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That version hasn't undergone enlightenment, and as such doesn't either have empathic vision or know that it's a thing.

He also wasn't anywhere near Earth when that happened, wouldn't know that the nifty alien power source which looks nothing like the Infinity Stones in the comic actually is an Infinity Stone and wouldn't wear Iron Man derived armour when the alien stuff he has access to is so much better.

And there isn't much point in re-enacting something that happened in the canon film with the SI taking Iron Man's place. If the SI had been there, Black Widow would have had a better gun.

But apart from that, pretty good!

I know, I just wanted Rage Enlightenment Bruce :V

EDIT: I hadn't meant to imply that MCU Paul's armour was of Stark derivation, I had been envisioning it as some custom alien-derived tech he brought with him upon his return to Earth.

Though I do think he ought to be able to figure out that the 'super glowy purple stone that incinerates normal people who touch it and puts out literally infinite energy with no discernible source even to power ring scans' - when there's nothing in evidence in the MCU that even approaches a power ring (double edit: except super-duper magic stuff like the Infinity Gauntlet or Gungnir) - might be an Infinity Stone.
 
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Though I do think he ought to be able to figure out that the 'super glowy purple stone that incinerates normal people who touch it and puts out literally infinite energy with no discernible source even to power ring scans' - when there's nothing in evidence in the MCU that even approaches a power ring (double edit: except super-duper magic stuff like the Infinity Gauntlet or Gungnir) - might be an Infinity Stone.
Honestly, his first guess is more likely to be M'Kraan Crystal.
 
Edit: Mr.Zoat, the last time we saw the First Orange Ring it had a 100,000% charge because Larfleeze charged it in his sleep. Does it still have that charge or did it get dumped when Hinon inspected the ring before handing it off to Paul?
It was drained:

At the moment Larfleeze is still wearing the system I put on his head in the caves. He's still wearing his ring as well. Taking it off in advance was just too much of a risk. Once the.. 'blue cell' starts work the ring will rapidly be drained of power, and there's a small and very secure slot for a drone to drop it into once he's sufficiently out of it for that to be practical.
 
I imagine it was probably both. Once the ring was out of direct proximity to the Orange Light Fountain, it stopped having stupid amounts of power and returned to having normal amounts of power. But even normal amounts of power is still going to trigger the "MY RING" reaction, so that's going to need siphoned off to the point of uselessness so that Larfleeze is no longer being driven to possess it.
 
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everyone in the village

magic practices

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terminates in a frayed

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To be fair, over half the times when Paul was out of power, he had the time to recharge from his lantern. It's just he didn't carry it with him until after he left Earth. First because it wasn't connected to the central power battery, then because he was worried about people trying to steal it.* It's a good thing too, since the one time his subspace pocket does get stolen, the Ophidian would have eaten people he was in a truce with.

* Seriously, that's probably much more of a concern for an Earth lantern than almost anywhere else in the Galaxy.
 
They aren't that bad - apathetic to humanity, maybe, but not purposefully malicious.
No, but they're dumb enough to try and rob someone, and if there's comeuppance for that, it's on them.

I'm not saying they -deserve- it ethically. No one deserves that, but that if it had happened, it'd be their own fault and I wouldn't feel bad.
 
So, @Mr Zoat Paul has transferred at least parts of his ring's database to Controllers. Did that transfer include his arcane knowledge database? Garrick and Danner formulas, Atlantean knowledge books, and the OCPs, such as Constantine's scry ward schematics, Blue Lantern's arcane containment designs, demon-to-elemental conversion runic designs, and, finally, Lord-of-X ascension rituals? I am asking because:
1) Light alignment thing Maltusians do seems vaguely related to Lord-of-X ascension, but the latter might be usable for any species, essentially potentially allowing one to bypass the need for lanterns completely, giving "younger races" inherent glow manipulation abilities, turning lanterns into Lords-of-Color-X, and living lanterns. That could be a big upgrade for, say, OL honor guard. Hell, potentially it could even be an upgrade for Maltusians themselves.

2) Given what happened to John Constantine, Paul both needs to find something to help John, even if John told Paul "not to call him", and someone to act as his arcane consultant. Maltusians are smart, Maltus is likely arcanely active, and Paul has lots of nifty knowledge of the arcane to start at least some of them on the arcane research, potentially ending in some of them becoming friendly lords of order.

