Had too far much fun with this

Oni Lee shook his head. "No." He paused. "My sister came here. She sold charms." Strange... there was a sort of wondering quality to his voice, now.

Just because something has been lost, does not mean that cannot be found.

On the right, nothing out of the ordinary-- for a bad neighborhood in Brockton Bay. Gang tags littered the sides of houses and other buildings, broken windows were covered by plastic or cheap plyboard. But on the left, an unbroken chain of household paint, layered onto clean bricks and siding. No spraypaint, no broken windows, no sagging roofs. The effect halted after the third house from the end, the last house covered with drawings.

Just because something is broken, does not mean that it cannot be fixed.

"Taylor... you know you can tell me anything, right?"
"Sure, dad."
"I wouldn't be angry, you know."
"Uh... okay?"
"Just... just so you know."
Even if it will take more effort than you think you can give. [Did he think she ordered what I think he thinks she ordered? ;)]

It was hard work, but it went a lot faster with many hands. The full load of over two hundred saplings all found new homes in the scarce earth of Brockton Bay, and as the heat of the day wore on mothers, and wives, and younger siblings started appearing with snacks, or drinks for those working under the sun. Some particularly enterprising cooks and shopkeepers started setting up mobile carts, hawking colorful wares and freshly-fried tofu, and all sorts of things. Traffic was stalled and diverted around some of the larger squares, and people began to gather, lured outside by the sights and sounds and smells. By evening, the work was all finished and the block party had only grown.

The Secret is to let others lend a hand.

There had been a girl once, with this name. She'd had a family. She'd sold charms at the local shrine, once they'd abandoned their homes and moved to this desolate place, on the other side of the world. She'd had a brother.

It wasn't much, this memory, this girl. He still had no face or name of his own. But it was there. It was proof, proof of a truth that he'd long since swept aside: there had been a man, before there had been Oni Lee.

Kiyoko.

Just because someone has passed on does not mean that they have ceased to care. (or watch over those they loved) [Remember Spirits are an important thing in Okami

Sunny met up with Taylor again when she was halfway back home, pedaling harder than she'd thought possible. The wolf ran alongside easily, tongue lolling happily. "Oh man, Sunny, why did we do that it was such a bad idea why."

'Woooo~!'

Remember that life is easier when you take everything with a touch of humor, (and a bit of petting the dog)

"Really, Sunny? It's not even five o'clock." The wolf just 'wuffed' at her, then padded over to the rope-circled tree and flopped down onto the grass. Taylor followed, and settled down nearby. At an unsatisfactory distance, as it turned out, because Sunny wagged her tail and wriggled on her back until the motion inched her close enough for Taylor to rub her tummy. "Busy day, I take it?"

Enjoy the little things while you can,

"Lung has asked about you. He has asked about the trees, and the shrine, among other things." Sunny's ears perked to listen a little more intently. Taylor put one hand back behind her, to grip the wolf's fur as an anchor. "He will meet with you."

And remember that trials are meant to help you grow.
 
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Even if a lawyer means to specialize in one area, they still make them study other areas in law school, you know?

Though I'm pretty sure in canon Alan Barnes just acted as a character reference, not a legal threat, to help SS.

Depending on where you live all of the lawyers and judges may know each other, but the threat of getting mired down in the legal system where you can be drained dry by lawyers, court costs ect.
 
There is a situation that can't get out of my head:

Taylot going along a streat, carrying a lot of stuff and acidentaly droping them. And sudenly *poof*, Oni Lee teleports in(with his scary demon mask on, knives and granades all over him) and helps her to pick it up.
I just can't help bud imagine how various people would react to seeing that: ABB members, Lung, other asians, whites, heroes in their civilian identities?
A person walking around a corner and seeing Oni Lee strolling with a white girl, carrying her bag and frienly chating?
It would be such a 'nope' moment.
 
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It strikes me that even Kenta, for all that he might feel a very large measure of justified anger and it is very justified, ("If you're Real, Why did I have to stand alone against Leviathan at Kyushu! Why did our Home sink?!") would feel a measure of Awe coming face to face with an actual physically real Kami.

Now if the community of Brockton bay realises that their Shrine has just got put in the same metaphysical weightclass as the Ise Shrine. and The Wolf Kami is... who she is... Brockton bay would get a hell of alot of new japanese residents.

Kaiser wept.
 
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Where there was a honored goddess, when Jamato's folk stand up to protect her's properties.

