Confringentur 2; a Madoka Magica / Fate/Stay Night sequel

[X] Plan: Time To Actually Do Something
-[x] first check our soulgem
-[x] attack the reflection first (only graze or something)
-[x] check if the damage reflected
-[x] of not chuck black hole at it
-[x] if yes get out of labyrinth and discus with group
 
Just a heads-up to everyone, there is a very good chance that there will not be an update on Sunday. I'll be gone for a decent chunk of the day, if not most of the day depending on how things go. I'll try to make up for that by having a Halloween omake ready for the 31st instead.
 
Day 29 Chapter 17
[X] Plan: Time To Actually Do Something



"Why the heck was… This, showing us those kinds of images in the first place? Is the witch horny or something? Was she getting her familiars to mime doing stuff with us because that's how she gets her kicks?"

"Maybe it's just another tactic meant to throw us off our guard," Lancer suggests. "It would not be the first time the Otherworld has ensnared its victims with false images of intimacy."

"How would we know the difference?" you ask Lancer. "I mean, between whether it's the witch or her familiars doing it, or if it's just the labyrinth doing everything it can to throw us off-guard?"

"If you strike at your reflection, and can harm it, that might indicate the work of a familiar," Lancer says. "You wouldn't be able to harm an illusion, but if it were a familiar who had mimicked your shape to show you unsettling images, you could possibly harm that." Lancer gestures with her head to your staff, and you wonder how much effort that took her, to motion in the correct direction of what she wanted to motion towards, while being forced to have her vision track in the complete opposite direction. "Try to attack your reflection, and see what happens."

Actually, more than just attacking it, you're kind of curious to know what would happen if you dropped your black hole in here. You won't, at least not before figuring out what happens when you damage your reflections. Don't want to accidentally devour yourself with your own attack, do you? But before anything else, you say to your friends "We should check our Soul Gems. I don't know how long we've been in here, but if there's so much dark magic clouding the leylines that something like this would have spontaneously appeared, we could be in trouble."

Saki and Mirai both give affirmative-sounding grunts, and with unusual care you remove your Soul Gem from its place at your ear. Looking at it is another matter altogether, because again, you're still getting used to the whole "look the opposite direction from where you want to see"' thing this labyrinth has going on. The strawberry-red jewel has some heavy corruption built up, but it's still nowhere near half; and it's only heavy because you have so much mana, that this amount of corruption would have killed a normal girl who didn't.​

"Like Satomi," you hear your reflection whisper in your ear. "This amount of corruption would have killed her, wouldn't it?"

"Shut up!" you shout, causing your reflection to smirk take a step backwards respond in kind.​

"Shut up!"

"Is everything okay?" you hear Saki ask. "Nobody said anything." When you realise you've just been talking to shadows, you calm down, and let Saki say "Mirai and I are both doing… All right. We'll probably have to use a Grief Seed if we encounter a witch, but if we're just going to be exploring our boundaries like this, then we'll be fine for a little while longer."

"Mhm." You nod your head. "All right, now… Let's try attacking our reflections."

You'll start small. While you hear the sounds of Saki and Mirai charging up their own attacks, you decide to approach attacking your reflection with a gentler touch. You're not going to use anything big or flashing, in case this backfires on you. Like your black hole. If you attack your reflection with a black hole and the damage is reflected back to you… You don't even want to think about what would happen.

Instead, you'll just start with your staff, and try hitting your reflection somewhere that won't kill the real you. Assuming you are the real you. As your own staff readies itself in your hands, so too does your reflection ready a staff of their own. "This is going to hurt," you say to yourself under your breath, hoping that it doesn't actually hurt all that much.

Your staff passes through itself as you thrust, making contact with and passing through the stomach of your reflection. You feel nothing, until a cold, biting touch radiates out from the place where your staff passed through your reflection. Immediately, it's as though the wind is knocked out of you. Your reflection's attack, though it failed to land, still left you in pain, reflected back on you from the injury you dealt to it.

"O~kay…" you say, gasping for air as you clutch your stomach in pain. "Note to self; that really hurts."

