Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
In terms of make point usage, the best mechanical idea I've seen so far is to use them for getting to multipliers. No limit on number, but only one multiplier tier. Especially as we get up in art levels the difficulty in raising anything will rise significantly, so the points would actually become quite valuable. Currently, they would be of limited use yes, but that's just because we only have easy projects. We know that the projects will scale very quickly so that isn't a worry for me.

Toss a hat into the ring: a potential idea for spending points on story rewards (I think story related ideas are less likely to break the system) is to be able to unlock certain objectives earlier, or make them more approachable. We got a bunch of options in Dreaming just now, and while all are interesting, the only super rewarding one is super dangerous (Long Knives nightmare). Maybe, for great cost and limited to a few points per person, so that a decent portion of the community would have to come together and spend, we could unlock a special area or quest line earlier or easier than we would otherwise. Yes, this would need to be fine tuned and maybe be limited to only use within the Dream, but hopefully needing the community to agree would stop any single person pushing the quest in a direction, but also offer a high reward for engagement.

Personally I've been writing a little bit just for practice in setting and if I knew there was a reward it would be a great incentive for pushing to actually complete and post my writing.

tldr: I think there does need to be a very real benefit to omake points, but I think it might be easier to this in a storyline method rather than a mechanical fashion. Bonus: if story wise, we can also portray the questers looking over Ling Qi's shoulder as the Moon nudging things as the in universe explanation.
 
The sights she had seen in the realm of Dream still filled her mind even now, well after she had passed back through the ring gates and packed both them and the idol away. She still saw the crumbling city ruins balanced so precariously, lives and experience piled high built atop their predecessors until the oldest were but dust and sediment.
Hm. So old enough dreams eventually die to become the foundation, and that makes me wonder if things like the Bloody Dream being changed by the Dreamer are meant to avoid such an end result.

Actually this makes me wonder what exactly being Deep in the Dream means? Because if depth corresponds to a time axis I'm curious what nightmare Xuan Shi's companion came from to be that deep.
The bleeding mountain, and the behemoth with Gui's eyes stuck in her mind as well, mysteries she itched to discover. Then there was that itching whisper.

Power and Want.

She couldn't deny that those simple words compelled her. Divorced from the immediate fear of the moment, she was left to dwell on what she had felt down in that mouldering prison. It was familiar, she couldn't deny it all. She felt a draw to that whispering skeleton, and a kinship that felt deeply uncomfortable. Somehow she was certain that they were similar. She just couldn't be certain if that was merely an imposition on her mind.
Hm. Perhaps it is an imposition on her mind via her insights being triggered due to previous iC decisions regarding her bloodline connection the Weilu.

Alternatively given his apparent GM leaning he might've been the original composer for FVM who offered it to the GM, and well that would give him a connection if he was entirely unrelated to the Mason War.
She couldn't shake the feeling that he would be sad if she never returned though. It was lonely, to be a prisoner.

"I can't feel anything influencing you, but he might just be better than me," Sixiang huffed.

Ling Qi acknowledged that. Then again they had known exploring the Liminal realm would be dangerous.

"Guess so, nothing ventured, nothing gained," Sixiang chuckled.
Although it might be as simple as the bleak loneliness of the skeleton who is a prisoner appealing to Ling Qi like how her music appeals to Bao Qian.
"Hey Big Sis are you alright? You've been staring off into space since the wagon got moving," Hanyi's voice brought her out of her thought and Ling Qi cracked her eyes open. Hanyi was sitting across from her in the cluttered and cramped workshop which took up the back of Bao Qian's wagon. The young ice spirit had already dressed up somewhat.She wore a dark blue gown that contrasted with her pale complexion, a graceful thing that Meizhen had helped her pick out. Her hair had been tied back in several braids, and threaded through with white flowers, which her friend had assured her symbolized the coming of winter.

All in all, she looked like quite the little noblewoman, despite the bare feet kicking away and sending the hems of her gown flapping.
The last part basically the definition of a stereotypical young lady Ling Qi. :V

Also the attire is rather important given we know the south Emerald Seas is a deeply religious place.
"Just thinking about things," Ling Qi chuckled.

"Mm, it's cause you went on that weird trip, you shoulda taken me and the dummy with," Hanyi said, accusingly crossing her arms.

"Maybe another time," Ling Qi said. She didn't know how well tey would handle it.
Hanyi would likely be fine, but Zhengui is liable to inherently dislike the place due to his desire to rule over a place as the spiritual king, and that seems rather hard in the Dream, or at least something he won't due until the higher realms.
"You'll want to work on your own skills first,"
Sixiang murmured.

"Besides, you were busy," Bao Qian has told me how much work has been going into this," Ling Qi said. "This isn't just one show it's a whole tour."

"Yeah," Hanyi said proudly, either mollified or forgetting her previous annoyance. "There was a whole bunch of work, and even though I didn't get most of it, there was a bunch of stuff about each stop that I had to memorize, local spirits and stuff, since I'm doing more than just singing."

