What should your focus for the rest of the Quest be?


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[X]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos
-[X] Change the Head to a
--[X] Death Masks of the Holy Sphinxes
-[X] Change the Body to include

--[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
--[X] Oaths of Conviction and Compassion


[X] Plan: Protector of the Innocent
 
@RaptorusMaximus @BigBadBob7070

Since there's been some concerns raised about certain part of my plan, could you erase the 'face/head' part of the plan and just replace it with 'face' so that we are being more specific that we are going for a wolf mask kind of thing not a full up wolf's head (or full up wolf skull in the case of the original Chaos tainted Karnivore design)
 
[X]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos
-[X] Change the Head to a
--[X] Death Masks of the Holy Sphinxes
-[X] Change the Body to include

--[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
--[X] Oaths of Conviction and Compassion


[X] Plan: Protector of the Innocent
 
[X] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.
[X]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos
Yeah I'm definitely not voting to replace the white bone wolf skull of a machine with a white furred wolf mask. Especially when the whole point of us making these changes is to prevent chaos corruption from taking our mechs, the design of which is mechs that chaos uses.
So let's not use the same imagery on our mechs that chaos uses. Plus I want to have parts of our religion displayed on the Mechs we now own.
 
[] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.
[]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos
Yeah I'm definitely not voting to replace the white bone wolf skull of a machine with a white furred wolf mask. Especially when the whole point of us making these changes is to prevent chaos corruption from taking our mechs, the design of which is mechs that chaos uses.
So let's not use the same imagery on our mechs that chaos uses. Plus I want to have parts of our religion displayed on the Mechs we now own.
To be fair, the idea is to change the design of the head significantly. The Chaos Karnivore has an outright wolf's skull sticking out complete with a snout.

The idea for my write-in is a wolf's mask as if someone is wearing a mask instead of a wolf's head. A flat wolf mask instead of a wolf head. Basically take the Knight Warglaive and paste a flat wolf mask on its face is the general concept.
 
[X] Plan: Protector of the Innocent

I low-key wonder how does Federation differ aesthetically from the Imperium now.
I mean, there are Kil'drabi and their style + our sleek ship style, but I mean more... house decor, essentially. Do we still keep the gothic skull-core aesthetic? Because I see the hand signs appearing as often as the Imperial Aquila, frankly. It fits so well, theologically.
 
[X] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.

[X]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos

I prefer using our own iconography rather then twist what Chaos already put the patent on. It makes them more separate in a distinctly personal way, and those personal touches help provide abit more protection from Chaos trying to reclaim them.

It also places emphasis on transformation that the sphinxes went through, changing from monstrous things to beloved protectors, and cements the narrative of rebirth from dark beginnings.
 
For the Head, maybe instead of a canine skull we do a moulded canine head? A hound that, instead of screaming from beyond the grave, live still-a protector, as opposed to a monster. This might also give the Machine-Spirits of the Kinghts more of a dog-like personality, which I would love
Oh here's an idea! What if we give them a skull that looks likd the 5 sphinxs looked like in their original dog like form?
] A Small, Etched prayer for the lives of those lost on Luteus Prism, And remembering those who gifted the STC for the Karnivore to us in the first place.
If this was on the current winning vote then I'd say that the winning vote was just perfect.
Adhoc vote count started by Doccer on Apr 2, 2024 at 12:44 AM, finished with 43 posts and 21 votes.

  • [X] Plan: Protector of the Innocent
    -[X] Change the Head to a
    --[X] A stylized (similar to the picture if not exact) noble Wolf's face, primarily white color with red, gold, and black accents/highlights. White symbolizes the purification of the Karnivore STC template and the purity of purpose. Gold and black for the Order of the Blazing Sun's colors, and red for the blood that is shed to protect the innocent.
    -[X] Change the Body to include
    --[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
    --[X] Oaths of Conviction and Compassion
    [X] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.
    [X]Plan Task and memory to repudiate chaos
    -[X] Change the Head to a
    --[X] Death Masks of the Holy Sphinxes
    -[X] Change the Body to include
    --[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
    --[X] Oaths of Conviction and Compassion
    [X] Plan: Protector of the Innocent
    -[X] Change the Head to a
    --[X] A stylized (similar to the picture if not exact) noble Wolf's face/head, primarily white color with red, gold, and black accents/highlights. White symbolizes the purification of the Karnivore STC template and the purity of purpose. Gold and black for the Order of the Blazing Sun's colors, and red for the blood that is shed to protect the innocent.
    -[X] Change the Body to include
    --[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
    --[X] Oaths of Conviction and Compassion
    [X] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.
    -[X] Change the Head to a
    --[X] Death Masks of the Holy Sphinxes and Hallowed Martyrs
    -[X] Change the Body to include
    --[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
    --[X] A Small, Etched prayer for the lives of those lost on Luteus Prism, And remembering those who gifted the STC for the Karnivore to us in the first place.
 
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[X] Remember those who came before to Protect those who come after.
-[X] Change the Head to a
--[X] Death Masks of the Holy Sphinxes and Hallowed Martyrs
-[X] Change the Body to include
--[X] The handprints of all who labor for them
--[X] A Small, Etched prayer for the lives of those lost on Luteus Prism, And remembering those who gifted the STC for the Karnivore to us in the first place.
 
Vote closed
Scheduled vote count started by HeroCooky on Apr 1, 2024 at 12:41 PM, finished with 31 posts and 27 votes.
 
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