, inordinately proud that he got you with that.

|||

After an awkward explanation of Turn()'s quirks, Goodwitch, thankfully, does not give you detention or turn the Transistor into an ornamental cube. Instead, you were given a polite threat request to better manage your ability to crunch many actions into a small amount of time.

{It's all fun and games until you accidentally vaporise an opponent.}

It can still be fun and games after that.

The pair of them have been yammering back and forth for the past couple of hours, attempting to keep you awake through your Grimm Studies class. Soon, lunch rolls around, and you can breathe a sigh of relief, thankful that you're now no longer in danger of passing out from sheer boredom. You take a sip of your cafeteria coffee- you saw Oobleck take some earlier so you know this is the good shit- and sigh in contentment. Ada, Creme, and Lumen take sips of their own beverages and sigh in much the same way.

You did it. You all made it to lunch, on five hours of sleep, and you think Team JACL did pretty well, all things considered. Nobody passed out, nobody was called out in class for snoozing, sure, you got shot in the head but hey, that's Combat Training. Besides- after that, you've never felt more awake in your life.

"Hey, uh, you wanna take our lunch outside? Some of the little courtyards have benches, and it's a nice day out," Creme suggests to the rest of you.

Never say you can't pick out a request for a private conversation when you hear it.

"Sure, lead the way," you say, picking up the paper wrapper your burger came in and wrapping it up again.

Ada and Lumen look down at their dishes- some kind of grilled fish, and a bowl of beef and rice- then at each other. With a shrug, Lumen forms a blue serving tray and takes Ada's food with him. You do your best to ignore the odd stares drawn by your exit, though it does speed your pace just a little. Nobody stops you, so, you leave. Isn't it nice when things actually go your way?

The courtyard is quite pleasant, and does indeed have a bench and picnic table, alongside a cloistered path that held pots and planters with delicate flowers that wouldn't survive under direct summer sunlight. Bracket points out a couple of odd scuffs; as if they'd been stored on their ends, then very rapidly dragged across the ground. Now that he's pointed that out, you can see quite a bit of damage to this little courtyard. It's all minor damage, naturally, but it's still… damage.

It's recent- the repairs are less than a day old. Looks like lots of impacts from… something small. About the size of a human fist.

Uh… huh.

"Creme, why is this courtyard so… banged up?"

Creme freezes in place, eyes suddenly focused on nowhere nearby. A moment passes, and then she's back in the room.

"Oh, uh, haha, this is where the CQC elective took place. Ozpin can get…" that far-off look is back, "e-enthusiastic."

The word wavers in her throat, and you watch her hand tremble a little around the paper cup of coffee she'd brought with her.

{Brothers, what did he do?}

You don't know, you're not unpacking it right now, not your circus, not your monkeys. Instead, you just nod in commiseration, because oh boy you're about to make things worse.

Even as you think it, your willingness to tell them the whole truth wavers. Too big to keep to yourself. Too big to give away to your friends. Fuck, this sucks.

{They already know enough that if you try to lie to them, they'll figure it out. It's too late to back out now, Jaune. All we can do is choose how we want to approach this.}

"Jaune? Are you okay? You've not touched your food since you sat down," Creme asks you.

Glancing at her, you realise that your teammates are staring at you with concern.

"Uh… I'm, fine. Just, not hungry, right now."

Lie. You are ravenous. Any kind of fighting makes you seriously consider the logistics and culinary challenges in actually eating an entire horse.

"... Is it about last night?" Lumen asks. When you look at him, you watch the flash of orange in his eyes wick away, disintegrating back into light fast enough that you almost think you imagined it.

"... Yeah. I, uh… have a lot to say, and I'm… going to, definitely, just trying to figure out what to talk about first."

"Take your time. It sounds like you're spoiled for choice," he replies patiently.

Boy, he doesn't know the half of it. How are you opening, anyway?

[] Ozpin- "... Ozpin's an immortal wizard who wields magic. The Transistor broke because he used said magic to make it stop thinking after it tried to poke his soul a bunch. He's not mad, it's fine, they made up."

[] Ada- "Ada I kinda let slip that Boriah Lee's coming here for you, I am- so sorry, it just kinda… came up in conversation."

[] The Process- "... So, he knows about the Process now. He was…" Awestruck? Left speechless? Beyond ecstatic? "... impressed."

[] Rip Off The Bandaid- "... Have any of you ever had a Witch-Queen dream?"
 
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I almost forget something. I just created a page on TV Tropes about this quest. With how good this quest is, I think it deserves one.

There are not many tropes there, so if anyone wants to contribute, I'll be grateful.

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Hold It In (Fanfic) - TV Tropes

You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test from Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about. For you have the Transistor. Hold it in is a RWBY/Transistor …
 
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… Been a while, yeah? Obligatory necromancy joke here.

I'll be blunt; in what's rapidly and depressingly becoming something of a technically-yearly tradition, those personal issues I briefly talked about kept piling up faster than I could deal with them, and I just had a complete nervous fucking breakdown for which all of my projects have suffered, not just this one. Writing is beyond difficult right now, focusing on anything has been an uphill battle for some time now, but… ech. I chipped away at it. Something something Confucius quote here.

