ORO SI IDEA
SI in Orochimaru with a Tinker power with the Specialities of Robots, Cybernetics, and Modern Tech. Tinker Power also gives knowledge on what he is working on and what he intends to build.

It takes place after Orochimaru Builds a Secret Lab Underground in Konoha and kidnaps the first few kids who is currently in the lab unconscious.

The Secret Lab is known to the Hokage, but the Hokage doesn't know what it is for, he merely gave Orochimaru Permission to build the place.

Orochimaru hasn't contacted Danzo for the cells yet.
 
ehh if you go with that power why insert as orochimaru?
I feel it kinda wastes a good villain and the originals skills.
Waking as one of his victims would be neat, or as an orochimaru that can take inspiration from the SI's world for new techniques. seals would probably help them fill in the gaps on most modern tech uplift ideas
 
It takes place after Orochimaru Builds a Secret Lab Underground in Konoha and kidnaps the first few kids who is currently in the lab unconscious.

The Secret Lab is known to the Hokage, but the Hokage doesn't know what it is for, he merely gave Orochimaru Permission to build the place.

Orochimaru hasn't contacted Danzo for the cells yet.

Instead of asking permission, he just kidnapped those kids to take their measurements so he could build them a set of power armor and build his own team of Ronin Warrior type super heroes and unleashes them to bust crimes in the village. They keep arresting Jiraiya for peeping, Kakashi for public indecent behavior, Danzo for being a possible pedophile (especially when his cult of brainwashed children are discovered), and later stop the Cloud kidnapping attempt. The Uchiha keeps complaining to the Hokage about Orochimaru's team of unlicensed vigilantes (who are way more popular than them) and want to confiscate their giant Zords for police use.
 
ehh if you go with that power why insert as orochimaru?
I feel it kinda wastes a good villain and the originals skills.
Waking as one of his victims would be neat, or as an orochimaru that can take inspiration from the SI's world for new techniques. seals would probably help them fill in the gaps on most modern tech uplift ideas
That could work...
 
Alternate DXD Rias SI without DXD Knowledge...
"Very Well, I accept" Rias sighed.

""Buchou"" Her servants exclaimed but Rias raised her hands stopping them.

Riser blinked surprised, even Grayfia looked at her surprised.

"But know this." Rias continued her eyes narrowing at Riser. "I will perform the bare minimum of duties as a wife should, and you may use my body as you please, but you will never have my love nor my Soul. My heart will belong to a those I chose myself and no one else. I am the master of my fate and the captain of my soul." She then turned to Grayfiya and continued. "Let Father and Mother know that I no longer consider them my parents. To me they are merely my sperm and Egg donor. That's it. Freedom is the right of all sentient beings. Anyone who hinders the freedom of another sentient bieng... I don't even want to associate with someone like that."

"Are you sure that is what you wish to do my lady?" Grayfia, someone who rarely ever showed emotions to outsiders couldn't control her expresssion.

"Yes, you all are dissmissed, simply inform me of when the wedding date is set."

"Rias...Do you really hate me that much." Riser finally questioned.

"I do not hate you, nor I love you, I know that you do not have a choice in this matter either so I do not blame you, as I told you I shall do the bare minimum duties of a wife. I shall niether give you love nor do I expect it, you are free to take anyone else as your lover if you need love instead of procreation." Rias stated plainly.

"I see..." Riser was silent, seemingly dissapointed before he disappeared with his peerage in a circle of flames. Shortly followed by Grafiya who gave Rias an unreadable look before she too vanished in a magic circle.
 
Well that is truly an unexpected thing, but I can see that divorce will come afterwards if someone haves a half brain to understand that Rias keeps a grudge and bridges have been nuked. Being unhappy with a marriage means a lot in the long run, specially with progeny who Rias would teach to hate her side of the bloodline.
 
???? SI
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zzzzzZZZZzzzzz....huh?

Where was I?

The last thing I remember was doing research on how rockets and railguns worked for one of the fics I was writing...

So where hell was I in now?

Why is it so dark and where am I?

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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

I found myself in a sort of cage. the cage was not made of metal...rather it had a rather soft texture like meat... except it was warm...

