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Rarity makes things more valuable, not less. Perhaps:

"Actual small habitable worlds are usually so far apart that they're not worth fighting over."

Or

"Actual small habitable worlds are rare enough that it's impractical to fight over them."
Indeed. Small habitable worlds being rare means that there is an actual reason to conquer them.

The only reason why this wouldn't be the case is if terraforming a non-habitable planet is (somehow) more practical and easy than conquering a habitable planet.
 
Indeed. Small habitable worlds being rare means that there is an actual reason to conquer them.

The only reason why this wouldn't be the case is if terraforming a non-habitable planet is (somehow) more practical and easy than conquering a habitable planet.
The implication is that other inhabitable planets are so rare that by the time you discover them you've already discovered and made wide use of technologies for space habitats and terraforming, meaning that its cheaper to keep using those than dedicate yourself to finding more rare worlds and trying to take those worlds form those inhabitants then adapting them to you.
 
The implication is that other inhabitable planets are so rare that by the time you discover them you've already discovered and made wide use of technologies for space habitats and terraforming, meaning that its cheaper to keep using those than dedicate yourself to finding more rare worlds and trying to take those worlds form those inhabitants then adapting them to you.

Yes. But considering people are struggling with understanding the meaning of this section even after Zoat explained it, means it could maybe do with some rephrasing like the ones suggested.

Even a passing understanding of economics leads people to assume rarity increases value. Ergo, saying rarity decreases value as a singular statement is confusing. If in a story the reader is brought up short by a sentence and has to go back and re-read to figure out the context that makes it make sense, that's a bad thing.
 
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The SI is more into policing actions and regime change.

Those don't count, right?
Pretty sure he's referring to your self proclaimed new God of Conquest alter ego.
Here I thought it was referring to Zoat's hard-on for the British Empire.


Alright then, what about all of the other people suffering from that condition? I don't recall anyone complaining when he didn't fix every spinal injury on Earth.
And I don't recall the SI standing in front of someone he could easily heal, saying "I wish there was something I could do to help you," with no indication he was lying.
And then, not doing anything to help them.


Let me remind you that Power Rings are awesome. And they don't work on what Paul knows and can do himself but on what Ring User wants, and at that moment seeing the gals as total mess Paul wanted them healed to the best Ring can do. Also Ring have Green Corps database available. I doubt Tamranians are absent in that database. That Paul only skimmed few equivalents of Google searches in said database? Does not mean that Ring AI assist does the same as Paul.
Additionally to this, when OL got the Princesses, he had taken full control over the lab that had all the information a Psion thought it needed to thoroughly experiment with that species' ability to absorb solar energy. I suspect the only reason it hadn't healed Blackfire was to see if it made any difference to her results as compared to Starfire.
 
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Urge to link 'Get On With It' video… rising.

Alright then, what about all of the other people suffering from that condition? I don't recall anyone complaining when he didn't fix every spinal injury on Earth.
Not going out of your way to find people who need healing means you aren't a saint.
Not healing the person you sought out and interacted with means you are a jerk.
 
Not going out of your way to find people who need healing means you aren't a saint.
Not healing the person you sought out and interacted with means you are a jerk.

Made worse because one of the main reasons he is holding back is because of hypothetical crimes the victim has yet to commit...

@Mr Zoat at this point it may be worthwhile to revisit the aforementioned update and tweak what Paul sees with empathic vision to make it clear offering to heal her at that point in time would have been a suboptimal choice.

Maybe a throwaway comparison with Guy Gartner (she is ANGRY with the unfairness of her life, while she is swimming in her will power to suppress that anger), maybe an off hand comment that she would make a good green lantern recruit or something similar.
 
"My species uses a classification system which described every species on our homeworld precisely in terms of its relationship to every other. Mine is Animalia Chordata Mammalia Primates Haplorhini Hominidae Homo Sapiens Sapiens."
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The Space Station Formerly Know As Scratching Post
Thank you, corrected.
Not entirely: Formerly Known.