I've, less recently at time of final edit, taken some time away from everything, both to quietly work on something completely new and also not deal with other people for a hot minute. While I was working on that completely new thing, away from other people's opinions, I had something of a revelation about writing, in general, and my writing in particular.

Everything I've started, this, Don't Fear The Reaper, my half-dozen original stories, the tabletop RPG I'm writing right now; I started writing them because I wanted to read them, I wanted to write them. They were all… inherently selfish acts, that I just happened to let everyone else in on.

I forgot that, and I forgot that somewhere around the point I was mashing together a slapdash, overcomplicated system that ran counter to the entire point of making the system in the first place, which was to make things easier for myself. I was stressed out of my gourd over things that neither benefited me nor this quest.

But, I have the right to be a little selfish. A little, indulgent in my writing. Proks can have a little bit of ego, as a treat. Without it, there's no… driving force behind the, or at least my desire to write. It's like trying to start a car without an alternator- the battery will keep you puttering along for a little while until it dies and then the rest of the car dies with it.

So, as my first bit of selfishness- I am once again scrapping the entirety of Hold It In's system, and replacing it with, and this is going to sound experimental, possibly highly dangerous:

Nothing.

From this point onwards, and I fully reserve the right to drag my future self out to the desert and bury him up to the neck should he go back on this, Hold It In is going to be a purely narrative-driven quest.

There will be no more hiding behind dice rolls, behind stats and weapon upgrades- things will just play out as they should narratively. Armour, Aura, the success system, H.A.C.K/T.A.L.K, that glorious fucking meme of a system Clever and I bullshat together over like two days- kinda gone, kinda gone, gone, and very gone.

The only numbers from this point on are going to be stuff like me rolling a d6 to decide how something should pan out, or a d100 to see how stuff goes down in the interim, and incremental trackers. Stuff like Jaune deciding on giving the Transistor a soul, or how close he is to passing a class or working on a new Function.

I think I can handle basic arithmetic. Which, on reflection, also includes all of the things I said I needed to make systems for. I have spent so long overcomplicating everything for nobody's benefit.

You might think this would mess with Functions a fair bit, but on review, surprisingly little change there. You can keep creating them as you please, the research is just incremental numbers and like two dice rolls maybe, but now they just work on narrativium rather than a concrete system I have to balance for. Ironically enough, now that I no longer have to quantify whatever numbers you people throw at me within a system of gameplay, they can just… stand on their own, as is. So, go wild, but, you know, be ready to explain them to me in little words.

I think, on some level, I needed to be this kind of selfish. I was fucking delusional to believe that I could write this purely for other people when I've poured, now, half a decade into it. If it's not a project for me, it's not a project I can write, and projects that require me to build and grandfather in an entire TTRPG system, definitely aren't projects for me. I just can't write solely for the pleasure of other people, and I especially can't split my time between writing this and trying to cobble together a working RPG system that covers the frankly exhaustive number of things that RWBY has to keep track of. That's not fun for me, and I wouldn't be surprised if it wasn't fun for you either and you've all just been too polite to say otherwise.

So, look, it's starting to smell funny, it's turning black- the limb's gangrenous, it's got to come off if we want to save the rest of the body. Maybe, since it turns out I do like building RPGs, as their own project and not as a distraction from the actual writing of this quest; in the future, I might take what's here, and turn it into something tangibly playable as a RWBY RPG. Maybe I'll build it into something completely different.

I'm an efficient little scavenger, sue me. Most writers need to be.

So, yeah, to summarise, I say this with all the genuine love and care I can muster for every one of you- fuck all y'all. You were right, but, fuck all y'all, and a happy anniversary to Hold It In.

:V



You're not entirely sure when your options boiled down to 'cause 4d8 psychic damage,' and 'perform an absurdist piece about your sword making friends with Ozpin,' but hey, that's where the mind goblins have dragged you today.

{I don't think opening with Salem is a good idea. We should try and cushion that blow, I think.}

Mm.

"So, first off… I'm about to tell you a lot of really heavy stuff. I mean… the kind of thing that keeps you up at night. And, what I'm about to tell you, I mean this- you cannot tell anyone, no matter how much it weighs on you. Not, a therapist, not your best friends, not boyfriends, not family; you cannot tell another soul the things you learn at this table. So, if you want out, well… I won't blame you."

It doesn't really surprise you when nobody gets up to leave. You're planning to kill Boriah Lee together; they can't imagine anything worse than that.

You feel genuinely queasy about breaking that illusion.

"... I think we should start with Ozpin. He's… a pretty big topic, already. So… you remember how I said his soul was weird?"

Creme nods instantly, while Lumen takes a second to think before doing the same. Ada just seems confused.

"Uh… kinda? I thought you were just exaggerating, though," she says. "I mean, he's a human, right? His soul can't be too weird, right?"

You exhale, a huff of laughter that feels a little too dismissive, even knowing what you're about to tell her.

"Sorry. Um, Ozpin… is human, he's just… not our kind of human."

Ada blinks. Complete incomprehension.

"... Elaborate," she says flatly.

"Humanity went extinct about 12,000 years ago, according to him, and he's one of the sole survivors from that, iteration. We came back, obviously, but… not the same. Lesser, if you were feeling uncharitable."

"Lesser? How'd you figure that?" Creme asks.

