...Not sure how in-character that closing bit would be at this point. I was tempted go full Symphogear and put in a line about 'coming back alive even if it kills me' but wasn't sure Homura would go for a line like that...if anyone can come up with anything better, please do.
Its in-character-ness is mixed, I'd say. This is the timeline Homura most wants to succeed, but she's so burned by constant failure she can't overcome the nagging sensation that she'll fail here too. I will always appreciate and encourage going full Symphogear when it's appropriate, though. And the sequel quest we'll be moving on to if we get the Good End here is going to taste an awful lot like GX, so if Symphogear is your thing I strongly encourage sticking around.
 
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Oh, I completely missed the [ ] Wat do? at the end there. Resubmitting my vote:

[X] Plan The Melancholy Of Assassin Serenity
-[X] Squeaky Toys
-[X] Climbing Post
-[X] With motivation like that, you certainly can't allow yourself to lose, now can you?
--[X] Not that you intended to lose to begin with, but the extra motivation is nice.
---[X] And will just make it that much more disappointing when you fail.
---[X] No. You won't fail. Not this time. You can't allow it.
-[X] Walk Madoka back home, say hi to her parents and her little brother, and then meet up with the Holy Sextet to see if you can't do anything to help tonight; a run-down on what they've managed to do while you were out wouldn't hurt either
-[X] After you're done with Holy Sextet business, go home
--[X] Practice Inguz while doing the thing with Assassin
---[X] Apologize for whatever you did to upset her this morning; while you understand that she doesn't think that she can have what you have with Archer, you at the very least want to try to be friends with her if nothing else if she's thinking of sticking around (as it's not like a Servant supported by you would only be around for a week or two like in a regular Grail War, but rather for as long as you're alive to sustain them so she'll likely be around for a while)

No reason a squeaky toy can't be a round ball, like @Yuri Vampire is talking about. Also stole Yuri Vampire's Wat do? sub-vote for my own plan, *insert evil laugh here*.

On a side note, the Assassin Izo Okada was released recently in Grand Order (NA) (and we all know just how much SVS loves F/GO), and he's literally just a male Kyoko. So if Assassin does indeed kick the bucket during Walpurgisnacht - which SVS seems to have been really worried about what with all the talk of resummoning Assassin - and Achilles dies somehow due to OG!Lancer's luck rubbing off on him, then he'd be the perfect Servant for Kyoko to resummon.

EDIT: Added in Homura checking in with the Holy Sextet to do stuff before going back home.
 
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(and we all know just how much SVS loves F/GO)
FGO has a dinosaur as a servant. Even if it is voiced by Hikasa "My voice causes spontaneous orgasms in both sexes" Yōko, I think that by itself justifies me in discrediting everything FGO is, says, and does.

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and then go back home yourself
We're not going to meet up with the others and see about doing team stuff? I know Oriko said we shouldn't force ourselves to if we can't make it, but there is still a witch probably out and about in the area. Just making sure.
 
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FGO has a dinosaur as a servant. Even if it is voiced by Hikasa "My voice causes spontaneous orgasms in both sexes" Yōko, I think that by itself justifies me in discrediting everything FGO is, says, and does.
To be fair, that stems from her status as a Kijyo (an Oni) combined with the fact that in her madness she went and became close to that of a Dragon in nature, but not really. She takes on a form that closely resembles that of a Dinosaur (basically a giant lizard monster without any wings), as she can't become a Dragon in full; she's more "Dragon"-esque than a true "Dinosaur", and that's only when she's Shapeshifted.

As for why her form is mimicking that of a draconic species? It's due to her worship of the Nine-Headed Dragon God which is reflected in one of Kijyo Koyo's skills, Nine-Headed Dragon's Fire.
EDIT:

We're not going to meet up with the others and see about doing team stuff? I know Oriko said we shouldn't force ourselves to if we can't make it, but there is still a witch probably out and about in the area. Just making sure.
Edited vote.
 
Day 43 Chapter 8
[X] Plan The Melancholy Of Assassin Serenity



"If you come back alive on Sunday, then I'll give you a kiss for real."

