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A volley of crumbler rounds destroys
in one day
Given how far ahead
I'm not sure of the best punctuation to use here, but I don't think it's a semicolon. Maybe a hyphen?
Your Honour
multiple-exit Gates
So:
false equivalence
"either" doesn't fit
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He made an odd noise at the end of the word.
Gate that uses
turns his head slightly.
to be back
I'd have thought
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Was "attention" left out deliberately?
Probably.
to my first point:
; not much point
as well as -if not better than- the
at the pavement
gives me a look
so we're clear:
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Macduff
(occurs twice)

Macbeth
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I'm not convinced.
villainy
eye contact
so: jacket
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I.. thought
buried all the way in
pose to herself
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Are the italics misplaced? I would have put them on "ate".
No, that's fine.
President Adam's
the whole 'states' rights' thing
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Let me guess, his eyes become tiny tiny tiny yellow stars. Giving him both a support ability to kryptonians and a devastating weapon against foes.

Love him expainibg to his friends his time in Vega. Kinda wish it was unredacted information, though talking up the tamaranings could be pleasant, I hope he asks Alan to make a blue power ring and does offer it to starfire, having multiple lanterns working together will definitely help during blackest night, or offering each lantern a second colored ring. And hmm I hate s
To say it but wouldn't kal el be an excellent blue lantern?
 
Thread 12 is about as big as threads 1-11 put together.
Thread 11 has 2127 pages, so that still isn't quite true.
I hope he asks Alan to make a blue power ring and does offer it to starfire
Alan is nowhere near ready for doing something like that.
To say it but wouldn't kal el be an excellent blue lantern?
No. Oh, he'd be able to recharge in just about any population centre on Earth, but that's about it. His own comprehension of hope or feelings of hope aren't anything particularly special, and his application of his abilities is strictly 'superhero conservative'.
 
No. Oh, he'd be able to recharge in just about any population centre on Earth, but that's about it. His own comprehension of hope or feelings of hope aren't anything particularly special, and his application of his abilities is strictly 'superhero conservative'.
So he's like Batman with a Yellow Ring?
Has Paul thought about pairing the Justice League members with Power Rings? As a thought exercise I mean.
 
So he's like Batman with a Yellow Ring?
Has Paul thought about pairing the Justice League members with Power Rings? As a thought exercise I mean.
Honestly with how I understand that rings work in this setting. It'd be green rings all around as a primary color. Just because that's the kind of people super heroes are, sure they would have a good secondary color that they could go with, but I'd think green would be the easiest for any of them to use.
 
Alan is nowhere near ready for doing something like that.

No. Oh, he'd be able to recharge in just about any population centre on Earth, but that's about it. His own comprehension of hope or feelings of hope aren't anything particularly special, and his application of his abilities is strictly 'superhero conservative'.
They have potentially quite a long time to one day make blue rings.

I think supes would do well with a blue ring, he won't be inovative or flexable like paul, but combined with his incredible speed and adding a environmental field makes him more capable to survive. And Plus I see him using it more as a healing tool than anything else. Its one of the things kryptonian abilities fail at
 
Yes but there's a few people who could rock multiple rings, and remember avarice has its weaknesses to certain threats, having alternate type power rings plugs up a point of fault, like how he's getting blaze as a backup magic user, the fact is his close ties with Allan perhaps the first blue lantern opens them up to forming a multi ring corps, no rush but it is quite possibly one of the greatest things Paul could accomplish.
 
Oh I had a thought based on the Vertigo title Midnight, Mass.

In that title, the monster tribes official policy is to hide and hope that humanity leaves them alone.

Some, however, decide to go to the other extreme with "This planet isn't big enough for the both of us, sucks for you squishy meatbags that we can rip your limbs off and then beat you to death with them."

So makes me wonder how Paul and Gravy would handle the situation. Integrate them into human society? Find/make them a homeland away from humanity? Mass produce shapeshifting charms to help them hide in plain sight?
 
So whats going on with that prison complex and nature preserve (Un-extinction) that Grayven built on another celestial body in the Sol system?

Edit: I think Genomorphs where maintaining them both?
 
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13th September
15:18 GMT -6


I watch as most of my team retreats to what I think is supposed to be minimum safe distance. Canis doesn't go far back, but he's definitely retreated for his personal safety. Even Wolf doesn't need prompting to leave her father's side. Then I turn away from them and look out across the Chihuahuan Desert sands, and… At the wide swath that isn't so much desert as it is glass.

I generate construct armour and look at Kon a little nervously. "What exactly did Helios do?"