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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

Huh...i just realized I haven't breathed in a long time. Also... I I haven't even eaten or drunk anything in a long time, was I dead?

Was I in limbo?

......zzzzzzZZZZZZZZ




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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

The walls were getting cramped, either I was growing bigger or the walls were shrinking.....wait.....wait....wait a fucking minute.

Ah....fuck...

I see....

was I a unborn child??

What the fuck?

actually that explained why I kept falling unconscious every few seconds I woke up. Even if my soul can think at this level my brain must be struggling to catch up...

The length of time I am able to stay up is getting longer and longer... My latest record is 5 minutes 32 seconds.

Yes I counted... not like I had anything else to do here?

wait.... Was I born in another world?

Maybe.

Hmmmm. Perhaps I should Try meditating? Not like it would hurt... and its not like I had anything else to do.

I already tried one form of meditation by counting the seconds of how long I could stay awake.

So lets try another method... perhaps trying to empty my mind?


......zzzzzzZZZZZZZZ




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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

Hmmm, trying to empty my mind doesn't seem to be doing anything, Other than seemingly making me able to stay conscious much longer.... maybe because my mind is not under as much strain when I'm not trying to focus or think things? In which case this is definitely a failed meditation.... let's try something else...

Perhaps trying to find something within myself. If I was in a world that had magic/ki/prions/whatever then it's possible I might be able to access it if I tried to meditate and search for it, maybe try to feel it out.


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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

My conscious time is definitely much short when I actively try to think about something... But at the rate it's improving the length of time I remain conscious it's definitely increasing and fast....though iI'll likely hit diminishing returns eventually. The last time I checked how long I could stay awake it was about 2 hours... approximately since it was hard to keep track of time... even counting the seconds was likely inaccurate.

Also to note... I did find something.... I have no idea how long it took but from when I started to within me, it was nothing like what I expected...when I tried poking it it felt like I was poking myself.

I tried to move it.

It felt like I was moving myself and not moving at the same time.

Possible but very disorienting.

Trying to guide it instead of moving resulted in much better results.

Guiding it towards my limbs felt amazing like I could do anything.

Guiding it to my head felt even better and even maybe doubled my time in consciousness.

So this "energy" seemed something that reinforced me.

More tests need to be conducted.



......zzzzzzZZZZZZZZ


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ZZZZZZzzzzz......

Intention worked well a mental image worked even better.

Still... that begs the question of what this energy was. Definitely not Od since I would have likely injured myself with reinforcement. Dragon ball Ki? Possible. Unlikely to be spirit juice.... Maybe I'm in just another fantasy world with magic?

.... not like I can do that kind of experiment here anyway. but this energy definitely helped me improve the time I could spend conscious.

Also....its starting to be a bit too constricting...very uncomfortable... I'm about to be born soon....not something I ever thought I would think.


......zzzzzzZZZZZZZZ






"Congratulations Mam, He's a health baby boy, would you like to name him?"

"Cerulean, Cerulean Pascal"

My only thought was, "what the fuck kind of name was that?" BEfore the nurse slapped me on the back and my body began to cry uncontrollably.
 
???? SI 2
Day 1
After I managed to stop my body from crying which took quite a bit of effort I managed to glance around slightly during the times someone picked me up, either my mother or a nurse.

It looks like I'm reincarnated in a fairly advanced society. Perhaps a sci-fi setting? From the Holograms and Hi-tech stuff I was able to spot, Scifi with magic?

Regardless, I'm thankful I'm born into a world like Fate or DXD.... wait, is it possible that this is the future in DXD?

Fuck.

Until I figure out where I am I'm not out of the water. I could be in a death world for all I know and the end of the world could be around the corner.

Thankfully I have the "energy" within my body that seems to reinforce my self. Now that I can move about it should be able to help me develop much faster than usual both physically and mentally.



Day 5

It seems the doctor noticed my abnormality and is trying to diagnose what is wrong with me.

Turn's out a Baby that doesn't cry, and stays awake as long as an adult is definitely a cause for concern.

Yet no matter how many tests they ran they couldn't find anything wrong with me.

"Your son looks perfectly healthy Ma'am, but should anything happen, please let us know. Other than that, if no other problems occur you will likely be discharged today."

