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Just noticed that the first didn't say that it was HIS ring. He only said "this wonderful ring".

Could the rings have the same block as Pauls?
 
Could the rings have the same block as Pauls?
It's an interesting thought -- since they're construct-lanterns, they are technically still Larfleeze's rings.

Another thought that occurs to me: Do the construct-lantern rings have a database or AI? Or do they only have the intelligence of the assimilated being that was turned into a ring?

A final thought: Why do people keep spelling his name "Larfreeze"?
 
If a construct lantern ring has a permanent link to the orange fountain and thus not need to recharge, would they not then be superior to a regular ring? Every orange lantern should wear at least one!

How are they made? Could Paul have converted Teekl into one? Or one of his hordes of demons?
 
Just noticed that the first didn't say that it was HIS ring. He only said "this wonderful ring".

Could the rings have the same block as Pauls?
Could, if Larfleeze knew anything about ring programming. But in reality that's just how the First talks.
Another thought that occurs to me: Do the construct-lantern rings have a database or AI? Or do they only have the intelligence of the assimilated being that was turned into a ring?
That second one, though further information can be added.
If a construct lantern ring has a permanent link to the orange fountain and thus not need to recharge, would they not then be superior to a regular ring?
They would. Fortunately, they can't.
The SI doesn't know.
Could Paul have converted Teekl into one? Or one of his hordes of demons?
Theoretically.
 
"The… The power!" His servant is being reticent to his commands to control himself at this rate he will-
"I am equal to the Green Lanterns! The might of the Citadel will cover the universe with me as its greatest warrior, commander and Emperor! I shall be unstoppable!"

Energy feedback alert, connection to C451'Drolyk' lost.

A trap, a lie, the whispers of power, the promise of fulfillment, all a lie. His admiral hadn't lasted more than a few seconds after wearing the ring and he has already become one of the slaves of the beast of Okara, just like the others.

'Another failure.'

Not a single one of his subjects had survived wearing a ring, all that had attempted it had become slaves to the beast.

'And yet the outsider has managed to do it, not with one, but with two rings'

The facility internal sensors show him the battle as it happens through the eyes of one of his servants.

"I'm stealing your stuff, Larfleeze! And you can't tell where I am, can you? Because I'm clever and you're stupid! Stupid Larfleeze! Big stupid-head Larfleeze!"

'Oh, it is so obvious now.'

"You even stole my Ophidian from me!"

"My Ophidian. You're not very good at this. Maybe you should ask for help?"

Alert, connection to facility lost.

"Damyn, the orange lantern has failed our facility is compromised, whatever the method he uses to elude the attention of the beast of Okara, it isn't something he is willing to share with us."

"First. Could this capability be something natural for the species of the orange lantern?

Its possible he didn't share this knowledge because he didn't believe it was worth sharing."

"It is possible. No matter, we now know what it is we need to do to wear the rings, we need to avoid detection from the beast of Okkara long enough to learn to disable whatever he uses to kill ring wearers and if that is the only thing we need then we already have them. "


Whoops, i wasn't going to post this yet...

Oh well its not like i need to add anything...

This is my headcanon on what happened and why the Citadelians learned to use orange rings.
 
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Could, if Larfleeze knew anything about ring programming. But in reality that's just how the First talks.

That second one, though further information can be added.

They would. Fortunately, they can't.

The SI doesn't know.

Theoretically.

Hmm, with how easy he can make more of his little demons, that might not be a bad way to go about manufacturing rings.
 
**bargain ;):drevil:


The First Citadellian, literally the first of his race as all the others are clones of him (or clones of clones of clones, etc), apparently, when his body got old and he couldn't be sure of maintaining power, he faked his death and became the puppet master behind the throne.
He's thousands of years old, an accomplished military leader, and rather intelligent.


those rings are likely Construct Lanterns in ring form, which means they are directly linked to the Fountain/Orange CPB and there don't run out of power. And while they may not be fully familiar with what Orange Lanterns are capable of, they have plenty of experience with Green Lanterns and can extrapolate from that.