In a lifetime long since extinguished, the sensation of your heart swelling would have been cause to seek medical attention. But today, your heart swells for reasons unrelated to your feeble health. Now, your heart swells at the thought of keeping this timeline at all costs. "Well, with motivation like that, how can I allow myself to lose?" Not that you were intending to lose - expecting to lose, yes, but that's another issue entirely - but the extra motivation from Madoka makes for a nice incentive.

It will just break you all the harder when you do lose.

No. You can't let yourself think like that. You have every reason to
want to win this time, and more. You will not fail.

You won't allow yourself to fail.


"Shall I walk you home, then?" you ask, taking Madoka's words as the closing of the night's activities.

"Sure," Madoka replies, as you take her hand and lead her through the park. "You know Homura-chan, you're welcome to stay the night with me, if you want. I'm sure mama and papa won't mind."

"If I were only a normal girl," you say. "I'd love to take you up on your offer, Madoka, but the city still needs me. I had planned to check in with the others to see if there was anything they needed me for. If not, I'd have loved to spend the night with you." Madoka pouts; you wish there were something more you could do for her than this, but for how little time you have left you need to make sure everything is running smoothly for your team. "Now, I think I can spare a few minutes when we reach your house, but after that I really must be going."

"Alright."

At night, you find yourself particularly glad that Madoka's house is so close to the park; it makes getting her home safely without interruption an easy task, and you make it to the Kaname residence without issue. If only your first date could have similarly gone without issue, you lament to yourself as Madoka rings the doorbell. "Did you two have fun today?" Kaname Tomohisa asks as he opens the door to let you both in.

"Mhm! I had a lot of fun!" Madoka chirps to her father as she takes her shoes off at the door. "Homura-chan took me to all kinds of cool places today." She turns to you, and says "I hope Homura-chan enjoyed herself as much as I did."

"I had a lot of fun today," you say, bowing for the father Kaname, but declining the offer to enter the house. "I enjoyed taking your daughter out today. I hope all is well for you and your family."

"Junko's still saying her boss is going to retire any day now, but..." Kaname Tomohisa wags his hand back and forth. "I think we all know that guy's still got a few more years left in him. Junko's the only one who doesn't want to see it."

"Izzat Homura?" And speaking of Kaname Junko... "Hey, Homura, come 'ere," Kaname Junko calls out. "How're things between yer dad and Minako?"

"They're doing well, as far as I'm aware," you say. "Archer is having dinner with the Kures tonight, and I imagine he's made plans to spend the night there as well."

"Oh? Getting some action, is he? I hope he's as good to Minako as Tomo is to me."

"Nothing has happened between them," you say, as you and Madoka both ignore the colour staining her father's face. "I had plans to check in on some other friends of mine after bringing Madoka home, so Archer didn't see a reason to come home when he could stay out later and give them more help with their studies." And cook for them. You can't forget what Archer is best at, can you?

"Well, you tell him he better do something soon, ya hear? 'Cause that girl needs to get laid already!"

Kaname Tomohisa clears his throat, and from your vantage point at the door you can see him putting back in the cabinet the dark-coloured glass bottle Kaname Junko has been drinking from. "Junko, you're going to wake Tatsuya if you get any louder. I think it's time we got you to bed, what do you say?"

"Bed? Sure, I'll come with," Kaname Junko slurs her speech as her husband helps her up. "Come on, Tomo~o, let's try for a third, what'd'ya say? I think I've got one more in me..."

You and Madoka stare at each other, both of you at a loss for words. "Well," you say, forcing your voice to come to you. "I should probably be on my way now."

"Right," Madoka says. "I'll see you tomorrow, Homura-chan; and, um, take care."

"Right. I'll be careful." You and Madoka embrace for the last time tonight, and "I'll see you tomorrow," Madoka closes the door as the two of you part ways. Now, it's time to disappear into the night. "I've finished my date, and I should be able to meet up with the rest of you shortly. Where are you now?"

[ ] Wat do?​
 
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Unfortunately a short one today. I was running on empty when it came to words, and I thought the most recent vote has us jumping too suddenly from one location to the next, so I'm breaking here for right now. Looking for a more generous helping of "What do we want from the rest of the team?" with this vote.
 
