Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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[X] Dream of shadows and cities, stacked like children's blocks (Grinning Feats, seeking the past. Sixiang evolves their movement trait)
 
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[X] Dream of mountains in dewdrops and the rumbling of old thunder (Dreaming Feats, seeking the present. Sixiang evolves their perception trait)
 
[X] Dream of shadows and cities, stacked like children's blocks (Grinning Feats, seeking the past. Sixiang evolves their movement trait)
 
[X] Dream of shadows and cities, stacked like children's blocks (Grinning Feats, seeking the past. Sixiang evolves their movement trait)
 
[X] Dream of shadows and cities, stacked like children's blocks (Grinning Feats, seeking the past. Sixiang evolves their movement trait)

This was difficult because Sixiang improved perception could be useful in social, scouting/sneaking, or combat situations. But I'm wanting the Grinning Feat and it fits well with LQs past (could help physical scouting / security?). The focus on the past could give deeper insight for the loot we got. Concise choices, with a lot of potential depth. Great dilemma.
 
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[X] Dream of mountains in dewdrops and the rumbling of old thunder (Dreaming Feats, seeking the present. Sixiang evolves their perception trait)
 
[X] Dream of mountains in dewdrops and the rumbling of old thunder (Dreaming Feats, seeking the present. Sixiang evolves their perception trait)
 
Tomb of Lost Souls
Tomb of Ancient Souls

Ling Wei swayed gently in time with her perch, a small branch nestled within the canopy of this southern forest. Nothing disturbed the natural ambiance around her, small birds chirped greetings and young spirits frolicked around the trunks of these trees. Quiet, peaceful, serene. All of which veiled the darkness which crept underneath the hills. Young Baron Shan was fortunate that he had been too busy to deal with the construction he had detected beneath his lands, having decided to request assistance from his lieges in the matter while he joined a punitive force to handle some quarrelsome barbarian tribe. Or something. She wasn't quite sure what it was and she could not muster the desire to care. Not when it took all her effort to resist pirouetting with every beat of her heart!

Taking a moment to pinpoint a weakness in the wards and liminal defenses, Ling Wei smiled, breathed out fully, and shifted between material and dream. Just to scrape across the edge, to slide on the razor's blade between reality and dream, and, like a needle, slip through the old cracks in the defenses. A fine web of qi was disturbed slightly in her passing and was about to alert the stronger defenses, but in her wake came the breath of forgetfulness, and the fine lace settled, none the wiser that they had failed in their singular purpose. With a breath, she rematerialized in the corner of what seemed like a storeroom, carved into the very bedrock of the land. Musty and stale, the air tasted stagnant.

'Rise from slumber and dream Yewan,' Ling Wei mentally commanded her spirit, 'our work begins.'

Her shadow coalesced from the pitch-like blackness of the room. With a motion of its hands, a piece of the stone walls began to shimmer like a blackened fractured mirror. As large as a door, the shimmering mirror stood there, waiting. With a twirl, Ling Wei turned around and slipped out of the storeroom door. Yewan followed.

Entering a main hall of the complex, Ling Wei took a moment to orient herself. Lanterns and torches lined the walls and pillars, long extinguished. From the east came the sounds of marching feet, and from below her, she could feel a deepening of the darkness that had hidden this place since its construction ages ago. Taking the easternmost passage, and dispersing herself through the air, it took only a few heartbeats to find the source of the sound. A trio of human skeletons, armored in tattered leathers and holding spears of tarnished copper. A wisp of shadow skirted around them and peered at the qi constructs which guided them. The complex network of qi that had guided them had suffered clear damage, spaces that seemed to connect to something else had been severed, and now the skeletons were directionless, repeating motions without meaning or reason. But it was their source of animus that made her shudder.

These constructs did not use spirit stones for power, but souls. Scarred and shackled human souls. Muted as they were, the power source was unmistakable. It was almost enough to make her retch, to gag on bile. With a quick flick of qi, Ling Wei breathed out forgetfulness and peace, causing the stumbling horrors to stop and fall to the ground. She began to break apart the qi network leaching power from the souls, ripping the complex qi construction to pieces. In but moments, the souls were freed from their prison, and disappeared from perception, going wherever it was that souls went to in death. Rematerializing next to the pile of bones, Ling Wei knelt and produced a stick of incense to light for the dead. While there was no feeling that ghosts would appear from these souls, there was no reason not to be considerate either. And it was good, good to take some time to adjust her expectations of what to find down here.