Ah, finally, this hospital is High tech and all but I can't exercise without people becoming suspicious of me.



Day 6

I was carried home when I was asleep.

But that was not the problem, turns out, my mom is taking care of me by her lonesome, turns out my Dad's an asshole boyfriend who fled the moment he heard Mom was pregnant.....

But seeing the state of home compared to the Hospital I can definitely say Mom's not well off. Considering she works and comes back home every hour. I can tell it was taking a toll on her...

Still, she was the one who carried me for nine months, gave birth to me, and was now taking care of me even though she didn't have to do so.

I intend to ease her burden as much as I could.



Day 10

I could now wiggle around without getting too tired.

One other thing I also noted...As I was thinking about things I noticed that it was much easier and I was able to connect dots that I haven't before. So I started remembering things that interested me in the past life that I spent so long studying about. Specifically tech...

And I could make out things about what I studied before and even extrapolate even further.

All the silly mistakes were even sillier and the things that I thought weren't silly were now stupid.

Dear lord.

Was this what becoming smart was like?

Thinking your past self was an idiot...

Still, I think I can thank the new energy and the fact my brain is a baby which is still developing for my new smartness.

At least I'll never feel bad about improving my physical body.



Day 30
Wiggling around as much as possible for exercise, guiding my energy to muscles to soothe them and reinforce them and then trying to puzzle things out with my mind that I missed out in my past life is how I spent my days, other than that was, drinking milk and popping which I'm not inclined to think about.

No sir, no thank you.


Day 50

I finally managed to get enough strength in my arms to crawl.

It was for a few seconds, but those few seconds felt amazing, as if I stood at the top of the world, which lasted for all of 5 seconds before I fell face flat into the bed.

Good thing Mom wasn't here to see such an embarrassing moment. Still, A milestone was achieved.

Next to crawl without feeling the burn....

That will take time...
 
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???? SI 3
Azure Pascal (mama)

She could tell her child was strange.... Not in a bad way, but she honestly expected to have to stay up all night with her child crying every few hours for milk. But the only thing he did was say "Aaaaah." Whenever he needed something, whether he was hungry or stained himself. It was honestly why she could use the Baby monitor and go to work, but instead, I am able to get proper sleep, come home once every few hours feed her child.

She wished she had a maternity leave but with how little her job pays and her employer refusing to pay her she has to continue her long hours in the scrapyard.

She wishes she can afford to buy him toys. But after making sure he had clothes and food, and a small mattress for him to sleep in and something to eat herself she barely had enough to pay her rent and utilities. The baby monitor alone, cost her most of her savings. Life was hard, but when she saw his sleeping face laying on the floor next to him, watching over him, she felt complete.

So long as her child grew up healthy she was happy.

And grow up healthy he did.

He had begun to crawl not even two months old, he was growing up, and fast, even she could tell this was abnormal, but who could she go to? She had no parents, the guy who she trusted had left her and if she took him to the hospital and they come to know about such irregularities it is possible that someone from high up will get interested.

And take her son away.

She wouldn't let that happen.

She would be careful.

She would wash herself every time before feeding her son, and with how quiet and well-behaved he was it eased a lot of her worries.

4 months in and he was already crawling said his first word. Even though she knew that was abnormal yet, instead of fear she felt pride, pride at how fast her own son is growing.

Perhaps the Gods have finally blessed her? Were her trials nearly over? (She didn't know how true that was.)

She was only able to spend a few hours in the evening with him and sleep at night. Yet he had already spoken his first word.
Mama.

Her body might need rest but her heart and mind were full.

Seeing his chubby face crawl towards her and call her Mama, Oh, her heart could burst with happiness if it could.

No one. Not even the council will take him from her.

Of course, the surprises he showed her didn't end there....

She was surprised again and again. His being able to speak at just 15 months was just one of them.. No, it was what he had asked of her that was even more surprising... and it was something well in her power to do so...

Still to bring him to her workplace the scrapyard?

No, she couldn't do so. She could bring some scrap that they threw away with her but there was no way she was risking anyone else finding out how abnormally smart he was...
 
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Make him into a full blown conspiracy theorist. That'd be fantastic.

