Which of the other starter choices do you want to see interludes from most?

  • Dishonored

    Votes: 3 7.0%
  • Legend Of Zelda

    Votes: 9 20.9%
  • Shadow Of Mordor

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann

    Votes: 4 9.3%
  • Preacher

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • JoJo's Bizarre Adventure

    Votes: 8 18.6%
  • Fist Of The North Star

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kill Six Billion Demons

    Votes: 12 27.9%
  • The Zombie Knight

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Mob Psycho 100

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Author's Choice

    Votes: 3 7.0%

  • Total voters
    43
  • Poll closed .
Using your Semblance also taxes your Aura quite a bit
That is entirely wrong.
Overusing your Semblance taxes your stamina, not your Aura, which remains unaffected.
Your Semblance is literally an extension of you, so just like swinging a sword repeatedly, the exertion of using your Semblance will tire you out identically, and your Semblance grows in capacity identically to swinging a sword, by increasing your stamina and endurance.
Your Aura is less an extension of you, and more a vital structure that provides the foundation for the Semblance to exist: treat Aura as the your soul's skeleton of bones, and Semblance as the muscles that use that framework of bones (or exoskeleton, like The Grimm do) as anchoring leverage points that allow it to have a structured existence in the first place.
 
Maybe it is just a longish term effect? Like living with people eats at him with their constant disgusting bodily functions, but he can tolerate them for a bit if he has had a chance for silence.
Huh. Why didn't I touch that bef- oh, right, brain-damaged serial killer is a super bad vibe to fuck with unless you know exactly what you're doing.

Damn.
To be fair, he was a piece of dung even before that happened.
 
Huh. Why didn't I touch that bef- oh, right, brain-damaged serial killer is a super bad vibe to fuck with unless you know exactly what you're doing.

Damn.
Ah, but you see, if it's the brian damage that made him stop being just a serial killer then that's different! And I'm not even being sarcastic here. That may not be what you intended, but based on other people's comments I could totally see him patching his brain up with his semblance but not getting it right since he's trying to make what a brain *should* be, not what his *is* and as a result causing something like a split personality.

Regardless, I thought this interlude was really interesting and has gotten me intrigued on Boriah Lee. Before, I saw him as a monster that needed to he put down. Now, I'm wondering if there's something we can do to help him and if real change and atonement is possible for him. He went from a monster to a person in my eyes. I really want to know more about what's up with him now.
Well, if Boriah's feelings towards Ada weren't already confirmed to be super creepy this sure does delve a little deeper into it.

Though I'm not sure what he actually *wants* from her exactly, this interlude seems to imply there's a disturbingly lustful component involved.

Also weird to not see Boriah grumble internally even a little bit about the noisy bodily functions of other people. IIRC that's what his main motivation for murder seemed to be from the conversation with Ada.

Actually looking back at Ada's recollection he alludes to whatever horrifying backstory this interlude brings up in his nightmare. Apparently that's part of the, "long and bloody story" of how he got his semblance. The talk about what forms a semblance and the uncertainty of whether or not you can force someone to be a certain way, combined with the crowd and medical facility makes me wonder if Boriah was part of some Kingdom black site trying to make someone with his semblance? Rich people would love someone that could make them young again after all, and the idea of forcibly creating a specific semblance sounds very useful (though if that was the case it's clearly a horrific process if Boriah's memory is anything to go off).

Oh yeah he also calls Ada, "pet" in her recollection. So that's something I kinda wish I didn't remember.
Based on the nightmare, it definitely looks like an attempt at controlling/brainwashing people like what led to the Color War. I agree that it's part of what messed him up so bad that he got the Semblance he did and ended up not seeing others as people.
 
The interlude with Boriah Lee was very well written, and it both raised questions and gave some insight as to how he perceives and interacts with the world. Though a man of contradictions, that does not render him impossible to analyze, so here's my take on what we saw.