I think you might have misunderstood.

This is not Enraged Evul Lung!Kenta who's been mindfucked by his shard for years, I portrayed there. That was the young man who had to stand alone against a monster, who sees that if they had known to ask, there might have been help. But also a man who's lost his home and his mother and wonders why the Kami did not help unasked.

Kenta will not bow to Amaterasu without effort.
 
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They'd have to accept it, because forcing an unwilling person into a highly public role when the public's perception of them is that they've committed no crimes goes something along the lines of 'Thank you for this interview, Mr news reporter. Oh, by the way, I was forced into the wards against my will. I didn't want to join them at all, but they refused to take no for an answer. And I don't mean that in the eventually-I-caved way, I mean that in the We've-signed-your-papers-for-you way.'

It'd be suicide. Figuratively or Literally.

Ah, you're referring to something like what happened in Firebird (damn, I miss it), That Gnawing Worm, Cancer (damn, I enjoy it) or A Show of Force (very interesting).

Fortunately however Taylor hasn't done anything yet that could be used to justify an involuntary Ward membership and Danny isn't aware of her being the Painter, so he can't sign her up without her consent.

No, I'm talking about Taylor saying no and the PRT/Protectorate not accepting her "not interested". She says no to Armsmaster, makes it clear she isn't interested in joining the Wards, makes it very clear because he didn't listen to her first no, and is almost insulting with her last no, just to stop him trying to push the Wards on her. Then next time Miss Militia "accidentally" runs into her, and tries to get her to reconsider the Wards. Then Gallant. And so on and on and on. With perhaps some quiet effort to find out who her parents are, so they can, if they think it workable, try and get her parents to push the Wards or sign her up. (I know she only has one parent, they don't.)
 
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"Wow, Emma, overreact much? They're actually a bunch of pretty nice guys. Oni Lee even gave me a rape whistle! Although since they're watching my back all the time anyway I'm not sure why I'd ever need it. Maybe I'm supposed to blow it if I want them to rape somebody? Weird."

"...Emma? Emma? Huh. Out like a light."

warning This is an extremely tasteless joke. The Staff would very much like for you and anyone else to never make such jokes again. Don't joke about traumatizing 14-year-old girls with their near-rape experiences.
 
I wonder what Bakuda will be like. She probably won't be a psycho here, at least not for long. Just imagine what kinds of fireworks a Bomb Tinker can make.
 
Bakuda, Acolyte and Fireworks Apprentice of Bakugami.

Seems legit.
3D fireworks of a wolf howling, complete with sound. Cherry Bombs that create and scatter actual cherry petals. It'd be great.

I can already imagine Kaiser and the rest of the Empire having seizures at the sight of the sheer Japanese Spirit that will take over the ABB territory.
 
Thank you for this chapter. I enjoyed it a great deal.

Souta hadn't done more than have some words with the redhead, but the girl had started shrieking at the top of her lungs, which brought down the teachers.

I don't know about other people, but I always saw Emma as a slightly weak person, who broke. Who then tried to put herself together with the help of another, even worse broken person, and mostly failed.

Which, looking back, now that she had a name and a face and a very scary patron, had been pretty shitty of him. That it took the threat of angering Oni Lee to actually make him look at her, and see what happened instead of merely watching... well, that was pretty shitty too.

Character growth. Nice.

"And what does that mean?" It was no wonder the Oni was fond of her. There was probably iron running through this girl's blood. "Why don't you sit down. I'll make tea."

Haru talked.

Are you trying to show Taylor gaining authority in the minds of the Asian population? Considering how the above was written, I see it that way. (No need to answer, I'll enjoy seeing how it develops in story.)

Taylor couldn't deny it felt nice to know that someone at school had her back, even a little. And saving her bike had been beyond their call of duty, as far as she could see-- she'd told the Haru boy as much. She'd given him some paintings she'd done over the summer, in thanks, with instructions to hand one over each to the other two teens he'd been acting with.

After reading this I immediately though about Yuuta, Souta and Haru talking, one of them (who's well known to be crap when it comes to studying) mentioning how everything just "clicked" when he looked through his books yesterday, and how he really got an understanding of how to study. And wouldn't you know, the parts he really paid attention too were all in today's test. The other mentioning how he got a part time job, something he thinks he can get into. The last one mentioning how a sister, mother or grandma came back from the doctor, how the doctor talked about wanting more tests to confirm things, but mentioned spontaneous remission.

