I, for one, would be down for Ignition 2.0 featuring traumatized shapeshifter girl. Especially if her main color is not red.
Ooo. Definitely not Red-primary, though.

Right on all counts.

Right, I'll just dangle it in front of myself as personal incentive to get a bunch of INW done. I should already wait a week or so to see if enthusiasm for the idea fades in the face of painful fiddly bits, like MAPS.

In related news, I'll see if I can get the next INW update sent to betas today.

EDIT: Did send it off, btw. I also want to reiterate that the possible quest is not, I repeat, not guaranteed.
 
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Honestly, I think mtg crosses go a little to hard on world hopper stuff. Send Lili to ravnica. She would fit with a few guilds, and there is lots of content to draw from.
 
Right, I'll just dangle it as personal incentive to get a bunch of INW done. I should already wait a week or so to see if enthusiasm for the idea fades in the face of painful fiddly bits, like MAPS.
That's actually exactly what has brought every idea I've had for a TRPG campaign/setting to a screeching halt. I can come up with settings/plots easily enough. But maps always seem to stop me cold, even with all the online assets to assist in making them.
Honestly, I think mtg crosses go a little to hard on world hopper stuff. Send Lili to ravnica. She would fit with a few guilds, and there is lots of content to draw from.
Possible solution: strand them by having something remove their Spark, either willingly or unwillingly, and then make the players find it. Honestly, the way Planeswalker Sparks work make it far, far too easy for 'walkers to just "nope" out of bad situations, IMO. Works nicely for a card game concept, works a little less well for fictional stories and RPGs. You need something to tie them down, emotionally or otherwise, to really set up a story with stakes. Which is easier with some characters than others. Whereas using portals that need to be sought out has the advantage of a built-in goal/journey. A large chunk of the appeal of adventure stories is in the bumpy, challenging journey, and not just the interesting destinations and awesome sights seen.

I think that might be part of why Orario as a whole seems so depressingly stagnant at times, and why some of the antagonists seem bent on reverting things to how they were in the past (though I think their methods are stupid). The adventurers of DanMachi usually act more like mercenaries or hunters, and many of them actively fear and avoid the unknown. They stick to well-explored, well-documented areas, killing the same sorts of monsters over and over. Mind you, even the "predictable" floors can be pretty deadly. But they still seem kinda stuck in a rut. Of course, then the author plays on that by having the unknown come looking for the adventurers, forcibly knocking them out of said rut. And also drives that point further home by killing many of the colorful side characters. But hey, omelettes and breaking eggs.
In hindsight, is making Lili's 'screw everything in my immediate area' spell chant two words long the best decision?
/halfserious
It's certainly the decision with the most interesting possible results. Whether that's good or bad is up to you (and Alivaril, to some extent).
 
In hindsight, is making Lili's 'screw everything in my immediate area' spell chant two words long the best decision?
/halfserious
What could go wrong?

Well, the "Alivarial Makes a New Quest" Counter got pretty high. It's been what, half a year?
*cough* Yeah, I'm going to push out at least 5 INW updates before I decide whether or not to follow through. It seems to be working well as personal incentive today.

Fun fact: The New Year update? I literally wrote 75% of that update that same day primarily so that I could make the "SURPRISE" time-dependent joke. I honestly never realized that I could motivate my lizard-brain with so little.


Honestly, I think mtg crosses go a little to hard on world hopper stuff. Send Lili to ravnica. She would fit with a few guilds, and there is lots of content to draw from.
My current plan is to have just a few worlds + Danmachi available, among other mechanics, so that we don't end up with the planar overflow of Ignition. I'll go into more detail in the quest if my enthusiasm lasts my mandated delay.
 
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I'm sure a paranoid, planeshifting shapeshifter calling themselves "Lili" arriving on Ravnica shortly after the events of War would in no way cause any misunderstandings. :evil:
 
*cough* Yeah, I'm going to push out at least 5 INW updates before I decide whether or not to follow through. It seems to be working well as personal incentive today.

Fun fact: The New Year update? I literally wrote 75% of that update that same day primarily so that I could make the "SURPRISE" time-dependent joke. I honestly never realized that I could motivate my lizard-brain with so little.
I'd be careful about that. Maybe it's just me, but I tend to go over any piece i write in a rush of excitement carefully and preferably a few days afterwards. Amongst other things, since I have historically had a tendency to write primarily at night while in a slightly manic/delirious fugue, I have a tendency make cognitive leaps or otherwise make errors that I catch when editing, preferably during the day. Though I suppose that's why you have me and the other beta-readers. So, carry on, I guess.
 
Well, as far as problems go, having a backlog of story to catch up on is rather a good one. Back to back updates!

She let Cinder Ella fade away and tried the proper doorknob of their home. Unlocked. Even when they were home, Hestia should consider either locking their door or replacing it with a Friend. A high profile meant a higher number of people thinking of doing terrible things to them and theirs.
"I would prefer to make Friends for that purpose," QA admitted. "Standard dishes cannot check for possible poisons."

