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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Twelve)

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I'm gonna say no one is that surprised the peace conference happened to either be a trap or was followed by an attack. And I mean that in a good way, because man you have set a few interesting things so far.
 
Mr Zoat said:
"I remember the cake. The internet remembers the cake. Two hundred years from now, alien civilisations that have never met a Human before will address me as 'The Cake Man'. "
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It would be funny if the Maltusians brought it up, at this point.

Mr Zoat said:
"I settled those lawsuits." I did.
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I feel like the lawsuits would be less the cake, and more the eye thing? And to be fair that would be a better essay subject. Although I guess causing shortages of food for like several states probably had broader fallout than eyes.

Mr Zoat said:
"But what are you suppose to contrast it to? I mean… Weird stuff like that has been happening since at least the Second World War, right? You'd have to try living on my old homeworld for a while to get a baseline comparison."
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DC society is strange in terms of how it adapted to this kind of thing. You'd think they'd have established laws for superheroics accidentally causing things by now?
 
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We hear the skittering of claws against the smooth floor surface before Wolf careens into view. She dashes up to Kon first, sniffing at his legs with her tail frantically wagging before rearing up on her hind legs to try and lick his face. She's nearly fully grown now, but since she's only a little heavier than a normal Wolf despite her strength Kon's more than capable of supporting her weight. He smiles, trying to avoid her tongue while he rubs the sides of her face with both hands. "Yeah, I've missed you too, girl."

She gives him another five seconds of licking and nuzzling before leaning over towards me, her paws still supported by Kon's shoulders. I go to rub the top of her head only for her to turn her muzzle in order to sniff and lick my hand. "Yes, I've missed you as well, you horrible, smelly, ambulatory rug you."

She makes a snort of exhale-snort noise, then returns her attention to Kon.

"And I'm sure Teekl will be dashing around the corner to see me any moment now." I nod. "Any moment."

"rWuff." Wolf drops down, gives me a quick sniff and then circles around us in what looks like an attempt to herd us towards the kitchen.
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Mr Zoat said:
Wolf circling around for a moment before taking up station at her father's feet. Kon turns slightly to look at her as she snuggles against his shoulder.
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*sniff*
*wipes away tears*

We missed you too, Wolf. :)
Mr Zoat said:
"The rebel leader Teth Adom was attending a peace conference in-."

"Ring, zeta tube."

"Compliance."
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I like how something as simple as "Ring, zeta tube." and "Compliance." can sound so badass. Shit's going down.

A few typos:
Mr Zoat said:
some idiot who's evil plan
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whose
Mr Zoat said:
ignore all the rule of society-"
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rules (?)
Mr Zoat said:
where someone merge with a giant snake and make a giant cake in the air."
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merges (?)
makes (?)
Dunno whether it's a Britishism to use "someone" as plural.
Mr Zoat said:
and devastating attach
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attack
 
Mr Zoat said:
She dashes up to Kon first, sniffing at his legs with her tail frantically wagging before rearing up on her hind legs to try and lick his face. She's nearly fully grown now,
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Wait that doesn't make sense since in the show Wolf can simply stand normally and be at Kons' height so it stands to reason she is not fully grown yet.
@Mr Zoat is this a case of Paul simply not knowing that Wolf is still growing or is she different somehow?
 
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Mr Zoat said:
"We had to deal with some idiot who's evil plan was to lure Superman in and shoot him with a bowel disruptor."
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"whose"

Mr Zoat said:
We live in a world where someone merge with a giant snake and make a giant cake in the air."
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"someone can merge"

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"But what are you suppose to contrast it to?
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"supposed"

Mr Zoat said:
"Statistically, very little crime actually involved supervillains.
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"involves"
 
Mr Zoat said:
"I, um… Yoooou.. remember the cake."

"I remember the cake. The internet remembers the cake. Two hundred years from now, alien civilisations that have never met a Human before will address me as 'The Cake Man'. "
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"Don't worry Paul, I'm sure that if you manage to uplift the entire human race with tech and magic you'll get a brief mention of that after people regonize you for the cake."
 
Chaoswind said:
She is unlikely to stick her neck for someone as useless as all but deposed Dictator #3.

Its very likely the asshole used to opportunity without telling queen bee.

Then again I could be wrong.
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This is Queen Bee. She probably sees Teth Adom as an obstacle to gaining dominion over his country, too. And the old regime would be indebted to her if she saved their asses, or something, by politically discrediting or smearing Teth Adom.

Sithking Zero said:
He was meeting with QUEEN BEE. How did no one see this coming?
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Funny, because everyone in the thread immediately saw it coming. Paul kinda picked up the Idiot Ball and held onto it like a life-preserver, there.
 
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Mr Zoat said:
"…story tonight, after a lull in fighting while emergency food aid was provided to Cairo, hopes of a negotiated settlement appear to have been dashed by a sudden and devastating attach on the rebel stronghold of Shiruta." I stare at the screen in shock as I see fires and explosions across the city I was in only a few days ago. The people I... "The rebel leader Teth Adom was attending a peace conference in-."
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Well I guess we now know why Queen Bee wanted the meeting, she wanted to get him out of town for the attack.
 
Oh I am slain! said:
A few typos:
whose

rules (?)

merges (?)
makes (?)
Dunno whether it's a Britishism to use "someone" as plural.

attack
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Avernus said:
Typos: "supposed" "involves"
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Thank you, corrected.
Massgamer said:
Wait that doesn't make sense since in the show Wolf can simply stand normally and be at Kons' height so it stands to reason she is not fully grown yet.
@Mr Zoat is this a case of Paul simply not knowing that Wolf is still growing or is she different somehow?
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You may wish to reread Beta Male and Revolution. In this timeline, the Wolf pack never had Venom Buster used on them. The Wolf that became Wolf in canon died in Louisiana with the rest of the pack. WTR Wolf is a Danner Enhancile only.
 
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Sylvie-chan said:
GOOD LORD none of that is proper lupine anatomy. I know she's been messed with but yikes! And what is that stuff on the inside of her legs, exposed muscle..?
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Well she was upgraded by super science/magic formula and yes that is exposed muscle but for some reason those subjected to Cobra-Venom suffer few negative affects from it.

Also real life Dire Wolfs used to be that big a long time ago.
Mr Zoat said:
Wolf circling around for a moment before taking up station at her father's feet. Kon turns slightly to look at her as she snuggles against his shoulder.
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I know you mean M'gann but to me at least it feels like the sentence could be talking about Wolf since she is also a she.

@Mr Zoat about my question about Wolfs' size?
 
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...This is most likely going to end up with Paul Assimilating and/or Branding people.
Can someone play The Curb-stomp Song, it's going to be extremely relevant for the next part.
 
Can Paul and the team even get involved in this situation?

Isn't the Justice League told or at least highly encouraged not to get involved in country affairs like this since to most of the world the "actual government" is simply trying to take down "rebels?"

I mean Adom can get away with it being independent but as is there could be negative affects if those connected to the Justice League get involved which might very well be the Lights' plan since they have to know that OL being friends with Adom would step in to help.

Not to mention once Adom hears his rage will be great which can lead to bad things that the international community might react negatively to.
 
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