Day 47 Chapter 25
You feel a cold breeze blowing through the skeleton of the buildings around you, feeling the harshness of cold air force its way into your lungs, and your eyes shoot open. You can see the sun, just barely poking its rays above the cover of grey clouds passing over your head. You can see the sun. It's the first of May, two-thousand-eleven, and for the first time in all your many lives you can see the sun rising on this morning. You've won.

So, why are you still alive?
You felt the last flames of your Soul Gem burn out as you loosed the arrow which felled Walpurgisnacht, so why are you alive, right now, and not drowning in despair as a witch stronger than the one you gave your life to vanquish?

"You're lucky you still had that Grief Fruit lying around. Otherwise, you'd have been a goner." You know that voice. Feeling strength return to you, you sit upright, turning your head to the side to see Archer crouched just off to your left, draining the corruption from your Soul Gem with the massive Grief Fruit of Elsa Maria at his feet. He smiles for you, saying "Looks like you won. I'm so proud of you."

Your voice returns to you next, and though your throat is sore you manage to choke out a single word. "Archer..."

Silently, Archer nods as you speak to him. "It's unfortunate, but I don't think I'll be sticking around for very long." As your father speaks, you notice that his body isn't entirely solid; much like the other servants of your team, he's vanishing. "I'm going to have to take a rain check on the whole 'family' thing we were both hoping for." You knew that would be the case the moment you saw him vanish the previous time; but seeing him here now, you had hoped that maybe...

A sound escapes Archer's mouth, but whether it's a single laugh, or a single sob, you don't think you could say. For all you know, it could be both. "What's with that?" you ask. "This is hardly the time to be laughing."

"Sorry," Archer says, leaning in close, pulling you in for a hug with his big, strong arms. "I know now's not the time to be laughing, but I guess I couldn't help myself." What? "That face you made just now, reminded me of a face Rin made at me, once. She and I were being forced to part ways after a difficult battle, too; and I guess the similarities must have gotten to me."

You nestle yourself into Archer's fatherly embrace, saying to him "Make another pact with me. You can do that, right? That way... That way you won't have to leave me like this."

"You know, it's funny, but Rin asked me the same thing, too, back then." Archer breaks from his embrace of you, and his eyes meet yours. "Sorry, but I can't. As much as I'd love to stick around, I'm afraid that just isn't in the cards for me. Using Excalibur is... Fatal, for me, is the easiest way to put it. There's nothing you could have done to save me at that point."

"Then why'd you do it?"

"Because we needed to put damage on Walpurgisnacht, and that was the best I could do to pave the way for you and the others to win."

"But... What will happen to you now?" You ask your father that question, but in your heart you're afraid you already know the answer. "What will happen to our family? To Minako, to Kirika, to me? We'll all miss you, but you'll be..." He'll just be forced to go back to the unending cycle of violence that broke him once before.

"I'll be right here," Archer says, tapping a finger to his heart. "Even when you can't see me, I'll always be right here, as long as you remember me." In the cold breeze blowing through the ruined city, Archer's hair is tossed about, making him look like the boy from your dreams. "I always was a bit hopeless when it came to romance, so please make sure to apolgise to Minako for me. Kirika too. I know she'll be upset at me for making her mom cry."

"Archer..." you say, as you force back your tears. "Yeah, I know. I'll be sure they get the message."

Archer smiles, pulling you into one last embrace as his body fades away. "I'll see you again, Homura; I promise you. So, just be patient for a little while." You arms fall through the place where your father had once been, catching on your chest. You hold yourself, because Archer isn't there to hold you anymore, and your tears are finally free to fall.

You don't know for how long you stay like that, crouched over, crying to yourself in the heart of a ruined city, before your allies find the strength to approach you. "Akemi-san..." Tomoe-san's voice is soft, hesitating, and she places a hand on your shoulder. You hear the sound of rubble shifting, and your eyes are drawn towards the ocean of black under which the part of the city where the school and Tomoe-san's apartment once were. You spot the top of a massive Grief Seed, easily the size of a two-story building, just before it sinks under the surface of the black-stained water. "We did it, Akemi-san; we won."

The entire southern edge of the city is in ruins, and as you crane your head over the ruins you can see that much of the city is partially underwater, especially the parts closest to the river banks. You can't imagine the economic damage that's been done to the city; to say nothing of the human toll that Walpurgisnacht's passing has taken. You've won; but what did that victory cost you?