"Or clean themselves!" Lili added from atop their couch.
I really do like how Lili is just all for Friends, not even Friend shenanigans, per se—though she's perfectly okay with that too—but simply as something entirely reasonable as she sees it, in a way that is genuinely hard to deny. Yes, some of these Friends are peculiar, but Friends offer genuinely practical solutions to realistic concerns, and Lili recognises that. To her, the weirdness factor is basically just a non-factor, because she considers the matter from the perspective of having an understanding of the alternative. She's just accepted that the world is a bit different when that world is the one of her new family, but that different is not inherently bad, and for opening up new options can be in fact a very real upgrade.

I'm curious how Hestia is going to meet that perspective. In QA's case, much of her desired Friend shenanigans can easily come across as simply too much and unnecessary in addition to unsettling. Lili, however, encourages Friend-making and can give it a direction more in line with relatable human (well, and human-like) concerns. The issue with the door makes sense. The door is left unlocked. That's... kind of a thing to not do? What if someone desirable to keep out just opens it and waltzes right in? Previously, that wasn't much of a concern for Hestia, but where Hestia didn't really have anything to steal or whatever and offered little reason to trouble her for her general irrelevancy on top of being a goddess, that's no longer the case, and Lili knows all too well what that kind of world is like. Locking the door is the reasonable thing to do, and Friends are practically an app analogue; whatever it is, there's a Friend for that, or will be the moment the need is realised to prompt creation of one. Friends are just all kinds of convenient for their nigh-unlimited versatility, and there are lots of things that could do with doing.

I also wonder if perspective might be an even further consideration, though. QA herself has an alien perspective that doesn't value things the same way a typical human might in many regards, so walking on a carpet that is also a living thing or eating off of the like is perfectly fine with her. To Lili, at least up until she turns shard, even if she's intellectually aware that things that look like inanimate objects are in fact creatures, it doesn't really have the impact of such if she simply can't tell; a plate is a plate, and it may be a plate that is a plate that has situational perks that are really handy even if odd, basically no different than just some enchantment. Hestia, however... well she's a literal goddess. That might be meaningful. Sure, most of what makes a divinity divine isn't being actively employed, but the gods are fundamentally different in nature than mortals, and that comes with being godly; it might be a bit difficult to ignore the fact that random inanimate objects all over the place are nothing of the sort if it's really, really obvious that something's off despite the mundane appearances, maybe. Coupled with Hestia simply never having lived a life like Lili's, the same matter might seem quite different between them.

"I'm fine!" Lili refused, the phrasing tasting alien on her tongue. "I'm stronger than I look!"

When was the last time that she'd used the first person without being beaten for it? Nobody cares what a Supporter thinks, adventurers had jeered. There wasn't even any sort of a reward for hurting Lili like that; they were simply cruel for the sake of being cruel. Oh, altering her speech ultimately proved to have a number of other benefits, but she shouldn't have needed to adjust in the first place.
So, uh... that... kinda got dark. Ow. Really glad Lili's with Hestia now, because she damn well needs and deserves it. Ironically enough, though, it does lend some exploitability; she really does have a point about her circumstances offering some benefits even if it would have been better to eschew it all entirely. Tiona's bit at the end really emphasises yet again the fact that the "pseudo-pseudo-hosts" can become something more more than typical mortals, and so the ever-greater scrutiny to be pointed towards the Hestia Familia could make for quite the challenge that may cause considerable trouble. Lili's past, however, really does kind of make her fit as QA's sister. Hestia herself has noted the way how Lili and QA sort of parallel one another in their expressiveness, albeit through differing means, with QA typically stuck in dull monotone whilst Lili has a mask of fake cheer obfuscating anything. Lili's past also makes her of similar opinions and views to her sort-of and not-just-"sort-of" sister, too, as is quite evident on the subject of Friends. It might cause some further problems, though.

Tiona noted the oddity of Lili's disparity before and after going shard. Being a high-level adventurer, Tiona is able to pick up on shard things in a way impossible by regular people, and to her perception, Lili is now "spewing magic with every word", but maybe-pallum wasn't earlier. Combined with the new apparent renard form and not necessarily accurate common knowledge about the fox-folk, that might have some awkward consequences. Lili is also apparently a maybe-renard and shows evidence of having hidden her nature.

Everyone knows that renard are very magical by the standards of the mortal races, and that common knowledge is backed by actual statistics, too. Renard are also rather mysterious and extremely rare as a race, and much sought by those of ill intent. Renard are in fact so rare that there is all of one other one in all of Orario... at least as far as most people know. There may be more, and probably are, but they're not making themselves known, because everyone knows that they're special and desirable. There's a non-zero chance that the somewhat self-stupefying rumour mill of Orario might "discover" and convince itself that renard are not, in fact, actually renard as people think of them at all, but rather the Shard-Spirit people in disguise, occasional wanderers from whatever distant land of theirs is known to be somewhere unknown and distant. It fits the supposed facts oddly neatly, and renard aren't about to come forth and bring attention to themselves correcting everyone. The one open renard that is in fact "just" a renard is herself someone with a fantastical background and extremely potent magic that made her an ever so valuable pawn and sacrificial resource.

