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well I don't want to say "problem" and seem like I'm making light

Hurricanes are a problem. Darkseid is a problem. The Orange Light corrupting most of everyone who uses it is a problem. Churches recruiting people into religions under which they may be fated to eternal damnation is a problem. The underlying societal inefficiency that causes scientists to go mad and turn supervillain is a problem. Sexism and homophobia are also problems. Saying something is a problem doesn't necessarily make light of it.
 
I already have a problem with supertech being easily replicable. I'm certainly not going to include cheap uberregeneration and immortality. And I don't know him well enough to write him and just name-checking him feels cheaty.

Given that the entire series was based around magic, and that xombis as a whole, not just David Kim, were immortal, magical entities, I think it's perfectly safe to say that his powers aren't so easily replicable, or else some of the magical organizations in Xombi would have tried it. The only difficult thing to explain away is the functional nanoinfrastructure (sp?) shown in the first few issues.
 
There's really no point, it was mentioned that he was turned into a construct not long after the orange light fountain was stolen and they hadn't advanced power ring technoly very far yet so odds are that the knowledge he had would be around the same as the controllers.
And its not like Hinon knows less than he does; he predates the Green Lantern Corps.
This is entirely missing the point. The ring is a Guardian. Power Rings are only the latest thing they did with the Green Light. They also made the manhunders to use it. And non-manhunter robots and ships powered by the Green light, as we saw episode with the Burning Martian. And have used the Green Light themselves long before that. They know all sorts of things you can do with the light.
In theory, they can learn to. Few do.
This is something the first learned was possible from the ring, manipulating Will with the green light. Something that could be ported over to other rings, like Orange Light manipulating Desire. But the real treasure trove would be plain old regular tech schematics, of Malthusan Tech level. The database OL got from nomming Stewarts Ring never had the the best version the of a piece of tech the Guardians knew about, just examples of other nations tech that a lantern might face in his career.

This is a chance to get a unredacted tech database, not what someone else feels like handing out.

Because the SI wants to maintain good relations with the Guardians and cutting chunks out of their fallen brother's brain probably isn't a good way to do that.
What! Why would doing a data transfer to that? When you wrote out this chapter, did it cause brain damage, removing it from your brain?
 
I already have a problem with supertech being easily replicable. I'm certainly not going to include cheap uberregeneration and immortality. And I don't know him well enough to write him and just name-checking him feels cheaty.

Thank you, corrected.
The Question? I can't remember if you've used him yet, but he seems like a pretty dedicated fellow. Obsessive, even. Committed, if you want to be polite about it.
 
What! Why would doing a data transfer to that? When you wrote out this chapter, did it cause brain damage, removing it from your brain?

It may have to do with the fact that construct Lantern rings are not true power rings and may not be able to do a lot of things Power rings are normally capable of. Especially since Larfleezes ring is a prototype.
 
Certainly, there's no way he could have known.

I'm guessing this a British thing, but I'm curious how does that sentence get interpreted?
There's no way he could have done ...better? ...the job?


"no way he could have done *that*." With the unsaid "that" referring to "realize" 2 sentences earlier. ("He didn't realize.")

Possibly a little linguistically awkward, but I don't think it's outside normal vernacular.
 
Control (part 22)
21st July
06:01 GMT


Larfleeze's.. cell, gives me a mild headache just being near it. A room designed to.. nearly completely blot out the orange light. It won't exactly tear a person's soul apart, but a person would find it increasingly difficult to want things for themselves. In a way it's the opposite of the conversion crystals which the Zamarons used in the comics. Those forcibly converted people to their way of thinking, we're going to cure ours of… Not our… The way of thinking our light encourages if they lose control.

I hope he's the last person I put in here.

I glance at the Light Fountain in my left hand.

I don't believe that he will be.

The cell itself is relatively pleasant. A matter transmuter for food and.. whatever other materials the housekeeping drones require. The drones themselves are created and dismantled by the same device. We don't think that Larfleeze has any particular technical skills, but there's a risk that he might have picked them up from one of the people he assimilated. The walls, floor and furnishings are in various shades of blue. A sonic projection system is hidden behind the heavily reinforced walls and plays barely audible relaxing music. A Controller -one of the standard pattern Jevek-looking ones- is going to be here constantly to monitor Larfleeze.

I nod at… That Controller, as Hinon and I watch the trembling Larfleeze through one of the observation windows. "Did you have trouble getting a volunteer?"

"Not at all. Everyone wants to be my friend at the moment." She frowns. "A refreshing change, actually."

"From being comatose?"

That earns me a sidelong glance. "After the Manhunter Rebellion, a number of my colleagues expressed a degree of scepticism about the whole concept of sharing glow-technology with other species. It wasn't a popular field of research." Her eyes drop to the controls in front of me. "Do you intend to press that or are you going to watch him all day?"