Beside you, you hear screams of pain from Saki and Mirai. Their reflections must have reflected the pain of their attacks back to them, but as you turn your head opposite to where they stand, you see nothing; no fire or electricity wracking their bodies. Just damage being reflected back onto their senses.

"Well, they're not attacking us," Saki manages to say. "It's more like our own attacks are what's hurting us."

"So what now?" Mirai asks. "If we kill these reflections, does that mean we die as well?"

"I don't know," Saki says. "Kazumi, what do you think?"

That's a good question; what do you think? What do you think you should do in this situation? You look towards Lancer; even if your vision is tracking away from her, you hope she'll at least see that you're gesturing your head towards her to get her attention "This whole place is just messing with our senses," Lancer says. "Perhaps that's an indication that, instead of trying to overcome the limitations of our senses, we should instead clear our minds, and give the illusions that much less to work with."

Of course. You should have seen it from the start. If this entire labyrinth is designed to mess with your mind – and, you'll be honest, it totally is, and it's succeeding – then clearing your mind and not letting the labyrinth get to you has got to be the way to actually beat it! "Right," you say. You'll give Lancer's idea a try, and invoke your rune to clear your mind.

Concentrate

Concentrate

Concentrate


Without thinking, you walk forward; and to your surprise, your body is actually propelled forward instead of backwards. You move forward, step by step, until you've crossed the threshold of your illusion and passed through it.​

The upside-down-ness of the labyrinth doesn't change as you cross the threshold. The lake is still upside down, the trees are still upside-down, the houses are still upside-down, but at least now, standing on the other side of the divide from Saki and Mirai, your eyes can see properly, and your movements at least are properly tracking to what you actually want them to be. On the other hand, now Saki and Mirai are upside-down as well. You aren't sure if that's an improvement or not.

Or maybe you're the only one that's upside-down, but if the entire labyrinth is upside-down, maybe that means you're right-side-up now?

"Hey!" you call out to Saki and Mirai. "I'm over here! We can go through our reflections!"

"Hey!" you call out to Saki and Mirai. "I'm over here! We can go through our reflections!"

You turn your head – and thankfully, your vision tracks correctly with the direction your head is turning – and your body comes to a stop when you see your reflection staring back at you. "You!"

"You!"

It's on the same side of the threshold that you are, so does that mean it's still just an illusion? Or is this a familiar that's taken on your shape? Was this what was mimicking you earlier? Is this what caused you to see those images? If you hurt it, what happens to you? Only one way to find out. "Were you the one causing me and my friends to see those weird images?"

"Were you the one causing me and my friends to see those weird images?"

That just about confirms it. If all this thing can do is mimic you, then it's probably the one that's responsible. You'd like to know how many more of these things there are, if this is the only one, or if this is even a familiar or another illusion altogether. You make a move to ready your staff. The other you does not. It's a familiar, probably. "All right, here goes nothing," you say to yourself, as you concentrate in invoking the power of your witch in the palm of your hand.

*Pop*

Your hand swells with invisible weight as the hole in reality opens up in your palm. It's small, no larger than an orange, or maybe a baseball, and hovers just slightly above your hand as you hold it. Now, how the heck are you actually supposed to use this? As the mirror you doesn't mimic your gestures, you approach, your hand outstretched, and you shove your hole in reality forwards towards it.

You aren't sure what you were expecting to happen when your hole in reality touched your mimic. Maybe there was a part of you that was scared it would just reflect the damage back to you, which is why you aimed for the chest and not the head. You've got enough mana that you could probably regenerate from a hole in your chest, but since your head is where you wear your Soul Gem, you doubt you could survive a headshot if it took your entire head with it.

So suffice it to say, when you see reality, actual, honest-to-goodness reality the real world outside the labyrinth showing through the hole your black hole just carved in your mimic's chest, you can safely say that you wouldn't have expected that to happen. Because you wouldn't have expected anything that happened.

Reality shatters as you your illusion falls to the ground. As you pick yourself up, you find yourself surrounded, by Saki, Mirai, and Lancer. Lancer looks especially concerned, and she extends her hand out to you. You take it, and Lancer pulls you up down and onto your feet. You dust yourself off, and take a few moments to look around. Your vision tracks normally. "Are you all right, master?"

