[X] [Head to the Castle]

I choose this option for roughly the same reasons as two chapters ago, it would be a good idea to build rapport with Illya and coordinate with an experienced master with a strong servant.

Also, it's nice to know that Shirou is feeling the same frustration as I am about this war. I'm pretty certain that we are already past the number of servants that usually appear in a grail war, and it's not like any extra classes or factions have been established either.
 
I wonder how far into Grand Order Ritsuka is from?

Because they would be incredibly dangerous if put into any situation that doesn't involve them directly fighting a Servant.

Canonically, Ritsuka is physically capable enough to keep up with their Servants in the field, got ninja training from Fuuma Koutaro, can empathize and connect with literally any Servant, got trained by Scathach to hit a bullseye at 50m with pistol and rifle without a scope, and I'm pretty sure there was martial arts training in there too.
Also their pain tolerance is fucking bullshit. They manage to hold a conversation while having their Circuits rearranged via a hand in their intestines.
[X] [Ask Kirei]
Almost certainly a bad idea, but if we can convince him to help he can almost certainly point us in the right direction.
Counter point. This seems to be lostbelt Guda, there is a non zero chance that an interaction with Kirei would lead to a death match on sight. Normal Guda may be able to be reasonable enough to not attack on site but Mash is about 80% of Guda's impulse control.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Sep 28, 2023 at 10:05 PM, finished with 19 posts and 14 votes.


Results so far.

So peeps enjoying the story up to this point? I know I've changed a lot.
 
So peeps enjoying the story up to this point? I know I've changed a lot.
I enjoy the interactions, but I feel like I'm losing the plot. Or at least how to proceed. We know the war be fucked more then a usual war, and that it's fucked enough a time traveler has shown up to help fix it, but they're down their servant. Helping her find the Servant sounds like a plan, but I'm not getting what the end game is. Because fixing the grail probably just puts the war back on track, but Shirou seems to want the whole thing to stop, and I'm not seeing how to do that.
 
[X] [Head to the Castle]
It was a longshot, but maybe Illya knew something.
So peeps enjoying the story up to this point? I know I've changed a lot.
Its ok.... Ayako got better screentime and involvement than canon...

Still hate and dont like how Rin and Baeber were sidestepped and ignored in this. we will get them.

*insert "do it for her" meme*
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Sep 28, 2023 at 10:05 PM, finished with 19 posts and 14 votes.


Results so far.

So peeps enjoying the story up to this point? I know I've changed a lot.
I'm loving it so far.

Despite all the nonsense Shirou is dealing with, Sakura was saved much earlier (not 100% but still), Taiga Is very much involved and no longer just a comedy-relief character, and Ayako being Shirou's "first" GF while showing how awesome she Is...all despite the last two getting seriously hurt.

Oh and Illya actually giving Shirou a chance on sight alongside best snek Rider.
 
I enjoy the interactions, but I feel like I'm losing the plot. Or at least how to proceed. We know the war be fucked more then a usual war, and that it's fucked enough a time traveler has shown up to help fix it, but they're down their servant. Helping her find the Servant sounds like a plan, but I'm not getting what the end game is. Because fixing the grail probably just puts the war back on track, but Shirou seems to want the whole thing to stop, and I'm not seeing how to do that.
You stop the grail war by winning the grail war. Shirou hasn't quite grokked that yet. Go young hero, murder Rin.
[X] [Head to the Castle]
It was a longshot, but maybe Illya knew something.

Its ok.... Ayako got better screentime and involvement than canon...

Still hate and dont like how Rin and Baeber were sidestepped and ignored in this. we will get them.

*insert "do it for her" meme*
Hey, I put in plenty of options. Sorry the story is only 'ok'. I'll keep working on it.
I'm loving it so far.

Despite all the nonsense Shirou is dealing with, Sakura was saved much earlier (not 100% but still), Taiga Is very much involved and no longer just a comedy-relief character, and Ayako being Shirou's "first" GF while showing how awesome she Is...all despite the last two getting seriously hurt.

Oh and Illya actually giving Shirou a chance on sight alongside best snek Rider.
Illya... will continue to be interesting.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Erien on Sep 28, 2023 at 10:05 PM, finished with 19 posts and 14 votes.


Results so far.

So peeps enjoying the story up to this point? I know I've changed a lot.
It's good. I love divergence. It's the ice cream of fanworks.

I kind of want Medea have been listening in on Shirou's "Bad decisions have gotten me this far" speech and take him by the shoulders and shake him while screaming "Terrible decisions have not gotten you this far! Me carrying your ass like Hercules on a swim up river with a boat hitched to his shoulders has!"

Some major dissociation between what works and what's being survived by the skin of their teeth by our protag with his head in the clouds.
 
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It's good. I love divergence. It's the ice cream of fanworks.

I kind of want Medea have been listening in on Shirou's "Bad decisions have gotten me this far" speech and take him by the shoulders and shake him while screaming "Terrible decisions have not gotten you this far! Me carrying your ass like Hercules on a swim up river with a boat hitched to his shoulders has!"
Every route of Fate is successive bad decisions until victory. Culminating in Heaven's Feel the ultimate in such decisions.

Y'all voted for UBW a ways back meanwhile. And have been dealing with that up to this point.
 
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Every route of Fate is successive bad decisions until victory. Culminating in Heaven's Feelz the ultimate if such decisions.

Y'all voted for UBW a ways back meanwhile. And have been dealing with that up to this point.
That is... frighteningly accurate. I stand by the fact that it's less the decisions themselves than the OP heroines that get Shirou from point A to point C alive for the first half to two thirds of a given route though.

Are you sure it isn't UPW instead? Unlimited Pigs Works is so much Cuter the UBW, and loses none of the badass of UBW.
 
That is... frighteningly accurate. I stand by the fact that it's less the decisions themselves than the OP heroines that get Shirou from point A to point C alive for the first half to two thirds of a given route though.

Are you sure it isn't UPW instead? Unlimited Pigs Works is so much Cuter the UBW, and loses none of the badass of UBW.
Y'all avoided the Circe route.
 
Ominous

Nah, we just delay it. Wanted Shirou to be a gentlemen for Circe and Ayako.

Circe hasn't given up, and she most likely will want children to "restart the age of greek heroes"

Also, there is no way she doesn't want Medea to become a mom too.
The only routes left are Shinji and Kirei.
 
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