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@Mr Zoat here are the epubs I made up to now.
The Season 1 epub is completed and up to date as of 05/06/2016
The Season 2 epub up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

epub for Season 1 (Episodes 01-26) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Twilight666 (corrections added up to 05/06/2016)
epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-44) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Twilight666 (chapters up to 06/08/2016)
Note: The Alt versions have background color deep blue and default text color white. Also the transparent text has a darker color as both the background and the text color, and it is also in black borders.
Also both versions have XenForo like threadmarks between episodes while the Alt Versions has similar threadmarks on the individual chapters
 
@Mr Zoat here are the epubs I made up to now.
The Season 1 epub is completed and up to date as of 05/06/2016
The Season 2 epub up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

epub for Season 1 (Episodes 01-26) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Twilight666 (corrections added up to 05/06/2016)
epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-44) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Twilight666 (chapters up to 06/08/2016)
Note: The Alt versions have background color deep blue and default text color white. Also the transparent text has a darker color as both the background and the text color, and it is also in black borders.
Also both versions have XenForo like threadmarks between episodes while the Alt Versions has similar threadmarks on the individual chapters
Thank you, updated.
His head looks like a penis. A weirdly crested one.
He probably thinks that your head looks like something odd too.
 
You know, I'm curious- why would Canis want to join the Team? Why would the Team vote to keep him on?
To quote OL, "better to have him inside pissing out than outside pissing in".

And if they just let him run loose on Earth the odds of him not ending up a supervillain are pretty small. At least if he's with the Team it's possible that he might be channeled in a more constructive direction.

There is also the Green Lantern black ops team the Corpse- they ingest discs that slowly dissolve over 5 days, with eating a new one required to gain a new charge. If Paul is even aware of the Corpse, he'd need to figure out how to make one on his own.
OL knows of them, but doesn't know if they actually exist in Universe 16. Grayven does know they exist there, from Father Box's database IIRC.
 
Wallace blurs past, another vial breaking on the Corpse and a patch of green sludge on its back.
missing the word 'leaving' I think.

and that Etrigan, presuming he exists in this continuity, can go toe to toe with the likes of Wonder Woman or Superman while being a mere rhymer demon in a human host.
To my knowledge (based on the Demon Knights comic, part of the New 52, so may or may not correspond to older variations of DC), Etrigan doesn't possess Blood, Blood actually switches places with him, going to Hell while Etrigan is in the real world.

The reason Etrigan goes back is beyond a limited amount of time, Etrigan starts rapidly getting weaker, and he needs to return to Hell to recharge. This came up at one point where Jason Blood was pissed at Etrigan and the rest of the Demon Knights team, and refused Etrigan's recall signal.

Okay now the Light really needs to go down.
as mentioned previously, though the 'demons' clearly referenced Satanus as their boss, OL/etc are unaware that he's joined The Light.
 
Um. Not sure. It wasn't something he had time to plan. It was more 'Demon seems to be really tough, what do I have that can hurt it, acid vial, go'.

Fair enough. I interpreted it as wanting to be read as "moving quickly" rather than "done in a hurry" but if the latter is what you intended then there's no issue.


Obviously, Canis is the Belkar of the group.

NO! Belkar's dying some time this year in universe. Let's not curse Canis...
 
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Raises the question of why no one's done it in canon, though.
I'll take "Because as a rule, comic book characters are not known for making optimal, intelligent decisions" for 400, Alex.

If Paul is even aware of the Corpse, he'd need to figure out how to make one on his own.
He has mentioned them in story before.

Okay now the Light really needs to go down.
Do you ever get the feeling Lex has not wanted to be a member of the Light for a while, but is stuck in a Riding the Tiger situation, as it were? I mean first Klarion, and now a Demon from Literal, Actual Hell? And Savage the caveman thug king? Ocean Found it was easier to be a Racist Demagogue instead if trying to uncover the unaltered ritual and develop ways to remove the flawed versions from those with physiological problems caused by them. The Brain seems alright, in that his Unethical Experiments garner actual technological advances.

Anyone else an actual member of the Light that is not a nutter?
 
I only found out about it after I started writing this.