"He doesn't have a Semblance. He has magic. It's, the same thing he used to lash out at the Transistor."

Before anyone can bring out their objections, the sword in question projects a hologram of Ozpin forming four balls of light, letting them dance around his fingers. It shows him tapping his glasses, and staring at the Process in its true form, and the same sight from your perspective.

The sight of those golden streamers filled with bright red eyes draws a gasp from Creme.

"It just… doesn't have the limitations a Semblance does. He described it as… interpreting reality through a different lens."

"{He described it as understanding why gods are born in the desert,}" the Transistor interjects.

They jump at that, not used to your sword interjecting, but its interjection is absorbed like everything else. Nobody says anything, taking the time to slowly wrestle with the existence of capital-M Magic.

You appreciate that. You're having as much difficulty forming your thoughts as they seem to have trying to digest them.

"... Wait, if Ozpin's part of that old set of humans… how's he still alive?" asks Ada.

"We don't know. It, uh… never actually came up."

"{At a guess, he goes through some kind of reincarnation. His DNA isn't any different from, well, any other old man I've seen, so I doubt he's been in his early 70s for 12,000 years. It's his soul that's odd, more than anything else. It's… dense.}"

"Dense?" asks Creme.

"{Imagine your soul is a page of very small, very compact writing- with some effort and the right tools, we can read it over a few hours. Ozpin's is… like someone got to the end of the page, and then just went back to the top and kept writing over what was there, over and over and over again, until the entire page was black.}"

A moment passes.

"... That's not ominous at all," Lumen says. "Okay, so, Ozpin's an immortal wizard. That's… neat."

"Neat?"

"Neat."

You must admit to expecting a slightly more substantial reaction than neat.

"I think what Lumen's trying to say," Creme interjects, "is that we don't really get why that's… important. So, he's going to be around to teach Hunters well after we're in the ground, so what?"

{Now's probably the time to bring up Salem.}

Mm.

… It's still weird not thinking of Salem Sini when you hear that name. Like, seriously, you're going to develop a twitch listening to teachers call his name in class-

{You're stalling.}

Of course you're fucking stalling this is the 4d8 psychic damage you were worried about earlier.

You don't say anything for a few moments longer than strictly necessary- instead, you seem to find something incredibly interesting in your lunch. It's nothing big, mind, just a cheeseburger and fries, because if you can't actually order an entire horse, you'll damn well take the biggest hunk of cow you can.

Bite the bullet. Before it passes by.

The following conversation is…

You would not have it again. That's, the best you can say about it. Frankly, now, at the very end of it, you would rather turn back time and take the stomach ulcer instead.

Creme and Lumen watch you with hollow eyes, as you explain that the Witch-Queen dreams are more than a little prophetic- that Salem, an immortal being capable of using the same magic as Ozpin, capable of leading the Grimm on their Marches, capable of hemming humanity in-

In immediate retrospect, you probably could have softened the blow a touch without becoming a liar in the process. But they deserve better than that. They deserve… everything you know. As you know it.

That doesn't mean you have to feel good about it, though.

The only one who seems unsure about anything you're saying is Ada.

"Wait, wait, I don't… what the hell is a Witch-Queen dream?"

Leaning back, Lumen takes out a cigarette, placing it between his lips without lighting it.

"A Witch-Queen dream," he starts, "is… a kind of shared nightmare. You wake up somewhere horrible, being chased, or having to hide, or being tortured, always by the same…" he furrows his brows, "person, I think. Not a Grimm, at least, not one like we've ever seen. But when you see her, you just… understand. You get why the Grimm are so dangerous."

"... Because they're…" Ada starts, trailing off to think hard about the question at hand. "... Because they're being guided?"

Lumen nods.

"... And, Ozpin told you about all this?" Ada asks, the slightest waver in her voice now.

She's starting to grasp it. Comprehend it. Terry approaches her and hups into her lap, gently coaxing her into stroking it for emotional support. The other Cells keep playing with each other in the grass.

"... He didn't tell me, so much as… he guided me in the right direction, and… it just clicked."

You watch Lumen's eyebrow raise a fraction, and you silently tap your temple.

"Ah."

A moment passes by in heavy silence.

"... Fuck," Lumen says, quite succinctly summing up the past five minutes in a single word.

"I don't… understand," Creme says. "Why… how, can you keep that kind of thing a secret? If everyone's having Witch-Queen dreams, how hasn't anyone ever thought 'gee, maybe the fact we're all having the same dream means something?'"

"It's not like Grimm cults haven't existed before," Lumen says. "Maybe some of them worshipped this…"

He trails off, looking at you inquisitively.

… Wait, did you not say her-

{You did not.}

Ugh, you need to get it together today.

"... Ozpin told me her name is Salem."

"Salem?" Creme asks.

"Salem."

"... Salem… same name as Salem Sini, Salem?" Creme begins to comprehend.

"Mmhm."

"{Look, internalise it, move on. If we hyperfocus on this, we're never going to move on from it,}" Blue says, his voice weary, but light.

"Right, right."

Silence. You sneak another fry and shut your gut up. It appreciates the donation.

"... I told Ozpin about the Process as well," you say, changing the subject rapidly. "He was… impressed?"