They likely are construct Lanterns. as someone else said, when Paul summoned his ring back from Truggs, he also caused a bunch of Construct Rings to take off into the cosmos. We already knew at least 1 stayed in the Vega system, now it looks like it was at least a half dozen that stayed there. Others scattered across the galaxy, some were tracked down and recovered by Construct Lanterns (like Blume was attempting when he came to Earth) others likely remain loose and will pop up in later story arcs.


Pretty low. The First is not all knowing, nor does Mr Zoat generally make his villains 'Kick the puppy' stereotypes. Tameran is a backwater. The Citadellians conquered it, then handed it off to the Gordanians. The First likely hasn't even heard about the FTL jamming, and it's the Gordanians' problem anyways.
Oh, and any Lantern could get through the Jamming, It's just that the Greenies don't operate in Vega and Sinestro has no reason to go to Tamaran.


Again, the rings are almost certainly construct Lanterns, which means they have a direct link to the Orange light, no need for personal lanterns. If Larfleeze was aware, he could probably order the rings to turn on them with a thought (much like what happened to the Admiral)
So, basically, Truggs screwed everything up for everyone. Again.

Please tell me that, once they secure the Orange Light Fountain, Hinon/Paul can easily locate all of the Construct Lantern/Rings and either deactivate them remotely, remotely recall them, or something along those lines. Otherwise, Orangest Night will always be a real possibility. And, frankly, I cannot imagine how they couldn't do this, since those Construct Lanterns/Rings are directly connected to the Orange Light Fountain, which Hinon designed and built--and that's not even counting what Ophidian should be able to do with free access to the Orange Light Fountain.
 
So, basically, Truggs screwed everything up for everyone. Again.

Please tell me that, once they secure the Orange Light Fountain, Hinon/Paul can easily locate all of the Construct Lantern/Rings and either deactivate them remotely, remotely recall them, or something along those lines. Otherwise, Orangest Night will always be a real possibility. And, frankly, I cannot imagine how they couldn't do this, since those Construct Lanterns/Rings are directly connected to the Orange Light Fountain, which Hinon designed and built--and that's not even counting what Ophidian should be able to do with free access to the Orange Light Fountain.

I remember an old saying mentioning that just because something sounds simple doesn't mean it is. As for remotely deactivating them it should be pointed out that technically they are lantern constructs in ring form meaning it's possible that they don't quite have the programming that allows that.

Hmm, with how easy he can make more of his little demons, that might not be a bad way to go about manufacturing rings.

Should be pointed out that that may be an extremely high level power that only someone on the avarice level of Larfleeze can pull off.
 
Anyone know of any canon DC characters not yet mentioned who would make good Orange Lanterns?

Not yet mentioned at all or not mentioned as a candidate? I could see Kadabra doing it with how you've developed him in the story, though we haven't checked in on him in a while so it's unknown if he's followed through with staying clean.

Jimmy Olson, if only to keep with tradition of him getting random power ups for an issue.

Hephaestus? Would divine resistance help resist the corruption?

Constantine? Because you've already given him two major powerups and screwed with his head, so why not throw an Orange ring and some Garrick formula into the mix.

Teth Adom

Green Arrow? If his Avarice is anything like his willpower, he wouldn't be a particularly powerful one but he should be able to stay sane.
 
Please tell me that, once they secure the Orange Light Fountain, Hinon/Paul can easily locate all of the Construct Lantern/Rings and either deactivate them remotely, remotely recall them, or something along those lines. Otherwise, Orangest Night will always be a real possibility. And, frankly, I cannot imagine how they couldn't do this, since those Construct Lanterns/Rings are directly connected to the Orange Light Fountain, which Hinon designed and built--and that's not even counting what Ophidian should be able to do with free access to the Orange Light Fountain.
meh, I'm sure there'll be at least one future story arc/sidequest that involves finding and taking down a rogue Orange Lantern. Zoat still has 3.5 years to fill after all.
 
Anyone know of any canon DC characters not yet mentioned who would make good Orange Lanterns? I was thinking of including this guy as he demonstrated that he knew what he wants and was prepared to do anything to get it.

