Kind of sad that Rhaenyra is giving up the option of naming a daughter Visenya as she wanted to do that.
[] Dorne will recognize that Visenya has been unfairly maligned as a sorceress, manipulator and all round villain, although the Realm will recognize that burning down the Dornish countryside was indeed, a bad vibe.

[x] Speak to Qoren About the Deal (This will involve Hidden Dice Rolls)
-[X] The timing of Dorne's swearing of fealty
--[X] An immediate oath of fealty upon marriage would offer Dorne more protection against Daemon's Bloodstone Kingdom than an alliance. In a fight between an allied Dorne and Bloodstone, the Iron Throne would be forced into an impossible choice between kin, to help one over the other, or to help neither. In a fight between a Dorne sworn to the Iron Throne, and a Bloodstone which is not, the Iron Throne's position would already be decided. Even should Bloodstone itself later swear fealty, the Iron Throne would be obliged to side against the aggressor in the name of the King's or Queen's Peace. Swearing fealty immediately might even deter such a war entirely.
-[X] Marriage Deadline
--[X] (Optional) Argument: 18 months places it at high risk of taking place during winter. This could block significant portions of the kingdoms from being able to visit. 24 months is likely more secure
I strongly doubt we'll be able to renegotiate fixed details now.
 
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i agree. spending several months away in Dorne every year cuts into the time we need for training, politicking, and preparing for both Rhaenyra's upcoming rule AND the inevitable civil war when it happens.

i would love for Rhaenyra to spend more time there, but she will be Westeros' First Queen. he has to understand what this means Rhaenyra is facing.
Additionally, we should ask that Qooren should visit KL regularly before Nyra's coronation... If only because most of his children will be raised here...
 
These ones are actually mostly fine, (even if i still disagree with marrying Qoren as a whole.) But that first one has to go. If this really goes through, which the dorne will lobbyist likely ensure, than we'll be busy enough as it is keeping the civil war from being a worst case scenario for us. Spending several months in dorne every year no matter what will hamper that quite a bit.
That's still better than Canon, where Rhaenyra spent all her time at Dragonstone and none of Kings Landing. It also gives her time to arrange things for her future child to rule, and overall help the future integration on that side.
 
- The Iron Throne will cede minor lands currently held by the Stormlander lords that rightfully belong to Dorne. In exchange, Dorne will do the same for those lands that belong to a number of Reacher houses.
This should be renegotiated to be a gradual thing, to give citizens loyal to their current lords over their former ones time to emigrate elsewhere.
- The Iron Throne will agree to provide funds to Dorne for efforts to revitalize the settlement of Planky Town, aiding efforts to improve the harbors and expand the floating town.
We should consider whether we can bring a dornish/realm house/Rhaenyra loyalist marriage into this to bring the revitalized town thoroughly into her supporter base.


- Daemon Targaryen, in light of his valiant efforts against the pirates, is to be given control of the island of Bloodstone if he sees fit to rule it, and the funds to build a castle on the island if he so chooses. He is also to be honored for his bravery and skill by being given a hero's welcome upon his return to Kings Landing. Furthermore, a feast will be held in his honor not long after this agreement is made.
And he'll swear fealty as the new Lord of bloodstone to the iron throne and acknowledge Rhaenyra's claim.
 
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[] Dorne will recognize that Visenya has been unfairly maligned as a sorceress, manipulator and all round villain, although the Realm will recognize that burning down the Dornish countryside was indeed, a bad vibe.
Would maybe have been an option if we followed the "Investigate Aenys' death" set of options. If we bring it up to Qoren in a few years after doing that research, it could maybe even remain a possibility (although that stuff has little to do with Dorne's reasonable objections to Visenya, in all honesty. Rhaenys would also be a hard sell, most likely)
 
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That's still better than Canon, where Rhaenyra spent all her time at Dragonstone and none of Kings Landing. It also gives her time to arrange things for her future child to rule, and overall help the future integration on that side.
One thing we could do is loosen the requirement a bit. Don't limit it to visiting sunspear, you got a dragon. You can visit the various Dornish lords, hob nob with them.
 
How much room is there for interpretation on the spend a few months in Sunspear bit? How many is a few? And like does it have to be consecutive or can one month in the "spring" and one month in the "fall" work?
 
- Daemon Targaryen, in light of his valiant efforts against the pirates, is to be given control of the island of Bloodstone if he sees fit to rule it, and the funds to build a castle on the island if he so chooses. He is also to be honored for his bravery and skill by being given a hero's welcome upon his return to Kings Landing. Furthermore, a feast will be held in his honor not long after this agreement is made.