"Jaune, you could impress a particularly intelligent nematode with the Process," Lumen says. "It's impressive."

You start to explain and defend yourself, before spotting the tiny smirk and shooting him a look. Lumen just snickers, waving you off.

"You know what I mean," he says. "But yeah, okay, did he say anything else?"

"Well, I told him about Cloudbank, how I haven't done anything with it-"

"Wait, what's Cloudbank?" asks Ada, brow furrowing in confusion.

Wait, did you not tell them about Cloudbank?

{Nnnn…o, no, you didn't.}

The things that slip your mind. Next, he's going to say that you forgot to tell them that Blake's a former terrorist.

{Which you really should keep between you and her, mind, we're missing a lot of context-}

It was a joke. You were joking.

"The night before the Initiation, I… Blue, convinced me that the Process needs a legal entity to work through. So, I registered one with Companies House. So… I am now the sole director and shareholder of Cloudbank Solutions."

"... Isn't registering a company really expensive?" Ada asks.

"It's just 120 Lien. But yeah, I… own a real estate company, now. Technically, it's for construction of commercial buildings, specifically."

As one, your three teammates flick five eyes towards 01, Tulip, and Alabaster. Memories of the laser temple resurface.

{... If 'Laser Temple' isn't already a band, I call dibs.}

"... I can see why," Lumen mumbles.

"Mm… I haven't actually done anything with it besides register, though. Then, Ozpin told me to give him a few days, and that he'd get back to me on it."

"... Neat," Ada says. "So, uh… you're probably gonna be making a lotta money soon, huh?"

You exhale, smiling ever so slightly.

"Yeah, I guess. It's not like I'll have much overhead, or, you know, any wages to pay besides my own, and maybe a few dozen people to keep the Process from doing anything too wild. It's… a business that's almost all profit, no cost."

"Aren't you worried that'll put people out of a job?" Creme asks.

"Hey, that's just the free market. If they wanna keep their jobs, they should try to stay competitive in an evolving market I'm kidding, I'm kidding," you say, quickly aborting the joke as Creme's eyebrow ascends from mildly incredulous to 'I'm going to hit you with my hammer now' in record time. "That's, one of the things that came up, and hopefully it's one of the things Ozpin can help with."

Creme nods silently, only giving you an odd look.

… You don't think the joke landed.

{It did not. Can't win 'em all.}

Darn.

"So…" Ada starts hesitantly, "you talked about Ozpin having magic, you talked about Salem, you talked about the Process and what you're doing with it…"

As she talks, she ticks off her fingers, counting off the numerous world-shattering revelations you've both subjected others to, and been subjected to yourself, in the past 24 hours alone.

{Less than. 15 hours, technic-}

IN THE LAST. TWENTY-FOUR. HOURS.

{Hey, whatever helps you cope. Also, you did talk about one more thing, remember?}

Your eyes widen as that comes rushing back into focus. You can't stop yourself from cringing, biting back a curse as the realisation that, yes, you're going to have to talk about that now, sinks in.

"Jaune? What's wrong?" asks Creme, brow furrowed in concern.

"... We… talked about one more thing, last night. And it… wasn't my place to talk about it."

"... What do you mean?" asks Lumen, figuring it out an instant later. His eyes flick to Ada, then back to you.

You're not entirely sure how he manages to fit an entire essay in the vein of 'what the fuck were you thinking, Jaune,' into a single raised eyebrow. He must practise with that eyebrow.

"... I told him about you, Ada. And, Lee. I'm sorry, I wasn't thinking at the time."

"{To be completely honest, it was my fault- he was tired, and I prompted him to talk about it. If you want to be angry at anyone, be angry at me.}"

Ada… doesn't say anything. She just silently picks at her food for a few moments, the last of her grilled fish flaking under her fork.

Nobody says anything for what feels like a few minutes before she puts her fork down, and looks at you. That single mud-brown eye feels like it's going to punch straight through you. She is… absolutely inscrutable.

"... Okay," Ada says quietly. "Should I… expect anything?"

"... Goodwitch was… she felt strongly about it, to say the least."

Ada snorts, her face cracking into a smile that disappears as quickly as it came about.

"I imagine you should expect to be asked to attend some appointments with a therapist if anything comes of that."

"Yeah, well… I'll waste my time if it makes her feel better," says Ada after a moment.

Creme furrows her brow, caught somewhere between concern and confusion.

"You don't think therapy will help?" she asks.

Ada shrugs helplessly.

"Goodwitch won't be the first person to make me try therapy, but she'd be the first to send me to a therapist that actually helps. I dunno, it just… feels wrong."

Lumen had taken the nth of a second that he was out of everyone's direct sightline to form a very bushy beard of green luxin, connected to his face with a strip of dark red glue, and was now leaning toward's Ada, brow furrowed in deep concentration.

"Vell, hyes, but first tell me about your mozzer," he says, affecting something in the general neighbourhood of an Atlesian accent.

"Well, doctor, she's fucking dead and I watched her die," Ada replies, saying it so casually that you almost can't tell if she's going along with the joke.

"Mm- I diagnose you with Grimm in your blood, you should do psychleaf about that."

Lumen has no such qualms, and it pays off; Ada breaks into a giggling fit, leaving him looking really proud of himself, just before he realises he has to take the beard off now.

