@Yog, thanks for making adjustments based on everyone's suggestions so far. Not so much in this quest, but in others where I've played a more active part in planning, I know how much of a hassle it can be to continually move stuff around in a complex plan to accommodate everyone's input.
The last thing that really stands out to me as missing is at least a single point in Melee or Brawl, to represent basic FFCF training. Olivia's stealth abilities don't just lend themselves to sniping, and it would seem neglectful of her trainers to not make sure she at least has proper grounding in fighting up close and personal, even if that only means she knows how to properly knife someone in the kidney or choke out a target.
If you reduce Performance from 5 points down to 4 points, wouldn't that leave enough to work with to pad a few neglected areas? Even 4 points is going to be a significant improvement in her current skills, and it will be supported by everything else to make her exceptional.