'God is dead?! That's just what he wants you to think!'
An it'd be even funnier if it was actually true...since angel are technically biengs that perfectly obey gods word so they can't grow when God is around, so he pretended to die. And took a much-needed vacation for himself....Disguised as a human once again....
 
Fate Nier SI 1
"So, you still haven't told me what you summoned me for master? Also Holy shit the amount of mana in the air is ridiculous what the hell happened?"

"Chu Culain, welcome to the world, if you haven't noticed it already, you are incarnated already, meaning you have a flesh and blood body, so even if I summoned you, I can't really be called a master can I? Since I'm not supporting you in this world anymore?"

"Nah, but you did bring me back, so I owe you one. A big one, since I can live again." He gave a friendly grin.

I smiled. "Then I have only one thing to ask of you, other than that you may live your life as you please."

"And that is?"

"Do not tell anyone else that you're human." I paused "If someone somehow figures out that you are human by themselves then that's not a problem, and secondly don't leave the earth."

"Ok, weird request, but I can do that, what about the strangely thick mana here?"

"Oh, it's the year 11,944, Aliens invaded and all of mankind is dead."

"You're shitting me." He deadpanned.

"Nope, you're the third human I found myself in this world and Incarnated Serenity, though she decided to stay around for some reason, something to do with me not dying to her poison or something."

"Right," Lancer swung around his spear lazily. "Is that all?"

"Well, if they try to insist on some of the Androids insist on taking you away to keep you safe, you can tell them that there are other humans like you living among them and that you were given orders to stay on the earth or something."

"You mean..."

"Yep, enjoy your new life, Setanta."

"Oh, I'm going to enjoy it alright. See ya later, Master!" He finished a bloodthirsty grin forming as he vanished.

I may be too much of a coward to fight myself, but that doesn't mean I couldn't use my gifts to make the aliens and machines wish they never came to Earth.

I turn back to the miracle of engineering and magecraft that I managed to create after installing Davin ci. A Machine that takes a single cell, changes it to match a heroic spirit that I summoned and recreates a body to fit them down to the last cell, though of course that requires it to get a proper scan of said heroic spirit which alone takes hours. Unfortunately, I can only keep one Servant at a time even with my high-quality 57 Magic Circuits.

Right, Cross Chu Culain Of the people who are likely to be God-like and Inspire the androids while not "telling" them that they are human... Long-term plan...Use Heroic spirits to restart humanity and wipe the machines from existence while granting Androids hope and happiness that humanity is fighting alongside them.

Serenity (with poison immunity I can get a loyal bodyguard)
Chu Cullain (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)

Sasaki Kojirou (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Okita Souji (Neutral will Likely listen to the request)
Miyamoto Musashi (Neutral will Likely listen to the request....Though airheaded...may forget...)
Senji Muramasa (Neutral will Likely listen to the request)
EMIYA (Good Cook)
Yagyu Munenori (Neutral will Likely listen to the request)
Hektor (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Houzouin Inshun (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Ushiwakamaru (Very Loyal)
Mandricardo (Dude needs a friend... Lots of androids would make very good friends)
Paracelsus von Hohenheim (Might be able to help me improve my machine.. Also overall Cool guy)
Arash (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Saint Martha (Neutral will Likely listen to the request)
Jeanne d'Arc (A Cool Girl, Overall. Likely to Listen)
Tristan (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Bedivere (A Cool guy Overall. Likely to Listen)
Minamoto-no-Raikou (A Cool girl, Mother? Overall. Likely to Listen)
Katou Danzo ( Robot, Can recreate a robot body for her? Maybe as a second body Guard?)
Nezha (A Cool Girl, Overall. Likely to Listen)
Valkyrie ( Robot, Can recreate a robot body for her? Maybe as a Third Fourth, and Fifth body Guard?)
Qin Liangyu (Neutral will Likely listen to the request)
Bradamante (A Cool Girl, Overall. Likely to Listen)
Gareth (A Cool Girl, Overall. Likely to Listen)
Sei Shounagon (A Cool Girl, Overall. Likely to Listen)
Voyager (A Satellite? Maybe could help me around in my workshop? Could he connect to his real self?)


I have quite a lot to go through.. I guess better start with the "cool" guys and girls first...
 