Eventually, Ada recovers and continues making her point.

"That's… partly why I'm so unsure about doing this. Sometimes, it just didn't feel like… I was being listened to. Like," she scoffs, "like they didn't believe me."

Creme, in a remarkable show of restraint, doesn't pitch herself across the table to hug Ada. Instead, she settles for reaching out for one of her hands, gently rubbing a thumb across the back of it.

"I'm… really sorry, Ada," Creme says. "You deserve better than to be thought of as a liar."

Ada smiles, only highlighting the little blush creeping up her face.

"Thanks. That… means a lot to me."

"I mean," Lumen strains, still trying to extricate himself from his joke, "I think we can count on one difference this time- Jaune, could you help-"

You reach over and pull the beard off with one swift yank.

{Well, he's not gonna need to shave for a while, at least.}

Once Lumen stops clutching his jaw like you just ripped it off, he continues.

"As I was saying," he grinds out through the pain, "I think there's one difference between the last therapists you got and whoever Goodwitch saddles you with."

"What?"

"You really think she's gonna let them in there without beating it into their head that you're telling the truth?"

Ada blinks as if the idea simply hadn't occurred to her at all. She laughs as if it's funny that it didn't occur to her.

"Um… yeah okay," she says after a moment. "I… thanks. I'm still not sure I'll like it, but, thanks."

"So…" you venture, "you're… not mad?"

Ada shrugs noncommittally.

"I'm not happy that you did it without asking me first, but Lee's your problem too, so… I can't really be mad. Besides, if Ozpin's a tenth of what you say he is, I'll be shocked if he doesn't just smear Lee across the nearest pavement."

Everyone laughs at that, and soon conversation takes a turn for slightly lighter pastures.

You think that went well!

… You think that went well.

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Your afternoon class is surprisingly… intimate. It takes place in one of the smaller classrooms, far smaller than the lecture halls you have history or Grimm studies in, with several tables stacked into a rectangle and surrounded by chairs.

Unsurprisingly, the entirety of Team JACL is attending Semblance Counselling. You leave your sword just outside the door, as a matter of politeness-

"No, no, please," Doctor Oobleck says, "bring the Transistor in."

You blink, but gesture at it to follow you in anyway, figuring the professor knows what's best for his class.

… You blink, and realise Doctor Oobleck is teaching this class.

He's taught this class for 10 years if past timetables are correct.

You wonder why?

{I'll admit, he wouldn't be my first pick, either. Goodwitch, maybe, or Ozpin himself, but… Oobleck? The coffee fiend?}

Hey, if he's been teaching it for ten years, he must have something to bring to the table.

{Or this is a nothing class like we thought it would be.}

Maybe just… curb your collective lack of enthusiasm until we've actually gotten through the first period?

Yeah, yeah, you know. You take one of the seats at random, and the rest of JACL takes similarly arbitrary seats, though Ada stays nearby.

Eventually, other people shuffle in- you spot Naia, of course, who elects to stand by one of the walls instead of taking his chances, then Rashmi and Kapila, then the blonde girl with the sharp teeth you saw at the Initiation ceremony, gently herding in a vague shimmer in the air, taking them by, what you think is their hand.

Leathers arrives last, mumbling a quick apology to Oobleck before taking a seat next to you. All in all, there are 10 of you here, out of a class of 40. Most of the class consists of two entire teams.

{25% of this year is considered to have uncontrollable Semblances. Good gods.}

"Right- I believe that's everyone, yes," Doctor Oobleck says, sounding calmer than he has in, since you met him. "Now, I'm sure all of you know me from your History class, but just in case- my name is Doctor Bartholomew Oobleck, and alongside being one of the history professors of Beacon, I am also the resident expert on Uncontrolled Semblances. In here, you can just call me Barty."

He takes a seat and pulls his glasses off for a moment, cleaning them with a handkerchief retrieved from his breast pocket.

"Now, as you may have guessed from the setup, and the informality, this class is going to be significantly different from others in the curriculum. This class, like your electives, is not a required credit to stay in Beacon. There is no passing or failing here. This is, at worst, a place to talk about the things that are stressing you out, and socialise with people who can empathise with you. At best, though, I believe that we can all help each other become better at the end of the day."

He looks up, and you realise for the first time that Oobleck's eyes are the brightest green you have ever seen- they almost glow, even under the harsh classroom lights.

"I will not pressure you to share anything you don't want to, and I will ask everyone to respect people's privacy. This is a class that deals with… very personal topics, at the best of times. Semblances are not just superpowers- they are an indication of the very foundation of who we are as people. In order to explore them, and understand them, we must explore and understand ourselves. Sometimes, that means delving into topics, memories, or experiences that we would much rather keep to ourselves."

A moment passes, Oobleck sitting silently while you all digest that, before he gives a light smile.

"However, that's all quite a ways away, even for the most open of you. Today, I just want you all to introduce yourselves, and I'll go over some things you'll probably already know, but I still have to make sure we're all on the same page. Now, I'm going to go around the room, and I want you to say your name, a word or phrase that describes your Semblance, and one interesting fact about yourself. I'll start, then we'll go clockwise."

