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What would be the point of using a Perfect Defense in this case? They can willingly and freely decide not to commit to the attack, which would result in the shaping effect not happening, so why would they spend motes, willpower, or anything else in this endeavor if they can just stop the attack? Again, they are effectively being provided with a perfect defense here, which is just not committing to the attack at the cost of not having their attack connect.

Another way to look at it is that the bypassing is part of what makes this Charm a Perfect Defense - normally inflicting an Derangement on someone is an attack, but in this case it's a defense. A strange defense, but still a defense. Since it's a Perfect Defense, the effect works no matter what.

Because they are Perfect Defenses, messing with those is bad juju as stated by others before me.

Just have it do something else appropriate to Oramus if the opponent has a shaping defense or refund the motes into an overdrive pool.
 
It doesn't actually defend the Infernal if he allows it to go through.

So you use this charm and the opponent goes ahead with the attack. You get Shaped into a duck while your opponent obsesses over organizing marbles.

It's not a very potent deterrent, is what I'm saying.

Or your opponent is trying to claw his own eyes out because he's convinced they're plotting against him. Or he's gone Berserk against someone he cares about. A well chosen Derangement can be very bad for your opponent.

I like Veekie's idea of a counterattack: Oramus is the master of madness; attacking him with Shaping is just giving him ammunition.

Yeah, sure, it's an idea. Someone else can write a Charm for that.

What if the attacker goes through with the attack and combos a Perfect Defense, or is somehow immune to shaping?

It's controversial and really not all that great anyways.

Nobody has perfect immunity to Shaping at all times (would be way too powerful), at least not without motes committed to a Charm.

As far as controversial, I realize that, but controversy can be good for discussion and idea generation. I want a Charm that is more interesting and thematic than just another PD.
 
Or your opponent is trying to claw his own eyes out because he's convinced they're plotting against him. Or he's gone Berserk against someone he cares about. A well chosen Derangement can be very bad for your opponent.
Oh sure, it can be awful.

But you're still a duck. Or dead. Not really a good trade, since Derangements can be cured.

Nobody has perfect immunity to Shaping at all times (would be way too powerful), at least not without motes committed to a Charm.
Well, there's stuff like (Yozi) Glory Incarnate, which is perfect immunity as long as they have even a single mote in their pool, but that's E10. There's also Emerald Angel Unfurling which lasts for a long time and can be reflexively reactivated, providing immunity as long as the exalt keeps it up.

As far as controversial, I realize that, but controversy can be good for discussion and idea generation. I want a Charm that is more interesting and thematic than just another PD.
There's "interesting" and there's "contrary." Your suggestion is the latter. It goes against core setting conceits and is an attempt to game the system with clever language, but it's a bad idea.

Frankly, this charm isn't a Perfect Defense. It easily fails against anyone who's willing to suffer or die for their cause. To make it a true Perfect Defense, drop the clause about letting the Shaping through entirely. Make it a Perfect Defense, inflict a Derangement on the attacker related to the intended Shaping and hike the mote-cost to an appropriate level. OR you could have the Infernal suffer a Derangement instead of the Shaping, to represent physical madness being distorted into mental madness. Then you could use it to power Oramus charms which get buffed from having Derangements.
 
Or your opponent is trying to claw his own eyes out because he's convinced they're plotting against him. Or he's gone Berserk against someone he cares about. A well chosen Derangement can be very bad for your opponent.



Yeah, sure, it's an idea. Someone else can write a Charm for that.



Nobody has perfect immunity to Shaping at all times (would be way too powerful), at least not without motes committed to a Charm.

As far as controversial, I realize that, but controversy can be good for discussion and idea generation. I want a Charm that is more interesting and thematic than just another PD.

Intregity Protecting Prana might as well do exactly that since it is a reflexive activation charm in response to something and lasts 24 hours.

Cost: 5m, 1wp; Mins: Integrity 1, Essence 1; Type: Reflexive (Step 1)
Keywords: Combo-OK
Duration: One day
Prerequisite Charms: None

This Charm protects the Exalt perfectly from any direct Shaping effects.
 
Oh sure, it can be awful.

But you're still a duck. Or dead. Not really a good trade, since Derangements can be cured.

1. You get a read on what the effect is as per the Charm, so you can always do something else like Purity of Madness Defense. Oramus himself would likely have other options further down his Charm trees.
2. In this case you can't cure the Derangement so long as the Shaping effect is in place. Either that or the Shaping effect goes away if you cure the Derangement.

There's "interesting" and there's "contrary."

The two aren't mutually exclusive. Admittedly the idea may have problems with the established rules, but that doesn't mean it's not interesting. (and just because you don't find it interesting doesn't mean others don't)

Frankly, this charm isn't a Perfect Defense. It easily fails against anyone who's willing to suffer or die for their cause.

That's the point. It's not supposed to be your run of the mill PD. I rather like the notion of "yes, I'll let you do this to me, but you're gonna suffer with me - you okay with that?" because it seems more interesting to me than "I block your attack, now suffer if you don't block this counter".


Intregity Protecting Prana might as well do exactly that since it is a reflexive activation charm in response to something and lasts 24 hours.

That falls under "motes committed", but I guess it doesn't really matter since that's not the crux of the issue here.


Anyways, Alexander89 can say what he thinks of the Charm when he gets on. We've discussed, and it's not likely the Charm will survive as is, so further discussion probably isn't needed at this point.
 
Why not just reword it a bit so its a perfect shaping defence with the flaw "if the attacker accepts a Derangement of the Infernal's choice and it is successfully inflicted"?
It is basically the same effect as the original idea and doesn't have the bypassing of shaping defences the original had.
 