RWBY SI 4
1 Year

By now, I could walk on my own and quite comfortably at that. My mind continued to expand and absorb information like a sponge, and I made sure to keep practicing with the energy within me, continuing to reinforce my body and mind further and exercise myself in subtle ways when my mom was around and pushing myself when she was not. After all, I didn't want to worry her.

I had become more aware of my surroundings, and it was clear that my mother was struggling to make ends meet. I understood that I had to do something to ease her burden, but I couldn't risk revealing my abnormal abilities to the outside world. Mom seemed to also understand that and thankfully hasn't taken me to a doctor even though it definitely worried her. It was best to keep a low profile for now.

I started asking for small scraps from the scrapyard when she sometimes took me with her. I would pick up anything that seemed useful and bring it back home. Once she was either asleep or outside without me I'd tinker with the scraps, first sorting out the things I had, she was to remove any part that seemed too small and was from what I could tell an energy source even if they were likely used up. Nevertheless, I began to try opening them to see what I could find.

It was challenging to work with limited resources, but my intelligence and the energy within me seemed to help me, using my energy to reinforce my brain somehow allowed me to connect dots that I didn't notice before. When I stopped the knowledge didn't go but I couldn't make any new observations of that level. Hopefully, this energy helps to grow my brain as it did my muscles. one thing I did manage to get while the tech here was complex it was also different. From all the things I've torn down, I can make one conclusion.

This place developed similarly to earth...But I had yet to see any kind of oil of any kind. Not even in for lubrication. Electricity was definitely a thing here, so was it a fully electric world? More samples are needed to make a solid conclusion. Though with mom careful to remove anything that looked like an energy source or battery pack so I can't touch those until I'm much older.

Still, I'm happy my mom agreed to this selfish request. As I continued to grow, so did my bond with my mother. Even though she didn't fully understand why her son was so different, she loved me with all her heart. I could see it in her eyes and feel it in her warm embraces every time she came back home after a long day at work.

3 Years.

I was no longer just a baby; I had grown into a young child who could converse fluently and understand complex concepts beyond my age and my daily training and using my internal energy to reinforce my brain had worked well, and I can tell that I'm much smarter than I was in my previous life and now that my brain is better I can continue to reinforce it making it even sharper. My mother was proud of me, and I could tell that her worries about my abnormalities had faded as she embraced the joys of having such an exceptional child.

But with my growth came a need to explore the world outside our small home. I yearned to know more, to experience what lay beyond the scrapyard and our modest life. I wanted to learn about the world and its mysteries, understand the nature of the energy within me, and to discover what type of world I was born in, to see if I recognized the world from any of the fiction I've seen.

My mother, understanding my curiosity, supported my desire for knowledge. She would often spend her free time reading books to me, exposing me to various subjects like history, science, and the arts. My mind now much greater absorbed everything like a newborn learner, and I would spend hours once I was able to read myself... and it was when I got to History and science that I found out the world I was in.

I was in Remnant.

The death world.

4 Years

I had developed a routine of helping my mother during the day she was now taking me to work daily, gathering scraps and assisting her at the scrapyard I would be able to bring some things home, and at night after she went to sleep, I would study, experiment, and meditate to harness the energy within me further. It had become an essential part of my life, and I relied on it not only for my physical and mental growth. Though that raised a question. What was this energy? Was It Aura? If so how could I use it when it was locked? Everytime I tried to bring it to my skin it would hit a wall. Inside my body was fine but nothing outside? So was this something else? I had no one to ask and I knew if I told my mother she would be even more worried than she is already... I have to wait until I can get a scroll or find someone trustworthy to ask... Hmm Beacon existed... I wonder if I could contact Ozpin with a scroll? Though Mom owns one its a really old model... I'll have to see how to use it first and make a way to contact him...

I wonder how he would react to someone else who had reincarnated...

Ozpin was someone who had my utmost respect, someone who lead humanity through the darkness even as he was betrayed again and again, even as humanity stupidly tried to destroy itself through racism and wars, he kept trying to unite mankind and shepherd them through the darkness.

