FOZ LOUISE Saito AU Time travel Idea...
An AU where after Saito dies in the bttle against 70,000 Tiffa doesn't find him. Rather a Diety or ROB offers Louise a Deal. He can bring Saito Back but the way he will do so is by turning back time. Louise and Saito will both remember each other. and they will return about 6 months before canon Starts. In exchange Louise has to give up all her emotions, she'll get them back once she summons Saito during the Fammiliar ritual.

Also in this AU Louise is much more understanding and Kind and Saito much more Loyal.
 
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FOZ LOUISE Saito AU Time travel 1
Opening her eyes, Louise found herself in a familiar classroom, The students around her were laughing at her.

She felt nothing.

The last thing she remembered was....Saito's Eclair D'amour had withered...before a strange being had offered her a chance to bring Saito back.

SHE FELT NOTHING.

She knew she should feel something.

SHE COULD NOT FEEL ANYTHING.

The Being had told her it was the cost of turning back time. He had even promised to give them back the moment she summoned Saito again.

She could feel nothing, no relief, no joy at knowing Saito was alive again back in jah-pahn.

The only thing she could do was move forward.

So this was what it was like without any emotions?

Was this what mother was speaking of when she spoke of the peak of the rule of steel?

The only good thing she could see was she couldn't feel any emotional pain.

The insults being hurled her way had no meaning to her as she had no emotions.

They could say the worst things imaginable and even though she logically understood their meaning it didn't really hurt her.

She remembered this day. One the worst days. The day that she nearly broke. Last time she managed to barely hold herself together by writing a letter to Wardes.

He never sent a reply, not to a single one of her letters. And he called her his fiance. What a joke. Her previous self was truly naive. Regardless now that she knew he was a Traitor, she needed to take care of him... but she needed evidence. She needed to ponder over what to do.

The lack of ability to feel emotion was a blessing as it was a curse. While she couldn't feel pain, She couldn't feel joy either.

No Joy at the fact that Saito was alive and well, no determination to look forward to the familiar summoning ceremony. Only the fact she logically knew it was important to regain what she lost and someone she could trust her back to was what drove her forward.

There was no emotional connection.

That was something she would gain once she summons him again.

Louise didn't notice the silence of the classroom as she walked past everyone without making a sound.

"Do you think we went a bit too far?"

"Nah she'll probably come back and scream at us tomorrow."

"Besides, she's the Zero, it's not like she can do anything anyway."

"Yeah, You're right."

Most of them comforted themselves with the fact they were nobles and this couldn't come back to bite them in the ass no matter what happened. Only one of the students in the class noticed that something was seriously wrong with Louise.

"Her eye's, they were empty...like mother's" A Silent blue-haired girl Whispered to herself.




Meanwhile In Japan.

Saito awoke in his bed.

He was sure he had died.

So why was he in his bed?

Was it all just a dream?

A Product of his imagination?

Was his love a lie? Was everything he sacrificed a lie?!

As he got out his bed something caught his eye.



Gandálfr

He still had them!

Then maybe just maybe this was not a dream?!

He looked towards the calender...

And found his answer...

He had somehow found himself several months before Louise had summoned him.

He could see Louise again.

Tears fell from his eyes as his heart ached.

He wanted to see her soon. But he had to be patient.

She would be insecure as when she first summoned him. At first, he was simply excited to be in another world. This world gave him meaning. Where on earth, he would simply be someone among the many faces. Eventually, He began to understand the young girl who was his master. She was someone who would stand for her code no matter the peril, no matter the danger. Something he could understand very well and even get behind. This was what earned her his loyalty after all.

And, It was his loyalty, the fact she understood he would always stay by her side that allowed her kind side to show itself. After all She had been alone for so long. Her Mother didn't really know how to show love, her eldest was a mean bitch, Kirche couldn't tell that her louise didn't think of her as a friend and that her teasing only rubbed salt on her wounds. The only person Who was on her side was Henrietta and Cattleya. Henrietta was a Princess and had too many duties to be with Louise often and Cattleya was too sick to leave the house...