Anyway, this provision annoys me a bit.

Because we have here the greatest foreign policy coup of Viserys's reign, and the only celebration involved in it will be Daemon, who has not done anything related to it.

Demand our own party.
 
How much room is there for interpretation on the spend a few months in Sunspear bit? How many is a few? And like does it have to be consecutive or can one month in the "spring" and one month in the "fall" work?
Well in meta terms, given that each Turn is 3 months, I would assume that we would need to visit Sunspear for one turn every year, which honestly doesn't sound that bad.
 
And he'll swear fealty as the new Lord of bloodstone to the iron throne and acknowledge Rhaenyra's claim.
This is a good point...
[x] Speak to Qoren About the Deal (This will involve Hidden Dice Rolls)
-[X] The timing of Dorne's swearing of fealty
--[X] An immediate oath of fealty upon marriage would offer Dorne more protection against Daemon's Bloodstone Kingdom than an alliance. In a fight between an allied Dorne and Bloodstone, the Iron Throne would be forced into an impossible choice between kin, to help one over the other, or to help neither. In a fight between a Dorne sworn to the Iron Throne, and a Bloodstone which is not, the Iron Throne's position would already be decided. Even should Bloodstone itself later swear fealty, the Iron Throne would be obliged to side against the aggressor in the name of the King's or Queen's Peace. Swearing fealty immediately might even deter such a war entirely.
-[X] Marriage Deadline
--[X] (Optional) Argument: 18 months places it at high risk of taking place during winter. This could block significant portions of the kingdoms from being able to visit. 24 months is likely more secure
We have already agreed on the previous terms which included this... I don't think we can discuss these matter any longer

@Teen Spirit can you confirm/deny this?
 
- Upon the wedding of Princess Rhaenyra and Prince Qoren, Rhaenyra will strive to visit Sunspear for a few months every year, health and weather permitting. Upon Rhaenyra's coronation as queen, this responsibility will end and Prince Qoren will do the same for her grace in King's Landing.

Not ideal, but okay
- In regards to the chain of islands known as the Stepstones, the majority of the islands belong to House Velayron by right of conquest, with administration of the islands is left up to Lord Corlys Velayron. House Velayron and House Martell of Dorne will share any tolls claimed on any ship lanes between the islands, with House Velayron taking six pieces of ten from the tolls.

Will be this domain be under the authority of the Iron Throne ?
If it is they absolutely should need to swear again to the Iron Throne and it´s effective and legal heir Rhaenyra.
I feel this needs to be a sticking point.

- Daemon Targaryen, in light of his valiant efforts against the pirates, is to be given control of the island of Bloodstone if he sees fit to rule it, and the funds to build a castle on the island if he so chooses. He is also to be honored for his bravery and skill by being given a hero's welcome upon his return to Kings Landing. Furthermore, a feast will be held in his honor not long after this agreement is made.

He can be given a domain but he needs to swear to Iron Throne.

As said by @Randino Treviani. I think this is a great point and it needs to be included into the marriage agreement/deal.

- The Iron Throne will cede minor lands currently held by the Stormlander lords that rightfully belong to Dorne. In exchange, Dorne will do the same for those lands that belong to a number of Reacher houses.

Inevitable but it is okayish.

- The Iron Throne will agree to provide funds to Dorne for efforts to revitalize the settlement of Planky Town, aiding efforts to improve the harbors and expand the floating town.

Not a problem at all

- Dorne will consent and provide labor for an expansion of the Kingsroad into Dorne, provided it's vassals are allowed to build defenses along it's route.

I think it can be agree to limit these defenses to towers only.
It´s not a deal breaker but it is a point of concern.

- Dorne will make all reasonable efforts it can to eliminate banditry along it's borders.

I feel we can help it when we visit Dorne. Not a deal breaker.

- There will be no formal apologies on either side for any past misdeeds or violence. Instead, both Prince Qoren and King Viserys will look forward to a peaceful, prosperous and unified future.

Reasonable, i don´t think that nobody ever expected to ever have an apology.
 
Nothing says we can't train/practice harp/etc in Sunspear - a lot of this recent arc seems to make clear that we're more than able to get that done. As for spending time in Sunspear dragging us down politically because we're out of the house, as long as Vizzy T's not dead and Otto's on side it's not the end of the world. We'll also need time to bring Dorne in - they're probably as dicey as we are about the whole setup, and we'll need to put serious effort in to get this whole thing going. Good stuff also on the Velaryons, who now have a financial reason to see this all go smoothly. Hopefully, that's enough to get them to start doing business in Dorne, and over the long run ease some of their general angst. Overall, this is a good enough deal and I see no reason to make any last minute attempts to change it - especially because trying might kill dad.