3) Paul has the "demons, the spotter's guide" with him, and Maltus is equipped with very advanced containment cells. At least some problems could probably be mitigated by summoning and imprisoning powerful demons on Maltus.
 
IIRC right after OL usurped Lantern Stuart's ring and was going through the database, it's mentioned that qwa matter is antmatter's ADHD little brother. This implies that the "antimatter universe" isn't exactly antimatter as it was described in the last update.
 
I actually think that that's just a matter of him being excited, rather than stressed or hurt.

He cursed a blue streak back on Earth 50, when he was shot with a radion blaster and then blown up with a suitcase nuke.
But that was before he decided to be a good Daddy to Lynn, which means no swearing (even when she's not around, so that he doesn't do it accidentally when she is)
 
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all he could think

these ideas

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Find an act of killing

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Israelite's servitude
Israelites' servitude

Moses' followers

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two of her subordinates

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are in anyone's interest

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short-barrelled

Kon holds him off

dependent on

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instead of there being

are impact absorbing gel
are impact absorbing gels

sets her down and regains
sets her down and she regains

before it finished announcing
before it finishes announcing

slashed my metal barrier
slashes my metal barrier

coastal settlements

Teth Adom
 
Authority (supplementary, Renegade option)
22nd August
13:11 GMT


Miss Amane grins at me as I step through the boom tube, arms folded behind my back. "All clear, Master!"

"Yes…" I look around at the brutally deconstructed remains of the high caste Dominators who used to run this place. "So I see. Any remaining resistance?"

"Master." She shakes her head disappointedly. "I would not have said 'all clear' if there were any left alive."

No, you wouldn't, would you? I nod as I walk over to their research computer and extend a construct connection between it and Mother Box. "The minefield?"

"In perfect working order, Master. And the G-Trolls have already installed the boom tube jammer." I turn and walk towards her, causing her to come to attention. And look a little nervous, actually.

I raise my right hand and pat her on the head with it. "Thank you."

"Master!"

"I am also grateful for your work on the Wombworld and on Karna. Many Genomorphs, Karnans and Karaltinians owe you their lives for the devastating effect you had on their defences. And I'm sorry that I haven't made time to speak to you in person since."

"I-I am happy to serve, Master!"

"And I am privileged to have your loyalty." Hm. It would be extremely useful to keep this place in one piece. None of what we took from Emana really says Command Centre to me, but we haven't even started work on that ship-scale boom tube, and… Ugh, getting the minefield would require one even bigger. I lift my hand from her head. "Would you please escort me to Mister Dox?"

She nods, steps back and waves her scythe at the air to her left. There's the expected bang as the boom tube opens. With all but one of the hush tubes being devoted to the logistical effort of moving materials and personnel around in Vega and the last being left available to the Blacks, she and I are left with boom tubes. I… Thinking about it, I should probably get her a Mother Box of her own at some point. I was going to leave off getting one for Lynne until she left High School, but Miss Amane is in the field now… Unfortunately there isn't really anything else I can offer Himon that won't risk Father… Expressing his displeasure.

And speaking to him again

I follow Miss Amane through the portal and into what was once the command centre, a couple of G-Elves working at removing the bloodstains. I give them a polite nod before turning my attention to Mister Dox. There's a G-Gnome perched on a chair next to him while the man himself is splitting his attention between the various holoscreens around him.

"Mister Dox. If I might have a moment of your time?"

He doesn't look around. "Yes."

"I am unfamiliar with Coluan social customs, but in most places it's considered polite to look at the person speaking to you."

"I believe that you are correct. An inefficient social custom."

"True, but just this once I expect you to put up with it." Acknowledge Your Sovereign!

His eyes dip, a quiet sigh escaping from his lips as he pauses the flow of information and swivels his chair around. "Grayven of Apokolips. A world not known for its people's largesse. I presume that you want me for something."

"Oh, I haven't been home for a while. I've picked up all sorts of bad habits. Mercy, compassion, love..." I smile. "But, yes, I do want you for something. Getting good use out of the G-Gnome there?"

"It is convenient to have another input channel beyond those I naturally possess. It also gave me the opportunity to confirm that my telepathic defences were as strong as I believed them to be."

