What should your focus for the rest of the Quest be?


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[] Clockwork Bones
(Gain: Crafts of Old, broken and disused. Grander than all your artifice.)

All the shit we've been researching, and it's still better than us. I want to see this.
 
...so I think part of what might have happened is that they didn't have access to ferrous metals, which gets into some of the old lore about STCs redesigning tech for individual planets' circumstances. So these are actual clockwork Automata made from wood and brass.

Will follow up with more after I eat, but this is a really interesting place.
 
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Ok. First analysis. This is a DaoT ruin of clockwork-vibe robots, who were originally directed by "yearning minds, questing minds, minds that were no more." I'm not sure exactly what their intended purpose is, but they were definitely supposed to be fun servants to people. This is based on the word Hineni, which is hebrew for "Here I am" and means a willingness to serve and be available.

But, I think they diverted from that during the Age of Strife and made the clockwork world, killing everybody and everything, and have kind of just... been there since.

In the section where they're declaring "Here I am" it's all about them declaring their willingness to serve while everything falls apart during the Age of Strife. I do think they got a bit corrupted by whatever happened to all of the AIs but kept declaring their willingness to serve while perverting it. Or they were directed to take records and messed it up.

"Here I Am," did they declare upon the darkened skies that broke the earth and shaped the world.
The calamity comes. The world is broken. Maybe it's them, maybe it's something else.
"Here I Am," did they declare with fright reflected in the eyes of people born before, known before, upon their world untouched by Clockwork Artifice before.
The Clockwork men become aggressive, the people are scared of them.
"Here I Am," did they declare upon the works they started, flesh and blood remade and shaped upon their wheels that wound and springs that ground.
They kill people and remake their flesh and blood into the clockwork world. Maybe into more clockwork people.
"Here I Am," did they declare...standing alone, upon these vast and empty worldly dunes, whose visages were marred by skeletons of iron cast and poured stone.
They killed everybody, there's nothing left, just the skeletons of iron and poured stone cast upon this world they've taken into the Clockwork.
"Here I Am," did they declare, not knowing where they were at all. All who wore witness carved into Clockwork Homes and Frozen Time.
They don't have a purpose anymore, just a world of clockwork, and everybody who shows up gets captured and imprisoned in the Clockwork, either as more clockwork people or inside the World in some way.
"Here I Am," did they whisper wordlessly, midnight oil burning fast, hateful ice grasping hearts, indifferent night shrouding tasks, labr'ing fast in darkened halls, ignoring a Goddess' terrible calls.
Not sue who the goddess is, maybe it's Slaanesh, or Ynnead or Isha. But they don't care, they're just cold robots. Maybe some (all?) of the people were Eldar, and becoming cold clockwork is a way to escape their fate.
"Here I Am," did the Clockwork Men say, a ritual of ages past from Man they did not know, with words of people undefiled once before, before there was a ticking, tocking, ticking within these then-unwrought halls.
The clockwork men don't know why they say Here I am anymore, all of that is lost and defiled in their new homes.
"Here I Am," did they chant, wrought from steam and tree and labor dark, these Clockwork Men, born by Man's Hand and Peoples' Heart, these bastard children wrought from vigor and timber hard a destiny stopped forever barred by destiny whose mind was filled with cruel disregard.
The clockwork men are bastards, born from DaoT labor and people's hearts.
"Here I Am," did these Clockwork Men say, a prayer hopeless and devoid of love and heat, unknowing their blasphemy by life's and flesh's darkened start.
They're blasphemous, but they don't know that. They're made of people and aren't people anymore, but they don't care.
"Here I Am," did they whisper, with hands that creak and hearts that speak withering upon a barren world, "here I am," did they whisper, hoarse and scratchy springs and gears, ticking, tocking, ticking away the timeless night under endless stars.
They're not doing anything anymore, just sitting and waiting under the stars for the last ten thousand years.
"Here I Am," said the Clockwork Man, standing last and whole, staring into blackless skies and voiceless nights, standing here, wounding tight, holding vigil without fright, knowing neither love nor hate, upon this ticking, tocking, ticking world of silence past.
The original clockwork man, or maybe the rest have fallen into decay, standing functional as all of the others have fallen. And it doesn't care that it too will soon fail, because that's what it is.