Mostly close enough, although Lili didn't construct that weaponry. She found the anti-meteor defenses (AKA the "crossbow") that came with her shardware and began aiming it at herself.
Lili already has everything that she needs to be a thoroughly terrifying shard. Regular shards are both restricted during Cycles in any case, and the Entities themselves seem... dumb. Lili certainly doesn't lack for creativity, and unless Dreamer changed things, Lili has, at the very least just with the sort of "default" shard package, a giant cannon of doom that works by some kind of principles suitable for destruction, an advanced sensory suite, the ability to think a lot, some kind of flight intended for planetary descent, communications ability, and perhaps a whole host of "minor" features for things like altering a host's physiology for establishing an uplink and/or adjusting their thinking, energy storage and transfer, dimensional shenanigans, and such.

Lili also has Dreamer and QA both primed to encourage her for leveraging her new potential to effect, too, and she herself seems as though she might be especially receptive to genuine positive reinforcement, as well. Combined with Lili seeing perfectly evident need to act for things like the security of herself and her new Familia when they don't realise that which she considers obvious to herself, I think Lili might be very busy in the near future, and Hestia might need to get a few more jars.

"Don't you guys think this is getting to be a bit much? That pile has to be worth at least a million valis by now."
"""No."""
"Who needs cash when you have cat?"
Mm, reasonable argument. :lol:

Slightly more seriously though, this has considerable potential to be delightfully amusing. Felicity is Aiz's Friend, but I think the Loki Familia as a whole might have gained a mascot. They're also in a good position to perhaps actually be able to legitimately get away with that, too. On the one hand, they undertake some of the most dangerous work to be found, and Felicity might not be suitable for that, but on the other, Felicity has the nifty perks of being immortal and becoming stronger by consuming Magic Stones... and Loki Familia can do Magic Stones. They're not hurting for money and can routinely rake in vast quantities of Magic Stones practically on a whim if they so desire—as Aiz herself has been doing, and mirrored by others as well now—and feeding them to Felicity really could be considered an honest investment in any case. In canon, they dropped a fortune in a new set of weapons for their top crew; throwing a million valis at Felicity all the time to turn her into the team mascot in truth is entirely within their means as a luxury, much less when its a genuinely good idea.

Loki herself might see it as a matter of prestige, too, come to think of it. All of the gods of Orario knows that Friends are, effectively, a highly desirable rare collectible, and one that they can't get no matter how much they want it. Loki, however, both is a smug shit who would love to rub it in everyone's faces if she got one over on everyone else in their social squabbling and, in fact, has one of those ever so sought Friends that can only be given rather than taken or bought, and as an accessory to her shiny Sword Princess no less. Lisa may somehow inexplicably be feeling Loki's smugness right now. I imagine that the budget for Loki's pride is rather considerable if she herself has any say in the matter... which she does. The better Felicity is, the better. "Neener, neener, look how awesome my precious Aiz's Friend is! Oh, what's that, how do you get one too? You don't, because you suck!" :p

Mana Burst: Inefficient annihilation magic. Releases a burst of magic to indiscriminately sear all living non-shard entities in a small sphere around the attacker. Artificial Friends qualify as "shards" for the purposes of this spell.
"Lethal safety."
This seems very appropriate for Lili. Falna-derived magic is based on the caster; whatever they can do, it's uniquely them. Lili is a very insecure and fearful sort who has all too understandable reason to want to keep people away. Her new family is an exception to that, but everyone else, as Lili sees it, is either obviously out to get her or can be expected to try if given the chance. I wouldn't be surprised if Dreamer exerted some kind of influence on the spell that Lili got, but all the same, Dreamer is also working with an existing system, too, and it would appear that that system delivered apt results.

I'm also curious to see the exact results of Mana Burst, too, though. For one, it's called annihilation magic, and the explanation of that description certainly sounds as though it could be spectacularly violent. It's also called specifically Mana Burst, though, and inefficient, on top of seeming perhaps a significant act in any case. I find myself wondering if maybe it might be especially taxing to use... and if maybe she spins to emit an azure blue blast, honestly. The specifically living criteria might also be a problem, too; though it may be a very good "Everyone fuck off!" spell, it doesn't look as though it could be expected to do anything about the likes of, say, arrows, or such—though there could be some kind of physical blast as more of an incidental effect, admittedly—and undead are a think in the Dungeon, which may indeed qualify as non-living by whatever targeting parameters the spell uses, though with Dreamer and shard perspective as possible factors, undead may just qualify as simply a different form of life.

Regardless, though, I'm kind of expecting something to swallow Lili whole at some point only for the giant monster's entire midsection to just vanish as she bursts out with a vengeance.