I mean, turning around the starfield look different as the core is now in the 'wrong' direction.
comma after "turning around"
"looks" different
probably also a comma after "different"

The link says her name is "K'ryssma", so at least one of the spellings used in the post is wrong, possibly both.
 
And I don't recall the SI standing in front of someone he could easily heal, saying "I wish there was something I could do to help you," with no indication he was lying.
And then, not doing anything to help them.
Actually, back in the whole World Without Adults thing, IIRC the SI specifically mentioned that he had to stop rescuing children because he was reaching the limits of his ability to care.
 
Aren't all honour guards supposed to have been shoved into the central power battery and so have green qoutation marks?
That likely helps, but gaining enlightenment requires more than that. Guy and Hal both went through the process and Guy only got green enlightenment later.
This makes no sense. This is literally a stalling action. Are the Darkstars just some shitty hobled together program to buy time for something else? Because if not, that's not how you fight a war.

You target your enemies capability to wage war, not fight their soldiers- you only fight when that's the only means of achieving your objective.

If the Darkstars were actually meant to do anything they would be deep in Reach territory blowing up shipyards, planet based drydocks and the like. Failing that, blasting apart major population centres works.

Because once you reach a certain size- pun intended- your ability to absorb losses grows to insane levels.


Fighting an expansion area only of a galactic power only works in shitty sci-fi where economy of scale has gone out the window and nothing makes actual sense.
Good news! That's what they're doing, hindering the Reach's ability to wage war.
"Okay, look; I'm not sure I'm meant ta tell you this, but the Guardians think that the Controllers are already fighting the Reach. Lanterns in nearby Sectors have reported seeing these guys carrying out hit and run attacks on Reach shipping." The starchart disappears, being replaced by the image of a burly alien with a head somewhat like that of a bulldog trading fire with a Reach starship. "They wear this red, white and silver power armour with this.. sort of black starburst symbol-."

I smile. "The Darkstars."
Unfortunately this bit goes on to say that the Darkstars don't fare well in direct combat against Scarabs, so they seem to not have the firepower to hit higher priority target such as the shipyards you mentioned. Or really be anything other than a nuisance.
Actually bombarding your enemies territory with missiles that activate interdiction fields when they come close to the enemy forcing the enemy to spend a century on destroying the missile seems like a great way to shatter an enemy empire don't even need to come close to the planet to disrupt everything
Interdiction fields seem like they're costly enough that they wouldn't be practical to put on something intended to be destroyed. The Citadel fleet by Rashashoom only had a couple.
 
northeast

But this raises an additional question: Is Oa northeast of Earth or northeast of the galactic core? The text as written says the latter, but in either case it suggests that Oa is not at / near the physical center of the galaxy. Is this intended?

Is Oa 16 in Sector Zero like it is in other DC canon, or is it elsewhere? Is at it the center of the sector map? (If so, that highlights more of the Guardians' ego.)
 
I mean, why do we think Avarice Healing would heal this disease?

Power Rings aren't all powerful. That is basically the thesis statement of this entire fic.
 
Because it's turned a halfhuman half kryptonian into a full kryptonian, you don't get much more genetic fuckery than that.

That was Grayven and he had both a power ring and a fatherbox which specialized in the right fields along with a ton of kryptonian data copied from the fortress of solitude. The rings still need data to do things as shown when Paul couldn't fix his lantern until he got the data from guy on a better design.
 
Alright. Gonna stick my own oar into this healing debate. There are a few factors at play.

1: It would probably take some time to find the cause of the damage and repair it. Not much, but enough when he has other things to do that suddenly became much more time-sensitive (Larfleeze).

2: Blackfire has been a villain in nearly every incarnation. Even the ones without the backstory she has here. Things have been different on Earth 16 but for just about every character he's met, they've all had the same if not similar "story roles". Assuming she'll have a more heroic or neutral disposition based on zero evidence would be foolish. Especially considering...