Your shield lays discarded on the ground, and you go to pick it up. As your fingers wrap around the edge, carefully, so as not to accidentally reset time, it falls apart in your grasp. The intricate pieces of clockwork making up the time manipulators fall to the ground, leaving only a bare disc of metal in your hand. This is the last timeline. You don't want to leave it among the rubble, fearful that the wrong person might pick it up and discover what hides inside, so you take it with you, forcing it to disappear along with the rest of your battle costume as you and your allies change back into your regular clothes.

Not a moment too soon.

Your phone vibrates in your pocket; it's Madoka. Without wasting a moment, you answer. "Homura-chan?"

"I'm here, Madoka," you say, breathing deeply as your greatest fears are dashed against the white cliffs of hope. Walpurgisnacht is defeated, and Madoka is safe. You fall on your knees, silently thanking every deity you can think of for keeping Madoka safe. You're finally free. "I'm here."

"Are you okay? You sound like you're crying."

"I am," you reply, reaching up to wipe away the tears dotting the corners of your eyes. "I... I'm just glad to know that you're alright."

"Mhm, me too. I just got cell reception back a little while ago, and I wanted to make sure you were alright. Mama say the storm's passed now, and I just heard somebody say the shelter notice had been lifted."

"I'll be right there," you say, making for the direction of the shelter without even thinking the command for your legs to move. "I... I know I said it last night, but... I love you, Madoka. I'm so glad you're a part of my life."

You don't know if your teammates are following you to the shelter, or if they're going off their own separate ways. It doesn't matter. Right now, there's only one thing on your mind. Your every thought is a blur, and your eyes barely register your surroundings as you walk, each step bringing you closer to the goal you've finally achieved after countless lifetimes.

"I'm over here, Homura-chan!"

You put your phone away as your vision is blinded by the radiant light that is Kaname Madoka. Her smile as the rising sun is caught by her figure is the brightest thing you've ever seen, brighter even than the brilliant rainbow your love for her allowed you to unleash. Wordlessly, you race towards her, and the two of you meet in a warm embrace. "I did it, Madoka," you say to her, as you stare into her sparkling pink eyes. "I won."

"I know, Homura-chan," Madoka says. It's all either of you can say to each other, here in this moment where words no longer matter. You and Madoka will have a lifetime together to share your words; for now, you're content just to share this moment with her. You lean in, and your lips meet hers.

A single kiss never tasted so sweet.
 
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If you'd like more, I'm more than happy to open up a vote to see which characters you'd all like me to give omakes to; but if not, then yes.
 
So... I'm confused. I thought the point of this was to have the servants get resummoned instead of waiting... But ending it here means it's functionally no different then if a few of them persisted until the sequel.

I mean, I'd like to get a omake of each of the major characters, tbh.
 
So... I'm confused. I thought the point of this was to have the servants get resummoned instead of waiting... But ending it here means it's functionally no different then if a few of them persisted until the sequel.
No, the point was for Homura to defeat Wally, save Madoka, and finally be free to live the rest of her life as a normal girl. The point was for Homura and other similarly broken people to learn how to fix one another so they can be less broken than they were the day before. Homura defeating Wally, saving Madoka, and finally being free to live the rest of her life as a normal girl is what has been accomplished. The fact that we can resummon our servants now that the War is over is just a happy bonus, but one whose inclusion would have changed the tone of the ending away from what I was going for, which was focusing on Homura as her mission finally comes to an end.

The ending is only "functionally no different" if I actively ignore the relevant plot point and we find ourselves in the sequel still missing most or all of our servants.
 
...

Can Archer even be summoned again? Didn't we, the players as Ayala, promise to end his term as a Counter Guardian if he managed to keep the universe from being reset again?
 
Can Archer even be summoned again? Didn't we, the players as Ayala, promise to end his term as a Counter Guardian if he managed to keep the universe from being reset again?
Correction- Enetious promised to end Archer's terms as a Counter Guardian, and everyone else rubber-stamped his decision. But Enetious isn't here right now, and what he doesn't know won't hurt him.
 
Emiya tends to get nabbed by something, whether avalon, the counter force, the moon...