I think even by god standards, pulling that sort of sh*t is considered beyond the pale. Gods can be massively selfish and lacking in morals, yes. But even they generally have limits. Otherwise, Orario would be getting repeats of Evilus every couple of years.
The gods do seem pretty lackadaisical overall—the whole point of Orario as far as any of them but Ouranos are concerned being a chance to get away from the dull tedium of the heavens—but the also come across as none the less simultaneously having their own odd sense of duty and/or pride where their responsibilities are concerned, as well as simply a considerable degree of self-interest, and I think the eternal souls of mortals are prominent in that. To a god, the unmaking of a mortal soul could quite easily be regarded as personally and professionally offensive, not just wrong, but wrong and stupid.

I suspect that that has a a way of curbing the likes of Evilus indeed. Evilus was/is a collection of aptly dubbed gods for whom their inclination and role as gods is to just be in it "for the evulz," professional assholes who enjoyed their work, effectively. At the same time, however, that means that basically anyone else is opposed to them by default for one reason or another, because those evil gods are themselves more or less arbitrarily opposed to them on every level regardless of respective stance since they're out to make everything worse for the sake of making everything worse. Even if a given god may not necessarily be opposed to the destruction of a soul, well, they are in fact massively selfish, and promoting a culture that frowns upon anything conductive towards Evilus's aims is to their benefit.

That also might develop into something of a self-reinforcing social pressure, too. If something like the absolute and irrecoverable breaking of a soul is regarded by the people of Orario as something appropriate for Evilus and those gods are held as universal enemies to be opposed utterly on principle, then regardless of a particular deity's stance on the matter, they might be greatly motivated to distance themselves from it so as to avoid the negative consequences that might befall them if suspicions of being in league with Evilus were to be levied against them. Being too much of a self-centered jackass is dangerous for a god's reputation even if it might be convenient.

I think that might be reflected in Ishtar's actions, actually, oddly enough. She was indeed willing to go through with an act that her nominal peers could be expected to decry as a transgression beyond measure, but she was committed to the deed for something that could be argued to be worth it. If she had succeeded in shattering the soul of her captive renard and put the fragmented soul to use as hoped, then, by her reckoning, she would have been in a position to be able to afford to not care about the views or aims of any of the other gods. To Ishtar, I think she might have viewed it as something of hers well spent.

Combine that with Freya's frequent, flagrant abuse of power to prey on smaller Familia and steal the adventurers that catch her eye, and it's not surprising that Orario is currently a very nasty place to live. In a place like Orario, it takes the people at the top actually giving a damn to prevent the strong from preying on the weak, and that's not really the case at the moment. The Guild only has so much leverage, after all.
Worse still, Freya's ideas about helping share a lot in common with QA and her dear parents with strife as an excellent motivator. She actively goes around setting up trouble in need of being overcome, which, given her influential position, is just a wee bit unsettling. Granted, she may actually have a pretty good idea of what people can take without breaking, but she also doesn't really seem to hold success as a priority so much as just the attempt at it.

It will be pretty amusing to see people trying to lord over Dreamer, she is probably the most dangerous entity on the planet right now because the gods are not allowed to use their power (under the threat of being banished back to heaven), a limitation she isn't under, as long as she doesn't touch a god's power, is she even limited from touching gods? Does anything stop her from trapping Apollo in a Grey Boy time loop, a sub dimension or another such thing if he annoyed her.
Yeah, a lot of versus debates don't really take into account how much a given party might actually fight in some hypothetical match-up. Maybe they could do something, but are they actually going to? More "middling" beings might very well be more relevant even if they aren't the most powerful if beings of greater power can't or won't act like it. Dreamer has very little real limitation, and that's backed by a willingness to actually act... though not too much, all the same. It might be a good thing that she has somewhat limited concerns and places considerable importance on minor things like napping.

The idea of her doing something clever about troublesome gods is quite the intriguing notion, too. She's not canon Taylor, but she none the less can be given the benefit of the doubt for an ability to be clever about overcoming challenges. Taking out gods directly isn't an option, but indirectly rendering gods simply unable to exert influence somehow might be much more viable. Someone who is, say, trapped in stasis, for instance, isn't dead, but they're just isolated in time and unable to interact with a future moving on without them. Some spacial warping shenanigans that are effectively just a more mathematically complicated wall might be quite serviceable at making anything trapped within simply out of the way where it can't do anything to matter regardless of what might be going on on the other side of the partitioning.

Somewhat off-topic now that conversation has halted anyway: Yes, Lili's new colored text did make me realize that Lili would make a good planeswalker. I'm pretty sure that y'all would castrate me if I made a quest like that, though, especially since I'd probably wind up using some of the same settings I did for Ignition. :p

EDIT: Probably wouldn't share a universe, though.
All I'm hearing is that Ignition should definitely get Lili somehow. Maybe apocrypha omake, maybe sidestory, maybe canon as someone whom Jade meets, but most definitely as a part of Ignition getting reignited, yes? Hm. She's a girl, she's magical, and she recently stumbled upon the capacity for wonky dimensional shenanigans, in addition to being Lili. Yup, checks out, totally companion material or awkward accidental competitor in need of help and able to unexpectedly help out.