Wait what exactly were her symptoms?

Did modern medicine have a solution?

Her body was weak and she had a hard time walking. He could perhaps bring a few bottles of Vitamin Supplements with him maybe something to boost her immune system? He'll have to check the net maybe someone would know what was Cattleya's problems from her symptoms?

Louise would definitely be very happy if Cattleya became healthy.

Regardless...

He had time to prepare.

He remembered the day he was summoned, he was taking his laptop to get it fixed because he had accidently spilled a drink over it.

Regardless. He had time.

Time to Prepare.

Time to train.

He needed to plan.

He might not be a genius like Professor Colbert who could recreate Petrol with just a sample.

But he could plan to turn things to his and Louise's advantage.

I'll be there soon Louise. You won't be alone anymore.

Even if he couldn't tell his Aunt where he was going he needed to at least give an excuse. Perhaps a school abroad?

He had leeched off her too long.

And he wouldn't need his the money his parents left him for more than a few months anyway.

So it was time to think of what to pack.

He needed to get a BIG BAG if he wanted to pack everything he wanted to carry.

While he loved the thrill of Adventure in Halkeginia he did miss the modern conveniences.

So things that could help him keep some modern Conveniences.

His Laptop.

His Smartphone.

He needs to make to get a Solar Charger as there was no electricity in Halkeginia.

Hmmm.

He could also download books from the internet, right?

Hell, he could probably turn Tristian into a superpower with the knowledge he could bring over.

Though he had to be careful what he released.

He didn't want to pollute the beautiful nature Halkeginia still had after all. So any technological information he brings over should be Electrical or something that doesn't use fuel like Petrol. The Zero fighter was already there after all.

So he needed a few external drives to download and store all the information. Maybe a second Tablet and Changer so that professor Colbert can use it to study all the information he would bring over?

What else?

A first aid kit would be good. A bunch of common Medicines.

And also a weapon.

Unfortunately, Japan has Very strict Weapon laws. Though I might be able to get my hands on a Katana. Also some armour perhaps a bulletproof west? I'll also have to get several changes of clothes.

Maybe he could find a Dojo to train with a Katana?

And not to mention. Stuff for Louise.

Hmmm. Would she like jeans? No way. I know for a fact she hates tight clothes. So something loose but not too lose.

Oh, we can get matching Watches! and a few spare ones in case they break in a fight.

Hm... I could get a bulletproof jacket for Louise as well.

As Saito got up and prepared himself for the day he kept making and refining his plans, waiting for the day he would be summoned once more.
 
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If I remember right, Japan excuses katana due to them being seen as art or something along those lines, rather than primarily being a weapon. So he'd probably need to go through the proper training.

There's also the problem of katana needing a lot of maintenance with specific equipment, not sure if that's been solved and was just an old problem. He'll probably want to take a few of the bamboo pins or whatever the correct term is too, in case he loses one or it breaks
 
A young girl who likes issei finds herself self inserted in the body of Raynare just before the date begins with Raynare's memories with her power and Rebbilion Homura's power along with a transformation and the shield. Said girl reveals to issei that she's a fallen angel after the date before carrying him into the sky and seal their first date with a kiss in the sky. The two begin to date openly as a couple which causes questions to rise from the devils and the fallen angels.
Loved this idea ( but I still don't get how anyone can like someone like issei.)

What about Rebelion Homura become Raynare instead? Probably Issei as Madoka reincarnation? 😳
 
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If I remember right, Japan excuses katana due to them being seen as art or something along those lines, rather than primarily being a weapon. So he'd probably need to go through the proper training.

There's also the problem of katana needing a lot of maintenance with specific equipment, not sure if that's been solved and was just an old problem. He'll probably want to take a few of the bamboo pins or whatever the correct term is too, in case he loses one or it breaks
BUt they were originally created to be used as a weapon. So I think it should work.
 
Riser Phenex SI 4
One of the supposed advantages of bieng a devil is Flight.