Kek worthy if he did get nabbed again
 
Alright, I'm just going to drop this vote here for a few minutes, just long enough to make it known that there is some voting going on. I want to write a few omakes to close out round out the closing of this lengthy endeavour of a quest, but since omakes are largely dependent on my ability to produce something satisfactory, I'm putting it to all of you o tell me who you want to see. Choices are between
[ ] Madoka
[ ] Sayaka
[ ] Hitomi
[ ] Mami
[ ] Kyouko
[ ] Kirika
[ ] Minako

I have my own plans for Oriko and Homura omakes, which is why they aren't included on this list. In addition to voting for characters, you can also vote for a general idea of what you'd like to see from that character's omake. I'll also accept votes for an omake which combines two characters that are reasonably congruent to one another- Kirika+Minako, for example, or Sayaka+Kyouko. I don't know if I'll be able to make something good for every character, even if someone votes for them, but I guarantee that at least the top three will get omakes. There is no right or wrong combination of votes, and you can vote for up to three characters or for a single combined-character vote, so if you want to see different characters than someone else does, vote for them.
 
Omake, side Madoka - W-Day +7
"So, when do you think the repairs will be done to your apartment, Homura-chan?"

For the time being, Madoka and her family were residing in Shirome, occupying the apartment of one of her mother's co-workers who was overseas managing an important case for the foreseeable future. For Kaname Junko, it was as much house-sitting as it was a temporary residence until their spacious two-story home could be rebuilt. Homura, meanwhile, was temporarily residing with the Kures in their apartment, which is where she and Madoka were currently situated. "You're lucky, you know? Sayaka-chan and HItomi-chan have to find new homes, but yours just needs to be dried and patched up a bit."

It was a peaceful Sunday afternoon, and the Kure living room had taken on a fourth flat-mate along with Homura, with whom she and Madoka were currently playing. "I don't know," Homura responded to Madoka's question. "September, maybe, at the earliest? There's a lot of other places in worse shape than my apartment. What about the hospital, or any of the schools that need to be rebuilt?" Amy pounced out of Homura's lap, scampering up her climbing post, before jumping down and settling down in Madoka's lap. "What about the roads? Those need to be cleared up enough so that construction crews can actually make it into the hardest-hit areas."

Madoka nodded her head, stroking her hand through Amy's soft fur. Content with her lot in life, Amy let out a soft "Mew" which caused Madoka to smile. "I'm really glad Amy managed to stay safe through all this," she said. "But... Is Archer... I mean, is he really..."

"He said I'd see him again, but he never said how long that would take," Homura replied. "That's so typical of him."

Well, it was Sunday, so it was only a matter of time before the peace of the Kure living room was interrupted. The door handle jiggled, and Amy crawled out of Madoka's lap to greet the new arrivals as the door opened. "We're back," Kure Minako said, as she and Kirika returned. "I hope you two had fun while we were gone."

As Kirika took her shoes off at the door, she gave Amy a few scratches behind the ears, saying to Madoka and Homura "And I hope you two weren't doing anything mom and I wouldn't approve of while we were gone." A smirk and several suggestive motions of her eyebrow accentuated Kirika's words.

Homura's face turned red, but Madoka must not have caught the insinuation. "We were just talking and playing with Amy," she said. As mother and daughter Kure filed into the apartment, Madoka stood, saying "I should probably get going," as she checked the time on her phone. "Papa said he'd be starting dinner around this time, so if I leave now I'll probably make it in time for dinner."

Homura stood, walking Madoka to the door, and the two shared a goodbye kiss. "I'll see you soon, Homura-chan."

"Right. See you soon, Madoka." The door closed behind Madoka, and she was off, making for Shirome where her family and dinner would be waiting.

It goes without saying that Walpurgisnacht's passing over Mitakihara had changed just about every single facet of life for the residents of the city. Tens of thousands, especially those from the southern part of the city, had been uprooted from their homes, either because their homes had been flooded, or because their homes simply weren't there anymore. Here, along the city's norther border with Shirome, things looked much better; damage from flooding was minimal, and only the few buildings missing chunks from their roofs served as indicators that what had happened the previous Sunday hadn't been just a tropical storm. Officials had chalked it up to gas explosions caused when a collapsing building had damaged a gas line, but Madoka wasn't interested in stuff like that.

"They're comparing the storm damage to the tsunami from the 1933 Sanriku earthquake." Those were the first words Madoka heard as she closed behind her the door to the Kaname family's temporary residence, and they were coming from her mother. Kaname Junko closed her laptop, slumping over at the kitchen table as she moaned "Oh, man, I don't even want to think about how long it'll be before things go back to normal."

Silently, Madoka made her way over to her mother, hugging her. "You have fun with Homura?" she asked, as her daughter's warmth forced a smile onto her face. "How's she doing, anyway? I, uh... I heard they still haven't found Archer. She doing alright?"