In hindsight, is making Lili's 'screw everything in my immediate area' spell chant two words long the best decision?
/halfserious
While the point has been brought up that Dreamer has a more relatable human understanding, she does none the less agree with shard preferences in some respects. I wouldn't be surprised if the chant was deliberately selected as something short and easily activated for Dreamer being wholeheartedly of the opinion that that was only proper. If her new sister needs to annihilate things that are too close, then easily unleashed extreme firepower is the answer! It's not cheating, honest! After all, she can make up rules as she goes along.
 
Yes, some of these Friends are peculiar, but Friends offer genuinely practical solutions to realistic concerns,...
...And now you've given me the mental image of Lili and/or QA doing the "Meet the Engineer" speech. Genuinely thank you for that, no sarcasm. Made me chuckle.
The gods do seem pretty lackadaisical overall—the whole point of Orario as far as any of them but Ouranos are concerned being a chance to get away from the dull tedium of the heavens—but the also come across as none the less simultaneously having their own odd sense of duty and/or pride where their responsibilities are concerned, as well as simply a considerable degree of self-interest, and I think the eternal souls of mortals are prominent in that. To a god, the unmaking of a mortal soul could quite easily be regarded as personally and professionally offensive, not just wrong, but wrong and stupid.
Honestly, some Gods seem to just...not see death as the end, or even a bad thing. Freya and Thanatos just off the top of my head, both don't see any problem in leading mortals to their deaths, as they know Heaven and reincarnation are things. Many do definitely have that sense of obligation and duty, but it mostly seems applies to their Familia, and the rest of Orario can get bent. Which could arguably be seen as them merely valuing their possessions, though I think for most it runs much deeper than that. But yeah, I think even the former two would explicitly object to the absolute unmaking of a soul. And one of those two is part of Evilus, FFS.
I suspect that that has a a way of curbing the likes of Evilus indeed. Evilus was/is a collection of aptly dubbed gods for whom their inclination and role as gods is to just be in it "for the evulz," professional assholes who enjoyed their work, effectively. At the same time, however, that means that basically anyone else is opposed to them by default for one reason or another, because those evil gods are themselves more or less arbitrarily opposed to them on every level regardless of respective stance since they're out to make everything worse for the sake of making everything worse. Even if a given god may not necessarily be opposed to the destruction of a soul, well, they are in fact massively selfish, and promoting a culture that frowns upon anything conductive towards Evilus's aims is to their benefit.

That also might develop into something of a self-reinforcing social pressure, too. If something like the absolute and irrecoverable breaking of a soul is regarded by the people of Orario as something appropriate for Evilus and those gods are held as universal enemies to be opposed utterly on principle, then regardless of a particular deity's stance on the matter, they might be greatly motivated to distance themselves from it so as to avoid the negative consequences that might befall them if suspicions of being in league with Evilus were to be levied against them. Being too much of a self-centered jackass is dangerous for a god's reputation even if it might be convenient.
We know (due to the gacha game with plots written by the actual author) that at least one member of Evilus may effectively have seen his actions as being necessary to making Orario a better place. That he was a necessary evil. The others may also have justified themselves for sinialr reasons. Though some of them may just have been utterly twisted sadists, as Thanatos and Enyo seem to be.
I think that might be reflected in Ishtar's actions, actually, oddly enough. She was indeed willing to go through with an act that her nominal peers could be expected to decry as a transgression beyond measure, but she was committed to the deed for something that could be argued to be worth it. If she had succeeded in shattering the soul of her captive renard and put the fragmented soul to use as hoped, then, by her reckoning, she would have been in a position to be able to afford to not care about the views or aims of any of the other gods. To Ishtar, I think she might have viewed it as something of hers well spent.
Ishtar was also deep in bed (potential pun intended) with factions at least somewhat aligned with the remnants of Evilus. And was just kinda awful, honestly.
Worse still, Freya's ideas about helping share a lot in common with QA and her dear parents with strife as an excellent motivator. She actively goes around setting up trouble in need of being overcome, which, given her influential position, is just a wee bit unsettling. Granted, she may actually have a pretty good idea of what people can take without breaking, but she also doesn't really seem to hold success as a priority so much as just the attempt at it.
Well, that, and she seems to see mortals as things to be collected, and doesn't seem to really care about many of the ones she collects once she does so. The challenge of collection seems to be what she likes, possibly stemming from a drive to see the object of her interest overcome trials. Almost like watching their growth is what she delights in, more than the end result. Once they plateau, she seems to treat them mostly as tools for doing that tempering and causing that strife.

Which, in some ways, might make Bell the most interesting mortal she could possibly meet, and he may in fact be saving the rest of Orario from her "halping". Because his growth may never stop. Liaris Freese is phrased rather unclearly, at least in English, as "Fast growth so long as feelings last". I'm not clear if the "feelings" are explicitly romantic, or if merely an ongoing determination to get stronger, or even just experiecing any emotions at all, would fulfill the requirements. His growth might slow drastically, if a long held feeling fades, but it sounds like it could potentially be replaced, if he loses his current driving feeling. But I could be very wrong, as the phrasing/translation is garbage, and that bothers the hell out of me. I generally prefer the parameters of OP protagonist abilities to be clearer than mud, but hey, that's just me.
 