It took a few minutes before I managed to figure out how to use the scroll and how to access the CCT network... There was a contact for Beacon but no number that I could use that could directly connect to Ozpin... I hoped I can get through as I was very excited to speak with the man... I had soo many ideas to share with him, possible methods to end the war between him and Salem. One was involving Yeeting Salem in deep space. Others involved taking all of humanity and leaving Salem and the Grimm behind on this planet. They can have an empty planet if they want and we could reach for the stars to a new planet.
 
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FOZ LOUISE Saito AU Time travel 2
As the days passed, Saito meticulously prepared himself for the day he would be summoned again by Louise. He spent hours training his body, finding technology and books that he could bring to Halkeginia that wouldn't effect that world as it did his. He trained his body and mind, honing his skills with Gandálfr after managing to get his hands on a live Katana, determined to be even stronger to protect Louise when the time came.


In the meantime, Louise's empty gaze did not go unnoticed. Tabitha had grown suspicious. Why had Louise suddenly stopped reacting? Eve Kirche could tell something was wrong but none of her usual provocations seems to have any effect on Louise.


For weeks, Saito waited in Japan, watching the calendar as the day of his summoning approached. He had made all the necessary arrangements to travel to Halkeginia without arousing suspicion. Getting things like Electic Mortors, Batteries, Miniature Generators, several books on Tech and how things work. His heart pounded with anticipation and nervousness, knowing that he would soon be reunited with Louise.

On the day of his return, Saito stood in his room with a huge bag of belongings, ready it was huge, and so heavy that he was barely able to lift it even with all the training he had done. Not to mention the light Samurai Armour he wore. The summoning circle eventually activated, and a bright green oval light appeared in front of him, with a heave he managed to lift the huge Bug out bag filled with everything he planned to bring and barely managed a few steps in the portal before he collapsed.

Louise, who had just completed the summoning in the academy's courtyard, felt a strange sensation. It was as if a part of her soul had awakened, her emotions returned and she knew that it was him..

As the light dissipated, Louise's eyes widened in surprise and disbelief. There, standing before her, was Saito - her familiar, her friend, her companion. Tears of joy began to roll down her eyes as she realised it was indeed him and when she saw the state he was in she began to laugh, at the silly sight of Saito underneath an oversized backpack

"Saito?" she uttered softly.

Saito grinned, looking up, relief washing over him as he saw her reaction. "Hey, Louise. I'm back."


"Saito," she repeated warmth in her voice. "You're really here."

Louise's eyes glistened with unshed tears, and she extended a trembling hand toward him. Saito gently took her hand in his, offering her a reassuring smile.

"I missed you," she admitted quietly.

"I missed you too," he replied, squeezing her hand gently. "But don't worry, Louise. We'll face everything together, just like we always have."

As they stood there, hand in hand, Louise felt a sense of comfort and familiarity wash over her. Even without her emotions fully returned, she knew that having Saito by her side made her stronger. With him, she felt like she could face any challenge that Halkeginia threw their way.

As the crowd of students watched in amazement (that Louise actually summoned something), Saito and Louise remained focused on each other, their bond stronger than ever before. Louise's emotions once locked away, now surged back with full force. She felt a mixture of joy, relief, and love, all overwhelming her as she clutched Saito's hand tightly.

"Saito, you really came back," she said, her voice quivering with emotion.

"I promised you, didn't I?" Saito replied, his eyes shining with affection for the girl before him. "I'll always come back to you, Louise."

Tears of happiness streamed down Louise's cheeks as she threw her arms around him, embracing him tightly. The weight of her emotions, both past and present, poured out through her tears. Saito held her close, understanding that this was her way of finally releasing the emotions she had been unable to feel for so long.

Colbert, who had seen many magical occurrences, couldn't help but be moved by what he was seeing, still, he was confused. Who was this man? Miss Louise clearly knew him. But he didn't seem like a noble either.

Kirche on the other hand was surprised, who knew the uptight Louise had a lover of her own? She was definitely going to see what made this man so special that Louise the most upright girl had fallen for him.

With Louise's emotions fully restored, the two of them spent the following days catching up and discussing their plans for the future. Saito showed her the items he had brought from his world - books, technology, and other useful tools. Louise was fascinated by the knowledge he had acquired and excited about the potential advancements they could bring to Halkeginia.

As they shared their dreams and aspirations, they also grew closer as a couple. The struggles they had faced only deepened their bond, and they found comfort and strength in each other's presence.