That puts you at number 4 on the list, after Ada and Naia. Joy. Oobleck adjusts his tie and clears his throat, sitting up straight.

"Hello, my name is Bartholomew Oobleck, my Semblance is Flying Rubber, and I once helped trick an old friend of mine into coming to class in a skirt. Fortunately, he had the legs for it."

That gets a laugh, as Doctor Oobleck- Barty, you suppose, gestures to Naia, who still isn't sitting down. Instead, he's just looming in the background, away from Ada for the sake of not intimidating her. Standing there, back ramrod straight as he realises that all eyes are on him, he eventually clears his throat and introduces himself.

"Uh, my name is Naia Sendoa, my Semblance is, um, Weight, and uh, I'm not sitting down because I've broken 4 chairs since I came to Beacon and I feel like 5 is the point where Professor Goodwitch makes me start paying for them."

Oobleck chuckles, the rest laugh a little, and then Ada is the focus of the class. There's a moment where she does look like a deer in headlights, but she recovers quickly.

"I'm Ada Doyle, my Semblance is…"

A moment passes, but Barty- no, you can't do this, not in your own personal narration- but Bartholomew- no, that's somehow worse, fuck it- Oobleck makes no move to rush her. He just sits patiently, with a kind smile on his face.

"... My Semblance is… Barely There. Uh… I've spent the past seven years living on my own, and I hated talking to people for a lot of that, so I ended up basically teaching myself to fix just about anything in an apartment. Heating, plumbing, drywall patches- the only thing I didn't mess with was electrical problems."

"Mm, very interesting," Oobleck says, and to his credit, he does sound genuinely interested, before he gestures to you.

Okay. Deep breath. You're just introducing yourself.

Blue puts a script up in the corner of your eye, and you mentally roll your eyes at him before you dismiss it.

"My name is Jaune Arc, my Semblance is Higher-Order Calculation, and…

{Do you want a list?}

… Yes please.

{Mmhm.}

Okay, what 'interesting fact' do you want to talk about?

Further note: all of these are true. You're just picking the one you want to talk about.

[] "I am, due to an incredible amount of legal chicanery, technically 16th in line for the Norrell Lordship in the Kingdom Parliament."

[] "I once accidentally joined, and then broke up, a group of criminals who were looking to hack into the Valish national bank."

[] "I solved three of the 10 Gordium Problems, and I never received a penny for it."

[] "I was banned from all Valish public transport for 6 months when I was 12."

[] "I'm the second-best cook in my family."
 
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Omake: Sly_Acquisition() (CANON-PENDING)
This particular omake has been living rent free in my head for literal years, though it's changed somewhat as the story has. After some false starts over that time period, I finally got it out over a week or so.

Sly_Acquisition()

Jaune sighed. I knew stakeouts were supposed to be boring. I should've guessed they'd be really awkward too. Par for the course for me.

{Well, those cop dramas usually have them working with their partners, right? Blake is pretty far from a buddy cop.}

This isn't a stakeout.

Same difference, Jaune noted.

It wasn't technically a stakeout. But they were posted on a rooftop right outside a White Fang storehouse, during a cold cloudless night in the industrial district, waiting for certain factors to align. Or for something to go wrong. So, it sort of was.

And they'd been waiting in stiflingly awkward silence for a while now.

Or at least Blake had been. And thus Jaune had been by proxy. He could sense the inner tension from yards away. At least he'd had plenty of data to review in the meantime, even if it wasn't really helping him or the operation.

She'd just been…staring. Menacingly. Without blinking.

Again, it was super awkward.

{Y'know, small talk isn't supposed to be hard. That's sort of the point of it. Just talking about universal things of little consequence. The weather. Annoying family and friends. The operating tendencies of your old terrorist cell. Little things like that.}

Not funny, Jaune deadpanned, even though it had almost gotten a snort out of him. Also, I'm pretty sure she's already shared what she's going to share about that. For now. She's just here to…see things through, I guess.

{'For now' is right. This won't be the end of the White Fang trying to bring unwanted trouble to Vale, even if it will take them a long time to recover.}

I'm more hoping for 'never' recovering from this, thanks.

It was an ambitious plan they were enacting, to say the least. 'They' mostly being Hunters from Beacon who could be trusted with vital secrets. Yeah, being part of a conspiracy was still freaking weird, even if it was essentially a benevolent one.

On the subject of view shattering secrets, the Process's partial dominion over Vale was a new and awe-inspiring thing. Not a tool to be wielded lightly. But, in Jaune's humble opinion, there weren't many more acceptable targets than violent terrorists. Specifically violent terrorist who had almost murdered a friend of his. Especially violent terrorists who were doing an awfully good job of amassing resources, power, and influence in his home city, of late. So he'd been fine with the Process monitoring them after the...altercation, from before he got to Beacon.

Which had revealed some worrying information. He'd brought what he'd learned from the Process's monitoring of the Fang's burgeoning operative success to Ozpin. Who had done the exact opposite of quelling his fears. Apparently the smoothness of their ascension in Vale was a telling sign of a chess-master orchestrating more than just the White Fang's movements from the shadows. Which wasn't really a surprise. What was, though perhaps it shouldn't have been in retrospect, was that Salem was a regular instigator of such plots. And she had no qualms utilizing a wide variety of human pawns despite her apparent loathing for people as a whole.