Boriah's introduction as 'Basil', and subsequent interactions with the family at night. Marcel's initial reaction to him could be an instinctive recognition of subtle hostile body language, but further reading suggests an alternate hypothesis. Marcel's comparison of 'Basil' to a Vacuoni mummy reminds of the uncanny valley effect. When the human brain sees something that is close, but not quite a match to what it percieves as a human. The face is a common stimulus to provoke the feelings of unease and revulsion, but is far from the only source. I believe that 'Basil' might make minute adjustments to himself subconsciously when not in the company of humans and/or faunus. While the adjustments might not be obvious, it could easily create a sense of unease in an observer to see the results; He is human, but is subtly wrong in the structure of his face or the gait in which he moves. Research upon the uncanny effect indicates that it is more prominent the slower the observer is moving relative to the observed provoking the response. When you combine the darkness lit by lantern with the fact that both were at rest during the conversation, then there is a strong argument for the uncanny valley provoking a very potent response. When you consider that there are likely humanoid Grimm on Remnant, it would not be unreasonable for such a biological response to trigger the fight or flight alongside the revulsion.

Then, we come to 'Basil' and Marcel discussing life whilst in the rear of the wagon. Basil's claim of being a doctor is quite likely true, at least in prior years. A Semblance such as his would require intimate and incredibly knowledge of various biological processes to utilize on the level that Boriah Lee appears to. This also links to the discussion elsewhere in this thread regarding the consequences of using his Semblance to restore some portion of his brain; If we assume that his Semblance has a blueprint or can draw on the genetic code that tells his own body how it should grow, neural connections in the human brain are both numerous and fragile. They can be repaired, but the human brain focuses on storage, not on recall. We also see Basil utilize what I am led to assume is a form of Magic or the usage of glyphs. Both are possible, and the latter especially so when we consider that Boriah Lee has utilized ocular glyphs as info-hazards prior in bars where he has left carnage in his wake. But this raises the question of what form the glyph was taking here, and considering that Basil was straining, I would suggest that he was using his Semblance to create the initial glyph underneath the surface of his skin in some way, or was able to momentarily bypass the requirement for a glyph from massed experience. The snapping motion served as a mental trigger to channel his aura, albeit one that I doubt would be necessary for certain simply applications, and such the flame was born. The strain also suggests that the flame was requiring an expenditure of Aura to maintain, and if Basil was utilizing his Semblance in some way to substitute his arm/hand/fingers in place of or to bypass the glyph, then it would require a high level of precision.

I'm not going to analyze his combat prowess in general, but focus on how he fought against the Grimm in particular. Basil did not utilize his Aura as a shield, rather using it as an enhancement method upon his shifting of his own form to tilt the scales against physics and keep himself in the fight. His incredibly mastery of his Semblance also shows; He is not simply capable of shifting his own shape in humanoid form, but is capable of essentially dissolving and reforming himself partially as shown when he tore off the Boartabusk mask. And in spite of his recognition of the Vampyr as a similar type of predator, Lee also shows a portion of himself. When he isn't being confronted with an event or person reminding himself of his past, Lee has a force of conviction and self discipline that befit a doctor who can work with the cells and constituent components of a human body with his bare hands.

Overall, an excellently written Interlude Prok. Congratulations on passing a year of college, and I hope that the year off does not diminish your scholastic capability.
 
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Now, I'm wondering if there's something we can do to help him and if real change and atonement is possible for him. He went from a monster to a person in my eyes.

Personally I just don't see it. Boriah being capable of kindness and having his own mental hang ups is no excuse for murdering our friend's parents in front of her. That clearly wasn't a one time thing, as we see him casually murder and disfigure people in a bar at no provocation.

Whatever his trauma or backstory Boriah's a grown man that's made his choices. Even if the theory of him being part some horrible experiments that left his mind permanently damaged in someway, semblance induced or otherwise, that just makes him a rabid dog in need of putting down.

But aside from all that he's also gunning for our teammate and good friend. Boriah's made sure that every time Ada goes to bed there's decent odds she has nightmares of him hunting her, and those nightmares are very clearly based in reality. So however Boriah justifies his killings to himself and others, that doesn't change me thinking the best method of dealing with him is enough fire to convert all his sculpted meat into ash.
 
What was Ada's semblance anyways?

Phasing. She's used it to go through walls and re-solidify her weapon inside particularly tough Grimm IIRC.

Using it also seems to worsen an issue she's got of feeling like her entire life is happening to someone else, but that's not something we've delved too deeply into yet.

Honestly not sure if we're ever going to get around to helping her with that. Jaune's got a metric shitload of stuff on his plate, however much he wants to fix the problems of everyone around him our boy's only got so many hours in the day. General Education, Huntsman Training, raising an infant god, being part of an ancient conspiracy, and whatever scraps of time he can scrounge for his own hobbies...