With Saito's help, Louise continued to improve her magical abilities, and together, they faced new challenges that came their way. Saito's training with Gandálfr became even more effective, and he proved to be an even more formidable protector for Louise.
Meanwhile, the world of Halkeginia began to change. With the knowledge and technology Saito had brought, Colbert and other mages worked together to make advancements that were previously thought impossible. The people of Halkeginia marveled at these new developments and saw a glimmer of hope for a brighter future.

In time, the couple's fame spread far and wide. The story of the powerful mage and her loyal familiar, a peasant who came from another world and ascended to the rank of knight, captured the hearts of many. They became legends, inspiring hope and courage among the people.

One of his titles was the Knight of Love...You can guess why he has that.

As the days turned into weeks and months, Saito and Louise faced numerous challenges together, united as an unbreakable team. And as they worked side by side to protect and improve Halkeginia, their love only grew stronger.
And as they walked hand in hand, their destinies entwined, they knew that no matter what came their way, they would face it together, with unwavering love and determination.
 
As much as I love your writing and am obsessed with your creative genius, your disorganized snippet thread been kicking my ass left, right, and centre. It took me aaaages to find the previous chapters to both of your recent updates smh.

Thanks for the double update, though.
 
Lee SI
What the heck was all I could think as I read through the literal Cultivation Manual in front of me. I was self-inserted into Rock Lee, not Sasuke, not Naruto, not even Sakura. But Lee...

But as I read through the Cultivation Manual that had been given by ROB (Random Omnipotent Being), I understood.

Lee didn't have a Chakra defect. He had a special constitution that was extremely useful for cultivation. That's why his Chakra didn't react properly with hand signs.

It turns out that everyone in the Naruto world had barely scratched the surface of the power Chakra offered. The only one who even understood its true use was Orochimaru, though he went about it in the wrong way.

Cultivation can be learned by anyone if only they were brave enough. It requires one to circulate their chakra from the First gate to the second gate all the way to the eighth gate and back to the first gate to complete a cycle. Going through different tenketsu in different orders while cycling through the gates will result in different effects. However, if you don't know what you are doing, it can easily hurt you or even kill you.

Since it requires the chakra to pass through the gate of death, which only Gai sensei and Dai had the guts to do so, it can be dangerous. They forcefully opened the gates, which are clogged with impurities. Unlike them, cultivating and cycling chakra gently through the gates will start removing the muck from the gates and will cause the chakra to be able to flow much more freely, each gate freed increasing control. Once the gate is purified of muck, continue to cycle Chakra through the gates, and the gate will improve, purify, and refine the body part that it is responsible for.

Starting with the first gate, it improves the brain and its connection with the rest of the body. Once it's completely refined and purified, the gate will open, releasing the limiter on the brain, allowing it to access 100% of the body's strength and speed. The reason the gate opens is that the brain - the organ to which the gate is connected - has reached the minimum required refinements and purification needed to handle the body's full power without accidentally tearing the body apart. That's why Lee kept tearing his muscles every time he forcefully opened the gate. His mind was not ready to prevent the muscles from working against each other and tearing themselves. However, as he grew up, it became easier because every time he did so, he was purifying his brain a little bit even though he wasn't actually Cultivating it. It was also the reason why opening the gates forcefully was so dangerous. They were there for a reason, after all.

Gate of Healing Kyūmon, "Gate of Rest": Located in between the brain and body, it manages the body's recovery system, both physically and mentally. Cultivating this gate will increase one's rate of recovery. It will eventually open when your body and mind reach a sufficient level. However, continuing to cultivate this gate will continue to increase its effects.

Gate of Life: Located on the spinal cord, connected to the nerves and blood, cultivating this gate will refine one's nerves, reducing reaction time as it speeds up the nerves, purifies your blood, and washes one's marrow, improving blood quality.

Gate of Pain (Shōmon): Located on the spinal cord, cultivating this gate strengthens tendons to enable them to handle more force from the muscles and strengthens tissues to make them much more resistant to damage.

Gate of Limit (Tomon): Located in the abdomen, cultivating this gate refines and purifies one's muscles increasing their strength, speed, and durability.

