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A Little Vice (Trans Magical Girl fic)

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Chiro is the only one whose emotional noise she tolerates. On the other hand, Chiro's dad would have been long obliterated. Guess she could pick up Hatterene later, and her dad gets hunted out of her sight
 
Also yeah part of the joke is that Chiro has three friendship evos and you can get a Sylveon by accident when trying to get an Umbreon (or Espeon) if you don't know what you're doing.
 
Nerdorama said:
*Sigh* you're all bastards.

Also Chiro is clearly the rival. A weird one who gets the weak starter and joins Team Abyssal, but still.
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So, Hop if he was a fan of Marnie?


Hestia&theCourt said:
So now there's just a Togepi following Chiro around[...]being weirdly insistent on recommending feminine clothes to C. C's positive that Togepi doesn't understand how human genders work; Togepi, meanwhile, would have a lot to fill C in on if only Togepi could speak Human.
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Why is Temperance a Togepi?
 
God... caught up again and its unfair how Chiro keeps calling me out in the worst ways possible.
And God, what an awful cliff.
Thanks for this amazing story, Shadell.
 
Something I've been thinking about is how will Avaritia react to No One becoming an Angelic Saint next chapter. i don't think it will be a positive reaction but the specifics of it could vary by the situation and it should also be taken into account that Avaritia will have just gotten out of what is solitary confinement at the minimum. i figure the best possible reaction would be Avaritia saying something along the lines of "you should do whatever makes you happy" but considering eir thoughts on Temperance that might be more supportive than ey is feeling.
 
I think you're making a lot of assumptions about how easy it is to become an Angelic Saint. Michael's not around, nor are any Saints (except the one who Superb Snake is using as a combination punching bag and hackey sack), and while No One isn't embracing her vice any longer, she's also unmoored from her virtue. And everything else. Michael would probably want her to get hot chocolate, a good night's sleep, and a normal-sounding name before...I dunno, smacking her with a magic wand and letting her pick an available theme color.

That said, I agree that Avaritia's reaction to No One no longer being Invidia will be interesting. Which will prevail—eir sense of betrayal, or eir concern for eir friend? It's not like she was successfully hiding the misery she suffered while wearing the Invidia mask.
 
You know. I discovered Sakura Cardcaptor had a lot of angel theming. Also, there was a phantom thief magical girl who steals works of art that are disguises of demons holding pieces of God's power, Phantom Thief Jeanne.
 
This fic has made me profoundly uncomfortable. I love how detestable Mr. Noir was.

The seed of Envy taking root in Chiro is definitely a way to translate trans people into this system.
 
Mr. Noir obviously just took a wrong turn at Albuquerque. Somewhere on QQ there is an equally confused counselor attempting to give the gender talk to a teenager with a basement dungeon.
 
I kind of wish I didn't find this amazing work yet so I could read it finished. It's so good, I binged it in a day and now I have anticipation. I really hopes there's a good amount of chapters after the finale.
Edit: I read a really good story somewhat similar to this. The egg cracked within the last 20 words of the story. The build up was like 300k words long, and then there were 20 words at the end of what was building up.
 
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Renu said:
Previously, in "A little vice"



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And mr. Noir's recruitment pitch.



Drew this only because the word "sinmaxxing" is a horror I had to share.
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Your drawings helped me remember some realizations I had about the designs of the magical girls

Avaritia design is the non-binary flag colors
Castitas is 100% the lesbian flag colors
Temperance is probably the trans flag colors

Also did you know if you "sinmaxx" hard enough they have to let you straight into Heaven probably on to the throne itself
 
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