Might want to pencil in some R and R in the near future. The bar hopping with Weiss was great, but doesn't really count seeing as it was preceded by life threatening stress and Jaune can't actually remember it.
 
Personally I just don't see it. Boriah being capable of kindness and having his own mental hang ups is no excuse for murdering our friend's parents in front of her. That clearly wasn't a one time thing, as we see him casually murder and disfigure people in a bar at no provocation.

Whatever his trauma or backstory Boriah's a grown man that's made his choices. Even if the theory of him being part some horrible experiments that left his mind permanently damaged in someway, semblance induced or otherwise, that just makes him a rabid dog in need of putting down.

But aside from all that he's also gunning for our teammate and good friend. Boriah's made sure that every time Ada goes to bed there's decent odds she has nightmares of him hunting her, and those nightmares are very clearly based in reality. So however Boriah justifies his killings to himself and others, that doesn't change me thinking the best method of dealing with him is enough fire to convert all his sculpted meat into ash.
I should clarify, I don't necessarily think we would he the ones to help Boriah, just maybe help him get started. He definitely needs to be at a minimum locked up and kept under constant surveillance, and we would he one of the worst choices for that. I was just surprised to see what appears to be genuine humanity in what I previously believed to he a remorseless monster, and if he genuinely wants to change for the better and atone should be given the chance.

Now, I don't believe this is likely, and he's probably still too much of a monster for that to ever be possible, but at least he isn't *just* a monster. My initial knee jerk reaction was too positive, but that was partly relief from the fact that he didn't murder a family, including a pregnant woman, despite fearing for them from the moment I saw the chapter's name.
 
I very much doubt that his semblance works on Process...

I also think that it has been quite a long time since his prior characterisations. It is much easier to overlook the bad when it is out of sight...
I meant we would be bad for that not because of our/the Process' abilities, but because it would be too personal for us. Jaune would never be able to make an objective decision, and that's OK, it just means he shouldn't be Boriah's theoretical jailer. Nothing wrong with that.
 
Oh! Right. I know that you used to provide rewards for Omake @Prok, but that was using the old quest mechanics. I didn't write the omake with the intention of a reward, moreso just because I wanted to write it. So don't worry about that; Someone would bring it up eventually, and I figured it was better to do so now than later, even if only to get it simmering over the sputtering pilot light somewhere in the dark recesses of the human psyche.
 
Interlude: Evernight
It is the time before dawn.
Sorcerer- Ataraxia's The Unexplained, 1975
Elsewhere, the sky slowly turns that twilit-grey that is a signal to those who cannot sleep, that they will not sleep tonight. Here, the sky is always the same blood-red, no matter the hour, no matter the day- like there is always a fire raging in the distance.

It's peaceful, in its own way.

Deep in the Land of Darkness, residing in the ancient castle named Evernight, the Witch-Queen prepares for a special council. Not the humans that she calls her inner circle, those, experiments, pets, really- no.

Petty playthings, in comparison.

In her bedroom, kept clean but barely used, she pulls on a robe older than Vale, and still as soft and perfectly black as it was the first time she laid eyes on it. The Mothman was a failed experiment of a Grimm, but his wings made for fine tailor's cloth. She walks into the throne room just as the Beringels she had commanded to clear it of any unnecessary obstructions finish dragging the room-length table to one side. That sound is going to ring in her ears for days after she was done here.

Ascending to her throne, she settles in on the plush fabric, and with a deep breath to centre herself, she whispers a single word.

The crystalline walls of the castle shudder- creaking with raw power. Twelve Seers float in, bobbing silently across the room, their tendrils gently swaying to their movement. With slow, deliberate movements, they arrange themselves around her to form a perfect semicircle. The orange lights within the crystalline structure of their heads shift, each Seer showing a different place, a different visage- each one as alien as the next.

Three avian figures, one with a large hairline fracture that circles its mask, are settled in a forest clearing. Occasionally, they flicker in and out of view so quickly that they simply appear as blurs. When they do so, they generally come back with spatters of blood on them.

A single blood-red eye, so large that it takes up the entire view of the screen.