And the three just looking at each other, quiet and pale faced.

There was a slight clattering sound outside, and Taylor reluctantly left the shade of the office to go look. Sunshine had made her way back to the shrine, and was now going over the day's offerings. Specifically, she was fumbling with the cap on the sake, and as soon as she got it off the wolf grabbed the neck of the small jug in her teeth and tilted her head skyward. Taylor could hear the guzzling sounds from here.

"Really, Sunny? It's not even five o'clock."

Considering how this was said, I'm guessing it wasn't the first time Sunshine sampled some of the liquid offerings.

"I bring news." The assassin paused, in that way he always seemed to between sentences, as though he had to process the thought first.

You really know how to show him as damaged.

"Lung has asked about you. He has asked about the trees, and the shrine, among other things." Sunny's ears perked to listen a little more intently. Taylor put one hand back behind her, to grip the wolf's fur as an anchor. "He will meet with you."

"No. You are not ABB, you are not under his authority; you are here. He must come to you, and already that angers him. To refuse him would be worse."

Again, it seems as if Taylor now has some authority, some standing in the Asian community.

"I... will try to find a solution It-- it is difficult for me."

"Because he's your boss."

"No," the assassin said. Taylor looked at him. "I am... diminished, Miko. Much of me is lost. The Ōkami has aided me in ways I cannot express. I owe a debt that cannot be repaid. If I can aid you, I will."

Again, you show the damage and Oni Lee's awareness of the damage very well.

Behind Taylor, Sunshine got to her feet, and padded over to the masked cape. Oni Lee held very still as Sunny leaned close enough to leave a nose-print on his mask, then turned and lowered her head to his side. She nipped at something, then stood back a step. Taylor saw Oni Lee's mask tilt towards her a little, hoping for a translation.

"Okay. I... guess it really was a jewelry box. Huh." Taylor pushed a hand through her hair. "I copied the characters like she wanted, but I don't really know what they mean... but if I had to guess, something about sparkles."

Oni Lee stared at her for a moment, then turned back to the box.

Isn't the above the perfect picture of a priestess. Someone who interprets what the goddess wants the worshiper to do and someone who does what the goddess instructs her to.
 
Bakuda, Acolyte and Fireworks Apprentice of Bakugami.

Seems legit.

3D fireworks of a wolf howling, complete with sound. Cherry Bombs that create and scatter actual cherry petals. It'd be great.

I can already imagine Kaiser and the rest of the Empire having seizures at the sight of the sheer Japanese Spirit that will take over the ABB territory.
Oh, yes, I can see Bakuda pulling a stunt like this:


Especially over E88 territory.
 
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Chapter 11
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"Yes, I understand. We'll head over soon, and get this cleared up... yes. Goodbye."

Danny Hebert hung up the kitchen phone, a heavy weight settling in his stomach. With only a slight tremor in his fingers, he started going through his work duffel bag and found the black cell issued to him, then sent off a couple of texts, explaining that he was going to be late getting in today. He could hear Taylor moving around upstairs as she got ready for the day, and he slipped the phone back into the black bag before she could come down the stairs and see it. That done, he set about finding some granola bars she could eat on the way.

Winslow had just called.

Danny didn't believe for a second that his Taylor had set thugs on Emma Barnes, the two were thick as thieves... or, they had been. Emma hadn't come around for quite some time now, and Taylor never mentioned her. But even if the girls had drifted apart, that didn't mean Taylor would do something like this. Taylor was a good girl. Taylor was a smart girl.

...but.

But. That small seed of doubt was a loathsome thing, and Danny hated it. He'd tried to pluck at its roots, but for everything he brushed aside there was something else to take its place. Taylor never mentioning friends at school, Taylor being out and about at all hours of the day, Taylor putting clothes in the laundry hamper full of mud and odd stains. Maybe she'd lost touch with Emma. Maybe she'd developed a taste for movies, or walking along the Boardwalk. Maybe she'd taken up a sport— a rough one, like soccer. Maybe sometime soon she'd bring up the three-hundred-and-some-change charge on his credit card, and there'd be a reasonable explanation for that, too.

Or maybe she'd made some friends who weren't entirely on the straight and narrow. Maybe she was getting into something over her head. Danny sighed. None of this would have happened if Annette were still alive.