No longer was this an abandoned tomb that would have been fun to explore. No longer was this about taking the first pick of treasures before letting Baron Shan know what to expect if he wanted to claim the rest. No longer was this about pleasure and release from mundanity. This was personal. It had all the signs of a more developed and personalized construction from that contained in the old pale manual she had studied. The ancient work of long-dead hill tribes. Work that she used as a base for her own path of ascending as a cultivator. While Aunt Zhihui would know what to do with any treasures that remained in this place, she would not wait to release the tortured souls that still patroled these halls. They would be freed tonight.

Ling Wei commanded Yewan to make another gate with a gesture and a second shimmering portal formed from the carved stone. She dispersed herself along with her breath and flowed deeper into the darkness of this place, following the halls and stairwells ever downward. Trio's of skeletal guards that she came across stood in place at junctions and doorways. She left them alone, for now, noting that these constructs were still connected to a larger network that determined their course of action. Passing storerooms filled with degraded leather and weapons, she commanded Yewan to make gates in each one, hidden from the senses of any guards. More guards appeared as she delved deeper, and even greater depravities were found.

Rooms with crusted shackles, pits filled to the brim with brittle bone, workbenches with decomposing scrolls which seemed to have been made by stitching human skin together, halls filled end to end with stationary skeletal guards. Each guard she had passed contained a human soul, scarred, shaped, and shackled. And, with each of her heartbeats, a pulse of power flowed through the command network, invigorating the souls and qi constructs. Keeping them alive. Only a few times did she dare to retch in quiet forgotten corners, tears brimming at her eyes. Finally, though, she reached the bottom. A pool of filth and shadow comprised the final room. An ancient spirit hovered over the darkened liquid, and it felt as though it could have been in the fourth realm. If it hadn't spread its power over this entire complex, keeping things functioning for a creator who was long dead. And if the spirit hadn't also been broken and made mad by the eons of captivity.

Yewan made a final portal in the pool room, and Ling Wei concealed it with a veil of forgetfulness. It was finally time.

'Slumber Yewan and ponder broken dreams'

From the portals came Ling Wei's puppets of shattered glass. Black forms comprised from cutting angles and sharp silicon, carrying all manner of weapons. They marched from her gates in a flood, smashing through the guards wherever they encountered them. Some of the skeletons were quick enough to shatter a puppet or two, but more stepped up to fill the ranks. In the final room, the ancient spirit screeched in pain and agony as Ling Wei sliced with her daggers of frozen flame, supported by even more puppets that flooded the room as well. It was over quickly, thankfully, the spirit not being able to process the flood of information over a network never designed to handle such an assault. Once the spirit fell, so did the rest of the resistance, and all that was left was ensuring no souls or spirits were left in this place. This forgotten tomb.


A/N:
@yrsillar Another omake for the omake throne! I hope people enjoy the read!
 
Country Roads
Dong Fu gave the reins a tug, guiding his companion around the sharp turn in the road ahead. All around him, the dark forests of the Emerald Seas midlands blurred by in an indistinct mass of shadow, seen through the fluttering talisman strips which hung from the wide brim of his hat. It was, in his opinion, the perfect time of year for a journey through the central forests. With spring fading into summer, the shaded roads were far cooler than the hot scrublands in the east, and dryer than the damp swamp air to the west, and the lesser development of the land meant that the lights and fires of cities and industry so prevalent in the north were absent, leaving the starry sky clear and unobstructed.

He hummed a simple tune in time with the feeling of his companions hooves beating against the packed gravel of the winding forest road. It was a pleasure in itself to have experienced journeys that had taken him far and wide enough to have a preference though, he supposed. Most cultivators were sedentary sorts, not particularly inclined to travel. He'd always had the itch for travel though. Sitting still never did sit right with him, disagreed with his cultivation.