3: He's going to be gone for a while, dealing with the Reach, Controllers and then Larfleeze. He probably doesn't want to come back to find that she spun her miraculous recovery into performing a coup d'etat.

4: Despite every person complaining about this in terms of neutral logic, human bias plays a role. Paul is human, so sees flight as a superpower. You can argue all day long that it's normal for them but subconsciously Paul doesn't see it that way. Not massively, but just a niggling thought that... Meh, she probably doesn't need to fly.

5: He met her yesterday. And she is unrelated to anyone he actually cares about.

6: With all of those factors in play, he has to want to heal her. Despite being busy with other more important things, despite not trusting her, despite not being able to keep an eye on her, despite not seeing her ailment as particularly debilitating, despite only knowing her for a few hours, he has to want to fix her with a passion. And with all those factors above, saying it is probably far far harder than doing it.
 
Naming convention coming back to haunt you? =P
I suspect this is Zoat reminding us that regardless of what Renegade calls himself, there is an actual Grayven wandering around the cosmos as well...

Let me remind you that Power Rings are awesome. And they don't work on what Paul knows and can do himself but on what Ring User wants, and at that moment seeing the gals as total mess Paul wanted them healed to the best Ring can do. Also Ring have Green Corps database available. I doubt Tamranians are absent in that database. That Paul only skimmed few equivalents of Google searches in said database? Does not mean that Ring AI assist does the same as Paul.
Actually, they likely aren't in the Green Lantern database. Remember, they live in the Vega System, with no indications that their species has left Vega before. And Vega has been off limits to the Green Lantern Corps since it's founding.
 
Yes. But considering people are struggling with understanding the meaning of this section even after Zoat explained it, means it could maybe do with some rephrasing like the ones suggested.

Even a passing understanding of economics leads people to assume rarity increases value. Ergo, saying rarity decreases value as a singular statement is confusing. If in a story the reader is brought up short by a sentence and has to go back and re-read to figure out the context that makes it make sense, that's a bad thing.
Yeah, this. It really is quite jarring.
 
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Not entirely: Formerly Known.
comma after "turning around"
"looks" different
probably also a comma after "different"
The link says her name is "K'ryssma", so at least one of the spellings used in the post is wrong, possibly both.
Thank you, corrected.
But this raises an additional question: Is Oa northeast of Earth or northeast of the galactic core? The text as written says the latter, but in either case it suggests that Oa is not at / near the physical center of the galaxy. Is this intended?
Yes.
Is Oa 16 in Sector Zero like it is in other DC canon, or is it elsewhere? Is at it the center of the sector map? (If so, that highlights more of the Guardians' ego.)
It's still zero. The other Guardians were quietly impressed by how quickly Ranakar came up with that answer when a Green Lantern asked.
I suspect this is Zoat reminding us that regardless of what Renegade calls himself, there is an actual Grayven wandering around the cosmos as well...
I even dropped a hint earlier, but I think everyone missed it.
Actually, they likely aren't in the Green Lantern database. Remember, they live in the Vega System, with no indications that their species has left Vega before. And Vega has been off limits to the Green Lantern Corps since it's founding.
There was a Tamaranian Green Lantern, but her name was struck from the records after the war with Apokolips.
 
Alright. Gonna stick my own oar into this healing debate. There are a few factors at play.
Gah! Why is this oar poking me?! *flails*

1: It would probably take some time to find the cause of the damage and repair it. Not much, but enough when he has other things to do that suddenly became much more time-sensitive (Larfleeze).
1. It really, really should not take much time at all - as has been said, Power Ring are awesome, Orange Lanterns don't need to know how to do what they want, the disease was easily fixed by Tamaranians, OL picked up all the information from the evil space scientist Psion that was dedicating its time to working with that specific race and issue, and he has thousands of near- to far-related Tamaranians to compare data against.
In short - easy as shit, even without comparing it to other bullshit feats he's pulled.