[X] Plan Teleporting Teleporting Teleporting Puella Magi
-[X] When you meet up with whoever is available of the Holy Sextet, have them give you a rundown on what they've managed to do today (such as Witch hunting, setting up fortifications in lieu of Walpurgisnacht, saving a kitten from a tree, etc.)
--[X] Suggest to Oriko that they all convene at some point before Sunday to fight against a simulated Walpurgisnacht; you'd be willing to share your memories with Caster of all your fights with Walpurgisnacht through one of his artifacts to fully prepare everyone with an accurate simulation (at least before it was powered up this timeline, presumably) - they could blame knowing so much about combatting Walpurgisnacht on Caster's Sha Naqba Imuru, and you're sure Caster is already aware of your time-looping shenanigans
--[X] Shall you and whoever's available split off into a couple groups to go hunt some Witches (particularly the one that nearly ninja'd you date with Madoka)? Puella Magi only, no Servants allowed.

Plan name is in honor of forcing SVS to deal with "jumping too suddenly from one location to the next", along with a reference.

Depending on who's available and who Homura gets paired up with, dialogue depends.
 
--[X] Suggest to Oriko that they all convene at some point before Sunday to fight against a simulated Walpurgisnacht; you'd be willing to share your memories with Caster of all your fights with Walpurgisnacht through one of his artifacts to fully prepare everyone with an accurate simulation (at least before it was powered up this timeline, presumably) - they could blame knowing so much about combatting Walpurgisnacht on Caster's Sha Naqba Imuru, and you're sure Caster is already aware of your time-looping shenanigans

Problem. The Witches of this timeline have been different from Homura's previous experiences and she knows it. Misinformation can sometimes be worse than no information.
 
Problem. The Witches of this timeline have been different from Homura's previous experiences and she knows it. Misinformation can sometimes be worse than no information.
And there's no way I'm going to leak what Walpol is truly capable of via a Caster-puppetted dummy, even in a subdued form.
 
Problem. The Witches of this timeline have been different from Homura's previous experiences and she knows it. Misinformation can sometimes be worse than no information.
Except the Witches haven't been changed, they've simply gotten stronger or obtained an ability in addition to what they already had. Training against OG!Walpurgisnacht will still be helpful, but of course they'll be on the lookout for additional abilities (like the corruptive mud) and the possibility of it being more powerful (which can easily be simulated by Caster). :p

EDIT: Basically, training against some of Walpurgisnacht is better than none at all, especially if they're aware that that isn't the extent of the real Walpurgisnacht's abilities.
 
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[X] Plan Teleporting Teleporting Teleporting Puella Magi

It's a reasonable enough plan, and while fighting the simulated Walpurgisnacht won't necessarily be directly applicable to the new one, it should serve to drive home the kind of threat they're dealing with.

then he'd be the perfect Servant for Kyoko to resummon.
As a completely unbiased figure with no attachments whatsoever, I'd say that the Banana Oni would be better. Both because she shares many of the similarities Izou has to Kyoko, but also shares the 'Everyone I ever knew and loved is dead and it's my fault' trauma. I'm sure they wouldn't just compound their issues via interaction. Hahaha.
 
then he'd be the perfect Servant for Kyoko to resummon.
I'd say that the Banana Oni would be better.
In the event of a total servant wipe, Kyouko will be resummoning Rider Achilles*. All five of our core servants will be returning, and only Saber and Assassin will be new faces.

*This stuff is actually available all the way back at the beginning of the first thread, but since I only encourage you to slog through the first thread if you haven't yet read Part 1, I'll post it here. The reason for Kyouko resummoning Achilles is because I originally tried to match masters and servants not just on compatibility, but by matching them to what classes the masters would fall under if they were to be summoned, and I also tried to make the master/servant pairings visually appealing as well.. It went like this:
Sayaka - Saber, Caster, Berserker
Kyouko - Lancer, Caster, Rider
Mami - Caster, Archer
Homura - Assassin, Archer, Avenger-class Akuma Homura demiservant
Oriko - Caster
Kirika - Berserker, Assassin
Madoka - Don't do this. It creates a Saver-class Madokami demiservant inhabiting Madoka's body.