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So, what's the non-shiny version of Aiz look like? Silver hair and eyes?
Regular Aiz's palette swap makes her look like a Perfectly Ordinary Girl who surprises people because she of course isn't and actually has ferocious sword skills, but that only really becomes evident when the utterly boring and generic girl is attacked and has the opportunity to disabuse others of making assumptions based on her appearance. Shiny Aiz makes her specialness blatantly obvious by looking exactly like her mother with the definitely-super-special golden hair and golden eyes, who, as an Spirit, shouldn't be able to have children at all, but did anyway, because Aiz is super-special like that and looks the part. Naturally, Loki snagged the fancier one for her collection of prize mortals to show off as better than everyone else's, thus, shiny Aiz.
 
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Regular Aiz's palette swap makes her look like a Perfectly Ordinary Girl who surprises people because she of course isn't and actually has ferocious sword skills, but that only really becomes evident when the utterly boring and generic girl is attacked and has the opportunity to disabuse others of making assumptions based on her appearance. Shiny Aiz makes her specialness blatantly obvious by looking exactly like her mother with the definitely-super-special golden hair and golden eyes, who, as an Spirit, shouldn't be able to have children at all, but did anyway, because Aiz is super-special like that and looks the part. Naturally, Loki snagged the fancier one for her collection of prize mortals to show off as better than everyone else's, thus, shiny Aiz.
What about the Alola version?
 
...how long do you think it will be to shard-Aiz after she finds out that someone can get their very own ears and tail, all to themselves, and get a power upgrade out of it? That's the Alola version. Coming soon, to a fanfic near you!
I would think that would be some other regional variant, not Alolan. Galarian, maybe. The Alolan form would probably be tropical themed.
 
Chapter 50: Silence
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"Still pretending to be something you aren't, huh?"

Lili blinked blearily and lifted her head to stare at whichever asshole said that. She didn't recognize them, but that didn't mean anything. Faces were the opposite of blurry for her—they contained so much detail that they still looked unfamiliar. She'd need to relearn what everyone looked like all over again.

…And relearn how to ignore when people didn't bother to wash themselves. Eww. The adventurer's beard might seem well-managed to a casual passerby, but Lili could both see and smell the remnants of spilled alcohol and a little dried blood.

{Species: Human. Blood alcohol concentration of 0.0279%. Elemental composition available.}

Lili shoved that thought to the side. She'd had enough trouble getting her body to stop telling her everything that people were made of. She barely even knew what the words were supposed to mean, and the overly-detailed explanations barely helped. Why were people carbon-based lifeforms if they were mostly made of oxygen? Lili didn't understand, and all the explanations seemed to reference other facts she didn't know. It made her feel stupid and ignorant and she didn't like it.

(She still didn't regret becoming a shard. Lili's spell alone was worth changing for.)

Still, this newest confrontation proved that Queen Administrator's morning warning had been correct: they should never rely on their enemies to keep harmful secrets. It was why Queen Administrator was actively answering questions outside while Lili rested in a corner of the Pantheon. Lady Sable acted as a barrier between Lili and everyone else, including Soma's thrall, so Lili wasn't too worried about herself.

...In hindsight, maybe Lili should've stayed with Queen Administrator. Not because she was all that worried about the person confronting Lili right now, but because Lili didn't trust QA not to casually insult people and ruin the surprisingly good reputation that the Hestia Familia had managed to achieve thus far.

"Lying to your new Familia, too?" the adventurer sneered. "Are you going to steal everything they own, too? Once a thief, always a thief."

Lili kept any suspicion firmly off her face. That argument was a little too coherent, a little too pointed, for the muscleheaded moron before her. It sounded like the sort of personal attack that Zanis would encourage. It also hadn't even been two hours since Lili first appeared in public as a shard, and already Lili was under an attack; Zanis had clearly been intending to betray them even before that.

{Enemy entity "Zanis Lustra" not present within structure.}

Lili's first instinct was to deflect. Queen Administrator's tips advised an alternative: attack.

"Lili supposes you could call it stealing when Lili's old Familia members didn't want to pay her what she'd earned," Lili half-yelled. "Lili supposes that hurting yourself after hitting her would be assault from Lili, wouldn't it?"

The musclehead tried to interrupt early, but it didn't seem like he could; his mouth opened, but it seemed as though he was choking on his own words. Lili was pretty sure that Queen Administrator had been interrupted in the past, so how was Lili doing that? She'd known that her own words felt strange, but the extra parts felt more like hidden words rather than content that could control others.

Irrelevant. His difficulties provided her with an opportunity: If he couldn't respond, then Lili could just keep attacking without needing to defend against whatever Soma's Familia had originally planned. It was easier for Lili to conjure tears than it used to be—an unexpected benefit of Lili's new body, but not one she intended to complain about.