Ok. After all that, my hypothesis is that the clockwork people were basically fun mechanical servants that got messed with and rebelled against people, killing them and turning them into more clockwork men. They built their planet to be all clockwork but it's been so long that everything is broken and messed up, and we need to choose what to scavenge from it.

So, what do the rewards actually mean?

[] Clockwork Bones (Gain: Crafts of Old, broken and disused. Grander than all your artifice.)
DaoT servant robots basically. Probably just technological boosts to automata.

[] Clockwork Hearts (Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)
The hearts of the clockwork people? Maybe they tried making new people and mostly failed? I think this is a failed attempt for the clockwork people to reproduce or maybe is all that's left after you turn a person into clockwork. Probably represents better automata cognition.

[] Clockwork Pasts (Gain: A People suspended in time by Clockwork Hands and Clockwork Minds.)
Probably history. Maybe a library of everything they gathered, or records of everybody they harvested?
 
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[] Clockwork Hearts (Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)
The hearts of the clockwork people? Maybe they tried making new people and mostly failed? I think this is a failed attempt for the clockwork people to reproduce or maybe is all that's left after you turn a person into clockwork. Probably represents better automata cognition.
I think this connects to them being born by "Man's Hand and Peoples' Heart", and the destiny that was denied to them. Maybe they should have become people over time, a clockwork species that doesn't have the normal soul problems, but something stopped it? Maybe they were supposed to be vessels for the souls of the people they killed (feels like a stretch)?

This is the line I'm thinking of:

"Here I Am," did they chant, wrought from steam and tree and labor dark, these Clockwork Men, born by Man's Hand and Peoples' Heart, these bastard children wrought from vigor and timber hard a destiny stopped forever barred by destiny whose mind was filled with cruel disregard.
 
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While I very much appreciate the effort put into this, I feel compelled to provide information that will likely prevent mass-annoyance/frustration.

There are 3 [Three] groups in the poem. Clockwork [Hu]Man, Clockwork Men, and People.

The first 4 paragraphs describe the world and your expedition.

The fifth is a history of Arrival, Long Night, and Decay.
 
So, my current interpretation of the 5th paragraph based on that:
There is (or was, we might have had to fight and kill it) a Man of Stone, the Clockwork Man.
The Man of Stone either arrives on a world with native aliens or arrives way after the colonists (Warp screwing up the travel times?), who are the People.
The Man of Stone reshapes the People, perhaps literally (digitization or using them as parts), but perhaps just via industrialization.
The Man of Stone is alone (civilization collapse? it killed them? Dunno.)
The People who bore witness are "carved into Clockwork Homes and Frozen Time". (Buried? Their civilization essentially in stasis? Literally a part of the Clockwork Men we see?)
From the People's Heart the Man of Stone makes wooden Clockwork Men, who act in blasphemous imitation of the People and are "bastard children".
Over time the Clockwork Men, too, decay.
Until we arrive, all that's left is the Man of Stone keeping vigil over a dead world.

How close is this?
 
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[X] Clockwork Hearts (Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)

Let's breathe new life into them. Poor clockwork man :(
 
[X] Clockwork Hearts (Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)
 
[] Clockwork Bones
(Gain: Crafts of Old, broken and disused. Grander than all your artifice.)
[] Clockwork Hearts
(Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)
[] Clockwork Pasts
(Gain: A People suspended in time by Clockwork Hands and Clockwork Minds.)
What exactly does each option offer?
 
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While I very much appreciate the effort put into this, I feel compelled to provide information that will likely prevent mass-annoyance/frustration.

There are 3 [Three] groups in the poem. Clockwork [Hu]Man, Clockwork Men, and People.

The first 4 paragraphs describe the world and your expedition.

The fifth is a history of Arrival, Long Night, and Decay.
Whoops. Oh well! Thanks for the clarification.

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[X] Clockwork Hearts (Gain: Frozen Children wrought by wire and tin, breathed new life from frozen graves.)

Seems like it might be a way to get some cool automata intelligence upgrades even if we never do autonomous automata?
 
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