Some things just didn't change.

Other things though…

Dong Fu snapped the reins casually, knowing they were coming up on a straight stretch, letting the wind howl outside the shell of calmed air as the carriage rushed on. He glanced back at the sealed carriage, where two young women who felt like they'd been through hell were resting. He allowed himself a wry grin. Not a glimmer of recognition.

He wasn't particularly offended though. They'd only spoken once. Still, it was startling seeing the gawky young thing he'd given some encouraging words to a year and a half ago wrapped in regal garb and standing beside the heiress of the Cai. His companion shook his head, tossing his mane and letting out a laughing whinny. Dong Fu cracked a smile. She'd certainly taken his advice to heart, by what he had heard.

He wasn't one for gossip, the some of his peers in the Inner Sect were, but he hadn't missed the story of the mad commoner girl, getting herself right in the middle of a tussle between all the highborn scions that had been incoming last year. Most had been pitying, expecting her to be crushed for her trouble, others dismissive waiting for failure to take her. He'd made a couple stones out of the tournament betting pool on her.

She'd had good fortune, and that could outweigh many things. Still, he considered her haggard expression as she climbed into his carriage for the final stretch of the trip back to the sect. Was she happy with what success though, he wondered. Being important was a double edged sword. His great grandfather had been important once. It had gone poorly for him. He'd learned that at his mother's knee in the tent city that lay below the cliffs of the Wang capital. They, a second wife and son who had no inheritance, were better for their irrelevance.

He bore them no resentment to his half siblings. He didn't particularly want lands and fancy houses. He had his companion, and his carriage, friends in a dozen cities, and a job that took him all over the Emerald Seas, and someday, maybe even the Empire. For humble Dong Fu, that was enough.

In the shadows ahead, he glimpsed a shadow across the road, fallen tree, or something more sinister he couldn't say, and so he let out a whistle through his teeth, and his companion's thundering hoofbeats crackled with electricity, a boom of thunder broke in the night and horse and carriage both soared over the obstruction on the road, never so much as jostling their passengers as they landed on the other side. Behind them, the 'tree' writhed briefly, and slithered from the path. Dong Fu made a note on the map in his mind, he would have to report that so the road wardens could take care of it.

But, his thoughts strayed back to his passengers. He still felt some sympathy for the girl, though she'd likely grow beyond him in a few years. She wasn't the type to fit the mold, he thought, and that was a dangerous thing. You could allay it, be useful or strong enough, and you could be allowed some eccentricity.

He had named his companion Fu because he was just bad at naming things after all. No reason to give him the stink eye. His hat and robe helped, people could ignore a lot of things if it wasn't rubbed directly in their faces. Man and horse shared a chuckle, carried away on the evening wind that howled past the carriage.

For that girl though… She'd already discarded that option. Even in the stables he heard the grumbles. She offended certain people just by breathing at this point. Yet, he'd spied the heiress allowing her to lean a hand on her shoulder. There was protection in that. This too his mother had taught him. Whatever could be said, she was no longer alone, and that was always the first step to safety.

Well, Dong Fu thought, it was no longer really his business. He was no noble, even if he had earned a title, he would never leave the Sect, and so he was merely a humble, if skilled driver, and she was a baroness, who would no doubt grow into more than that. One day, the name Ling Qi would be heard across the province. The name of Dong Fu might come to stables all over the empire, but never beyond.

Dong Fu leaned back on the driver's bench, snapping the reins once more as they neared an intersection of the roads, guiding his companion down the road to the Sect. In the story of a flashy life such as hers, Dong Fu was barely a footnote, and he was pleased enough to leave it that way.

And so, once again the carriage and the driver brought the girl of Tonghou to the Sect, to resume her story.

AN: Good work @Thor's Twin sorry bout posting this back to back here.
 
For ease of reference, below is the passage from "Smelting: 2" in Forge of Destiny where Dong Fu brought Ling Qi to the Sect for the first time.