A creature that seems to mirror Salem in stature and grandeur- sitting with legs crossed, head resting against a single bony finger. However, its throne sits in the middle of a dead, blackened forest, in the ruins of an ancient, overgrown city. A simple rod of blackened yew sits next to it, strung with ancient fibre that holds a cruel-looking hook on the end.

A simple mirror in a dusty room, only reflecting the Seer.

A great, black tower, only barely resembling a creature, with mile-thick cables that extend high into the sky above, and deep into the ocean below; an ocean which boils in its very presence. That Seer is rigid with pain connecting to its tortured sibling.

Somewhere else. Somewhere not Remnant. Somewhere only filled with purplish-black mist and not much else. Salem chooses, quite pointedly, to not focus on that one.

"I call to session this meeting of the Council of Thirteen," Salem intones, her voice carrying easily throughout the grand hall.

REQUIRE REASON/DESIGN/PURPOSE FOR THIS MEETING.

"Because I have called it is reason enough," she states with a voice like polar ice. "But, in this case, I call it because plans are being constructed, and your power may be required."

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The Furies were the easiest to pick out, from their garbled chirruping masked as words, and their hatred for Ozpin that nearly matches hers.

"Beacon is not our first target. Haven shall be."

The figure on its throne shifts.

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Even with centuries of practice, Salem grimaces at the way the Fisher-King's voice divides and folds on itself when he speaks, split and shuffled like a puzzle she must spend precious time deciphering. The Grimm-King is the most humanoid of the council, besides herself, and yet all he seems to delight in doing is using his grand power to annoy her.

"Mistral is weak- its pathetic underworlds collide in the streets of Kuchinashi, and ancient artefacts of great power have been unearthed by its people, sowing further chaos just by their presence. Its Huntsmen are stretched thin, and the Academy's Headmaster is..."

She smiles, exhaling as if laughing at her own joke.

"... Well, frayed would be putting it lightly. It will not take much to twist him to our cause."

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"Soon enough," she promises the excitable birds.

The Furies do catch on quick these days.

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"Come now, Fisher-King, surely one of your grand intellect can divine my plan, no?" croons Salem with a voice like warm honey.

That shut him up. He shifted in his chair, clearly irked by the insult, and Salem didn't fight down the smugness that quirked up her lips.

Low growling admitted from the eye-Seer.

The Grand Wyvern, Jabberwock. The most bestial of the ancient Grimm- and the hardest to reason with by far for it.

"You would hate Mistral- for having so many mountains around, there is nowhere to perch," Salem explains, her voice calm, almost motherly- the tone one uses when explaining something to a small child.

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The mirror-seer flickers, something appearing in the reflection. Quietly opening a door and slipping inside, a tall, rag-obscured creature quickly skitters past the seer and towards the mirror. It does not appear in the Seer's vision, even as it pushes its reflection out of the way to scratch at the mirror with long rusted-iron claws.

The sound is grating, sending chills down Salem's spine that she has long since become accustomed to suppressing, but eventually, it resolves into a message.

I V O L U N T E E R .

There is no name for this creature- she has never found one she felt fit, nor has it chosen one of its own. But it is chillingly good at its chosen pursuits.

"Break him, so he may be reformed as we need."

More scraping. More spine-chilling. The Fisher-King shifts uncomfortably in his seat, it starting to get to him too. The Jabberwock groans low, its pupil contracting to a razor-thin slit as things rumble around it- she realises a moment too late that it's trying to cover its ears.

Y E S, M I S T R E S S .

The creature takes its leave, and the connection winks out, letting the Seer float off to its other duties.

Salem almost feels bad for subjecting Lionheart to that thing.

Almost.

"Very well. Does anyone have anything to report?"

REPORT/UPDATE/NEWS ON ANOMALY DISCOVERED/FOUND OFF COAST OF CONTINENT/MENAGERIE/PETTING ZOO.

The Tower is a lot to take in. Its presence- let alone being present when it deigned to move or speak- was deleterious to the continued existence of most things, other Grimm included. The way the Seer's tentacles curl up in sympathetic agony speak to that.

She leans forward, gently resting her clasped hands on her knees.

"Continue," she says, not letting emotion into her voice just yet.