Gate of View (Keimon): Located in the stomach, it stores all the Chakra that the user has when not in use. Cultivating this gate increases the density and the amount of Chakra you can store within. You can absorb natural energy to help recover your Chakra once this gate is open without worrying about turning to stone, as then your chakra would be far too dense for it to have any effect on you.

The Gate of Death (Shimon): Located at the heart, unlike the others, this gate doesn't cultivate the heart nor is it connected to it. Rather, it's connected to your spirit (soul). Cultivating this gate strengthens the soul, and when it's opened, it means you have reached immortality. Your soul is solid enough to not need your body. You can force your body to regenerate even if your head is blown off or separate yourself from your body and have your soul take a physical presence. Or even exist as a Ghost. Like the Sage of Six paths.

There were a few more things, but these were the most important points.

Seriously...

The ninjas here were basically only scratching the surface of how powerful Chakra could be.

And the first thing I was going to do was quit the academy. I had no interest in becoming a ninja if I could cultivate. Then, my next step was finding a training ground with a river or a waterfall where I can begin cultivating without worrying about the disgusting muck that would come out of my body, which would be washed off by the waterfall or river water. By the time I was done, no ninja, not even Madara, would be able to hurt me.
 
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I've been reading this Naruto multicrossover story where the Si is a Otsutsuki though its AU because apparently they discovered a cultivator universe and this lead them to developing new better path of gaining power than just eating God fruit trees.
 
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Starting with the first gate, it improves the brain and its connection with the rest of the body. Once it's completely refined and purified, the gate will open, releasing the limiter on the brain, allowing it to access 100% of the body's strength and speed. The reason the gate opens is that the brain - the organ to which the gate is connected - has reached the minimum required refinements and purification needed to handle the body's full power without accidentally tearing the body apart. That's why Lee kept tearing his muscles every time he forcefully opened the gate. His mind was not ready to prevent the muscles from working against each other and tearing themselves. However, as he grew up, it became easier because every time he did so, he was purifying his brain a little bit even though he wasn't actually Cultivating it. It was also the reason why opening the gates forcefully was so dangerous. They were there for a reason, after all.

Gate of Healing Kyūmon, "Gate of Rest": Located in between the brain and body, it manages the body's recovery system, both physically and mentally. Cultivating this gate will increase one's rate of recovery. It will eventually open when your body and mind reach a sufficient level. However, continuing to cultivate this gate will continue to increase its effects.

Gate of Life: Located on the spinal cord, connected to the nerves and blood, cultivating this gate will refine one's nerves, reducing reaction time as it speeds up the nerves, purifies your blood, and washes one's marrow, improving blood quality.

Gate of Pain (Shōmon): Located on the spinal cord, cultivating this gate strengthens tendons to enable them to handle more force from the muscles and strengthens tissues to make them much more resistant to damage.

Gate of Limit (Tomon): Located in the abdomen, cultivating this gate refines and purifies one's muscles increasing their strength, speed, and durability.

Gate of View (Keimon): Located in the stomach, it stores all the Chakra that the user has when not in use. Cultivating this gate increases the density and the amount of Chakra you can store within. You can absorb natural energy to help recover your Chakra once this gate is open without worrying about turning to stone, as then your chakra would be far too dense for it to have any effect on you.

The Gate of Death (Shimon): Located at the heart, unlike the others, this gate doesn't cultivate the heart nor is it connected to it. Rather, it's connected to your spirit (soul). Cultivating this gate strengthens the soul, and when it's opened, it means you have reached immortality. Your soul is solid enough to not need your body. You can force your body to regenerate even if your head is blown off or separate yourself from your body and have your soul take a physical presence. Or even exist as a Ghost. Like the Sage of Six paths.
The seventh gate, the Gate of Wonder is missing.
Otherwise I really like this concept, looking forward to more.
 
The seventh Gate like the sixth stores chakra. But unlike the sixth it stores Non Pure Chakra. (ie other than your own or Natural Energy) such as any chakra you convert to an Elemental energy can be stored here to be used later. This means when you unlock this gate any element chakra you have here cann be used to make the element bend to your will Avatar State style. If you get infected by a toxic foreign chakra this gate can contain it or purify it if you wish.
 
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