"Kazumi, what happened?" Saki asks. "You… Disappeared, for a second, and then you fell through a hole in the, uh… Saki looks down shakes her head as she looks up. "The, uh, the ceiling; and now my vision's back to normal. So, I guess you must have done something while you were away."

"Wish you could have done something about the scenery," Mirai says, hands on her hips. "But at least our vision's back to normal."

"I, uh…" You aren't sure how to describe what just happened, but you'll try your best. "I passed through the barrier that was showing us those images,' you say; "And I think I might have killed the familiar that was playing tricks on us. I stuck my black hole through its stomach, and then reality shattered, and I fell back here. Somehow."

Saki and Mirai look to each other, shrug, and then look back to you. "Well, at least you're okay," Saki says. The four of you look around, taking in the sights of the labyrinth more closely now that your vision is tracking normally. Saki places her hands on her hips, and asks "All right chief, where should we head to next? There's still a witch around here we've got to kill, right? So let's go find her."

[ ] Wat do?
 
Apologies to @PlaguePaladin and @Riku_Furude, you had things that were mutually exclusive, and so I wasn't able to address all of them. Plague, I also wasn't able to get to your
-[X] If that doesn't work, try seeing if the locations in this world in some part line up with reality and how far it goes; that could clue you in as to what's going on and where to go next.
--[X] Following that assumption being true, try and find the Saints' base to start with.
However, that was due to wanting to leave exploring the labyrinth up to us after we got ourselves straightened out. Which we've managed to do. The labyrinth may still be upside-down, but at least we are right-side-up again, and the justification of the text once again reflects this. Don't get used to this, because there's always the chance that we stumble into another puzzle and reality turns itself inside-out on our account again.

Anyway, this one goes out to Plague in particular- We can assume that the labyrinth we're in is a dark mirror of the actual, outside world. There's the lake, the trees in the park, and the houses in the residential area that rings the park. We don't know how far the labyrinth extends; it might only extend out as far as the park, or it might be the entire city. We don't know. So let's pick our destination(s) wisely.
 
[X] Plan: Let's Explore, With Senses Returned
-[X] Try and find where the labyrinth entrance was in the real world and work your way from there.
--[X] If that turns up nothing, then use your cowlick to find the biggest concentration of grief.
---[X]If that turns up nothing, then at least try and find the Saints' base to get a bearing on your surroundings.

Something about the fact that Kazumi shoved her witch stomach through her human stomach and technically ate her own stomach is amusing to me. Also hooray, there will be perhaps less descriptions of physical events that make no sense and destroy my brain! The barrier itself wasn't too hard to imagine for me, but some of these movements just annihilated my imagination. Also good puzzle, so far.
 
Also hooray, there will be perhaps less descriptions of physical events that make no sense and destroy my brain! The barrier itself wasn't too hard to imagine for me, but some of these movements just annihilated my imagination.
The way you say this just puts a smile on my face. It means what I set out to accomplish with this labyrinth is working so far.
 
[X] Plan: Let's Explore, With Senses Returned
-[x] You admit you're kind of curious and want to see if you can find which house belongs to Akemi's girlfriend
 
[X] Plan: Let's Explore, With Senses Returned-[x] You admit you're kind of curious and want to see if you can find which house belongs to Akemi's girlfriend
Obviously, it's either the one that's glowing because Madoka is a living leyline, or it's the one where everything inside the labyrinth is at its worst, because Madoka is a living leyline that's been corrupted. Obviously.
Also hooray, there will be perhaps less descriptions of physical events that make no sense and destroy my brain! The barrier itself wasn't too hard to imagine for me, but some of these movements just annihilated my imagination.
The way you say this just puts a smile on my face. It means what I set out to accomplish with this labyrinth is working so far.
But also, since I forgot to ask this before, what parts specifically were you having trouble imagining? Because I never had any trouble imagining all this play out inside my head, allegedly impossible movements included.
 
But also, since I forgot to ask this before, what parts specifically were you having trouble imagining? Because I never had any trouble imagining all this play out inside my head, allegedly impossible movements included.
Well sure, but having recovered from my Covid headache, there's only one thing I'm actually still confused about (I was a bit dazed, so my ability to focus was a bit woozy).