Could just add a line that says 'if the attacker defends against the inflicted derangement in any way, or makes any attempt to remove it at a later date, then the shaping effect fails'. Doesn't break the Primacy of Perfect Defenses, but it does mean it's pretty much pointless to use one as you can get exactly the same effect just by cancelling out of the attack.
 
Proposals thus far:

-Counter Shaping effects
-Transfer Shaping effects to someone else
-Absorb the Shaping effects into motes/willpower/something else
-Twist the Shaping effects into something positive to the Infernal

About Enjou's idea, I too think that perfectly bypassing Perfect Defense is a bit too much. However, making so the Shaping effect falls off at the same moment as the target rejects the Derangement with a Perfect Defense or later if they cure it is appropriate.

However, I have two alternatives I thought up this morning:

-Oramus is everything that Is Not. That include what the enemy wants him to be. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal becomes what he would be if the attack hits. The Shaping attack doesn't change anything because, paradoxically, it already hits. Then the Infernal reverts to normal and laugh at the enemy. The latter may or may not be necessary for the Charm to work.
-Oramus both Exist and Does Not. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal ceases to exists for a few instants. After that he exists again, but the Shaping effect is trapped into the border between Possible and Impossible. After that the Infernal makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy or another target, and release the Shaping effect in their direction.
 
-Oramus both Exist and Does Not. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal ceases to exists for a few instants. After that he exists again, but the Shaping effect is trapped into the border between Possible and Impossible. After that the Infernal makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy or another target, and release the Shaping effect in their direction.
I like this one a good deal. Possible to build up a combo out of it as well, especially if you've already established a corrupting environment. Pick up the mutations and derangements, spin them around and reallocate them.

Could be a feasible way to protect allies from shaping as well, by 'eating' the shaping and then punting it into something else. A library/armory of chaos.
 
-Oramus both Exist and Does Not. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal ceases to exists for a few instants. After that he exists again, but the Shaping effect is trapped into the border between Possible and Impossible. After that the Infernal makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy or another target, and release the Shaping effect in their direction.

I like this one as well.
 
-Oramus both Exist and Does Not. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal ceases to exists for a few instants. After that he exists again, but the Shaping effect is trapped into the border between Possible and Impossible. After that the Infernal makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy or another target, and release the Shaping effect in their direction.
So this is basically a perfect defense that requires you to give up your turn to reflect the attack?
 
-Oramus both Exist and Does Not. Just moments before the Shaping effect hits the Infernal ceases to exists for a few instants. After that he exists again, but the Shaping effect is trapped into the border between Possible and Impossible. After that the Infernal makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy or another target, and release the Shaping effect in their direction.

Ok, how does this sound for this?

Preposterous Molding of Zero
Cost
: - (4-6m); Mins: Essence 2; Type: Permanent
Keywords: None
Duration: Permanent
Prerequisite Charms: What Is And What Should Never Be

The children of Chaos once thought to Shape Oramus into harmlessness, only to learn the folly of trying to shape that which both Is and Is Not. Whenever the Infernal would be altered by a Shaping effect, that effect becomes Obvious to her senses. The Infernal may spend four motes to reject the change, briefly ceasing to exist at the moment the Shaping effect would occur. After that the Infernal once more exists, but the Shaping Effect is trapped within the border between Possible and Impossible. The infernal then makes a dismissing or mocking gesture towards the enemy, regardless of distance, or another target within (Essence x 100) yards, releasing the Shpaing effect in their direction.

At Essence 5, the Infernal may keep the Shaping effect within the border between Possible and Impossible for up to seven days for an extra two motes, allowing her to release the Shaping effect at her leisure rather than immediately.

Note - this doesn't defend against non-Shaping mental influences. Soothing Balm of Insanity is the Oramus Charm that does that.
 
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It seems like the shaping defense could also lead nicely into a riposte or redirect charm wherein the Infernal both is and is not his enemy briefly. It might have to be a heretical with Loom Snarling Deception, but either way it could be hilarious and appropriate. Not sure how the fluff should sound for something like this.
 
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How about the shaping effect hits but does something else of a thematically related nature with no mechanical effect (barring GM and player approval).

They try to turn his eyes into bees but instead they give him a craving for honey.
 
Ok, how does this sound for this?

Note - this doesn't defend against non-Shaping mental influences. Soothing Balm of Insanity is the Oramus Charm that does that.
Very good!
I have one problem with it: every time I read the title, I think of ZnT fanfiction.
What about this?

Being/Nonbeing Paradox Theorem (alternately, Being/Nonbeing Paradox Dismissal)

It seems like the shaping defense could also lead nicely into a riposte or redirect charm wherein the Infernal both is and is not his enemy briefly. It might have to be a heretical with Loom Snarling Deception, but either way it could be hilarious and appropriate. Not sure how the fluff should sound for something like this.
More like Black Mirror Shintai, but it would be fun to make an enemy strike us but injure himself before we tricked the world into being him instead of us ^^

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Next chapter will be out tomorrow. It will include a Kallen's POV, because we need someone to describe Lelouch's new fabulous costume.
 
First Roll (Praising the Terrorists):



(8 successes. They honestly believe you)

Second Roll (No Seeing Under the Mask):



(8 successes, plus 3 from Second Oramus Excellency. They don't even have the willpower to reject your arguments.)

Third Roll (Be the Opposite of Britannia):



(7 successes. The Ebon Dragon is pleased the modern world is so corrupted that those acting like heroes are persecuted as criminals by the government.)
 
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