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The issue here is the massive archive Zoat's moving over.

The archive will all be together though, so that's basically a story-only thread on it's own. Adding threadmarks from the first update in THIS thread will be pretty simple.

Well, I guess if you're already making an archive-thread, you could just continue adding new story-posts to it to turn it into a full story-only thread.
 
Uhmm, is there a Sinestro Corp in this universe? Or was Sinestro the only one with a yellow ring?

I believe it is the later, as yellow Sinestro was alone for quit a while.

As far as I can tell, Sinestro intended to found a Corps - note that the ring's Sinestro AI does, in fact, address Grayven as "Corpsman" - but he hadn't actually gotten around to it yet at the point he received a heat vision lobotomy.
 
There's no real plans for an OL/Renegade meeting yet. It's possible, but no plans yet...and currently, Renegade would win, because of his use of the garrick formula.
Debatable. OL has unlimited use of Accelerated Perception. When you have a ring that works at the speed of thought, and you can make yourself think faster...

Basically, they cancel each other out and then you're back to a regular OL vs Grayven debate.
 
As far as I can tell, Sinestro intended to found a Corps - note that the ring's Sinestro AI does, in fact, address Grayven as "Corpsman" - but he hadn't actually gotten around to it yet at the point he received a heat vision lobotomy.
In this -though it's unlikely to ever come up- founding his own Corps was the reason Sinestro took Green Lantern rings as trophies. I haven't decided whether the Weaponer was going to convert them or just demanded them as payment.
 
Stars, Crossed (part 24)
7th January 2004
16:40 GMT


Lights... Dance before my eyes.

Good work, Corpsman. Your approach to the task showed considerable resolve, marred by only a single instance of pleading. An entirely satisfactory performance.

I slump back on the floor, the sharpened chunk of deck plate falling from my hand. U-huh-hurr. At least one of us is happy. I take a moment to look down at the glowing hole in my abdomen. Ring. Did I get it all?

The constructs currently holding your insides together are detecting attempts at regeneration throughout the site of the injury. Further analysis will have to wait. Your next step-.

Form construct-replicas of my organs, link them to my organic components and keep the Thanagarians from hitting it again.

Your nervous system is resisting any attempt at interfacing and your guts don't generate enough fear to overcome it. Furthermore, I feel that the pain you are currently experiencing will prove to be an excellent aid to memory.

What? No, never mind. Scan immediate environment. Anyone coming?

Yes.

I get a quick mental picture of another marine group heading... I turn my head to look at the door to the captain's promenade. Right. This is going to hurt more. I grit my teeth and lean forwards, putting my right foot flat on the floor. Akh! I squeeze my eyes shut for a moment and take a couple of deep breaths. Up! Get UP! Armour, put my armour back on. And the construct armour in case they have a radion blaster. Now up!

I lean forwards and plant my- Owowow -right hand on the deck. I push up into a crouch- Raaaagh -then take a few breaths. Don't have long. I lean right a little and push- Rrrrrehhhh. –up, getting upright and gently putting my left foot on the ground. Not putting.. any weight on it. But I need to look like I'm unhurt. It's a little hard to tell given how different people here look compared to how they looked in the cartoon, but-.

The door slides open and another set of Thanagarian marines fly through, guns in hand. Yellow light flares from my eyes, jinking around the front rank's shields and stabbing into the flesh beyond.

"Ahh!" / "YAAAAGH!"

Yeah, we're past the point of talking. Huh, not seeing-. One gets a shot off with a rifle-sized energy weapon of some kind and it hits home-. The site of my injury is glowing brighter than the rest. It's drawing their attention! Okay, okay, it won't actually hurt as long as the construct armour stays up.

"Gah!"

The next marine out of the door flies straight at me with some kind of lance. I knock the point aside with the back of my right gauntlet, letting my Apokoliptian armour absorb the weak energy discharge before grabbing its wielder around the throat with my left hand and squeezing until I hear a crack. A filament grabs the x-ionised scalpel from the floor before flicking it at the next shield-bearing marine. It embeds in the shield and then explodes in a blast of brilliant white energy as the x-ionisation effect reacts vigorously with the energy reflection technology. Have to remember that some metamaterials don't play nicely together.

"Uh."

Corpsman-.

Yes, I've seen them. I couldn't hope to keep the barrier I had over the front of the bridge up while I was cutting into myself and the Thanagarians are only too happy to use it as an entry point. I form a minigun turret behind me and spray enough fire in their direction to force them to keep back as I charge forwards. A half-blinded but still oncoming marine has no time to react and I grab her around the head with my right hand and mash her face into the wall. Ring, chlorine gas.

Transmutation underway.

Thin wisps of yellow-green vapour start to appear around me. Power output is based on fear. I'm not going to get all that much until people without breathing equipment start trying to fly after me and realise what I'm doing. Hopefully as the acid melts their lungs. Honestly, when I owowow. Right. Little more care. I get inside the doorway as the next marine appears, his eyes widening as he spots the gas. When I get control of a space faring military, everyone will wear fully protective gear while in a combat zone. He tries aiming his rifle with his right hand while shielding his mouth and nose with his left. I jab him through the gut with a construct-blade.

"Akgh..."

That's more like it. I grab his gun as he collapses and my follow up eyebeams disintegrate his throat. I increase my pace to the fastest walk I can without causing flashing lights to impair my vision. That appears to be.. all of the squad they had assigned to this corridor. I feel a tiny tremor of feedback as one of the marines in the bridge destroys my minigun turret. Fine. Ring, suggestions?