The carriage was impossibly fast, Ling Qi thought as she stared out of the tiny window at a landscape that was little more than a green and brown blur. She knew she should be excited, maybe awed, she was witnessing the power of an Immortal after all. It wasn't something a girl like her could have ever expected to see. Instead she simply felt numb. Absently she brushed a strand of her unruly black hair out of her eyes. She had let it get too long again, hanging down below her ears as it was, it had slipped her mind in the last couple of months.

She was being taken to the Wall, the impassable mountains that formed the southern border. She was going to a Sect. She apparently had the talent to become an Immortal herself, or at least to walk that path. It was apparently why she sometimes heard voices no one else could hear, why she could feel things when she ventured out to the outskirts of the city where the wards against the spirit beasts were porous and weak. She had always assumed she was just a bit crazy really.

Tomboyish, inelegant, crazy Ling Qi, who ran away rather than play doll for her Mother. It had grated, when she was younger, listening to her mother's complaints about her lack of care for her appearance, hearing the frustration in the woman's voice when she talked with other women. Her daughter was too tall, too thick of limb, her skin too dark, her features too long and lacking refinement.

She couldn't say she regretted leaving. It wasn't as if Mother had tried very hard to find her in the four years since she had run off. Ling Qi blew the stubborn strand of hair out of her eyes again and turned her thoughts away from the past. It was pointless now, she had hated it when her mother had tried to force her into the mold of what she wanted, so she left. She was free, even if it meant she was often hungry or cold. Even if it meant she had been hurt or frightened on occasion. She might be ugly, she might be poor, but she was herself, did as she wanted, and to her that was all that mattered.

Which was why this grated on her. She should have been ecstatic. She was the only commoner from her city that had the talent, she should be proud, holding her head high. Would any of the other children she knew be able to raise their heads in front of her by the time she was done training? Would even Mother be able to criticize her anymore? No, of course not. She still wasn't happy though, because she once again found herself without a choice. She had no money at all, no resources. Even if she had gone back to Mother she wouldn't have been able to pay the fees described by the recruiter, and if she had refused to go along to the sect, he had said her talent would be removed. She hated the idea of something that was hers being taken away even more.

So she would owe the Empire eight years of service instead, once she was done training. Not very long at all in an Immortals lifespan, she had been assured. Really she couldn't say that the idea of being a figure from a story, facing off against the wind riding mountain barbarians didn't excite her. She just hated not having a choice.

Ling Qi shook her head and turned away from the blurring landscape outside the carriage window. The carriage was eerily quiet, very little sound reaching inside. More magic she supposed, and despite her misgivings she couldn't help the spark of excitement she felt at the thought. Still it had been hours since they left, and she was bored. Even at this speed it would still be some time until they arrived, going by what the recruiter had said. So rather than continuing to mope about the past, she decided to turn her attention to the leather satchel sitting on the bench across from her. It contained her meager possessions, a few coins, some clothing, an old wooden flute that she had liked to play on occasion. Mothers music lessons had been one of the few happy memories she had of the woman.

It also contained what she had been provided by the recruiter. Reaching over Ling Qi picked up the bag and flipped it open before running her fingers over the bundle of grey cloth that sat on top. She once again marveled at the smooth softness of the material. Her disciples uniform, the man had said. Something provided to less well off disciples, since normal clothing would have difficulty holding up to the rigors of training. There was a few other things, a hand mirror, a comb, and a sewing kit, among a few other miscellaneous items. She supposed the implication was that she should make herself presentable before she arrived. She glanced down at her rather ragged brown shirt, pants, and muddy sandals. Not exactly the most impressive outfit. This was the first time in a long time that it might matter though. She hadn't had much time before she had been shuffled onto the carriage, so if she was going to make an effort she supposed she should do it now.

Ling Qi glanced toward the locked door on the other side of the carriage, then back toward the window. There was enough space at least, it really seemed like the carriage was meant for several people. Maybe that was just her poor upbringing showing though. In any case, after another moment spent contemplating the contents of the satchel she drew the shutter down over the window and got to work changing.