Unfortunately nobody mentions the enormous mana cost that is required to power said flight. Wihh my current reserves I would only be able to fly about fifteen minutes at the speed an average human runs, five minutes if I'm going as fast as a car on a highway, or one minute at Formula one speeds.

Adding my areo dynamic spell increases my flight times at high speeds by two to three times. Though it doesn't make a difference when flying slow like a person's running speed.

Flight was something of a passion of mine. In the previous life. Ask me a question about aeroplanes and I would go on a rant. I also loved tech.

So unlike military otaku's who spent time leaning how's guns work. I spent my time learning anything related to the Air field.

So what I decided now was to create a mana construct like the Areodynamic cone spell.... (I really need to give this spell a name.) and create invisible jet engines (mana constructs) under my wings to reduce the Mana cost of flight.

Considering my wings are literally made of fire I couldn't ask for a more convinient fuel source.

I'll have to test this at once.



I'm starting a research journal to log my thouts, theories, and results.

Day 1


My Mana construct of a turbine didn't even start,

And with it bieng invisible diagnosis is pretty difficult.

Day 2

I've made my Mana construct is now translucent instead of completely invisible.

It looks like a turbine made of glass, like it would fracture the moment I started it. even though its actually made out of mana.

I figured out a reason why it doesn't start.

While my imagination is good. It isn't accurate and trying to recreate a turbine which is made from cutting edge precision just from memory?

Yeah that's not going to work.

I decided to order a miniature turbine. And some equipment to test them. They have been made at this time right?

Day 6

It took three days for the turbines to arrive, must faster than I expected.

The turbine though is a little bigger than I thought. Still... It was something I could use to figure out what exactly I was doing wrong

Opening it up I began to go through each piece one by one .

Day 8

Dear lord.

Ow

I was an idiot.

While my Mana construct didn't contain many of the parts as they were unnecessary such as sensors, I think leaving out the fuel injector and expecting it to run simple because I provided it mana was too much. Though instead of fuel I could theoretically provide it with Phenex fire directly from my wings.

Requires more testing.

Day 9

Good news.

My Mana constructed engine actually started.

Bad news

It blew up, spectacularly!


Day 10

I figured out what was causing the Mana constructed engine to blow up.

Two reasons.

One. It was not strong enough to handle it.

It meant that I was not step enough to han handle it.

You see mana construct like cloths are created with mana and will dissipate if damaged or dismissed. The more familiar one is and the more knowledgable one is about the Mana construct they are creating the closer the construct will be to what the devil wants it to be.

For example a devil uses their mana to create clothes.

Devils wear cloths everyday. Except nudists and exhibitionists. So one would be quite fammilar with how their cloth felt, its properties and its looks.

Which means I needed to study a bit. And the next mana construct turbine I built, I should and much more mana to its durability and its strength.

I tested the normal turbine with my flame as well... Its started... Ran for a short while which is better that my construct.

Then it exploded . It's remains melted.

Phenex flames were too hot for ordinary engines... Who'd have thunk.

Two, the Blades were not properly balanced. I can't believe I forgot such a crucial fact.

That means I couldn't just create turbines on the spot when needed to fly.

I had to create it earlier, balance the blades properly and store it in my personal space for later use...


Day 13

Help. My sister is tired of the explosions and is dragging me to-
 
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Mini interlude Ravel
Authors Note: I don't kow why. but for somereason this writers block is taking longer than others to leave.

I can barely put out a few hundred words....


Brother really has changed...

I didn't want to believe it.

But I think Sirzechs-sama has traumatized Riser-niisama.

He is no longer the lively brother I knew before. Even though he was a bit perverse and played around, that was expected of a devil. It's not like he was hurting anyone.

But not he doesn't even play with me anymore. Not playfully or in a lewd manner.

Now he trains Zealously, buying tons of things from the human world, sometimes I have no idea what they even are.

Every time I looked into nee-sama's eye, I felt like he was desperate.

As if he was running to try to catch up.