Mirai taps her heel against the roof of the archway – or is it the floor, since it's upside-down now?
As it falls, it hits the invisible barrier of the upside-down archway above your heads,
Initially I thought it was trying to describe that the archway was somehow the floor at the same time, or that the 'hitbox' of the archway was inverted while the archway itself wasn't, then I thought that this is was Kazumi making a joke about the definitions of 'floors'. Ultimately, I'm really confused about what the archway is actually doing and what it looks like. While we're at it, was the bear Mirai summoned just launched out of the 'sky' and into the arch, or did it fall into the arch? Because if it fell into the arch, that makes no sense if it has the same gravity as us. That's really the only problem I have.
 
Initially I thought it was trying to describe that the archway was somehow the floor at the same time, or that the 'hitbox' of the archway was inverted while the archway itself wasn't, then I thought that this is was Kazumi making a joke about the definitions of 'floors'. Ultimately, I'm really confused about what the archway is actually doing and what it looks like. While we're at it, was the bear Mirai summoned just launched out of the 'sky' and into the arch, or did it fall into the arch? Because if it fell into the arch, that makes no sense if it has the same gravity as us. That's really the only problem I have.
The entrance to the labyrinth, and the place we've been standing for this entire time, is an upside-down pagoda. We've been standing inside it, on its upside-down ceiling, while a "roof" of invisible air where the floor of the pagoda should be keeps us safe from the raining Grief. The teddy bear fell from the sky and landed on the "roof".

I hope understanding how things work hasn't changed your enjoyment of the labyrinth so far.
 
Day 29 Chapter 18
[X] Plan: Let's Explore, With Senses Returned



Reality shatters as you your illusion falls to the ground. As you pick yourself up, you find yourself surrounded, by Saki, Mirai, and Lancer. Lancer looks especially concerned, and she extends her hand out to you. You take it, and Lancer pulls you up down and onto your feet. You dust yourself off, and take a few moments to look around. Your vision tracks normally. "Are you all right, master?"

"Kazumi, what happened?" Saki asks. "You… Disappeared, for a second, and then you fell through a hole in the, uh… Saki looks down shakes her head as she looks up. "The, uh, the ceiling; and now my vision's back to normal. So, I guess you must have done something while you were away."

"Wish you could have done something about the scenery," Mirai says, hands on her hips. "But at least our vision's back to normal."

"I, uh…" You aren't sure how to describe what just happened, but you'll try your best. "I passed through the barrier that was showing us those images,' you say; "And I think I might have killed the familiar that was playing tricks on us. I stuck my black hole through its stomach, and then reality shattered, and I fell back here. Somehow."

Saki and Mirai look to each other, shrug, and then look back to you. "Well, at least you're okay," Saki says. The four of you look around, taking in the sights of the labyrinth more closely now that your vision is tracking normally. Saki places her hands on her hips, and asks "All right chief, where should we head to next? There's still a witch around here we've got to kill, right? So let's go find her."

"Let's see if we can get our bearings, first," you say. "For all of its… Upside-down-ness, the labyrinth seems like it's mimicking real-world locations near to where it opened up." Saki and Mirai nod their heads, and you continue, adding "Let's see if we can figure out where in the park we're supposed to be, and move out from there."

If that doesn't work, your next plan is to use your cowlick, and see if you can sense for the largest concentration of Grief in the area.

"Well, we haven't realty moved from… Uh, this spot, since we got here,' Mirai says. "So, wherever we are right now, that's probably wherever we should have been in the park if a hole in reality hadn't opened up for us to explore."

"Mirai's right," Saki says. "Neither of us really know the layout of the park here, so we've kind of got to assume that what we see is what we get." Saki pauses, quickly adding "That is, at least as far as basic things are concerned. Obviously I'm not counting all the stuff that's upside-down."

Now, it's your turn to nod your head. "All right, then it's kind of settled how we've got to proceed." You look to Lancer; she's in support of your idea. "Just give me a second here so I can-"

Concentrate

Concentrate

Concentrate


All right, there we go, Kazumi! "So… What's it saying?" Mirai asks, almost immediately after you feel your cowlick bouncing towards your target.