Some time later, Ling Qi sat back down with a frown on her face, idly smoothing the wrinkles out of the amazingly soft gray fabric of the outfit she now wore. It was… nice, but she hadn't worn a dress in years. At least it didn't pinch and cling like the ones Mother used to try and make her wear though. It felt loose instead, and was layered and cut on the bottom half to allow for easy movement. It was annoyingly loose around her hips though, she had to bunch of the sash and tie it twice. At least the wide, billowy sleeves would be good for concealing her hands. She could probably hide things inside them pretty easily with a bit of work.

The embroidery of clouds and stylized wind currents were kind of nice too. She still felt uncomfortable though. It felt strange to wear something that probably cost more than team of horses or a small house. Well to her guess anyway, maybe whatever this was made of was the Immortal equivalent of sack cloth? She glanced down at the mirror in her hands. There weren't any cosmetics provided thankfully, so apparently they didn't expect her to dress up that much. There had been a few hairpins though, made of some kind of painted bone. She thought they went well with her bright blue eyes, which was nice for a change. That was her best feature in her own opinion. No one else in her home town had eyes that shade after all.

Not that her effort at pinning up her hair in some resemblance of order had prevented the eternally stubborn strands from falling back into her eyes. She snorted as she blew the unruly strands out of her face. She'd probably need some kind of magic to manage that. As she put the mirror away and reached for the clean sandals that had been under the uniform the carriage suddenly jerked, almost sending her tumbling headfirst into her bag. Snapping a hand up to grab the frame of the window, she managed to steady herself.

"Be ready, we're nearly at the entrance plaza," she recognized it as the voice of the man who was driving the carriage. He hadn't spoken to her directly, but she had heard him talking to the recruiter. He had seemed… less formal than she would imagine an immortal to be, and had even given her an encouraging smile as she passed the two adults to enter the carriage. Lifting the shutter that she had pulled down over the window she saw that they were now moving along at a much more normal pace, and were traveling up a meandering mountain path. Somehow the inside of the carriage remained level despite the slope though.

"I will be ready ready shortly," Ling Qi called back after a moment's hesitation, apparently whatever had been blocking the sounds from outside was gone. She could hear birdsong, the wind and the sound of the horse's hooves again. "H-how, long do I have?" She asked tentatively a moment later, frown at the hesitant stutter that had come out despite her best efforts. She was nervous, true, but she couldn't let them see that. One thing she had learned quite well by now was that the appearance of confidence was important.

"Oh, you've got a few more minutes yet," the man called back in a lackadaisical tone. "The Sect doesn't like ya speeding on the mountain, well for those of us stuck on the ground anyway."

Ling Qi blinked, was he implying that some would be arriving by flight? She had heard stories… but had thought that mostly the domain of the mountain barbarians. "Thank you. I'll just be a moment," it felt strange reverting to the speech Mother had taught rather than the more relaxed kind she had gotten used to in the last few years, but it felt like a good idea. If there was one thing Mother had been right about it was that first impressions mattered.

Shaking off such thoughts for the moment she reached down for the sandals, she would need to be ready.


When the carriage finally came to a stop Ling Qi felt she was prepared as much as she could be given that she didn't precisely know what was coming next. The driver hadn't said anything else, and neither had she occupied as she was with trying to focus and not allow the nervous thoughts that kept flitting through her head to show.

There was a thud from outside and the sound of footsteps walking around the carriage as she stood, smoothing the wrinkles in her new uniform self consciously. Shortly thereafter there was another click and then the door opened, revealing the driver. It was difficult to read his age, or anything really given how well covered he was. He wore a strange wide brimmed hat hung with paper slips covered in odd symbols, which served also to conceal his face along with the high collar of his deep blue robe. Still he somehow managed to give the impression that he was smiling. "Need a hand getting down?" He asked pleasantly, offering a hand, which you noticed was gloved.

"I'll be fine, thank you," Ling Qi responded with confidence she didn't quite feel, hesitating only a moment before picking up the now lightened satchel and stepping down, moving slowly to avoid tripping on the hem of her dress. As she reached the bottom of the steps she finally got a look at her surroundings. The two of them stood on a wide stone plaza built onto a cliff. She could see the steep road they had traveled to get her vanishing into the mist below past the ornate gate that broke the stone fence that marked the edge of the plaza.