To reach the impossibility that was Sirzechs Lucifer.

I fear that he would not stop even if he collapses in exhaustion.

So I decided to force him to take breaks.

I don't mind if nii-sama hates me for this. But I don't want him to get hurt.

He barely has anytime to talk to the family anymore.

The only time he talks to us is either during mealtimes or when he requests the staff to bring something to be bought from the human world.

Sirzechs Lucifer....

Riser may see you as a goal, Mom and Dad may not make much of it, but I shall never forgive you. I may not be able to hurt you, but should a time come when you request my help, you can be sure I will not lift a finger to do so, even under the threat of death.

With that thought, I dragged my brother to the family hot springs hopefully it will help him relax a bit and forget about his training at least for a while.
 
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Naruto SI Idea
SI in Naruto regains memories as a 6-year-old Orphan in the land of Iron.

He receives a system except for this one, Unlike the gamer system doesn't give any stat points or give gamers a mind.

Rather it gives him a list of skills and a skill tree he can learn from By practicing. From the Fate series....

For example, if he chooses Sasaki Kojirou's skill tree He won't be able to learn another skill tree until he learns at least 2 skills, then he can choose another available servant.

Noble Phantasms can also be learned but they take much longer and require all active skills of a servant to be mastered to 100% first.*

Learning all three skills of an Available servant Automatically grants any passive skills a servant had.**

*Some Noble Phantasms Cannot be gained by training and the user is required to spend Legend points which they can do by completing feats of Legend. (Do something big that makes your name into the Bingo book. The more deeds you add to the book and the higher your rank the more points you get.)
**Not all skills can be gained by training. Some require the user to spend Heroic points which can be earned by doing heroic deeds.


Available Servant's Skills

Sasaski Kojirou

Ushiwakamaru
Yagyū Tajima-no-Kami Munenori
Watanabe no Tsuna
Yamanami Keisuke
Saitō Hajime
Senji Muramasa
Okita Sōji
Beni-Enma
Miyamoto Musashi
EMIYA
Ryōgi Shiki
Heracles
 
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The Fate version of Tsubame-gaeshi would be such a mind screw to Naruto universe swordsmen. An attack with no chakra that warps space to attack three times simultaneously? I wanna see an Uchiha use their sharingan on it and have a mental breakdown.
 
Should ad tamamo-no-mae just for thr lulz because 9 tailed fox
He can't summon servants with the system. Rather with enough training, he will be able to learn their skills, such as Shikuchi, Tsubame Gaeshi, or Nine Lives: The Shooting Hundred Heads. Of course to even attempt something like that he has first have the strength, speed and skill nessacary to even start learning. So each skill has prerequisites.

For Example to start learning.Nine Lives: The Shooting Hundred Heads he has to have at least. 1000 in STR, END, and AGI.

His starting stats will be like this.

STR: 5
END: 5
AGI: 5
INT: 10
WIS: 7

Average adult Civillian will be.

STR: 10
END: 15
AGI: 10
INT: 7
WIS: 9

Average Genin

STR: 50
END: 60
AGI: 70
INT: 10
WIS: 5

Average Chunin

STR: 100
END: 140
AGI: 90
INT: 15
WIS: 7

Average Jonin

STR: 150
END: 250
AGI: 300
INT: 20
WIS: 50

Average Kage

STR: 400
END: 300
AGI: 500
INT: 50
WIS: 200
 
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How close would a Might Guy who is using the Eight Gates get to that?
He would probably match the SI when he manages to use Nine Lives. Probably defeat him if uses though if the sixth gate. If SI manages to Master it to that will be a different story. If the SI Manages to Master it, Guy will only be able to defeat him if he activates all the eight gates as mastering it also requires mastering Godspeed.. Hell He could heavily injure the ten tails if he masters it.
 