On the other hand, this is a 100% guarantee that Prince Diddy's next depressingly young bride is a Baratheon. Cool times ahead.
 
Apparently, the major hang up had been the Stepstones as your father explained it. The king had wanted to give the Stepstones to Daemon as his own kingdom as a reward for his service, with Daemon and Dorne splitting the fees from any tolls. This was soundly rejected by Qoren and Otto too for that matter. The Hand argued that such a kingdom would almost immediately collapse once Daemon inevitably grew bored of it, something Qoren strongly agreed with. Similar efforts to make Daemon Lord Paramount of the Stepstones were likewise rejected.

Eventually, Rhaenys was brought in to act as her husband's proxy on the matter and a deal was reached.
Please note that if any of the past votes to be included in Stepstone negotiation had previously won, We would have a major win w/ the Velaryon right now and we could tie their loyalty w/ us. As the reason to push to be involved Stepstone negotiation have been entirely to push these outcome but with our name attached as the one that indeed give House Velaryon its just reward of Stepstone war.

Just an unfortunately missed opportunity. :cry:

And he'll swear fealty as the new Lord of bloodstone to the iron throne and acknowledge Rhaenyra's claim.
How about this as term?
[ ] Speak to Qoren About the Deal (This will involve Hidden Dice Rolls)
-[ ] Daemon will swear loyalty to the Iron Throne and Rhaenyra's claim if he choose to rule Bloodstone.
--[ ] Daemon hasn't directly swear loyalty to the Iron Throne and its heir. This is especially important as his direct reaction to our ascension as heir was occupying the Heir rightful seat of Dragonstone. The clear demonstration of loyalty for Iron Throne newest lord is important as all the older lords have already swear loyalty to Rhaenyra as the righftul hair.

Anyway, this provision annoys me a bit.

Because we have here the greatest foreign policy coup of Viserys's reign, and the only celebration involved in it will be Daemon, who has not done anything related to it.

Demand our own party.
How about this as term?
-[ ] A feast to celebrate the betrothal and the peace it won. A hero welcome and feast for Velaryon also. If three feasts are too much make it a joint feast.
--[ ] This is not only Daemon effort Velaryon need to be celebrated too. It is important to align Velaryon interest more with Rhaenyra-Dornish casue. Also pushing for Rhaenys in the council will be moderating influence over Corlys Velaryon ambition as it is a honor to acknowledge Rhaenys ability to rule. Having the more moderate Rhaenys voice in the council make outrageous Corlys demand will have to pass Rhaenys moderation.

I wanted to also push for Rhaenys as important point to bring Velaryon back on our side.
-[ ] Also Give Rhaenys an advisor seat in small Council.
--[ ]It is important to align Velaryon interest more with Rhaenyra-Dornish bloc by pushing for this favor. Also pushing for Rhaenys in the council will be moderating influence over Corlys Velaryon ambition as it is a honor to acknowledge Rhaenys ability to rule. Having the more moderate Rhaenys voice in the council will make outrageous Corlys demand have to pass Rhaenys moderation to be heard in small council as indeed we can not just swap Master of Ship to bring Corlys back.
 