Pamela Isley could have some pretty strong desires with no clear outlet, depending on how she took getting cut off from the Green.

Booster Gold probably doesn't exist, and might not have the self-control needed if he did. But he comes to mind.

Depending on how much the Hellblazer version had in common with its adaptions, Ritchie Simpson. A dying man who wanted to build an extradimensional utopia. Although his history with being corrupted isn't the best.

There might be some Martians who are particularly unhappy with the current state of their planet.

Really, many Red Lantern candidates could make for a reasonable recruit. Rage at the current affairs of the universe could also be channeled into desire for change, which is basically SI's objective too.

I don't know the status of Etrigan in this universe, but Jason Blood might be a consideration.
 
Control (part 21)
21st July
04:19 GMT


His right hand glows and a spatial lensing effect appears to warp the background but I'm already moving. My crumbler round fires at full power, slamming into the construct armour covering his head even as his own beam flashes out and blasts a hole into the ground behind me. His visor fails, causing him to pull his head back slightly in surprise. As I fire my cold gun he raises his left arm and forms a shield construct, blocking the shot.

Not ablative as the construct armour I use when sparring with Guy and John is, but modular. One part can fail while the rest remains strong. That's actually quite-.

Energy pulses strike my bubble shield as the First pulls back, his escort advancing behind their own floating palisade shields. Not a problem. Just keep moving and-.

A shockwave of orange radiates outwards from the First, his escort shooting upwards just before it reaches them. I immediately mirror their action, simultaneously charging and firing my railgun at the closest. His palisade evaporates where I hit but the younger Citadelians have armoured themselves. Okay. I transition behind them and reload my first railgun while forming a second-.

"Yaarh!"

The Citadelian I shot earlier transitions into my bubble barrier, stabbing with.. an Nth metal cutlass. The bubble buckles and bursts as he fortifies the armour around his right shoulder and barges towards me. I retrain my railguns and dart left, getting a clear shot at the unreinforced armour covering his back. My guns hum as the crumbler rounds strike home, construct armour shattering, armour and flesh dissolving and then the cold beam hits. In a second hoar frost covers the Citadelian's body as he plummets to the ground for a second time.

Orange rings can't fix dead.

The three survivors pull back into formation with the First, forming a combined bubble.. with multiple layers. Okay. I fire a tungsten round at the one I killed, his body exploding into frozen lumps of meat. A filament snatches the ring he carried from the broken remains of his right hand and another grabs onto the pommel of his cutlass.

Holding up my right arm I phase out to allow his ring to pass through my armour and then phase back in, the ring fitting neatly over my right ring finger. Immediately, flashes of the life of a being I can best describe as being a tentacle elephant appear in my mind. He came to Vega to find a world to settle… A long time ago. Instead, he found Larfleeze. I take hold of the cutlass hilt a moment later.

Two rings again.

Inside the Citadelian bubble my enemies appear to reach a decision. Strands connect the First to his minions and then.. for an instant I'm confused as to what I'm doing here. It swiftly passes as orange flashes around one minion and transitions him into stabbing range. I swing my cutlass to intercept his as my railguns fire! There's a tremendous clang as his natural muscles try to overpower the muscle enhancements of my armour. I bring my left hand around to push on the rear of the blade as the railguns fire, the first hit destroying his construct armour and the second-.

I jerk forwards slightly as he disappears, a momentary flicker of orange behind me indicating that one of his brethren have transitioned into melee range as well. Before he can strike I transition myself to directly above the Citadelian dome, then drop so that I'm standing on it.

Corrupt and drain.

Compliance.

The orange light in the outermost bubble roils and spins for an instant before visibly flowing up my body and into my rings. I drop down slightly onto the next level and being to repeat the process as-

Alert!

-two Citadelians flicker into being next to me. Accelerating myself I slash at the one to my right with the cutlass while the one above and behind me is met with a destructive pulse. The pulse is met with only limited success; the construct armour covering his chest fractures but doesn't quite break but he's forced to back away and abandon his swing. The swords -ugh- achieve little either. Mine cuts through his construct armour and body armour to cut a thin line across his chest while his cuts through my own construct armour and slices through the power armour covering my left forearm. But since I've got an opening…

I hunger.