"Well, i trust that you're well prepared," Ling Qi said absently glancing toward the front of the wagon. Whatever else she might say of Bao Qian he was a dependable sort. Although, coming from the Dream…
Well that is one way for Hanyi to keep up, and almost certainly contribute to the bigger picture as an actually helpful tour that wards the local region against a harsh winter would persuading the nobility that significantly contributing to a trade route is in their benefit easier due to the Ling clan already helping them once.
Ling Qi found herself eyeing the flows of energy through this wagon, lingering on the entrances and exits, Since her journey with Sixiang, she had found her senses sharpened in an unexpected way. The places between, doorways, boundary markers and others stood out more sharply. It made sense in a way, training her senses to interact with the realm of Dreams left her more sensitive to other liminal spaces.
Huh I wonder how that would play into the project that involves stealing from a storage ring.
She did wonder though, what it was that made Bao Qian regard this cluttered wagon as his home, over the manors and lands of the Bao.

"We will be arriving shortly Ladies and spirits, prepare yourselves!" His voice called back to them.

Well, it wasn't really her business, Ling Qi thought. She smiled and leaned over to pat hanyi on the head encouragingly. She was looking forward to her junior sisters performance.
Probably due to Bao Qian liking there to be people to appreciate his work, and his family was rarely around to do so.

Also this makes his statement to Ling Qi about it being beneath her to fish for praise absolutely hilarious given part of the reason he lives his life in the margins is for a similar reason. :V
The first stop on the week long tour was the largest venue. Bao Qian had begun by soliciting the barons of the south central valley region, and he had secured agreement from several before his efforts had attracted the attention of Vscount Chao. In this region, so close to the Wall, all but a handful, of families were relatively young. This Viscounty was no different, and its current owners had only held the title for some two hundred years.

It was for this reason, Ling Qi suspected that they were eager enough to try new things. They were not performing in the Viscounties capital though, but rather its largest agricultural settlement.
So what I'm getting from this is that if the the tour helps with winter the Viscounty will be rather eager to get a repeat one the following year.

Ling Qi had thought that she understood what farmlands looked like, having seen the rolling tea fields of the sect and the walled fields and pastures of Tonghou. This was rather larger. Empty, harvested fields, set for winter stretched in every direction nearly as far as she could perceive. Neat roads cut between fields and scattered structures gave the feeling of a dozen tiny villages rather than a large town.

However, between her efforts at gardening and her recent journeys it was easy to tell that this region was as walled as any town or city. Thick lines of growth marked the border between wilderness and civilization, trees packed so close together that they were a living bulwark, reinforced with formation arrays old enough to have become part of the living qi network of the trees themselves.
With living formations so incredibly old it makes sense why spirits are important as they can
The venue itself was near the center of the widely spread settlement, a grand pagoda with a green tile roof, and walls of living wood, like everything else here, the pagoda sprawled, taking up an entire hill with its structure and grounds.

"Quite a pretty structure is it not," Bao Qian said casually as the walked up the winding ramp which led into the temple. Hanyi had left them hurried away by attendants and junior priests to prepare her for the show.

"It is," Ling Qi said, looking over the scrollwork on the handrails of the ramp and the glimmering garden that lay beyond. The air was filled by the faint music of a small river which wound around the hill and watered the fields beyond. "What did you say it was called again?"

"The Springmist Temple," Bao Qian replied. "The second largest temple in the south central valley, it looks after the yearly flooding and the fertility of the valley."
I get the feeling somebody is trying to add "yearly winter warding" to what the temple does by making use of it being the second largest temple, and an eager Viscounty trying to show they deserve their land, which is a mutually beneficial relationship.
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Hm, are you sure this is appropriate for Hanyi then?" Ling Qi asked, not wanting to fret but being unable to quiet her worry.

"I have been assured that it is. Winter's have been growing harsher, but the priests have not yet been able to pin down a spirit to propitiate for this," Bao Qian replied. "I have exchanged numerous letters with the head priestess of the temple and viscount Chao to confirm the details."

"I see," she was being ridiculous. As they passed through the entrance of the temple her nose filled with the smoky scent of burning incense and fragrant wood smoke. Inside the temple she saw people gathered. Not lay worshippers, not here. They would be outside, for the procession that would follow. Here there were only gathered nobles of the region, here to oversee and view the rituals and the performance that was part of it.
So part "Brace yourselves Winter is Coming", and part them being the second largest temple.
Bao Qian's voice tickled her ear, though he had not leaned closer, nor had his lips moved. Indeed he was smiling pleasantly at those who had looked up to see them. "There are two main groups here from my experience. There are the nobles whose lands line the main road which currently ends in the ruins of Black Lotus Pass and agricultural goods, and those whose lands are further into the hills and produce the valleys metals and finished goods

Ling Qi shot him a look even as she bowed in greeting to the gathered nobles, and he just looked impassively back. Well, it wasn't as if she didn't know the secondary purposes of these gatherings. Cai Renxiang and she had embarked on quite a difficult project and they wouldn't be able to do it alone. The Wang and the Sect would surely support them militarily, but protecting your land was only the first step. It had to be made prosperous for people to thrive. They couldn't expect to be directly supported by the Count clan of the area, the Diao, at least not at first.

No, she had to decide on an objective to pursue first.

[] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
[] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)
Hm. The thing is if Hanyi's tour has any impact at all she will get a second one, and thus while they won't like being approached second they'll be more positively inclined to the Ling clan than the hill nobles who we have no obvious way to build bridges with as easy.

Also Zhengui's ash should help build bridges with those directly along the trade route given their agriculture leanings.

[X] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)

Fundamentally I'd expect both Part 1 quest lines to be required for an actual trade route to be set up, and consistent benefit to be gained from it.
 
[X] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)

we are situated in mountains, and in a region that is likely to be rich in metals. Trade might be better long term, but it is only locked for a short time.
 
[X] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)

Logically speaking, I think concentrating on the opportunity of trades first makes sense before focusing on the crafts.
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)

better get it down first, so the craftmans can get their stuff easier. Also, a trade route would give us a safer passage to the rest of the region/empire, what with there being guards to patrol and escort caravans on it.
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
Ok, so let's look at how the empire does economy.
Well, without WoG we cant be completly sure how exactly the economy in the empire looks like, but i cant imagine it being a free market.

Afterall, transportation always requires cultivator protection and that means noble backing. It is why we would need to talk to the nobles for transport and the nobles for crafting. This means that trade is heavily subject to politics and personal relations between nobles.

Another restriction besides politics is likely the availability of information. If we dont go to them to advertise our special metal (iirc the cold iron for example was a cultivator ressource), then how will they know about it? And why would they care? We cant really plug advertisment via media, so we basically have to go to potential customers and shill our products to them directly.

Given that the likely main ressource we would get from trade with the white skies will be different sorts of (cultivator) metals, it really does seem to me that it would be a major advantage to learn what our (local) crafters would want and to make friends with some of them, so they would consider buying our stuff.
Of course, we also need to try to get friendly with the guys that own the road, so they won't screw us on tariffs, but all talks about trade would be pointless if nobody wants to buy our stuff.

[X] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)
 
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[X] Speak with the craftsman and hill nobles (Begin Political Quest, Craftsmen's Eye. Other route locked until Part 1 completion.)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
Adhoc vote count started by TheCount on Jun 27, 2021 at 7:01 AM, finished with 56 posts and 37 votes.
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
"There are two main groups here from my experience. There are the nobles whose lands line the main road which currently ends in the ruins of Black Lotus Pass and agricultural goods, and those whose lands are further into the hills and produce the valleys metals and finished goods."

Road option positives:
  • We'll be better connected with the southern nobles via trade routes. Means we can sell more unprocessed goods for cheap as transportation costs will be reduced. Probably have more buyers overall.
  • They'll have expertise in terms of logistics, supply wagons, protecting trade, relevant legal matters, etc.
  • Easier access to the supply goods we'll want to sell to White Sky (wood and agriculture products).
  • Black Lotus Pass - potential story/cultivation thingy?
Craftsman option positives:
  • They'll be able to hook us up with manufacturers of finished goods. Overall, better ties with the whole industry?
  • We'll be in a better position to establish our own craftsman. Selling finished goods is more valuable than selling raw materials.
  • Better appraisal of the goods we'll be purchasing. They'll know what is immediately useful, what is a long term investment that'll require a lot of processing, etc.
Going to go with the road option but there's not really a wrong answer here imo. They both have clear positives but to me personally, securing logistics is more important.

[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
[X] Speak with the nobles whose lands lie on the trade road. (Begin Political Quest, old Road/New Road Part 1. Other route locked until Part 1 completion)
 
Afterall, transportation always requires cultivator protection and that means noble backing. It is why we would need to talk to the nobles for transport and the nobles for crafting. This means that trade is heavily subject to politics and personal relations between nobles
For a large scale trade network, yes, but LQ is likely to have a few yellows and reds under her, and that is enough to protect a few shipments. You won't see a green with every transport
 
How to deal with Omake points is something that has concerned me. I really, really love fan art and fanworks, but I've also seen in quests like WSIA the way that omake points could kinda ruin things and so I've always been kind of cautious in their function. One idea I've had as @Neshuakadal said is to let omake points be spent to boost success chances on projects and actions. I think I would have to limit this for the same reasons though. The other idea is that they can be spent to add an extra success to a project in order to hit multipliers which are out of reach, once we get through the initial easy projects I've set up.

I know the quest became very aimless for a long stretch. That is part of what I'm trying to reverse with this system change and the diplomacy events I want to get a stronger story backbone, enable myself to skip time a bit and otherwise cut down on bloat.
How about instead of boosting the protag,which as you said tend to fuck up with the whole system and/or story, why not limit it to boosting secondary characters? Anything from helping Meizhen in a breakthrough, speeding up Qingge's cultivation, making Sun Linling trip at the worse moment, or even boosting one of the many Pokemon spirit companions, so long as it's not a direct upgrade to our protag?
 
Upgrading people around is fun too. But what if they replaced sites? I don't think sites add too much to the story. They are just sort of rewards for exploring, but our projects can already force us to explore the world. Instead we could use a bunch of points to get multipliers for cultivation. Make it expensive enough and increase enough for various steps that they can't blow things away more than sites already did.
 
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