Magical Girl Quest - The Fire That Burns

No, we aren't doing Umi Da~ with young teens, wait till they are 17 man.
Seeing as Cerys is currently 13, you are going to be waiting a long while.

Romance, or the potential lack of it, is something that will be covered in this Quest.
Hopefully I don't incur the Banhammer for skirting the subject, but I'll try to keep it a PG as possible.
 
Seeing as Cerys is currently 13, you are going to be waiting a long while.

Romance, or the potential lack of it, is something that will be covered in this Quest.
Hopefully I don't incur the Banhammer for skirting the subject, but I'll try to keep it a PG as possible.
I think for SV we're more than satisfied with handholding and probably addicted to hugs
 
Seeing as Cerys is currently 13, you are going to be waiting a long while.

Romance, or the potential lack of it, is something that will be covered in this Quest.
Hopefully I don't incur the Banhammer for skirting the subject, but I'll try to keep it a PG as possible.
So long as we're on the subject, honestly between how she's been depicted and the profile picture, I've never been particularly convinced Cerys is 13. Daiyu's a little nebulous as well.
 
So long as we're on the subject, honestly between how she's been depicted and the profile picture, I've never been particularly convinced Cerys is 13.
Considering this seems to be an in universe point that's unsurprising.

On Daiyu's though, her's makes her look a fair bit older and that one seems a bit out of place.
 
So, I just had a very powerful idea for Halt that does not involve concepthax.

Freeze an enemy in place relative to the Sun rather than relative to the Earth.

This means that they either get slammed into the ground at 30 km/s (67,108 mph) or flung into outer space at the same speed.
 
So, I just had a very powerful idea for Halt that does not involve concepthax.

Freeze an enemy in place relative to the Sun rather than relative to the Earth.

This means that they either get slammed into the ground at 30 km/s (67,108 mph) or flung into outer space at the same speed.

Good idea, but might as well freeze it in place relative to a random photon


What could possibly go wrong?
 
I think for SV we're more than satisfied with handholding and probably addicted to hugs

Basically this. No need for the lewdz or anything. They are still young they are allowed to experience puppy love. We just like cute things.

So long as we're on the subject, honestly between how she's been depicted and the profile picture, I've never been particularly convinced Cerys is 13. Daiyu's a little nebulous as well.

Ehh just use it as a baseline. Take that picture and imagine that is how Cerys will look as an adult. Im honestly tempted to try and draw a younger ~teen Cerys but im really out of practice with drawing and will take awhile before im satisfied enough to post anything.
 
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Ehh just use it as a baseline. Take that picture and imagine that is how Cerys will look as an adult. Im honestly tempted to try and draw a younger ~teen Cerys but im really out of practice with drawing and will take awhile before im satisfied enough to post anything.
If you did this I would be so stupidly happy.
Her image is True Arfoire from Neptunia.
 
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If you did this I would be so stupidly happy.
Her image is True Arfoire from Neptunia.

Do you have a general idea of how tall you imagine Cerys is? I can figure out Una's rough height since the average height of a 9~10 year old is not that much shorter then Hibiki the Kancolle character that whom you used as a reference. (Between 133-138 cm's compared to Hibikis 144cm)
 
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I'm too tired to write a chapter tonight, but I've had an idea bugging me for the last few days.
I like writing this Quest and I hope I do that well, but I don't really get any feedback on the story itself, which makes it really difficult to improve my writing and gauge what you guys actually think of the Quest beyond 'X likes X Chapter'

I was thinking of throwing together a quick list of questions for you guys if you care?
 
Sure, I mean the way I see it is when you don't get feedback that means the readers are satisfied with it already but yeah ask away.
 
Go ahead; I never know what to say if someone asks me what I think, so getting a full set of question to go through would help a lot.

Though this is mostly because I am the kind of person that is better pointing out the obvious flaws, which I really do not see any here.
 
Character

1 - Who is your favourite character and why?

2 - Who is your least favourite character and why?

3 - What do you think of Cerys? (Her personality, her growth, her reasoning.)

4 - What do you think of the other characters? (^)

Quest

5 - What things bother you the most about the Quest? (A particular character, a piece of Lore, etc)

6 - What's are your favourite things about the quest so far? (^)

7 - What do you think I can improve on? (Barring my current slow update rates, Holiday soon...)
 
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