At the moment Larfleeze is still wearing the system I put on his head in the caves. He's still wearing his ring as well. Taking it off in advance was just too much of a risk. Once the.. 'blue cell' starts work the ring will rapidly be drained of power, and there's a small and very secure slot for a drone to drop it into once he's sufficiently out of it for that to be practical.

I press the button and the air in the cell shimmers. Larfleeze himself stills, not even twitching. I can't scan him and I can't see him on empathic vision any longer. I have to stare at his chest for several moments before I'm certain that he's still breathing.

"That should do it." Hinon steps back from the observation window and starts walking towards the exit. "Do you want anything special done with his ring?"

Larfleeze's eyes open for a moment. No orange sigil. Not even any pain. They're just blank. Lifeless. He's gazing out at the universe and he doesn't understand what it is or why it's there.

They close again and I turn away.

"Do you?"

"Oh, I'd just destroy it. I'm not completely without sentimentality-" Her eyes drop to John's former ring. I wonder if she really still needs it? "-but that one doesn't have any good associations."

"No, I think we should keep it. It was the first ever orange ring."

We pass out of the cell block and into the central shaft, then rise off the ground and head upwards towards the night sky.

"All yours, then." She takes a moment to glance over the construction crew still putting this place together. This will eventually serve as our version of the Science Cell block which the Guardians have on Oa. Need to plug the Light Fountain into the Central Power Battery housing first… "I'll have it delivered to you when we finally get it off him."

"I was thinking.. more a museum or something. I don't want anyone forgetting that things like Larfleeze can happen to the rest of us as well."

"I thought you were leaving things like that up to this Clarissi candidate you still haven't told me the name of."

"Oh, sorry. Vril Dox. He's Coluan. Highly intelligent but with poor social skills. He and the other Controller-."

"Yes, the joke rather makes itself, doesn't it?"

We rise over the lip of the central shaft, getting a panoramic view of a formerly-pristine chunk of Maltusian wasteland. Now construction equipment and labourers are everywhere, the outlines of housing, training facilities and office buildings visible in several places. I can also see the dull glow as the Controllers working on the Central Power Battery housing make their last minute checks. Hinon smiles faintly at the sight before flying towards them, and I accelerate to catch up.

"Making sure the Corps is making itself useful will be his job. Making sure that its members stay sane will be mine."

"Mm." She frowns. "Aren't the Coluan people being mind controlled by a group of artificial intelligences?"

"Those were made by his father. The information I have suggests that he's in a Dominator-run prison, but I'll need to take some time to confirm that."

"Be careful if you go anywhere near Colu yourself. Losing you at this point would be awkward."

I nod. "I'd certainly hate for my mind being torn apart by monstrous AIs to be awkward for you."

"Do you intend to make a habit of saying things like that? I can see it rapidly becoming tiresome."

"Of course. You used to be Guardians. I need to make certain that you're not reverting."

"Hm."

We fly in silence for a moment, now close enough to see the detail of the Central Power Battery housing. The oval structure of it puts me in mind of a front-on view of a Portal turret. It's grey and inert at the moment, though that will change shortly. The upper part of the housing at the front is currently hinged up slightly to allow access to the internal systems into which I need to insert the Light Fountain.

"Speaking of the Guardians, I intend to stop off at Oa at some point. Zamaron as well."

"Aren't you bold. We don't have the same recent… Recentish, history with the Zamarons as we do with the Guardians. It should simplify things for you." She stops dead, something occurring to her. "If you see her, be sure to point out to Nadia Safir that she was completely wrong about the orange light necessarily excluding other colours, will you?"

"I think that a demonstration would be more effective than a lecture."

"But far less satisfying. You've no idea what that woman could be like." She turns to face me. "Sufficiently un-Guardiany for you?"

I fly on past her, heading for the opening on the casing. I had thought that the full gathering might want to show up, but it turns out that Controllers aren't big on ceremony. Once Hinon has made her checks each of the Controllers will come here and bind themselves to it individually under her supervision. The whole structure is about fourteen metres tall and about three thick at the widest point. I raise the Light Fountain, placing a hand on each side of the main body. Then I drift forward, holding it out towards the opening in the structure. The interior space looks plain, but from the parts of Hinon's description which I could follow it's a massively complicated partially extra-planar monitoring and projection system that they make look like a Lantern because that's what they used to do and there's no pressing reason to change it now. Bare, curved walls and a small plinth. I land, kneeling down to slot the Fountain in place.

Hm.

I rise off the ground and turn, flying out at speed. Hinon has come closer in order to supervise so I head her way.

"Link.. good."

As I reach her I turn, watching two of the other Controllers lower the front plate and make the unit whole.

"Bonding complete." She raises her left hand, ring glowing brilliantly. "And… Activate."

The core of the Orange Central Power Battery flares with orange light, shining almost painfully for a moment. Then the orange colour begins seeping into the rest of the structure and the core begins to calm. The light… Puts me in mind of the front of the nacelles on the original Enterprise. Moving, almost burning, but stable.