"Uh…." You reach up, feeling for which direction your hair is turning. "I think we're supposed to head over that way," you say, gesturing in a northeast direction. "If I had to guess, what we're looking for is probably going to be somewhere by the residential areas. Maybe even inside one of the, uh… Houses." You aren't sure if they should still be called houses, or if their upside-down-ness would give the structures a different name altogether. Or if being inside a labyrinth and clearly not being used for residential purposes would do that before anything else.

While you're thinking about going in the direction of the upside-down houses, you'd really like to know which of them is the one that corresponds to the house where Akemi's girlfriend lives. You know you're not going to meet her inside this labyrinth – but maybe you will? Who knows; today's already been full of enough surprises as it is – but you're still curious.

"So… Next question," Saki says, as she stares out in the direction which your cowlick is pointing. "What do we do about the Grief?" With her thumb, Saki gestures to the rain of Grief that continues to fall up from the upside-down lake floating in the labyrinth's sky. Or is that actually the ground, and where you are is the upside-down sky you only think is the ground? "You saw what that did to Lancer's spear and Mirai's teddy bear. We'll need something to protect ourselves if we ever want to actually leave this stupid archway."

"I recall offering my assistance if you required it,' Lancer says. "All I ask in return is that one of you tell me what an 'umbrella' is, and what it looks like."

You do your best to describe what an umbrella is and looks like to Lancer; "It's got a pole that you hold it with, and a big, spiderweb-shaped covering that's usually made of plastic, or some other kind of waterproof material, that stretches over the top."

"Usually, commercial umbrellas are just big enough to where they don't cover you from the rain all the way," Saki adds. "But obviously, that's not going to be good enough for us. We need something that'll be big enough to protect us from the Grief that'll be falling on our heads."

"Oh! And maybe make ours big enough so that me and Saki can fit under the same umbrella!" Mirai adds, cuddling up to Saki. "That'd be so~ romantic, wouldn't it?"

"Mirai, we're here to do a job, not be bad clichés in a romance manga." Mirai pouts as Saki is forced to rebuke her. "But if you really want to, I'll make sure we share an umbrella sometime once this is all over." She leans in, kissing Miria, and that's enough to wipe the pour from her face. "But for right now, we just need to focus, okay?"

With some additional explanations from you and Saki, as well as some attempts at mimicking an umbrella-shape with your arms – because you don't have cell reception inside the labyrinth, so you can't show Lancer a picture of what one looks like – Lancer manages to make four, fairly large umbrellas, one for each of you. "Hopefully these will suffice," Lancer says, as she hands each of you an umbrella, keeping the fourth for herself. "I made them as large as I could, given what I had to work with."

"What she had to work with," is obvious, since you can faintly make out little spear-points dotting the tips of each umbrella. That's so cute~!

"All right," you say, now that that's out of the way, "Let's get moving. The longer we stay here, the more likely is it that something goes wrong."

Instead, something goes wrong the instant you step off of the archway's, uh, roof.

Suddenly, the intense feeling of vertigo is back, and it's as if your entire world has been turned upside-down. Mostly because it has. You aren't sure if you're walking on the ground and seeing everything upside-down, or if you're walking on the invisible boundary in the air and seeing everything from right-side-up. Fortunately, one small convenience of you the world now being upside-down, is that you're now facing the right direction for the rain of Grief, falling up from the lake in the middle of the sky, to hit the tops of your umbrellas and bounce right off.

"So, we're back to this now," Saki says with a sigh. "I kind of wish we'd seen the last of that after you…" Saki's voice trails off, and when she finds it again, she asks "Actually, could you explain again to us what you actually did to make things go right-side-up before?"

"I'm not really sure myself, actually," you reply. "I know I passed through the boundary where we were seeing our reflections, and I met a reflection of me that wasn't actually mimicking my movements. I guessed it must have been a familiar, since it was actually there and not actually repeating my movements back at me, so I attacked it with my black hole. When I stuffed my black hole into its chest, it opened up a hole and I could see the outside coming out the other end- Like, the actual outside outside, where we came from."

"Then reality kind of… Broke, and before I knew whether it was me or my duplicate that was falling, I'd fallen on my butt and was back with you, Mirai, and Lancer at the archway," you say. "I really wish I could explain it better. I'm still kind of confused myself, actually."