As you can see, everything would have worked out perfectly if Homura had summoned an Assassin and not an Archer, but then the entire conceit of the quest wouldn't have worked. So Homura gets Archer, which forces Mami to get Caster Gil instead of Archer Gil (and everyone breathed a sigh of relief because of it). This also adversely affected Oriko, who was now locked out of summoning from her only compatible class. I ended up breaking my pattern to give her Lancer because I thought Brynhildr worked really well with her, and now that also meant Kyouko would be getting a Rider instead of a Lancer. Fortunately Achilles has a spear. Kirika could have gone either way, but once I settled on using Jack as an antagonist Kirika was locked into Berserker, though for everything that's happened I'd say that ended up being for the best. That just left Saber as the only leftover class, but fortunately we were at no shortage of potential masters.
 
[X] Plan Teleporting Teleporting Teleporting Puella Magi Minus the mock fight.

-[X] When you meet up with whoever is available of the Holy Sextet, have them give you a rundown on what they've managed to do today (such as Witch hunting, setting up fortifications in lieu of Walpurgisnacht, saving a kitten from a tree, etc.)
--[X] Shall you and whoever's available split off into a couple groups to go hunt some Witches (particularly the one that nearly ninja'd you date with Madoka)? Puella Magi only, no Servants allowed.
 
[x] NMS

Also, while skimming to try and find something to check on a thing, I noticed this (which you'll have to click on the reference for because quoting multi-layered spoilers didn't go well). Unless my memory is shot, I don't believe this was here before.
 
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Also, while skimming to try and find something to check on a thing, I noticed this (which you'll have to click on the reference for because quoting multi-layered spoilers didn't go well). Unless my memory is shot, I don't believe this was here before.
It's been there for awhile. If you'll recall, there was that whole hubbub between myself, Enetious, and Silvan over what Saber could and couldn't do because I hadn't made it clear enough that this Saber was not to be taken as FGO's Musashi. Saber's stat block is there to prevent further argument and also because at the time we were supposed to be checking on Saber's parameters anyway.
 
Day 43 Chapter 9
[X] NMS



Madoka closes the door as the two of you part ways. Now, it's time to disappear into the night. "I've finished my date, and I should be able to meet up with the rest of you shortly. Where are you now?"

"We're all at Tomoe-san's apartment,"
Mikuni Oriko responds. "But really, Akemi-san, you didn't have to take off early just to meet up with us."

"I was actually taking things a little slowly. This is just how things ended up happening."

"I see. Then I suppose we'll be seeing you shortly. I'll let Tomoe-san know you'll be arriving soon."

Soon
, you find yourself at the door to the Tomoe apartment. You knock, and are greeted by Tomoe-san opening the door for you. "Welcome, Akemi-san," she says, gesturing for you to join the others at the table as you take your shoes off. "I trust you and Kaname-san enjoyed yourselves?"

You nod. "We had a lot of fun, thank you," you say. You spot Kyouko, Mikuni Oriko, and Nagatsuki Miyuki at the table, with the conspicuous absence of Kirika felt strongest on the face of Mikuni Oriko. "What about the rest of you? What have you all managed to accomplish in my absence?"

"Rescuing kittens from trees, helping old ladies cross the street; ya know, shit like that," Kyouko says.

"Actually, Nagatsuki-san and I only just arrived from Shirome not too long ago ourselves," Mikuni Oriko says. "But before I left for Mitakihara I made sure to have Lancer meet up with Caster to begin preparations for our defensive array along the southern coastline." Mikuni Oriko looks to Tomoe-san, and asks her "Speaking of, has Caster reported back to you yet on their progress?"

"They're just laying the foundations for now, he says," Tomoe-san responds. "Hopefully we won't need them when we go after the witch you spotted earlier; I'd hate to tear them away from their work if they won't be needed."

"Good," you say. "I'm glad to hear that we're making progress. Even if it's just the foundations, it's still a start, and it's still helpful." You're going to need all the help you can get if you want to keep your promise to Madoka. "Now, I hope I'm not intruding into any plans the four of you have already made, but what do we need to do tonight?"

