Where is @Datcord ? Is he alright? Do we need to send out a search party? Smoke signals? Sacrifices of livers to replace his?
 
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How much of the Zodiac has been completed now? I suspect that we may be approaching the end of the fic.
 
Its not lifeforce chi it is concentrate it on your eyes to see divinity chi.
...I may be the whitest-bread piece of toast in this thread, but even I can tell you that chi is chi is chi dangit.* It doesn't...work like that. There is not some special brand of chi that does "concentrate it in your eyes to see divinity" or whatever. It is all the same damn chi.

*subject to spatiotemporal narrative differentiation
 
...I may be the whitest-bread piece of toast in this thread, but even I can tell you that chi is chi is chi dangit.* It doesn't...work like that. There is not some special brand of chi that does "concentrate it in your eyes to see divinity" or whatever. It is all the same damn chi.

*subject to spatiotemporal narrative differentiation
I think they're trying to say the story had 'all asians have chi sensing techniques' or something like that.

EDIT: Or that author thinks that's how 'having chi' works. Anyways, talking about another fanfic is a bit of a derail in this thread.
 
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...... were this site not intended as "Safe for Work", I would explain how a "virgin sacrifice" need not result in a person's death. However, that's not how it was phrased, was it?

I expect, in the afterlife, a great many eagerly look forward to a certain someone's arrival, and are planning on how to make said arrival both memorable and terrible...
 
...... were this site not intended as "Safe for Work", I would explain how a "virgin sacrifice" need not result in a person's death. However, that's not how it was phrased, was it?

I expect, in the afterlife, a great many eagerly look forward to a certain someone's arrival, and are planning on how to make said arrival both memorable and terrible...
Oh! To sacrifice a conceptual virgin, not a physical virgin!
 
Punch-clock hero Dauntless? Inexperienced, naive, totally unprepared Dauntless?
Punch-clock hero (Dauntless)
Inexperienced, naive (Dauntless)
Totally unprepared (Dauntless)
Actual cannibal Dauntless!

Sorry, was getting Shia LeBeouf vibes from this bit.

That aside, it's definitely nice to see the new focus on writing paying dividends in the form of a new chapter already. I hope it's working well for you!
 
It says something about Brockton Bay, That when one gang has been reformed and the other eliminated, that Armsmaster jumps at the opportunity to leave his rival in charge of it.
 
Heh I'm already going to Hell may as well deserve it.

Edit: I figure it's like prison, do you want to be the guy sent down for eating a ham sandwich on good Friday or do you want to be the Dark Ritual performing Blood Mage
 
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