Danny tapped his fingers on the countertop, and waited. Shouldn't Taylor have come downstairs by now, to make some cereal or something? He glanced at the clock— 7:13. The seed twined its roots a little deeper; Danny himself always left at 7:15, on the dot. He glanced at the stairs, then at the clock again. Danny grabbed his keys and walked out the front door, started his car, then left the engine running and closed the door with enough force to be heard. Then he walked back inside, opening the front door as quietly as he could.

Taylor came down the stairs, wearing a red skirt and white blouse, and with her backpack nowhere in sight. She spotted him in the kitchen and froze, eyes wide. The seed grew deeper.

"Taylor," he said, keeping his voice carefully even. "I'm driving you to school today. No buts."

* * *

It was a cold and silent ride. Even the weather was gloomy, a gray cover of clouds with no rain in sight.

When they arrived at the school, Taylor's father did not drop her off. Instead, he exited the vehicle first, then came around to the passenger side to escort her into the building himself. They didn't stop there: Danny marched beside her as they passed her classroom and headed down the long hallways towards the Principal's Office. Taylor spotted Yuuta on the way, trying to attract her attention. Behind him, Haru saw the thunderous look on her dad's face and pulled the other teen into a different hallway. Danny and Taylor kept walking, and her heart beat twice or more for every step.

Emma and Mr. Barnes were already sitting with Blackwell, of course. Of course they would arrive early, to express how awful the situation was, and how terrible it must be for Emma to... whatever this was about. Friday's altercation, most likely. The redhead looked unusually frazzled, but her eyes when she looked at Taylor were as snakelike shrewd as ever. Danny moved to shake Mr. Barnes' hand— Alan refused.

"Gentlemen, please, take a seat. I've got another meeting coming along shortly and I'd like to get this taken care of quickly." Blackwell steepled her fingers together, and looked between Taylor and Emma. "Now, Miss Barnes is alleging that Taylor incited a number of students suspected to be involved in gang activities against her. There was an incident last Friday, wherein the cafeteria staff heard raised voices and came to find Miss Barnes being confronted by several known troublemakers. Miss Hebert, were you present for this?"

"She ran off and all her little gang friends decided to— "

"I ran off because you threw ink in my face!"

"Ms. Blackwell, do you have any records that might support such an accusation?" Alan interrupted. The principal glowered, but allowed it. Danny Hebert was silent, save for the creak of wooden armrests beneath his fingers.

"There was nothing reported to the school nurse, or to any other staff, no." Blackwell pinched the bridge of her nose. "Although, over the past year Miss Hebert has complained frequently of aggression from Miss Barnes, as well as a few other students."

"...Taylor, you haven't mentioned anything like this to me."

"And those complaints were unfounded, I'm sure," Alan Barnes nodded. "It's sounding to me like Taylor's been trying to get Emma into trouble for some reason. Perhaps a grudge. Does that sound possible to you, Ms. Blackwell?"

The principal hedged a bit, saying, "I'm not sure that's the first explanation I'd come to, but..."

"And it's awfully convenient that Taylor could have a reason to be seen leaving, right before some unsavory students threatened the girl she's had her attentions on for a year or more."

"Alan, this isn't a courtroom," Danny hissed. The lawyer waved a hand in dismissal.

"The same logic applies, Danny. You need evidence— anything else is just slander. Defamation of character. Emma has witnesses to this incident, all Taylor has is pointed fingers. If you keep pressing the point, it will go to court, and we both know who can last longer in that ring." Taylor's father gaped at the man. "I take Emma's well-being very seriously, Danny. Maybe you haven't been watching your girl as well as you should have."

Taylor saw her dad stiffen beside her, but when he didn't say anything further, the fragile hold Taylor had on her own version of the Hebert Family Temper snapped.

"Why the hell aren't you saying anything?!" She exploded, rising from her chair so quickly it knocked the furniture over with a loud clatter. Blackwell tried to speak over her, but Taylor was louder. "You think I poured ink on my own face? This is why I haven't mentioned anything to you! Because you don't listen to me, you listen to anyone but me! You talk to anyone but me! You spend time with anyone BUT ME!"

"Taylor, sit down! You've been acting strange all summer, and now— "

"You don't listen, the teachers don't listen— nobody does!" Taylor fisted her hands in her hair, her breath coming in hitches and gasps. "Nobody listens to me except— !" The door slammed open.

"What in blazes is going on in here?!"
The voice was familiar, but the tone was so far out of expectation that Taylor couldn't help staring. Old Mr. Henrick was standing in the doorway, a middle-aged man in a suit behind him. Mrs. Blackwell stood up, looking like she'd just swallowed a lemon.