ANOMALY/IRREGULARITY/ASH HAS SUBSUMED THE VAST MAJORITY OF SMALL ISLAND/LANDMASS/DEAD ROCK WEST OF MENAGERIE. HAS GROWN TO ENCOMPASS A MATHEMATICALLY/LOGICALLY/ARTISTICALLY PERFECT CIRCLE WITH RADIUS OF 100 KILOMETRES.

NO FURTHER SIGNS OF ASSIMILATION/CONSUMPTION/DIGESTION HAVE BEEN NOTED BEYOND THIS RADIUS. ALL ANIMAL LIFE HAS EITHER FLED/LEFT/ESCAPED OR BECOME SUBSUMED. PLANTLIFE IS DYING/ROTTING/DISSOLVING DUE TO MASS ECOLOGICAL UPHEAVAL.

Salem frowns. Her black-veined marble-white brow furrows in confusion, eyebrows knitting together as she thinks.

"... Why on Remnant would it stop…?" she mutters, more to herself than her council.

THEORY: IT CEASED/HALTED/STOPPED BECAUSE OF MY PRESENCE. ASH-FORMS HAVE BEEN DETECTED PATROLLING/SCOUTING/WANDERING THE SUBSUMED AREA- MY PRESENCE APPEARS TO CAUSE THEM TO MALFUNCTION/BREAK DOWN/ MELT. PRESUME MAJOR WEAKNESS TO EXTREME HEAT.

Now that was good news. Perhaps this was some new form of Grimm, as the humans speculated, perhaps it was something completely different.

But what mattered to Salem is that it wasn't under her control. Which, by definition, makes it a problem, either to be solved or to be eradicated.

And right now...

"No further human sightings?"

NEGATIVE.

"... Do as you will, then report on the results. Perhaps that should give us a clearer view of the path ahead."

AS YOU WISH, MISTRESS.

The picture becomes blurry with boiling sea spray, the Seer wheezing in pain as the Tower begins to raise its arms, wind buffeting its partner as the massive Grimm opens two white, angular eyes like lamplights-

The connection cuts out as a hairline crack forms in the Seer's crystal globe, smoke wisping up from it, the light inside dark as it tumbles to the ground.

Salem stares at it for just a moment, a small sigh of distress escaping her nose.

The Tower is so hard on the poor things.

"... Well. Anything else to report?"

The Jabberwock grumbles, the single eye drooping with fatigue. The rest of the council either stays silent or reports in the negative, and are summarily dismissed, quickly leaving only Salem and a dead Seer in the throne room. She rises, slowly walking down the steps towards the corpse then gently picking it up, almost cradling its still smoking-hot body in her arms, ignoring the burns it causes.

"Oh… you did well, little one," she murmurs quietly to the dead Seer.

It isn't a long walk to one of Evernight's many balconies, overlooking the Land Of Darkness in all its burnt-ash glory, volcanic sand covered in streaks of tar under an ever-red sky.

And below- the shaping pits.

She walks to the edge, hauling the Seer onto the sparse railing like it weighs nothing. The fall is long, and the splash is quiet- but it is done.

Salem gazes out over the vista, watching newly-formed Beowolves, Boarbatusks, and the occasional larger Grimm; Hags, crawling out in their dozens, forming their triads, then turning back to pull tar from the pit to form their black cauldrons; Vampyrs, shaking their wings dry; and the rare Goliath, who leave the pools almost dry when they leave.

For a moment, she wonders what time it is in Vale.
Seance- Ataraxia's The Unknown, 1975.
With a mental twist, another Seer is summoned- it silently floats onto the balcony with her. Its orange glow and gentle gurgling eventually resolve into a view of a room kept dark by blackout blinds and lit only by many laptop screens, bathing the walls in blue light. The view is partially obscured, like watching through a jail cell's bars.

It's hiding in the air vent, she realises.

From its vantage point, though, it can see the man in the room, sitting on the bed, working by side table lamplight on something in his lap that produces smoke.

With careful direction, hooked tentacles move forward, the chitin rearranging to form small, cross-shaped points, which then slither between the bars.

Within seconds, the grating is off, then silently lowered to the ground.

The man's head twitches, as the Seer slithers out of the vent, slowly floating towards the ground.

"You know, these Seers are, not as subtle as you think, Salem," he says suddenly.

Salem definitely did not jump a little at being noticed. Absolutely not, never happened.