"Lili had to hide for her entire life," Lili ranted, not needing to feign her fury. "Lili was threatened, humiliated, starved, beaten, locked outside, and always told that she was trash that didn't matter. Lili was punished for failing to carry loads too big for her, and the only toys Lili had were ones that others threw away. Lili tried to run away, and the Soma Familia illegally destroyed the shop of the people who sheltered her. Zanis even said he would sell Lili to Ishtar if he thought Lili could make him more money that way."

Misbehaving senses made it difficult to read the blatantly interested crowd, but she was pretty sure that Lili's last sentence had replaced distant sympathy for Lili with visceral disgust aimed at Zanis. Ishtar's atrocities were still fresh in the mind of Orario's public, and it was easy to sway public opinion when they could only hear one side.

Soma's thrall tried to step closer to Lili. Briefly. Lady Sable cracked one eye open and growled at him for trying. His hasty hop back might even have been funny if Lili hadn't been trying so hard to maintain the demeanor of an upset child.

"Lili isn't pretending anymore. This is what Lili looks like and is supposed to be. Lili could've, would've, helped the Soma Familia much more if they weren't so horrible to her and refused to feed her enough to become strong. But Zanis would have sold Lili if he knew she was a shard instead of a pallum. Lili needed to hide just to keep what little freedom she had."

Everything Lili said was technically true, and any gods in the crowd would be able to verify that.

{Divine entities within room: 1.}

Darn. Lili had been so careful with her words and she could've used the extra support. Nobody would believe Hestia—who, Lili noticed, had put off her paperwork to push through the crowd with Sir Kara's help. Lili tried not to flinch as the goddess pulled her into a hug. They were meant to feel nice; Lili was just used to contact equalling pain.

"Nice trick, making me choke. Don't want people to call you a liar until you've told everybody your tall tales, huh?" Soma's thrall rallied, half-turning to the crowd. "Pretty much none of what she just said is true. Bits here and there, sure — she carried a lot so she'd get stronger, and you can call combat or resistance training 'beatings' if you really want to. But she didn't just steal enough to make up for the Familia's fee. She'd disguise herself as an entirely different race and make off with entire hauls while her party fought monsters."

Lili rapidly reevaluated his status as a musclehead. This was someone more dangerous than that. Members of Soma's Familia frequently turned to crime to feed their addiction, and she knew that some of them were surprisingly successful con artists. She shouldn't have assumed that Zanis would send an idiot rather than someone who could adapt.

"And no, she isn't a Spirit," he continued. "We have her birth records and Guild registry to prove it. Hells, she's even pretending to look some five years younger than she really is. She's fifteen. This is all just a blatant sympathy ploy."

I don't think you checked them, Lili wanted to say, confident in Dreamer's forging skills. A new conversational participant beat her to it.

"So confident in her records that you didn't bother to check, huh?" Dreamer cheerfully questioned, sidling through the crowd like they weren't even there.

No, wait. She was passing through the occasional limb. Lili wanted to learn how to do that. Assuming Lili could, anyway; the black fox following at Dreamer's heels still needed to move around objects.

"Because her records do say she's a shard, dummy," Dreamer abused the thrall, clearly enjoying herself. "And I'm fifteen as well. Shards don't mature at the same rate as you humans or even necessarily each other. And for the record, we'd be happy to repeat everything Lili just said in front of gods."

The scammer opened his mouth and scowled as no sound escaped. Apparently, Dreamer was exploiting the same effect that Lili had benefitted from.

"Honestly, I'm surprised you're dumb enough to try bullying Lili in public after we were willing to leave you alone."

Dreamer frowned.

"Wait, no. That's the first lie I've said here. We totally expected your sudden but inevitable betrayal. Abusive bullies like you are terrible at understanding when you can no longer abuse someone, and you don't like knowing that a victim escaped you. Lachesis says you've made her seriously consider giving up Soma — I'm pretty sure she's lying there, but the fact remains that you're a disgrace to addicts."

The thrall threw up his hands, pointed to his open mouth, and began pushing through the crowd. Dreamer grinned and followed after him with only a token attempt to avoid phasing through nearby people.

"What was your plan? Challenge us to a War Game with myself and Queen Administrator as the stakes? Newsflash: We wouldn't be brainwashed by drinking it. Even if you somehow won, you'd have two powerful members who detested the rest of the Familia and could curse the lot of you. This was not a good plan."

Soma's thrall reached the Pantheon's main exit and tried to pass through it. Queen Administrator slipped into his path, an eerily serene smile upon her face and one of Dreamer's new fox-Friends draped across her shoulders.

"To be clear, you are still allowed to challenge us to a War Game," Queen Administrator offered. "But you will have a hard time trying to influence public—"

The thrall tried to push Queen Administrator aside. The tail of the fox-Friend twisted to block the blow and extended its reach with black mist. Lili didn't notice in the basements, but in the morning sunlight, the mists looked strangely shiny.