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Well you might want to read up on herakles and Mythology because from how it's worded, the SI won't be limited by Class Containers and considering that it's 100% Canon that Herakles can be every single Class in a Grain War except Caster (and yes, I'm including Strange Fake for Avenger) well........shit's gonnna be like a blender if the SI manages to 100% the guy and if he manages to mix Herakles cutting off the 100 heads of the Lernean Hydra (from what I've heard) with Okita and Kojirou's NPs well.....SI might end up breaking reality and turning it into a GO Crossover....or just RtN
He would probably match the SI when he manages to use Nine Lives. Probably defeat him if uses though if the sixth gate. If SI manages to Master it to that will be a different story. If the SI Manages to Master it, Guy will only be able to defeat him if he activates all the eight gates as mastering it also requires mastering Godspeed.. Hell He could heavily injure the ten tails if he masters it.
And if one takes into account how doing the impossible is an integral part of herakles' legend, what would be more impossible than opening all the Gates and surviving but opening all the Gates, surviving and making the Ten Tails your bitch?
 
DXD idea/ snippet CYOA
I stared down at the earth, my cape bellowing behind me as I floated above high enough in the atmosphere to see the curvature of the earth.

This is not the world I'm supposed to be sent to.

This is not Worm.

Ah.... I see.

Now ROB's rage made some sense.

Considering took CYOA V1 took the four most broken powers and didn't even take a drawback...

It would have been so easy to win. So he decided to put me in this setting.

And I could feel that kaleidoscope is locked out to me...or at least the part which allows me to leave this world has been locked out.

Great.

Well, at least I had Alexandria, Shaper, and Inspired Inventor.

Though that raises the question.

What should I do?

This isn't worm.

Or an earth I recognized.

The time seemed to be 1980's...

Hmmmm... I suppose I i can check where Brockton bay is located in this world, maybe I would see something I would recognize?



I found a buff old man who looked like the second coming of all might who seemed to be fighting a whole hoard of monsters by himself...

I decided to lend him a hand.

Soon I found out which earth I was in.

I was in the titty earth!
 
DXD idea/ snippet CYOA2
"Are you sure you don't want to come with me?"

"Yes." I nodded as I took a bite of the fish that was cooking on the campfire. Turns out I was in DXD. And Vasco Strada could make mean fish.

"So what do you intend to do? You said you are completely human, yet I find that hard to believe. None of the sacred gears that I know of could allow you to do all that you did and not show a visible sign of its presence."

"Well, that is true, that's because my power is not a sacred gear, nor is it magic."

"Then What is it?"

"It's a power available to humans. All humans. I may be the first, but you'll soon see more and more people gain this power."

"And how do you know this?"

"I say the future."

"A future where Humanity has finally unlocked the power lying dormant within them, a power that gets stronger the more righteous a person is. Unfortunately, it was not completed before HE fell. So it's about to be activated before it's truly complete."

"Truly?" The old man's eyes widened. "Truly, HE is most gracious."

I told him my idea.

I think maybe I could create a Superhero Organization in this world.

Two Organizations.

Atlas and Chaldea, both of them would operate on a global scale.

Atlas to monitor the world and detect supernatural threats and occurrences and will pass the information to Chaldea, who will them assemble and mobilize a team suitable for dealing with the threat depending on Atlas's Report.

Creating such an organization would not be easy... but with Vasco's help and hopefully good enough Reputation of Superhero's in the coming future it should hopefully be possible.


"If you actually try this idea, know you have my full support. We are grievously short on people to defend, and we have to pick and chose where to send our men and where to leave them to fend for themselves. If you manage to create this Organization we might be able stop chosing who to save."

I could tell that he felt like the weight of the world was on his shoulders.

"You know I already have a few people on my team. I'm going to go public soon."

"A team?"

"Yeah, I bet Allmight could give you a run for your money." My plan to start the team was to invite Allmight and few others from other worlds. All might will ofcourse be from a world where he truly killed One for All. A few others would be Naofumi someone who would do anything to leave Melromac. Akemi Homura, and Natsuki Subaru two poeple who absolutely needed power and I would offer it to them in exchange for them to join my team for a decade before I returned them to their world a moment after I took them. I would make Homra an offer just before the final timeline and Subaru after Wins Rem's affection.