Thanagarians typically operate with short chains of command, and senior officers like to be nearer the action than is entirely sensible. Personally confronting and slaying Commander Talak would most likely cause their military response to fall into disarray. Alternately, destroying the primary generator-.

I take a moment to calculate the likely effect of a highly energetic blast surrounded by Nth metal occurring inside a planet's atmosphere. No.

The ship's primary weapon battery can be used to destroy the hyperspatial bypass structure. The weapons can be accessed directly or via the primary computer core.

I hear a yelp from behind me as the marines try flying through the chlorine, and a corresponding increase in the production of the gas around me. Ring, locate Talak. If he's outside the ship...

Commander Talak appears to be directing the assault from a command station a short distance from here.

A picture forms in my head of him, Kragger and a small squad of marines... Ah, there's the gas masks. Okay, map? Okay, this shouldn't...

Wait a second. Am I..? Ring, if all of the officers are dead, exactly who was going to give the evacuation order?

What purpose would an evacuation serve? Corpsman, you may be wounded but you are not crippled. It is not beyond your abilities to kill everyone in the Thanagarian flotilla. Then you can proceed with your plan to inspire the creation of a force to protect the Earth by posing as a threat yourself.

Ring, I don't want to kill all those people. Not if there's a halfway sensible alternative.

A sub-par choice under the circumstances.

I'm wearing a recording of your brain on my finger. I think I'll make the strategic decisions. What sort of access to their computer systems can I get from-

Incoming message from Lantern Stewart.

-here?

Basic, to say the least. Warships are not designed to be 'hack friendly', Corpsman.

Internal communications?

Yes.

Put John on.

"Grayven, what the hell are you doing? Nightwing just-."

"Your president is an Apokoliptian robot. Given how fast the pro-SHADE agenda has advanced since the Lords lost power I suspect that the original was killed and replaced by SHADE. A detailed analysis of his body language could probably tell you exactly when it happened. If you've got the time you should probably check up on his family."

"My God. Okay, Shayera's on it. Where are you now?"

"Thanagarian Command Carrier. Listen, does the Watchtower have the ability to broadcast to the whole of the Earth?"

"We can override channels but SHADE will probably block us if we do it for too long."

"Okay, I can work with that. Stand by to transmit."
 
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I get a quick mental picture of another marine group heading... I turn my head to look at the door to the captain's promenade. Right. This is going to hurt more. I grit my teeth and lean forwards, putting my right foot flat on the floor. Akh! I squeeze my eyes shut for a moment and take a couple of deep breaths. Up! Get UP! Armour, put my armour back on. And the construct armour in case they have a radion blaster. Now up!

One of the advantages to the move: the green doesn't make my eyes bleed anymore. Might have just not noticed it before now, but this color is much better.
 
I would suggest hydrogen fluoride as opposed to chlorine gas. Although it is colorless, it sticks around at head height longer because it is less dense, it rapidly destroys corneas as opposed to simple irritation, causes acid burns on exposed skin, and is all around more potent to things with similar chemistry to humans.
 
In this -though it's unlikely to ever come up- founding his own Corps was the reason Sinestro took Green Lantern rings as trophies. I haven't decided whether the Weaponer was going to convert them or just demanded them as payment.

"I can't help but wonder just what the others are doing. The non-greenies, I mean. If Hope!Paul has a blue ring, what's the state of the blue corps in Paragon and Renegade? Or red, indigo, violet. I mean I don't actually expect an answer, it's mostly a rhetorical question. It's just, if Paul got a ring out of nowhere, was he the only one? Or are there other random ring-bearers from the other spectrums? Because if I was a maltusian and I saw the state of things as they were at the beginning of the story for all the lanterns everywhere, I might stop to think about what might be possible towards taking steps to try and find people who were able to handle the psychological effects of the non-green and blue rings.

I dunno, Carrol Ferris seemed to pretty much have herself together when I read Blackest Night and violet is supposed to be one of the extremes. Even Atrocitus could stop to actually reason in his own way, when he wanted. It just takes the right kind of mind to make the ring work for you, it seems to me."
 
A filament grabs the x-ionised scalpel from the floor before flicking it at the next shield-bearing marine. It embeds in the shield and then explodes in a blast of brilliant white energy as the x-ionisation effect reacts vigorously with the Nth metal. Have to remember that some metamaterials don't play nicely together.
Hmmm, potentially important if someone comes after Superboy with anything X-Ionized while he's wearing the Nth metal armor.

Typo:

It's a little hard to tell given how different to how people here look compared to how they looked in the cartoon, but-.
That "to how" should be removed.
 
Grayven is powering through this!

The Sinestro AI continues to very funny.

I wonder what's the fallout is going to be for the impostor President and that the SHADE higher-ups are corrupt. I mean, the Justice Lords were corrupt. Now, SHADE is corrupt. I wonder if people would think that they are better off without superheroes. Or for the ones who like superheroes, superheroes are better independent rather than as a threat as a group?
 
Is it just me, or is it increasingly funny that Grayven's acting more stable... now that he has the ring that urges him to kill people?
 
I would suggest hydrogen fluoride as opposed to chlorine gas. Although it is colorless, it sticks around at head height longer because it is less dense, it rapidly destroys corneas as opposed to simple irritation, causes acid burns on exposed skin, and is all around more potent to things with similar chemistry to humans.

Currently it is just whatever comes to mind. Later on ... well why not fear toxin?
 
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