"Ivory," she says after a moment. "Status report?"

He places the small lap desk to one side, a small circuit board on it. He clicks off the soldering pen and lays it down too, careful to keep the hot end pointed away from anything flammable.

Turning to face the Seer, he pulls a thin pack of thinner cigarettes from his vest pocket, pulling one free and lighting it with the end of the solder pen. He takes a long drag on it before responding, and visibly relaxes for the intake of nicotine.

"Currently working on creating the device Cinder asked for, but, it's a slow process."

"And why is that?" she asks sharply, a chill in her voice at the frank admission of any kind of setback.

"Never soldered anything before. I keep messing up," Ivory admits plainly, completely unfazed by her tone. "Good thing I bought spares."

Salem almost sighs, still caught off-guard by the man's irritating lack of fear or respect for her. In all honesty, she doesn't mind it all that much- it's refreshing, compared to Tyrian's bootlicking, or Cinder's constant, ever-so-subtle knife-sharpening.

"About that," she starts, "Cinder mentioned that you told her the Black Queen was a futile plan. Why, then, do you keep working on a device destined to fail?"

"Cinder is… unreceptive, to the idea that this plan won't work. Violently so. Besides, soldering is a useful skill to learn."

"Why do you believe it won't work?"

"Another variable has appeared, something, undefined as of yet. If it isn't, isolated, I highly doubt this plan will, function, as Cinder hopes it will. It's a company, I think. Maybe the person who runs it, maybe, something inside it. But if it's what I think it is, then..."

He snorts, taking another drag on his cigarette, drawing so hard that the light almost reaches his face, the ash growing by half an inch or so- enough to start to sag.

"... We're screwed. It's, as simple as that. I may as well tell Cinder to, to pack her bags, I hear Mistral's nice this time of year, kinda screwed. But you wanna know what the real joke is?"

Salem is quiet, for a few moments, before silently gesturing at him to continue.

"The company's name. It's called Cloudbank Solutions," he manages before bursting into quiet laughter. "Ah… if there are any gods left out there, they've got a really messed up sense of humour."

Salem pauses, considering exactly what would make him so certain that the plan was doomed to failure- and then she remembers.

"... How sure are you that it is not… a coincidence?"

Even with the fishbowl lens of the Seer, Salem could see Ivory's eyes glaze over, looking straight through her as his mind is suddenly anywhere but the present.

Ash crumbles from the end of his cigarette as his fingers begin to tremble.

"... Like someone had turned my spine to dry ice. Then, I met, the one who made it, I think- the controller was, following him around like a lost dog, anyway."

"How on Remnant did you manage to meet him?" Salem asks with a frustrated snap in her voice, more than a little annoyed that he hadn't volunteered this information before.

"It's the, the damnedest thing, actually- I was out buying these stupid, microcomputers, for Cinder's little project, and I found his- found his wallet on the ground. I don't even remember the boy's name, but I remember that it was his birthday."

… Salem knew, objectively, that Cinder wasn't at fault here, but that didn't stop her from wanting to skin her alive for even indirectly instigating this series of events.

Months- no, years, of planning, down the drain because… she didn't know yet, but there were too many coincidences piling up to safely continue calling coincidences.

Divine fuckery, more like.

"... Well. Obviously, alterations will need to be made. Rest- I will need you at your fullest capacity in the coming days."

"Mm."

"Before you go, though-"

Salem gestures, and three more feeds come up on their Seers- three faces, two males, one young one old, and one young female. People who had caught her eye, as she scried the world at large.

"Your opinion."

Ivory breathes out, finally focusing on her and her questions. The distraction should draw him out of his head, for a while.

"First- Alderman Hugh Kennedy- second, and husband, of the mayor of a small Mistrali town, population, around 8,000. Devoted husband, no children- both he and his wife are well-thought-of in the community."

Kennedy is a heavyset man in his forties, someone whose added weight seems to fit his personality- his face is heavy with laughter lines around the mouth and eyes, pushing the word jolly to the forefront when it comes to describing him. Beside him, his wife, smaller and thinner, but still holding those same deep lines around the mouth and eyes. A happy couple.

"Second- Caesius Azar. A Mistrali teacher in Vacuo, who goes out of his way to provide his services to the more... unkempt class of un-person in the capital. He has... broken free of his initial role in Shade, and instead become something of a modern-day philosopher- leading all sorts of debates and lectures in public, for anyone to listen to."