"Well, it's kinda…" He gestures vaguely in the direction of the end of the strip of glass. "Plasma. Like from the sun. Helios' magic lets me control it…" He follows my gaze, looking at the glass. "Sorta."

"Which… Bit of the sun?"

"The instruments got melted, but from the color Robin worked out that it's probably the same as the sun's surface."

"Six thousand Kelvin?"

He shrugs. "Fifty-eight hundred."

I look left and right. "Can I assume that Helios also gave you some sort of-?"

"Heat containment, yeah, I know. Robin and Wally spent all evening trying to work out how it works. It looks like anything hit directly gets the full heat, but everything near it just gets…" He flicks his right hand at the glass. "A bit melted instead."

"So are you actually going to show me, or what?"

He takes a solid stance, looking forwards. "Can you put up a target or something? It's easier if I've got something to aim at."

I send a series of filaments around the outside of the glass lane and then bring them together about 500 metres away, generating an archery target where they meet.

"Any good?"

There's a tiny puff of white-orange flame from Kon's eyes and then-.

My rings darken everything and all that I can see is an incandescent beam of blinding light blazing forth from Kon's eyes. My target construct is obliterated, and the glass-coated rock behind it gets turned back into its molten state before Kon blinks and shuts it off again.

Ring, how hot was that?

Observations of beam temperature are inconsistent. Plasma stream most likely between two thousand and six thousand degrees Kelvin.



That's quite hot. Actually, that's-.

I smirk at him. "That's hotter than Kal-El's, isn't it?"

"Ah… Maybe? A bit? I don't think it would work so well if I tried using it for spot-welding, though."

"His doesn't work for spot-welding. Yeah, he can melt steel together, but it usually messes up the structure of whatever he does it to so much that it's only good for temporary fixes. Why did you think they had all those cranes around the Metro-Narrows Bridge last August?"

Okay, air temperature is… Not much elevated, and the hurricane force winds that should accompany something like that have predictably failed to materialise. I drop my construct armour and visually examine the burned swath of desert before us for a moment before turning towards Kon. There's a slight orange glow in the centre of each pupil, but he doesn't otherwise look affected. No burns on his face or armour, which is a good sign. Hang on, if plasma is coming from each eye separately, shouldn't-? No, I guess Helios took that into consideration.

"I didn't actually go back." He blinks again and the light fades completely. "I think you've probably spent more time in Metropolis than I have."

Huh… Hadn't really… Put that together. I suppose that after Kal-El confirmed his decision to have nothing to do with him, there really wasn't any reason to. "Does it always come out the same?"

"No, I can… Cut it down a little."

"And can you turn it up?"

He looks at me, then at the molten sand, then back at me. "You really think that's a good idea?"

"Not on a planet, but if we're heading out into space…"

He doesn't look too sure. "Isn't the Rao system radioactive? And full of Kryptonite?"

"No, not.. really. The runaway fusion reaction that destroyed Krypton didn't convert all of its mass into Kryptonite, and Krypton's mass was only slightly more than Earth's is. There's a belt of Kryptonite-rich asteroids in Krypton's former orbit, plus Krypton's moons, but the rest of the system is barely more radioactive than the Sol system. And we know Kryptonians visited their system's other planets. Heck, depending on what happened to Wegthor there might even be salvageable ships there."

"What, you don't know? Haven't you had a look already?"

I frown. "Go to Krypton without you? No, of course not." He nods, and I notice the rest of the team coming back from their safe hiding point. "I did go to Daxam, but that was by accident and I.. didn't hang around."

"How do you go to a planet by accident?"

Wallace jogs up slightly ahead of the pack. "Oh El did what by accident? I mean, Spider, so, what else?"

"This." I raise my left fore and middle fingers to my forehead and step out then

13th September
16:22 GMT -5


back in again. "Good afternoon Mister Garrick."

Mister Garrick looks up from behind his magazine. "Ah… Oh, hey Paul."

I pick up his old helmet. "Glad to see you've recovered from the possession. Could I please borrow this?"

"If.. you really want, but-."

"Thank you!"

And out.


13th September
15:23 GMT -6


And back holding the helmet. "I learned to teleport."

I pass Wallace the helmet, which he takes and quickly checks over. "Couldn't you do that anyway?"

"No, this is far faster."

He slumps slightly. "How much faster?"

"Instant to.. anywhere in the universe where there's a person whose desires I can recognise."

"Eh-?" He shakes his head. "No, why am I even surprised?" Something occurs to him. "Hey, do you think your constructs are strong enough to block Superboy's heat vision?"

"Dunno." My construct armour flares back into being. "Let's find out."
 
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