With that perspective granted, Jaune had eventually decided having his friendly burgeoning tech god help them cripple the White Fang was necessary for the safety of his home. Even with the wide reaching implications and consequences of doing so. Sometimes you had to fight fire with fire. Or in this case godlike abilities with godlike abilities.

It wasn't a decision made without pause. But Jaune was none too eager to see Vale added to the list of civilizations, both known and forgotten, that the witch queen had brought to ruin. If the White Fang was her current primary vehicle to that end—then he would see it de-fanged.

So here he was. Waiting in concert with a number of friends and associates posted at different locations, for a signal to begin their joint heist. Like some sort of hackneyed blockbuster holo.

And of course, he'd ended up partnered with the person most likely to win 'most unsettling stare' award in his entire year. And that was despite some stiff competition.

He understood why he ended up paired with Blake. In large part because he was the classmate that knew the most about her 'backstory', as it were. And this was the type of situation where unfortunate aspects of that past story might become relevant to what happened. So for her, it was better he be the one watching her back.

He just wished that wasn't so literal. Because here they were, her back to him, while her eyes bored invisible holes into their target.

{If you don't try, I'm going to do it for you.}

What—

{You have until the end of this sentence before I decide to break out the-}

Jaune audibly cleared his throat. "So, um, Blake," he started, but didn't see her respond in any way. Soldiering on, he continued, "Does this sort of thing ever get less tiresome?"

If it weren't for the slight twitch to the cant of her ears, he wouldn't have thought she'd heard anything from him.

Smalltalk isn't supposed to be hard, Jaune thought sarcastically. Does that include chatting up gargoyle statues?

{You know, referring to a faunus ex-criminal as a 'gargoyle' could be construed as insensitive and racist commentary.}

First, just, no. Second, not the point. Third—

T-minus 60 seconds, the Process informed Jaune via earpiece, as well as everyone else.

—you've been saved by the bell.

With that warning, individuals and teams were alerted that their missions would soon begin. Not all would necessarily strike at the exact same moment, depending on the particulars of the situations. But the ballpark they'd worked out was that everyone should be moving on their target within two minutes of each other. The plan was for everyone to be long gone before any sort of warning could make its way out.

Jaune and Blake themselves would be moving at the zero mark—their target had made itself a simple and straightforward endeavor this evening.

There was a reason they had chosen a Saturday night for this raid. The Valeish White Fang's growth was largely fueled by local recruitment, not by foreign cells. So young, disenfranchised risk takers were taking up the flag. And inevitably, certain important responsibilities as well. The same general demographic that would stubbornly insist on Saturday nights off to party, relieve stress, spend time with friends, and so on.

Thus had a large and valuable warehouse full of stolen dust and other goods been left to two greener Fang members with not much aura to speak of. And one of them fallen asleep on a couch.

Sighing quietly to himself, Jaune glanced at Blake once again and chanced a, "Ready?"

Receiving a quiet nod of acknowledgement, which he figured was the best he was going to get anyway, Jaune determined to use the remaining time to take stock.

No one who knew him casually would recognize him. For one, he didn't have the Transistor floating behind him like a giant blazing billboard, having already secured itself inside its Cache. For another, he—and many of the others—were dressed up like their targets, in the standard White Fang 'uniform'. Which had the dual benefit of both disguising everything but the mouth and neck, and muddying the waters for any Fang who got a look at their assailants.

On a similar note, he was Teal and Blake was Pearl for the purposes of infosec, though Jaune personally doubted those names would be particularly relevant or necessary. Blake, though, had not been alone in adamant insistence about using code names.

Speaking of, he couldn't decide if Blake looked more comfortable or uncomfortable attired in the dress of her old occupation, given her inscrutable mien.

{Yeah, forget not being a buddy cop, decked out in that she's basically the opposite. A frigid felon? A surly crook? Maybe, a nutty fraud?}

Trying to focus here, Jaune interrupted.

Held at his back in place of the Transistor, Jaune instead had readied a greatsword. Made of process matter but appearing normal enough, he'd worked in an additional function of delivering electric shocks, and affectionately dubbed it Spike.

Lastly, he had a heads up display giving him live status on how everyone else was doing. So far nothing of note, though it looked like Lumen and Creme decided having an argument up to the last second before they had to start was a great idea.

{I mean, better than sitting in uncomfortable silence like we did.}

Aaand it's go time, Jaune thought, walking to the edge of the roof and quietly jumping down alongside Blake.

The cameras, like most of the rest of the building, had already been surreptitiously subsumed by the Process, so there were no worries there. Rather, it was the next few moments that would determine how cleanly they'd pull this off.

Blake circled around to the adjacent side of the building, while Jaune readied himself before a bare expanse of wall. On the other side, on his display, he could see the outline of a man lounging on a chair, half looking at camera feeds, half looking at the scroll in his hands.

Like ice melting before a flame, the seemingly mundane cement before him turned white and poured away until only the thinnest of borders separated the inside from the out.

"In position," Jaune sub-vocalized. One never could count on how good an aura user's hearing was, especially a faunus who was just a pencil thin layer of man made rock distant.