By comparison, Caesius looks like the kind of person you find in a Mistrali romance comic- thin, but well-dressed, with short black hair kept neatly combed to one side. The only deviation from the standard was the start of some stubble, that did nothing to cover his well-shaped chin and jaw. The picture Salem showed Ivory was him teaching in a town square under the limited shade of a hastily put together canvas tent, reading from a text out to the public like an orator, or a man on the stage.

Almost every woman there has their eyes on him, and not just because they're fascinated by his words.

"Finally- Kea Nevada. She is a musician, who has gained some minor notoriety for having some kind of vendetta against some major Atlesian political figures. I actually quite liked what little I heard of her music- it's a shame she'll probably be found dead from 'suicide' within a few months if she's not careful."

The Faunus girl can't be older than her early 20s- short blonde hair cut into a messy bob mixed with bright green feathers that also appeared in patches all the way down her bare arms, poking through a fishnet shirt laid over a t-shirt that simply said "FUCK YOU ILMA HARRIS," in large block capitals.

"... Who's Ilma Harris?"

"I haven't the slightest clue beyond 'Atlesian politico,' but at least three of Kea's songs seem to involve an anger towards her that borders on breathtaking," Salem informs him, her voice holding something almost approaching respect for the girl.

Ivory says nothing for quite some time, quietly thinking over the question and his answer. She could almost see the way the light played behind his eyes, thousands of different connections and scenarios playing out at once, accompanied by a silent movement of his lips as thoughts inevitably slipped out. It was a level of thought that was almost fascinating to watch by itself.

"... Are you, aiming for subtlety, or spectacle?" he finally asks, after a long five minutes.

Salem smiles a smile that shows just a few too many teeth, that are just a little too sharp to be human.

"Why don't you surprise me?"
 
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WORLD BUILDING YESSSSS

Witch-Queen Salem and her Council of 13 are just the kind of stylish evil I have a weakness for. And it's interesting: the "ash" almost have to be the Process but I can't help but wonder how they got all the way to a rocky island off the coast of Menagerie.
 
Oh great, they've already spotted the Process. I guess Jaune should've just said screw subtlety and gone for as fast a build up as possible and make it self sustaining and impregnable if trying to be subtle wasn't any use.

First Boreah then Salem? Don't get me wrong it's great to see this update. And from a technical standpoint it's well written plus a glimpse into the legendary Grimm was interesting.

But at this rate I'm expecting Salem to magic up some kind of information about Jaune and the Process in a chapter or two and send in minions to get rid of him.

Or some other villain Interlude.
 
Oh great, they've already spotted the Process. I guess Jaune should've just said screw subtlety and gone for as fast a build up as possible and make it self sustaining and impregnable if trying to be subtle wasn't any use.

First Boreah then Salem? Don't get me wrong it's great to see this update. And from a technical standpoint it's well written plus a glimpse into the legendary Grimm was interesting.

But at this rate I'm expecting Salem to magic up some kind of information about Jaune and the Process in a chapter or two and send in minions to get rid of him.

Or some other villain Interlude.
Point of order: bedrock is both subtle and almost impossible to wipe out. The negative is that we can't immediately use the Mesh. The Process is pretty much impossible to eradicate now, but all that tasty bedrock Mesh is only useful as a quantum supercomputer, compared to the more direct uses of being surrounded by catoms.

Having a direct line to Tree Diagram in our head is still pretty damn useful and emergency flash processing covers a multitude of sins.

Edit: Also, each Legendary Grimm seems to have a thing. Kevin's a fuckmothering Jabberwocky, the Tower... I'm betting on microwave radiation, it's not a huge stretch to say Fisher King has local reality distortion from his speech pattern and title. The Furies have speed, though, and that makes me think that they're going to be something we're uniquely suited to face, since the Process thinks at a rate of "yes" and we can basically freeze time with Turn().

That's going to be a very flashy two seconds when it happens.
 
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Huh.... I'm so confused. The Transistor is a real thing in the setting? Somehow? Salem and not-Royce Ivory recognize the Process by the fucking company name. What the shit?
 