"—opinion when your weapons are easily verified as lies. The truth-telling abilities of deities are remarkably convenient."

Queen Administrator stepped aside and let the thrall leave. He only took a few steps forward before spinning back around.

"I'm sure it's easy to win arguments when your opposition can't even talk," the adventurer snarled, his face flushed. Anger or embarrassment, it mattered not; eavesdroppers would interpret it as anger. He immediately turned back around and continued stalking away.

"The court of public opinion is still a court, and that means no lying allowed!" Dreamer called after him. "It's obvious you didn't even try any truthful objections!"

Lili couldn't help but wonder if Dreamer was getting a little carried away. As far as she knew, enforcing the truth wasn't actually one of a shard's abilities. Implying that it was would only hurt them down the line.

Dreamer waited until he was out of earshot to turn back around.

"That's not actually one of our abilities," Dreamer promptly admitted, "but you'll notice that he didn't deny it. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed our performance of 'disgruntled catspaw loses debate with children the moment he isn't allowed to interrupt!' Soma's Familia doesn't seem too bright, so I'm pretty sure we'll have a repeat performance soon enough."

A cat-person obligingly applauded, then stopped when he realized nobody else was doing so and that attempting audience participation was earning him amused looks. Lili felt a brief surge of secondhand embarrassment. She'd always felt sorry for anyone playing along with a street performer when everyone else acted like they shouldn't. At least Lili would have an embarrassment-free excuse to participate now that she was a kid again. She'd never had the free time or energy to do so when she was younger.

Lili tried to nudge Hestia off of her and back toward the goddess's still-unfinished paperwork. Hestia didn't take the hint, and it took only a few seconds for those nearby to realize that the show was over and that most of the actors were available for questions. Hestia's hug and Lady Sable seemed to deter them from asking Lili, but that still left Dreamer and Queen Administrator to their less-than-considerate mercies.

"So, how do you even hide shard traits in the first place? They're not subtle."
"Why couldn't he interrupt you lot? Was that a spell or a skill or what?"
"Probably a skill, seems useful for royalty."
"Where'd the foxes come from? More Friends?"
"Is it true that you're dating the Sword Princess?"
"That ghost impression felt weird as fuuudge, by the way. Does it work in combat?"
"So uh, three Spirits in one tiny Familia? You're kinda boned."

"I hope you realize that many of you have lost your places in line," Queen Administrator observed.

It was easy to identify the higher-levels in the crowd; they were the first to bolt back to the almost-cleared counters. Many of the remainder took a second or two to react and move back in line, although that still left the Hestia Familia with nine people prioritizing gossip over business.

"So do you just bless any animal and they become a Friend, or…?"
"Why haven't you cursed Soma's Familia yet?"
"So if they're fifteen, how old are you, Your Highness?"
"Since when could Spirits have kids, anyway?"

"They're not showpieces!" Hestia burst out, finally releasing Lili to glare at the crowd. "Gossip among yourselves if you must, but leave my children out of it!"

Five of those remaining suddenly found something else to do. The remaining four looked around, decided they didn't want to be the focused subjects of even a pint-sized goddess's wrath, and followed the others. That didn't stop Lili from hearing them eagerly whisper among themselves. Apparently, using her new senses was easier when she had something specific to focus on.

"We should go make a few bets before word spreads. Easy money."
"Only make ones for the Soma spat; they won't count the racial ones now."
"Plot twist: Hestia is a shard, too."
"She would be pretty cute with a tail."
"Gods are unchanging, dumbasses."
"But she's a goddess of family. What if her family are all shards?"
"That's not–"
"Makes sense."
"No, it–"
"Hey, how do you think they're related? Parent/children?"
"That is not what they sai–"
"We should find out if Dreamer's mom is still around."
"So the queen is what, thirty? Seems a bit iffy if she's dating Wallenstein."
"Eh, elves do bigger age gaps all the time."
"I'm surrounded by idiots."


Lili narrowly stopped herself from calling out her agreement. She'd managed not to insult adventurers at all during her speech; it wouldn't do for her to break that trend now.

"When did my life become a performance?" Hestia quietly whimpered.
 
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Honestly, I think mtg crosses go a little to hard on world hopper stuff. Send Lili to ravnica. She would fit with a few guilds, and there is lots of content to draw from.
Imo it just needs some time based limitations added to the planeswalking power. Anything from "you can jump to an other world only once a month/year" to " free limitations jumps between registered worlds, but adding a new world to the register takes significant time and/or effort and/or amount of value ".

My preferred option is "planeswalking destroys all possessions, including summon templates and land links" :V
 
Imo it just needs some time based limitations added to the planeswalking power. Anything from "you can jump to an other world only once a month/year" to " free limitations jumps between registered worlds, but adding a new world to the register takes significant time and/or effort and/or amount of value ".

My preferred option is "planeswalking destroys all possessions, including summon templates and land links" :V

That kinda seems to destroy the point of being a planeswalker.
 
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