"Homura-chan's doing good. She's still hopeful that they'll find him." That was a lie, but there was no way Madoka could explain the truth to her mother.

"So am I, kiddo. I just hope they find him soon. It'd... It'd just be awful if Homura had to lose her dad for a second time." Madoka nodded, making a soft "Mhm" sound in response to her mother's concerns. "Now, go get washed up before dinner. I'm sure you and Homura were playing with Amy a lot while you were over there, and you know your father's allergic."

"I know, mama," Madoka said. "That's why I have to go see Homura-chan if I ever want to play with a kitty."

Madoka did as her mother instructed, making for the bathroom to change out of the clothes Amy had been crawling over, showering, and putting on something clean. The temporary Kaname apartment was situated in a ritzy highrise, and the window in Madoka's room was wide, affording her a view over a large swath of the western Shirome cityscape. She could see the school from her window, which had taken on a large portion of Mitakihara's temporarily displaced student body; and she could see the setting sun dipping below the horizon, bathing the city with its gold and orange hues.

Madoka took a seat at her bedside table, reaching for the notebook where she kept her drawings, flipping the pages until she came to her current piece. It was unfinished, depicting Homura and the other girls in Madoka's interpretation of what their battle costumes looked like. Madoka reached for her pencil, scratching a few lines onto the blank upper half of the page. From the dreams which linked her to the previous Madokas, she knew what Walpurgisnacht looked like, and her pencil marks traced the outline of the upside-down doll figure.

The buzzing of her phone caused Madoka to set her pencil down. Picking up the phone, her ear was assaulted by a familiar voice complaining "Man, I can't believe we have to go back to school already! I thought for sure they'd give us longer!"

"Sayaka-chan, we aren't going back to school for another week," Madoka replied. "Just be glad there were schools in the prefecture willing to take us all in."

"Yeah, but I mean... Ugh, why'd they have to separate us like this? You and Homura get to go to school together, but then me and Hitomi have to go to some other stupid school all the way over in Chigasaki! It's not fair! How come we can't all go to the same school like we always have?"

"I feel even worse for Tomoe-san. She's got to go to Kawasaki all by herself. At least the rest of us get to go to school with people we know."

There's a noticeable drop in Sayaka's voice as she says "Yeah... I hadn't even thought of it like that. I guess that does suck for her, doesn't it?"

Sayaka couldn't see it, but Madoka was nodding her head in sympathy for their once-senpai. "Oh! That reminds me!" she asked, her voice picking up. "What about Kyouko-chan? Your mom said she was going to try getting Kyouko-chan enrolled in school again, right? How'd that work out?"

"Kyouko's going to be joining me and Hitomi at Chigasaki. I know she'd rather not be going at all, but both my mom and Mami-san said that she'd have to start going to school if she wanted to stay with either of us."

"That's good, right? That means you and Kyouko-chan will get to see each other more often."

"Yeah, I guess... I mean, I'm glad she wanted to stay with my mom and me, but I... I guess at the same time I feel really bad for Mami-san, you know, 'cause she's all by herself in a totally strange city." Sayaka let loose a frustrated growl, and Madoka could easily imagine her friend tearing her hair out on the other end of the line. "I just wish we could all go to school together! ... And maybe if they'd give us more than just two weeks off before making us go back. Man, this has got to be the worst excuse for a spring break ever!"

"I know, Sayaka-chan; I know. Hopefully, they'll have a new school built and we'll all be able to go back to school together next year."

"Man, I hope..." There was a pause on the other end as Sayaka went silent, returning to say "I've got to go. Mom's making dinner, and I'd better get going if I want to get there before Kyouko eats it all."

That got a laugh out of Madoka. "Alright. I'll talk to you soon, Sayaka-chan," she said, as the two ended their conversation. Putting her phone away, Madoka stared out at the sun setting over Shirome as she thought about all the changes to her life that Walpurgisnacht had thrust upon her. But she'd get through them, without wishing to return things to normal. 'Homura-chan has been through enough because of me already,' she thought to herself as she made her way to the kitchen for dinner.

That black shadow on the wall wouldn't get the better of her ever again.​
 
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Blowing the other choices out of the water, Madoka, Hitomi, and Minako win with 6, 5, and 5 votes respectively. I assume Madoka's place was incontestable, but I'll leave voting for the second-place omake up for awhile longer in case enough people want to give their choice the edge over Hitomi, who is going up tomorrow assuming the vote remains the same.
 
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