Point of order: bedrock is both subtle and almost impossible to wipe out. The negative is that we can't immediately use the Mesh. The Process is pretty much impossible to eradicate now, but all that tasty bedrock Mesh is only useful as a quantum supercomputer, compared to the more direct uses of being surrounded by catoms.

Having a direct line to Tree Diagram in our head is still pretty damn useful and emergency flash processing covers a multitude of sins.

While the bedrock Process is still hidden.

The fact of the matter is, Salem's already discovered the Process exists or is about to.

The fact that some remain hidden doesn't change the fact that the Process, something that should've had secrecy be of vital importance, was discovered before Jaune's first semester at Beacon.

Honestly, it would've been smarter to just dump some Process in Mountain Glenn to purge it of Grimm and rebuild, remodel, and refortify it.

Well, as they say hindsight is 20/20

Huh.... I'm so confused. The Transistor is a real thing in the setting? Somehow? Salem and not-Royce Ivory recognize the Process by the fucking company name. What the shit?

Oh my god, you're right!

So looks like the "win condition" is just a false hope afterall.

Salem knew of it, before even Ozpin it seems. So status quo remains the same bleak hopeless stalling game as usual I guess. Just some added variables
 
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Huh.... I'm so confused. The Transistor is a real thing in the setting? Somehow? Salem and not-Royce Ivory recognize the Process by the fucking company name. What the shit?
Not necessarily. All we know is Cloudbank and Ivory are somehow connected. We did straight up pick Cloudbank as a reference to the company Royce Bracket started in Transistor while knowing we had a Royce Bracket expy right there.
 
WORLD BUILDING YESSSSS

Witch-Queen Salem and her Council of 13 are just the kind of stylish evil I have a weakness for. And it's interesting: the "ash" almost have to be the Process but I can't help but wonder how they got all the way to a rocky island off the coast of Menagerie.

If that is the process... I'm betting on a stable time loop; it went back in time but is keeping out of the way in a far off place so as to avoid paradox.
 
While the bedrock Process is still hidden.

The fact of the matter is, Salem's already discovered the Process exists or is about to.

The fact that some remain hidden doesn't change the fact that the Process, something that should've had secrecy be of vital importance, was discovered before Jaune's first semester at Beacon.

Honestly, it would've been smarter to just dump some Process in Mountain Glenn to purge it of Grimm and rebuild, remodel, and refortify it.

Well, as they say hindsight is 20/20
I still think bedrock is the right move. I'd have preferred to keep the hole card longer but with a solid foundation to build from? I'd say the sky's the limit but we can make a fuckin space elevator. There are no limits. Choosing to do one thing in the past doesn't lock us out of other choices in the future, and the Bedrock let us access the Library() early, which is, when it fills out a bit more, going to be one hell of a boon for Hunters everywhere.
 
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Ooh, plenty of movement afoot. Ivory is a neat name, very fitting. I get that Salem is hellbent on her grudges, but at least she puts some variety into it, by the look of her minions.
 
I still think bedrock is the right move. I'd have preferred to keep the hole card longer but with a solid foundation to build from? I'd say the sky's the limit but we can make a fuckin space elevator. There are no limits. Choosing to do one thing in the past doesn't lock us out of other choices in the future, and the Bedrock let us access the Library() early, which is, when it fills out a bit more, going to be one hell of a boon for Hunters everywhere.

I guarantee that the moment Salem get the whole picture on what the Process represents if not destroyed or corrupted before it's too powerful to stop she'll make some kind of "virus Grimm" or some other BS to try infecting it and corrupting it.
 
I guarantee that the moment Salem get the whole picture on what the a Process represents if not destroyed or corrupted before it's too powerful to stop she'll make some kind of "virus Grimm" or some other BS to try infecting it.
Well, yes. Enemy action is a thing that happens.

Did you think killing the immortal Witch-Queen of the Grimm was going to be easy?
 
Well, yes. Enemy action is a thing that happens.

Did you think killing the immortal Witch-Queen of the Grimm was going to be easy?

No I didn't.

But I also didn't expect the jig to be up so soon and so easily. It wasn't even deliberate investigation. Just a lucky find brought to her in a meeting.

Because at this rate? I'm worried that instead of the Altesian Knights attacking, Salem has the Process corrupted and be the ones to attack Vale from beneath it during the Vytal Festival

Though maybe I'm being too paranoid and pessimistic.
 
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