There was only a single building here, a large two story structure with a high peaked roof that reminded her both of a temple and the scholars testing hall from her home. Other than that the plaza was dotted with small, tastefully arranged gardens centered around tall peach trees. There was a trickle of people still going into the building dressed familiar uniforms, as well as several other carriages similar to her own each with their own eclectically dressed driver.

"Hey, might not want to stand around staring too long," she startled as the drivers laconic voice jolted her from her thoughts. Ling Qi glanced over at him and then back to the central building. He was already facing away from her working to free the odd blue furred horses from their harness. "You're in the last group of arrivals, so one of the elders will be down soon to lay out the rules. You're assigned to hall four by the way," he patted one of the horses on the neck, drawing a snort from the beast as he turned back to face her.

Ling Qi still hadn't gotten a proper look at his face, but somehow the tilt of his head gave the impression that he was examining her, making her straighten her posture unconsciously. "Thank you," she responded after a second. "And… where is hall four?" She added after a moment. "And is there anything else I should know?"

"In the front door, just follow the signs," he responds dismissively, crossing his arms. The act tugs the long sleeves of his robe up, showing that his gloves extend at least to his elbows. He takes a second to say his next words, once again giving her the feeling of being appraised. "The Elders will lay out the rules, just be respectful," he adds in a lazy tone. "But… my advice, find some friends and be quick about it. Loners tend to have trouble, you can't watch your back all the time, you know?" His monstrosity of a hat tilts to the side, and you get the impression that he's smiling again. "Call it advice from a senior who was in a similar spot."

She… had never been particularly good at making friends, but she could take friendly advice with good grace. "Thank you again. I should be on way though," her voice was more hesitant than she would have liked. She turned to head toward the building but paused after a step or two. "Might I know your name?" She asked. It seemed silly to not at least introduce herself to someone who seemed at least marginally helpful.

"Dong Fu," He responded easily, turning back to his horses. "You're right though, get going, you don't want to be late, and I already got your name."
 
I wonder. Is Dong Fu descended from the cloud tribes? He is from Wang's land which are known for their aggressive assimilation policy, his mother was a second wife which doesn't seem to be a thing for imperials (concubines are a thing but I have not seen any mentions of a second wife before), he covers his head to avoid rubbing something in, his horse has the same name as him and his rebuttal of being bad at names seems like an amusing joke to the both.

I think Dong Fu is descended from the cloud tribes and is even using some of their techs to bind his spirit beast.
 
I wonder. Is Dong Fu descended from the cloud tribes? He is from Wang's land which are known for their aggressive assimilation policy, his mother was a second wife which doesn't seem to be a thing for imperials (concubines are a thing but I have not seen any mentions of a second wife before), he covers his head to avoid rubbing something in, his horse has the same name as him and his rebuttal of being bad at names seems like an amusing joke to the both.

I think Dong Fu is descended from the cloud tribes and is even using some of their techs to bind his spirit beast.
Maybe, yeah.

There's also something up with the Hill Tribes though - remember the distinctions Alingge drew about her "heart companion".
 
"She offended certain people just by breathing at this point."
I am super proud of this acchievement, and wish to continue in this tradition, some people need to be offended.
 
I think Dong Fu is descended from the cloud tribes and is even using some of their techs to bind his spirit beast.
It's possible Dong Fu is descended from the cloud tribes but he isn't using their techs to bind the horse. In cloud tribes tech, there's no different between the man and the horse, they become the same being with one it's man self and another beast self. Dong Fu and his horse are not the same entity so no cloud tribe bond for them.
 
It's possible Dong Fu is descended from the cloud tribes but he isn't using their techs to bind the horse. In cloud tribes tech, there's no different between the man and the horse, they become the same being with one it's man self and another beast self. Dong Fu and his horse are not the same entity so no cloud tribe bond for them.
But they share the same name, and the reason given, being bad at names, seemed humorous to them. So my guess is that there is a reason that both man and horse share the same name.

Your right that it isn't likely a full cloud bond, but I bet its something much more than a normal imperial bonding. Probably close to Allinge's heart companion thing. Whatever that means.
 
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