"No, it sounds like you did a pretty good job explaining it,' Mirai says. "I'm sure it would make more sense if we'd been there to see it ourselves, but at least I can imagine what you're describing."

Saki nods her head at Mirai's words, as does Lancer, who says "Unfortunately, it doesn't sound as though the same solution will be available to us this time, not unless we can turn around and find more duplicates of ourselves to defeat."

On a whim, the four of you all turn around, but find nothing. No duplicates of yourselves, either upside-down or right-side-up, can be seen. You're just yourselves, alone and possibly upside-down in a strange labyrinth. But still, you follow the lead of your cowlick, as you head northeast to try and find the source of whatever is causing this. Maybe it's a witch, maybe you'll just find a massive clump of dark magic, or something else equally as sinister.

"You know, this is kind of… Weird," Saki says as the four of you are wandering; "And not, like, in the way you're probably thinking of it. I know witch labyrinths are usually pretty weird, but have you ever noticed that they all follow… Kind of roughly the same pattern?"

"I know what you mean," Mirai says. "Usually, there's a couple hallways, or chambers, or whatevers, and there'll be familiars, or puzzles, or whatever, and we've got to get through those to get to the witch. But here… It's like the entire labyrinth is just one big sandbox that's mirroring a really messed-up version of reality, rather than being its own thing like every other labyrinth we've encountered has been." Saki and Mirai both turn to Lancer, and Mirai says "You've been awfully quiet, Lancer. You maybe got any theories as to what's going on?"

"I think you have put too much stock in the Otherworld making some semblance of 'sense' to you," Lancer replies. "The Otherworld, at least the Otherworld I am familiar with, if a fickle, capricious place, that cannot be afforded any amount of goodwill or made estimates of. In my time, we always had to expect the unexpectable when venturing into the Otherworld."

"Lancer, how are we supposed to expect something if it's unexpectable?" you ask. "You can't do that. You can expect the unexpected, but if something's unexpectable then by definition you can't expect it."

But maybe this is what Lancer meant, when you find yourself in front of one house in particular, and your cowlick is going absolutely wild. "Okay," you say as you bring your team to a stop just outside of that house. It's been hit by whatever in this labyrinth is causing things to be upside-down pretty hard, and it looks like it's been completely turned inside-out, more like a modern art piece than a place where people could actually live in real life. "Whatever we're looking for, it's in here."

"Are you sure?" Despite your cowlick's current behaviour, Saki still doesn't sound too sure. "It doesn't look any different from the other houses."

"I'm sure of it," you say. "This is the place."​

[ ] Now, how do you get in?
[ ] And what do you do once you're inside?
 
I should have had this out about... Eight hours ago? I think, except the power went out for my entire block and I'm only just now able to get back. Sorry about the weight. Though, it doesn't look like anyone was particularly worried about the wait, so I guess I can excuse myself.

Anyway, we've now returned to things not making sense. What's upside-down? Us, or the rest of the labyrinth? Take your bets, people, and let's figure out how we can get out of it this time. We've found whatever is at the center of this upside-down nightmare, so while we're at it let's also figure out how in the heck we can stop it. But also while we're at it, let's try to figure out which house we've found ourselves in front of. It might be important later.
 
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[x] Plan: Not Breaking and Entering
-[x] Even if its inside out, there should at least be a door somewhere on it that leads inside.
--[x] As tempting as it might be to just use your blackhole to bust down a wall to get in, don't. Last time you used it, you seemingly made a hole to the real world. You don't want to accidentally give what's ever in there a way out of the labyrinth nor do you want to accidentally blackhole whoever is in this house in the real world.
-[x] If you manage to find a way in, toss a teddybear inside to test for any traps or other surprises first.
 
I had been hoping to see a bit more discussion from everyone, now that we've apparently found the source. Kind of disappointing on my end that once things return to normal, all of the intrigue and entertainment apparently dried up.
 
