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1) That is difficult to say; you are good at making likeable characters; but if I had to choose, it would be... arrrgh!
Una.
Because she is what I rarely see, an actual child; happy and bubbly and curious... and childish. Just like a nine-year-old girl should be.
2) All things considered... I really do not find any character I dislike, at least among those that appeared for longer than one scene.
I guess it is whoever was in charge of the initial hunt for Cerys... because, again, I do not understand how anyone could think it a good idea to shoot at children. The other reason I do not like him is that all we know about him is based on a bad background roll.
3) Cerys is a good character; she stays true to who she is, but is ready to accept change and grow. Not sure if you do not make her seem a little too smart in realising things (the only example I have on hand is from the latest Update, where she realises Una is growing up without her from basically a single action). I rarely see such a relatable and likeable protagonist.
4) If you honestly want me to write this about everyone, I will still be sitting here tomorrow. What goes for Cerys goes for most of the others as well, they are well-written and, as Sinarblood showed us a long time ago, you have a wonderful grasp of what is going on beyond the surface we see; the subtle hints are there, revealing a deep character no matter who we look at. Even one-off characters like the scarred farmer have this.
5) Once I made my [Peace] with the fact it was actually a full AU, there was actually nothing about the Lore I could complain about.
What does bother me at times is the fact that personal success outside of battle depends on dice a lot even now... but I think we went over this several times in the past.
One thing though, I doubt people will catch a lot of those hints I talked about before; from previous discussions, I figured that you expect us to find at least most of them by reading each Update in detail... which really does not happen, so you should go at it expecting we do not notice many of those. Especially so when you go back to Updating daily; there is just no time to check so thoroughly.
One more thing is that Cerys often does things without ever explaining to the audience why she does it; which is fine for anyone but the PC. We should know her reasoning as we are in her head, not having to guess it. (For example, the stretching in front of Daiyu/Sabina the previous Update... you implied on Discord that she did it on purpose, but the Update itself does not really hint at the fact at all... or the reason she did it)
6) The characters for how much diversity and interesting interactions they have... and the worldbuilding for how much detail and work you put into it.
7) Well, as I said before, lower your expectations on us being able to catch subtle hints a little... and give us more of Cerys' reasoning.
(I also just remembered an Update where we had her experiment with her magic, which ended on a line about her having quite a few interesting ideas; we were never told what ideas she had, even though we ought to know what Cerys knows... if that makes sense.)
Una.
Because she is what I rarely see, an actual child; happy and bubbly and curious... and childish. Just like a nine-year-old girl should be.
2) All things considered... I really do not find any character I dislike, at least among those that appeared for longer than one scene.
I guess it is whoever was in charge of the initial hunt for Cerys... because, again, I do not understand how anyone could think it a good idea to shoot at children. The other reason I do not like him is that all we know about him is based on a bad background roll.
3) Cerys is a good character; she stays true to who she is, but is ready to accept change and grow. Not sure if you do not make her seem a little too smart in realising things (the only example I have on hand is from the latest Update, where she realises Una is growing up without her from basically a single action). I rarely see such a relatable and likeable protagonist.
4) If you honestly want me to write this about everyone, I will still be sitting here tomorrow. What goes for Cerys goes for most of the others as well, they are well-written and, as Sinarblood showed us a long time ago, you have a wonderful grasp of what is going on beyond the surface we see; the subtle hints are there, revealing a deep character no matter who we look at. Even one-off characters like the scarred farmer have this.
5) Once I made my [Peace] with the fact it was actually a full AU, there was actually nothing about the Lore I could complain about.
What does bother me at times is the fact that personal success outside of battle depends on dice a lot even now... but I think we went over this several times in the past.
One thing though, I doubt people will catch a lot of those hints I talked about before; from previous discussions, I figured that you expect us to find at least most of them by reading each Update in detail... which really does not happen, so you should go at it expecting we do not notice many of those. Especially so when you go back to Updating daily; there is just no time to check so thoroughly.
One more thing is that Cerys often does things without ever explaining to the audience why she does it; which is fine for anyone but the PC. We should know her reasoning as we are in her head, not having to guess it. (For example, the stretching in front of Daiyu/Sabina the previous Update... you implied on Discord that she did it on purpose, but the Update itself does not really hint at the fact at all... or the reason she did it)
6) The characters for how much diversity and interesting interactions they have... and the worldbuilding for how much detail and work you put into it.
7) Well, as I said before, lower your expectations on us being able to catch subtle hints a little... and give us more of Cerys' reasoning.
(I also just remembered an Update where we had her experiment with her magic, which ended on a line about her having quite a few interesting ideas; we were never told what ideas she had, even though we ought to know what Cerys knows... if that makes sense.)