After all I intended to visit their worlds after this pesky block on Kaleidosopce is removed.

"All might?" Strada blinked.

"Yeah, he's pretty buff like you. Then theirs two of them with the power to reverse time both of them have different conditions and then there is the Shield whose potential in defense rivals that of the Aias used in the trojan war."

"Those are some pretty bold claims young man."

"Well, wait till you see them." I grinned.



I intended to use Kaleidoscope to look into the MHA universe and other Superhero worlds and figure out how quirks and powers through DNA work before using Shaper to grant those I considered worthy people, quirks...Heavily modified quirks of course. I may not be able to leave this world but all the other functions I could use with Kaleidoscope are still accessible. These Quirks won't work should they be reincarnated as the devil or any other creature such as a vampire. The only exception is those who are reincarnated as Angels when those cards are released. These quirks will monitor the state of mind of the person and what they are trying to do with it. The more they use intending to help others, to rescue and to stop someone from harming others the stronger it will get. The more it's used to intentionally hurt someone for the sake of hurting them or to vent frustrations on someone the weaker it will get. These quirks will be passed down through generations, and the child's quirks won't activate until their mind is fully matured. And before activating it will check the child's inclinations and intentions for Good and Evil before it activates, of course, Revenge is a different matter. If the child doesn't wish to hurt others other than those that hurt it. Then it would consider the Child Good, unless he intentionally harms those who are innocent.

Let's hope this doesn't backfire on me.

Seriously.
 
Riser Phenex SI 5
1 Year Later

"So what have you brought us out for riser?" Lord Phenex asks.

"You know that even though flight is a part of Devils Natural ability most don't use it as a method to get from place to place, right?"

"Ofcourse, nii." Ravel nodded. "With how much magical energy it would take to travel somewhere far in a reasonable amount of time we don't use flight unless the location is fairly close. Its the devil is participating in the Rescension. Especially with the teleportation spell. Why do you ask?"

"Well, I think I can get a fairly high position if I attend this year's Rescension."


"That's impossible. The Rescension is a race that requires the participants to never touch the ground. Not to mention only those with Ultimate class reserves minimum can actually complete the the race. It's a race all around hell. With even the fallen angels joining. Happening once every 5 years, If you joined now with your current reserves you'll be lucky to even complete a tenth of the race. Its a race that measures both endurance and speed, even if you chose endurance I highly doubt you'd even reach the top hundred."


"Thats why I'm going to show you a peak at what I've been working on." I replied before I deployed my firey wings and accessing one of the Invisible Mana Turbines I had successfully created in a whole year, and deployed them with a Magic circle right under my wings.


View: https://youtu.be/yZm6U21iXaA


Just as they looked like they were about to interrupt the I began to rotates the blades faster and faster and slowly start up the turbine feeding bits of my flame, and slowly wind began to blow from me and slowly its force increased until I was floating above the ground and my mom and sister were holding to their skirt to prevent it flipping before I shut of the engine and dropped down.

"What was that?" my father questioned.

"It's a new spell I developed that used both our wind and fire." I grinned. "And that's not even a fraction of the force." After all I didn't that me just starting my Mana turbines. This was even my final form, I still had the after burner mode and the Ramjet mode.

I chuckled internally at the joke.

My father frowned. "Though it seems to take much more than a normally flight just to keep you hovering, are you sure it's going to work."

"Yep."

He shrugged "alright then, just know you can quit it anytime alright?"

So dad didn't believe I could do it?

I mean yeah I could understand. My high class reserves against someone with a Ultimate class or Satan class reserves.

But I was going to prove. Its not about how big you have it. Its about how you use it....

Wait... Did I accidently make an innuendo?

Oh shit I'm getting effect led by this world aren't I?

Fuck..





Sorry, I don't know why but I feel like my writing quality has gone down the shit.
 
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Ramjet and after burner, i know you talking about air plane but all i'm thinking after hearing those word is when can you make air gear crossover?
 
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