I had been hoping to see a bit more discussion from everyone, now that we've apparently found the source. Kind of disappointing on my end that once things return to normal, all of the intrigue and entertainment apparently dried up.
If it helps, and if we're still working by semi-riot rules, I have some possible ideas for entry if doors don't work? Although, it would just be Kazumi using a destruction beam. Maybe I could give some ideas of about how to navigate or deal with whatever we find inside? Not sure what we could discuss, though. Also, I still think this is fairly entertaining.
 
If it helps, and if we're still working by semi-riot rules, I have some possible ideas for entry if doors don't work? Although, it would just be Kazumi using a destruction beam. Maybe I could give some ideas of about how to navigate or deal with whatever we find inside? Not sure what we could discuss, though. Also, I still think this is fairly entertaining.
I'm not entirely sure when semi-riot rules would be best applied, since while things are upside-down, they're at least upside-down and making sense, unlike how they were before. Also, upon further consideration, I really shouldn't have worded that as negatively as I did. The fault lies more closely with the fact that I had to post at 3 in the morning because my power went out for half of the day. Really kills the ability to discuss anything if nobody is awake when the update goes live.

I'm actually surprised that @NMS showed up as early as he did.
 
I'm not entirely sure when semi-riot rules would be best applied, since while things are upside-down, they're at least upside-down and making sense, unlike how they were before. Also, upon further consideration, I really shouldn't have worded that as negatively as I did. The fault lies more closely with the fact that I had to post at 3 in the morning because my power went out for half of the day. Really kills the ability to discuss anything if nobody is awake when the update goes live.

I'm actually surprised that @NMS showed up as early as he did.

I was actually about to go to bed and was just doing one last check of my watched threads when you posted.
 
I was actually about to go to bed and was just doing one last check of my watched threads when you posted.
Well, as long as both you and @PlaguePaladin are here, maybe you can help to fill out the last five posts before the page turn. We're... Probably almost done here, but I don't know if I'll want to take another 10 updates or so to cover what the third team is up to when we don't have any POV characters there, so that leaves what we're planning on doing after this. As far as I can tell, unless there's anything major we've come up with at the last second - Lancer working on Luck charms notwithstanding, since that's being covered already - I think the only things left for us to do would be to figure out what Hijiri Kanna's long-term prospects look like, and to turn on Sakura's magic circle, unless we're planning to save that as a counterspell for when Sidonia makes her move tomorrow.
 
We're... Probably almost done here, but I don't know if I'll want to take another 10 updates or so to cover what the third team is up to when we don't have any POV characters there, so that leaves what we're planning on doing after this. As far as I can tell, unless there's anything major we've come up with at the last second - Lancer working on Luck charms notwithstanding, since that's being covered already - I think the only things left for us to do would be to figure out what Hijiri Kanna's long-term prospects look like, and to turn on Sakura's magic circle, unless we're planning to save that as a counterspell for when Sidonia makes her move tomorrow.
Well, there's also Homura figuring out her remaining familiars, as well as the possibility of Archer handing out Noble Phantasms in preparation for tomorrow, but not sure on actually doing that.

As for what to do about Kanna, I've stewed on it a bit and came up with a basic plan. Essentially, stick her with a geis. She will face the consequences of her actions through other possible punishments, and her ability to act will be greatly restrained, but she will also be a free man. This prevents her from doing fucked up shit while still allowing her to recover in natural and normal ways. For the geis, I haven't fully crafted it yet, but the biggest command is 'Hijiri Kanna will not take any actions that she perceives as harmful to another being or lock up'. Sorry for not being of much use, I kind of forgot to think about it much.
 
Again with the Geas. You'd think after everything involving Umika, we'd be less quick to jump to messing with people's minds as a punishment.

Kazumi: "I'd like to come up with a punishment for her, but after recent events, all I can think of is using her as my personal teddy bear."
 