Oh, so I'm responsible for Paul's current angst about accidentally shooting human type people, oops. :)

Perhaps it'll get Paul out of the "hey, demons are okay to shoot" mentality, since DC comics even has demon superheroes (although I felt the change from the Creeper's science based origin to demonic origin a trifle unnecessary, perhaps they thought his resurrection from scraps of meat left on the floor a bit much).

Although perhaps here the formulas that turned him into the Creeper were alchemical, so kind of a hybrid origin would be possible.
 
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Perhaps it'll get Paul out of the "hey, demons are okay to shoot" mentality, since DC comics even has demon superheroes (although I felt the change from the Creeper's science based origin to demonic origin a trifle unnecessary, perhaps they thought his resurrection from scraps of meat left on the floor a bit much).
It should be noted that much of that "demons are okay to shoot mentality" is because that's official JL policy. He's not particularly against shooting humans either when he thinks the situation calls for it.
 
A Star Reborn (part 10)
16th April
13:57 GMT -5


"My God." Doctor Stone shakes his head, stunned at the destruction unleashed in the loading dock. Or possibly stunned by the injuries we just inflicted. Probably best that I not tell him that this sort of outcome is about par for the course when we fight people in our weight class and they won't surrender. All of the former Demons are bound by magic suppression chains and look thoroughly the worse for wear.

Only two attacked the loading dock, but when they bought their tickets in the superpower lottery Hell smiled on them. One was left basically humanoid with a head about three times as tall as it should be and split down the middle. Between the two halves was a black void from which it could fire highly resilient chains burning with hellfire. Richard was dangerously close to getting dragged in at one point before Zatanna worked out how to disrupt the portal. The other resembled a sort of Wurm/Millipede combination, with the added bonus that its partially intangible nature let it both fly and destructively phase through solid objects.

Richard sidles up to me as Zatanna finishes the physical components of the truth compulsion ritual. "So what'd we call them?"

I point to the ones Wallace, Artemis and I fought, generating small constructs of their transformed states. "Oni, Juggernaut and Tar-Covered Corpse. Do you want to name yours?"

Canis decided that it was best to make the portal disruption permanent and darn near stove in their first opponent's head. His Demon form was tough and not all of the injuries they suffer translated back onto their Human forms but the left cheek and jaw are comprehensively shattered. That will take a great deal of surgical effort to stick back together. For the moment, he'll have to make do with Richard and the lab's medic's effort to create a sort of frame around the left side of his face.

And yet, somehow, I couldn't quite muster the desire to fix it myself.

The former Wurmipede is still unconscious from the feedback generated by the interaction between its aura and Raquel's kinetic belt. Raquel was a bit out of it herself, but her I could help.

"Do you think 'Centipede' is too obvious?"

"I think it's taken."

He thinks for a moment, then smirks. "Oh yeah. I forgot about that guy."

"How can you laugh about this?" Doctor Stone gestures at the wreck of the transport lorry. "That creature destroyed the samples! The Atlanteans will never trust us with a second batch, if they can even find one."

"Doctor Stone, the Bio Ship is fast, but it's not that fast. The samples won't get here for another four hours."

"You-! You knew we were going to be attacked?"

"Knew, no. But the obvious time to attack was the moment the samples arrived. Wasn't expecting.. this." None of the scientists or workers were injured during the attack, having all lived in Gotham long enough to know to get the heck out of the way when things start getting weird. Or maybe they just weren't targeted. The ones who entered via reception certainly could have killed the receptionist if they'd wanted. "Thought it was best to spring the attack during the dress rehearsal rather than the real event."

Doctor Stone nods. "I.. suppose. What exactly did they do to themselves?"

"Not sure. Hopefully, we'll know in a few minutes."

"Orange Lantern." Beton Brute pads forwards as Canis hails me with his right hand. "Do you have pencil and paper?"

"Yes… May I ask why you want them?"

He nods, smiling. "The sight of that creature moving through the air has inspired me. Since the fighting is -for the moment- concluded-."

I take an art pad and a selection of pencils out of subspace and float them over to him. "Knock yourself out."

"Thank you."

"Okay." Zatanna stands up and takes a step back. "That should do it. Orange Lantern?"

I nod. "Robin, if you wouldn't mind?"

"Sure. Never interrogated a Demon before."

The two of us walk over to the woman who was briefly the Tar-Covered Corpse. Mary Dey, a college drop out whose previous criminal history amounted to a few parking tickets. Juggernaut had a slightly more jaded past, but the rest had similarly clean records. My physical scans showed no particular anomalies and I couldn't see any unusual financial activity when I had the ring take a look at their accounts. Bit of a puzzler, really.