Several beats later, Blake whispered back, "In position. On one. Four, three, two, o—"

And with that, the wall ahead vanished like it had never been, leaving a person sized opening that was closing itself even as Jaune finished running through. One, two, three steps and he was upon the man, his target's body only just tensing in surprise as he reached him. A single mighty swing of Spike shattered his aura, the follow through leaving the sword resting almost gently against his side, just as electricity began to dance across its edge.

From there, it was all over but the details. Muscles stopped twitching into action and started twitching in convulsions, Spike living up to its name, sending spikes of lightning up and down the masked faunus's spine til he was unconscious.

Some Process made handcuffs, blindfold, and earmuffs applied to his downed victim, and a check in with Blake who'd had similar success, and the two guards were non-entities to the rest of the plan.

{I know there's nothing dignified about being tased, but you'd hope he'd have more control than to piss himself.}

I was trying not to think about that, thanks.

Looking around at the piles of contraband (totally not just to distract himself) he couldn't help but be disappointed. He'd known what to expect, but a part of him still hoped it would look like a villainous treasure trove of some sort. But no, it just looked like…storage. He'd seen several supply closets at Beacon that appeared more exciting.

But the next part promised to be interesting.

Before Jaune's very eyes, the crates, containers, boxes, cases, and more, containing their ill gotten goods, began to sink into the floor like it was made of quicksand.

Across Vale, from the industrial to residential to agricultural, similar scenes began to play out. Anywhere a White Fang holding had been identified by the Process, and where biological eyes were not carefully watching, stolen goods and resources disappeared into the bowels of Remnant itself.

The lightly defended holdings such as this one had those eyes forcefully blinded by Jaune and his allies. And with many other locations lacking active personnel or relying on digital security or anonymity being easily controlled by the Process, only a handful of sites remained untouched.

And for those remaining? Well, the police would be coming into a glut of useful tips and info over the next couple of weeks on Fang assets. Not to mention postings of some instructive bounties for Hunters to pursue on key Fang leaders.

Acquisitions underway! the Process merrily chirped.

Yes, and soon it will all be mine, Jaune cackled inside his mind.

{Except not really.}

…except not really. A small portion of the resources would go directly towards Cloudbank Solutions, but most of it would be laundered by Ozpin and the Process. Not only would he be paying his Beacon tuition several times over in under the table 'donations' of dust, ammunition, and so on. But small business owners who'd been devastated by the Fang would also see a sudden turn in fortunes by way of loans, charity, new opportunities, and the like.

He did feel a bit bad about indirectly profiting due to others misfortunes. But in the moment, at least, he couldn't help but just be enthralled by what was happening before him. And he wasn't alone in staring in fascination at the magically (scientifically?) disappearing loot.

{Hey, her deadpan stare now has some curiosity to it. Progress, if I've ever seen it.}

I'd be genuinely concerned if she found this boring, Jaune deadpanned himself.

It wasn't long before the show was over. The items had a long way to travel, and they wouldn't get there at a snail's pace. And now that the job was done, he and Blake also had a bit of a ride ahead of them.

The Transistor made its reappearance from the Cache back to normal space known with a flash of blue light.

{Flyboard mode, activated.} Blue unnecessarily announced as the not-sword came to float a few inches above and parallel to the floor.

Still not a big fan of that name. I mean, it works, but it sounds like some kind of weird extreme sport or something.

{Too bad. Everyone agreed Lumen's name for it was the best one, and it's caught on.}

Still think 'surfing' would have worked fine. It's not like we know anyone who actually surfs. And, it's like web surfing, what with you being a giant computer.

"We good to head out?" Blake interrupted the mental argument he was definitely winning.

"Ah, yep," he replied, totally not startled by her totally not-catlike propensity for sneaking up on people.

Stepping on the board, Blake stepping behind him a moment later, he felt the telekinetic anchors secure him in place.

For the hundredth time, I sure am glad we got a scan of Goodwitch's semblance. I don't want to imagine how uncomfortable 'flyboarding' might have been without it. As is, the telekinetic grip system feels practically natural.

Not to mention the sophistication of the adaptive aerodynamic foil and the intuitive piloting adjustments.

{Yeah, her Semblance is definitely overpowered. Not that we have room to talk, or complain.}

While the three discussed Goodwitch's magnificently mighty metaphysical muscles, a hole appeared below them, with the Transistor and its passengers falling into a controlled descent until they hit roughly 30 meters per second. Not long after, they hit the bottom of the hole, leaving only a perfectly straight tunnel in front of them, with no end in sight.

Beats waiting for the train, but the abandoned tunnel vibe doesn't provide the best scenery.

{Don't think of it as a train tunnel, think of it like a racetrack. We had no problems on the way here, we can pick it up a notch on the way back.}

Faster, huh? Jaune couldn't help but be excited. He'd never considered himself a speed junkie before, but before he'd worked out this Function he'd never been able to fly before either.

Turning around slightly, Jaune asked, "We'll be going faster this time around. If that's alright with you?"

"So long as you slow down if I ask." Blake responded, giving nothing but a frown…and placing a hand on his shoulder for extra grip.

Well okay then. Half again as fast peak speed this time? That should be safe enough.

{Why not double? It'll be fine. Just, don't let go.}

And with a crack, they were gone.
 
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