"Ah, Mr. Henrick, Mr. Stevenson— my apologies, but I'm going to be a bit delayed. Why don't you continue your tour while I deal with this?"

"Like hell I will. Susan Blackwell, what is this all about?"

Both Danny and Alan's faces were red with anger, but it was the lawyer who spoke. "This is a private matter, and you have no business being in here!"

Ms. Blackwell coughed. "Mr. Barnes, this is Mr. George Henrick and Mr. Clive Stevenson, the former and current superintendents of this district. They have every right to be here." Mr. Barnes' face didn't seem to know if it wanted to blanch or flush further.

"Still not answering me, Blackwell. Taylor— what's going on?"

Taylor blinked, then hastily wiped at her face. "Emma stole my inkpot on Friday, then splashed it in my face. Some other kids finally stood up for me, so now Emma's saying I sicced gang members on her."

"Uh huh. I remember you runnin' home in tears that day." Old Mr. Henrick's eyes were shrewd. "I've had my suspicions— has she been giving you a hard time for a while now?" At her nod, Old. Mr. Henrick hissed a breath through his teeth.

"Blackwell, I hope for your sake you've been addressing this. I've watched Taylor Hebert come home in tears more times than I care to count."

"Look— Mr. Henrick— " Alan Barnes gestured, drawing attention away from Taylor and back onto him. "You have to understand, I don't know what's between my daughter and his, but there's been witness accounts with some pretty bad implications, here. Taylor's been seen talking with suspected gang members, levering accusations against upstanding students— I even hear her own grades took a pretty sharp drop, when before she was such a clever girl. Danny, have you thought about having her tested for drugs?"

"Mr. Barnes, is it?" Old Mr. Henrick interrupted. "Your voice carries, you know. Good for a courtroom. Not so good when you're threatening lawsuits with intent to bankrupt the other party. Do the words 'moral turpitude' mean anything to you?" Mr. Barnes' mouth snapped shut with a click. "And as for implying that Taylor here's not an upstanding student— I have no idea what her grades are like. But I know what she's like. She does chores and yard work for the missus and I. She's out walking her dog, every day, rain or shine. She's out gardening an' planting trees in poorer sections of town, just because she can and because they need a bit of color." Old Mr. Henrick snorted. "You want to bluster and yell about slander and character defamation, you should get your own ducks in a row, first."

And that was that.

* * *

Danny got to the Rig a good two hours late, his brain feeling as numb as his fingers as he slipped on his mask. He was still numb when he got to the closest thing the Protectorate had to an employee breakroom for its powered employees, and he found a mug and poured himself some coffee from the tinkertech brewer on reflex. Velocity was picking over the snack basket, grumbling in dissatisfaction. Danny pulled the granola bars out of his pocket and tossed them onto the countertop. Velocity snatched them as only a speedster could.

"Awesome, thanks Chessman. Aren't you running late today, though?"

"Had a fight with my daughter. I think."

"Eesh. Teenager? Yeah, that happens. Want some good news?"

"Please." Danny added creamer, then sugar. Then more sugar. He needed something sweet.

Velocity nodded, then spoke around a mouthful of oats and raisins. "We caught a cape vigilante a few days back. Shadow Stalker— heard of her? She was going to trial, but word is she might join the Wards instead. Probationary, but still."

Danny thought. The name sounded familiar. "I think so. Wasn't she violent, though?"

"Yeah, and it's making a few people nervous, but she had a character witness and all. She was rough with criminals, but she saved people too. A Mr. Barnes testified before a judge and everything."

Danny put his mug down with a careful click. If it was still in his hand, it was going to shatter. "Barnes, you said?"

"Mhm. Some lawyer. Guess it's always good to have one on call, huh?"

"Alan Barnes?"

"Uh... yes?" Danny turned to face Velocity, and the speedster actually took a step back. "You... know him?"

"I know that less than an hour ago, he was accusing my daughter of being a drug-addicted gang member while covering for his own daughter's attacks on mine, then threatened to sue me into poverty when I protested. He only stopped when he was threatened with disbarment for dishonest conduct."

Velocity stopped chewing his granola bar. He swallowed, carefully. "...maybe we should go see Armsmaster. And the Director. They're going to want to hear this."

Danny did not smile— he showed his teeth. "Gladly."​
 
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Now I hope that Danny learns his lesson about spending time with your daughter and not ignoring everything until it blows up in your face.
 
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