"What else did you learn.
"What else did you learn."
[missing quotation mark. Should maybe be a question mark too, but Shu Yue's got non-standard intonation]
Shu Yue said idly. I will meet you here in the early hours of the day after the ceremony.
Shu Yue said idly. "I will meet you here in the early hours of the day after the ceremony."
[Missing quotation marks]
to scatter the Diao clan's gifts to the city among all its citizens
to scatter the Diao clan's gifts to the city among all its citizens.
[Missing period]
It was borne on two long wooden rods, set beneath it, which were held up by four cyan cultivators of the Diao clan, striding across the empty air their matriarch's palanquin borne on their shoulders.
It was borne on two long wooden rods, set beneath it, which were held up by four cyan cultivators of the Diao clan striding across the empty air their matriarch's palanquin borne on their shoulders.
[Removed a comma]