Larfleeze is a far different issue, since if he'd just taken care of him when he first came to Vega, then literally everything else he's done so far and until then would have been completed a lot faster, easier, and more thoroughly.


2: Blackfire has been a villain in nearly every incarnation. Even the ones without the backstory she has here. Things have been different on Earth 16 but for just about every character he's met, they've all had the same if not similar "story roles". Assuming she'll have a more heroic or neutral disposition based on zero evidence would be foolish. Especially considering...
Except he has evidence, such as staring at her with his Empathic vision that somehow also lets him read thoughts and view memories - which told him that she was in no way involved with having done anything bad to her family, race, or world.

3: He's going to be gone for a while, dealing with the Reach, Controllers and then Larfleeze. He probably doesn't want to come back to find that she spun her miraculous recovery into performing a coup d'etat.
This argument relies on OL not telling anyone, her being an evil genius without motive, and everyone else being incompetent idiots. If it happens, then the Tamaranians kinda had it coming.

4: Despite every person complaining about this in terms of neutral logic, human bias plays a role. Paul is human, so sees flight as a superpower. You can argue all day long that it's normal for them but subconsciously Paul doesn't see it that way. Not massively, but just a niggling thought that... Meh, she probably doesn't need to fly.
This despite OL's supposed desire to see people improved and his nonchalance at dealing with beings like kryptonians and martians as everyday colleagues?

5: He met her yesterday. And she is unrelated to anyone he actually cares about.
So he doesn't care about Starfire, or her family that includes at least on of the highmost nobility of the planet, or the race, or the planet?

6: With all of those factors in play, he has to want to heal her. Despite being busy with other more important things, despite not trusting her, despite not being able to keep an eye on her, despite not seeing her ailment as particularly debilitating, despite only knowing her for a few hours, he has to want to fix her with a passion. And with all those factors above, saying it is probably far far harder than doing it.
He doesn't have to passionately want it; just to be able to care about getting it or something he can get or avoid getting by doing it. And he used to want to provide options for people that didn't involve becoming supervillains.
 
Except he has evidence, such as staring at her with his Empathic vision that somehow also lets him read thoughts and view memories - which told him that she was in no way involved with having done anything bad to her family, race, or world.

Empathic vision doesnt' work like that. It lets OL see their wants and those connected to them but it's been noted to not be perfect and does miss things since it doesn't let him view a persons entire past.

This argument relies on OL not telling anyone, her being an evil genius without motive, and everyone else being incompetent idiots. If it happens, then the Tamaranians kinda had it coming.

First off think you are severely underestimating people pulling coups since that could just as well involve the people pulling the coup being extremely competent without everyone else being idiots. Second there is literally a version of Blackfire who did evil things for kicks which was the animated version who didn't have a tragic backstory and was a villain solely because she enjoyed it.
He doesn't have to passionately want it; just to be able to care about getting it or something he can get or avoid getting by doing it. And he used to want to provide options for people that didn't involve becoming supervillains.

Again, Zoat mentioned that OL wanted to see Blackfire at one of her lowest points to see if she could be orange lantern material and if she isn't he could just fix her afterwards. As people have noted Blackfire has been a villain in most continuities and so it is perfectly reasonable to assume that the Blackfire in front of him has a good chance to become a villain. It's like meeting a person who has 99 percent of their altenate versions be villains or become villains. If someone is likely to become a villain then giving them options which include things like giving them power rings without seriously considering it first would just be stupid. It would be like giving a verion of Lex Luthor a power ring only for him to turn out to be a villain or become one with no one being surprised.

Can't stress this enough but some people are just naturally assholes. Amazing that people can't get this through their heads.
 
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I wish D.C. had Galactus now. I just remembered why superhero stuff isn't my favorite genre: it never goes sci-fi enough or fantastical enough.
Now I'm curious what you mean by "enough". What sorts of things are you talking about when you say "fantastical enough"?

(Like, do you mean LoTR? Lovecraft? Pern?)
 
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