"I want to deal with the witch I saw earlier," MIkuni Oriko says. "Did you see anything suspicious while you and Kaname-san were at the aquarium earlier?"

"Nothing, thankfully. Is it still near the aquarium?"

"It was the last time I checked, but now it appears to have moved into the aquarium." Mikuni Oriko shrugs as she relays the witch's current position, saying to everyoe "I'm not sure why, actually. All the exhibits should be closed at this hour, and frankly if I were that witch I'd have an easier time ensnaring prey if it actually had the ability to come to me."

"We should probably count our blessings that this witch didn't think of that." To everyone else, you say "Now, shall we take care of this witch before it causes trouble for all the cute little fishes at the aquarium?" before turning to Tomoe-san once your prompt has been greeted by a chorus of nodding heads. "Do you think it would be better for us to split into teams and try to catch the witch in a pincer, or should we all go in as one unit to give Nagatsuki Miyuki more practice fighting in a team?"

"I just want to say that I'd probably get more out of whatever 'practice' you want from me if you weren't constantly stopping time every couple of seconds." Nagatsuki Miyuki shakes her head as she admonishes you, sighing as she says "Sorry. I've had a bit of a rough day. I shouldn't be taking it out on you that I'm not good enough to adapt to all your freaky time stop shenanigans. I know it's really useful, and I'm just not good enough to work with it."

"No, I understand," you say. Nagatsuki Miyuki wouldn't be the only one who doesn't like when you stop time without warning. "I'm sure it must feel like you aren't learning anything when - from your perspective - I stop time and do all the hard work for myself."

Nagatsuki Miyuki nods, and Tomoe-san is finally given an opening to respond to your earlier question. "I was thinking we might all approach the witch together," she says. "We're going after a single target tonight, and Nagatsuki-san needs all the additional practice she can get at working with all of us." She smiles, winking in Nagatsuki Miyuki's direction as she adds "And of course, all the more chances to show off that incredible potential she has hiding inside. I'd be thrilled to see that have a chance to shine through more often."

"I don't think we'll need our servants to help us fight this one," Mikuni Oriko says. Looking to Kyouko she adds "Rider might be nice to bring along if we require expedience, but other than that I believe this is one we can handle on our own."

"Then let us be off."

[ ] Wat do?
 
[X] Plan Here Fishy Fishy
-[X] Go to the aquarium and search for the Labyrinth using your Soul Gems (assuming Oriko doesn't already know exactly where it is)
--[X] While you're traveling to the aquarium or searching for the Labyrinth, talk to
---[X] Tomoe-san
----[X] about whatever Rune she's been studying as of late and her progress in it; you're about to make a slight breakthrough in your own Rune yourself tonight, you feel
-----[X] Did you mention that you can shoot magical bullets that drain Grief now? You're not even sure where the Grief goes when that happens, but you can do it now apparently.
----[X] about possibly having a party or get-together of some kind just before Walpurgisnacht to help relieve everyone's stress from back-to-back training sessions and Witch hunts before the big battle

---[X] Kyoko
----[X] about Sayaka's wellbeing, and to make sure that Kyoko's being there for her girlfriend as emotional support; you won't pretend that her mood isn't all your fault - so you won't - however you're definitely trying to make amends with her and you'll just be glad that there's someone there for her through it all

---[X] Nagatsuki Miyuki
----[X] about whether or not she gave her friends some of the Grief Seeds to carry around as emergency batteries; even if they aren't living as Puella Magi anymore, Grief can collect even in the most unexpected of times depending on one's mood and interactions with others
----[X] about how her friends are doing, and if they're acclimatizing back to their civilian lifestyles alright

*sniffle* Homura's slight experience in using low-powered magical bullets is finally paying off. I'm so proud.

Also, you might want to edit the descriptions of some of the characters - particularly Oriko and Kirika at some point; at least in regards to Homura's strong relationship with the duo. I wonder if their friendship/camaraderie managed to surprise even Oriko despite being a precog considering how she used to feel about the whole arrangement. Could also reflect the current situation with Sayaka and Hitomi in their bios as well. 🤔
 
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