[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
 
Super War Bear vs Dino Dragon! This will be awesome!

[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

Through power and might we will achieve victory oer this worthy foe!
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

Let's go for an overwhelming victory.

tide of crimson tide
"tide of crimson"
ripples across the air
"through" rather than "across"
that reaches your line of sight
"enters" instead of "reaches"
has not gone over well.
Remove 'over".
It's heavily muscled
"Its", since it's not a contraction of "it is".
 
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Our strength is Our Strength.

Str 2358 vs Fort 2148

Strength as over 200 on Fort, We're more fit to attack than defend in a one on one scenario.

Edit: Previous was deleted due to double post
True, but our skills/spells and mindset favor a tank/counter style.

Plus we know we will have harder fights here after this, so I want to take as little damage as possible so we can be as strong as can be for the next one.
 
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[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

We need to throw it.
I don't care if our stats don't support it, we need to throw it.
 
Food for thought wouldn't this Growlmon count as a worthy foe to load and the gains/healing that loading such a strong champ can give?
 
[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
 
From that comment about Angewomon being dishonorable, it sounds like Wolfmon kicked the bucket.
as the power of Wrath leaves vanishes.
Delete one of of those last two words.
Which of the two are currently winning is a complete mystery,
is
Pit who is decidedly not a statue for a some odd reason.
This sentence is a bit weird with how it flows with the rest of the paragraph. Structure suggests needing a comma after "Pit" and after "reason" and then having that not be the end of the sentence.

Quick and dirty fix though is deleting the word "who".
Which left Phelesmon confused and thus open to your commanding offers attack.
Comma after "confused".
officer's
you examine the new foes armaments,
foe's
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

Because more fun.

Also wish there was someone else in party of holding off large enemies. We have a couple of ranged options that would be a good fall back when we can't easily melee due to injury.
 
[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.

Overwhelm might be sensible if we at least had both arms. But we don't HAVE it for offense.
 
How do you think Verge is doing Stamina wise? His body isn't energy efficient and he just got out of that slugfest with Wolfmon only to go into RAGE mode to save Sparks.

Maybe I'm worrying over nothing, since we haven't been out here that long, yet.
 
@justinkal @TempestK

Thanks for the fixes!
Also wish there was someone else in party of holding off large enemies. We have a couple of ranged options that would be a good fall back when we can't easily melee due to injury.
Mm. Squad is kind of short-staffed at the moment. Should be fixed relatively soon though.
How do you think Verge is doing Stamina wise? His body isn't energy efficient and he just got out of that slugfest with Wolfmon only to go into RAGE mode to save Sparks.

Maybe I'm worrying over nothing, since we haven't been out here that long, yet.
Heh Funny thing is that the whole wrath thing actually kind of helped Verge on the stamina front.
Adhoc vote count started by drexal15 on Jan 10, 2019 at 6:59 PM, finished with 16 posts and 8 votes.

  • [X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
    [X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

Let's go Bear-serk!
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.

Fukkit, full berserker rage go
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory.
 
As a note this isn't Verge going all rage like at the start of the update. Verge will be fighting as a martial artist, just utilizing the more offensive parts of his style.
Still well worth it imo. Growlmon... is not a subtle or technique-focused mon. And if Verge is faster than it is, then we've got a good chance. Luckily the limb that was maimed was a forelimb, so we still have our ability to dodge while standing.
 
[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
Frame Reinforce: Uses Special to harden the body for 10 seconds, raising Fortitude at the cost of Agility. @drexal15 how much Agility does using Frame Reinforce cost us? also would it be possible for you to tell us how much stamina/spirt/health we have left?
 
how much Agility does using Frame Reinforce cost us? also would it be possible for you to tell us how much stamina/spirt/health we have left?
General rule of thumb I've been thinking of when writing is *half* Essentially cutting agility in Twain so long as the spell is active.

Verge's *health* is pretty high. Like 85-90%. His wounds aren't quite fully healed, but aside from the arm thing it won't effect him fighting.

Stamina on the other hand is a bit more drained, I'd estimate about 60%.

Spirit pool is also high. Aside from Megaton Punch and Sharp fangs, he hasn't used all that much.
 
[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
 
[X] Overwhelm: While it's true that you're injured and lacking the use of one arm, that will only make your victory all the more satisfying. With fire, strength of body and claw you will claim victory
 
[X] Persevere: Like the shield you have sworn to be, you will withstand this champion's wrath. With『Frame Reinforce 』you shall take it's assault, weather the blows and strike back all the harder.
 
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