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- Upon the wedding of Princess Rhaenyra and Prince Qoren, Rhaenyra will strive to visit Sunspear for a few months every year, health and weather permitting. Upon Rhaenyra's coronation as queen, this responsibility will end and Prince Qoren will do the same for her grace in King's Landing.
Agreeable, I would have voted to do this anyway.
- In regards to the chain of islands known as the Stepstones, the majority of the islands belong to House Velayron by right of conquest, with administration of the islands is left up to Lord Corlys Velayron. House Velayron and House Martell of Dorne will share any tolls claimed on any ship lanes between the islands, with House Velayron taking six pieces of ten from the tolls.
This may drag the realm as a whole into a war with the Triarchy. I'd also like to split the tolls 80-20 in the Velaryons favor on the grounds that Dorne doesn't really have a navy.
- Daemon Targaryen, in light of his valiant efforts against the pirates, is to be given control of the island of Bloodstone if he sees fit to rule it, and the funds to build a castle on the island if he so chooses. He is also to be honored for his bravery and skill by being given a hero's welcome upon his return to Kings Landing. Furthermore, a feast will be held in his honor not long after this agreement is made.
I'd also like Viserys to have a feast for the diplomatic achievement a lifetime.
- The Iron Throne will cede minor lands currently held by the Stormlander lords that rightfully belong to Dorne. In exchange, Dorne will do the same for those lands that belong to a number of Reacher houses.
Perhaps this might take place over several years for those who don't want to be ruled by Dornish/Reachmen/Stormlords can move to the areas controlled by those they favor.
- The Iron Throne will agree to provide funds to Dorne for efforts to revitalize the settlement of Planky Town, aiding efforts to improve the harbors and expand the floating town.
This may annoy Corlys.
- Dorne will consent and provide labor for an expansion of the Kingsroad into Dorne, provided it's vassals are allowed to build defenses along it's route.
As long as they don't basically build a land based version of the Twins over the Kingsroad this should be good.
- Dorne will make all reasonable efforts it can to elimnate banditry along it's borders.
I'd like both parties to do this. Ideally they should both take a few unreasonable efforts to eliminate banditry in the Dornish Marches
- There will be no formal apologies on either side for any past misdeeds or violence. Instead, both Prince Qoren and King Viserys will look forward to a peaceful, prosperous and unified future.
No comment.
 
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I don't see the issue with going to Dorne every few turn. The thread had just been talking about how this should be done anyway to make sure we don't get completely alienated from the kid fostered in Dorne.

Odds are, we will be wanting to spend plenty of time in Sunspear / Dorne anyway, since the Iron Throne controlling the Stepstones through Corlys and Daemon's fiefs there means we will likely need to do some diplomacy with the Triarchy and Essos in general.
 
Well in meta terms, given that each Turn is 3 months, I would assume that we would need to visit Sunspear for one turn every year, which honestly doesn't sound that bad.
I'd go even further. Rhaenyra would probably have to spend 3 months every year in Dorne anyways.

She's the first Targaryen Queen of Dorne, while the massacres under Aegon the Conqueror would have just left living memory. Being there, showing flag and helping that Dorne's Integration goes as smoothly as possible should be our long term priority.

Not to mention that, if a civil war does break out, having a loyal support base to hide out in like Dorne, would be worth the amount of time that we would have invested anyways

Edit: does this count as being ninja'd?
 
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Honestly, I was on the fence about a lot of this stuff, but the sheer amount of bile I'm seeing against the betrothal, what with the "this is a trap option we will surely be assassinated" stuff, is making me want to accept it out of perverse stubbornness.

I've had a lot of bad experiences in quests when people start going "my option didn't win because most of the quest is stupid and we're doomed now, I will continue to angrily fight this forever." Very rarely have I seen a quest where the gameplay experience was improved by listening to that mentality.

How much room is there for interpretation on the spend a few months in Sunspear bit? How many is a few? And like does it have to be consecutive or can one month in the "spring" and one month in the "fall" work?
Given the logistical burdens of moving around as royalty (sure, we have a dragon, but the dragon can carry literally just us and maybe Alicent and fuck-all else), we really want to compress that into as few trips as possible.

Anyway, this provision annoys me a bit.

Because we have here the greatest foreign policy coup of Viserys's reign, and the only celebration involved in it will be Daemon, who has not done anything related to it.

Demand our own party.
@Teen Spirit , is it true that there won't be big festivals celebrating the betrothal? I would think that would be kind of automatic, additional to and in no way exclusionary of Daemon's party.
 
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Mind that one of the easiest way to score some points with the Marcher lords is by directly assisting with the effort to stop "banditry" at the border. That shows both sides that we take the King's Peace seriously.
 
I don't see the issue with going to Dorne every few turn. The thread had just been talking about how this should be done anyway to make sure we don't get completely alienated from the kid fostered in Dorne.
I don't have a problem with going to Dorne every few turns, but honestly, I think that Qooren should also try to come to visit KL regularly as well before our coronation... If only so that he is not a complete unknown in KL and because most of his children will live here...
 
I don't have a problem with going to Dorne every few turns, but honestly, I think that Qooren should also try to come to visit KL regularly as well before our coronation... If only so that he is not a complete unknown in KL and because most of his children will live here...
Hopefully we can pitch that to him and convince him of it, but trying to make him agree to it contractually could be tough.
 
Given the logistical burdens of moving around as royalty (sure, we have a dragon, but the dragon can carry literally just us and maybe Alicent and fuck-all else), we really want to compress that into as few trips as possible.
We don't exactly need to bring a huge entourage every time we go. Most of the time we will likely just take Alicent along and have either Tarly go ahead by ship or send someone else to be our guard there.