Well, there's also Homura figuring out her remaining familiars, as well as the possibility of Archer handing out Noble Phantasms in preparation for tomorrow, but not sure on actually doing that.
Fair. I wasn't sure if I'd covered everything we wanted to do or not, so I'm glad someone else was able to remember that we'd still like to finish investigating our other familiars.
For the geis, I haven't fully crafted it yet, but the biggest command is 'Hijiri Kanna will not take any actions that she perceives as harmful to another being or lock up'.
Again with the Geas. You'd think after everything involving Umika, we'd be less quick to jump to messing with people's minds as a punishment.
I was just going to say that we need to be careful with how we word it, so that if Kanna decides to, say, starve herself to death or something, she won't have the geis aiding her by locking her up and making her unable to eat if she tries to force herself to not eat. Or if she tries to drown herself, having her body lock up will just ensure that she drowns faster. I don't actually think it's messing with her mind, but it is something we should be careful about employing, especially with how we word what we'd like to see from it.
Kazumi: "I'd like to come up with a punishment for her, but after recent events, all I can think of is using her as my personal teddy bear."
But Kazumi's already got Niko. Is she going to get greedy and ask for two teddy bears?
 
Again with the Geas. You'd think after everything involving Umika, we'd be less quick to jump to messing with people's minds as a punishment.

Kazumi: "I'd like to come up with a punishment for her, but after recent events, all I can think of is using her as my personal teddy bear."
Well, the geis doesn't mess with the mind, it just restricts. But very well. If you're against the geis, we can simply put some kind of magical restraint on her that suppresses her magical abilities and superhuman strength except in absolute emergencies, making her relatively easy to manage. It'd also be good to at least create some kind of surveillance on her. Also, I didn't even think of the fact that Kazumi might abuse having a copy of Niko around, but now I am.
 
But Kazumi's already got Niko. Is she going to get greedy and ask for two teddy bears?

The recent events she was referring to was this:

But it's when Mirai sends a second bear over to you that things get weird. Well, weirder than they already are. Maybe? Definitely weirder. Because when the second bear appears in your field of view, it once again takes on a reflection of Niko's shape, rather than reflecting the shape of the teddy bear it is in reality. Then, if you can believe it, things get really weird.

The first Niko's reflection touches your shoulder, and it's as if Niko is really there, touching your shoulder. It's almost enough to make you look up to greet her, but you stay put, knowing the truth is something else. But your reflection doesn't. Your reflection moves to the touch of the reflected Niko, staring up and looking longingly into her eyes. Your reflection leans up on her tiptoes, and when I kisses the reflected Niko, you can actually feel Niko's lips press against yours.

You can feel Niko's tongue forcing its way into your mouth, and your lips eagerly parting to greet it. Her tongue tastes so sweet; you wish you could stay like forever.

As you stare, the second reflected Niko, the newcomer, grows jealous, and with a much rougher hand on your shoulder, tears you away from the first. Her hand is not the warm touch of the first Niko's, but one that's cold, hard, fake. That's when you see the hand poking through the second's sleeve; it's a prosthetic; and her eyes are red. The reflection of Niko's homunculus pulls you in, just as close as the reflected Niko, and you and she kiss. Her kiss is so much hungrier than Niko's, rougher, so much more demanding of your attention, but not altogether unpleasant, either.

Is she jealous of what you and Niko have? What's your reflection trying to tell you? Is any of this even real?

The real you, of course, isn't moving at all. Neither is the bear – singular, somehow, you could have sworn there were two – who stands still at your side, and has ever since you stopped entertaining it to watch the reflected scene unfold. But do you even have to move? What are you supposed to make of this? No, really, what are you supposed to make of this, when you're watching as your reflection is tossed back and forth between a pair of bickering twins, constantly vying for your attention.

Do you like Hijiri Kanna? Does she like you? Is any of this even real?

Long before you realised that you loved Niko for who she was, flaws and all, you thought that she was cute, and wished that she would smile more. Her homunculus is identical to her in appearance. Does that mean you think she's cute too? Aren't you only imagining this because Niko wanted to bring her along with you on your date? Is any of this even real?

You would have been fine to keep watching if it were just you, being passed back and forth between a pair of cute Nikos who wanted to keep kissing you – and who sometimes kiss each other, as well; oh good lord, you didn't know how cute it was to see two Nikos kissing each other – but it's when you feel the illusion of Niko's hand trailing over your chest down your bellybutton under your skirt that you draw the line. Sure, Niko is cute, and maybe one day you wouldn't be averse to doing that sort of thing with her, but you know Niko wouldn't try to touch you like that before you're ready.


The true evil of this witch is that it planted the seeds of corruption in poor innocent Kazumi.
 
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