As stable as orange gets.

"And… Success. We have a functioning Central Power Battery."

We watch it for a moment, then she turns her head to face me.

"Well? What are you waiting for? Go and get me my Clarissi."
 
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Feels like the end of an era. And the beginning of a new one.

This story began on August 14th, 2013.

Here we are, nearly four years later, and the Orange Lantern Corps central power battery is online and operational.

Been a long trip, hasn't it?
 
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"Be careful if you go anywhere near Colu yourself. Losing you at this point would be awkward."

I nod. "I'd certainly hate for my mind being torn apart by monstrous AIs to be awkward for you."

"Do you intend to make a habit of saying things like that? I can see it rapidly becoming tiresome."

"Of course. You used to be Guardians. I need to make certain that you're not reverting."

"Hm."

Hinon is rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters.
 
Well, time to see if Paul's assessment of Vril Dox is correct, I've been wondering how that'll go down for a long while.

The fact that Paul will be breaking him out of prison will probably help.
 
So is the ophidian planning on going in there or staying in the lantern? Either way she'll be able to respond to and be with Paul. I'm leaning towards lantern.
 
Once the.. 'blue cell' starts
Love how it's a 'blue cell' and everything in it is blue since the Blue Light is meant to be able to weaken Orange Light.
glance over the construct crew still putting this place together.
This is likely a dumb question but when you mean construct you mean a normal construction crew right? Not Lantern constructs?

Speaking of said constructs wonder when Paul will go back to collect all the Orange Lantern Constructs and all the piled up treasure.

Sure there is stuff that could be returned and help OLC gain some brownie points. Also Constructs under Paul's control would be super useful and add to his personal army.
 
Been a long time coming. Glad that we're finally here, and looking forward to the Corps-making. In particular I really want to see the training of the first batch of Oranges. (Green Lanterns get called Greenies. Orange Lanterns can similarly be called Oranges.)
We rise over the lip of the central shaft, getting a panoramic view of formerly-pristine chunk of Maltusian wasteland. Now construct equipment and labourers are everywhere, the outlines of housing, training facilities and offices buildings visible in several places. I can also see the dull glow as the Controllers working on the Central Power Battery housing make their last minute checks.
Slightly disappointed that the OLC base will be on Maltus. Don't they have a thing about using FTL near it? That's hugely impractical for a Lantern corps. Sure, some of the administrative stuff could be there, but for basically everything else it makes more sense to put it elsewhere. It's hard to be an independent group when you're renting land from the people you don't want to be dependent on.
Feels like the end of an era. And the beginning of a new one.

This story began on August 14th, 2013.

Here we are, nearly four years later, and the Orange Lantern Corps central power battery is online and operational.

Been a long trip, hasn't it?
Tomorrow's update is set to be on the 14th of August, then two days later back to July. A look at what brings the SI to Earth 16? But then the year is wrong.
Love how it's a 'blue cell' and everything in it is blue since the Blue Light is meant to be able to weaken Orange Light.
I may be misremembering, but I believe Zoat said that the blue light is only a special weakness to Larfleeze, not orange Lanterns in general, because deep down Larfleeze hopes to be free of the influence of the orange light. If anything compassion would be the counter to orange light, because it's all about wanting things for other people, not yourself, which goes against the avaricious philosophy.
 
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I may be misremembering, but I believe Zoat said that the blue light is only a special weakness to Larfleeze, not orange Lanterns in general, because deep down Larfleeze hopes to be free of the influence of the orange light. If anything compassion would be the counter to orange light, because it's all about wanting things for other people, not yourself, which goes against the avaricious philosophy.
There's also an issue of New Guardians that has orange light being weak to orange light (in this instance specifically wielded by an Indigo), but it never shows up again and was kind of weird in the first place. Because that same comic has orange light being resistant to all the other lights which it had never been before.

Really, Lantern strengths and weaknesses are all over the place, and I prefer the explanation that each individual Lantern has their own individual weaknesses and strengths when it comes to other colors, but that most Lanterns of a specific color do tend to trend a specific way.
 
They can be selective about it and only block non-Lantern FTL; that's what OL did around Tamaran after all.
I'm sure they can, but it goes against what's already established, and it publicly advertises that Lantern FTL works perfectly well to bypass Maltus FTL exclusion. When Sinestro exists, and the SI knows that Black Lanterns and the Atrocitus Corps are at least possibilities, it seems odd. Unless the Controllers are willing to manually approve each and every entry to Maltus by individual Lanterns? If they have their own base, then the large civilian population is at least still safe behind the Maltusian firewall.
I frown. "Reach out and grab-?"

The ship shudders and oh that's weird.

Operative Rayyana nods. "Like that. No one gets to use FTL inside the system, but our bosses don't want to wait for us to report in."
 
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