"Zatanna?"

"I dnib uoy ot kaeps eht hturt, eht elohw hturt dna gnihton tub eht hturt."

The circle around our subject gleams slightly and there's a faint distortion in the air.

"Poetic. Well then, let's start with the obvious stuff. Would you please confirm your name for the record?"

"Fuck you." Her eyes glaze slightly. "Mary Dey." Her eyes return to normal, then widen slightly. "The fuck was that?"

"Encouragement. It won't let you lie or dissemble."

"You shit sucking-."

"What caused your transformation?"

"Juice." Another flicker. "Hell Juice. I dunno what the stuff is really called."

"Robin?"

He makes a small frown. "Never heard of it. What other names does it have?"

"Ah… Devil Jizz, Dee Em En… I don't know any others."

"DMN? Demon? Who came up with that?"

"Maybe it stands for something? Demonic… Metamorphosis… Narcotic?" Um. "Nectar?"

Artemis makes a face. "And who'd take something called 'Devil Jizz'?"

"These five, apparently. Who is your supplier?"

"I never met him. And when I spoke on the phone he used one of those voice altering things."

"Why did you attack this place?"

"It was jghrh." She visibly strains against the spell. "My chance… To get big. I knew whoever it was had something good going on. I wanted a piece of it. We all got sent stronger Juice so we'd be able to do the job. We got told, wait for the delivery, then make sure it got destroyed."

"Destroyed. Not captured. Curious. Is this the first time you've transformed?"

"No, but it's the first time I've gone that far or become that.. thing. Usually I pick something.. prettier."

"Ever met an actual Demon?"

"No. But I figured, that's what I'd look like if I was a Demon."

"Have you had any other significant contact with the arcane?"

"No. Least, I don't think so."

"Can you provide us with the names of other users and locations where you people congregate?"

"Yrrrrrr… Yes."

"Ah, Oh El?" Wallace raises his right eyebrow. "I don't think this stuff is actually illegal. I mean, it should be, but…" He shrugs.

"As a narcotic? No. But I think I could convince a judge that they should count as 'baleful or sorcerous weapons', and there's a decent penalty for using those. Robin, find out everything she knows. I'll get in contact with the Gotham police."
 
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Good thing OL was genre savy enough to have fake samples beforehand to drive the attack out to deal with it.

Now Star Labs can hopefully study the stuff in peace.
 
I think Oh-El is going to have this DMN drug problem wrapped up, though he might want to get a sample to see what it's alchemical properties are it may be possible to reverse engineer the process, also should probably try to substitute out any ethically shady ingredients.
 
Not sure what stove is supposed to mean here, or what the typo is, but that one word make the whole sentence incomprehensible.
Saying "stove in" is the same as saying "caved in" as in putting a big dent in something. The phrase is actually used fairly often.




Even if one classes demons as people, shooting them doesn't destroy them. It just send them back to hell, which they can come back from the next time they get summoned.
 
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Hopefully, we'll know if a few minutes."
"in"

My physical scans showed not particular anomalies and I couldn't see any unusual financial activity when I had the ring take a look at their accounts.
"no"


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Not sure what stove is supposed to mean here, or what the typo is, but that one word make the whole sentence incomprehensible.
It's not a typo, it means "caved in".
 
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Deamon Jizz. Charming. I'm really hoping that's a euphemism.

Normally for something this complexes the odds of it being something so unrefined are low, but well it's hell, so....


"Why did you attack this place?"

"It was jghrh." She visibly strains against the spell. "My chance… To get big. I knew whoever it was had something good going on. I wanted a piece of it. We all got sent stronger Juice so we'd be able to do the job. We got told, wait for the delivery, then make sure it got destroyed."

ah, so willing minions rather than hapless dupes. That's going to make the severe mauling the team gave them a bit less traumatizing, still proably going to be more than a bit shaken up about almost killing some people. Also there objective raises an interesting question, what is the light afraid of star labs learning? While the minions they sent were immensely disposable, revealing the existence of DMN is a non trivial strategic expenditure and is a bit at odds with using such utterly disposable minions. Maybe this is santus trying to make a good impression and using a fancier trick than he needed to?
 
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