WanderingTwix
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[X] Switch perspectives to Archer
Surprise Setting Shift!Rin discards whatever attentions he had been paying to Assassin, returning it to you and saying
Well, you know how it goes with Fate; everyone famous was secretly a woman, so at least this once, let someone be a man for a change.
Aozaki's workshop is still in Japan, so Bazett wasn't going back to London to get it fixed. But between a cumulative day of travel, four days wait time for the arm to be finished, and two days of physical therapy to get used to the new arm will still take a week even if you're in the same country.--[x] More seriously, McRemitz had her arm torn off by the thing responsible for those deaths. She had to go back to England to get a replacement and barely made it back in time for round two.
We already went through this stuff with Rin before when we called her. What she wants to know is just the nitty gritty of the Elsa Maria stuff.--[X] Full story, though skimp out on some of the less important details to speed things up, though specifically include all you know about the Incubator's system, Witches, and the mechanics of Grief Seeds and the Grief stored within them
I'll be honest, aside from asking to touch us more/get further with us than we've gotten with Madoka, I can't think of anything Assassin would want from us; and I"m not going to go there for obvious reasons, so...---[X] Though spend a minute or three so telepathically asking Assassin about if she's given any thought about what she wants to do in recompense for not bringing her along on the trip
Not sure about conversation topics, but I do need to ask that you restructure your vote into a more legible form.
Aozaki's workshop is still in Japan, so Bazett wasn't going back to London to get it fixed. But between a cumulative day of travel, four days wait time for the arm to be finished, and two days of physical therapy to get used to the new arm will still take a week even if you're in the same country.
Meant everything to do with Elsa Maria, not everything.We already went through this stuff with Rin before when we called her. What she wants to know is just the nitty gritty of the Elsa Maria stuff.
If you want something out of a slice-of-life anime plot, then Assassin could ask for Homura to go on a date with her, wherein someone she knows will see them together and cause chaos even if it's not serious.I'll be honest, aside from asking to touch us more/get further with us than we've gotten with Madoka, I can't think of anything Assassin would want from us; and I"m not going to go there for obvious reasons, so...
Not really restructured, but made less of a pain to read by reducing the details in the vote itself while still sticking to the format that you made the vote as.Not sure about conversation topics, but I do need to ask that you restructure your vote into a more legible form.
So... We have to take Assassin on a date with Madoka? Find a secluded spot and teach Assassin how to use a gun? Magic ourselves into finding a Kyubey body and teach Assassin the joys of vermin exterminatin'?If you want something more realistic, then Assassin would probably want to enjoy something with Homura that Homura enjoys herself, considering how fanatic and devoted Assassin is now to Homura due to her personality. Homura is literally the most (and just about only) important thing in the world to Assassin at the moment, so I think that'd probably be reasonable in order to learn more about and share something with the object of her affection.
This is clearly the reason why SVS made this quest in the first place, and we should all be thankful for happy coincidences
She comes across as a bit tired and pissed off/irritated at the situation but still reasonable and highly intelligent. So yeah, you did a great job. I heard all of Rin's lines in her voice, so kudos.We're covering just Archer's half of the vote with this one. A Minako omake is up next, followed by the Homura half of the vote.
No votes needed from the audience right now, obviously, but engagement is still encouraged. Does my Rin feel enough like Rin to be believable; or do I need to rewrite her parts to be more Rin-ey?
What Slayer said, basically. It matches up quite well with how she was depicted in the VN, at least when she isn't teased or pissed off by someone. Rin musing as she did as if noone was in the room was a nice touch as well due to how single-minded/tunnel-visioned she could sometimes be when it comes to Magecraft stuff.Does my Rin feel enough like Rin to be believable; or do I need to rewrite her parts to be more Rin-ey?
You know (can't remember if this was previously stated before this omake ooc or not), this was a great reveal. Didn't expect Minako to be Junko's assistant at all, though it's a nice coincidence all the same. Just another way to make literally everybody family in the future, amirite?