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Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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[X] Dress shopping for Hanyi, Renxiang has been cajoled into accompanying you
[] Visiting the District's shrine of the Tree with Zhengui, Gan Guangli has an interest as well.
 
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Ohhhh..... I do like how blunt Sixaing was about this.

We are vulgar.

And the core of what makes life continue, reproduction, is vulgar.

I wonder if and when the connection between isolation and purity will occur to her, and if it means she will bend away from purity or towards it.
 
mastigos said:
That ... Kind of really felt incoherent. Like all of the characters were talking past each other.
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For the most part, I think what you're talking about was just the natural outcome of a conversation where different parties involved understand each other well enough to follow each other's trains of thought without needing to explicitly spell every leap of logic out for the other party. I quite enjoyed it, personally.

Though I admit -
yrsillar said:
"But most things are like that. Connections break, communities split. But you know endings Ling Qi," Sixiang
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this line scans poorly, since the "But" implies it's a direct response to the previous line, when it's actually a response to LQ's previous line, ignoring the Dreaming Moon line in between.
 
yrsillar said:
"Dreams and Nightmares are but reflections at different angles," Spake the Moon.

"Sixiang, you have a grandfather too, don't you?"

Her friend was silent for a long, long time. Long enough for Ling Qi to blink the remaining stars from her eyes.

"Yeah, I do, how'd you know?"

"Dreams and Nightmares go hand in hand," Ling Qi said. "I'm going to have to meet him aren't I?"

"Yeah," Sixiang said sadly.
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yoooo maybe turtleboy's companion isn't so bad after all.
 
Dreams are what you have to look forward to, even if its not real.
Nightmares are reminders of what stands in your way, to stay ready even when at peace.
 
[X] Visiting the District's shrine of the Tree with Zhengui, Gan Guangli has an interest as well.
 
[X] Dress shopping for Hanyi, Renxiang has been cajoled into accompanying you

Boolying Renxiang into shopping today is the thin end of the wedge to dragging her on a bar crawl tomorrow!
 
[ ] Dress shopping for Hanyi, Renxiang has been cajoled into accompanying you

When was the last time we managed to get Renxiang to do anything recreational? And it's been a while since we did something with Hanyi.
 
[X] Visiting the District's shrine of the Tree with Zhengui, Gan Guangli has an interest as well.

Tree offers important insights to turtleson
 
[ ] Dress shopping for Hanyi, Renxiang has been cajoled into accompanying you

[X] Visiting the District's shrine of the Tree with Zhengui, Gan Guangli has an interest as well.

Why must this be so hard. Yrs, why do you force us to have a favorite child? :cry:
Edit: flipflop
 
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