"Good man. Sensible use of your time and resources." I generate a construct chair and sit down a short distance from him. "I've got a job for you. I think that it will engage your full intellect for… At least a year, and I'm happy to let you use your spare time to pursue other projects. Should you have any."

"What do you want me to do?"

"Two jobs really. Prime Minister of Tamaran and Clarissi of the Orange Lantern Corps."

He blinks three times rapidly. "Explain."

"I recently removed an oppressive government from the Vega Systems, and now Tamaran has the opportunity to rebuild itself. I was able to secure some orbital infrastructure so you wouldn't be working from scratch, but there's little infrastructure on the planet and dozens of potentates with their own priorities ready to fight you on every decision. A good deal of your job will involve keeping them on-side and focused on the task."

"Explain Orange Lantern Corps."

I raise my left hand to show him the sigil on my ring. "Orange power rings. They run on avarice rather than willpower. I've got one for you if you take the job."

Ping!

"Oh, and they can have adverse effects on the minds of their users. The first fellow to try using one for any length of time turned into a total basket case. I haven't really noticed anything too bad." For a moment I look at my arms and try to imagine the response of my former self to what I've done to myself.



Huh.

Okay, but I don't think it was the orange light doing that.

"Point is-" I fold my arms back behind my back. "-that I'd also like you to organise the Corps. Most of it will be creating working procedures, recruitment and training programs, managing resources in relation to my directives… Essentially being my Chief Executive. At the moment there are fewer than two hundred Lanterns but that number can increase for as long as they stay mentally stable and we have a use for them." I smile faintly. "You will not get an offer like this from anyone else."

"And if I refuse?"

I shrug. "Then I'll drop you off on the planet of your choosing and wish you all the best. That's pretty much what I'm going to do with everyone else here." But who would I take on in his place? Maybe… An AI of some kind? I never did bother asking after Red Inferno…

"Some of the people here are violent criminals."

"And? If you hand people over to the Dominators you rather lose the right to complain about their custodial failures. To anyone but them, anyway."

"And if I accepted your offer, then wanted to leave later?"

"You could… Your severance package would depend on exactly how much of a pickle you were leaving us in. Set things up and train a replacement first and I might even let you keep your ring." I half turn away. "Come on, the sooner you get started-."

"I haven't accepted yet."

I stop. "What were you planning to do with your freedom, Mister Dox? Start your own White Hat mercenary band, wasn't it?"

"You saw the recordings."

"No." I really didn't. Honest. But the G-Gnomes confirmed my comic-related memories before Miss Amane pulled him out. "But even your actions are predictable within a given range. Now, you're an intelligent man. Perhaps you could pull it off without any seed capital, personnel or other resources at all. But it would take longer and be much harder. No, you'll come with me, even if it's just to get more information. And when you do that, you'll inevitably start thinking about how to make the whole situation work for you. And since your information about anywhere else would be worse…" I shrug. "I'll see you when you yield to common sense."
 
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I see absolutely no way Renegade's attitude and Vril Dox's... even more attitude will not result in a perfectly productive working relationship.

*runs for the hills*

EDIT: He doesn't have Paragon's empathic abilities so he has absolutely no idea the kind of emotional reaction landmines of red characters he was tripping over here.
 
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I see absolutely no way Renegade's attitude and Vril Dox's... even more attitude will not result in a perfectly productive working relationship.

*runs for the hills*

Eh, I suspect after some initial annoyance he will be satisfied with the arrangement. Paul is more indirect, more willing to create the illusion of compromise while trying to pressure you. Grayven lets you know what's expected up front, and really doesn't care to waste his time on politeness. I suspect Vril Dox would actually prefer that working arrangement, though he'll probably prefer Paul's Lantern Core.
 
I saw a recent complaint in another thread about how often para-Paul dismisses the input of others. If his Dox tried to seriously dissuade Paul from turning the Orange Corps into a military organization, do you think Paul would have considered it? Or would he have tactfully dismissed and gone back to hiring Dox to his Corp? Food for thought.


I think that this chapter shows that that trait in Grayven has grown like a tumor. Dox just became Grayven's word-manipulating genie. Paul is an angelic saint of desire while Grayven is hiding and denying his inner demon or archfiend of the sin named greed. Just look at how painful Grayven is making it for Dox to follow his desires.
 
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