I don't have a problem with going to Dorne every few turns, but honestly, I think that Qooren should also try to come to visit KL regularly as well before our coronation... If only so that he is not a complete unknown in KL and because most of his children will live here...
Shouldn't be too hard to convince him of that.
 
We don't exactly need to bring a huge entourage every time we go. Most of the time we will likely just take Alicent along and have either Tarly go ahead by ship or send someone else to be our guard there.
We should probably send Alicent via ship as well, to avoid the spreading of rumors...
Shouldn't be too hard to convince him of that.
Yeah, but if we are formalizing Nyra's visit to Dorne, we should also do the same with Qooren's visits to KL...
 
We don't exactly need to bring a huge entourage every time we go. Most of the time we will likely just take Alicent along and have either Tarly go ahead by ship or send someone else to be our guard there.
I dunno. Remember, if we want to be in a strong position after we inherit the Iron Throne, we need Rhaenyra to start cultivating an entourage of her own and some people she can rely on to have her back.

A few legal and financial experts to help us process information about our own estates and who we can eventually promote into our own advisors as queen when we're ready, for instance.

A reliable core of personal household servants who won't tattle if they walk in on us with Alicent, for instance.

An actual proto-Master of Whispers, for instance, who can take that role when we take the throne.

Some of those will be people we want to leave behind in King's Landing to be our eyes and ears while we're in Sunspear, but others we'll want to be moving back and forth with us.

Observe how most of Rhaenyra's royal progress was taking place aboard ships and horseback even though we had our dragon along the whole time. Observe how Prince Qoren came here with at least one literal whole-ass shipload of people. There's a reason for that; princes travel in style, and adding an extra "s" to that sentence doesn't change the dynamic. Which means that having to make the trip 2-3 times in a year instead of one is going to be somewhat burdensome, or is going to force us to accept inconveniences in order to make the trip on dragonback.

Yeah, but if we are formalizing Nyra's visit to Dorne, we should also do the same with Qooren's visits to KL...
To be fair, Qoren is going to be a busy guy for the next few years trying to keep Dorne happy with this. But yeah, if I was going to vote to negotiate this, I'd want to add:

1) A really sweet celebration of the betrothal, optionally before Daemon gets back from the Stepstones.

2) Qoren promising to visit at least sometimes before Rhaenyra takes the throne. Even if only, say, for a month or two every two years.
 
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The term about "striving to visit" binds nobody to do anything, only to make a good faith effort. It thus has no weight for or against the agreement.

Corlys can have his faraway flyspecks and booty for the sake of smoothing his ruffled feathers. House Velaryon will grow richer, but they'll also spend a bunch of resources on administration (or let their holdings fall back into anarchy and piracy, which would let the crown reassert some authority in the name of keeping the peace). This term weighs in favor of the agreement.

It's not clear what will happen to Bloodstone if Daemon does not see fit to rule it. It is also not clear what, if any, consequences would follow from his embezzling his fortification grant (for example, if he spent it on bribes or sellswords). I would see these items clarified, and if they cannot be, it would weigh against the agreement.

We've more or less written off the Stormlanders, which is presumably why they've gotten screwed in this deal. But I would see the Peakes excluded from Reacher houses that get windfalls, because they suck and also are our enemies, and I feel like being petty.

Presumably the internal improvements all come with budgets and we just don't see them because they're below the level of abstraction. I don't like the use of the word "revitalize" to describe the efforts to improve the Planky Town, it comes just shy of implying the Iron Throne did something wrong it needs to make, and is making, reparations for (which kindof belies the last term). "Improve" and "expand" are better. Extending the Kingsroad is just good sense. On its face I'd assume the law applicable to the Kingsroad in Dorne would be the same as the law applicable to the Kingsroad everywhere else, but since we did just study the subject it wouldn't hurt to make sure (and maybe show off a little bit).

Or in other words, things I'm concerned about:

[] Speak to Qoren About the Deal (This will involve Hidden Dice Rolls)
-[] Inquire as to what is to become of Bloodstone if Daemon sees fit to abandon it, and what if anything is supposed to happen if Daemon misappropriates his castle-building grant. If no one has thought about it, propose that the Iron Throne be compensated for any such abandonment or embezzlement by a reversion of Bloodstone to the Iron Throne.
-[] Insist that the boundaries between House Peake and its Dornish neighbors are well-drawn and sensible and should not be adjusted.
-[] Clarify that the Kingsroad in Dorne will be upkept and governed like the Kingsroad throughout the Realm.
 
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