Both of the Citadelians are pulled back inside the bubbles as another layer fails and is sucked into my rings. Okay, in theory I could force my way in like this, but somehow I don't think I'll need to as the Hellwraith takes full control of its new host and stabs another Citadelian in the neck with its cutlass before manifesting construct claws and grappling with him. The other two look around in astonishment, giving me the opportunity to create a laser construct attached to my right leg and fire it through the bubble at the First.

If I can see you, light can pass through your shield. Yes, only orange light in this case but it isn't hard for me to make orange light.

"Graagh!"

The First instinctively jerks aside and creates an extra barrier, neither of which impede my light speed weapon that passes through orange constructs. This is why we wear head armour. Credit to him though; he's pretty darn physically resilient anyway. Finally getting his brain in gear he reaches up into the beam of my laser with his right hand and bends spac-.

Ah! Cutting that out. He turned the laser back on me. Do I pull back and-? No, the whole area around his body is shimmering now, he can just deflect it wherever.

"Raah!"

The First drops to the bottom of his bubble where the Hellwraith and the younger Citadelian are wrestling, grabbing the demonhost by the head and… Ew. It looked like he just rubbed the fingers of his left hand across its head, but that head then came apart in blood-pumping slices. I feel a slight tingle as the Hellwraith returns to my ring. The Citadelian he fought is visibly injured, but a glare from the First prompts him to start healing itself.

So I shoot him in the left eye with a laser and fry his brain instead.

There's a puff of burned meat smoke as he collapses dead to the bottom of the inner layer of the bubble shield. The remaining younger Citadelian takes his helmet out of subspace and jams it over his head before I can repeat the process. Maybe he isn't familiar enough with ring scans to rely on them to replace the input of his own eyes in combat?

The bubble shield twitches and I transition to a point fifty metres away without much in the way of conscious consideration, a black beam piercing my former position. Oh great, he knows how to do beam -I transition again- singularities as well. Under other circumstances I might call upon the Ophidian but Larfleeze is right there. I can't risk destabilising Hinon's control of him. The other surviving Citadelian is gathering up his fallen comrades' rings. Shouldn't help him much, but I can't pierce the shields fast enough -I dodge another black beam, this one passing through a chunk of the forest and violently compressing the terrain- to stop-.

There were three of them maintaining the barrier. I think I've got the First's full attention and the other one isn't giving the matter his full attention. Simple solid shot might be able to get through it now. I dodge again, plotting a random evasion pattern as I charge up my railguns and load tungsten rounds. The First drops his singularity projector for a moment, frowning at me as he tries to work out his next move. I fire orange lasers at his eyes to make sure he has to focus on his own defence, then point my railguns at his remaining junior and firechargefirechargefirechargefire!

The bubble crumbles at the first impact, caves in at the second and then the rounds hit the younger Citadelian in the chest. His armour cracks, and I'm slightly faster with my cold gun than the First is with his barrier.

"RAAAAH!"

The First roars his frustration and his ring momentarily shuts down.

He blinks in confusion for a second, then my cold gun freezes him in that pose permanently.

Haah.

I watch as the bodies fall to the ruined ground. He didn't realise. Focus on something other than avarice and your ring stops cooperating. No, no way he could have known. The Greenies don't advertise it and neither Larfleeze nor his minions ever encountered the problem.

His body and that of his runner-up associate hit the ground and shatter while the other two just… Burst. I hold out my left hand and immediately realise that trying to call the rings is a bad idea. Instead, I transition down and pick them up with filaments.

"Are you finished playing yet?"

Three of the rings show me pictures of species I don't recognise, but the one worn by the First…

Ogandu Onna Oslan.

I nod inside my armour as I turn to face Hinon. "Yes. Yes, I think so."
 
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So will one of the first acts of the Controllers and the new OLC be to establish order in Vega now that the Citadel is probably going to fracture?

Also maybe the isolation around Tamaran could be eased seeing as how there will be bigger fish to fry in Vega.
 
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